A Group To Study English (schedule at the first page)l

[devil_ff2008]

Dear Sepid I really thank you for ur correction
and I was very wishful to continue learning whit this group
:11:

[sepid12ir]

I meant : خاطرات زیادی داشتم
:31: I didnt know how I can to say it



I have lots of good memories from that time
or
lots of nice/good/fabulous/great :D memories have been left from that time n ...:46:
those days have left me with lots of good memories

[FARA360]

hey guys, how are u doing?...good job, for a day I was totally out n a page has been added; great
thank you
but i HAVE A SUGGETION, I think it would be better if u could have a sorta writing,, complete writing better to sau; Just answering the questions may not be helpful if u long to improve yr English unless u answer them sorta completely n long but anyhow, have an organized writing will be much better...
n I think, first it's a good idea to start with these short n small writings then we can go thru it more seriously n we can learn a standard writing, hmm?...


Hi dear sepid,good teaching i like it:10:
your suggestion is great but do u suggest any special book to follow after dealing with these kind of Qs???
:10:

[Sha7ab]

I finished it for 3 times ... ... how days.....I played max payne 2 too ...It is not as good as version 1 .... do u know why version 3 doenst publish ?yes i know.
The game developer is working on the Alan Wake right now and if you follow the news of the Alane Wake must know it is one of the best games in future and it will be a masterwork .
I think Remedy wanna make the third version of Max Payn next than Alan Wake.
you can read this news about Max Payn 3 . its not a new news but is a good analysis ...

برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنیدits like a rumor more ...
the version of article :

What we heard: During a presentation to analysts in March 2004, then-Take-Two CEO Jeffrey L. Lapin lamented "poor" sales of Max Payne 2, blaming them for his company's lackluster earnings. He then promptly announced his company's intention to make another installment in the series. "There'll be another Max Payne," he told attendees of the 17th Annual Bear Stearns Media, Entertainment and Information Conference. "I think we'll take a few years to make the next one that much more spectacular is what we have to do. But it's clearly a brand that everybody knows."

Since then, a few years--four, to be exact--have passed. During that time, Take-Two released the best-selling game in its history, endured a massive scandal, saw a stockolder revolt, and became the subject of a takeover bid by Electronic Arts. After Original Max Payne developer Remedy began work on the 360 and PC title Alan Wake--which has been almost as elusive as the next Max Payne game.

After a prolonged silence, Take-Two name-checked the series again during an earnings call on September 11, 2007. "In addition to Grand Theft Auto, our roster of million-plus-selling, wholly-owned brands includes BioShock, Civilization, Midnight Club, Max Payne, Red Dead Revolver, Manhunt and Bully," CEO Ben Feder said. "We fully intend to leverage these products, which are on development cycles that should complement and counterbalance each other." (Emphasis added.)

Nor did the publisher's deliberate ambiguity stop an analyst from asking CEO Straus Zelnick about the game in a postearnings conference call today. When asked directly about when the Max Payne--which is currently being adapted into a film--would reappear in game form, Zelnick dodged the question--but also left a tantalizing hint. "In terms of Max Payne, we will sell no wine before its time. It's a little early to comment on any particular title," he said. "But we have a lot of interesting things going on."

The official story: Given Rockstar Games' semiautonomous nature inside Take-Two's corporate structure, Take-Two reps passed along GameSpot's inquires to the New York-based publisher, which had closed for the day. However, it's worth noting that in the same phone call, Zelnick promised "sequels to some of Rockstar's AAA titles" were set for Take-Two's 2009 financial year, which begins on November 1--leading many to speculate Max Payne 3 could be among them.

Bogus or not bogus?: Bogus that Max Payne 3 has been announced for 2009. However, the fact Take-Two has repeatedly said there will be a new installment in the Max Payne franchise makes it seem like there will almost certainly be one...eventually

[brain]

Mary Young Answers
She is Signleguy's friend and she is from Chinese
She did all of the tracksssss :26: wow
wow ..:26:... Look at her answers she has not any mistakes


List-1
Dad, are you finished all the flat yet?
Almost. You know, I’ve been meaning to talk to you about it.
What is it dad?
Now don’t take the tone with me young lady.
Dad.
I’m warning you!
I’m sorry dad. So what do you want to talk to me about?
Well, the flat renovation was going really well.
Was?
The kitchen has been totally transformed and ? spare room has been given a great to make over.
I feel about coming on.
Well, the downtown economy has affected us all.
Yes, yes, but what about the flat?
Let’s just say the finances did not ? to the sitting room.

Eating Out part 6
How often do you go to restaurants?
I go quite often, maybe once a week.
Me too. It costs a lot of money though.
Yeah, it is too expensive to eat out all of the time.
I usually cook at home.
What kind of food do you like to cook?
If I’m alone, I just boil some soup and make a sandwich.
That does not seem very interesting.
I know. But I do not feel like cooking a big meal for myself.
What about if you invite friends over?
If I invite a friend over, I usually try to make something special.
What kind of things do you make for a friend’s comes over?
It depends, it might just be a salad and steak. Sometimes I’ll try to cook a ? meal.
Steaks are easy and always taste good.
I’ll usually open a bottle of wine with the meal.
What if you go out? What kind of restaurant do you like to go to?
I like all kinds of restaurants. I like Chinese food, Italian food, sushi, steaks, all kinds of food.
Me too. I like to eat different kinds of food.
Yeah, but I like some kinds of food more than other kinds. I think I like Italian food best of all.
I like my mother’s cooking best of all.
Of course, so do I.

Lord of Softwares
Ted’s Day At School
Ted tells his parents he did poorly on his chemistry test. They tell him he needs to get serious and study more.
“How was your day at school today, Ted?”
“Bad, I had a chemistry test and I blew it.”
“Maybe if you didn’t cut class so often, you’ll do better.”
”That’s right son, stop ? off and start hitting the books.”
“But I can’t stand chemistry class. Besides it’s a lost cause. That class is way over my head.”
“You need to ? down.”
“When I am a famous musician, people won’t give a who about my knowledge about atoms and molecules.”
“That’s beside the point.”
“We know you have your heart set on going to New York University.”
“And you don’t stand a chance of getting in there with such poor grades.”

We have to give her a PRIZE
thanks MARY plz keep in touch
:31: :26: :31:

[karin]

Hey! Hi :D
Nice topic. I like to take part in it continuously but I'm not if I can or not

and my writing: l



Computer Games

Once upon a time there was a little girl who sat at home and spent hours and hours playing Super Mario, alone or with her brother. And she bragged about how many mushrooms she could collect during this amusing game!! Little by little she grew up and became familiar with PC and computer games and she continued to play Aladdin and Hercules until the age of The Sims 2

yeah! That was my past time along computer games. I think all the children and teenagers in a period of time have had the experiences of playing some computer games but when they grow up, some of them continue to play and some of them leave it completely
I used to play some computer games as a child till the age of a teenager but I'm not interested in them, anymore. I'm not one of those people who sit at home and play video games, for me, reading a book or surfing the internet is much more interesting pastime.

Although I don't like computer games and I can't stand spending hours just playing games, I think it can be useful in some cases. First of all, it gives you the opportunity to experience some situations that you can't have them in real world. The other important thing is that it makes you exited! Moreover, it can be a new way of learning, English or something else.
Computer games can be really harmful too. For instance it can be waste of time so that avoid children/younger people from their education or can make people seclusive and separate them from them society.

These days video games are not just a hobby for children for their leisure time; video games are such a big industry all over the world. Just look at some big companies like EA or UBI.
For example we can see Tom Clancy, the famous American author who has written some story games, or take a look at some movies which came from their game, such as Max pain, Tomb rider, Resident Evil, etc

At the end of the story, I think every thing you like can be good for you until you are not addicted to it. Computer games have some advantages and disadvantages and it depends on you how to use it! l



p.s: I’ll be glad to know my mistakes, especially the grammatical one! l

[sepid12ir]

Hi dear sepid,good teaching i like it:10:
your suggestion is great but do u suggest any special book to follow after dealing with these kind of Qs???
:10:


nothing for now; first it's better to learn things thru some fun n then we are all more determined we can go thru some books n follow the standard way of speaking, writing, even listening n pronounciation

good luck:11:l

[sepid12ir]

Hey! Hi :D
Nice topic. I like to take part in it continuously but I'm not if I can or not

and my writing: l



Computer Games

Once upon a time there was a little girl who sat at home and spent hours and hours playing Super Mario, alone or with her brother. And she bragged about how many mushrooms she could collect during this amusing game!! Little by little she grew up and became familiar with PC and computer games and she continued to play Aladdin and Hercules until the age of The Sims 2

yeah! That was my past time along computer games. I think all the children and teenagers in a period of time have had the experiences of playing some computer games but when they grow up, some of them continue to play and some of them leave it completely
I used to play some computer games as a child till the age of a teenager but I'm not interested in them, anymore. I'm not one of those people who sit at home and play video games, for me, reading a book or surfing the internet is much more interesting pastime.

Although I don't like computer games and I can't stand spending hours just playing games, I think it can be useful in some cases. First of all, it gives you the opportunity to experience some situations that you can't have them in real world. The other important thing is that it makes you exited! Moreover, it can be a new way of learning, English or something else.
Computer games can be really harmful too. For instance it can be waste of time so that avoid children/younger people from their education or can make people seclusive and separate them from them(their) society.

These days video games are not just a hobby for children for their leisure time; video games are such a big industry all over the world. Just look at some big companies like EA or UBI.
For example we can see Tom Clancy, the famous American author who has written some story games, or take a look at some movies which came from their game, such as Max pain, Tomb rider, Resident Evil, etc

At the end of the story, I think every thing you like can be good for you until you are not addicted to it. Computer games have some advantages and disadvantages and it depends on you how to use it! l



p.s: I’ll be glad to know my mistakes, especially the grammatical one! l


wow, dear Karin; that is really nice having u here:11:
it was an absolutely a great writing
just I think, I'm not quite sure after 'so that' we have to use a complete sentence so :
so that avoid children/younger people: so that it avoids/prvenets people from...
by the way, I think prevent is a better choice in here

video games are such a big industry: video games are such big industries
yr noun 'video games' is plural so after such u should have used: industries
good luck buddy:11:l

[C. Breezy]

... to play Aladdin and ...

I used to play it with my mother :31:
But now ... she don't do like before ... she is elder and don't have the mood to play with children :31:

[shahyadghool]

hi
man mikham agr moomkene dar grohe shoma ozv besham

[brain]

man mikham agr moomkene dar grohe shoma ozv besham
Welcome dear
From on now plz write ENGLISH as much as u can
we are parcticing WRITING and u have to write an essay abt COMPUTER GAMES
:31:
good luck

[C. Breezy]

hi
man mikham agr moomkene dar grohe shoma ozv besham

of course you can ... But ... right in english since now ... if you can't completely do it ( however i'm sure you can ) write some of them in persian

[karin]

wow, dear Karin; that is really nice having u here:11:
it was an absolutely a great writing
just I think, I'm not quite sure after 'so that' we have to use a complete sentence so :
so that avoid children/younger people: so that it avoids/prvenets people from...
by the way, I think prevent is a better choice in here

video games are such a big industry:video games are such big industries
yr noun 'video games' is plural so after such u should have used: industries
good luck buddy:11:l




aha!
Thanks a lot dear Sepid
I'll be careful about my mistakes so that I won't make them in future


I used to play it with my mother :31:
But now ... she don't do like before ... she is elder and don't have the mood to play with children :31:

:31:
with children? :D

It was a nice game, I liked it

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[C. Breezy]

WooooW ! i have great memories of it ... fighting with Jabar was very hard ... :31:l

[brain]

Hi everybody
we wanted to have a meeting in Yahoo Confrence each week... I don't know HOW ... I think everybody can't go there and can't speak with Microphone ... hmmm I'm thinking abt this problem ... plz share ur ideas abt this problem ... If maybe it can help us and maybe we have a meeting in next week togother ... plz tell me
we can observe these Meetings but not with all of members cuz of some of them can't do it so we have to observe it with some member that they can do it ... everyone that he can plz tell me
:31:

[singleguy]

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaait....!!!! I haven't put my writing here yet.:19:
let me to put my writing and then you can talk about the next activity:10:



uhummm....uhummm:5:
Let me to tell you about my childhood. When I was a little child, I used to play games a lot. But not with computer, I played with micro and Sega:34:. I used to play a lot in summer. I remember some days that I played at least 5 hours a day playing just one game. I always had dream of having a computer for playing computer games when I was a child. But when my dad bought a computer for me I attracted to other things of computer and I forgot all of my dreams about playing computer games.
But lately I came back to my childhood memories and sometimes I play racing games like Need for Speed Because I really love cars. Sometimes when I drive my father’s car in the street I confuse the real street with the street in the game:16:. But I don’t play with computer a lot. I play once in a blue moon:31:. But I prefer to do real and dangerous sports (Fara360 knows what I do:27:) instead of sitting behind the computer and staring to the monitor.
By the way I don’t play the computer games.

[sepid12ir]

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaait....!!!! I haven't put my writing here yet.:19:
let me to put my writing and then you can talk about the next activity:10:



uhummm....uhummm:5:
Let me to(let me tell/ with out 'to') tell you about my childhood. When I was a little child, I used to play games a lot. But not with computer, I played with micro and Sega:34:. I used to play a lot in summer. I remember some days that I played at least 5 hours a day playing just one game. I always had a dream of having a computer for playing computer games when I was a child. But when my dad bought a computer for me I attracted to other things of computer and I forgot all of my dreams about playing computer games.
But lately I came back to my childhood memories and sometimes I play racing games like Need for Speed Because I really love cars. Sometimes when I drive my father’s car in the street I confuse the real street with the street in the game:16:. But I don’t play with computer a lot. I play once in a blue moon:31:. But I prefer to do real and dangerous sports (Fara360 knows what I do:27:) instead of sitting behind the computer and staring to the monitor.
By the way I don’t play the computer games.


good job:10:

I attracted: I was attracted
sth attracts you and you get attracted so you should use passive here

[FARA360]

wait wait wait..:31:
computer games
All of us may have experienced playing some sort of pc games and they left us some joyful memories. As a teen, I played lots of video games on ps2 and I liked that. But the most third person player and action adventure.
I set aside some times, around 3 or 4 hours to play individually or with my brothers.
Unlike its pleasurable moments, that could have some harmful effects on teens. He/she sometimes plays hours and at last they may addicted to it unintentionally. As a matter of fact, I just sat in front of the set and played to fill my spare time and to have fun by experiencing and solving some puzzles at those games. Fortunately, I managed to control myself to not to addicted to it, though.
One point that I would like to mention is that playing games could be a good way to improve your English vocabulary and it works for me because vocabularies must be known if there are puzzles at the game which you play.
Here are some games that I liked them the most: Parasite Eve 2, Fahrenheit, Fatal frame 3, Dream fall, Silent Hill 3 and 4.
Now I am so busy to play and I think it is waste of time to me. On the other hand, I would like to experience Wii set just for fun.
Correct my mistakes if there is any, PLZ!!:11:
:10:

[Mary_Young]

hi
Well, I don't play computer games often,
basically I know nothing about them, but what I do know is that if you play computer games for too long, it'll be harmful to your health, at least gazing at the screen for too long does harm to your eyes.
But if you play computer games properly(I mean the timing),according to some reasearches, it'll benefit your IQ.I guess so.

[brain]

Fatal frame 3
wo[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] u play it? thats very horror .. I liked it very much but I couldnt play it because i hadnt PS2

Fahrenheit
woooooooow again :31: I liked this game very much again :31: it is diffrent of all of games I played ...do u know its publisher make another game ?
:31:

[sepid12ir]

wait wait wait..:31:
computer games
All of us may have experienced playing some sort of pc games and they left ussome joyful memories. As a teen, I have played lots of video games on ps2 and I liked that. But the most third person player and action adventure.
I set aside some times, around 3 or 4 hours to play individually or with my brothers.
Unlike its pleasurable moments, that could have some harmful effects on teens. He/she sometimes plays hours and at last they may get addicted to it unintentionally. As a matter of fact, I just sat in front of the set and played to fill my spare time and to have fun by experiencing and solving some puzzles at those games. Fortunately, I managed to control myself to not to get addicted to it, though.
One point that I would like to mention is that playing games could be a good way to improve your English vocabulary and it works for me because vocabularies must be known if there are puzzles at the game which you play.
Here are some games that I liked them the most: Parasite Eve 2, Fahrenheit, Fatal frame 3, Dream fall, Silent Hill 3 and 4.
Now I am so busy to play and I think it is a waste of time to me. On the other hand, I would like to experience Wii set just for fun.
Correct my mistakes if there is any, PLZ!!:11:
:10:


Fabulous:11:
just two small mistakes which have been corrected in the quoted part:10:l

[FARA360]

wo[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] u play it? thats very horror .. I liked it very much but I couldnt play it because i hadnt PS2

woooooooow again :31: I liked this game very much again :31: it is diffrent of all of games I played ...do u know its publisher make another game ?
:31:
YEP, sometimes it got on my nerve and madded me:27:
No I dont know. If I knew it, I couldnt play it cuz I am occupied with lots of classes and books and the other reason is that I dont have PS2 anymore:31:
:10:


Fabulous:11:
just two small mistakes which have been corrected in the quoted part:10:l


Thank u so much dear sepid!
:11::10:

[Sha7ab]

FARA360 , you must played Harvest Moon already. right?:10:

Fahrenheitthis game was a great game really. the good elements include complex story and new gameplay with QTE(Quick time event) technic.
game' atmosphere was strange and sametimes for its singular properties i was losting in the game!!!.

do u know its publisher make another gamegame publisher is Atari and its Designer is a great man namely David Cage ...
But game developer was Quantic Dream that is working on a grate project namely Heavy Rain right now ...


Hi everybody
we wanted to have a meeting in Yahoo Confrence each week... I don't know HOW ... I think everybody can't go there and can't speak with Microphone ... hmmm I'm thinking abt this problem ... plz share ur ideas abt this problem ... If maybe it can help us and maybe we have a meeting in next week togother ... plz tell me
we can observe these Meetings but not with all of members cuz of some of them can't do it so we have to observe it with some member that they can do it ... everyone that he can plz tell meI agree and can join you whenever u want.
just a problem and question :
In your opinion can I speak English ? : :دی

[brain]

Heavy Rain
I heard somthing abt it but i think it is designing for Xbox 360 ( cryingggggg ) .... I wanted it ... ow I decided to not play games anymore...:31: u r ghelghelaking me ( kiding)... hmmm

[Sha7ab]

i think it is designing for Xbox 360made a mistake :d
it will release for PS3 only and i am crying too :d

[FARA360]

FARA360 , you must played Harvest Moon already. right?:10:

Nop, I have not heard its name let alone playing it:31: sooo... what kind of game is it??
Anyway I dont have any free time to play
:10:

[C. Breezy]

Sorry i ask this ... what we are going to do today ?

[Sha7ab]

Nop, I have not heard its name let alone playing it:31: sooo... what kind of game is it??

Anyway I dont have any free time to play

:10:




I dont know but for a moment i felt u played it . Harvest Moon was a intersted game that was known as "KESHAVARZ":31: too in our country . did you said like Survival horror genre? If your answer is yes tell me too offer you some good game in that genre. :10:

Sorry i ask this ... what we are going to do today ?


