A Group To Study English (schedule at the first page)l

[rosenegarin13]

Translation


As I said, when Anne came to see me this morning, I told her I would be happy to help. We came over to the apartment building where Sarah and Bill live, and that’s when this mysterious man tried to stop us from going in.

همونطور که گفتم، وقتی آن امروز صبح اومد که منو ببینه، بهش گفتم خوشحال میشم کمک کنم.به آپارتمانی اومدیم که سارا و بیل زندگی می کنن، و این زمان بود که این مرد مرموز سعی داشت ما رو از داخل شدن باز داره.

“Let’s see if we can get into their apartment and take a look around,” I suggested.

من پیشنهاد دادم: بذار ببینیم اگه می تونیم داخل آپارتمانشون بشیم و یه نگاهی دور وبر بندازیم.

We walked into the large, white building, and up to the third floor. Anne got an extra key from the
apartment manager so we could go in

رفتیم داخل تا طبقه سوم ساختمان بزرگ سفید.آن از مدیر آپارتمان یه کلید یدکی گرفت که تونستیم داخل بشیم.

“Apartment number 306, Anne?” I asked her.

ازش پرسیدم: آپارتمان شماره 306 ، آن؟

“Yes. Here’s the key,” she answered.

جواب داد: بله، اینم کلید.

“Let me open the door.” I took the key from her. I opened the door very slowly. One thing I learned from my work as a bodyguard: Be careful when opening a stranger’s door. You never know what’s behind it.

بذار در رو باز کنم.کلید رو ازش گرفتم.در رو خیلی آهسته باز کردم. یه چیزی رو از شغلم به عنوان یه جان پاس یادگرفتم: وقتی در خونه یک غریبه رو باز می کنی، مواظب باش. تو هرگز نمیدونی چی پشتشه.

[Atefeh1]

Free Time and Holidays:


1. a. parties
b. sociable
c. Dancing
d. Meeting people
e. clubs
f. discos
g. go by plane
h. hotel
i. have a good time
j. sunbath


2 a. cultural things
b. serious
c. classical music
d. reading
e. concerts
f. libraries
g. hitch-hike
h. youth hostels
i. learn about other countries
j. visit historical places


3. a. the open air
b. active
c. sport
d. nature
e. sporting events
f. the countryside
take a train .
h. camp sites
i. be close to nature
j. go for walk


4. a. to – b. at – c. on – d. on – e. at – f. to – g. at – h. about – i. of – j. at – k. to – l. by

[armita2007]

The first unit : free time



Suit the sentences



I love parties .people say I am sociable. I like dancing and meeting people. So I often go to concerts and discos. On holiday I go by plane and stay in at nice hotels in Spain. I want to have a good time every day I sunbathe on the beaches




I am keen on cultural things. I am a bit serious. My hobbies are classical music and reading. So I spend a lot of time at clubs and libraries. I take a train and stay at youth hotels abroad because I want to learn about other countries I visit historical places.




I am very fond of open air. I am very active person. I enjoy sports and nature. So I love all sport events. Every summer my friends and I go hitch-hiking somewhere and sleep in our tents at camp sites. We prefer to be close to nature. We go for walks.




Part 4: correct word




To. B) at c) on d) on e)at f) to g) at h)about i) of j)at k) to l) by




Part 5: use phrases




I love window shopping



I m keen on swimming and sunbathing



I enjoy collecting stamps



I get bored with watching TV





My sentences:



Parties: I enjoy meeting my friends at wedding parties.



Dance: when I feel depressing, I dance at home with my favorite music.



Reading: Reading this article, he enjoys a lot.




Next unit: Transport



My sentences



Motor –bike: one of your teachers has crashed by a motor –bike in this street.



Train: my grandma takes a train for traveling in the holiday.



Bus: getting off the bus, he caught in the door




Part 2: use correct verb



.go b) take c) wait d)arrives e) get f) pay g)reaches h)get i)takes




Part 3: use correct prepositions



. go to – by- on



. for – at



. - -on



.- - off

[گیسو]

Free time and holiday
1
A) Parties
B) Sociable
C) Dancing
D) Meeting people
E) Clubs
F) Discos
G) hitch-hike
H) Hotel
I) Have a good time
J) Sunbath

2
A) cultural things
B) serious
C) classical music
D) reading
E) concert
F) libraries
G) take a train
H) youth hostels
I) learn about other countries
J) visit historical places


3
A) the open air
B) active
C) sport
D) nature
E) sporting events
F) the countryside
G) go by plane
H) camp sites
I) be close to nature
J) go for walks


4

a. to *b. at * c. on *d. on * e. at * f. to * g. at * h. about * i. of *j. at * k. to *l. by

The family

1
a) husband, wife
b) children
c) daughter, son
d) brother, sister
e) parents
f) cousins
g) uncle
h) niece
i) nephew

2
a) grandchildren
b) grandparents
c) grandson, grandfather
d) grandmother. granddaughter
e) daughter in low
f) father in low, mother in low
g) sister in low
h) brother in low

[singleguy]

Key of the vocabulary activity:
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

and now:
Grammar
you have 4 days to do that:[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[brain]

Translation


As I said, when Anne came to see me this morning, I told her I would be happy to help. We came over to the apartment building where Sarah and Bill live, and that’s when this mysterious man tried to stop us from going in.
“Let’s see if we can get into their apartment and take a look around,” I suggested.
We walked into the large, white building, and up to the third floor. Anne got an extra key from the apartment manager so we could go in.
“Apartment number 306, Anne?” I asked her.
“Yes. Here’s the key,” she answered.
“Let me open the door.” I took the key from her. I opened the door very slowly. One thing I learned from my work as a bodyguard: Be careful when opening a stranger’s door. You never know what’s behind it


همونطور که گفتم ، وقتی آنه امروز صبح اومد تا منو ببینه ، بهش گفتم خوشحال میشم که کمکش کنم.به آپاتمانی که سارا و بیل زندگی میکردن رفتیم که اون مرد مرموز سعی کرد تا مانع ورود ما به آپارتمان بشه.
پیشنهاد دادم: بیا بریم تو و اگه برامون مقدوره یه نگاه به آپارتمانشون بندازیم.
وارد ساختمون بزرگ و سفیدی شدیم و به طبقه سوم رفتیم.آنه کلید یدک رو از مدیر ساختمون گرفت تا ما بتونیم وارد خونه بشیم.
پرسیدم: آنه ،شماره 306 ؟
او پاسخ داد: بله ، اینم کلیدش.
کلید و ازش گرفتم و گفتم: بذار من درو باز کنم.
در رو خیلی آهسته باز کردم . نکته ای که از شغل قبلیم (محافظ شخصی افراد) یاد گرفتم این بود که وقتی میخوای درب خونه ی یک غریبه رو باز کنی ، مراقب باش ، چون هرگز نمیدونی پشت در چیه!

[گیسو]

Grammar activity

Unit 5-6
13

3. When he walked in the mountains, Henry saw a bear.
4. The students played a game when the professor arrived.
5. Felix phoned the fire brigade when the cooker caught fire.
6. When the starter fired his pistol the race begun.
7. I walked home when it started to snow.
8. Andy came out of the restaurant when he saw Jenny.

14
2. built. 3. wasn’t selling. 4. was joining. 5. read. 6. was waiting. 7. noticed. 8. was playing. 9. was approaching. 10. ran. 11. grabbed. 12. offered. 13. had. 14. had. 15. left. 16. went on

15
2. was traveling. 3. was touring. 4. stopped. 5. was shopping. 6. went. 7. looked. 8. came 9.started. 10. called. 11. thought. 12. tried. 13. was. 14. belonged 15. was packing . 16. was chatting. 17. asked. 18. got married.

[brain]

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

This is my Handwriting Training

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
With Calligraphy Pen

برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
With Pen

برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید

And this is my Grammar Activity



Part 1:

1- ....
2- ....
3-Henry saw a bear while he was walking in the mountains
4-The students were playing a game when the professor arrived
5-Felix phoned the fire brigade when the cooker catched fire
6-When the starter fired his pistol the race began
7-I was walking home when it started to snow
8-Andy came out of the restaurant when he saw Jenny

Part 2:

built
wasn't selling
joined
read
was waiting
noticed
was playing
was approaching
ran
grabbed
offered
had
had
left
was going on

Part 3:

was traveling
were touring
stopped
were shopping
went
was looking
came
started
was calling
thought
was trying
was
belonged
was packing
were chating
asked
got married

[rayhaneh]

Grammar activity




Part 13
While he was walking in the mountains Henry saw a bear
The students were playing a game when the professor arrived
Felix phoned the fire brigade when the cooker caught fire
When the starter fired his pistol the race begun
I walked home when it started to snow
Andy came out of the restaurant when he saw jenny



Part 14
Built
Started
Wasn't selling
Joined
Read
Was waiting
Noticed
Was playing
Was approaching
Ran
Grabbed
Offered
Was having
Had
Left
Went on



Part 15
Met
Was traveling
Toured
Stopped
Were shopping
Went
Was looking
Came
Started
Called
Thought
Was trying
Was
Belonged
Was packing
Chatted
Asked
Got married

[Madame Tussaud]

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

I need you
by Marc Anthony

From day that I met you girl
I knew that your love would be
Everything that I ever want in my life
From the moment you spoke my name
I knew everything changed
Because of you I felt my life would be complete
baby I need you
For the rest of my life girl I need you
To make everything right girl
I love you
And I never deny that I need you
Nothing matters but you my love
And only God above
Could be the one to know exactly how I feel
I could die in your .......right now
Knowing that you........how
Would take my soul and........ inside your heart
baby I need you
For the rest of my life girl I need you
To make everything right girl
I love you
And I never deny that I need you
.......your love to me feels just like magic
When you smile you have.......control
You have power like nothing I felt before
I’ve let all of my feelings show
Because I want you to know that I need you
I need you for the rest of my life
I need you say that you be my.......
I love you won't you marry me marry me
I need you
I need you for the rest of my life
I need you
Won't you marry me marry me
I love you I really need baby
I need you
Girl I really need

From the day that I met you girl
I knew that your love would be
Everything that I ever wanted in my life
From the moment you spoke my name
I new everything had changed
Because of you I felt my life would be complete

[Refrain]
Oh baby I need you
For the rest of my life girl I need you
To make everything right girl
I love you
And I’ll never deny that I need you

Nothing matters but you my love
And only God above
Could be the one to know exactly how I feel
I could die in your arms right now
Knowing that you somehow
Would take my soul and keep it deep inside your heart

[Repeat refrain]
Girl your love to me feels just like magic
When you smile you have total control
You have power like nothing I’ve felt before
I’ve let all of my feelings show
Cuz I want you to know that.. I need you

I need you, for the rest of my life girl
I need you, say that you’ll be my wife oh
I love you, Wont you marry me marry me
Oh I need you (nobody but you)
Oooh I need you, for the rest of my life
Oh I need you (nobody but you)
Wont you marry me marry me
I love you, I really need ya baby (I really need nobody but you)
I need you
Girl I really need… need you girl I really need you need you (I need you)
Oohhh baby I love you (I love you)
I need you, Girl I really need ya need ya … oh baby…
Wont you marry me (I need you)
Wont you marry me marry me
I love you.. oohh ..
I need you. (I really need nobody but you

to download

برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید

[brain]

Part 3 Episode 2


I opened the door slowly. I went in first, making sure everything was okay before Anne followed. The living room was large and full of expensive things: a big-screen television, a fancy stereo, a CD player, two big, brown leather chairs, and a comfortable-looking sofa. The living room alone was bigger than my entire apartment.

در رو آهسته باز کردم.قبل از اینکه آنه بیاد ، اول من داخل رفتم تا مطمئن بشم همه چیز روبراهه یا نه. اتاق نشیمن بزرگ و پر از وسایل گران قیمت بود : تلویزیون بزرگ ، بلندگو ، دستگاه پخش فیلم ، دو عدد صندلی چرمی و بزرگ و یک مبل راحتی. اتاق نشیمن به تنهایی از آپارتمان من بزرگتر بود.


“My God, it smells like beer and cigarettes in here! Bill and Sarah don’t even smoke,” Anne said.

آنه گفت: خدای من ، بوی سیگار و مشروب میاد اینجا. بیل و سارا هرگز سیگار نمی کشن.


I walked to the back of the apartment, and saw myself in the mirror. I am always surprised at how I look: I’m 42 years old, five feet eleven inches tall, blond hair, average weight. But when I see myself in the mirror, I look 3 inches shorter and 5 years older.

به عقب خونه رفتم ، اونجا یه آیینه بود که خودم رو درش نگاه کردم.همیشه برام عجیب بود که من چه شکلی هستم : یه مرده 42 ساله ، 12 سانتیمتر عرض و 27 سانتیمتر طول ، موهای بور ، وزن متعادل. اما وقتی خودمو تو آیینه می بینم به نظر 7 سانتیمتر کوتاهتر و 5 سال مسن تر هستم.


I checked the windows and the closets on each side of the apartment, and went into the bathroom. Then I saw something move.

پنجره ها و کمد ها رو در هر طرف خونه چک کردم و رفتم داخل حمام. اونجا چیزی رو دیدم که داشت تکون میخورد.


I quickly turned to Anne and put my hand up in the air, meaning: “Don’t move.” I put my finger to my lips, telling her to be quiet.

به سرعت به سمت آنه چرخیدم و دستامو به نشونه ی اینکه "تکون نخور" حرکت دادم.انگشتانم رو گذاشتم روی لبهام تا به آنه بفهمونم که ساکت باشه.


Someone was in the bathroom

یکی تو حموم بود.

پایان اپیزود 2

*لطفا یکی ترجمه کنه تا نقاطی که قرمز کردم رو باهم مقایسه کنم.
*یه سر به گروه اجتماعی مون بزنید (نظر سنجی موضوع رایتینگ)
*کلا هر از گاهی یه سر به گروه اجتماعی بزنید بد نیست :20:

[whitewolf7]

grammer activity

13
while he was walking in the mountains, henry saw a bear
the students were playing a game when the profesor arrived
felix phoned the fire brigade when the cooker catched fire
when the starter fired his pistol,the race began
i was walking to home when it started to snow
andy came out of the restaurant when he saw jenny

14
started
built
wasn't selling
joined
read
was waiting
noticed
was playing
was approaching
ran
grabbed
offered
had
had
left
was going on

15
was travelling
were touring
stopped
were stopping
went
was looking
came
started
called
thought
was trying
was
belonged
was packing
were chating
asked
got married

[Madame Tussaud]

I opened the door slowly. I went in first, making sure everything was okay before Anne followed. The living room was large and full of expensive things: a big-screen television, a fancy stereo, a CD player, two big, brown leather chairs, and a comfortable-looking sofa. The living room alone was bigger than my entire apartment.

“My God, it smells like beer and cigarettes in here! Bill and Sarah don’t even smoke,” Anne said.
I walked to the back of the apartment, and saw myself in the mirror. I am always surprised at how I look: I’m 42 years old, five feet eleven inches tall, blond hair, average weight. But when I see myself in the mirror, I look 3 inches shorter and 5 years older.
I checked the windows and the closets on each side of the apartment, and went into the bathroom. Then I saw something move.
I quickly turned to Anne and put my hand up in the air, meaning: “Don’t move.” I put my finger to my lips, telling her to be quiet.
Someone was in the bathroom.


در رو به آرومی باز کردم. اول من رفتم تو و وقتی مطمئن شدم همه چیز عادیه، آن هم اومد. اتاق نشیمن بزرگ بود و پر از اشیاء قیمتی مثل: یه تلویزیون با صفحه بزرگ، یک ضبط صوت گرون قیمت، سی دی پلیر، دوتا صندلی قهوه ای بزرگ چرمی و یه مبل راحتی. اتاق نشیمن بزرگتر از کل آپارتمان من بود.
آن گفت" خدای من، بوی آبجو و سیگار می یاد! بیل و سارا سیگاری نبودن"
رفتم پشت آپارتمان، خودم رو توی آینه ای که اونجا بود، دیدم. همیشه از دیدن قیافه ام تعجب می کردم: 42 سالمه، 5 پا و 11 اینچ قدمه، موهام بوره و وزن متوسطی دارم. اما وقتی خودم رو تو آینه می بینم، 3 اینچ کوتاهتر و 5 سانت پیرتر به نظر می یام.
همه پنجره ها و کمد ها رو چک کردم و رفتم سمت حمام. دیدم یه چیزی حرکت می کنه.
سریع برگشتم سمت آن و دستم رو به نشونه" حرکت نکن" تکون دادم. انگشتم رو روی لبهام گذاشتم، بهش گفتم ساکت باشه.
یکی توی حمام بود

[Madame Tussaud]

13
While he was walking in the mountains Henry saw a bear

The students were playing a game when the professor arrived

Felix phoned the fire brigade when the cooker was catching fire

When the starter fired his pistol the race began

I was walking home when it started to snow

Andy came out of the restaurant when he saw Jenny

14


2was building – 3. didn't sell – 4. joined – 5. read – 6. was waiting – 7. noticed – 8. was playing – 9. was approaching – 10. ran – 11. grabbed – 12. offered – 13. had – 14. had – 15. left – 16. went on

15


2was traveled – 3. were touring – 4. stopped – 5. were stopped – 6. went – 7. was looking – 8. came – 9. started – 10. called – 11. thought – 12. tried – 13. was – 14. belonged – 15. was packed – 16. chatted – 17. asked – 18. got married

[rosenegarin13]

Translation



Part 3 Episode 2

I opened the door slowly. I went in first, making sure everything was okay before Anne followed. The living room was large and full of expensive things: a big-screen television, a fancy stereo, a CD player, two big, brown leather chairs, and a comfortable-looking sofa. The living room alone was bigger than my entire apartment.