I asked this question from Sadeq(Brian) last night, he said for friday we havent program. fridays is vocation for us.
:11:

[brain]

what we are going to do today

fridays is vocation for us
Exactly
Hi we havent any thing to do on fridays and we have to rest in this day
:31:
Maybe we put somthing to do on fridays in future
:31:

[C. Breezy]

Yes .. i think today is great for our programs ... because almost everyone is off today ... and it's a good day to study

[devil_ff2008]

Hey guys
I didnt play game much than u and i dont speak abt it
If its possible go to next activity
I think today is good for conference
If u r attune spesify a time for cf

[brain]

Yes .. i think today is great for our programs ... because almost everyone is off today ... and it's a good day to study
yeah u r right ..... we want to put an acitivty for that day ... Im thinking abt it
:31:

Hey guys
I didnt play game much than u and i dont speak abt it
If its possible go to next activity
I think today is good for conference
If u r attune spesify a time for cf
I think today is soon for this activity ...... if u want it u can tell ur id
I can be online at 12 oclock and this is my id
sadeghmollaie
everyone want to participate to this conference plz ADD ME
good luck

[singleguy]

I have a question related to the writing.:31:
Does any one know how can I improve my hand writing? I'd love to have the skill to write like the words blow. could any body help me? :10:

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Do you want to see more? here you can see more beautiful handwritings
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[brain]

SPEAKING ENGLISH

Yahoo Confrence

This is an important Activity
We have to have this activity each week
well I have to say somthing that u need for that :
A Microphone
A Yahoo ID
A little free time (:31:)

PLZ everyone ADD me in his/her add list in yahoo if he/she wants to participate in this activity
PLZ everyone who like to participate tell us
I think it is a little hard to DO but Singleguy told me we can do it, Dont worry (:31:)

This is my ID : sadeghmollaie

If we can't do that with Microphne, so We can have TEXTCHAT in there
I think FRIDAY is good time for this activity
PLZ tell ur ideas abt this activity if u like it
:31:
bye bye

[singleguy]

Hi guys
As you see the studing schedule, we should do the reading activity on Saturdays and Sundays. Brain asked me to put the story blow for you today.
For starting this activity, we put a story like what you see in this post. Then we will talk about the story. If studying the reading in this way works, we will continue this method in the next weeks too. To improve this activity, try to send your ideas to Brain or me by private or public massage.


The first reading activity

The Way to a Man’s Heart
Lina often asked Luke to dinner. Lina loved Luke, but Luke loved Lina’s cooking, not Lina herself. Lina accepted that for the time being. But she felt that, with enough meals and enough time, she would get her man.
Luke rarely stayed more than ten minutes past the last bite of dessert. Lina would ask Luke if he wanted to watch TV, or play cards or chess, or take a walk around the neighborhood, but Luke always declined. He always said, “I’ve got to go.” They both knew that Luke didn’t have to go anywhere. All he ever did was go back to his apartment and read books or go online.
Tonight was probably going to be more of the same. But Lina was a patient woman. She loved to cook, and she loved to watch people eat her cooking. Tonight she prepared shrimp, fresh green beans, mashed potatoes, and asparagus. Luke ate everything with gusto. Then she brought out her homemade cheesecake with vanilla ice cream for dessert.
Luke asked, “Are you trying to fatten me up for something? Every time I come over here, I have to eat celery and lettuce for a week to get back down to my normal weight.”
“Oh, stop exaggerating,” Lina replied. “You enjoy every mouthful.”
“You’re right. I apologize. I love your cooking, and if you didn’t invite me over here, I’d be hurt and hungry.”
Lina watched contentedly as Luke devoured the cheesecake and ice cream. Someday, she thought, I will be his dessert.

[Sha7ab]

I have a question related to the writing.:31:
Does any one know how can I improve my hand writing? I'd love to have the skill to write like the words blow. could any body help me? :10:

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Do you want to see more? here you can see more beautiful handwritings
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IMO there is one way too improve in writing .. just training and focus .



SPEAKING ENGLISH

Yahoo Confrence

This is an important Activity
We have to have this activity each week
well I have to say somthing that u need for that :
A Microphone
A Yahoo ID
A little free time (:31:)

PLZ everyone ADD me in his/her add list in yahoo if he/she wants to participate in this activity
PLZ everyone who like to participate tell us
I think it is a little hard to DO but Singleguy told me we can do it, Dont worry (:31:)

This is my ID : sadeghmollaie

If we can't do that with Microphne, so We can have TEXTCHAT in there
I think FRIDAY is good time for this activity
PLZ tell ur ideas abt this activity if u like it
:31:
bye bye




I'm in . its perfect . I added you(shahab_despra2006) ... but you must promise that dont laugh me if I speak wrong :31:

The Way to a Man’s Heart Luck is very lucky that Lina love him (kiding) :40:for first activity its a good story but for next weeks we have to use harder story:27::19:

[brain]

Oh thanks Signleguy
After you read you must to write that story in 1 or 3 line
Good Luck

I'm in . its perfect . I added you(shahab_despra2006) ... but you must promise that dont laugh me if I speak wrong
Hi....u be sure u speak better than me :31: ......

[singleguy]

After you read you must to write that story in 1 or 3 line


Yeah. you're right. or it's better to say a(short) paragraph:31:

[afsane b]

Oh... I got hungry….:31:.


What would happen in the end then:46:?...would I put an end to this story?


Excuse me, guys, but I didn’t actually get what is the purpose of reading here, may u spell it out?

[masoudtr]

SPEAKING ENGLISH
hi guys
i think it's very useful for us
plz add me
masoudrejae@yahoo

[C. Breezy]

Great story ... are you going for an exam ??
i think i will also in this activity, but i dion't have an ID ... i'm going to make one

[devil_ff2008]

The Way to a Man’s Heart
Oh
Luke is a hateful man :13:
I think this story is a big vituperation to all men :13:
I dont think any man callous as Luke :19:
:31:
thx for this story :11:

[Sha7ab]

Oh
Luke is a hateful man :13:
I think this story is a big vituperation to all men :13:
I dont think any man callous as Luke :19:
:31:
thx for this story :11:


Maybe Lina be very ugly that Luck dont love her .
(ZOORAKI KE NEMISHE)
LOL:31:

[devil_ff2008]

Maybe Lina be very ugly that Luck dont love her .
(ZOORAKI KE NEMISHE)
LOL:31:



Maybe !!!!
But i think she is fool :27:

[C. Breezy]

Oh
Luke is a hateful man [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
I think this story is a big vituperation to all men [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
I dont think any man callous as Luke [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
thx for this story
OH ! don't worry ... Also none of women have good Cooking ... that's a fiction story ! :27:l

[hoseinist]

hi guys! and thx dear single guy:D:10:
i rote this story but the same as afsane b i couldn't get what is the main purpose:31:
plz put the end of the story!!:46::D

[FARA360]

The Way to a Man’s Heart
Luke has found another partner on the Internet!
It seems that Luke doesnt love her anymore (we dont know the reason
:31:
Thanx for the story:11:

[hoseinist]

OH ! don't worry ... Also none of women have good Cooking ... that's a fiction story ! :27:l
wow!! daer koorosh
i should tell your mother ur idea !:D

[C. Breezy]

wow!! daer koorosh
i should tell your mother ur idea !:D
:31:
Noooo ! Always there is an exception ! my mother is an exception :31:

[Sha7ab]

I wish could eat Lina' food even once time:19:
Im hungry . i go too eat dinner(7:02) right now.:31:

[C. Breezy]

I wish could eat Lina' food even once time[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Im hungry . i go too eat dinner(7:02) right now.[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
I hope you enjoy it completely ... take a picture of it and put it here ... let us eat , too ! :31:l

[Sha7ab]

I hope you enjoy it completely ... take a picture of it and put it here ... let us eat , too ! :31:l

Ate ... was not a good food. that was just fish conserve with.... a easy food for a alone guy :31:

[sepid12ir]

hi guys! and thx dear single guy:D:10:
i rote this story but the same as afsane b i couldn't get what is the main purpose:31:
plz put the end of the story!!:46::D

well, as far as I know, I think u r supposed to go thru the reading then retell it with yr own simple words...n tell yr idea about the text. Analyze the story if it is good enough n share yr idea about it. as u know all strories have some messages so then u can also share the message u've got form that:11:l

[brain]

Hi everybody
I read the story
The Way to a Man’s Heart = (:31:) Cooking for husband
(kiding :31:)
Luck love her cooking and
I think Lina don't love her husband :27: She only love to cook and watch people eat her cooking
She don't love him and Luck don't love her
Everything is square
:31:
I couldn't understand abt last sentence
"she thought, I will be his dessert"
Do you know what she means
:13:


all strories have some messages
Hi dear Sepid
ur idea is good and ur ideas always is good
thx
:31:
I couldn't undestand its messege
I think this story has some problems
or maybe I have some problems
:31:

[Sha7ab]

Hi everybody
I read the story
The Way to a Man’s Heart = ([ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]) Cooking for husband
(kiding [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ])
Luck love her cooking and
I think Lina don't love her husband [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] She only love to cook and watch people eat her cooking
She don't love him and Luck don't love her
Everything is square
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
I couldn't understand abt last sentence
"she thought, I will be his dessert"
Do you know what she means



i think u made a mistake. luck and lina arent each husband. they are friend only and Lina love Luck and Luck love Lina' cooking

about the last sentence ... Lina think with herself that finally she will get the Luck' heart. ok?
let me type persian:
"لینا با خودش میگه یه روز خود من دسر او خواهم بود ، یعنی یه روز قلبشو بدست میارم"

[brain]

luck and lina arent each husband
r u sure
thx
ur reading better than me.... I have to practice more
:31:

[sepid12ir]

Hi guys
As you see the studing schedule, we should do the reading activity on Saturdays and Sundays. Brain asked me to put the story blow for you today.
For starting this activity, we put a story like what you see in this post. Then we will talk about the story. If studying the reading in this way works, we will continue this method in the next weeks too. To improve this activity, try to send your ideas to Brain or me by private or public massage.


The first reading activity

The Way to a Man’s Heart
Lina often asked Luke to dinner. Lina loved Luke, but Luke loved Lina’s cooking, not Lina herself. Lina accepted that for the time being. But she felt that, with enough meals and enough time, she would get her man.
Luke rarely stayed more than ten minutes past the last bite of dessert. Lina would ask Luke if he wanted to watch TV, or play cards or chess, or take a walk around the neighborhood, but Luke always declined. He always said, “I’ve got to go.” They both knew that Luke didn’t have to go anywhere. All he ever did was go back to his apartment and read books or go online.
Tonight was probably going to be more of the same. But Lina was a patient woman. She loved to cook, and she loved to watch people eat her cooking. Tonight she prepared shrimp, fresh green beans, mashed potatoes, and asparagus. Luke ate everything with gusto. Then she brought out her homemade cheesecake with vanilla ice cream for dessert.
Luke asked, “Are you trying to fatten me up for something? Every time I come over here, I have to eat celery and lettuce for a week to get back down to my normal weight.”
“Oh, stop exaggerating,” Lina replied. “You enjoy every mouthful.”
“You’re right. I apologize. I love your cooking, and if you didn’t invite me over here, I’d be hurt and hungry.”
Lina watched contentedly as Luke devoured the cheesecake and ice cream. Someday, she thought, I will be his dessert.





well, I coulf finally read the story...it was nice; it was too short to be analyzed but:

- Retelling: It was about a lady named Lina who was in love with a man, Luck, n she was trying to grab his heart by cooking for him since he was fond of eating n besides Lina was a great cook.

- Analyzing: well, as I said it is too short to be analyzed but wot crossed my mind was: Luck was sorta greedy n naive; if he had his eyes opened he could catch that Lina is in love with him, but wot he just cared about was Lina's cooking; n besides it is also showing 'Hope'...Lina is hopeful n that can show the importance of 'being hopeful' otherwise she would be kinda depressed rather than being happy n cooking for her beloved one while Luck had never showed any love to her but her cooking

by the way, I could catch some nice expressions:
go online
Tonight was probably going to be more of the same
Are you trying to fatten me up

[afsane b]

It is kind of Lina to invite Luke for dinner despite knowing that he doesn’t like her and it is cruel of Luke not to spend more time with her despite swallowing her yummy food, if I were Lina, I would quit feeding him:31:


Thank so much for the story

[C. Breezy]

Also if i were Luke i will continuing Eating those foods :27:

[singleguy]

Now it’s my turn to talk about the story.
The story is about a couple with names “Luke” and “Lina”. Lina was a kind woman and also a good cook but Luke wasn’t. they ate dinner together but after dinning time Luke didn’t stay with Lina and he preferred to spend his time on line or reading books. In other hand it didn’t Luke’s heart good to spend time with Lina.
At one of the nights Lina became a little angry because of Luke’s complaint about the dessert. But he excused and ate the dessert quickly.
Lina would make Luke happy even she became his dessert because she love him.
Poor Lina.
It was longer than the main story, wasn’t it?: D

[classiquecrime]

Public Notice
I've been down and i'm wondering why you guys don't care for each other's mistakes when you pick up a bad choice to form your own sentences
All that we know is that we know nothing
Just care more about your mistakes!
So please since then, care for your friends' mistakes and modify them
Best wishes---

[singleguy]

Public Notice
I've been down and i'm wondering why you guys don't care for each other's mistakes when you pick up a bad choice to form your own sentences
All that we know is that we know nothing
Just care more about your mistakes!
So please since then, care for your friends' mistakes and modify them
Best wishes---




no no no...!!!
dear sepid tell us our mistakes.

[sepid12ir]

Public Notice
I've been down and i'm wondering why you guys don't care for each other's mistakes when you pick up a bad choice to form your own sentences
All that we know is that we know nothing
Just care more about your mistakes!
So please since then, care for your friends' mistakes and modify them
Best wishes---




we do care about the mistakes but it is not recommended all the time
by just going thru the mistakes learners may lose their enthusiasm n they may hate it...Mistakes should be corrected but not all the time n that is Writing section which we do care about mistakes
------
not knowing is not bad, not learning n not asking is bad but thank God here guys are absolutely enthusiastic n they are learning together
----
good luck

[brain]

ok I read that story again
I think they are each husband
this is story has many basic mistakes
I couldn't understand it
:2: :2:
I dont like this story

[hoseinist]

dear brain
plz don't get peeved!dear singleguy put this story just for learning more new words and new grammar

[devil_ff2008]

Dear Brain
I dont know why u cant understand !
Luke is a man and Lina's friend
he always go to Lina's home and eat her dinner !
Lina love him but he don't love she and love her cook !!!

[rosenegarin13]

hi friends
i would be happy if you welcome me to this topic
i read the story
as dear brain said
i didnt like the way in which it was written
but i understood it anyway
i just can say: poor woman with her dreams

[hoseinist]

Dear Brain
I dont know why u cant understand !
Luke is a man and Lina's friend
he always go to Lina's home and eat her dinner !
Lina love him but he don't love she and love her cook !!!
dear Devil!:D
i think in the last paragraph you must say: Lina loves him but he dosen't love her and he loves just her cooking

[devil_ff2008]

dear Devil!:D
i think in the last paragraph you must say: Lina loves him but he dosen't love her and he loves just her cooking


sorry
I wrote it carelessly
thx for ur correction
:11:

[singleguy]

Hello every body. as you see in the studying schedule we should do the listening activity today and tomorrow. I prepared 3listenings for you. please choose one (ore more) of them and try to write that and send that to me as a private massage. If you feel that some of them are too long for you, try to write half of that or how much you want. it depends on you.

Exercise 1
level= easy
length= 1:45
subject=a woman's diet
speed=very slow
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برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید Exercise 2
Level=medium
length=2:38
subject=my first camping trip
speed=medium
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برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید Exercise 3
Level=hard
length=1:18
subject=why I'm a vegetarian
speed=fast
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برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید

GOOD LUCK:11:

[seymour]

we do care about the mistakes but it is not recommended all the time
by just going thru the mistakes learners may lose their enthusiasm n they may hate it...Mistakes should be corrected but not all the time n that is Writing section which we do care about mistakes
------
not knowing is not bad, not learning n not asking is bad but thank God here guys are absolutely enthusiastic n they are learning together
----
good luck


Sepid is so right ... as they say in English "been there , done that" ... reaction to correcting mistakes is most of the times : not so hot ... and there's a negative relation between reactions and people's skills ... (=higher their skill , colder reaction[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]) ...


at least, that's my experience and that's why I barely correct others (grammatically I mean) [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] "Translation " topic

[Thanh Nam]

Hi guys



As you see the studing schedule, we should do the reading activity on Saturdays and Sundays. Brain asked me to put the story blow for you today.
For starting this activity, we put a story like what you see in this post. Then we will talk about the story. If studying the reading in this way works, we will continue this method in the next weeks too. To improve this activity, try to send your ideas to Brain or me by private or public massage.



The first reading activity




The Way to a Man’s Heart


Lina often asked Luke to dinner. Lina loved Luke, but Luke loved Lina’s cooking, not Lina herself. Lina accepted that for the time being. But she felt that, with enough meals and enough time, she would get her man.
Luke rarely stayed more than ten minutes past the last bite of dessert. Lina would ask Luke if he wanted to watch TV, or play cards or chess, or take a walk around the neighborhood, but Luke always declined. He always said, “I’ve got to go.” They both knew that Luke didn’t have to go anywhere. All he ever did was go back to his apartment and read books or go online.
Tonight was probably going to be more of the same. But Lina was a patient woman. She loved to cook, and she loved to watch people eat her cooking. Tonight she prepared shrimp, fresh green beans, mashed potatoes, and asparagus. Luke ate everything with gusto. Then she brought out her homemade cheesecake with vanilla ice cream for dessert.
Luke asked, “Are you trying to fatten me up for something? Every time I come over here, I have to eat celery and lettuce for a week to get back down to my normal weight.”
“Oh, stop exaggerating,” Lina replied. “You enjoy every mouthful.”
“You’re right. I apologize. I love your cooking, and if you didn’t invite me over here, I’d be hurt and hungry.”
Lina watched contentedly as Luke devoured the cheesecake and ice cream. Someday, she thought, I will be his dessert.






Single guy


Thanks very much for interesting story, its so meaning


Some people think that Lina is a silly girl but i suppose she is a precise girl


Her lover is a heartfelt love


Listen to her, She thought "i will be his dessert" because she loves Luke very much


Lina thinks that love to be loved and she loved and did everythings because these one


Have u ever listenned to the song Love tobe love by u. Try and feel


Love to be loved. Thats Lina done. I like the way Lina done to say that she loves Luke. Thats Why

[singleguy]

Answers of the Listening activity



hoseinist
Part 3
I’m a vegetarian and I become vegetarian about sixty years ago , ohm it ---- when I want to television program after school ,that talk a bout this vegetarian grow-----something I heard in science class. She had diet site and amount you really--------- ----you,and she------- and she forgoted this, ohm ,and she took this ------problem to the cords……………………..


afsane b
For breakfast in the morning sometimes I have a glass of orange juice with cereal and milk and a piece of fruit that are peach or some strawberries or a banana and a piece of toast if I get hungry with brenji and omelet sometimes I have eggs, scramble, eggs with a little ohm like cheese and mushrooms on it and sometimes I would like to have a big of it cream cheese and jam and it is my biggest breakfast my typical lunch is sandwich, iver turkey or hem with cheese and what else and tomatoes and sometimes I meal on the bread and sometimes I have a thing better enjoy sandwiches that follow by a piece of fruit again by kam is really good and nectarines are yummy too and a bit great and have a kooky or globar or something like that for dessert and dinner times that I have my big meal and I love steaks or hamburgers or anything has meat in it I like chicken and then usually fresh sigh that have potatoes with vegetables like bragly and raf and follow all of the dessert at the end ice-cream is my favorite fruit so after a nice dessert



c.breezy
For breakfast in the mornings , sometimes i have a glass of orange juice with cereal and milk and a peace of fruit like a peach or strawberries or a banana and a piece of toast to forget hungry with butter and jam on it , Sometimes i have eggs scramble like an omelet with cheese and mushrooms on it and sometimes i just have a ...?... with cream cheese and jam , and that's my basic breakfast .
my typical lunch is a sandwich either a turkey or a ham with cheese and
lettuce and tomatoes ...
sorry i don't have the time to listen to rest of it


I think i can understand it really easy and my problem is in my Vocab that i don't know the words ... and also i've found some of them in babylon ... by what i have heard ... thx anyway





Single boy
For breakfast in the mornings, sometimes I have a glass of orange juice, bread, cereal, an milk and a piece of fruit. Like a peach or some strawberries or a banana and …. A piece of toast if I get hungry with butter and jam on it. Sometimes I have eggs scrambled eggs with… I get omelet with cheese and mushrooms on it and sometimes I just have bagel, cream, cheese and jam. And it’s my basic breakfast.
My typical lunch is a sandwich………….turkey or ham with cheese and what else? And tomatoes and sometimes I’ve….………on bread and sometimes I have peanut butter juice followed by piece of fruit again like……….. And ……… like………..and I have grapes. And then I have cookie or……….or sth like that for dessert. On dinner time that’s every my big meal and I love stacks or hamburgers and any thing that has meat in it. I love chicken and then usually for a side I have potatoes with vegetable like broccoli I love and then follow with dessert and ……..