در رو آهسته باز کردم.قبل از اینکه آن دنبالم بیاد ، اول رفتم تو تا مطمئن بشم همه چی روبه راهه.اتاق نشیمن بزرگ بود و پر از چیزای گرون قیمت: یه تلویزیون بزرگ، یه ضبط صوت مجلل (:دی)، یه سی دی پلیر(به نظرتون بگیم دستگاه سی دی خون خیلی زشته؟:دی)، دو تا صندلی قهوه ای چرم بزرگ و یه مبل راحتی (راحت نما!:دی).خود اتاق نشیمن به تنهایی از کل آپارتمان من بزرگتر بود.

“My God, it smells like beer* and cigarettes in here! Bill and Sarah don’t even smoke,” Anne said.

آن گفت: خدای من، اینجا بوی آبجو و سیگار میاد! سارا و بیل حتی سیگار هم نمیکشن!

I walked to the back of the apartment, and saw myself in the mirror. I am always surprised at how I look: I’m 42 years old, five feet eleven inches tall, blond hair, average weight. But when I see myself in the mirror, I look 3 inches shorter and 5 years older.

رفتم عقب ساختمون و خودمو تو آینه دیدم.همیشه از قیافم شگفت زده میشدم: 42 سالمه، 5 فوت و 11 اینچ قد،موها بور،وزن متوسط ولی وقتی خودمو تو آینه می بینم، 3 اینچ کوتاهتر و 5 سال پیرتر به نظر میام.

I checked the windows and the closets on each side of the apartment, and went into the bathroom. Then I saw something move.

پنجره ها و گنجه های هر طرف آپارتمان رو بررسی کردم و رفتم تو حموم(حمام!:دی) بعد دیدم یه چیزی داره حرکت می کنه.

I quickly turned to Anne and put my hand up in the air, meaning: “Don’t move.” I put my finger to my lips, telling her to be quiet.

سریع برگشتم سمت آن و دستمو بالا بردم، به نشونه اینکه" تکون نخور" انگشتمو گذاشتم رو لبهام و بهش فهموندم که ساکت باشه.

Someone was in the bathroom

یه نفر تو حموم بود.


*یه استاد دارم تو دانشگاه هر وقت به این کلمه(و کلمات مشابه!) میرسیم تغییرش میده به coffee و جمله رو از نو میخونه!:دی

[armita2007]

Part 13: sentences




While he was walking in the mountains, he saw a bear.




When the starter fired his pistol, the race started




I was walking home, it started to snow.




Part 14: correct verb




Started .2.built.3.didnt sell .4.joined.5.read.6.waited.7.noticed.8.played was approaching .10. ran out .11.grabbed12.offered to teach .13.had.14.had.o15.left.16.went




Part 15: put the verb




Met.2. traveled.3.toured.4.were stopping .5.were shopping.6.went to.7.was looking .8.came .9.started .10. called.11.thought .12.tried to steal it.13.was .14.belonged .15.was packing .16.chatted .17.asked .18.got

[گیسو]

with your permission


thanks dear rayhaneh and singleguy and others


24th-28th of Azar


Do you believe in the prediction that the world will end in 2012?

[Atefeh1]

13
. Henry saw a bear while he was walking in the mountains
. The students were playing a game when the professor arrived
. Felix phoned the fire brigade when the cooker was catching fire
. When the starter fired his pistol the race began
. I was walking home when it started to snow
.Andy came out of restaurant when he saw Jenny


14
1) Started 2) built 3) did not sell 4) joined 5) read 6) was waiting 7) noticed 8) was playing 9) was approaching 10) ran 11) grabbed 12) offered 13) had 14) had 15) left 16) was going on.


15
2) was traveling 3) toured 4) stopped 5) went 6) were shopping 7) was looking 8) came 9) started 10) called 11) was thinking 12) was trying 13) was 14) belonged 15) was packing 16) chatted 17) get married.



so sorry 4 delay:41:

[Madame Tussaud]

I put my hand on my gun, and slowly opened the door wider. I saw nothing. I carefully picked up a towel from the floor. Nothing. “There must be someone in the bathtub,” I thought.
In one fell swoop, I kicked the shower curtain back. “Don’t move!” I shouted.
Suddenly a little white cat jumped out of the bathtub and scurried between my legs. A cat. I should have known.
“Oh, Jasmine! I forgot about you!” Anne said. The cat looked happy to see her. She took her into the kitchen. I poked around the rest of the bedroom, and then followed Anne into the kitchen.
“Does the cat have any food left in her dish?” I asked.
“It’s almost gone. Poor Jasmine! You must be hungry.”
“Well, Bill and Sarah haven’t been gone long, we know that.” I walked over to the telephone answering machine and checked their messages. No one had called.




دستم رو گذاشتم رو تفنگم و خیلی آروم در رو باز کردم. چیزی ندیدم. با احتیاط حوله ای که روی زمین افتاده بود رو برداشتم. هیچ چی زیرش نبود. با خودم فکر کردم" باید یکی(کسی) توی وان باشه"
با یه حرکت سریع، پرده حمام رو کنار زدم و داد زدم"تکون نخور"
یه دفعه یه گربه سفید کوچک از وان پرید بیرون و به سرعت رفت بین پاهام. یه گربه. باید حدس می زدم.
آن گفت"جاسمین! تو رو فراموش کرده بودم!" به نظر می اومد که گربه از دیدن آن خوشحاله. آن گربه رو برد به آشپزخونه. اطراف اتاق خواب رو یه نگاهی انداختم و بعد دنبال آن رفتم به آشپزخونه.
پرسیدم"چیزی از غذاش، تو ظرفش مونده؟"
"تقریبا تمام شده. جاسمین بیچاره! باید گرسنه باشی."
"خوبه، حالا می دونیم که مدت زیادی از گم شدن بیل و سارا نمی گذره." رفتم سمت تلفن و پیغام گیرش رو چک کردم. هیچ پیغامی نبود.

[گیسو]

Writer’s name: Gisoo
Name of the class: A Group to Study English
Class’s teacher?
Date: 2009/12/18
what is assignment is about: Do you believe in the prediction that the world will end in 2012?





Do you believe in the prediction that the world will end in 2012?




An increasing number of people believe that December 21, 2012 will mark the end of the world, the first to predict the end of the world were the Mayans, a bloodthirsty race that were good at two things, building highly accurate astrological equipment out of stone and sacrificing virgins.


The reason for this date is pretty complicated. On December 21, 2012 or 12-21-2012, for the first time in 26000 years, the sun will conjunct the Milky Way, and the elliptical plane, but we don’t know the exact reason of ending the world, a worldwide flood, a dreadful storm or so on.


But we as a Muslim know that except GOD, we don’t know the exact time of the world end.

[armita2007]

Topic: do you believe in the prediction that the world will end in 2012.


Writer s name: Armita


Date : 2009-12-18






The deteriorating of the Earth by humans is the common phenomenon that most of Earth lovers address about it in most international conferences held many countries in order to reach the main idea.


In the past, our ancestors made their initial instruments by hand like clothing, shelter .although they hunted most of animals, there were enough numbers of needs for them.


Unfortunately, with the advent of technology, we are drawn in the vague environment by utilizing these equipments negatively instead of positively. Perhaps, one of the major reason of this inefficiency of human s developing performances is his greedy and selfishness for properties and positions around. He has tendency towards new and unknown things. So, without considering their results, he commits some faults and explores them with polluting or destroying that area. Afterwards, he will found that what he has done. In many cases, cleaning and building like before is the most difficult deeds and sometimes it will spend much more expenses related to it.


Since our world is becoming polluted and full populated, I don’t think my planet will end in 2012. Nowadays, there are hopeful messages for saving the land.


In conclusion , all of humans in all over the world should help each other to save our planet where our next generations can breath in the clean air and use the fresh water as we are right to resident here without any feelings of unworthy.

[rayhaneh]

Writer's Name: Rayhaneh
Class: A group to study English
Topic: Do you believe in the prediction that the world will end in 2012



[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Do you believe in the prediction that the world will end in 2012?


As we all know the world will end one day but no one can claim for sure that he or she is able to tell the exact time and date for that. The man can only purpose an approximate time by his scientific calculations and knowledge.


In brief I would say firstly I never believe in predictions because they are nothing more than a common human's unproved thoughts.
And secondly I think as scientific studies are showing the way to us it's so soon for the earth to be destroyed and for the world to be ended.


The recent fast spreading prediction is more likely to be a political strategy of western countries for confusing the thoughts of people in order to obtain political goals.
Another hypothesis I have is that it can be anything with any purpose other than a truth!


I don't claim that nothing will happen in 12th December 2012, something may happen but I believe that we should not be so surrounded by this prediction so that we forget living and enjoying the present moments of time that we have for living and struggling for our goals.
Keep trust in Allah almighty and keep hope alive.

[brain]

*من اینبار روی رایتینگم اصلا وقت نذاشتم .... منظورم رو اصله رایتینگه ... پس اگه خانم دیانلا خواستن ، میتونن ماله منو تصحیح نکن چون برام مهم نیست !




برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید



Writer’s name: Brain
Name of the class: A Group to Study English
Class’s teacher: Dianella
Date: 2009/12/19
What is assignment about: I'm going to explain my opinions about the 2012 year and its prediction



Do you believe in the prediction that the world will end in 2012


You are not prepared. The end of world is near.As a prediction of Mayans tribe, the 2012 phenomenon will occur on December 21 or December 23, 2012 and world will end.Is world really going to finish?

These days many people are speaking about this phenomenon, someone is suiciding, dreading, praying and doing some other works. Everyone has a personal opinion about it. Someone says it is not the end, it is a scientific phenomenon and someone says it is the end and we are going to die. I don't care what others say because I believe in God and everything happens in this world has got a wisdom and if it occur there must be some reason and wisdom that we don't know.

In my opinion it is not really, but if it is true and occurs, it surely not the end of world. As I know some unfinished works must finish by someone and world will not end before it, therefore it is just like a big dreadful storm. So 12-21-2012 is not the end of world

[Madame Tussaud]

Writer’s name: Madame Tussuad
Name of the class: A Group to Study English
Date: 2009/12/19
Topic: Do you believe in the prediction that the world will end in 2012


In my view, it is the same as believe death with this difference that death has been proved and everybody believe that but nobody doesn't know its time and besides promised by God but end of the world is just a guess that its time became distinct by mankind. The future is unpredictable, of course, everyone must has plan for future and life but our plan will change by the time. Some unexpected events will happen during our life that will change that. In any case, life is continuing and we have to go on with a little change. To tell the truth, I don't believe it and I never think of that. Who know, maybe it is true and will be happened against my idea. In this situation, I won’t lose anything as well. I lived just as I like. In my opinion, end of the world is life full of hate, hopeless, cowardice, discrimination, roughness….. .I be convinced to live at the present and don't worry about the future because it will come and don't regret about losing the past but take experience of mistakes

[Madame Tussaud]

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

End of the world
by Backfield

Don't you forget what I've told you
So many years
We are hopeless......to our fears
We're accident called human......
Don't be angry for loving baby
And say it's unreal
So many lives turned to salt
Like roses........hiding........
It's the end of the world
The end of the world
It's a prison for dreams and for hopes
Still we believe there is God
It's the end of the world
The end of the world
We are dead but.......we are alive
Full of ignorance fools in disguise
In your.........nothing
But staring......screens
Streets are empty but still you can hear
Joy of children turning to tears
Disease.......around every corner
Quiet......still
Wait for a moment to hear
We forgot what is touch what to feel
It's the end of the world
The end of the world
It's a prison for dreams and for hopes
Still we believe there is God
It's the end of the world
The end of the world
We're dead but......we are alive
Full of ignorance fools in disguise
Take this pill it will make you feel dizzy
And then give you wings
Soon you fall into sleep
Without nightmares without any fears
If you wake up in hell or in heaven
Tell the angels we're here
Waiting below for a dream
Here in the garden of sin
It's the end of the world
The end of the world
It's a prison for dreams and for hopes
And still we believe there is God
It's the end of the world
The end of the world
We're dead but.........we're alive
Full of ignorance fools in disguise

Don't you forget what I've told you
So many years
We are hopeless and slaves to our fears
We're an accident called human beings
Don't be angry for loving the baby
And say it's unreal
So many lives turned to salt
Like roses who're hiding their thorns
It's the end of the world
The end of the world
It's a prison for dreams and for hopes
And still we believe there is God
It's the end of the world
The end of the world
We're dead but pretend we're alive
Full of ignorance, fools in disguise
In your room doing nothing
But staring at flickering screens
Streets are empty, but still you can hear
Joy of children turning to tears
Disease hides around every corner
Quiet, lay still
Wait for a moment to hear
We forgot what is touch, what to feel
It's the end of the world
The end of the world
It's a prison for dreams and for hopes
And still we believe there is God
It's the end of the world
The end of the world
We're dead but pretend we're alive
Full of ignorance, fools in disguise
Take this pill, it will make you feel dizzy
And then give you wings
Soon, boy, you'll fall into sleep
Without nightmares, without any fears
If you wake up in hell or in heaven
Tell the angels we're here
Waiting below for a dream
Here in the garden of sin
It's the end of the world
The end of the world
It's a prison for dreams and for hopes
And still we believe there is God
It's the end of the world
The end of the world
We're dead but pretend we're alive
Full of ignorance, fools in disguise


to download

برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنیدor

برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید

[singleguy]

Tonic water please

Tesuya Saruhashi grew up in Tokyo, Japan. He worked and studied for a year in Toronto, Canada. This story is based on two of Tesuya’s experiences there.



How well do you speak English? Could you survive in an English speaking country? Last year I went to study in Canada. Before going , I took several English conversation classes. I also listened to a lot of English conversations in tapes and I practiced speaking English with some foreign friends in my country. But could I communicate with people in Canada?



During my first months in Canada, I didn’t have a lot of trouble understanding people . this was a happy surprise. Unfortunately however, Canadians couldn’t always understand me. This was because of my pronunciation.



My biggest pronunciation problems were with the “v” sound and the “l” sound. For example ,when I said the word “vote”, it sounded like “bout”. And when I said the word “late”, it sounded like rate. One day I decided to look for some volunteer work. I went to the tourist center in Toronto to ask for information about volunteering.



“can I help you?” the woman at the tourist center asked

“yes I’m looking for some volunteer work” I replied. Unfortunately, I pronounced the word “volunteer” ;like “brounteer”. I’m sorry she said, “what are you looking for?”

Volunteer work” I answered, saying “brounteer” again. She looked at me strangely and then she called the man behind the counter.

“can I help you?” the man asked.

“yes, I’m looking for some volunteer work,” I replied.

“could you write that for me?” he asked. I wrote the words down and he immediately understood me. After that, I spend a lot of time practicing the “v” sound and the “l” sound.



I had problem pronouncing a few other English sounds, too. I remember a funny expression I had at a night club. I wanted to get something to drink, so I went to the bartender.

“excuse me, tonic water please,” I said.

“what?” the bartender asked.

I asked, “ Can I have a tonic water?”

“say it again,” he responded.

I was kind of disappointed that he couldn’t understand me. I repeated my request several times, but still he couldn’t understand me. Then , suddenly, he put the quarters on the bar and began to count them. At first, I didn’t know what he was doing. Then, suddenly, I understood. I asked for tonic water but he thought I asked for “twenty quarters”!

I burst into laughter and said, “ No , I didn’t asked for twenty quarters. I just want tonic water.”

The bartender seemed embarrassed.” I’m so sorry,” he said to me. “the music is so loud”

Now whenever I ask for tonic water, I remember this incident and I look forward to the bartender’s response.

-------------------------------------------------------------------------

Tonic water: a flavored water often used in alcoholic drinks

Kind of: (informal) a little

Cash register: a special machine where money is kept in a store or restaurant

Quarters: Canadian and US coins worth 25 cents

Burst into laughter: laughed very quickly and loudly

Embarrassed: ashamed or uncomfortable

[armita2007]

In the name of God


Summery




Studying this paper would be explained that the different mother –language accents are absolutely and completely influenced in the pronouncing of English letters, words and sentences.


One of the Japanese, Tesuya Saruhashi , had this problem for speaking . Although he couldn't pronounce the delicate letter of "r" instead of "v", he practiced more to say it better.