Transcripts
A woman's diet
for breakfast in the mornings sometimes i have a glass of orange juice with cereal and milk, and a piece of fruit, like a peach, or some strawberries, or a banana. and um a piece of toast, if i get hungry, with butter and jam on it. sometimes i'll have eggs, scrambled eggs with... like an like an omelet with cheese and mushrooms on it. and sometimes i'll just have a bagel with cream cheese and jam. and that's my my a basic breakfast. my my typical lunch is a sandwich either turkey or ham with cheese and lettuce and tomatoes. and sometimes i have mayonnaise on the bread. and um sometimes i have peanut butter and jelly sandwiches. uh followed by a piece of fruit again, like plums are really good and nectarines are yummy too. and i love grapes. and then i'll have a cookie or a granola bar or something like that for a desert. um dinner times, that's where i have my big meal. and i love steak or hamburgers, anything that has meat in it. i love chicken, and then usually for a side i'll have like potatoes with a vegetable like broccoli i love. and then follow all that up with desert at the end, and ice-cream is my favorite food, so that's a nice desert.


Why I'm a vegetrain
I'm a vegetarian, and I became a vegetarian about 6 years ago. Erm ... it all started when I watched a television program after school that talked about this vegetarian girl, er something about how in science class she had to dissect an animal, and she really didn't want to. And she refused and therefore got a D. Er and she took this ... she and her parents took this problem to the courts. And they ended up ruling in her favor, so now the schools have to provide an alternative er ... for dissection in science classes. Er but that just got ... got me started thinking about where meat comes from and if I really want to eat it or not. That night for dinner I had a cheese steak. Erm and after I'd eaten it, I thought about it and made me feel really bad. Erm not physically sick but I just ... I knew that it wasn't right for me. And er so I decided never to eat meat again. So I didn't. And I guess my reasons are just that I don't think it's necessary for me to kill animals. So I'd ... I'd rather save more animals.


my first camping trip
well. i will tell you about my experience the first time i went camping. we had_ my daughter had had two tents put up and we had a spot where you put up a cook tent_ which is all netting and it zippers. and we had a place where you could put a camp fire. it was a pretty good-sized plot up in the Vineyard and there they had a little country store there and they had a laundromat for you to wash your clothes in and they have recycling just like all the towns around here in the United States and they have R-Vs. if you don't know what an R_V is it's a road van, yaknow, vehicle over the road where you sleep in it and all. and its back in the pines and i_ we have showers there. you can either go and park where they have all cold water running but_
but i remember the one night we had gone to sleep and my daughter had forgotten to put a cover over the top of the box that had the food in it. well the perfume of the island is skunk flavor. haha. scent. and you can imagine as soon as you hit the island you smell the skunks so that's what it's infested with is skunks and raccoons. and she had forgot to put the cover on the box and they had gotten into the cook tent. there was oatmeal all over the floor. they ate over two pounds of cookies and chewed all the nipples off of my granddaughter's baby bottles. the place was a wreck. but when you stop to think about it you have to laugh because it's really a site and a gentleman that was on the plot next to us a lot, he was sitting there and a mother skunk came with her babies across and they got up on the table and stole his Hershey Bar haha. and if you could have seen this gentleman chasing after this baby skunk just to get his Hershey Bar back. well i'll tell you he did. he got his (hershibar) back. the only disadvantage of camping that i didn't like is because we had to walk and carry water back to the camp. but all in all it was an experience that i have never had and i really enjoyed it.


Thanks heaven:26:
3members did the listening activity thanks to all of them:11:
you can see the subject of writing on table of contents. I guess Brain is going to tell you something about that

GOOD LUCK:11:

[singleguy]

Try and feel


Love to be loved.




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you can say that again[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[C. Breezy]

Great ! thank you singleguy...
what are we going to write about today ?:eh:l

[afsane b]

Thanks for the listening, but they were too difficult for me, I have a great difficulty with this:41:


And, what is the subject for writing then?

[FARA360]

Heyyyy, dear singleguy I wanted to put all of the Listenings but I did not act quickly !! :19:
Anyway they were a little difficult to me and
Thank u so much:11:

[singleguy]

hi guys
Brain had some problems and he couldn't make it so I tell you the subject of writing
the subject of writing is
The best movie I've ever watched

[sepid12ir]

It's a hard topic, there are so many movies which I do like n which I've learnt a lot from, anyway I chose one of them: life is beautiful

Life is beautiful is an Italian movie which I watched a while ago. A fabulous movie which taught me a lot. I've always been fond of movies with powerful messages. Life is beautiful was sort of that. Meaningful and strong enough to impact audiences. The movie is trying to show that everyone can be happy despite all the hardships and tails. We are all struggling with different kinds of problems but we are not aware that LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL. It is proving that life can be beautiful if we look at it nicely, if we laugh at the problems instead of making big deals out of them; If we know the value of love. That is love which can change an awkward life to the most beautiful life in the world.

the man's smiles in the movie may never skip my mind. He had always a gorgeous smile on his face even in the worst situations of his life. Even the very last moment of his life.

Life is too short and good for the people who don't take it for granted and use every moments in the best possible way. l

[devil_ff2008]

It's a hard topic, there are so many movies which I do like n which I've learnt a lot from, anyway I chose one of them: life is beautiful

Life is beautiful is an Italian movie which I watched a while ago. A fabulous movie which taught me a lot. I've always been fond of movies with powerful messages. Life is beautiful was sort of that. Meaningful and strong enough to impact audiences. The movie is trying to show that everyone can be happy despite all the hardships and tails. We are all struggling with different kinds of problems but we are not aware that LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL. It is proving that life can be beautiful if we look at it nicely, if we laugh at the problems instead of making big deals out of them; If we know the value of love. That is love which can change an awkward life to the most beautiful life in the world.

the man's smiles in the movie may never skip my mind. He had always a gorgeous smile on his face even in the worst situations of his life. Even the very last moment of his life.

Life is too short and good for the people who don't take it for granted and use every moments in the best possible way. l




oh
thx dear Sepid
it was very nice
i thought this esaay wrote by a great writer
:11:

[Sha7ab]

I cant say that a film is best in my life or forever . there are many great film in history that i hint some of them here ...
one of the best film in history is Heat ! in said film there were two great actor Alpacino and Robert Deniro .
in Heat Robert Deniro Shows a wonderful performance from himself and in my opinion he is better than Alpacino in that film.
one of the others film that i have seen and has been a great film is The Dark Knight.
DK' director is Christopher Nolan who made The Prestige and Batman Begins befor than. Heath Ledger in the said film shows the best performance that i have seen until yet. Ledger dead for DK and for JOKER . Yes He dead for Joker . Joker killed him.
verily GodFather(1) was a grear film . GF made in 1972 and directed by a famous man named Francis Ford Coppola ... Marlon Brando and Alpacino was GF' stars .said film is in secound place in the IMDB list aright now .... !
other good film thet i have seen are : The Pursuit of Happyness , Braveheart , The Sixth Sense , The Shawshank Redemption and ...
and I have to want you to excuse me for my bad english.
Tank u every body.

[sepid12ir]

I cant say that a film is best in my life or forever . there are many great film in history that i hint some of them here ...
one of the best film in history is Heat ! in said film there were two great actors Alpacino and Robert Deniro .
in Heat Robert Deniro Shows a wonderful performance from himself and in my opinion he is better than Alpacino in that film.
one of the others film that i have seen and hasbeen a great film is The Dark Knight.
DK' director is Christopher Nolan who made The Prestige and Batman Begins befor than. Heath Ledger in the said film shows the best performance that i have seen until yet. Ledger dead for DK and for JOKER . Yes He dead for Joker . Joker killed him.
verily GodFather(1) was a grear film . GF made in 1972 and directed by a famous man named Francis Ford Coppola ... Marlon Brando and Alpacino was GF' stars .said film is in secound place in the IMDB list aright now .... !
other good filmS thet i have seen are : The Pursuit of Happyness , Braveheart , The Sixth Sense , The Shawshank Redemption and ...
and I have to want you to excuse me for my bad english.
Tank u every body.




hey buddy, how 'ya doin?
first off: Never Say Sorry For The Mistakes You Make! Be sure these mistakes can help us learn English Better

now, I've corrected some of yr mistakes, have a look at them n in case there was any question, ask!

many great film: many great films
well, film is countable, u've also used many, after many which is just used for countable nouns, we should use 's' to make the noun Plurar

hint: mention
'Hint' is not an appropriate verb here

one of the best film: one of the best filmsیکی از بهترین فیلمهایی که ...!it should be plurar

in said: the mentioned
فیلم ذکر شده; u've used this phrase a lot, all of them are wrong n u can change them to the mentioned

one of the others film: an other movie that I've seen

that i have seen until yet: that I have ever seen
whenever u want to say: ّبهترین/بدترین و ...، چیزی که تاحالا دیدم/شنیدیم و ...:
the best/the worst/the most beautiful/whatever + that I've ever+(p.p of the verb)

He dead for Joker : sorry I couldn't get wot u meant in here

happy studying

[singleguy]

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]



Hi
Yes.:27: You’re right that it’s hard to talk about the best film I’ve ever watched. But our purpose is to improve our English writing.
I confused because I don’t know which film I like most[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
But I want to talk about one of my favorite films played by one of my favorite actors.
What Dreams May Come is one of my favorite films that Robin Williams is the first cast in that film. This film is a kind of drama fantasy and romance film released in 1998 in USA.
Chris Neilson is a doctor who marred with Annie. They had 2 wonder children that died in a car accident and 4 years later Chris dies in a natural way and then he goes to heaven. When Chris dies and goes to Heaven he meets Albert and discovers that Heaven is even more wondrous than anything he could have imagined. But his wife is very sad because of these events and she becomes a woman with mental problems and finally she decides to kill herself to go to the next world in order to be with his family. But unfortunately she goes to the hell because she comes to the next world by suicide. But when he finds out his wife had committed suicide, he desperately searches for her spirit, journeying through Heaven and Hell along the way.

[Sha7ab]

hey buddy, how 'ya doin?
first off: Never Say Sorry For The Mistakes You Make! Be sure these mistakes can help us learn English Better

now, I've corrected some of yr mistakes, have a look at them n in case there was any question, ask!

many great film: many great films
well, film is countable, u've also used many, after many which is just used for countable nouns, we should use 's' to make the noun Plurar

hint: mention
'Hint' is not an appropriate verb here

one of the best film: one of the best filmsیکی از بهترین فیلمهایی که ...!it should be plurar

in said: the mentioned
فیلم ذکر شده; u've used this phrase a lot, all of them are wrong n u can change them to the mentioned

one of the others film: an other movie that I've seen

that i have seen until yet: that I have ever seen
whenever u want to say: ّبهترین/بدترین و ...، چیزی که تاحالا دیدم/شنیدیم و ...:
the best/the worst/the most beautiful/whatever + that I've ever+(p.p of the verb)

He dead for Joker : sorry I couldn't get wot u meant in here

happy studying




thank you so much dear sepid for corrected my mistakes.

He dead for Joker : sorry I couldn't get wot u meant in heremy purpose was : او به خاطر جوکر مرد .
that was wrong , right?



What Dreams May Come
mentioned film was one of the best filmS of Robin Williams . I have to say that there is Cuba Gooding Jr in mentioned film. I like Cuba Gooding Jr play in his films . for example "Radio" was a film that released in 2003 and Cuba Gooding Jr got very awards for his wonderful play.

[sepid12ir]

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What Dreams May Come
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but I have a totally different idea, it was a good movie but the story was really poor! sorta fiction it was n I've never been fond of fiction:46:
Robin William as always was great in this job n wot I did not enjoy was the poor story! those who create these kinda movies are really brave in my idea bcuz they are changelling with lots of people with different believes! anyway, it is absolutely worth watching since it makes u think
I fancy everything which make us think




thank you so much dear sepid for corrected my mistakes.
my purpose was : او به خاطر جوکر مرد .
that was wrong , right?




ahan, he died/ passed away for/bcuz of Joker
Dead is noun noun die is verb

[karin]

What’s the best movie I have ever watched?
As the other friends said I think it’s really hard to choose just one movie for the whole life so I’m going to write about one of my favorite movies not the best one. Choosing he best one is impossible for me!

One of my favorite movies is Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind in witch there’s the story of a man who is going to erase his girlfriend from his mind, he is going to erase a part of his memories that includes her. There’s a big company with high technical equipments for erasing people’s mind from their loves but it doesn’t work at all! It’s a complex story witch I can’t explain it, and it’s a complex movie too. It’s one of those movies you should see it more than once to get exactly what are they going to do!

You can erase someone from your mind. Getting them out of your heart is another story! I think it was the main message of this movie, maybe you can try to forget some one you loved before, maybe with some techniques you could erase all his/her memories but you can’t do anything for you heart and it will still love him/her! l

I was a little in hurry so I couldn't concentrate and write as much as I liked :D

[sepid12ir]

What Dreams May Come is one of my favorite films that Robin Williams is the first cast in that film. This film is a kind of drama fantasy and romance film released in 1998 in USA.
Chris Neilson is a doctor who marred with Annie. They had 2 wonder children that(who) died in a car accident and 4 years later Chris dies in a natural way and then he goes to heaven. When Chris dies and goes to Heaven he meets Albert and discovers that Heaven is even more wondrous than anything he could have imagined. But his wife is very sad because of these events and she becomes a woman with mental problems and finally she decides to kill herself to go to the next world in order to be with his family. But unfortunately she goes to the hell because she comes to the next world by suicide. But when he finds out his wife had committed suicide, he desperately searches for her spirit, journeying through Heaven and Hell along the way.



really nice writing:10:
but a suggetion, when u r retelling or describing sth all the sentences should follow the same tense. if it is past tense, all of the should follow the structure of past tense. If it is present tense, all of sentences should follow the present tense.
and for retelling the stories, both past n present tenses are recommended. And present tense is usually used to have more effect on readers
now, yr mistakes:10:
who married with: who married Annie
Marry as a verb does not accept any prep: Marry Sb
be careful, these kina sentences are usually used in passive tense n then that'll be: who's married to sb

Wonder: Wonderful

she became a woman with mental problem: She got sick mentally; she got mental problems; she faced mental problems
yr sentence is not wrong grammatically, but I think it's not actually common




What’s the best movie I have ever watched?
As the other friends said I think it’s really hard to choose just one movie for the whole life so I’m going to write about one of my favorite movies not the best one. Choosing he best one is impossible for me!

One of my favorite movies is Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind in witch there’s the story of a man who is going to erase his girlfriend from his mind, he is going to erase a part of his memories that includes her. There’s a big company with high technical equipments for erasing people’s mind from their loves but it doesn’t work at all! It’s a complex story witch I can’t explain it, and it’s a complex movie too. It’s one of those movies you should see it more than once to get exactly what are they going to do!

You can erase someone from your mind. Getting them out of your heart is another story! I think it was the main message of this movie, maybe you can try to forget some one you loved before, maybe with some techniques you could erase all his/her memories but you can’t do anything for you heart and it will still love him/her! l

I was a little in hurry so I couldn't concentrate and write as much as I liked :D



although u were in hurry, it was absolutely great
I gotto watch this movie once more:46:; thanks
I could not catch anything wrong here:10:l

[masoudtr]

hi guys
What’s the best movie I have ever watched?
it is godfather1
it's so beautiful and very nice
it's about boss of mafia that marlonberando play this role
and his sun who is alpacino
it's about relation of family and job

[singleguy]

be careful, these kina sentences are usually used in passive tense n then that'll be: who's married to sb

I couldn't understand what you said! [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] you explain more and set some examples:20:?

[devil_ff2008]

Like all freind I can't choose a film as best movie I've ever watched
But I wanna discribe 2 of best action films
First of them is The Command

This is a story of a rich man who mass 10 of stark people that jailbirded for ever and He buy Them from jail's moderator
Then trasmit Them to a little island and attach a timer bomb to Their foot and tell Them 1 of u that kill others can gain the freedom key
And syncronic install many video camera in island for a great TV program and gain a big money for him
And for know continuance of this story u can go and see this film :31:

And the next film is Resident Evil 3

Oh, This is really a great action film
I can't too discribe this film
Only short of it's story :
T-Virus prevalence in further points of the earth and many people convert to Zombies
A realization group wanna solve the problem and discovery a anti virus for convert zombies to human again
And syncronic they work on Alis project
Alis is a girl that has a weird power and can kill many Zombie
This group wanna make several copy fom Alis to attack to Zombies
And continuance of the story :31:

Some of movies that i seen and like them :
Tokio Drift , 30 Day Of Night , God Father , ...

Sorry for my bad english
Plz catch my mistakes
beforehand thanks from dear Sepid for correction :11:

[masoudtr]

First of them is The Command


it's condemn


syncronic is false

synchronic

[devil_ff2008]

it's condemn


syncronic is false

synchronic

I didn't remember it's name and wrote that
and type errors result of my fast typing

thank u so much
:11:

[sepid12ir]

Like all freindS I can't choose a film as best movie I've ever watched
But I wanna discribe 2 of best action films
First of them is The Cndemn

This is a story of a rich man who massES 10 of stark people that jailbirded for ever and He buy? Them from jail's moderator
Then trasmit? Them to a little island and attach a timer bomb to Their foot and tell Them 1 of u that kill others can gain the freedom key
And syncronic install many video cameraS in island for a great TV program and gain a big money for him
And for know continuance of this story u can go and see this film :31:

And the next film is Resident Evil 3

Oh, This is really a great action film
I can't too discribe this film
Only short of it's story :
T-Virus prevalence in further points of the earth and many people convert to Zombies
A realization group wanna solve the problem and discovery a anti virus for convert zombies to human again
And syncronic they work on Alis project
Alis is a girl that has a weird power and can kill many Zombie
This group wanna make several copy(several copies) fom Alis to attack to Zombies
And continuance of the story :31:

Some of movies that i seen and like them :
Tokio Drift , 30 Day Of Night , God Father , ...