One of his stories about this misunderstanding of others is that he was in the bar ,asked "tonic water" to drink, but the bartender couldn’t get his words at all, he understood it" twenty quarters" instead of "tonic water" . The Japanese man smiled him due to this problem.

[گیسو]

Reading activity

Tonic water please



This is about a man who was born in Tokyo then worked and studied in Toronto, Canada for a year. Although before going he went to several conversation classes and done many practice to improve his speaking but there he faced many pronunciation difficulty. He had some parlance problems with some letter of English alphabet so often his second person had misunderstanding. He had two experiences about his problem.

[rosenegarin13]

Hi every one,
Single boy asked me to correct your writings.
Here we go






Writer’s name: Gisoo
Name of the class: A Group to Study English
Class’s teacher?
Date: 2009/12/18
what is assignment is about: Do you believe in the prediction that the world will end in 2012?





Do you believe in the prediction that the world will end in 2012?




An increasing number of people believe that December 21, 2012 will mark the end of the world.The first to predict the end of the world were the Mayans, a bloodthirsty race who were good at two things, building highly accurate astrological equipments out of stone and sacrificing virgins.


The reason for this date is extremely complicated. On December 21, 2012 or 12-21-2012, for the first time in 26000 years, the sun will conjunct the Milky Way, and the elliptical plane, but we don’t know the exact reason of the end the world, a worldwide flood, a dreadful storm etc.


But as Muslims, we believe that except GOD, no body knows the exact time of the end of the world.






Nice piece, thanks.
1.Instead of using "that" in formal writing, it's better to use who, which, etc.
2."pretty" is informal and can't be used in formal writing, you can choose other adverbs which collocate with "complicated", it's better.
3.etc. is better than so on (so on is informal again)
4.you chose the subject "we", so you must choose Muslims(plural)

All in all, you used a good range of vocabulary which is acceptable. I enjoyed.

[rosenegarin13]

Topic: do you believe in the prediction that the world will end in 2012.


Writer s name: Armita


Date : 2009-12-18






The deterioration of the Earth by humans is a common phenomenon that many Earth lovers address about it in many international conferences held in many countries in order to reach the main idea.


In the past, our ancestors made their initial instruments by hand like clothing, shelters . Although they hunted most of animals, there were enough numbers of needs for them*


Unfortunately, with the advent of technology, we are drawn in a vague environment by utilizing these equipments negatively instead of using them positively. Perhaps, one of the major reasons of this inefficiency in humans developing performances is his greed and selfishness for properties and positions around. He has tendency towards new and unknown things. Therefore, without considering their results, he commits some faults* and explores them with polluting or destroying that area. Afterwards, he will find out what he has done. In many cases, cleaning and building that area like before is the most difficult deeds and sometimes it will spend much more expenses related to it.*


Since our world is becoming polluted and fully populated, I don’t think my planet will end in 2012. Nowadays, there are hopeful messages for saving the land.


In conclusion , all of humans in all over the world should help each other to save our the planet where our next generations can breathe in the clean air and use the fresh water as we are right to resident here without any feelings of unworthy*.




The usage of vocabulary surprised me!
Nice.
1.deteriorate changes to a noun by adding "-tion" not "-ing"
2.you wanna talk about a phenomenon which the reader may not be aware of. "a" is better that "the"
3."many" sounds more natural to me.(you used "most of" many times)
4.the proposition for "hold" is "in"
5. "address" doesn't need any proposition
6.you're using selfishness which is a noun, so you should change "greedy" to a noun as well.
7."so" sounds informal to me and your writing is quite formal."therefore" is better.
8."will found" is not correct grammatically and it doesn't suggest what you mean.
9.you should use the adverb "fully" before the adjective "populated"
10.don't use "I" in formal writing.
11.breath is a noun and breathe is its verb.


I really didn't get what you meant by the violet sentences.*
* white words should be omitted.

[rosenegarin13]

Writer's Name: Rayhaneh
Class: A group to study English
Topic: Do you believe in the prediction that the world will end in 2012




Do you believe in the prediction that the world will end in 2012?


As we all know the world will end one day but no one can claim for sure that he or she is able to tell the exact time and date of that. The man can only purpose an approximate time by his scientific calculations and knowledge.


In brief, I would say firstly, I never don'tbelieve in predictions because they are nothing more than a common human's unproved thoughts. Secondly, I think As scientific studies show, are showing the way to us it's so soon for the earth to be destroyed and for the world to end .


The recent fast spreading prediction is more likely to be a political strategy of western countries for confusing the thoughts of people in order to obtain their political goals.
Another hypothesis I have, is that it can be anything with any purpose other than a truth!


I don't claim that nothing will happen in 12th December 2012, something may happen but I believe that we should not be so surrounded by this prediction so that we forget living and enjoying the present moments of time that we have for living and struggling for our goals.
Keep trust in the almighty and keep hope alive.




Nice writing but I don't understand something
what do you mean by "purpose"?
Did you use it as a verb?
It's not a verb.
and one more thing, "the almighty" would suffice to mention Allah, no need to use Allah again or you can just use Allah. It would imply the meaning.
All in all, I enjoyed reading it, thanks.

[rosenegarin13]

*من اینبار روی رایتینگم اصلا وقت نذاشتم .... منظورم رو اصله رایتینگه ... پس اگه خانم دیانلا خواستن ، میتونن ماله منو تصحیح نکن چون برام مهم نیست !




برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید


Writer’s name: Brain
Name of the class: A Group to Study English
Class’s teacher: Dianella
Date: 2009/12/19
What is assignment about: I'm going to explain my opinions about the 2012 year and its prediction



Do you believe in the prediction that the world will end in 2012


You are not prepared. The end of world is near.As a prediction of Mayans tribe, the 2012 phenomenon will occur on December 21 or December 23, 2012 and the world will end.Is world really going to finish?

These days, many people are speaking about this phenomenon, someone is committing a suicide, dreading, praying and doing some other works. Everyone has a personal opinion about it. Some say it is not the end, it is a scientific phenomenon and some say it is the end and we are going to die. I don't care what others say, because I believe in God and everything which happens in this world has got a wisdom and if it occurs there must be a reason or wisdom that we don't know.

In my opinion, it is not really, but if it is true and it occurs, it surely not is not surely the end of the world. As I know, some unfinished works must be finished by someone and the world will not end before it. Therefore, it is just like a big dreadful storm. So 12-21-2012 is not the end of world





It was nice...all your ideas put into two paragraphs

I didn't get the violet sentence.
"suicide" always collocates with the verb "commit"
Be careful about using passive tense
:46:

[rosenegarin13]

Writer’s name: Madame Tussuad
Name of the class: A Group to Study English
Date: 2009/12/19
Topic: Do you believe in the prediction that the world will end in 2012


In my view, it is the same as believe death with this difference that death has been proved and everybody believes that, but nobody doesn't know its time and besides, promised by God, but end of the world is just a guess that its time became distinct by mankind. The future is unpredictable, of course, everyone must has a plan for future and life but our plan will change by the time. Some unexpected events will happen during our life that will change that. In any case, life is continuing and we have to go on with a little change. To tell the truth, I don't believe it and I never think of that. Who knows, maybe it is true and it will happen against my idea. In this situation, I won’t lose anything as well. I lived just as I liked. In my opinion, believing in the end of the world causes a life full of hate, hopelessness, cowardice, discrimination, roughness etc.I am convinced to live at the present and not to worry about the future, because it will come and I don't regret about losing the past but I take experience of mistakes.






very well organized.thanks.
about the violet sentence:
It is a double negative sentence and it's not common anymore
better to say:
Nobody knows
:46:

[G.D.ragon.Ir]

Tonic water please







This story is about Tesuya Saruhashi and his problems when he lived in Canada for a year. Before going, he took some English calsses but he couldn’t pronounce sounds “V” and “I” well. For example, when he looked for some volunteer work, he pronounced “volunteer” like “brounteer” and when he wanted to drink tonic water, he pronounced “tonic water” like “twenty quarters” and bartender wanted to give him twenty quarters. After that, whenever he wants to drink tonic water, he remembers this incident

[Madame Tussaud]

Tonic water please

This text is about a japanese university student that he has studied in Toronto, Canada for a year. He took several English classes to learn English very well before he went to Canada. In Canada, he didn't have any problem with understood people but people couldn't understand him because of his pronunciation specially with the' V ' sound and the ' L ' sound as sometimes he had to write his sentence or he had to repeat that several times.l

[rosenegarin13]

In the name of God


Summary




Studying this paper would be explained that different mother tongue accents are absolutely and completely influenced by the pronunciation of English letters, words and sentences.


One of the Japanese, Tesuya Saruhashi , had this problem in speaking . Although he couldn't pronounce the delicate letter of "r" instead of "v", he practiced more to say them better.


One of his stories about this misunderstanding of others is that he was in a bar ,asked for "tonic water" to drink, but the bartender couldn’t get his words at all, he understood it" twenty quarters" instead of "tonic water" . The Japanese man smiled him due to this problem.




Nice summary but not perfect.
A summary should contain the main points and it should be independent. Imagine that someone who doesn't know anything about the original text is going to read your summary and get the main points of the original text.
For example, the last sentence of your paragraph is not that much important to be mentioned in your summary. By the way, the first sentence is not mentioned by the author of the text. In a good summary, you should write the main points in another way. I mean you should write the information presented in the text, in other words(in your own words for example) and you must not add new information to it.
Good luck:20:.

[rosenegarin13]

Reading activity

Tonic water please




This is about a man who was born in Tokyo. Then, he worked and studied in Toronto, Canada for a year. Although before going to Canada he went to several conversation classes and prasticed a lot to improve his speaking but there he faced many pronunciation difficulties. He had some parlance problems with some letters of English alphabet so often that his second person misunderstood him. He had two experiences about his problem.



َA good summary!
It includes the main points but that 'this is about' bothers me:31:
Don't write such things at the beginning of your summary. As I said before, imagine that the reader doesn't know anything about what you're writing about.
*Parlance is quite a formal word and your summary is not that much formal.
*I didn't get what you mean by " his second person"
Ain't it better to say " his partner?"

Good luck:46:

[rosenegarin13]

Tonic water please





This story is about Tesuya Saruhashi and his problems when he lived in Canada for a year. Before going, he took some English classes but he couldn’t pronounce the sounds “V” and “I” well. For example, when he looked for some volunteer work, he pronounced “volunteer” like “brounteer” and when he wanted to drink tonic water, he pronounced “tonic water” like “twenty quarters” and bartender wanted to give him twenty quarters. After that, whenever he wants to drink tonic water, he remembers this incident




A new member:31:welcome:31:
I enjoyed reading your summary. Just some spelling mistakes(better to say: typing mistakes)
But I don't understand why your summaries are too short?:31:
It is a summary of course:31: but It must include the main ideas as well:31:
well done
Good luck:46:

[rosenegarin13]

Tonic water please

This text is about a Japanese university student who he has studied in Toronto, Canada for a year. He took several English classes to learn English very well before going to Canada. In Canada, he didn't have any problem with understanding people but people couldn't understand him because of his pronunciation, specially with the' V ' sound and the ' L ' sound as sometimes he had to write his sentence or he had to repeat that several times.l



The first letter of all nationalities should be capitalized.
A good summary, you've mentioned his experiences in an indirect way. Well done.

Good luck:20:

[rosenegarin13]

Listening Activity

Write your transcription and send it as a private message to me

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[rosenegarin13]

Hi there

Here are your transcriptions.
The original transcription will be added to this post soon



گیسو


[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]





It isn’t one of my favorite airports but it’s ok. The airport is always very crowded and it’s taking a long time to check in and go thorough immigration other than that it’s all right. The flight was pretty awful. As soon as we toke off we ran into bad weather and it became very bumpy. The food was great. They served a really nice chicken dish. The flight attendants were really nice. I think the next time I fly; I’ll check the weather report before I leave. If the weather looks bad along…I won’t fly



Madame Tussaud


[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]





It's not one of my favorite airports, but it's OK. The airport's always very crowded and it takes long time to check in and go to emigration other the……. It's all right. The flight's pretty awful as soon as we took off, we run in to bad weather and it became very bombing. The food was great. They've served really nice chicken dish. The flight attendants are really nice. I think the next time I'll fly; I'll check the weather report before I'll leave. If the weather looks bad along the road, I won't fly


G.D.ragon.Ir



[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]




It isn't one of my favorite airports, but it's OK. The airports is always very -------, but takes a long time to check in a ------ . Other the ------- alright. The fly was pretty ----- as soon is we took off. We ran into bad weather and it be came very bumpy. The food is great. They served the really nice chicken dish. ------- it ten and true really nice. I think the next time my fly I check the weather report before I leave. If the weather looks bad along the route. I won't fly



whitewolf7


[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]



there isn't one of my favorite airports but it's ok the airport is always very crowded and it takes along time to check in and go through immigration. other the ... is alright. the flight was pretty awful. as soon as we took off we ran into bad weather and it became very bumpy. the food was great. they serve the really nice chicken dish . the fly attendance are really nice.I think the next time I fly,I'll check the weather report before I leave. if the weather looks the bad along the root i wouldn't fly


armita2007


[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]


It is my favorite airport but it is ok. The airport is always very crowded and it is taking along time to check in and go through for immigrations. Other.. it is all right .the flight is pretty awful. As soon as we took off, we ran into the bad weather and it became very bumpy. The food is great. They serve very nice chicken dish the flight attendant are really nice I think the next flight I will check the weather report before I leave. If the weather looks bad along the…., I won't fly

[rosenegarin13]

It seems that you have to review some of your previous lessons because our group has shrunk in size
:31:

Parts Of The Body




برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید
Clothes



برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید



[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]







Keys


Parts of the body



برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید


Clothes



برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید


[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Have Fun

:31:

[rosenegarin13]

My Immortal


[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]


Artist:Evanescence
Composers:Amy Lee; Ben Moody
Album:Fallen



I'm so tired of being here
Suppressed by all my childish fears
And if you have to leave
I wish that you would just leave
Cause your presence still lingers here
And it won't leave me alone
These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time can not erase
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you scream I'd fight away all of your tears
And I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have all of me
You used to captivate by your resonating *
Now I'm bound by the life you left behind
Your face * my once pleasant dreams
Your voice *chased away
All the sanity in me
These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time can not erase
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you scream I'd fight away all of your tears
And I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have all of me
I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone
But you're still with me
I've been alone *
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you scream I'd fight away all of your tears
And I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have all of me



I'm so tired of being here, suppressed by all my childish fears
And if you have to leave, I wish that you would just leave
Your presence still lingers here and it won't leave me alone

These wounds won't seem to heal, this pain is just too real
There's just too much that time cannot erase

When you cried, I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream, I'd fight away all of your fears
And I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have all of me

You used to captivate me by your resonating light
Now, I'm bound by the life you left behind
Your face it haunts my once pleasant dreams
Your voice it chased away all the sanity in me

These wounds won't seem to heal, this pain is just too real
There's just too much that time cannot erase

When you cried, I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream, I'd fight away all of your fears
And I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have all of me

I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone
But though you're still with me, I've been alone all along

When you cried, I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream, I'd fight away all of your fears
And I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have all of me, me, me


برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید

[گیسو]

hi my dear friends



it's like a previous activity but it have a little difference.



I put 2 picture and then you must find a legical relation bw them and then you'll write a full sentences.



now go on :46:




[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]





[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[گیسو]

writing activity

24-28


If you could travel back in time to meet a famous person from history. What person would you like to meet? Use reasons and specific examples and details to support your answer.


[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

good luck

[armita2007]

In the name of God



Topic: the famous person you would like to visit in the past



Writer: Armita



Date: 2010-01-17




Flashing back to the past and visiting a popular person are so great let alone choosing the one as the best.



I really like to see the Great Cyrus; I appreciate him for his wonderful affairs in granting and providing the facilities for all of people, the poorest to the richest.



He was given the biggest power from God to survive people from famine, drought and poverty.




(Sorry, I don’t have enough time to complete my composition although I have had many ideas and opinions about this topic.)

[singleguy]

Reading Activity



Job Family: Design, Arts and Crafts

People who work in this sector use their creative and original ideas to affect the usefulness and appearance of almost everything we see and use in our daily lives.

* Designers work on products ranging from clothes to cars, kitchen appliances, magazines and mobile phones, making sure that they are visually attractive, functional and, where possible, environmentally friendly.

* Artists produce paintings, sculpture and other pieces that decorate homes and public spaces.

* Craftspeople, such as engravers, picture framers and model makers, produce products using traditional techniques or innovative ideas and materials.

Employees in this sector usually work regular hours, but should be willing to work additional hours in order to meet deadlines. People who are self-employed often have no set working hours, but may need to be available at weekends to sell their work to the public. Working environments include offices, studios and workshops. It may be possible to work from home. Employers include design companies and product manufacturers, ranging from large organizations to very small businesses. Competition for jobs is intense. About half of the workers in the design, arts and crafts sector are self-employed.