Sorry for my bad english
Plz catch my mistakes
beforehand thanks from dear Sepid for correction :11:











the condemn, ya, a great action movie; Although I'm not into action style, this one attracted me n I really enjoyed watchin that
I also recommend all of u to watch this movie:27: n also Eternal Sunshine which dear karin mentioned. as she said it is sorta complicated n simple at the same time but it should be watched several times to be grasped properly:27: a bit hard to feel it
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about yr English, as I said to dear Singleguy, u guys should be more careful about the tenses u use in yr speeches n words...
in yr words u haven't used 's' for the third person! He Works...He trasmits; he buys
n if u wanted to use past tense u should have used: he bought, he transmitted

as best movie:as the best movie
whenever u use 'best' and 'worst' dun forget to use 'the' before them: the best movie, the worst novel

First of them: the first one; first of all
bcuz u r just mentioning two movies, then it's better to use: 'the first one'; if it was more than two, u could use: first of all

10 of stark people: 10 stark people
no need to use 'of' in here

jailbirded: who were imprisoned
jailbird is noun n here u had to use a verb

And for know continuance: and for knowing the rest
after 'for' u have to use the 'ing form' of the verb: for knowing, for using n ...! and here the word 'continiue' is not correct, 'the rest' is much better

I can't too discribe this film: I can't describe this film either

syncronic: what is it? I couldn't get

happy studying buddy, never say sorry for the mistakes u make:10:l

[sepid12ir]

I couldn't understand what you said! [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] you explain more and set some examples:20:?

well, it's not really common in Parsi language, using passive tenses while among english speakers it is really typical. here is the same; when u are describing sb it's better to have:
he is 40 yrs old, and he is a doctor who's married to an architect
here it is sorta description of a person n it's better to use simple present tense so that readers can feel it better. but by just saying: he is a doctor who married an architect; it is like that u r jumping from present time to the past time so that it may not have a good effect on readers
hope u understood; if not I can explain for u in farsi

[devil_ff2008]

Thx a lot dear Sepid


syncronic: what is it? I couldn't get

Cynchronic
My mean is : Hamzaman
:31:

[singleguy]

Hello everybody
Unfortunately Brain had a serious problem :41: and I'm not ready for the reading activity[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] One of the members should prepare the reading for tomorrow.:21:
as you know the reading should be short and including important points in order to improve our english.please share your ideas before doing that:27:
try to keep the group alive untill tomorrow night:27:
Bye till tomorrow night[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
good luck:11:

[Sha7ab]

Hello everybody
Unfortunately Brain had a serious problem :41: and I'm not ready for the reading activity[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] One of the members should prepare the reading for tomorrow.:21:
as you know the reading should be short and including important points in order to improve our english.please share your ideas before doing that:27:
try to keep the group alive untill tomorrow night:27:
Bye till tomorrow night[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
good luck:11:


Im so sad now for Brain left . I dont know what happened that he had to leave us !
Dear singleguy of cours we can keep alive this topic .
Im ready for reading ...
GL

[hoseinist]

hi guys
brain had a problem so he couldn't preparer a story for the reading activity .
i found a short story but i m gonna ask ur opinion about it:D
maybe other guys have the better one[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]!


Mrs. Black was old and rich. She lived in a splendid house and owned a lot of valuable things. Then she died and there was a big funeral.
Notices were sent out to relatives and friends, and they cane form far and near to attended the funeral.
The service took place in Mrs. Black’ s old church, and then her body was taken back to be buried in a special place in her garden .the hearse carrying her body moved along slowly, followed by the relatives and friends ,the women and children in cars, and the men on foot.
One of Mrs. Black’s cousins saw a poorly dressed man following the hearse and crying bitterly.
The cousin said to him kindly, were you a relative of the dead woman too?
‘No ‘, the man answered.
‘Then why are you crying? the dead woman’ s relative asked.
‘That’s exactly why I’m crying ‘, the poorly dressed man answered.


1-Answer these questions:
1.Who came to Mrs. Block’s funeral?
2.Whom did one of Mrs. Block’s cousins see ?
3.Why was the poorly dressed man crying?

2-Find words in the story which mean about the opposite of:
1.Cruelly
2.Dug up
3.Miserable
4.Sweetly

3- Chose a good title for this story!:D

[devil_ff2008]

Im ready for reading ...
Me 2
I prepare a short story for reading
If all member agree it I can put it for tomorrow activity
:10:


A Box Full of Kisses

The story goes that some time ago, a man punished his 3-year-old daughter for wasting a roll of gold wrapping paper. Money was tight and he became infuriated when the child tried to decorate a box to put under the Christmas tree. Nevertheless, the little girl brought the gift to her father the next morning and said, "This is for you, Daddy"
.....[

sorry I post it before see dear hoseinist's post

[dampayi]

hi friend [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ](16).gif
آقا من یه ذره خیلی زیاد انگیلیسم ضایس!! فقط نخندینا!!!
i'm new entrance!!!!(تازه واردم!!!) [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ](33).gif
and i am leg to improve my bad english!!!(من پایم انگیلیسیمو آره)[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
please help me!
rightly (راستی) !! can u explain to me what should we do here?
for example what is reading activity?

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ](17).gif thanks

[devil_ff2008]

for example what is reading activity?
if u read first post u get all thing
and if can't understand we can tell u
:10:

[Sha7ab]

hi friend [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
آقا من یه ذره خیلی زیاد انگیلیسم ضایس!! فقط نخندینا!!!
i'm new entrance!!!!(تازه واردم!!!) [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
and i am leg to improve my bad english!!!(من پایم انگیلیسیمو آره)[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
please help me!
rightly (راستی) !! can u explain to me what should we do here?
for example what is reading activity?

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] thanks

Wellcome to join our group .
I think your english not bad and i hope it will be better in future .
for get all information of our works in this topic you have to read the first post of the topic.
GoodLuck

[afsane b]

hi guys

brain had a problem so he couldn't preparer a story for the reading activity .
i found a short story but i m gonna ask ur opinion about it:D
maybe other guys have the better one[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]!



Mrs. Black was old and rich. She lived in a splendid house and owned a lot of valuable things. Then she died and there was a big funeral.
Notices were sent out to relatives and friends, and they cane form far and near to attended the funeral.
The service took place in Mrs. Black’ s old church, and then her body was taken back to be buried in a special place in her garden .the hearse carrying her body moved along slowly, followed by the relatives and friends ,the women and children in cars, and the men on foot.
One of Mrs. Black’s cousins saw a poorly dressed man following the hearse and crying bitterly.
The cousin said to him kindly, were you a relative of the dead woman too?
‘No ‘, the man answered.
‘Then why are you crying? the dead woman’ s relative asked.
‘That’s exactly why I’m crying ‘, the poorly dressed man answered.



1-Answer these questions:
1.Who came to Mrs. Block’s funeral?
2.Whom did one of Mrs. Block’s cousins see ?
3.Why was the poorly dressed man crying?


2-Find words in the story which mean about the opposite of:
1.Cruelly
2.Dug up
3.Miserable
4.Sweetly



3- Chose a good title for this story!:D




Ok……..if I'm right, it is a funny story about a dead rich, noble old woman, whose grand funeral make a poor man regret that why he wasn't one of the heirs of her



1.Who came to Mrs. Block’s funeral?


relatives and friends her
2.Whom did one of Mrs. Block’s cousins see ?


Mrs. Black’s cousin saw a poorly dressed man following the hearse and crying bitterly
3.Why was the poorly dressed man crying?


Because he wasn’t Mrs. Black's relatives

2-Find words in the story which mean about the opposite of:
1.Cruelly kindly
2.Dug up buried
3.Miserable splendid
4.Sweetly bitterly

3- Chose a good title for this story


Poor man's dream

[Sha7ab]

1-Answer these questions:
1.Who came to Mrs. Block’s funeral?
her friends and her relatives and a dressed poorly guy
2.Whom did one of Mrs. Block’s cousins see ?
He/She a poorly dressed that was carying MRS Black
3.Why was the poorly dressed man crying?
I dont understand this part of story really , and i cant undestand means of this sentence :
That’s exactly why I’m crying



2-Find words in the story which mean about the opposite of:
1.Cruelly
Kindly
2.Dug up
i dont know
3.Miserable
???
4.Sweetly
bitterly




3- Chose a good title for this story
Hands of destiny

---------------------------
In my opinion this story has deep means and there is difrence between appearance and inside of the story ...


Thank you for chose this story
:11:

[hoseinist]

hi dear legend-of-zelda
thx for ur corporation ....u know , i guess that is why im crying means: that is my reason that im crying

if dear sepideh come she will tell u exactly the correct meaning.:D.

[singleguy]

Thanks dear hoseinist for your good reading:11:.
I prefer not to answer the questions because some friends like afsane had answered the question correctly and completely.
but the meaning of the last sentence is: I'm unhappy because I'm not the relatives of that died woman. because if i was one of her relatives I'd become richer.
I'm not sure let dear sepideh to explain that

[hoseinist]

thx guys,
your answers were very good,honestly i didn't have the answers of the questions like you . (my book don't have any answers !)
but i think the poorly dressed man liked to be one of Mrs Block's relative:D
he was crying for himself, because he wasn't!so he wasn't crying for Mrs Block's dead!:D

[armita2007]

1. Who came to Mrs. Block’s funeral? All friends and relatives came to this funerals from near and far distances.


2. Whome did one of Mrs. Block s cousins see? He saw a poorly dressed man


3.Why was the poorly dressed man crying? Because he was not one of the dead woman s relatives, he was crying.


B)


1.cruelly: friendly


2.dug up: bury


3.miserable: ??(fortunate )


4.sweetly :bitterly

[armita2007]

thanks for your nice texts here

[singleguy]

The 3rd Listening Activity

Hi guys.
first of all try to attend the survey of the topic because the reason is very important for me. I don't know why It is not showed completely [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] I myself tell you the next sentence. That's
ایا مایل به ادامه فعالیت گروه هستید؟

Choose one of the listenings and then try to write it and I guess there is not more answers for the reading let's get into the listening activity. so try to do the listening activity till Tuesday night.send it as a private massage for me. some of them are very long like the 3rd one. so you can not to write that completely. _____________________
Listening 1
level=easy
Duration=00:57
Speed=medium
Subject=Teaching English

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Listening 2
level=medium
Duration=00:56
Speed=fast
Subject=Why I like new jersey


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Listening 3
level=hard
Duration=2:45 (very long)
Speed=very fast
Subject=playing tennis tournaments
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[masoudtr]

منم مواقم مخصوصا چت صوتی
من به این هر روز چند بار سر میزنم
علت اینکه پست هم نمیدم اینه که writting ام واقعا ضعیفه
خیلی های دیگه هم مثل منن
هر اتفاقی افتاد ما رو بی خبر نگذارید

[singleguy]

oh...
I put the listening activity in the last page . Don't forget that:46:

[dampayi]

I put the listening activity in the last page . Don't forget that
hi guys
at first i should say thank u to dear singleguy for put this listening!
and i think the easy one is something like this!:
please correct my mistakes
tnx


hello! my name is .....
i teach english as a second language
in the another state!!! ... ES...
i start teaching ESL for four years
i start it when i started collage
i use to teach on thursdays and fridays for an houre and half every night
most of my students are from ... in mexco
although i ... her studens from chekoslovakia in poland
i realy injoy teaching english
because it let me meet people from other countries
and its very nice to see how the students ...
i realy like a win!!!
i spend a lot of time ; time to teach someone somthings and he finally learn it
it's very exciting


this is all what i could understand from sound!!
i think it was not really easy!!!
at least for me

thanks

[dampayi]

by the way all the ... at the begining of sentence are male akhareshe!!!!!

thanks again

[masoudtr]

ایا مایل به ادامه فعالیت گروه هستید؟
yes
i see this topic recently and i want to continue this topic

[C. Breezy]

I think no one is against this Topic ... however Dear Sadegh left the Site

[masoudtr]

however Dear Sadegh left the Site
who is Sadegh???????

[hoseinist]

he means dear Brain!:D

[C. Breezy]

who is Sadegh???????
Brain
But i got Great news about him .... look at this :
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[brain]

Hi
I miss everyone a lot
how r u guys
whats happend here
I hered this topic will cancel
Oh nooooo
r u sure ???
plz everyone explain me I cant understand
I want to come back soon
maybe 1 week later
:31:

[singleguy]

hi guys
at first i should say thank u to dear singleguy for put this listening!
and i think the easy one is something like this!:
please correct my mistakes
tnx


hello! my name is .....
i teach english as a second language
in the another state!!! ... ES...
i start teaching ESL for four years
i start it when i started collage
i use to teach on thursdays and fridays for an houre and half every night
most of my students are from ... in mexco
although i ... her studens from chekoslovakia in poland
i realy injoy teaching english
because it let me meet people from other countries
and its very nice to see how the students ...
i realy like a win!!!
i spend a lot of time ; time to teach someone somthings and he finally learn it
it's very exciting


this is all what i could understand from sound!!
i think it was not really easy!!!
at least for me

thanks
Please read the rules again. I told you write the listening and send it as a private massage for me.



I will post all the scripts tonight at 11:00 so you yourself should understand your mistakes:27:


Hi
I miss everyone a lot
how r u guys
whats happend here
I hered this topic will cancel
Oh nooooo
r u sure ???
plz everyone explain me I cant understand
I want to come back soon
maybe 1 week later
:31:

hi Brain. I wanted to stop doing activity in this topic but when I saw the result of the survey I decided to countinue:20:

[C. Breezy]

Anyway i'm so worried about it ... we had more members in the past ... but now i just know My self , hoseinist , You ... I don't see others anymore :eh:

[sepid12ir]

well, u guys still need more well-organized plan! u 1st should take it more serious n besides, I do recommend u a book! Vocab or Grammar! I think it would be better for u if u could have a plan for a special book as well!
anyway, hope u dun get desperated, u still can be successful
happy studyin

[Sha7ab]

Anyway i'm so worried about it ... we had more members in the past ... but now i just know My self , hoseinist , You ... I don't see others anymore :eh:


hi man
im here yet and i sent my listening homework for mr singleguy last night
we have to continue our activity in this topic


راستی من انتخاب نظرسنجی رو اشتباه زدم . هواسم نبود اولیو زدم . اونو به حساب نیارین

[singleguy]

Listening activity's answers.




Karin
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Hey Hi



The first one : l

Hello. My name is Stephanie. I teach English as a second language. In the United States we call that ESL. I’ve been teaching ESL for four years. I started it when I started collage. I use to teach on Thursdays and Fridays for an hour and a half every night. Most of my students are from Guatemala and Mexico, although I’ve also had students from Czechoslovakia and Poland. I really enjoy teaching English because it let’s me meet people from other countries and it’s very nice to see how the students progress. I really like it when I spend a lot of time to teach someone something and they finally learn it. It’s very exiting.





and the second one: l



This is why I like living in New Jersey. New Jersey is about sixty percent undeveloped which means we have the Pine Barrens and we have what they call the horse country. We have beautiful areas that look like parts the English country side and we have New York and Philadelphia just like an hour away so it’s the best of world. But the other thing that makes New Jersey interesting is we have the most Atlantic --- of any states in the Union. Just in one weekend I can go to -----like ---- --- different places for that there is a door gate temple in king ---. There is a Sophie center. What else, there is just about every religion you can think about New Jersey and every --- background so that’s make it interesting to me.






The third one was really long I didn't have enough time to do it :D


Good luck





Afsane b

This is why I like really the New Jersey, New Jersey is about 60 percent undeveloped which means we have the ……and we have the corpse of the whole country. We have beautiful areas look like parts of the English country side and we have new York in so far away just one hour away so the best of transport but the other thing that make new jersey interesting is we have the most ……University of one state in union. Just in one weekend I can go to the ………by chanting ……………difficult places for dorget temples and king states which they are endemism. There is a soofi center and what else there just about every religious you can think of in New Jersey and every …background so that make it interesting to me

This one was too difficult for me

Anyways thank u





Hello, my name is Stephanie, I teach English as a second language and in United States we call it ESL, I've been teaching ESL for 4 years, I started when I started college. I used to teach on Thursdays and Fridays for an hour and a half every night, most of my students are from Kualomala and Mexico. Also I also help students from checkslovaki and Poland. I really enjoy teaching English because it lets me meet people from other countries and it is very nice to see how the students progress, I really like it when I spend a lot of time, try to teach someone something and they finally learn it, it is very exciting.









Legend of Zelda
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hello , my name is Safini(!) i teach English at a secound language.

In United stats we call the ESO .

I have been ... ESO for four years , I started when I started college .

I use to teach and ... in fridays for our in an our in a half every night .

most of my students are from GOVATMALA and MEXICo . also i ... students from CHEKSLOAKI and POLAND .

I very enjoy teaching English because it lets me meet people from other countries and it is very nice to see how the students ...

I really like when I spend a lot of time try to teach someone , something and finally learned is very







Fara360
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I would definitely say that tennis is my fav sport. My parents ...... played it .... in college. My mom is really into it and she plays tennis about 3 times a week at least plays a team and ..... has some kind of ...... she plays of. she .... and stuff like that every time.but she kind of .... racket team of my brother made of ... when I was around 5 years old. and i m playing some span. she started .....and then the same i just ... a swim.... pro there.... turned me in high school teacher. and so i never ... so long and he is a same pro he is actually the same couch in the men s team high school and so he taught me basic of everything. you know and i think he ........but i played for some high school matches. I played menacing maches but i played the whole ..... tournament that you got points ..... ranking ......year. so one year i decided that i would try to do that .... spent some tournament..... and i played my first tournament and a ..... round i won 6/1 6/1 and i got .... around 6/0 6/0 that is ok. That is also pretty good cuz if less people is better that you, ... doesnt matter cuz ... play for twice ... for half as... is still upper than you....if you can. it doesnt even matter. but i think ... how to play 3 tournament a year and i played 1 tournament and i lost 1 tournamentlike i said. and also i played second tournament. ..........and i got there and turned all of .... entire tournament. also there the people around of you ... tournament. That was ... great opportunity cuz if i win then i wanna to tournament a .. match. so i can be one guy, I mean if i dont who cares. so any... points where you finish ... get points anyway. so ... against drop out and this give me....... .......like way i got there ... match ... 10 at night is it ridicules! so got there and ... alot better that me... mental angle on the match. basically he .. my... i think it was 6/2 6/1 and that was .... that hour... we got points .....on the U.S TA and .... part of ... i think now.... thousand billion or sth like that . that was pretty good and there were alot of funny even though. i dont want anything.







Masoudrejae
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hello my name is estefani

i teach english as a second language

in a United States we call that esa

i've been teaching esa four four years

i started when i started

COLLEGE

i use to teach on thursdays and fridays for an hour an half

every night

most of my student are from Guatemala and mexico

although i waso had student from poland

i realy enjoy teaching english because let's me me people from other countries

and it's very nice to see how the student progress

i realy like win

i spend a lotof time

time to teach someone somthing

and i finally

learn that it's very exciting





C.Breezy
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Hello

Hello
My name is Stephani . I teach English as a second language . In the United States we call the ESL . I've been teaching ESL for four years . I started when I started College . I used to teach on Thursdays and Fridays for an hour an a half every night . Most of my students are from ...?... and Mexico . Although I've also had students from Czech Slovakia and Poland . I really enjoy teaching English because it let me meet people from other countries and it's very nice to see how the students paragraph . I really like it when I spend a lot of time , time to teach someone something and they finally learn it . It's very exciting







Single Boy
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Hello. My name is Stephanie. I teach English as a second language. In the US we call it ESL . I’ve been teaching ESL for 4 years. I started when I started the college. I used to teach on Tuesdays and Fridays for an hour and a half every night. Most of my students are from Guatemala and Mexico although I have students from chokoslovakiya and Poland. I really enjoy teaching English because it let to meet people from other countries and it’s very nice to see how the students…….. I really like it when I spend a lot of time to teach S.O teach sth and they finally learn it. It’s very exciting.



Hoseinist
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Listening 1
Subject=Teaching English
Hello my name is Defeny ,I teach English as a second language in the united sates ,we called the ESO .I ……… ESO for 4 years I started when I started college, I used to teach on Thursdays and Fridays for an hour and half every night.
Most of my students are from Goadomala and Mexico although I also had students from Checoslevacia and Pollen. I really enjoyed teaching English because it let me meet people from other countries, and it is very nice to see ,how the students…………………..I really ………..I spend a lot of time, time to teach someone something and finally learn it ,it is very exciting.



Dampayi
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hello! my name is .....
i teach english as a second language
in the another state!!! ... ES...
i start teaching ESL for four years
i start it when i started collage
i use to teach on thursdays and fridays for an houre and half every night
most of my students are from ... in mexco
although i ... her studens from chekoslovakia in poland
i realy injoy teaching english
because it let me meet people from other countries
and its very nice to see how the students ...
i realy like a win!!!
i spend a lot of time ; time to teach someone somthings and he finally learn it
it's very exciting






The main scripts:21:




1



hello, my name is Stephanie. i teach English as a second language. in the United States we call that E-S-L. i've been teaching E-S-L for four years. i started when i started college. i used to teach on Thursdays and Fridays for an hour and half every night. most of my students are from Guatemala and Mexico. although i've also had students from Czechoslovakia and Poland. i really enjoy teaching English because it lets me meet people from other countries, and it's very nice to see how the students progress. i really like it when i spend a lot of time trying to teach someone something and they finally learn it. it's very exciting.







2

this is why i like living in New Jersey. New Jersey is about sixty percent undeveloped. which means we have the Pine Barrens, and we have what they call the Horse Country. we have beautiful areas that look like parts of the english country side. and we have New York and Philadelphia just like a hour away. so it's the best of both worlds. but the other thing that makes New Jersey interesting is we have the most ethnic diversity of any state in the union. just in one weekend, i could go to a tibetan buddhism_ tibetan buddhist _ like chanting. actually i know two or three different places for that. there's a Dorga temple in Kingston which is a_ hinduism. there is a Sufi center... what else? there's just about every religion you could think of in New Jersey and every ethnic background. so that makes it interesting to me.











3

i would definitely say that tennis is my favorite sport. uh my parents both played it, played in college. my mum's really into it, and she plays tennis about three times a week at least. plays with the team. and she always has some kind of story about the ladies that she plays with. and uh she goes down to Florida and stuff like that. has a good time. but she kind of uh basically gave a racket to me and my brother, made us kind of start playing when i was around five years old. i've been playing since then. uh she started_ she taught us at first, and then the same uh_ i had a_ ... we went to a swim club called Minisink and the pro there turned out to be my high school teacher. and uh so i knew him for like so long. and he was the same pro_ he's actually the same coach for the men's team high school. and so uh he taught me basically everything yaknow. and i think he's a great guy, but some people have problems with him. but i would play_ played for some high school matches. i played uh Minisink matches. but i played_ like the whole idea is you want to play tournaments that you get points. and you get like a ranking. and you play a certain amount of tournaments a year. so one year, i decided that i would try to do that.

so i started playing some tournaments. and i played my first tournament, and i kicked butt in the first round. i won six one six on. and then i got whooped at the second round, and lost six zero six zero. but that's okay. i still felt pretty good because i lost_ if you loose to people who are better than you, it really doesn't really matter, coz they might have been playing for twice as long as you. some people play it for half as long as you and still a lot better than you. but i mean, what can you do. if you've played the best you can, it doesn't really matter.

but as things uh_ i had to play three tournaments a year. and uh i played one tournament and i lost the second round like i said. and then i was gonna play a second tournament. so i signed up for it, and it was in some place about half hour away form my home. and i got there, and it turned out i was only the second person signed up for the entire tournament. and so there_ the people who ran it were like "do you even want to bother playing the tournament?" and i was like_ "let's it a great opportunity because if i win then i've won a tournament only with one match. so i can beat one guy, and even if i don't, like who cares." so_ and_ cuz you get points for when you finish. so a runner-up gets the points anyway. so i was kind of hoping that the other guy i was gonna playing against was gonna dropout,and just give me the trophy. but he didn't. so anyway we went out and played, and we didn't even start_ we started like way after because i got there for a seven o'clock match. we didn't start playing until like ten at night. it was ridiculous. so uh we got out there and realized that this guy was a lot better than me. so it probably hurt my whole mental angle on the match. so basically he worked my butt. i think it was six two six one. and (xx xx) it was probably over in less than an hour. but i mean who cares, cuz i got my_ i got a little runner-up trophy and got points to be on the U-S-T-A. and the part of that_ they have like a ranking. i think now. i'm probably really in the thousand billionth, or something like that. that's pretty good. and it was a lot of fun, even though i didn't win anything.










Good luck:11:

[singleguy]

Hi
Thanks for doing the listening activity. I should tell you the subject of the writing activity. I'm really sorry because I didn't have enough time to ask your ideas about the subject of reading activity. so try to send me your idea about the subject of the next writing activity.
The the subject I choosed is
Talk About Your Favorite City You'd Like To Visit
Oh ...And one more thing, Sepideh and I are going to change the schedule of studying in near future. We are going to add some methods to our schedule.
have fun:11: and good luck:10:

[C. Breezy]

Hello

My name is Stephani . I teach English as a second language . In the United StatesMexico . Although I've also had students from Czech Slovakia and Poland . I really enjoy teaching English because it let me meet people from other countries and it's very nice to see how the students paragraph . I really like it when I spend a lot of time , time to teach someone something and they finally learn it . It's very exciting we call the ESL . I've been teaching ESL for four years . I started when I started College . I used to teach on Thursdays and Fridays for an hour an a half every night . Most of my students are from ...?... and
Oh ... i think there is a problem here ... i sent the complete text to you ... and looks like some of the words' place are changed ... I don't know what's the problem but it wasn't what i heard

[C. Breezy]

Talk About Your Favorite City You'd Like To Visit
MmMmMmMmMmM ...
I really like my own town ... but as a new City to live in i think i may like Detroit city in US ... because my favorite team is for this City ... so i can watch their Matches live and in their Stadium ... I can clap for them and shout :31:
Also I there i can connect to internet with a real high speed internet connection ... not like here in I.R iran

[masoudtr]

hi guys
i realy like live in a hollywood city
because in this city there are a lot of superstar and well off and well known people live in this city
and maybe your NEIGHBOR was brad pitt or benaffleck
nobody know mybe you meet them and they give you their sign & their photo
and when you walk in street you can see a star in FLOOR that stars is for actor and actress
and every thing is nice and clean
you can go to best cinema and you can watch the movie in a best situation

[C. Breezy]

hi guys
i realy like live in a hollywood city
because in this city there are a lot of superstar and well off and well known people live in this city
and maybe your NEIGHBOR was brad pitt or benaffleck
nobody know mybe you meet them and they give you their sign & their photo
and when you walk in street you can see a star in FLOOR that stars is for actor and actress
and every thing is nice and clean
you can go to best cinema and you can watch the movie in a best situation
ooh ! he is right ... And also as you said i think New York is also great ... maybe you neighbor is Jay-Z or Busta Rhymes , 50 cent , Lil Wayne ...
and you can hear them while practicing :31:l

[singleguy]

The Big Apple
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Do you know which city is the most exciting city in the world? Most of visitors say that New York is the most exciting city. People often call New York ‘The Big Apple’. More than twenty million people visit New York every year. When we talk about New York we think about Manhattan. But New York City has five boroughs: Manhattan, Brooklyn, The Bronx, Queens and Staten Island.



There are a lot of things in New York to see. If you go to New York, one of the places you should definitely see is Central park, a quite place to relax and get away from the noise and crowds of the city. There are also other interesting places to visit in Manhattan like Chinatown and Greenwich Village. And if you get to Brooklyn you can see Coney Island including The Cyclone roller-coaster, The New York Aquarium, Coney Island Beach, etc.



If you look up in the street the only things that you can see are the skyscrapers. Some of them are really beautiful and modern. Some of them give you a great view of the city from the top. Some of them are world famous. Some of the most famous buildings are The Statue of Liberty, The empire state building and the United Nation Building.



You can buy every thing you want in New York. And some of the people say, ‘yes, and every thing you don’t want, too!’ There are more than 17000 or more restaurants, cafes, fast food shops and food stalls in New York. You can eat in New York every night for fifty years and never visit the same café or restaurant twice. You can also find from every country in the world.



What can you do after dinner in the evening? You can go to the theater or the ballet, or perhaps go to a concert. New York is a nice city for jazz and rock concerts. Americans also like to watch an exciting baseball game. If you want to see a baseball game, go to the Shea stadium, the home of New York Mets. And you van also visit a museum. New York’s museums have the work of some of the world’s most famous artists. By the way you can do something different every night after dinner as an entertainment.



New York is always changing. You can hear noise of buildings going up or coming down all the time. Cars and buses stop and start, and the policeman blow whistles at drivers. The history of the city and something that you can see now, the skyscrapers, the subway, the shops, the museums, the restaurants, and the people themselves are all the things that make New York the most exciting city in the world.











And let me add something from my self. I watched a film last year from New York. The film related to 200 years ago I guess. I can’t remember the certain year. But all the things were terrible. For example all of the people attacked each other in order to kill each other because they hadn’t come from the same place. The main job of most of them was stealing the things and some other things that I can’t say. But look at New York now. You can see the changes in these 2 centuries. That’s unbelievable. And let’s take a look at out country with the age of thousand years. Look at the history of Iran and compare it with the present time. Some days one of the greatest cities in the world was my city and the biggest bazaar in the world was in my city but now…. . Thinking about these things makes me cry in times.



I hope you enjoyed my writing. It was too long but my goal was to improve my professional writing ability. Please tell me my mistakes.

[afsane b]

My favorite city that I wish to visit, at least once in my lifetime, is Barcelona, the most vibrant city in the north eastern of Spain. The touristy city for resting and relaxing in spring or autumn. It possesses lots of merits that attract numerous people from all over the world. It has elegant hotels and restaurants, trendy shops and bars, superb beaches, architectural masterworks, famous museums and art galleries, popular hot spots and meeting places, outstanding street performances, excellent climates and the best places for party goers who want to dance all over the night:46:

[sepid12ir]

hi guys
i realy like live in a hollywood city
because in this city there are a lot of superstarS and well off and well known people live in this city
and maybe your NEIGHBOR was brad pitt or benaffleck
nobody know mybe you meet them and they give you their sign & their photo
and when you walk in street you can see a star in FLOOR that stars is for actor and actress
and every thing is nice and clean
you can go to best cinemaS and you can watch the movie in a best situation

Hey buddy, since it is the writing section we also go thru the mistakes if u dun mind:46:l
like live: like living
after the verb 'like' you should use either 'ing' form of the verb or 'infinitive' but there is a difference in the usage:
Important
Like + ing: when u r talking about sth general, sth that you like : I like swimming: generally, as a sport I like swimming
like + infinitive: when u talking about yr desire at the moment: I like to swim: it means that at the moment u wish that there was a swiming pool n u could dive in n swim

nobody know : nobody knows
after 'nobody, somebody, no one,some one, everybody, everyone' the verbs come in singular form

to best : to the best
after 'best, worst' dun forget to use 'the':46:l

[sepid12ir]

The Big Apple
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Do you know which city is the most exciting city in the world? Most of visitors say that New York is the most exciting city. People often call New York ‘The Big Apple’. More than twenty million people visit New York every year. When we talk about New York we think about Manhattan. But New York City has five boroughs: Manhattan, Brooklyn, The Bronx, Queens and Staten Island.



There are a lot of things in New York to see. If you go to New York, one of the places you should definitely see is Central park, a quite place to relax and get away from the noise and crowds of the city. There are also other interesting places to visit in Manhattan like Chinatown and Greenwich Village. And if you get to Brooklyn you can see Coney Island including The Cyclone roller-coaster, The New York Aquarium, Coney Island Beach, etc.



If you look up in the street the only things that you can see are the skyscrapers. Some of them are really beautiful and modern. Some of them give you a great view of the city from the top. Some of them are world famous. Some of the most famous buildings are The Statue of Liberty, The empire state building and the United Nation Building.



You can buy every thing you want in New York. And some of the people say, ‘yes, and every thing you don’t want, too!’ There are more than 17000 or more restaurants, cafes, fast food shops and food stalls in New York. You can eat in New York every night for fifty years and never visit the same café or restaurant twice. You can also find from every country in the world.



What can you do after dinner in the evening? You can go to the theater or the ballet, or perhaps go to a concert. New York is a nice city for jazz and rock concerts. Americans also like to watch an exciting baseball game. If you want to see a baseball game, go to the Shea stadium, the home of New York Mets. And you van also visit a museum. New York’s museums have the work of some of the world’s most famous artists. By the way you can do something different every night after dinner as an entertainment.



New York is always changing. You can hear noise of buildings going up or coming down all the time. Cars and buses stop and start, and the policeman blow whistles at drivers. The history of the city and something that you can see now, the skyscrapers, the subway, the shops, the museums, the restaurants, and the people themselves are all the things that make New York the most exciting city in the world.











And let me add something from my self. I watched a film last year from New York. The film related to 200 years ago I guess. I can’t remember the certain year. But all the things were terrible. For example all of the people attacked each other in order to kill each other because they hadn’t come from the same place. The main job of most of them was stealing the things and some other things that I can’t say. But look at New York now. You can see the changes in these 2 centuries. That’s unbelievable. And let’s take a look at out country with the age of thousand years. Look at the history of Iran and compare it with the present time. Some days one of the greatest cities in the world was my city and the biggest bazaar in the world was in my city but now…. . Thinking about these things makes me cry in times.



I hope you enjoyed my writing. It was too long but my goal was to improve my professional writing ability. Please tell me my mistakes.




wow, really great n impressive:10:...ya! it's been a while I'm reading about Iran's history! wow. as u said it can even burst u into cry:41:...anyway, I have always told u, u r pretty well in English. I could not catch any important mistake






My favorite city that I wish to visit, at least once in my lifetime, is Barcelona, the most vibrant city in the north eastern of Spain. The touristy city for resting and relaxing in spring or autumn. It possesses lots of merits that attract numerous people from all over the world. It has elegant hotels and restaurants, trendy shops and bars, superb beaches, architectural masterworks, famous museums and art galleries, popular hot spots and meeting places, outstanding street performances, excellent climates and the best places for party goers who want to dance all over the night:46:



hey Afsaneh, how r u doing my dear friend:11:l
u've improved a lot:27: great writing! could not find any mistake in yr writing either:31:l

[afsane b]

hey Afsaneh, how r u doing my dear friend:11:l
u've improved a lot:27: great writing! could not find any mistake in yr writing either:31:l
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Hi dear, thank you so much, that is kind of you:11:

[C. Breezy]

Yes ... a dear singleguy said ... it's completely reverse about Iran

[محمد88]

.oh my God...such a useful topic
?I've just seen it....could anyone do me a favor and tell me what is the story here
:46:I wanna join this group

[singleguy]

.oh my God...such a useful topic
?I've just seen it....could anyone do me a favor and tell me what is the story here
:46:I wanna join this group

I'll describe that for you by a private massage



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Please finish your writing activity till tonight. The activities will be stop untill I tell you the new schedule. as I told you sepideh brain and I are going to add some methods to our schedule
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befor starting the new schedule, you need to get these books because we are going to study them:


Elementary Vocabulary By B J THOMAS

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and if you want to download that, this is the link

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English grammar in use
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and if you want to download that, this is the link:


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we are going to countinue reading activity by a book . could someone suggest me a great book for reading? It shoudn't be hard for us

[C. Breezy]

that's 74 MB ?!?!? WoW !!

[masoudtr]

I
that's 74 mb ?!?!? Wow !!


i downloaded both of them
but i suggest you to buy this book
it's very useful book & cheaper than onother english book

[C. Breezy]

i downloaded both of them
but i suggest you to buy this book
it's very useful book & cheaper than onother english book

Yes ... It's Clear that reading a book is easier than a e-book :31:
but it's hard for me to buy this book ... because i have exams after exams these days :45:l

[Sha7ab]

I'll buy this book too. i hope this book can help improve my English . can it ?
:d

[C. Breezy]

ooooH ! I have a some good news and Some bad news... I found a book named "Essential Grammar In Use " it's exactly that book ... but it's Second edition but what you introduced is Third Edition ... I hope they don't differ from each other that much

[sepid12ir]

to assure u guys, I shall say Grammar in use is an absolutely a perfect bood which can definitely help u to improve yr English. it is definitely worth paying. Dun doubt

[C. Breezy]

to assure u guys, I shall say Grammar in use is an absolutely a perfect bood which can definitely help u to improve yr English. it is definitely worth paying. Dun doubt
Is it the same as " Essential Grammar in Use" ??
Seconf Edition
Raymond Murphy

??؟؟

[sepid12ir]

Is it the same as " Essential Grammar in Use" ??
Seconf Edition
Raymond Murphy

??؟؟

well, there shouldn't be a huge difference. I've just had Third Edition, not sure about the changes

[afsane b]

I think guys here are in higher level than elementary vocabulary book


Don’t you think so?

[singleguy]

I think guys here are in higher level than elementary vocabulary book


Don’t you think so?

yes you're right but I guess there are members in this group who need to start from this book. If not, tell me to choose another book. sepideh told me that the 504 book is a little heavy for the group and I agreed her idea.
but If We study well and quickly, we can finish this book sooner and start studying a harder one:20:.

[afsane b]

yes you're right but I guess there are members in this group who need to start from this book. If not, tell me to choose another book. sepideh told me that the 504 book is a little heavy for the group and I agreed her idea.
but If We study well and quickly, we can finish this book sooner and start studying a harder one:20:.



I don’t know how you are going to study words by this way, since memorizing them wouldn’t be enough, members should be able to use them in writing and speaking in the appropriate way


I've studied 504 and elementary vocab and think 504 is more efficient and worth putting time and effort in
:46:

[sepid12ir]

I don’t know how you are going to study words by this way, since memorizing them wouldn’t be enough, members should be able to use them in writing and speaking in the appropriate way


I've studied 504 and elementary vocab and think 504 is more efficient and worth putting time and effort in

:46:

we've studied 504 together:27:ya, I do remember...I should mention that Afsaneh is really in love with 504:10:
but Afsaneh, dun just consider yrself, there are some guys here who are good enough to go thru 504 but not everyone here n for those who are Elementary, if they just jump into 504 they may lose their enthusiasim since the book is hard with sorta heavy examples. dun forget we were Intermediate students when we started studying 504:46:
And dun be in hurry, Singleguy will let u know about the plans he has in his mind; We are not just going thru the words. there will be definitely some examples n writing along with the new words:46:l
n besides, reviewing has always worked. So I think by studying together we can get a good result even if we go thru some well-studied books:46: n step by step we can go thru some intact books:10:l

[afsane b]

:20: okkkkkkkk

I'm looking forward to hearing your plan:46:

[FARA360]

Hey guys, what s up? U havent made a decision yet! :31:
Well, I think 504 and English Grammer in Use would be the best choices. but what about reading book?
I recommend u Effective Reading or Step to understanding(as i said to singleguy(
:10:

[hoseinist]

hi my friends
i think just like Fara360 ,504 is the best book !:D
:10:
but it might be a good idea to use vocabulary in use(intermediate)book at first.:D

[extreme2006gh]

ooooH ! I have a some good news and Some bad news... I found a book named "Essential Grammar In Use " it's exactly that book ... but it's Second edition but what you introduced is Third Edition ... I hope they don't differ from each other that much

I m studing essential grammar in use third edition . I think it s very helpul .
third edition n second ediion have some differences but they aren t much
third edition has just some more lesson n some exercises has changed

[C. Breezy]

But i don't think anything ... I will accept everything you say :27:l

[C. Breezy]

I m studing essential grammar in use third edition . I think it s very helpul .
third edition n second ediion have some differences but they aren t much
third edition has just some more lesson n some exercises has changedso I don't join in the lessons which aren't in my book :31:

[afsane b]

Hey guys, what s up? U havent made a decision yet! :31:

Well, I think 504 and English Grammer in Use would be the best choices. but what about reading book?
I recommend u Effective Reading or Step to understanding(as i said to singleguy(

:10:


i do agrre with step to underestand, i think it has four levels, i think the two last are bette:11:r:31:

[masoudtr]

i am so ASTOUND
i downloaded two book in last page
and i bought 504 book
and now you talk about another book
JESUSCHRIST i don't have enough money or time to buy onother book
please start the lesson

[brain]

Hello Everybody
New Studying Schedule Will Start In Next Week.
Plz only wait
:31:
we want to improve last Schedule
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I have an idea, we can do it till the Schedule will ready
that is : Complete the story
I will start a Story and everybody continues that with 1 or 2 sentences
OK?
if is it good plz tell or it is not good tell another idea to do
:31:
:11:

[masoudtr]

it's very bad idea
we have this subject before
but suddenly stop because no one want to continue this

[FARA360]

Hello Everybody
New Studying Schedule Will Start In Next Week.
Plz only wait
:31:
we want to improve last Schedule
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I have an idea, we can do it till the Schedule will ready
that is : Complete the story
I will start a Story and everybody continues that with 1 or 2 sentences
OK?
if is it good plz tell or it is not good tell another idea to do
:31:
:11:


That s a good idea! Go on
:10:

[brain]

why
ok dear
so what can we do for this week
plz tell ur idea
:31:

[brain]

plz u start FARA360
OK ?
:31:
or other one start that
I think u dont like it
no problem
:31:

[masoudtr]

i have better idea to improve your english grammer
plz dl this


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The Complete English Grammar Series
Video | English | Elearning | 1.70 GB



Video Aided Instruction’s English Grammar Series makes the tricky rules of English grammar easier to learn than ever before — whether you’re new to English or you’ve been speaking it for years!
The 10 programs in this series are each divided into 3 to 5 short lessons, making them perfect for classroom use or self-study. They’re also ideal for reviewing forgotten grammar or preparing for many verbal standardized tests such as the SAT, TOEFL, GED, and GRE. Plus, they can really help you improve your grades in school or your performance on the job!