In the UK, over 500,000 people work in this sector in total, with around 300,000 in craft work and 180,000 in design. Many craft workers and artists have more than one job to help them boost their income. Artists and craft businesses are found in both urban and rural areas, with a larger concentration in tourist areas. There are opportunities for designers throughout the UK, especially in large cities and towns, but 31 percent are based in London. Creativity, an eye for shape and color, and good spatial awareness are important for many jobs. Computer skills are essential for most design work. Drawing ability and practical skills are often useful, and craft workers need to be good at working with their hands. People who are self-employed also need business skills.
There are job opportunities at every entry level. Some entrants have few formal qualifications, but there is strong competition for jobs in this sector and many enter with specific art and design qualifications. There are many relevant design, art and craft courses ranging from GCSEs/S grades to those leading to degrees and postgraduate qualifications. Employers and college admissions tutors usually expect to see a portfolio of work as well. Promotion may involve working on more important projects or progressing to management positions. Self-employed workers progress by building their business, establishing their reputation and ensuring they have a steady supply of work.

[vahid_civil]

Work is the greatest thing in the world. So we should have some of it for tomorrow
Don Herold
کار از مهمترین چیزای دنیاست. ما باید یکمش رو برای فردا بزاریم !

I don't to be a genius; I have enough problems just trying to be a man
Albert Camus
من نمیخام که یک نابغه باشم . من به قدر کافی مشکل دارم فقط تلاش کردم که یک انسان باشم .

========

Stories only happen to those who are able to tell them
Paul Auster
داستانها فقط برای کسانی اتفاق می افتند که توانایی تعریف کردنشون رو دارند .


Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash
Leonard Cohen
شعر فقط مدرکی از زندگیست . اگر زندگی شما به خوبی در حال سوختن است شعر فقط خاکسترست .

[Mahdi/s]

hi every one....
Iam so happy join to your group and tanks for invite.
my language is very bad and before you read my summary i say excuse for mistake.

======================
this article is about three job design, art and crafts and how do they work.
and compare employees with self-employed,for example employees in the work have working hours and working environments but self-employed dont have work hours or especial place for work, they can work at home.
this three job need to learn program computer and other things,such as drawing ability is useful for artist and Computer skills are essential for most design work and craft workers need to be good at working with their hands.
Many craft workers and artists have more than one job to help them boost their income
========================
i think this text so hard :31:

[rayhaneh]

Summery writing
The given note is mainly about the art and design subject of study and required qualifications to be successful in this field also the job opportunities for it.
The people working in this sector affect positively the usefulness and appearances of the objects we use in our daily life. Artists, designers and engravers are all placed in the list of workers of this sector.
Most of the workers are self employed but there are many organizations and companies which employ them in arts, crafts and design sections.
The salary is not so much in this sector that’s why usually people have another job besides working as an artist or designer.
The qualities needed for being a good worker in this field are creativity, good spatial awareness computer skills and drawing ability. They should also be good at working with hands. The relevant degrees which are given for art and deign are GCSE (General Certificate of Secondary Education), graduate and post graduate degrees.
There are opportunities for designer both in urban and rural areas and especially in tourist cities. In UK about 500,000 people are working in this field and among them 300,000 are in craft work and 180,000 of them are in design.


New words
Innovative = new, inventive
Intense = extreme, high
Entrants = who enters
Tutors = private teachers
Portfolio = set of artistic works of a person
Boost= increase
:11:
----------------------------------------
my summery=about 8 lines
orignal article= about 24 lines
+
I think the languge of the reading was strange! :31: but not bad

[rayhaneh]

Work is the greatest thing in the world. So we should have some of it for tomorrow
Don Heroldكار بزرگترین چیر در دنیاست پس ما باید یک مقدار از آن را برای فردا داشته باشیم
(من که نفهمیدم چی میخواد بگه!:31:)

don't to be a genius; I have enough problems just trying to be a man
Albert Camusمن لازم نیست(نمیخام)نابغه باشم ،فقط درتلاش برای مرد شدن به اندازه کافی مشکل دارم!

Stories only happen to those who are able to tell them
Paul Austerقصه ها فقط برای آنهایی اتفاق می افتند که قادرند تعریفشان کنند!



Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash
Leonard Cohen
شعر فقط نشانهء حیات است اگر زندگیت به خوبی جریان دارد(میگذرد)شعر فقط نقش خاکستر را ایفا میکند.
(اینم نفهمیدم چی میگه ...شاید درست ترجمه نکردم باشم:27:)

[rosenegarin13]

Describe this photo in a sentence or whatever

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[vahid_civil]

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Life is hard.we need to reach the destination hard way to pass . 1-

2- life is harder without any shoes !!

[armita2007]

In the name of God




reading activity

People who use their imagination and creative thinking in their
art works are more successful. Most of workplaces are different from each other.



One of the most significant factors in choosing the suitable job is to use the best opportunity you catch in once. In art and craft works are clearly difficult to promote due to the strong competitions.

[rosenegarin13]

Work is the greatest thing in the world. So we should have some of it for tomorrow
Don Herold

کار مهمترین چیز در جهان است.پس باید کمی از آن را برای فردا بگذاریم.




I don't want to be a genius; I have enough problems just trying to be a man
Albert Camus

نمیخوام نابغه باشم؛ برای انسان بودن به اندازه کافی مشکل دارم.




Stories only happen to those who are able to tell them
Paul Auster

داستان ها فقط برای کسانی که قادر به تعریفشان هستند، اتفاق می افتد.




Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash
Leonard Cohen

شعر، تنها، مدرک زندگی است.اگر زندگیت خوب بسوزد، تنها شعر، خاکسترش است.

[rosenegarin13]

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

On the tightrope of my life...nothing to lean to

[singleguy]

Summary
People who are in arts, crafts and design are artistic type of persons who usually deal with appearance of almost everything and half of them are self-employed. In the UK about 45% of people who work in this area of activity are artists and craftspeople who are concerned in tourist areas. Every one in this sector needs to have some additional and essential abilities in order to be good at their field of activity such as working with computer, being good at working with hands and practical skills.
There are entrants for some job opportunities with specific arts and design qualifications so there is intense competition between the volunteers.

new words (for me)l

Craft: an activity involving a special skill at making things with your hands
Sector: a part of an area of activity, especially of a country’s economy
Range: a variety of things of a particular type
Appliance: a machine that is designed to do a particular thing in the home, such as preparing food, heating or cleaning
Visual: of or connected with seeing or sight
Functional: practical and useful; with little or no decoration
Engraver: a person whose job is to cut words or designs on wood, stone, metal, etc.
Innovative: introducing or using new ideas, ways of doing sth, etc.
Deadline: a point in time by which sth must be done: I prefer to work to a deadline.
Employee: a person who is paid to work for sb
Intense: very great; very strong
Boost: to make sth increase, or become better or more successful
Essential: completely necessary; extremely important in a particular situation or for a particular activity SYN: vital
Practical: workable
Entrant: a person who has recently joined a profession, university, etc
Qualification: 1- an exam that you have passed or a course of study that you have successfully completed
2- a skill or type of experience that you need for a particular job or activity:
Previous teaching experience is a necessary qualification for this job.
Relevant: closely connected with the subject you are discussing or the situation you are thinking about:
Do you have the relevant experience?
Postgraduate: a person who already holds a first degree and who is doing advanced study or research
Admission: the act of accepting sb into an institution, organization, etc
Portfolio: a collection of photographs, drawings, etc. that you use as an example of your work, especially when applying for a job
Establish: set up
Reputation: the opinion that people have about what sb/sth is like, based on what has happened in the past
Ensure: to make sure that sth happens or is definite
Steady: 1- developing, growing, etc. gradually and in an even and regular way
2- Not changing and not interrupted


lllllllllllll llllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll lllllllllllllllllll lllllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll lllllllllllll
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

with self confidence, we can walk through every path in our lives


lllllllllllll llllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll lllllllllllllllllll lllllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllll lllllllllllll

Translation
Work is the greatest thing in the world. So we should have some of it for tomorrow
:دی کار فوق العاده ترین چیز در دنیاست! بنابراین ما میتوانیم آن را به فردا موکول کنیم!
is this a jok?l
:دی

don't to be a genius; I have enough problems just trying to be a man
نیاز نیست نابغه باشی، من به اندازه کافی مشکل دارم که سعی کنم یه مرد باشم
:دی

Stories only happen to those who are able to tell them
داستان ها برای کسانی اتفاق میفتد که بتوانند توضیح دهند!
:دی

Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash
شعر تنها اثبات برای زندگی است. اگر زندگی درحال از بین رفتن است، شعر تنها خاکستر به جا مانده است!
:5:

[rayhaneh]

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

We can not pass through hardships of life with bare feet
High spirits and will power are good shoes for man!n

[whitewolf7]

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

here isn't another choices. stay or pass through hardships.
it's our life's rule.
success is always beyond dangers

[majid.khaledi]

. hello every one

I'm glad to be here and thanks to invite me
my English isn't good enough
========
the passage isn't easy one!
but this one talks about the art and crafts and it's sectors.the artists who work in those fields,some are employee and some is self-employed.because of little income,Many craft workers and artists have more than one job to help them boost their income.we have every where persons who work in this field,either in urban or rural.those works need to learn computer programs and other things.
============
i think a don't have earn good summary
forgive me:11:

[vahid_civil]

everyone have a work (or more in my country ! ) in the world .
this can include Designing ,art , crafts , ...
Those who are working in this field should be enough data from other related fields such as computer
in order to have a job to compete with other competing
even Self-employed workers.

[محمد88]

Reading activity
Designers, artists and craftspeople are the people who should use their innovation and creativity to progress in their job
Most of the time the employees who work in these fields have to work hardly and also half of them are self-employed.
In the UK, over 500,000 people work in this sector in total and most of them have more than one job to help their economic situation.
There are opportunities for designers throughout the UK, especially in large cities and towns, but 31 percent are based in London
Computer skills, Drawing ability, practical skills, being good with hands and business skills for self-employed workers are important for these employees.



New words
Craft
Sector
Appliance
Intense
Opportunity
Entrant


!!I think this passage was the hardest one I’ve read in this group

[rosenegarin13]

Work is the greatest thing in the world. So we should have some of it for tomorrow
Don Herold


کار مهمترین چیز در جهان است.پس باید کمی از آن را برای فردا بگذاریم.


[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]


I don't want to be a genius; I have enough problems just trying to be a man
Albert Camus


نمیخوام نابغه باشم؛ برای انسان بودن به اندازه کافی مشکل دارم.



[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Stories only happen to those who are able to tell them
Paul Auster


داستان ها فقط برای کسانی که قادر به تعریفشان هستند، اتفاق می افتد.



[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Poetry is just the evidence of life. If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash
Leonard Cohen


شعر، تنها، مدرک زندگی است.اگر زندگیت خوب بسوزد، تنها شعر، خاکسترش است.

[singleguy]

Listening activity

This listening includes different parts. you're supposed to choose at least one of them, download that and then write the script and send it to me as private massage till 6 days




[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]



the first listening is chosen from tactics for listening
subject: working

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]




[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]




the next listening activity is chosen from a source wit British accent
Snow
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]




[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]





the last one is chosen from our old source
A young woman talks about her daily schedule while she was studying at college
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Topic: Daily Routine
Length: 1:59
Accent: General American
Gender: F
Speed: Medium
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[singleguy]

A Song from Celine dion
:5:
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
when i need you
just close my eyes and then I'm with you
all that I saw want to give you
It's only a heart beat ....
When I need love hold up my hands and then touch love
I never knew there was so much love
keeping me warm......day
.......empty space in between us
telephone can't take the place if you smile
but you know I want be traveler for ever
i's cold out but hold up
do like I do
when I need you just close my eyes and I'm leave you
I that i saw want to give you babe
It's only a heart beat ....
when the road is.......
It's not so easy
when the road is.......
honey that's a heavy love that we have to beer
but you know I want be traveler in that time
but I's cold out, but hold out
and do like I do
when I need love I hold up my hand and touch love
and I never knew It was so much love
keeping me warm night and day
when I need you
just close my eyes and.
-------- ----------- -------------
--------- ----------- -------------


When I need you
Just close my eyes and I'm with you
And all that I so want to give you
It's only a heart beat away

When I need love
I hold out my hands and I touch love
I never knew there was so much love
Keeping me warm night and day

Miles and miles of empty space in between us
A telephone can't take the place of your smile
But you know I wont be traveling forever
It's cold out, but hold out and do like I do

When I need you
I just close my eyes and I'm with you
And all that I so want to give you babe
It's only a heartbeat away

It's not easy when the road is your driver
Honey, that's a heavy load that we bear
But you know I won't be traveling a lifetime
It's cold out but hold out and do like I do
When I need you

When I need love
I hold out my hands and I touch love
I never knew there was so much love
Keeping me warm night and day

When I need you
Just close my eyes and I'm with you
And all that I so want to give you
It's only a heart beat away

download:
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

The next song is from Hilary duff
:40:
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

any moment every thing can change
feel the wind on your shoulder
for a moment all the world can wait
let go your yesterday
can you hear coming
can you feel it in your soul
can you trust this -----------l
take control
fly
open up th--------------------hide away
you can shine
forget the reasons why you can't in life
and start to try
because it's your time
time to fly
all you were is, leave them some where else
find a dream you can follow
wish for something, when there's nothing left
-----------------------------
can you hear coming
can you feel in your soul
can you trust to yourself
and take control
fly, open up the---------------- once to hide away
you can shine
forget the reasons can't you in life, and start to try
because it's your time
time to fly
---------------------------alone
just run and run away
trust yourself and don't give up
you know you do better than any one else
any moment
every thing can be change.......
----------------------
-----------------------



Any moment, everything can change,
Feel the wind on your shoulder,
For a minute, all the world can wait,
Let go of your yesterday.

Can you hear it calling?
Can you feel it in your soul?
Can you trust this longing?
And take control,

Fly
Open up the part of you that wants to hide away
You can shine,
Forget about the reasons why you can't in life,
And start to try, cause it's your time,
Time to fly.

All your worries, leave them somewhere else,
Find a dream you can follow,
Reach for something, when there's nothing left,
And the world's feeling hollow.

Can you hear it calling?
Can you feel it in your soul?
Can you trust this longing?
And take control,

Fly
Open up the part of you that wants to hide away
You can shine,
Forget about the reasons why you can't in life,
And start to try, cause it's your time,
Time to fly.

And when you're down and feel alone,
Just want to run away,
Trust yourself and don't give up,
You know you better than anyone else,

Any moment, everything can change,
Feel the wind on your shoulder,
For a minute, all the world can wait,
Let go of yesterday,

Fly
Open up the part of you that wants to hide away
You can shine,
Forget about the reasons why you can't in life,
And start to try,
Fly
Forget about the reasons why you can't in life,
And start to try, cause it's your time,
Time to fly.

In a moment, everything can change.




Download
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]


[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

and the next song is from Lady Antebellum
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]


It's been all this time
and I can't get off my mind
no body knows it---------- l
I stay at all the photograph
still stayed in the----------l
nobody knows it
everyday I----------- tears away
so many nights I've prayed for you to say
I should have been chasing you
I should have been try to prove
you were all the night over to me
I should say all the things that I kept inside the-----------l
maybe I should have made you to believe
that what we had was all we'd ever need
------------------------------
but the truth is not that strong

nobody knows it----------l
-----------------------------------
nobody knows it--------------l
but If you are happy I can tell some how
but the truth is--------------- enough
I should have been chasing you
I should have been trying to prove
---------------------------------------
I should all the things I kept inside --------------l
maybe I can't make to believe
but all we had was all we'd ever need(2)l
---------------------------------------
---------------------------------------
.
.
.



Boy it's been all this time
And I can't get you off my mind
And nobody knows it but me

I stare at your photograph
Still sleep in the shirt you left
And nobody knows it but me

Everyday I wipe my tears away
So many nights I've prayed for you to say

[Chorus]
I should've been chasing you
I should've been trying to prove
That you were all that mattered to me
I should've said all the things that I kept inside of me
And maybe I could've made you believe
That what we had was all we'd ever need

My friends think I'm moving on
But the truth is I'm not that strong
And nobody knows it but me

And I've kept all the words you said
In a box underneath my bed
And nobody knows it but me

But if you're happy I'll get through somehow
But the truth is that I've been screaming out

[Repeat Chorus]

I should've been chasing you
You should've been trying to prove
That you were all that mattered to me
Oh you should've said all the things
That I kept inside of me
And maybe you could've made me believe
That what we had girl
Oh that what we had, what we had
It was all we'd ever need
It was all we'd ever need

ِDownload
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[rosenegarin13]

hi every one....
Iam so happy join to your group and tanks for invite.
my language is very bad and before you read my summary i say excuse for mistake.

======================
this article is about three job design, art and crafts and how do they work.
and compare employees with self-employed,for example employees in the work have working hours and working environments but self-employed dont have work hours or especial place for work, they can work at home.
this three job need to learn program computer and other things,such as drawing ability is useful for artist and Computer skills are essential for most design work and craft workers need to be good at working with their hands.
Many craft workers and artists have more than one job to help them boost their income
========================
i think this text so hard :31:


Compare yr own summary with this to find out yr mistakes:

This article is about three job designs, art and crafts and how do they work.
and compares employees with self-employed ones,for example employees at work have working hours and working environments but self-employed people dont have working hours or a especial place to work in, they can work at home.
People who want to do these three jobs need to learn computer programming and other things, such as drawing ability which is useful for an artist and computer skills which are essential for most design workers and craft workers need to be good at working with their hands.

I just checked the grammatical problems...
but still problems with starting yr summary(this article is about...)
Not bad for the first time
:20:

[rosenegarin13]

Summery writing
The given note is mainly about the art and design subject of study and required qualifications to be successful in this field also the job opportunities for it.
The people working in this sector affect positively the usefulness and appearances of the objects we use in our daily life. Artists, designers and engravers are all placed in the list of workers of this sector.
Most of the workers are self employed but there are many organizations and companies which employ them in arts, crafts and design sections.
The salary is not so much in this sector that’s why usually people have another job besides working as an artist or designer.
The qualities needed for being a good worker in this field are creativity, good spatial awareness computer skills and drawing ability. They should also be good at working with hands. The relevant degrees which are given for art and deign are GCSE (General Certificate of Secondary Education), graduate and post graduate degrees.
There are opportunities for designer both in urban and rural areas and especially in tourist cities. In UK about 500,000 people are working in this field and among them 300,000 are in craft work and 180,000 of them are in design.


New words
Innovative = new, inventive
Intense = extreme, high
Entrants = who enters
Tutors = private teachers
Portfolio = set of artistic works of a person
Boost= increase
:11:
----------------------------------------
my summery=about 8 lines
orignal article= about 24 lines
+
I think the languge of the reading was strange! :31: but not bad

Wow...
A very good summary..I just saw some punctuation mistakes..use commas n periods in the appropriate way n also use "the" when needed...
well done
:20:

[rosenegarin13]

In the name of God




reading activity

People who use their imagination and creative thinking in their
art works are more successful. Most of workplaces are different from each other.



One of the most significant factors in choosing the suitable job is to use the best opportunity you catch in once. In art and craft works are clearly difficult to promote due to the strong competitions.

People who use their imagination and creative thinking in their
art works are more successful. Most of workplaces are different from each other.

One of the most significant factors in choosing the suitable job is to use the best opportunities you catch at once. In art and craft works, it is clearly difficult to promote due to the strong competitions.

well...this summary is too short...but not that much bad..of course ya didn't cover all the key points which were presented in the oringinal text...
Good luck n I hope next time, yr summary would be better...
:20:

[rosenegarin13]

Summary
People who are in arts, crafts and design are artistic type of persons who usually deal with appearance of almost everything and half of them are self-employed. In the UK about 45% of people who work in this area of activity are artists and craftspeople who are concerned with working in tourist areas. Every one in this sector needs to have some additional and essential abilities in order to be good at their field of activity such as working with computer, being good at working with hands and practical skills.
There are entrants for some job opportunities with specific arts and design qualifications so there is intense competition between the volunteers.


The appropriate proposition for concern is "with"
a short n nice summery..but again u didn't cover the main points....
BTW,the Plural form of person is people...of course, persons is okay too but people is more preferable.
Good luck dear boss:5:l
:31:

[rosenegarin13]

. hello every one

I'm glad to be here and thanks to invite me
my English isn't good enough
========
the passage isn't easy one!
but this one talks about the art and crafts and it's sectors.The artists who work in those fields,some are employees and some are self-employed.Because of little income,Many craft workers and artists have more than one job to help them boost their income.we have every where persons who work in this field,either in urban or rural.those works need to learn computer programming and other things.
============
i think a don't have earn good summary
forgive me:11:

Hello...
I don't know why most of u use such damn sentences at the beginning of yr summaries?:31:
I told u in our social gorup, didn't I?:31:
well...for the first time..not that much bad...hope for a better one next time:20:l

[rosenegarin13]

Everyone has a job (or more in my country ! ) in the world .
This can include Designing ,arts , crafts , ...
Those who are working in this field should be skillful in other related fields such as computer.
In order to have a job to compete with others
even with Self-employed workers.

Enough data doesn't convey the meaning appropriately. Capitalize the first letter of each word at the beginning of each sentence.
A not very long summary...but not that much bad for the first time.
:20:

[rayhaneh]

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
____________________



[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[rosenegarin13]

Reading activity
Designers, artists and craftspeople are the people who should use their innovation and creativity to progress in their job
Most of the time the employees who work in these fields have to work hardly and also half of them are self-employed.
In the UK, over 500,000 people work in this sector in total and most of them have more than one job to help their economic situation.
There are opportunities for designers throughout the UK, especially in large cities and towns, but 31 percent are based in London
Computer skills, Drawing abilities, practical skills, being good in working with hands and business skills for self-employed workers are important for these employees.



New words
Craft
Sector
Appliance
Intense
Opportunity
Entrant


!!I think this passage was the hardest one I’ve read in this group

A good summary in general...
Good luck...
:20:

[rosenegarin13]

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Human emotions are beyond our imagination....

[singleguy]

your answers to the listening activity
majid.khaledi
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
I have my own design company.It's very small,just me and two assistants.
I design beroshors,advertises for magazines,menus and things like that.It's a very creative job.
I started this company just two years ago after I graduated from design school.
things have gone pertty well for me.I have two big clients and most of my works is for them.
sometimes I have to work very late at night,if I have a big job to finish quickly.
I always have plenty of work to do and i'am always bussy

rayhaneh
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Daily routine
Let me to tell you a little bit about my schedule while I studied in college
I would usually get up pretty late. Probably about 8 o'clock. The first think I would do is quickly pray then I would go to the bath room wash my face tried a finish waking up. After that I would go to the kitchen and eat breakfast. I would usually eat something small like a bagel maybe a little sandwich or toast sometimes serial. After that I would go back to the bedroom and get dressed. I usually wore jeans and T shirts and tennis shoes. After that I would go back to the bathroom and brush my teeth, comb my hair. Sometimes I would put make up but usually not. Then I would put my books in my hand bag and hand out the door and go to my class. I usually had class from about 9 until 12. Then after that I would eat lunch. Usually I would come back to my room and eat or sometimes I would go to the cafeteria. After that I usually had a lab. I studied chemistry. So, I would go to chemistry lab. For four hours every after noon. When my chemistry lab. Finished about 4:30 then I went to the gym. to exercise. I exercised for about two hours. After that I would go back to my room, take a shower, get cleaned up and head to the cafeteria to eat dinner. After dinner I would return to my room, study for couple of hours probably from 3 to whatever depending on how much work I had. The I would brush my teeth, get in to my pajamas and get ready for bed again


vahid_civil
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
I have my own design company
it,s very small.just me and two asistents.
i Design Brochures, advertis for magazin,?,somthing like that .
it is a very creative job.
I started this company just two years ago after i Graduated of design school
i think design pretty well for me.
i have two big clan in most my work for them.
sometimes i have to work very late at night when i have a big job to finish quickly.
i always have plan work to do and i am always busy


armita2007
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
snow
It is very cold in this continent. There is a lot of snow in the ground. What do you think about the snow? Yes, snow can be cold and wet and miserable. But it can also be changed familiar things, houses and gardens a street in this city


alone_boy
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
i have my own design company. its very small,just me and two assistants.
i designed their short advertisments for magazines.menus and some things like that.
its a very creative job. i started this company just 2 years ago after i graduated from design school.
things of god pertty well for me. i have two big.......,most of my work is for them.
sometimes , i have to work very late at night if i have a big job definish quickly.
i always have plenty work to do and i am always busy
llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll lllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
let me tell a little about my schedule. while i studied in callege. i would usually get up pretty late how early about 8 o clock.
the first thing i will do is quickly pray then i would go to the bathroom,wash my face and ......tried on .....finish,make enough.
after that i would go to the kitchen and eat breakfast. i usually eat something small, like a ......, maybe a little sandwich or toast. sometimes ....... after that i would go back to the bedroom in get dressed. i usually wear jeans and a T-shirt and tennis shoes. after that, i would go back to the bathroom, brush my teeth, comb my hair, sometimes i would put on make-up, by usually ...... then i would put on my books in my backpack and had a in to the class. i usually had class from about9 until 12. then after that i eat lunch. usually i would come back to my room and eat or sometimes i would go to the cafeteria. after that i usually had a lab. i studied chemistry. so i would go to the chemistry lab for 3 hours every afternoon. when my chemistry lab finish at about 4:30, then i went to the gym to exercise. i exercise for about 2 hours. after that i would go back my room, take a shower then cleaned up and head to the cafeteria to eat dinner. after dinner, i would return my room, study for couple of hours....... from three to whatever, depending and how much work i had. then i would brush my teeth, get into my...... and get ready for ..... again

single boy
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
I have my own design company. It’s very small. Just medium, 2 assistants. I design brochures advertise for magazines, menus and things like that. It’s a very creative job. I started this company just 2 years a go after I graduated from design school. Things are gone pretty good for me. I have two ………. And most of my work is for them. Sometimes I have to work very late at night if I have a big job to finish quickly. I always have plenty of work to do and I’m always busy.




main scripts

The first listening
I have my own design company. It's very small-just just me and 2 assistants. I design brochures, advertisements for magazines, menus, and things like that. It's a very creative job. I started this company just just 2 years ago after I graduated from design school. things have gone pretty well for me. I have two big clients and most of my work for them. sometimes I have to work very late at night if I have a big job t finish quickly. I always have plenty of work to do and I am always busy.



snow
It is very cold here in England, and there is lots of snow on the ground. What do you think about snow? Yes, snow can be cold and wet and miserable. But it can also can change familiar things – our houses and gardens, our streets and our cities – into something strange and new and beautiful.

Good poetry is like snow – it too can change familiar things into something strange and new and beautiful. So I looked for a poem about snow to read you, and I have found one by a poet called Brian Patten.



Brian Patten

Brian Patten was born in Liverpool in 1946, which means that he is nearly as old as I am! In the 1960s, he was one of a group of young poets from Liverpool whose poems became very popular and widely read. It is easy to understand why – the poems are direct, simple and often funny. Brian Patten is today one of Britain’s leading poets, and he has written lots of poems both for adults and for children. There are links to some of his poems, and to more information, on the website. I sent him an e-mail, to say that I would like to use this poem in a podcast, and he has kindly agreed that I can. So here it is, Remembering Snow.

I did not sleep last night.
The falling snow was beautiful and white.
I dressed, sneaked down the stairs
And opened wide the door.
I had not seen such snow before.
Our grubby little street had gone.
The world was brand-new, and everywhere
There was a pureness in the air.
I felt such peace.
Watching every flake
I felt more and more awake.
I thought I had learned all there was to know
About the trillion million different kinds
Of swirling frosty flakes of snow.
That was not so.
I did not know how vividly it lit
The world with such a peaceful glow.
Upstairs my mother slept.
I could not drag myself away from that sight
To call her down and have her share
The mute miracle of the snow.
It seemed to fall for me alone.
How beautiful our grubby little street had grown!






and the last one
daily routine
let me tell you a little bit about my schedule while i studied in college. i would usually get up pretty late, probably about eight o'clock. the first thing i would do is quickly pray, then i would go to the bathroom, wash my face and try to finish waking up. after that i would go to the kitchen and eat breakfast. i'd usually eat something small, like a bagel, maybe a little sandwich or toast, sometimes cereal. after that i would go back to the bedroom and get dressed. i usually wore jeans and a T-shirt and tennis shoes. after that, i would go back to the bathroom, brush my teeth, comb my hair, sometimes i would put on make-up, but usually not. then i would put all my books in my backpack and head out of the door and go to class. i usually had class from about nine until twelve. then after that i would eat lunch. usually i would come back to my room and eat or sometimes i would go to the cafeteria. after that i usually had a lab. i studied chemistry. so i would go to the chemistry lab for three hours every afternoon. when my chemistry lab finished at about four thirty, then i went to the gym to exercise. i exercised for about two hours. after that i would go back to my room, take a shower, get cleaned up and head to the cafeteria to eat dinner. after dinner, i would return to my room, study for a couple of hours probably from three to whatever, depending on how much work i had. then i would brush my teeth, get into my pajamas and get ready for bed again.

[singleguy]

Vocabulary


we should review the next unites of Elementary vocab
these are the pages:


برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید

برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید

[rayhaneh]

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]


when our heart feelings defeats our selfishness
a beautiful scene!n

[armita2007]

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]



As you make your bed, so you must lie in it

[rosenegarin13]

As you climb the ladder of success, be sure it's leaning against the right building.

هنگامی که از نردبان موفقیت بالا میروید؛ مطمئن شوید که به ساختمان درستی متکی است.



Man arrives as a novice at each age of his life.

انسان مانند یک مبتدی وارد هر دوره از زندگیش میشود.



A theory can be proved by experiment; but no path leads from experiment to the birth of a theory.

یک نظریه میتواند توسط آزمایش اثبات شود؛ اما هیچ مسیری (مارا) از آزمایش به پیدایش یک نظریه سوق نمی دهد.



A lady's imagination is very rapid; it jumps from admiration to love, from love to matrimony in a moment

تخیل یک خانم بسیار سریع است؛ در یک آن، از تحسین به عشق، از عشق به ازدواج می پرد.



To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but risk must be taken because the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing

دوست داشتن خطر کردن دوست نداشته شدن در برگشت است.امیدوار شدن خطرکردن درد است.سعی کردن خطر کردن شکست است، اما خطر باید پذیرفته شود چرا که بزرگترین زیان درزندگی خطر نکردن است.



What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies
دوست چیست؟ روحی واحد که در دو بدن مستقر است.

[rayhaneh]

As you climb the ladder of success, be sure it's leaning against the right building.
Quoted in P.S. I Love You, compiled by H. Jackson Brown, Jr.


همچنان که از نردبان موفقیت بالا می روی اطمینان حاصل کن که نردبان به دیوار درستی تکیه کرده است

Man arrives as a novice at each age of his life.
Nicolas Chamfort

انسان به هر مرحله از زندگی اش به عنوان یک نو آموز وارد می شود.:10:

A theory can be proved by experiment; but no path leads from experiment to the birth of a theory.
Albert Einstein
یک نظریه می تواند با آزمایش ثابت شود ولی هیچ راهی نیست که یک آزمایش رابه ایجاد یک نظریه راهبری کند/برساند


A lady's imagination is very rapid; it jumps from admiration to love, from love to matrimony in a moment.
Jane Austen
قوهء تخیل زنان خیلی سریع است ،تخیلی که در یک لحظه از تحسین به عشق و از عشق به ازدواج سوق داده میشود/می پرد :31:


To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but risk must be taken because the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing
عاشق شدن یعنی انتظار داشته باشی/ریسک کنی ممکنه در مقابل عشق دریافت نکنی
امید داشتن یعنی انتظار درد/صدمه را داشتن
آزمودن یعنی انتظار شکست را داشتن
اما با این همه باید ریسک کرد چون بزرگترین خطر در زندگی این هست که با خطر مواجه نشوی :20:

What is a friend? A single soul dwelling in two bodies.
Aristotle
دوستی چیست؟ وجود یک روح در دو جسم :46:

[Mahdi/s]

Vocabulary


i think this activity very old ....because past participle sit is sit but in the exercise 3....part E wrote sat

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[majid.khaledi]

I wathch tv while I am sitting on the sofa or in an armchair
I sometimes listen to the radio
If it's too hot,I pot on the fan
I keep my books in a bookcase
I don't keep old letters.I put them in the waste-paper bin
I put a cushion on the sofa to make it more comfortable
put on the fan
the books are in the bookcase
he was listening to the radio
she sat on an armchair
they were sitting on the sofa
put it in the waste-paper bin


we hang trousers,jackets and dresses in the wardrobe
we keep shirts and underwear in the chest of drawers
I sleep with my head on the pillow
I wash my hands in the wash-basin
we sleep between the bed under a warm blanket
I take my dressing-grown off before I go to bed
I put an extra blanket on my bed
I hang my clothes on hangers in the wardrobe
I go on bed at midnight
I put my head on the pillow
i sat on the stool
I keep underwear in the chest of drawers

[singleguy]

key of vocabulary
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
And now
Grammar activity
review



برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید

برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید
New Lesson

present tenses
for the future

برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید
exercise:

برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید

[armita2007]

Exercise :



19.1



How long are you going for?



When are you leaving?



Are you going alone?



Are you travelling with your car?



Where are you staying?



19.2



I am working late.



No, I am going to go to the theater with my friends



Sorry ,I cant. I am meeting Johne.



19.3



I am coming to the museum in the corner of Tehran tomorrow morning.



I am not doning anything for tomorrow evening.



I am arriving to my grandpa s home for next Sunday.



19.4



We are having



Finishes



I am not going . I am staying



Are you doing



We are going. Starts



We are meeting



What time does this train get



I am going .will you come(are you goint to come)



What time does it take



I am not using



Sue is coimg . she is travelling. She arrives



the sentences

we are discussing a well-organized topic on the planet and
stars for next Tuesday.
she is writting a letter for her father.
he is a good student . he is studying at the best.