Video Aided Instruction’s English Grammar Series makes the tricky rules of English grammar easier to learn than ever before — whether you’re new to English or you’ve been speaking it for years!
The 10 programs in this series are each divided into 3 to 5 short lessons, making them perfect for classroom use or self-study. They’re also ideal for reviewing forgotten grammar or preparing for many verbal standardized tests such as the SAT, TOEFL, GED, and GRE. Plus, they can really help you improve your grades in school or your performance on the job!
Using easy-to-follow examples and practice exercises from everyday life, this series can help you master even the most complicated English grammar topics!
the 10 programs in this series are:
* English Grammar: Sentence Structure
* English Grammar: Parts of Speech
* English Grammar: Sentence Complements
* English Grammar: Verbs
* English Grammar: Pronouns
* English Grammar: Agreement
* English Grammar: Modifiers
* English Grammar: Parallel Structure
* English Grammar: Punctuation
* English Grammar: Spelling & Capitalization


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[FARA360]

why
ok dear
so what can we do for this week
plz tell ur idea
:31:
That might be a good idea to have some readings or a story and then to discuss about that, during this week...... as we did before
:10:

[afsane b]

Have you read select readings book? it has some essays that we can study by ourselves then debate about them in the group, in my opinion pre-intermediate level would be ok for here:46:.


If not, I'll follow your decisions:31:

[Sha7ab]

I have an idea for reading activity :
we can read a book completely or a chapter of that in a term.
this book can be about anything like "The Bram Stoker's Dracula" that we can read a page of that for each session .

Its funny ! ist it ? :d

[brain]

select readings book
Im finding that in Internet but I couldent yet
did u find it in internet
Signleguy said to me that is ery good book

we can read a page of that for each session
Hi
what do u mean ?? only read that and do not do anything work????

That might be a good idea to have some readings or a story and then to discuss about that, during this week
hmmmm ... it is goood .... but everybody has one idea ... tonight we select one of them and start it
:31:

[afsane b]

Im finding that in Internet but I couldent yet
did u find it in internet
Signleguy said to me that is ery good book


:31:




I have no idea about its source in internet; I've read just the book,


It s worth reading:20:

[armita2007]

I can suggest this book"discovery"it can be useful
thanks

[brain]

Hi Hi
Signleguy and me are discussing abt group
we have some problems with some activityes ...like Speaking
we(group) shuold find some methods or books or .... to do activities better
so plz share ur ideas abt 4 abilities
READING
WRITING
SPEAKING
LISTENING
Really thx
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Dera Armita is "Discovery" for reading ? or grammer

[masoudtr]

for reading i suggest we choose one book and read in one week one lesson then in yahoo talk about this lesson that is speaking
and choose the subject then write about this subject

[afsane b]

:20:Hey pals


:31:When shall we start our studying?

[C. Breezy]

Hey pals

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] shall we start our studying


HmmmMmhmmm
looks like next week

[Sha7ab]

plz hurry up y friends... we have no time
anyway we are waiting ....................
GL

[C. Breezy]

As all of you know , We are close to Norouz days ... I think it can be a good thing to talk about it until our main Schedule Starts
what's your Opinion ... I don't have anything to do these days ... Specially now that this topic is in Stand By Mode :31:

[saeed_cpu_full]

ببخشيد فارسي تايپ ميكنم
منم هستم ...

[C. Breezy]

ببخشيد فارسي تايپ ميكنم
منم هستم ... Geeee ! I'm Glad to see new Members
BTW dear friends If you think I'm talking more than enough tell me ... I don't want to Bother you ... that's my habit to talking and Monkeying around :14: , But if you say "that's Enough!" I will STOP! :28:l

[FARA360]

Geeee ! I'm Glad to see new Members
BTW dear friends If you think I'm talking more than enough tell me ... I don't want to Bother you ... that's my habit to talking and Monkeying around :14: , But if you say "that's Enough!" I will STOP! :28:l
No that s cool. Keep talking! It s good to improve your speaking and writing!
If I were u, I would talk much more cuz u re free now!
:31::31:
:10:

[hoseinist]

Hi dear Breezy

i don't think so ,u are very lively and playful ,so that is why the group is lively:10::D

[brain]

Hi every one
I have good news for ya
The new schedule is ready and we want to show u tonight so just wait
:31:
Singleguy or me will explain more abt that in new post

[brain]

New Schedule Became Ready
:26:
Hi to all
Congratulation !!!!

Finally the New Schedule became ready and you can read it in the First post
There are some points about the schedule that I should tell you:
This schedule is Farsi now and we will prepare it in English a few days later.
Notice : againest the schedule, will start the reading on Saturday and according to schedule we will work on Reading activity for 4days (untill Wednesday)
and after that The group will close untill Farvadin 5th because our New Year will begin and all of us are busy. and on Farvadin 5th we will continue the schedule

Good Luck
:11:

[Sha7ab]

I readed the schedule of our activities and its really perfect .
I hope we can improve my English together and help each other in this way .
Thank Brain , Sepid and singleguy for the positive works.

[singleguy]

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Thanks to dear Sepideh who prepared the English essay of the first post. Don't see just me and Brain that tell you the latest news about this group. If Sepideh leave this group I think the group won't exist anymore:20:.
I prepared the reading and I'll put that for you tonight.
I want extreme2006gh and afsane b to answer the activities of the reading together :10:on Tuesday evening. nobody else should answer the reading activities in the topic. just afsane b and extreme2006gh should do that.
and one more thing. please send your ideas about the subject of the Writing activity to brain or me.
have fun
Single Boy:11:

[masoudtr]

obody else should answer the reading activities in the topic. just afsane b and extreme2006gh should do that.
why?

..........

[C. Breezy]

why?

..........
it's the schedule of the group ... this week is their turn , maybe next week it'll be Your turn or mine ?! :14:
I think you can read the passage but our friends afsane b and extreme2006gh will be asked to answer the questions

[singleguy]

here is your reading activity. I know it's pretty long but it can improve our English really well.
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It’s in supporting one another that two hands find strength
Abdiliaahi Muuse
Somali sage (1890-1966)


Student learning teams
By John N. Gardner and A. Jerome Jeweler
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From your college experience


Research has shown that college students can learn as much, or more, from peers(1) as they do from instructors and textbooks. When students work effectively in a supportive group, the experience can be a very powerful way to improve academic achievement and satisfaction with the learning experience.

Recent interviews with college students at Harvard university revealed that nearly every senior who had been part of a study group considered this experience crucial to his or her academic progress and success. The list below describes several important activities you and your student group or learning team can collaborate on:


Activities for a learning team
1
Sharing class notes. Team up with (2) other students immediately after class to share and compare notes. One of your teammates may have picked up (3) something you missed or vice versa (4).

2
Comparing ideas about assigned readings. After completing each week’s readings, team up with other students to compare your highlighting and margin notes.


3
Doing library research. Studies show that many students are unfamiliar with library research and sometimes experience “library anxiety.” Forming library research teams is an active way to develop a social support group for reducing this fear and for locating and sharing information.

4
Meeting with the instructor. Having your team visit the instructor during office hours to seek additional assistance in preparing for exams is an effective team learning strategy for several reasons. If you are shy it may be easier to see an instructor in the company of other students.

5
Reviewing test results. After receiving test results, the members of a learning team can review their individual tests together to help one another identify the source of their mistakes and to identify any “model” answers that received maximum credit.

Not all learning teams, however, are equally effective. Sometimes group work is unsuccessful or fails to reach its full potential because insufficient thought was given to how teams should be formed or how they should function. The following suggestions are strategies for maximizing the power of peer collaboration.

1
In forming teams, seek peers who will contribute quality and variety. Choosing only your friends or classmates who have similar interests and lifestyles can often result in a learning group that is more likely to get off track (5) and onto topics that have nothing to do with the learning task

2
Keep your group size small (three to six classmates). Small groups allow for more face-to-face interaction and eye contact and less opportunity for any individual to shirk his or her responsibility. (6) Also, it’s much easier for small groups to get together outside of class.

3
Hold individual team members accountable for contributing to the learning of their teammates.

This course may be the perfect place for you to form learning teams and start putting principles of good team work into practice (7). The teamwork skills you build in this course can be applied to your future courses, particularly those which you find most difficult. National survey shows that being able to work effectively in teams is one of the most important and valued skills in today’s work world.
__________________________________________________ __________________
(1) Peer: classmates
(2) Team up with: get together with
(3) Picked up: understood
(4) Vice versa: just the opposite, i.e., you may have picked up something your classmates missed
(5)get off track: become distracted or lose focus
(6)shirk his or her responsibility: not do the work he or she agreed to do
(7)Putting principles into practice: make someone responsible for


__________________________________________________ ___________
True (T), false (f), or impossible to know (I)

One of the main purposes of the reading is to encourage students to form learning teams
-------
According to the article, a team that includes men and women will probably be more effective than a team with only men
-------
To be successful, learning teams need a strong leader
-------
It’s good idea to form teams of people who have similar interest
-------
In a recent study, virtually all Harvard University students said that joining a study team helped them be more successful
__________________________________________________ _______________________

Consider the issues
Answer the questions blow

Which would help you most? Which activity would help you least? Why?

The authors say that teamwork is one of the most valued skills in today’s work world. Why do you think this is true?
__________________________________________________ ________________________

TEAM–RELATED WORDS AND PHRASES

Choose team related words in the reading to complete the questions blow. In some cases there is more than one possible answer.

1
I enjoy working with all five of my ---------------. Each one brings different skills and experiences to the group.

2
We usually-------------- after class to share notes and talk about the most important ideas that the professor mentioned.

3
Some of my friend like to study on their own, but I prefer a----------------to studying for tests and working on research projects.

4
My learning team was always off track, so we decided to choose a---------------to organize and coordinate our meetings.

5
I know that I’ll be able to apply the ---------------skills I learn in this course to my first job after college

[singleguy]

my summary:
When students study together, they can learn as much as from the instructors. also being variety between peers' interests can help the team in many cases. keeping the team small is also another way to maximizing the power of peer collaboration. being able to work effective in teams is very valuable in today's work world.
New words and Examples:
credit:
we finished 3 credits of physics

performance:
I want to improve my examination performance

subsequent:
subsequent exams make me really tired

assignment:
you have to do the assignments written blow

equally:
I try to pay equal attention to each member

insufficient:
insufficient activities have just wasted our time

contribute:
my friend contribute variety to our friendship

highlight:
highlighted words in the passage are very important for me

seek:
I'm seeking new ways to improve my English

satisfaction:
I have the satisfaction of being young
I look to the future with great satisfaction

reveal:
scientists reveal interesting inventions to us every day

consider:
I'm considering my improvement in sport

crucial:
speaking is a crucial way to improve the accent

:collaborate
we are collaborating to learn English

[extreme2006gh]

Hi buddies
I have some question about the reading activity.It s the first time that I am going to participate in activities , then plz guide me . I tracked you before .
what exactly do I have to do for reading activity ?

I read the 1st post and I knew in this way:
1-I have to learn new expressions and words
2- prepare a summary of text
3-answering the questions
4- posting them until tuesday

have I understood right ?
Is there anything else?

[احمد ترابی]

every body ansver my qustion .
is english language emportant?

[sada]

hello everbody!
here my summary but i think it is not very good and not very bad.:31:

have you ever been in a study group? the harvard university reaserch shows that when students are join a team to study they learn more instead of learning from text book or instructors.they are some activities that team member can collaborate on for example sharing the notes after the class , comparing their ideas about reading , and even they can teach someone that he can not do library research and also about comparing their test result with each other to picked up mistakes.i suggest you that if you are a shy to talk to your instructor you can remove it by joining one these groups.but always remember to have only 3 to 6 peers in your group because it is easier to get together after class and choose your teammate from your friends that they have similar interest and lifestyle and make yourself and the others more responresple.it will work.just do it.

[afsane b]

__________________________________________________ ___________True (T), false (f), or impossible to know (I)One of the main purposes of the reading is to encourage students to form learning teamsTAccording to the article, a team that includes men and women will probably be more effective than a team with only menFTo be successful, learning teams need a strong leaderIIt’s good idea to form teams of people who have similar interestFIn a recent study, virtually all Harvard University students said that joining a study team helped them be more successful T __________________________________________________ _______________________Consider the issuesAnswer the questions blowWhich would help you most? Which activity would help you least? Why?Hold individual team members accountable for contributing to the learning of their teammates.If every individual be responsible for both, his own responsibilities and other members, not only he would try to improve himself but also, he would be worry for the promotion of others as well, and wouldn’t let them to get off the track and shirk their responsibilities, because his only success wouldn’t have any effect. So every body would be his/her and others instructor.in my idea, all the activities are complement to one another and they are perfectly represented, but as I’m supposed to select the less effective, I mention this one. Meeting with the instructor Needless to say, having the instructor in a group is essential but meeting him regularly is useless, it is better to meet him up whenever is needthe authors say that teamwork is one of the most valued skills in today’s work world. Why do you think this is true? It has been proved by scientists, and is undeniable. by looking at animals such as bees…. You can grasp the power of working together, your strength, thought,.. .increase and the possibility of mistakes decrease, _ TEAM–RELATED WORDS AND PHRASESChoose team related words in the reading to complete the questions blow. In some cases there is more than one possible answer.1I enjoy working with all five of my peers-. Each one brings different skills and experiences to the group.2We usually team up after class to share notes and talk about the most important ideas that the professor mentioned.3Some of my friend like to study on their own, but I prefer a learning team to studying for tests and working on research projects.4My learning team was always off track, so we decided to choose an instructor to organize and coordinate our meetings.5I know that I’ll be able to apply the team work skills I learn in this course to my first job after college

[brain]

Hi everyone
:31:
I did my homework
:31:
It helps me a lot I learn many new words from that
Thank you Singleguy thank you
:31:

Summary of Reading

The Reading about learning teams and its activities.Against the reading research has shown learning teams can leran much more than instructors and textbooks because they get experience and it can be very good way to improve their informations.
This reading suggests some useful activities that we can do in a learning team.One of them is sharing and comparing class notes because of your classmate may be understood some points and you didn't understand it and maybe you picked up wrong informations.Another one is doing library researches ,it suggests to form a library research team because it reduce fear that maybe you have it.Next activity is comparing highlights and margin notes.The next one is meeting with a instructor or teacher.That essay suggests to review results tests and check the questions with their answers.Another suggestions is to choose friend or classmate in a learning team who have similar lifestyle and interests.It leads us to make a small group at least three to six members because it makes easy to team up with members.And last its offer is hold individual team members accountable for contributing to the learning of their teammates


The New Words

strength
I have enaugh strength for boxing match

sage
We need a sage leader to not lost in this way

peer
You should find a peer and share your activities with him

instructor
A good instructor always needs good students and good students always need good instructors

satisfaction
You should must do all of God's orders if you want get God's satisfaction

reveal
He reveal our plan we must punish

senior
We can find every senior who has some information about him

considered/consider
We will consider this problem tonight .... Don't worry maam

crucial
They discovered a crucial points about this element

collaborate
We can help each others if we collaborate each others

picked up
He always picked up wrong informatios in class because he always doesn't listen to the teacher

vice versa
You may vice versa something that your classmate picked up

assign
You should to study essay agian that I assigned in that meeting

margin
I always can't write margin notes because our teacher teaches fast

team up with
We have to team up with another team and get new informations from their experiences

anxiety
I have anxiety cuz I have a hard test tomorrow

seek
If you seek good, you can find some secret things in this room

assistance
I get lost, can you help me, it surly is good assistance for me

identify
I can't identify that what problem we have

equally
They can help us equally

potential
No, I can't let you to participate in this match cuz of you haven't enoughpotential

insufficient
You are wrong because insufficient information was given to you

contribute
We have to contribute in this championship cuz of I heard this champioship maybe never held

interaction
Did you see my interaction when he satirized me

opportunity
You lose your opportunities if you don't do any thing and just watch

get off track
You maybe get off track if you have a lot members in you class

shirk his or her responsibility
We should not shirk our responsibility about this problem

accountable
You should to participate in dicussions and You should to be accountable

principle
You should to put principles of this program to do better

Putting principles into practice
I start putting principles into practice cuz of I think it is effective

survey
The scientist survies show that we can live in other plaents

coordinate
we have to coordinate our meetings


Opps , Finally finished
:31:

[brain]

have I understood right ?
Is there anything else
Hi dear
Yes you have understood right
:31:

every body ansver my qustion .
is english language emportant
Hi Dear
Welcome
What do u mean
surley the english language is important
:31:

[afsane b]

Good job………thanks singleguy, sepideh and brain………….hats off………..You have deliberated a good schedule, but I don’t think be able to participate during norooz and alsomy computer has faced some problems, I cant active naghle ghole meno

[sada]

Good job………thanks singleguy, sepideh and brain………….hats off………..You have deliberated a good schedule, but I don’t think be able to participate during norooz and alsomy computer has faced some problems, I cant active naghle ghole meno

it is no problem.i think we have break during the noroz.
and for the QUOTE (NAGHLE GHOL) you can copy the notes that you want to quote and then paste them in writing place and then select them(by click and drag) to turn them into blue and then push the quote button in the taskbar.:10:

[masoudtr]

Why don't you write the summary of reading.hun?[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] I'm going to edit this post and change it to my summay essay.
ok i writed it & i'am going to send it as soon as possible

[C. Breezy]

Sorry i can't be On these days because of Norouz ... I have many things to do ... also I think I can't do the homework this week ... Sorry :45:

[FARA360]

The Summary

Researcher has shown that working in a team is an effective and powerful way to improve their skills and academic progress.
There are some tips that should be considered as a teamwork:
Team up with other students and try to share your nores and ideas.
Doing some library research helps members to develop their knowledge. Also find peers who have different ideas but same goal.
Limit your members of group. small groups focus much easier in a project
.
Some difficult courses can be done sucessfully by considering these tips and joining to a team which are noticeably important in today s work world.