[Mahdi/s]

برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید



برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید

[majid.khaledi]

برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید

برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید
19.1
2.how long are you going for?
3.when are you leaving?
4.Are you going alone?
5.are you teraveling by car?
6.where are you going to stay?
19.2
2.no,not Tuesday.I'm going to work late.
3.no,I'm going to theatre.
4.I'm afraid not.I'm going to visit John.

19.3
2.I'm going to work tomarrow morning.
3.I'm going out tomarrow evening.
4.I'm going on a holiday next sunday
5.I'm going to shop on weekend.
19.4
3.are going to have
4.is going to finish
5.am not going--am going to stay
6.are going to do
7.are going --start.
8.am leaving
9.are going to meet
10.are this train geting
11.am gonig--are you coming

[singleguy]

Present tense for the future


19.1
2. How long are you going for?
3. When are you leaving?
4. Are going alone?
5. Are you traveling by car?
6. Where are you going to stay?

19.2
(2) No. Not Tuesday. I’m working
(3) No. I’m going to theater
(4) I’m afraid not. I’m meeting Julia


19.3
2. I’m doing some exercise tomorrow morning
3. I’m studying tomorrow evening
4. I’m going to university next Sunday
5. I’m watching movie tonight

19.4
3. We are having a party next Saturday
4. The art exhibition finishes on 3 may
5. I’m not going out this evening. I’m staying at home
6. Are you doing anything tomorrow morning?
7. We are going to a concert tonight
8. I’m leaving now.
9. No. but we are meeting for lunch next week
10. Excuse me. What time does it train get to London?
11. Helen, I’m going to the supermarket. Do you come with me?
12. What time does it end?
13. I’m not using the cat this evening. Can you have it?
14. Sue is coming to see us tomorrow. She is traveling by train and her train arrives at 10:30


Exercise 16:
(2) gave
(3) was passing
(4) heard
(5) banged
(6) invited
(7) was organizing
(8) refused
(9) he was preparing
(10) was passing
(11) was going
(12) met
(13) was studying
(14) were having
(15) were working
(16) served
(17) announced
(18) were persuading
(19) became amazed
(20) were
(21) were earning
(22) decided


Exercise 17
2. I was jugging when it started to rain.
I became wet

3. Every one was watching TV when the light went out.
It came after few hours

4. When we came out of the cinema, the sun was shining
It was so hot

Exercise 18
(2) I’m looking
(3) Do you want to
(4) Are getting married
(5) did you decide
(6) were staying
(7) we’re trying
(8) aren’t looking
(9) don’t have
(10) we want
(11) did
(12) lent
(13) are managing
(14) we choose
(15) gave
(16) was looking


Exercise 19
2- didn’t understand
3- It tastes
4- believed
5- Is not belong
6- did you wear
7- was jogging
8- contained
9- do you see
10- prefer
11- were watching

[top-notch]

hello
a suggestion .
let's decide on a novel and read it . then chapter by chapter talk about it .
who is in ?

[vahid_civil]

[/COLOR]19.1

2. How long are you going for?
3. When are you leaving?
4. Are you going alone?
5. Are you traveling by car?
6. Where are you going to stay
?
===
i am going to work late
No. I’m going to a theater
I'm going to visit John
===
I'm going to work tomarrow morning
I'm going to cinema tomarrow evening
i am going to dr next sunday
i am going to shiraz at the weekend
===
we are going to have a party ...
finishes
i am not going out this evening. I’m staying at home
are u going to do
We are going to a concert tonight
i am leaving now.
are going to meet
are this train geting
i am ging to supermarket.do you come with me?
What time does it end?
I’m not using the car this evening
sue is coming to see us tomorrow. she is traveling by train and her train arrives at 10:30

[rayhaneh]

How long are you going for?
When are you leaving?
Are you going alone?
Are you traveling by car?
Where are you staying?


No not Tuesday. I am working late
No sorry. I am going to theater
I’m afraid not. I am going to meat john.


I am going to school tomorrow morning
I am watching T.V at home
I am going to visit my friend
I am going to dentist on next Saturday


We are having a party next Saturday. Would you like to come?
The art exhibition is finishing on 3 May.
I am not going out this evening. I am staying at home.
Are you doing anything tomorrow? No, I’m free. Why?
We are going to concert tonight. It’s starting at 7:30 pm.
I am leaving now. I‘ve come to say good bye.
No, but we are meeting for lunch next week.
What time does this train get to London?
I am going to supermarket. Are you coming with me?
I’m bored with this program. What time does it end?
I’m not using the car this evening. You can have it.
Sue is coming to see us tomorrow. She is traveling by train. The train arrives at 10:50.
:20:

[singleguy]

Nowadays having not a busy life is pretty weird and most of the successful persons have had a busy life. It might be hard at first but the only thing that encourages us, is having goal in life. having interest in that goals, makes us to overcome against any hardship. I have a really busy life and I like it. I have some dreams and for achieving them, I should try as hard as I can. My biggest problem is wasting time and the passed time that doesn’t come back again. If I don’t waste my time, I believe that I can change my dreams to reality. Not just me, every one can achieve her/his goals and enjoy her/his life but just if they have a main schedule for their life and if they use their time as well as they can.
But some people who are pretty lazy may like an easy life and they don’t like to be busy with life. They don’t have certain goals or dreams or maybe they have, but they are not brave enough to deal with the hardships in life.

[vahid_civil]

Many years ago i thought when i have 20 years years i will have good life . i will adult and i can do everything !
after the university i go to work . all of my wish have gone now !
because i have no time for myself !
i go to work at 7 oclock and i bach to home at 19 oclock !
when i can have a life ?
i think people must do what they like to do . not work they have to do !
life is too short !

[armita2007]

Topic: do you prefer to change your lifestyle



Writer: Armita



Date: 2010/2/18




In the name of God



Nowadays, with the advent of technology and the increase of the resources, most of people live with better facilities and better conditions of training and education against the past. Of course, these blessings are the right of this intelligent creature


Sometimes, pondering the following factors and causes, I have a tendency to be optimistic to the process of life. However, living in the capital and modernizing of urban system, I have faced with many unplanned problems and challenges which they aren’t clearly predicted such as finding a good job related to my major, purchasing dwellings. Perhaps its most significant feature is to be discontented and dissatisfied from my life



First of all, the most important reason for changing my own lifestyle is that I will be happy and feel satisfied from living and being among these civilians. Second, the monotonous procedures of life are influenced on my behavior and attitudes. So, it is completely evidenced that change and alteration of boring lifestyle are fundamental bases and spots in order that I am not fond of feeling hopeless to the future



Some psychologists considered that one of the reasons of committing suicide among adults is that they don’t believe this magical word to be able to create new wishes and desires if they want

[majid.khaledi]

hi every one


most of us have many wishes and like to reach them.but when we start and going to do it,don't have enough trust and try to make them possible.
I have decide to do lots of work because I don't this condition I am in.I want and started strongly to changed it.
I'm going survive my life and change it to that I'd like
first of all I'm going to studying my university lessons.
second I'm going to have regular working in any field....like exercise and things like that
I want change my relations.I want to have dynamic and happy life:31:

[rayhaneh]

Writer: Rayhaneh




Date: 2010/2/18



Topic : People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work
Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer




Work is the symbol of life, activity and bringing changes.
The common point here is that we all do some sort of work but the question arises, why do we work?n



In my point of view 90% of the people are working due to financial reasons but still there are 10% who work for some other reasons.


This group of people includes mostly females who are in second position responsible in supporting a family. Anyhow there is no exact rule for that.


As I have seen around me some people, mostly social ones, work because they want to pass their time more efficiently and joyfully with different people at work; they want to learn from them or they hate being alone at home!n


Another group of them works due their interests and they work because they love the specific job they have, like
photographers or some teachers, artists and etc.


Some other people work both due to their love of working and also for fulfilling their financial needs.
But as whole no matter why and what work we do, we better to have some job!n
Because being free all the time causes many miseries both for the person and society as well.end
___________
:11:

[rosenegarin13]

Magic

Can you fly like a bird by saying certain words? Or change ordinary metals into gold with a potion? Or cause a rainstorm by dancing in a special way? Of course not—that would be magic!

Long ago, before science developed, most people believed in magic. They thought supernatural forces connected different parts of the world. They believed some people, called sorcerers and witches, had magical powers. They could use special chants, spells, or charms to call on supernatural forces and make wonderful—or terrible—things happen.

In those days, magic and religion blended together. For many people, spells and rituals (special ceremonies) were a part of their religious beliefs. They believed that if certain spells or rituals were performed the right way, the gods or spirits would grant their wishes.

The first priests were religious magicians called shamans. Ancient hunting and gathering people looked to shamans to help them survive. They believed shamans had the power to heal the sick. Shamans were thought to communicate with the spiritual world. They led rituals to make hunting expeditions successful, keep crops growing, and prevent disasters. As civilization advanced, such ideas were left behind.

Few people believe in magic anymore. Yet many still enjoy magic shows. Stage magicians are popular entertainers. Magicians appear to do the impossible, such as make objects disappear or float in the air. Audiences know the magic isn’t real, but even so, they enjoy being baffled. How do magicians do it?

Most magic tricks depend on a practice called misdirection. Misdirection happens when a magician fools the audience into looking the wrong way at key moments. Magicians also use sleight of hand. This means they move their hands too quickly for people to see. Finally, magicians use special equipment. That is why people sometimes say magic is done with “smoke and mirrors.”

Even as entertainment, magic has a long history. A magician named Dedi lived and worked in Egypt around 2700 bc. His most famous trick involved cutting the heads off two chickens and an ox. He then appeared to restore the animals’ heads and bring them back to life.

In 1921, a British magician named P. T. Selbit created one of the best-known acts in magic. He shut a woman into a box and sawed the box in half. Afterward, the woman got out of the box, still alive and whole. About the same time in America, Howard Thurston made the Indian Rope Trick famous. First, he seemed to make a rope rise into the air. Then he climbed the rope—and disappeared!

The American magician and escape artist Harry Houdini amazed audiences with his sensational escapes from seemingly impossible situations. In one act, he escaped from a locked metal box underwater while wearing handcuffs!

Magic is fun, but is it profitable? Some famous and successful magicians include Harry Blackstone, Doug Henning, and David Copperfield. Tens of thousands of magicians perform magic acts in the United States today. However, only about 500 of them actually make a living as professionals.



نکاتی در مورد خلاصه کردن متون

"خلاصه" نسخه کوتاهتری از متن مرجع هست."خلاصه" تمام قسمت های مهم متن مرجع را در برمیگیرد با این تفاوت که آنها را در فضای کمتر( یعنی با استفاده از لغات کمتر ) جای می دهد.

قبل از خلاصه کردن هر متنی باید اطمینان حاصل کنین که اون متن رو به طور کامل فهمیدید.

نکاتی که باید رعایت کنید:

1.به اصل مطلب توجه کنید که راجع به چی هست.از نوشتن هر گونه مثال اضافی که در متن مرجع آورده شده، در خلاصه تون خودداری کنید.

2.مطالبی که در فهم موضوع تاثیر چندانی ندارند رو حذف کنید.تصور کنید قراره برای هر لغتی که توی خلاصه تون درج می کنید از جیب خودتون پول بدید!:31: در اون صورت چه کلماتی از متن مرجع (یا هم معنیشون) رو سعی می کنید تو خلاصه تون جای بدید؟:20:

3.اصلاعات اصلی و کلیدی متن رو مجدداً در خلاصه تون بیان کنید.با کلمات و جملات متفاوت(این خیلی مهمه...خیلی از زبان آموزا، همون کلمات خود متن رو دوباره می نویسن...عیناً! این میشه کپی برداری از اصل متن...نه خلاصه کردن)

4.با کلمات خودتون بنویسید، کلمات متن اصلی رو ندزدید!:31: (البته این مترادف گذاشتن همیشه ممکن نیست ولی تا جایی که ممکنه از لغات خودتون استفاده کنید.)

5.بی طرف باشید(خنثی:31: ). یعنی نظر و عقیده شخصی خودتون رو درباره متن، اضافه نکنید به خلاصه ای که می نویسید.:31: هیچ اطلاعات جدیدی (هر چند که درست هم باشه) به خلاصه تون اضافه نکنید.(اول خلاصه هاتون ننویسید This passage is about...|) فکر کنم این دفعه سوم بود که اینو گفتم...:31: خواهشاً ایندفعه رعایت کنید.:20:


مراحل خلاصه نویسی:


1.متن رو هر چند بار که لازمه بخونید تا به طور کامل بفهمیدش.لغات جدید رو در بیارید.

2.زیر نکات اصلی متن خط بکشید و اونا رو رو یه برگه جدا بنویسید.(نت برداری در حاشیه متن هم میتونه بهتون کمک کنه.)

3.اولین نسخه "خلاصه" تون رو بنویسید.


در نهایت اطمینان حاصل کنید که "خلاصه" تون دارای ویژگی های زیر باشه:


جامع: همه نکات اصلی مورد نظر نویسنده متن رو در خودش داشته باشه.

دقیق: با کلمات مترادفی که استفاده کردید نقطه نظر نویسنده متن مرجع رو عوض نکرده باشید(همون اطلاعات به شکل دیگه ای)

بیطرف: عقاید و نظرات شخصی خودتون در "خلاصه" نباشه.

مستقل: "خلاصه" به صورتی باشه که اگه دادینش دست یکی که متن اصلی رو تا به حال نخونده، سر در بیاره از نکات اصلی متن.

[Marichka]

Nowadays not to have a busy life is pretty weird and most of the successful persons have had a busy life. It might be hard at first but the only thing that encourages us, is to have a goal in life. To be interested in (enthusiast about) that goals, makes us to overcome against any hardship. I have a really busy life and I like it. I have some dreams and for achieving them, I should try as hard as I can. My biggest problem is wasting time and the passed time that won’t come back again. If I don’t waste my time, I believe that I can transform my dreams to reality. Not just me, every one can achieve their goals and enjoy their life but only on the condition that they have a main schedule for their life and if they spend their time as well as they can.
But some people who are pretty lazy may like an easy life and they don’t like to be busy with life. They don’t have certain goals or dreams or maybe they have, but they are not brave enough to deal with the hardships in life.




Red = must be omitted
Green = the correct form of phrase

add. points: good at introducing the idea and explaining the supportive points of view about that idea.
the correct tense of verbs should be more practiced!

4/5

[Marichka]

Many years ago i used to think when i reach to the age of 20 i will have a good life . i will be an adult and i can do everything !
after the university i go to work . all of my dreams are gone now !
because i have no time for myself !
i go to work at 7 oclock and i return home at 19 oclock !
when i can have a life ?
i think people must do what they like to do . not work they have to do !
life is too short !

The whole text is more like a piece of opinion not a full essay. The conclusion and describing reasons are good.

3.5/5

[Marichka]

Topic: do you prefer to change your lifestyle



Writer: Armita



Date: 2010/2/18




In the name of God



Nowadays, with the advent of technology and the increase of the resources, most of people live with better facilities and better conditions of training and education on the contrary to the past. Of course, these blessings are the right of this intelligent creature


Sometimes, pondering the following factors and causes, I have a tendency to be optimistic to the process of life. However, living in the capital and modernizing of urban system, I have faced with many unplanned problems and challenges which they aren’t clearly predicted such as finding a good job related to my major, purchasing dwellings. Perhaps its most significant feature is to be discontented and dissatisfied from my life



First of all, the most important reason for changing my own lifestyle is that I will be happy and feel satisfied by living and being among these civilians. Second, the monotonous procedures of life are making influences on my behavior and attitudes. So, it is completely evident that changing and alteration of the boring lifestyle are fundamental bases and spots. For I am not really fond of feeling hopeless in the future



Some psychologists considered that one of the reasons of committing suicide among adults is that they don’t believe this magical word to be able to create new wishes and desires if they want



Great usage of vocabulary. introducing the problem and then supporting the points of view with more examples are 2 strength points.
The part of speech for each vocab should be more deliberated on

4.5/5

[Marichka]

hi every one


most of us have many wishes and like to achieve them.but when we start and going to do it,don't have enough trust and try to make them possible.
I have decided to do lots of work because I don't like this condition I am in.I wanted and started strongly to changed it.
I'm going to rescue my life and change it into the thing I really like.
first of all I'm going to studying my university lessons.
second I'm going to have regular working in any field....like exercise and things like that
I want to change my relations.I want to have a dynamic and happy life:31:




The writing started with a good prescript but was cut into your own decisions about life.
you have to be more careful about verb tenses.

3.5/5

[Marichka]

Writer: Rayhaneh




Date: 2010/2/18



Topic : People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work
Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer




Work is the symbol of life, activity and bringing changes.
The common point here is that we all do some sort of work but the question arises, why do we work?n



In my point of view 90% of the people are working due to financial reasons but still there are 10% who work for some other reasons.


This group of people includes mostly females who are in second position responsible in supporting a family. Anyhow there is no exact rule for that.