[brave_ie]

Hello
I'd like to take part in this group activities
Where should I begin?

[singleguy]

Hello
I'd like to take part in this group activities
Where should I begin?
welcome:20:
you should start from here:5:. read the reading in page 44 and then put the summary here like other members . you should do that until Tuesday night.

[hoseinist]

Hi blokes
:10:


I think This essay show us how we can be successful in group activity and what methods we must do in a team.:

And in second part it shows us what things help me to know how we chose our partners and which characters are most important for choosing them.

At last I m gonna say thanks from dear single boy ! I learned many new words from this reading::11:D

[extreme2006gh]

This is my summary of reading:

Benefits of team working for learning and some recommendations to make team working more effective

Researches show that people can learn better in groups because there are interacts and collaborations in team working .
Sharing notes and points that your teammates haven t got, correcting the mistakes of each others, doing library search, inspecting result of exams to correct them are some of these interacts.
But theme says that all group working don’t redound to more effective learning too. It s gave a few suggestion:

Try to select your peers from those who have different interests and thoughts with you because there will be less interacts when your peers and you have the same ideas.
If the member of group is kept less than six , its more effective. Because it cause more relationship and restrain someone to shirk his or her responsibilities in group.


True (T), false (f), or impossible to know (I)
1- T
2- I
3- F
4- F
5- I

Consider the issues
This part has the answer of two question ,I think :

I think being able to work effectively in group is the most important thing because speed of our improvement is less in singularity mode and with this world that is going to be more complicated day by day , teamwork is the best and the only way to improvement.



TEAM–RELATED WORDS AND PHRASES

1- peers
2- team up with
3- teamwork
4- leader
5- ?

[extreme2006gh]

This is my summary of reading:

Benefits of team working for learning and some recommendations to make team working more effective

Researches show that people can learn better in groups because there are interacts and collaborations in team working .
Sharing notes and points that your teammates haven t got, correcting the mistakes of each others, doing library search, inspecting result of exams to correct them are some of these interacts.
But theme says that all group working don’t redound to more effective learning too. It s gave a few suggestion:

Try to select your peers from those who have different interests and thoughts with you because there will be less interacts when your peers and you have the same ideas.
If the member of group is kept less than six , its more effective. Because it cause more relationship and restrain someone to shirk his or her responsibilities in group.


True (T), false (f), or impossible to know (I)
1- T
2- I
3- F
4- F
5- I

Consider the issues
This part has the answer of two question ,I think :

I think being able to work effectively in group is the most important thing because speed of our improvement is less in singularity mode and with this world that is going to be more complicated day by day , teamwork is the best and the only way to improvement.



TEAM–RELATED WORDS AND PHRASES

1-peers
2-team up with
3-teamwork
4-leader
5-?

[Sha7ab]

Has shown


MY ESSAY :

Today's life and its compiexity cause that humans have to do themselve job in difrent groups and with others people.
there is a byword in English that say :"Two hand are better than one" this idiom in Persian means :
یک دست صدا ندارد
Everyone knows that anyone cant do a great work alone unless in a difrence qualification. Anyway working with some peers and members cause to add more idea and this may has better result finally .
I dont wanna say more than and absolutely if i wanna say more than a page will not enough for my essay.


New words that i got them in READING:







Instructor



academic achievement



Satisfaction



Reveal



Senior



Nearly



Considered



Crucial



Progress



Collaborate



picked up



vice versa



Highlighting



Margin



Unfamiliar



library anxiety



Forming



Develop



Social



Reduce



Reduce



Assistance



Seek



Individual



Identify



Credit



Reach



Potential



Insufficient



Suggestion



Collaboration



Contribute



Interest



Onto



Task



Interaction



Opportunity



Individual



Shirk



Responsibility



Accountable



Contribute



Course



Principles



Particularly



Survey



Team up with



get off track



shirk his or her responsibility



Purpose



Encourage



Virtually



Consider



Least



Valued



Related



Mentioned



Organize



Coordinate



Those are so many . :D arent they ?



Our first reading acivity was very good.
:11::11::11:

[sepid12ir]

hey guys, how are u all doing?
great activity...hope it'll be continued
I just took some time focusing on yr summaries. since it is reading activity, mistakes won't be corrected, I've just highlighted some of them in red, u yrself try to find out the correct form but if there was any question dun hesitate n ask n that'll be answered soon.
Happy Nowrouz in advance
Sepideh[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]




my summary:
When students study together, they can learn as much as from the instructors. also being variety between peers' interests can help the team in many cases. keeping the team small is also another way to maximizing the power of peer collaboration. being able to work effective in teams is very valuable in today's work world.
New words and Examples:
credit:
we finished 3 credits of physics

performance:
I want to improve my examination performance

subsequent:
subsequent exams make me really tired

assignment:
you have to do the assignments written blow

equally:
I try to pay equal attention to each member

insufficient:
insufficient activities have just wasted our time

contribute:
my friend contribute variety to our friendship

highlight:
highlighted words in the passage are very important for me

seek:
I'm seeking new ways to improve my English

satisfaction:
I have the satisfaction of being young
I look to the future with great satisfaction

reveal:
scientists reveal interesting inventions to us every day

consider:
I'm considering my improvement in sport

crucial:
speaking is a crucial way to improve the accent

:collaborate
we are collaborating to learn English






as always great dear Singleguy
just a suggestion; I think it's better to use the verb 'pass' instead of 'finish' in here: we finished(passed) three credits of physic
n if I were u I would use present perfect instead of simple past for such a sentence



hello everbody!
here my summary but i think it is not very good and not very bad.:31:
have you ever been in a study group? the harvard university reaserch shows that when students are join a team to study they learn more instead of learning from text book or instructors.they are some activities that team member can collaborate on for example sharing the notes after the class , comparing their ideas about reading , and even they can teach someone that he can not do library research and also about comparing their test result with each other to picked up mistakes.i suggest you that if you are a shy to talk to your instructor you can remove it by joining one these groups.but always remember to have only 3 to 6 peers in your group because it is easier to get together after class and choose your teammate from your friends that they have similar interest and lifestyle and make yourself and the others more responresple.it will work.just do it.


hi dear Sada
welcome to this group...hope u find it useful:10:l
needless to say great...since it is obvious:11:l


__________________________________________________ ___________True (T), false (f), or impossible to know (I)One of the main purposes of the reading is to encourage students to form learning teamsTAccording to the article, a team that includes men and women will probably be more effective than a team with only menFTo be successful, learning teams need a strong leaderIIt’s good idea to form teams of people who have similar interestFIn a recent study, virtually all Harvard University students said that joining a study team helped them be more successful T __________________________________________________ _______________________Consider the issuesAnswer the questions blowWhich would help you most? Which activity would help you least? Why?Hold individual team members accountable for contributing to the learning of their teammates.If every individual be responsible for both, his own responsibilities and other members, not only he would try to improve himself but also, he would be worry for the promotion of others as well, and wouldn’t let them to get off the track and shirk their responsibilities, because his only success wouldn’t have any effect. So every body would be his/her and others instructor.in my idea, all the activities are complement to one another and they are perfectly represented, but as I’m supposed to select the less effective, I mention this one. Meeting with the instructor Needless to say, having the instructor in a group is essential but meeting him regularly is useless, it is better to meet him up whenever is needthe authors say that teamwork is one of the most valued skills in today’s work world. Why do you think this is true? It has been proved by scientists, and is undeniable. by looking at animals such as bees…. You can grasp the power of working together, your strength, thought,.. .increase and the possibility of mistakes decrease, _ TEAM–RELATED WORDS AND PHRASESChoose team related words in the reading to complete the questions blow. In some cases there is more than one possible answer.1I enjoy working with all five of my peers-. Each one brings different skills and experiences to the group.2We usually team up after class to share notes and talk about the most important ideas that the professor mentioned.3Some of my friend like to study on their own, but I prefer a learning team to studying for tests and working on research projects.4My learning team was always off track, so we decided to choose an instructor to organize and coordinate our meetings.5I know that I’ll be able to apply the team work skills I learn in this course to my first job after college

how is my dear Afsaneh!
great buddy! Although I've seen ye speaking lots of time, I'd never had the chance of having a look at yr witings, u are really perfect. specially the words u use
great my sweety
by the way Afsaneh, dun u remember Ms Karimi! the only mistake she used to take was: After Let Dun Use To:27::46:l
love u buddy:11:l




Hi everyone
:31:
I did my homework
:31:
It helps me a lot I learn many new words from that
Thank you Singleguy thank you
:31:

Summary of Reading

The Reading about learning teams and its activities.Against the reading research has shown learning teams can leran much more than instructors and textbooks because they get experience and it can be very good way to improve their informations.
This reading suggests some useful activities that we can do in a learning team.One of them is sharing and comparing class notes because of your classmate may be understood some points and you didn't understand it and maybe you picked up wrong informations.Another one is doing library researches ,it suggests to form a library research team because it reduce fear that maybe you have it.Next activity is comparing highlights and margin notes.The next one is meeting with a instructor or teacher.That essay suggests to review results tests and check the questions with their answers.Another suggestions is to choose friend or classmate in a learning team who have similar lifestyle and interests.It leads us to make a small group at least three to six members because it makes easy to team up with members.And last its offer is hold individual team members accountable for contributing to the learning of their teammates


The New Words

strength
I have enaugh strength for boxing match

sage
We need a sage leader to not lost in this way

peer
You should find a peer and share your activities with him

instructor
A good instructor always needs good students and good students always need good instructors

satisfaction
You should must do all of God's orders if you want get God's satisfaction

reveal
He reveal our plan we must punish

senior
We can find every senior who has some information about him

considered/consider
We will consider this problem tonight .... Don't worry maam

crucial
They discovered a crucial points about this element

collaborate
We can help each others if we collaborate each others

picked up
He always picked up wrong informatios in class because he always doesn't listen to the teacher

vice versa
You may vice versa something that your classmate picked up

assign
You should to study essay agian that I assigned in that meeting

margin
I always can't write margin notes because our teacher teaches fast

team up with
We have to team up with another team and get new informations from their experiences

anxiety
I have anxiety cuz I have a hard test tomorrow

seek
If you seek good, you can find some secret things in this room

assistance
I get lost, can you help me, it surly is good assistance for me

identify
I can't identify that what problem we have

equally
They can help us equally

potential
No, I can't let you to participate in this match cuz of you haven't enoughpotential

insufficient
You are wrong because insufficient information was given to you

contribute
We have to contribute in this championship cuz of I heard this champioship maybe never held

interaction
Did you see my interaction when he satirized me

opportunity
You lose your opportunities if you don't do any thing and just watch

get off track
You maybe get off track if you have a lot members in you class

shirk his or her responsibility
We should not shirk our responsibility about this problem

accountable
You should to participate in dicussions and You should to be accountable

principle
You should to put principles of this program to do better

Putting principles into practice
I start putting principles into practice cuz of I think it is effective

survey
The scientist survies show that we can live in other plaents

coordinate
we have to coordinate our meetings


Opps , Finally finished
:31:





great and perfect
thank you buddy
wow! yr summary was absolutely one of the bests. u had considered everything
just one suggetion! be more careful about the third person! I mean 's'...okay?:20:


I've highlightened some of yr mistakes, try to correct them yrself...in case u had any problem just ask me
thank you:11:l






The Summary


Researcher has shown that working in a team is an effective and powerful way to improve their? skills and academic progress.
There are some tips that should be considered as a teamwork:
Team up with other students and try to share your nores and ideas.
Doing some library research helps members to develop their knowledge. Also find peers who have different ideas but same goal.
Limit your members of group. small groups focus much easier in a project
.
Some difficult courses can be done sucessfully by considering these tips and joining to a team which are noticeably important in today s work world.


great job:20:
just a question, their in the first paragraph refers to?! I couldn't get
happy studyin



This is my summary of reading:

Benefits of team working for learning and some recommendations to make team working more effective

Researches show that people can learn better in groups because there are interacts and collaborations in team working .
Sharing notes and points that your teammates haven t got, correcting the mistakes of each others, doing library search, inspecting result of exams to correct them are some of these interacts.
But theme says that all group working don’t redound to more effective learning too. It s gave a few suggestion:

Try to select your peers from those who have different interests and thoughts with you because there will be less interacts when your peers and you have the same ideas.
If the member of group is kept less than six , its more effective. Because it cause more relationship and restrain someone to shirk his or her responsibilities in group.


True (T), false (f), or impossible to know (I)
1- T
2- I
3- F
4- F
5- I

Consider the issues
This part has the answer of two question ,I think :

I think being able to work effectively in group is the most important thing because speed of our improvement is less in singularity mode and with this world that is going to be more complicated day by day , teamwork is the best and the only way to improvement.



TEAM–RELATED WORDS AND PHRASES

1-peers
2-team up with
3-teamwork
4-leader
5-?



hi there,
yr English is pretty well
thanks for being with us:11:l




Has shown


MY ESSAY :

Today's life and its compiexity cause that humans have to do themselve job in difrent groups and with others people.
there is a byword in English that say :"Two hand are better than one" this idiom in Persian means :
یک دست صدا ندارد
Everyone knows that anyone cant do a great work alone unless in a difrence qualification. Anyway working with some peers and members cause to add more idea and this may has better result finally .
I dont wanna say more than and absolutely if i wanna say more than a page will not enough for my essay.


New words that i got them in READING:







Instructor



academic achievement



Satisfaction



Reveal



Senior



Nearly



Considered



Crucial



Progress



Collaborate



picked up



vice versa



Highlighting



Margin



Unfamiliar



library anxiety



Forming



Develop



Social



Reduce



Reduce



Assistance



Seek



Individual



Identify



Credit



Reach



Potential



Insufficient



Suggestion



Collaboration



Contribute



Interest



Onto



Task



Interaction



Opportunity



Individual



Shirk



Responsibility



Accountable



Contribute



Course



Principles



Particularly



Survey



Team up with



get off track



shirk his or her responsibility



Purpose



Encourage



Virtually



Consider



Least



Valued



Related



Mentioned



Organize



Coordinate



Those are so many . :D arent they ?



Our first reading acivity was very good.
:11::11::11:



hey, how r u doin?
I wish u had written more...not about yr own idea; about the reading
u could mention more points; hmm?! it would be better for yr English
thanks
------
Good luck guys
in case there was any question about yr summaries n mistakes just let us know
Happy 4 Shanbe Soori[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

[extreme2006gh]

Researches show that people can learn better in groups because there are interacts and collaborations in team working .
Sharing notes and points that your teammates haven t got, correcting the mistakes of each others, doing library search, inspecting result of exams to correct them are some of these interacts.
But theme says that all group working don’t redound to more effective learning too. It s gave a few suggestion:

thank you for helping
you highlighted some parts of my essay . I try to correct them . If they are true ,tell me plz
1-each others -----> each other
2- I have to remove "too" from that sentence
3- It s gave ------> It s given

Are they right ?

[sepid12ir]

Researches show that people can learn better in groups because there are interacts and collaborations in team working .
Sharing notes and points that your teammates haven t got, correcting the mistakes of each others, doing library search, inspecting result of exams to correct them are some of these interacts.
But theme says that all group working don’t redound to more effective learning too. It s gave a few suggestion:

thank you for helping
you highlighted some parts of my essay . I try to correct them . If they are true ,tell me plz
1-each others -----> each other
2- I have to remove "too" from that sentence
3- It s gave ------> It s given

Are they right ?




absolutely correct:11: ... thank you for caring:10:l

[Blue Ray]

Hi , Friends .
I'm Hamed.Happy to join the group:31:!
here is my summary :
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The reading is about forming a study group.The writers believe that a study group can have positive effect on students’ learning abilities .They mentioned five possible activities for this group : sharing class notes , comparing ideas , doing library research , meeting with instructor and reviewing test results.
They also gave some hints on forming a better group such as : keeping group small , not choosing only friends as group members and also create a supportive atmosphere which members are committed to help each other.


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and here's my list of new vocabulary and and structures with example , definition and pronunciation :



Collaborate kə'læbəreɪt باهم‌ كار كردن‌
[intransitive]
to work together with a person or group in order to achieve something, especially in science or art [↪ collaborator]
collaborate on
 The two nations are collaborating on several satellite projects.
collaborate with
 During the late seventies, he collaborated with the legendary Muddy Waters.
collaborate to do something
 Researchers are collaborating to develop the vaccine.
collaborate in (doing) something
 Elephants collaborate in looking after their young.



Team up with
 You can team up with one other class member if you want.



Anxiety æŋ'zaɪətɪ اضطراب‌
[uncountable and countable] the feeling of being very worried about something [= concern]
anxiety about/over
 There is considerable anxiety among staff about job losses.
 There is growing public anxiety over levels of air pollution in our cities.
deep/acute/great anxiety
 The fear of unemployment can be a source of deep anxiety to people.
 his feelings of anxiety
 A high level of anxiety was created by the introduction of cameras into the factory.
 It can help if you discuss your anxieties with someone.


Instructor ɪn'strʌktər اموزگار
[countable]
1 someone who teaches a sport or practical skill:
 a driving instructor
 ski instructors
2 American English someone who teaches in an American college or university and who has a rank below assistant professor:
 a social studies instructor




Insufficient ‚ɪnsə'fɪʃnt ناکافی
formal
not enough, or not great enough:
 Insufficient resources have been devoted to the health service.
insufficient for
 His salary was insufficient for their needs.
insufficient (something) to do something
 The heating is insufficient to kill the bacteria.
 At the moment, there's insufficient evidence to arrest anyone.
—insufficiently adverb
—insufficiency noun [singular, uncountable]



Maximize 'mæksɪmaɪz بيشينه‌ ساختن‌
Also maximise British English [transitive]
1 to increase something such as profit or income as much as possible [≠ minimize]
maximize profit/revenue etc
 The company's main function is to maximize profit.
2 to click on a special part on a window on a computer screen so that it becomes as big as the screen [≠ minimize]
3 to use something in a way that gives you the greatest practical value or the best results:
 We need to maximize the space.
maximize opportunities/chances etc
The career center will help you maximize your opportunities.
—maximization 'mæksɪmaɪ'zeɪʃn noun [uncountable]



Contribute kən'trɪbjuːt بخشیدن،دادن
[intransitive and transitive] to give money, help, ideas etc to something that a lot of other people are also involved in
contribute to/towards
 City employees cannot contribute to political campaigns.


Get off the track دور شدن از اصل موضوع
Spoken - to begin to deal with a new subject rather than the main one which was being discussed:
 Don't get off the track, we're looking at this year's figures not last year's.


Interaction ɪntər'ækʃən اثر متقابل‌
1 a process by which two or more things affect each other
interaction of
 Price is determined through the interaction of demand and supply.
interaction with/between
 the complex interaction between mind and body
2 the activity of talking to other people, working together with them etc
interaction with/between
 the degree of interaction between teacher and student



Shirk ʃɜ:rk شانه‌ خالي‌ كردن‌
[intransitive and transitive]
to deliberately avoid doing something you should do, because you are lazy:
 He was fired for shirking.
shirk your responsibilities/duties/obligations
 parents who shirk their responsibilities towards their children
—shirker noun [countable]



Put something into action/effect/practice
to start using a plan, idea, knowledge etc:
 James was keen to put some of the things he had learned into practice.

[FARA360]

great job
just a question, their in the first paragraph refers to?! I couldn't get
happy studyin
I missed a word. It refers to students:31:
Thx
:11:

[singleguy]

Hi
Thanks to all of you who did your reading activity:10: .
As you know we will continue The activities on Farvardin 5th.
On Farvardin 5th we are going to study the first unite of English Grammar In use(or maybe more).
but how should we study this book?!!:13:





I think one of the members should be chosen to teach the new grammar tips n then if there was any problem any of us can correct it...n besides there will be some examples....
or I'll teach the grammar if u think other members may not be able to explain it well

Sepideh:11:


Dear Sepideh told me about the grammar activity:27:
So Sepideh, Brain and me are going to choose one of you(us:31:) to explain the grammar on Farvardin 5th. If there is any volunteer tell Brain or me by massage,

HAPPY NEW YEAR AND HAVE FUN:8:
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[Marichka]

Hey pals

I have just been informed of the existence of such a group. I will post this message so that you know I intend to be a part of your group too, however I haven't got a chance to get acquainted with how you do things in here. So I am going to have a closer look at the topic and I will post here again shortly after.

Best Regards
Dianella
:40:

[singleguy]

hi every body
Dianella !welcome to our group! :20:

we are going to start the first unite of the English Grammar In Use on Faravardin 5th and Fara360 is going to explain this unite for us tomorrow night :27:. After that you can solve your problems by asking questions.
Dear Sepideh is on a trip and I don't know when she comes back, and maybe she can't be online and answer your questions about the grammar [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] . So I wanted dear Dianella to answer your questions [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] . there are also another members who can answer your questions like Fara360, so don't worry about your mistakes
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[FARA360]

Hi, first of all, wish u the best by starting the new year:10:.
Tonight we re gonna learn about Present Continuous and some points about it.
Just dont forget to follow exercises .They could help u to get points better . And plz ask, if u have any question:31:
Have Fun!
:11:



Present Continuous ( I am doing
1 . This tense is used when you are in the middle of doing sth. The action which is not finished yet.

am / is / are + verb + -- ing

I am / am not watching TV.

He
she is / is not working.
it

We
you are/ are not reading this page.
they
more e.g

Maryam is talking on the phone now

Lets go out now. It isnt raining any more
.
Look! That boy is trying to break the window
.
You are not swimming now.

2. The action is not happening at the time of speaking. Consider the example :
:a / Steve is talking to a friend on the phone. he says

I am reading a good book at the moment.
He means that he is in the middle of reading that book although he s talking to a friend at the moment.

b /A: What is your major?
B: I am studying to become a doctor.

:Present continuous can be used with these periods of time

Today / this week / this year / for the time being / at the moment

The comany I work for isnt doing so well this year
.
I see that you are wearing new suit today.

3. Also there are some verbs which make changes. When we talk about changes, the present continuous is used. Including:
Get / Change / Become / Increase / Rise / Fall / Grow / Improve / Begin / Start

Your English is improving.
The population of the world is increasing very fast.

زمان حال استمراری : i am doing
1.از این زمان برای بیان عملی که در حال وقوع است استفاده میشود.
Maryam is talking on the phone now. مریم الان تلفنی صحبت می کند
Lets go out now. It s not raining any more. بیا بریم بیرون . دیگه بارون نمی باره
2. به مثال زیر توجه کنید.
:Steve is talking to a friend on the phone. he says

I am reading a good book at the moment
استیو تلفنی داره با دوستش صحبت میکنه و به اون میگه که در حال خوندن یک کتاب است. این عملی ست که ممکن
است در لحظه گفتار انجام نگیرد ولی به طور مستمر ادامه دارد.

مثال 2. رشته تحصیلی شما چیست؟ A. What s your major?
درس می خوانم تا پزشک شوم B. I am studying to become a doctor.

قیودی که با زمان حال استمراری به کار می روند عبارتند از:
Today / this week / this year / for the time being / at the moment

3. حال استمراری در افعالی استفاده میشود که شامل تغییرات هستند که این تغییرات در محدوده زمان فعلی رخ میدهند. افعالی که در این مقوله به کار می روند عبارتند از:
Get / Change / Become / Increase / Rise / Fall / Grow / Improve / Begin / Start

Your English is improving. انگلیسی شما داره پیشرفت میکنه
The population of the world is increasing very fast جمعیت جهان به سرعت در حال پیشرفت است.

[brain]

Today is Farvardin 5th (Schedule 5th) and everybody can ask some question about their problems, however this lesson is really simple and easy
You have to make 10 sentences about this lesson and then put them on 11th till 14th

پنچم = مطالعه و رفع اشکال در مورد گرامر

یازدهم تا چهاردهم = فعالیت رایتینگ در مورد موضوع مربوطه(شامل حداقل 100 کلمه)+ ساختن حد اقل 10 جمله در مورد کلمات خوانده شده در کتاب لغت+ساخت حداقل 10 جمله در مورد مطالب خوانده شده در کتاب گرامر(هر 3 مورد در یک پست)

I have some qu and I want to ask them to Farsi. Really Sorry :31:

1-میشه یه مثال برعکس این برام بزنید :

حال استمراری در افعالی استفاده میشود که شامل تغییرات هستند که این تغییرات در محدوده زمان فعلی رخ میدهند.
ینی افعالی که در محدوده ی زمانیه فعلی رخ نمی دهند !!!
(منظورتون اینه که افعالی وجود دارند که ing نمی گیرند ؟؟!!! )

2-در حالت مجهول هم زمان حال استمراری وجود داره ؟؟!! اگه داره یه مثال بزنید لطفا !!!
:11:

[singleguy]

Farvardin 5th (Schedule 5th) and everybody can ask some question about their problems, however this lesson is really simple and easy Today is



But I don't think so:31:. because I have some problems with the ways of using present continues.


You have to make 10 sentences about this lesson and then put them on 11th till 14th

yeah...5 examples for this lesson and 5 examples for the next grammar lesson.






1-میشه یه مثال برعکس این برام بزنید :

ینی افعالی که در محدوده ی زمانیه فعلی رخ نمی دهند !!!
(منظورتون اینه که افعالی وجود دارند که ing نمی گیرند ؟؟!!! )


I can't understand your question:14:






2-در حالت مجهول هم زمان حال استمراری وجود داره ؟؟!! اگه داره یه مثال بزنید لطفا !!!
:11:

yeah... This is also my question. could somebody answer?


And I have a question
sometimes we read ads or programs and we see something like this:


City Museum
The education department ....................... three special children's day - on Tuesday,Wednesday and Thursday - for 8 to 12 years old.
which one is correct for filling the blank? :
is organizing or organizes

[extreme2006gh]

hi everybody
I hope you have good year with health and success

I have a question about the book that group is studying.
what is the exact name of book and writer of book ?
can somebody put a picture of that ?
I thought the book I have and the one you are studying are the same, but now I find out that I was wrong.
topic of book that I have is "Essential grammar in use "

thanks

[singleguy]

hi everybody
I hope you have good year with health and success

I have a question about the book that group is studying.
what is the exact name of book and writer of book ?
can somebody put a picture of that ?
I thought the book I have and the one you are studying are the same, but now I find out that I was wrong.
topic of book that I have is "Essential grammar in use "

thanks


hi Extreme. How are you?:10:
we study the English Grammar in Use. this is not essential Grammar in use. Actually Essential Grammar in Use is for elementary students but the level of the book we study is intermediate:27:
and about the picture! you can find your answer at the first page of this topic

[FARA360]

Today is Farvardin 5th (Schedule 5th) and everybody can ask some question about their problems, however this lesson is really simple and easy
You have to make 10 sentences about this lesson and then put them on 11th till 14th



I have some qu and I want to ask them to Farsi. Really Sorry :31:

1-میشه یه مثال برعکس این برام بزنید :

ینی افعالی که در محدوده ی زمانیه فعلی رخ نمی دهند !!!
(منظورتون اینه که افعالی وجود دارند که ing نمی گیرند ؟؟!!! )

2-در حالت مجهول هم زمان حال استمراری وجود داره ؟؟!! اگه داره یه مثال بزنید لطفا !!!
:11:
These verbs such as get, change and improve... shows that sth or sb follows some changes. just focus on their meaning .
get : شدن
improve: پیشرفت کردن
......
As an example:
The financial problem is getting worse.
Normally, we use simple present . if it happened in the past, we would use past tense

Yes. This tense could be used in passive tense
am / is / are + being+ p.p
Somebody is using the computer. The computer is being used at the moment




But I don't think so:31:. because I have some problems with the ways of using present continues.

yeah...5 examples for this lesson and 5 examples for the next grammar lesson.





I can't understand your question:14:



yeah... This is also my question. could somebody answer?


And I have a question
sometimes we read ads or programs and we see something like this:


which one is correct for filling the blank? :
is organizing or organizes


I think by doing extra exercises u ll get the grammer appropriately:27:
Ya . u re right. It s the rule of reporting a news. in a text report u could see present continuous or simple present.
But mostly present continuous is applied.
Is organizing is correct.

I hope that u get it:10:

[FARA360]

I ve just forgotten one thing to put.
Take a look at below:

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[singleguy]

Listening Activity

I guess nobody else has any question about the grammar lesson. Thanks to dear Fara360 who taught us grammar and solved our grammatical problems instead of Sepideh.
by the way let's start the listening activity.
Every one should know the rules of this activity I put at the first post. Please read the first post again.
some of the activities are too long like the 2nd and 3rd one. you don't have to write all of that. try to write however you can! and you also have not to answer the questions.
The 1st one is also really short but in the next activity it'll be longer.

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The 1st one:

Plans for a family
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A young college student
talks about her plans
to have children later in life.


Level: easy


Length: 0:30
Accent: General American
Gender: F
Speed: Slow

questions:
Question 1.) How long after marriage does she want children?
Question 2.) Why does she want to live near her parents.
Question 3.) How old is Colleen?

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the 2nd one:

How ideas pop to our minds
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An undergraduate describes
how the mind works,
based on an introductory class
he took in cognitive psychology.


Level: Medium

Length: 2:17
Accent: General American
Gender: M
Speed: Fast


Questions:
Question 1.) Where did the speaker got these ideas from?
Question 2.) Thinking about his friend in a plane crash was the end of a chain of thoughts. What did he see that started that?
Question 3.) What does he recommend when you have trouble thinking of things?
Question 4.) How does he say the brain works?


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the 3rd one:

Titanic
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The speaker talks about
the movie, Titanic, and explains
why she thinks many different people liked it.


Level: Hard


Length: 4:15
Accent: General American
Gender: F
Speed: Slow

questions:
Question 1.) What major illusion does she think the sinking of the Titanic destroyed?
Question 2.) What does the speaker say was the disadvantage of the era of chivalry?
Question 3.) Why does she think that the film represented the end of an era?
Question 4.) What did she think attracted most people, especially young people, to see the film?
Question 5.) What does she think is essential for a movie to become popular all over the world?


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[extreme2006gh]

i have better idea to improve your english grammer
plz dl this


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Video Aided Instruction’s English Grammar Series makes the tricky rules of English grammar easier to learn than ever before — whether you’re new to English or you’ve been speaking it for years!
The 10 programs in this series are each divided into 3 to 5 short lessons, making them perfect for classroom use or self-study. They’re also ideal for reviewing forgotten grammar or preparing for many verbal standardized tests such as the SAT, TOEFL, GED, and GRE. Plus, they can really help you improve your grades in school or your performance on the job!
Using easy-to-follow examples and practice exercises from everyday life, this series can help you master even the most complicated English grammar topics!
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* English Grammar: Verbs
* English Grammar: Pronouns
* English Grammar: Agreement
* English Grammar: Modifiers
* English Grammar: Parallel Structure
* English Grammar: Punctuation
* English Grammar: Spelling & Capitalization


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Hi buddies
I want to appreciate masoudrejae for introducing this valuable education and befor that apologize of group if I disrupt the setting of the topic.but I don t like you lost this educational video.
I watched some lessons and they were very helpful for me .

I want to ask masoud to prepare or introduce another free download link of this institution if he can
thanks a lot

[singleguy]

Listening scripts


hi
the time of listening activity has just finished. and your answers:

Brain
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several month ago I saw the movie called Titanic hmmm I saw it actually
on oppening day in United States and the was .... and ... movie for
several months ppl from all of the worlds ....... to see this movie
including a no ppl fro all of the worlds and I was really ...... to see
how many ppl how many diffrent types of ppl to see this one movie and
from reading report so ... the ppl want to see this movie and when I'd like
that so many ppl like that a I was ... by how many by diffrences but they
found attractted about movie. a lot of ppl espessially young ppl really
like the love story and ... most for than the love story beetween
2 main characters the young poor amerkian played by Leonardo Decaprio
and a he is from west and ....... from Filadelfia who is about ....
marriage and of coruse they fall in love just before the Titanic hits the
iceberg the ship hits the iceberg and .... but and this love story atrracted
many ppl but ... number of other ppl atrracted to ... and ... the end of
the movie ..........what Titanic is about the old ..... of manners ...of ...
women and childern first which words ..... we admire ....





Extreme2006gh
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1.
My name is colleen , -------------- right now .I would like to start a family. I would like to get married and then maybe 3 or 4 years later have two children, hopefully one girl and one boy and our ---------

2. -----

3. 7 month ago I saw the movie called titanic ------
And from reading report about the people went to see this movie and why they liked it , so many people liked it . I was -----by how many , by the differences in what they found attractive about the movie , a lot of people specially young people really like the love story and that s what help the most for them.
The love story between two main characters, young poor battalion American play by Leonardo D-caprio and he was made from the west, and upper crust socialized from Philadelphia who is about the lovely marriage, and of course they follow love just before the titanic hits the iceberg, the ship hits the iceberg and it sinks .
And this love story was attractive for many people but from a number of other people were attracted to the notion of an era , the end of a movie pertain to end of an era and That s in a way what titanic is about. the old ------- the era of manners , the era of chivalry ,of women and children first which were good values, which are in a values of we admire but it was also in age of astriction in which women could not necessarily married the man they chose and thinks like that there was an era of good qualities and bad qualities and way titanic merge the passing of this era, because there were many changes that came shortly after the titanic was sank .and one of the changes was that people were ------ from saying that a ship or something else was unthinkable or indestructible that people had this attitude that technology could be made infallible -----
but one the other things that people were attracted to specially Japanese man and that s one thing abstracted me very much , they were attracted to sins of people of man sacrificing around life for other people of man giving up themselves and everything they had , so the people -- - - -
and this is the thing are attractive - - - - -

I think that s element of being able to be many things to many people many different things is really essential for a movie that is
And this is why that movie has become so popular all over the world .





C.Breezy
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Hi My name is Collin and I'm Only 18 right now But when I finish my education I would like to start a family . I would like to get married and three or four years later have two children hopefully one girl and one boy and I'll probably live pretty close to my parents cause I miss them




Hoseinist
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Plans for a family
Hi my name is Colleen, and I’m only teenage now. By I finish my education I would like to start a family I would ld like to get married and then maybe 3 or 4 years latter has 2 children, hopefully one girl and one boy , and I probably live ….to my parents …….. :D

Question 1.) How long after marriage does she want children? 3 or 4 years latter she want children
Question 2.) Why does she want to live near her parents?............
Question 3.) How old is Colleen? now she is a teenager



Single Boy
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Hi. My name is Colin. And I’m only eighteen right now. But when I finish my education I …….to start a family. I would like to get marred and then maybe 3or 4 years later has 2 children. Hopefully one girl and one boy and I probably live closely to my parents




Thanks to dear Hoseinist who answered the questions in addition to description



Main scripts and answers

plans for a family
hi my name's Colleen. and i'm only eighteen right now, but when i finish my education, i would like to start a family. i would like to get married and then maybe three or four years later have two children, hopefully one girl and one boy. and i'll probably live pretty close to my parents, because i 'd miss them.
Question 1.) How long after marriage does she want children?
Answer 1.) About three or four years after getting married.


Question 2.) Why does she want to live near her parents.
Answer 2.) Because she would miss them


Question 3.) How old is Colleen?
Answer 3.) She is eighteen.












how ideas pop to our minds

um i was speaking with my girlfriend yesterday. and we were talking about how ideas pop into peoples heads. how how people come to think of things. how they are reminded of things. um the brain_ i'm a psychology major. and i took a cognitive psych class. and this is what my professor taught me. the brain works like a network, like a networking system. they are_ it's i guess like a web. and when things_ you_ when you learn new things, you place them some where on the web. and though_ there're networks_ there're connections that are made other things around it. like, you can actually think of it in terms of a physical map where where it's got like stems are coming out of it. like let's say, you're thinking of a dog, the stems right around the dog might be cat, um owner fur and in turn in turn the thing around the cat might be rabbit, cat food, dish and like that, and so and so forth. you could actually_ that's why sometimes like if you think of dog_ if you see a dog you might think of um you might think of your your cat at home. yaknow you might think maybe your cat at home's name was like Spot. and you might think Spot was a dog you had when you were a kid. and it it_ the connections are pretty incredible how and how quickly it happens. uh we're driving home and i saw deer running across the road. and i thought_ and i i realized how how quickly i thought i thought deer and the deer reminds me of a dog, the dog that happened to pop in my head was my friend's. my friend was recently in a plane crash. and that reminded me of something else and just by seeing the deer all this string of this string of memories popped into me, popped into my head. and um... and uh_ huh whatjumacallit... that's why sometimes things pop into your head and that's why, maybe if you_ if you've a trouble thinking of something, you could just think of things that might be related to it. and it will pop into your head because those connections might fire. and um it'll come close to the area where the actual memory of the object that you cannot think of is. if that's clear at all.
Question 1.) Where did the speaker got these ideas from?
Answer 1.) From a psychology class he took.


Question 2.) Thinking about his friend in a plane crash was the end of a chain of thoughts. What did he see that started that?
Answer 2.) A deer crossing the road.


Question 3.) What does he recommend when you have trouble thinking of things?
Answer 3.) He says you should just think of related things, and then what you can??t remember will pop into your head.


Question 4.) How does he say the brain works?
Answer 4.) He says it works like a networking system, or like a web.




Titanic
several months ago i saw the movie called titanic. um... i saw it actually on opening day in the United States, and the the theater was was packed. and... this turned out to be the norm for that movie for a several months. people from all over the world streamed into the theaters to see this movie including uh... people from all over the world. and it was really quite a phenomenon to see how many people_ how many different types of people went to see this one movie. and from reading reading reports about people_ the people who went to see this movie and why they liked it, so many people liked it. uh i was struck by how many_ the_ by the differences in what they found attractive about the movie. a lot of people, especially young people, really liked the love story. and that's what held the most uh for them, the love story between the two main characters, a young ah poor but talented american played by Leonardo Dicaprio and uh... he was from the mid west, and... an uppercrust socialite from Philadelphia who was about to enter a loveless marriage. and of course, they fall in love just before the Titanic hits the iceberg, the ship hits the iceberg and it sinks. but_ and this love story is what attracted many people.
but... from a_ a number of other people were attracted to... the notion of an era_ the end of an_ uh a movie portraying the end of an era. and that's in a way what Titanic is about. the old Edwardian era, the era of manners, the era of chivalry, of uh of women and children first, which were good values which are yaknow values that we admire. but it was also an age of restriction in which women could not necessarily marry the men that they chose. ah... and things like that. so there wa- there was an era of good qualities and bad qualities. and in a way Titanic marked the passing of this era because there were many changes that came shortly after the titanic was sunk. and one of the changes was that people refrain from saying that a ship or something else was unsinkable or indestructible, that people had this idea_ attitude that the technology or the accomplishments of men could be could be made infallible, and indestructible. and this was shuttered by the destruction of titanic.
but one of the other things that people were attracted to, especially japanese men and that's one thing struck me very much, they were attracted to uh_ scenes of people, of men sacrificing their own lives for other people, of men giving up their selves and everything they had, so people they never met could live. and uh this is the thing attracted many many other people. now one can be attracted to one of these things or many of these things, but i think that element of being of being able to be many things to many people, many different things, is really essential for a movie that is going to have a broad base of popularity. and this is why that movie i think has become so popular all over the world.
Question 1.) What major illusion does