As I have seen around me some people, mostly social ones, work because they want to pass their time more efficiently and joyfully with different people at work; they want to learn from them or they hate being alone at home!n


Another group of them works due their interests and they work because they love the specific job they have, like
photographers or some teachers, artists and etc.


Some other people work both due to their love of working and also for fulfilling their financial needs.
But as whole no matter why and what work we do, we better to have some job!n
Because being free all the time causes many miseries both for the person and society as well.end
___________
:11:




Perfect usage of conjunctions and verbs.
The writing starts efficiently by describing what it's going to discuss. and then as many supporting ideas as possible are provided and conclusion is also perfect.

5/5

[baran_1000]

Nowadays having not a busy life is pretty weird and most of the successful persons have had a busy life. It might be hard at first but the only thing that encourages us, is having goal in life. having / to have interest in that goals, makes us to overcome against any hardship. I have a really busy life and I like it. I have some dreams and for achieving them, I should try as hard as I can. My biggest problem is wasting time and the passed time that doesn’t come back again. If I don’t waste my time, I believe that I can change my dreams to reality. Not just me, every one can achieve her/his goals and enjoy her/his life but just if they have a main schedule for their life and if they use their time as well as they can.
But some people who are pretty lazy may like an easy life and they don’t like to be busy with life. They don’t have certain goals or dreams or maybe they have, but they are not brave enough to deal with the hardships in life.




what a nice job! many thanks dear Marichka..

would you please do me a favour and explain why "to have" is better than "having" in the above sentence?

in fact, I usually have problem choosing the best form in such sentences.

Thanks in advance

[armita2007]

Summary



Believing a magical power has had a long history, before developing the human science, even before 2700 bc. For some people s views, the religion was intermingled with the magic powers in the past. For example, a person who had done it in the first one as priest was Shamans.



Most magical works are depended on the practice called misdirection and magicians usually do the impossible works and it is usually considered as entertainers such as Harry Blackstone, Doug Henning, and David Copperfield. They are completely popular
internationally
in this case,there is come in one wonderful question: is it profitable for the public?

---------- Post added at 12:20 AM ---------- Previous post was at 12:19 AM --------

[brave_ie]

My Summary





Can you do something special that seems impossible? No, but before science being developed many people believed that some people could use supernatural forces to do magic.

This belief also effected on their way of performing religious ceremony. They also believed in some priests that can heal them by magic.

As the civilization advanced, these beliefs have become weak. Now, the people know that magic isn’t real, but even so, they enjoy magicians who trick them in many ways while they’re popular.

Many magicians or magic are popular from past or now. Despite of being popular it seems that magic doesn’t pay good; at least for most of them.

[Marichka]

what a nice job! many thanks dear Marichka..

would you please do me a favour and explain why "to have" is better than "having" in the above sentence?

in fact, I usually have problem choosing the best form in such sentences.

Thanks in advance

Hey buddy

You're most welcome and glad it helped. :)

About your question I provide you with a key that applies to any similar structure.

There is a rule in English Grammar that says:in a 2-part-sentence if the first part (clause sentence) uses a verb then the second part (phrase sentence) should use the infinitive form of the verb which means to+the verb root.

in the sentence you mentioned for instance:

the only thing that encourages us, is to have interest in that goals

the clause sentence is made with a verb (encourage), so the phrase sentence must be made with an infinitive not a gerund.

and besides;

Have is one of those verbs that when used to mean "to own something" is never combined with -ing. Because the gerund form of have (having) means "eating" and not to own

Let me know if there were any further questions
yours
Marichka :10:

[brave_ie]

I'm a new guy in this topic
shouldn't we do grammar activity?

[rayhaneh]

summery


Long ago people had strong believe in magic and that specific persons had connection with spiritual world and in this way they get their works done the ones which a human being was not able to do.
There always be some one who earned money from closed minded people for performing so called magical acts to help them in solving their hard tasks in life. A few religions also supported these beliefs but now after passing of many sorcerers and witches we can find only few people believing in those things though many people are still interested to enjoy and become amazed by these types of shows which are more closer to
misdirection trick than to reality





New words


potion a medicinal or magical or poisonous beverage
witches a female sorcerer or magician
sorcerers magician, enchanter, wizard, one who practices sorcery
rituals any customary observance or practice
shamans tribal priest or priestess who uses supernatural forces
expeditions journey embarked upon for a particular purpose
Baffled confused, bewildered, amazed
sleight of hand jugglery, trick
smoke and mirrors false impressions, deceit, trickery
handcuffs a pair of lockable linked metal rings for securing a prisoner's wrists,shackles


:11:

[radium]

I'm gonna join u! I appriciate your activity

[singleguy]

this group is not active anymore
you, yourself can find some members and continue if you want

[radium]

I see...
I think we should do something,I can't do it without your help
It could be a good place to practice more and help each other to improve our English
but it seems no one is gonna attend me:41:

[sina1415]

hi guys

i'd like to join you .. we can continue this topic again......i think we need someone who has some experience in this topic ...is there anyone ?we need some help to start again

[singleguy]

most of the guys are busy now, like me
I don't have enough time to study English anymore but in the summer, I'll search for some new members to have a fresh start again
but if you want, you can use this topic at the moment, but I can't handle it

[sina1415]

most of the guys are busy now, like my
I don't have enough time to study English anymore but in the summer, I'll search for some new members to have a fresh start again
but if you want, you can use this topic at the moment, but I can't handle it


i understand you and i think most of the guys here are student and it's more important to study your lesson first .it's better to continue this topic without any stress for exams .so , we can wait until summer ... then we hope you'll start again with new members . because i think you have enough experience here.thanks dear.

[radium]

great
somehow I agree with u there
lets wait till summer
but I try to post some interesting expressions and so on from time to time

[extreme2006gh]

I d like to participate in this group again .
plz inform me when you want to start again in summer
thank you so much.

[rosenegarin13]

برای آگاهی از قوانین جدید به گروه اجتماعی همین تاپیک مراجعه کنید:5:
  برای انجام فعالیت های مربوط به درس اول تا دوشنبه هفته آینده زمان دارید:5:

دانلود درس اول با حجم 1,943 KB 

برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید
پسورد فایل: به گروه اجتماعی مراجعه کنید :5:


Happy Studying
:11:

[rosenegarin13]

Reading Keys

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

1. behavior
2. top
3. doesn't
4. job
5. know
6. other
7. enough
8. believe
9. trust
10. say

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Your Results


Atefeh

10/10

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Amir Ali
10/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Brain
5/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Legend of zelda
8/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Masoud
8/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Mohammad
9/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Reyhane
10/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Sina
10/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[rosenegarin13]

Transcription




Woman: So, what's your usual day like? You always seem so busy.

Man: Well, I usually get up around 5:00 a.m. and work on the computer until 6:00 a.m.

Woman: Why do you get up so early?

Man: Well, I have to leave home at twenty to seven (6:40 a.m.) so I can catch a bus at 7:00 o'clock . It takes me about twenty minutes to walk to the bus stop from my house.

Woman: And what time do you get to work?

Man: Uh, my bus takes about an hour to get there, but it stops right in front of my office.

Woman: That's nice. And what time do you get off work?

Man: Uh, around 5:00 o'clock. Then, we eat dinner around 6:30, and my wife and I read and play with the kids until 8:00 or so.

Woman: So, when do you work on your website? You said one time that you create it at home?

Man: Well, my wife and I often watch TV or talk until 10:00 o'clock. She then often reads while I work on my site, and I sometimes stay up until the early hours of the morning, but I try to finish everything by one or two.

Woman: And then you get up at 5:00 a.m.?

Man: Well, yeah, but it's important to live a balanced life. I enjoy what I do, but you have to set aside time for the family and yourself.

Woman: I agree.

Man: But I think my wife has the toughest job. She spends her whole day taking care of our family . . . taking the kids to school, working in the garden, buying groceries, taking the kids to piano lessons . . . [Wow!] It's a full-time job, but she enjoys what she does.

Woman: Well, it sounds like you're a busy, but lucky man.

Man: I think so too



[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Key Vocabulary







catch (verb): to get on
- I have to catch a bus in front of the bus station.

get off work (verb): finish work
- She seldom gets off work before 6:00 p.m.

dinner (noun): sometimes supper
- We seldom eat dinner after 8:00 p.m.

stay up (verb): not go to bed
- I almost never stay up past midnight.

set aside (verb): reserve, allow, or give a certain amount to
- You have to set aside enough time to study for your classes.

toughest (adjective): most difficult, hardest
- The toughest part about being a parent is setting aside time for both work, family, and self.

take care of (verb): watch, look after
- You should take care of yourself so you don't get sick.

groceries (noun): food and other items at a supermarket
- Mom is going to pick up some groceries from the store for dinner







[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]





Q's Keys


1. A

2. B

3. C

4. A

5. B

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]



Your Results


Atefe
7/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Amir Ali
9/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Brain
8/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

legend of zelda
5/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Masoud
8/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Mohammad
5/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Reyhane
9/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Sina
5/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]


[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[rosenegarin13]

Grammar Keys






Exercise 20.1


2-what are you going to wear tonight?
3-where are you going to put it?
4-who are you going to invite?
 
Exercise 20.2
2- I know. I am going to take it back.
3-that’s right but I am not going to accept it*.
4-no, I am going to phone her tonight.
5-yes,its disgusting. I am going to complain.
 
Exercise 20.3
2-he is going to be late*.
3-the boat is going to sink*.
4-they are going to run out of petrol.
 
Exercise 20.4
2- I was going to buy.
3-Matine and I were going to play.
4-I was going to phone Jane.
5- He was going to give up his job.
6- We were going to have a party.



* Note that to make a sentece negative (when we use "going to"), you must insert not after the verb To be(am. is, are).

* "late" is an adjective. You must insert "be" before it.

* This sentence is in active voice. So you should use "sink" not "get sunk". L




[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]


Your Results


Atefe
0/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Amir Ali
10/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Brain
9/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

legend of zelda
0/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Masoud
10/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Mohammad
9/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Reyhane
9/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Sina
9/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]



[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[rosenegarin13]

Vocabulary Keys




Suitable word for the picture: vacant

 

Exercise.1

Place one of the new words in the blanks

1-data

2-tact

3-vacant

4-oath

5-jealous

6-gallant

7-hardship

8-abandon

9-qualify

10-keen

11-unaccustomed

12- Bachelor

  

Exercise.2

Which words means?

1-oath

2-keen

3-abandon

4-hardship

5-qualify

6-jealous

7-gallant

8-bachelor

9-data

10-tact

11-vacant

12-unaccustomed



[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]



Your Results


Atefe
0/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Amir Ali
8/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Brain
10/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

legend of zelda
0/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Masoud
10/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Mohammad
9/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Reyhane
10/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Sina
10/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]



[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]




















 

[rosenegarin13]

Your Writings





Topic:The most fun I’ve had recently

Birthday party carried on rarely. But it is a good reason to be happy and 1.enjoyable event for all family members.L  
Last time my mom gave the idea to celebrate my little brother’s birthday and my little sister at same time because both days are near to each other. She
invited the guests few days before.L
We went to shopping center to buy gifts for them and other necessary items for the party one day before. I wrapped the gifts. Then we decorated the drawing room with colorful paper’s flower and different2.shape of balloons. My dad and I went to confectionary to order 3.the cake in the morning. It was on Thursday afternoon. Guests 4.have come  one after another at 5 pm and we 5.welcome 6.them with warmth. Then we 6.receive them with orange juice. Afterward my dad brought the cake and my mom put it on the table in front of the guests. It was square in shape 7.that a cartoon character 8.has drawn on it with colorful cream. I put the candles on the cake. Number six for my sister and number 3 for my brother. When they were going to 9.blew out my sister 10.turn on the camera to catch to picture of them at this special moment.L 

1. An enjoyable event
2. Kinds of
3. A cake
4. Came
5. Welcomed
6. ____ ("welcome" as a verb means: accept warmly. So you don't need to use that phrase.)L
7. And
8. Has been drawn (You must use passive.)L
9. Blow out (After "going to" you should use simple form of the verb.) L
10. Turned on
Tip: Be careful about tenses of your sentences.
Your score: 6/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]



[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]




                     ................

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Your score: 0/10



[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]



Topic: My Worst Vacation

My worst travel occurred in the Summer of 2006.Our family decided to go on a journey with my all aunts and uncles.We first wanted to go to Mashhad and then to north.We started the trip very well and with laugh but problems were going to start when we arrived to Mashhad , 1.one of my aunt had rented a house there and we 2. supposed to go there together but when we 3.see the house , it was small , just three families could stay there , after a small discussion my family and 4.one of my uncle went to a hotel. We all were tired and didn't 5.except it and this made all of us more tired.Tomorrow we went to the city and personally I didn't like Mashhad much so I was a little upset all the day.

Some days passed like that and then we decided to go to north.We 6.were in way whole of the day and 7.stop somewhere to get some 8.new fresh.When we arrived to Golestan , it was night and we didn't know where to stay that night , we were looking for some villas there for 2 hours and everyone was going to get angry , my father and my other uncles were discussing , everyone told something and no one couldn't decide and again we started to find a place to sleep , city was too 9.busy , with heavy traffic.At last we found somewhere to spend that damn night.Tomorrow we started to move to next city, 10.in way my uncle had car accident but nothing special happened.We arrived to next city and the last problem was going to happen again11. and this time a serious discussion occurred between my aunt's husband and my uncle, my father had gone to find a villa.After an hour finally we found a villa , this time , it was turn for women discussing. I was getting crazy , I 12.insist on to come back as soon as possible , that night passed very 13.bad.Tomorrow we all came back home with upset faces. L

I always hated to go to travel with many people, and I knew such things 14.will happen but with all problems we had some good moments too which I didn't 15.tell.I can never forget this journey. 

1.One of my aunts
2. Were
3. Saw
4. One of my aunts
5. Accept
6. spent the whole day on the road
7. Stopped
8. Rest
9. Crowded
10. On the way
11.. This time
12. Insisted on coming back
13. Badly
14. Will
15. Mention

Tip: Be careful about tenses.
Your score: 4/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]


[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]



Topic: How to make new friends? 

well it's not a simple question. Making friends is one of the1. complicated topics at present because 2.nowaday the humans can't find a link between each other easily, just because of the different behaviors 3.between them! But what i said is not4. about 5.every people in the world.
The first thing 6.in findingfriend IMO is finding a link between yourself and the one who wanna make her/him your friend. For example this link can be a favorite movie, 7.interesting in 7. videogamesor a music genre.
you can start a friendship 8.with speaking about weather. Actualy i think 9.start a friendship is easy but holding it and stading by it is 10.more difficult coz a friend must try11. be a good friend.

1. Most
2. Nowadays
3. _____
4. True
5. All
6. You should do to find a friend
7. A videogame
8. By
9. Starting
10. _____
11. To
Tips: Write more than two paragraphs. Be careful about punctuation.
Your Score: 4/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]


[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]



Topic: My Worst Vacation


It all happened 5 years ago in the middle of summer.

At that time I had1. jackass friend. Although he was 2. foolish person  but I enjoyed his company and we had a 3.greet time together.

We planned  a little trip together from Mashhad to Esfehan . We arranged that I 4.took care of tent & sleeping bag for camping & motorcycle for 5.ride and he 6.took care of money & food.

The first day was ok. The first problem 7.was occurred when I found out my friend forgot to buy a  conserve for dinner .of course  I could tolerate  it.

One night was not a big deal.

Second day was awesome the tire was flat and in the garage I realized he had only 10000 toman. I 8.can't stand it any more but he 9.calmed down me and promised he can solve our problem.

I don't want you get bored. We carried on our trip we and 10.pretend we got mugged and lost our money. It was so 11.embarrassed  that I don't want to mention it. We 12.snitch here and there and finally called our family to send 13.a money  for us. By the way, we fell out over money last year.
 

1. A
2. A
3. Great
4. Take
5. Riding
6. Takes
7. Ocuured
8. Couldn't
9. Calmed me down
10. Pretended
11. Embarassing
12. Snitched
13. _____
Tip: Be careful about tenses.
Your Score: 6/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]


[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]





Topic: An unforgettable dream

It's hard to speak about only one unforgettable dream because I think everybody has several special dreams in his life but some of them are more 1.highlight than the others !and I want to explain one of my most special dreams I've ever had !
It was my high school time and 2.I also in final examination time ( khordad ) . and I had 3.Amar exam.
The whole day I didn't study at all and our book I think 4.had about 150 pages .it got 5.night and still I was non-studied ! at last my sister forced me to study a little and I 6.study about 50 pages of that hellish book suddenly I fell asleep.
Now I exactly remember that when I was asleep I had a dream , and in that dream the true story occurred ! I mean in my dream I watched myself that I didn't study anything and fell asleep !!!
It was one of the most unforgettable and also bitter dreams 7.I ever had.

1. Highlighted
2. It was also final examinations time/ I also had final examination.
3. Statistics
4. Was
5. Dark
6. Studied
7. I've ever had
Tips: look up the words you don't know in English. Be careful about tenses and word choice.
Your Score: 5/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]


[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]






Topic: My Worst Vacation


It happened to me long ago in a summer vacation when I was about 8 years old. I remember I was a naughty child and that cost me a breakage in my arm bone.
I was playing with my coeval cousins along the stairs of our house which was a 1.building with two floors. While playing I suggested the other kids to compete with each other to see who can better jump from the corner of the bar along the stairs! I did so but unfortunately I lost my control after the jump and fell down on the next step of stair in front of me and then on the next and the nest and  so on till forth or fifth one which was the last stair!
 
Thank god I just hurt my arm. My parent got me to the hospital. I must not forget to mention that I got to hospital quickly but after visiting a person in our2.area who had been claiming himself a professionalin treating joint displacements and I still remember how his quick act on my joint caused me bitter pain and how I screamed loudly there. That was the time when my parents found out that that was not a simple joint displacement but a bone breakage. 
Anyhow, I was treated by astrologists in hospital and had bandage over my arm for about 40 days till I was recovered completely. And a few days later I had to return to school after having my worst summer vacation.



1. duplex one
2. neighborhood
Tips: A fantabulous writing. I did enjoy reading it. By the way, those are not your mistakes, a few suggestions.
Your Score: 10/10

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]


Topic: My First School Memories



One Day , When I Was 7 Years Old, In the yard of our School , My Classmates And I Were Playing Football. Suddenly one of them hit me on my Leg and I fell down on my back. He Stood and Looked down at me for a Second and Then he ran away. After That 1.Happening I decided to get revenge.
I was waiting for a good opportunity, until, after a few days I saw him alone in a Street. I 2.was hiding behind a tree and picked up 3.a Piece of Stone and threw it 4.to him. I Broke his head .All Over his head was full of Blood. I was afraid because I Thought He gave up the ghost, therefore I quickly ran away. 
Next Day in the School I Saw him with a Bandage on his head. I Thought That I'm a Strong Man and nobody can hurt me anymore .a few Years ago I told him the story and he Forgave Me.
It was one of my best (or maybe worst) memories during the age of my elementary school. I can never forget it.


1. Accident
2. hid
3. Stone ( a piece of stone is exactly translated from Persian to English)
4. At
Tips: That was a nice one. You could even write more.
Your Score: 9/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[rosenegarin13]

Final Scores



Atefe
23/50
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Amir Ali
37/50
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Brain
36/50
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Legend of zelda
17/50
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Masoud
42/50
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Mohammad
37/50
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Reyhane
48/50
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Sina
43/50
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[rosenegarin13]

برای دانلود درس دوم به لینک زیر مراجعه کنید:


برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید


پسورد: rosenegarin13


برای انجام فعالیت های این دوره تا دوشنبه 18 مرداد فرصت دارید. [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]


توجه1: تمام پاسخ ها در word 2003 نوشته شده باشند( با فرمت .doc لطفاً)
توجه2: vahid_civil, dimah2005, dourtarin در صورت انجام ندادن فعالیت های این دوره از گروه اخراج خواهند شد.



Happy studying

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[rosenegarin13]

Reading Keys


1. frightening
2. real
3. dangers
4. necessary
5. dark
6. see
7. yourself
8. visible
9. adult
10. inspect



[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]



[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]


Your Results


Sina
10/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Masoud
10/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Brain
10/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Atefeh
8/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

dimah2005
7/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Amir Ali
9/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Reyhane
10/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[rosenegarin13]

Transcription





Police Officer: Hello. 24th Precinct. Officer Jones speaking.

Man: Help. Yeah, uh, it was wild, I mean really bizarre.

Police Officer: Calm down sir! Now, what do you want to report?

Man: Well, I'd like to report a UFO sighting.

Police Officer: A what?

Man: What do you mean "what?" An unidentified flying object!

Police Officer: Wait, tell me exactly what you saw.

Man: Well, I was driving home from a party about three hours ago, so it was about 2:00 AM, when I saw this bright light overhead.

Police Officer: Okay. And then what happened?

Man: Oh, man. Well, it was out of this world. I stopped to watch the light when it disappeared behind a hill about a kilometer ahead of me.

Police Officer: Alright. Then what?

Man: Well, I got back in my car and I started driving toward where the UFO landed.

Police Officer: Now, how do you know it was a UFO? Perhaps you only saw the lights of an airplane [No], or the headlights of an approaching car [No]. Things like that happen, you know.

Man: Well if it was that, how do you explain "the BEAST"?

Police Officer: What do you mean, "the BEAST"?

Man: Okay. I kept driving for about five minutes when all of a sudden, this giant, hairy creature jumped out in front of my car.

Police Officer: Oh, yeah.Then what?

Man: Well, then, the beast picked up the front of my car and said, "Get out of the car. I'm taking you to my master!" Something like that.

Police Officer: Wow? A hairy alien who can speak English! Come on!

Man: I'm not making this up, if that's what you're suggesting. Then, when I didn't get out of the car, the beast opened the car door, carried me on his shoulders to this round-shaped flying saucer, and well, that's when I woke up along side the road. The beast must have knocked me out and left me there.

Police Officer: Well, that's the best story I've heard all night, sir. Now, have you been taking any medication, drugs, or alcohol in the last 24 hours? You mentioned you went to a party.

Man: What? Well, I did have a few beers, but I'm telling the truth.

Police Officer: Okay, okay. We have a great therapist that deals with THESE kinds of cases.

Man: I'm not crazy.

Police Officer: Well, we'll look into your story. Thank you.L




[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]



Key Vocabulary




Precinct: the office of a police department in a particular area
- Let's go down to the police precinct and report the burglary.

Bizarre: strange or unusual
- That's the most bizarre story I've ever heard.

Unidentified: unknown or impossible to determine the origin
- The police were able to capture the criminal through an unidentified source.

Out of this world: unbelievable, incredible
- You have to see his enormous house. It's out of this world.

Approaching: coming closer
- Citizens have been urged to flee the area because of the approaching hurricane.L




[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]



Q's Keys


1.A


2.C


3.C


4.C


5.B


[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Your Results


Sina
10/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Masoud
9/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Brain
7/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Atefeh
6/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

dimah2005
5/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Amir Ali
10/10

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Reyhane
9/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]



[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[rosenegarin13]

Grammar Keys




Exercise 21.1
2. I'll switch/I'll turn/I'll put
3. I'll go
4. I'll do
5. I'll show/I'll teach
6. I'll have
7. I'll send
8. I'll give/I'll bring
9. I'll stay/ I'll wait

Exercise 21.2
2. I'll go to bed
3. I think I'll walk
4. I'll play tennis (today).
5. I don't think I'll go swimming.

Exercise 21.3
1. I'll meet
2. I'll lend
3. I'm having
4. I won't forget
5. does your train leave
6. won't tell
7. are you doing
8. will you come

Exercise 21.4
2. shall I buy it?
3. what shall I give/buy/get Helen (for her birthday) ?
4. where shall we go (on holiday)?
5. shall we go bye car or (shall we) walk?/...or (shall we go) on foot?
6. what time shall I phone (you)?L




[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]


Your Results

sina
9/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Masoud
9/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Brain
7/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Atefeh
7/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

dimah2005
7/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Amir Ali
10/10

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Reyhane
10/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[rosenegarin13]

Vocabulary Keys




Suitable word for the picture: wager


Exercise.1

1. Dismal
2. Wager
3. Peril
4. Recline
5. Shriek
6. Sinister
7. Conceal
8. Inhabit
9. Frigid
10. Numb
11. Corpse
12. Tempt



[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Your Results

sina
8/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Masoud
10/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Brain
6/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Atefeh
5/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
dimah2005
9/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Amir Ali
9/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Reyhane
10/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[rosenegarin13]

Your Writings






Topic: If I could be someone else, I would be...

That is actually hard to answer; I don't want to be anyone else. I like being me. But if I absolutely had to be someone else, I would want to be a new person. I would like to be a mother to experience their feelings about everything, especially about their children.
 A mother is the truest and the best friend that we can have. When you are a mother, you have to share your attention and your love among your children .I really like to know how she can do it so 1.good, but I'm sure It's too difficult for men to understand it .To me, a mother is not just the one who brings us into this world, she's the one who cares for us, feeds us and loves us like 2.no other and  3.no matter what. So I think all of us have to 4. proud of our 5.mother. 
I've always wanted to experience this personality but I know that I can't because I'm not a 6.mother.
 
1. You must use “well”. You need an adverb here not an adjective.
2. “No one else”
3. No matter what happens
4. Don’t forget to use “be” after “have to” and before an adjective.
5. Mothers because you used “our”
6. You can never be a mother Sina! Use “woman” instead!
Your Score: 8/10

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] 


[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]







Topic: Book characters I'd like to meet


What a cliché question.

When I think about this question a lot of names cross my mind

I'd like to meet Sherlock Holmes face to face because he is a remarkable detective character & always 1.beat  his opponents with notice to small details & uses them to guess what has happened.

I love his phrase   ‘Elementary, my dear Watson’   

I'd like to meet Judy abbot the main character of  My daddy long legs because she was a cheerful & intelligent & quick study girl although she was orphan but finally she achieved a fantastic goal which is 2.graduate from university and 3.married  to her daddy . Although she wasn’t beautiful 4.but she obtained his heart with passion  & kindness.

But most of all I'd like to meet Sara Crewe the character of little princess's book.

I love her etiquette & attitude .At first every one in her boarding school thought she is a spoiled child

And every one was her friend because of her fortune but after death of her father her fair weather friends abandoned her & she had to live in attic and so on, and so forth

The reason I'd love to meet her is that she was my hero in my childhood and I thought I can deal with every one 5.with being nice and useful and generous of course it didn't work out and I found out I have to eat or be eaten. All I want to tell her is a simple quote 

In a real world kindness is nothing. 




1. Beats
2, graduating
3. getting married
4. You’d better omit “but”
5. Use “by” instead of “with”
6. Be careful about punctuations.


Your Score: 9/10

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]


[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]





Topic: a visit to relatives home


A couple of years 1.before we went to my uncle’s house to visit them after three years that we left them.
 It was a memorable journey for our family, because we visited my grand mom and our family friends too. In addition so may changes 2. occurred during 3.these years; children became taller, young persons got married, some of 4.family had new 5.baby, 6.as fact of this life some 6.family lost their members.
We 7.have a lot of fun during one month being with them. We enjoyed 8.in going for  walking with my uncle and my sweet nieces in the early morning, going to parks 9.in the weekends, having 10.gathering in our relatives’ house and visiting historical places and beautiful natural 11.sight such as 12.water falling.



1. Ago
2. Had
3. Those
4. Families
5. Babies
6. And as a fact of this life
7. Had
8. ___
9. At the weekends
10. Gatherings
11. Sights
12. Waterfalls

Your Score: 6/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]



[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]



Topic: The worst food I've ever ate



There is more than one 1.eatenfood that I can call 2.it "the worst food".
I don't like some foods and they're not few but sometimes we're forced to 3.do sth and I might eat them in some situations but about eggplants I prefer to die. There is some "worst food"s here.
One of the worst 4.food 5.I ever ate and also I keep on eating that is my university restaurant foods. These foods belong to that group that I described earlier; sometimes I have to eat them.
My "worst food " was 6.a sabzi polo (cooked rice blended with some vegetables, this food is served with ku-ku or fish) but here's the point: my favorite food is sabzi polo too. One time I've been invited over for a lunch; they've cooked me sabzi polo but in an awful way I don't know which way but I didn't like it. The main thing was its rice it was Indian (Yuck) I hate this kind of rice, the fish was smelly but I love fish and I ate it the way that they thought that I've never ate something like this. Of course they were right and of course this food belongs to 7.that earlier group that I described.


1.___
2.___
3. You’d better say eat something
4. Foods
5. I've ever
6.___
7. The


Your Score: 7/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]


[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]




Topic: My first friend


Friendship adds joy and beauty to our lives. We learn many things from our friends; we share our happiness and sorrow with them and get their 0.help and suggestion during ups and downs of life. A person is really lucky if he has a true friend.
 
My first friend as I remember right now was Habibe Haidarzadeh. I had been appreciating her attitude a lot at that time. She was1. kind, quite and clever student at school and a hard working and good girl for her family. I think I was the one who offered the friendship request and she willingly accepted it. We were happy and active friends and the things were going as I wished until they moved from their old house and she changed her school 2.also. We 3.still remained best friends after that but 4.again as 5.  result of our 6.elder’s decision I lost my first friendship 7.relation. 
 
Since then I have been friends with many people and I do remember all my good friends and the happy moments I 8.passed with them but due to continuous changes I faced in my life until now usually the 9.relation between me and my friends has been for a short span of time except my present friend who is 10. saying to me that I am her best friend forever!
 
At the end I wish you all have a group of good friends in every stage of your life and I hope my all friends be successful and happy.


0. Better to say helps and suggestions
1. Don’t forget to use A/An
2. Instead of “also”, you should use “too” at the end of your sentence.
3. Still is not necessary here to convey the meaning.
4.  You’d better omit “again” too.
5.1
6. “Previous” is more appropriate here.
7.___
8. Spent
9. Relations
10.. If you “tell” instead of “say to”, not only you shorten your sentence, but also you make it more accurate.


Your Score: 7/10
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]



[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]



پ.ن. از کورش عزیز که در تصحیح رایتینگ ها کمکم کرد تشکر می کنم   [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[rosenegarin13]

Final Scores


Sina
45/50

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Masoud
47/50

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Brain
30/50

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]  
Atefeh
32/50

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
dimah2005
28/50

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Amir Ali
45/50

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Reyhane
46/50

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[rosenegarin13]

برای دانلود درس سوم به لینک زیر مراجعه کنید:11::


برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنیدپسورد: rosenegarin13
برای انجام فعالیت های این دوره تا دوشنبه  1 شهریور فرصت دارید.[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

توجه1: تمام پاسخ ها در word 2003 نوشته شده باشند( با فرمت .doc لطفاً) و همه پاسخ ها در یک فایل doc.
توجه2:dimah2005,legend-of-zelda,محمد88 در صورت انجام ندادن فعالیت های این دوره از گروه اخراج خواهند شد.


Happy studying
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[ranjbar2009]

برای دانلود درس سوم به لینک زیر مراجعه کنید:11::


برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنیدپسورد: rosenegarin13
برای انجام فعالیت های این دوره تا دوشنبه 1 شهریور فرصت دارید.[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

توجه1: تمام پاسخ ها در word 2003 نوشته شده باشند( با فرمت .doc لطفاً) و همه پاسخ ها در یک فایل doc.
توجه2:dimah2005,legend-of-zelda,محمد88 در صورت انجام ندادن فعالیت های این دوره از گروه اخراج خواهند شد.


Happy studying
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
سلام دوست عزیز
اگه ممکنه من هم می خوام وارد گروهتون بشم.
فقط نمی دونم اینجا چه خبره و شما چکار می کنین. اگه میشه برام توضیح بدین وشرایط رو برام بگین.

[rosenegarin13]

برای دانلود درس چهارم به لینک زیر مراجعه کنید:11::

برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید
پسورد: rosenegarin13
برای انجام فعالیت های این دوره تا دوشنبه 15شهریور فرصت دارید.[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

توجه1: تمام پاسخ ها در یک فایل doc. یا docx. نوشته شده باشند.
توجه2: dimah2005,Atefeh1,Brain,masoudrajae,extreme2006gh, محمد88 در صورت انجام ندادن فعالیت های این دوره از گروه اخراج خواهند شد.

Happy studying
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[moderntalk]

wow.it's a cool topic. would u please guide us through?!!what's going on here and how to become a member of your group?
regards:10:

[xxxj]

خوب من میتونم هماهنگتون کنم . شما اول بگید چه ساعتی باشه و چه روز هایی در هفته . نظر من تا این چند روز مونده هر روز باشه مدارس بعد یه کنفرانس میزاریم تو یاهو با هم صحبت انلاین میکنیم هر چند نفر باشیم سر ساعت شروع و سر ساع تمام میشه فقط باید همدیگرو اد کنیم ایدی هاتو رو برای من پیا م خصوصی کنید من براتون یعنی برای اونایی که امادگی کنن میفرستم ایدی ها رو بعد پیام خصوصی میکنم و باید برای هر جلسه یه موضوع انتخاب کنیم و نظر من اینه که برای هر جلسه یه معلم هم بزاریم یه ربع اخرو یه درس بده خیلی خوب میشه و همچنین میشه معلمه تکلیف بده خیلی جالب میشه و مفید پس هر کی میخواد بگه هستم و ایدیشو پیام خصوصی کنه و روز و ساعت های دلخواه رو بگه.

[mohana khanom]

why this post is pending?i wanna be a member of this post pls help meeeee:n12:

[BabakNoAndish]

یعنی سه ساله اینجا خبری نبوده ؟؟؟
چی شده ؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟
تعطیله ؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟
مثه اینکه 2010 یه زلزله ای شهاب سنگی چیزی اومده اینجا رو ترکونده ...:n02: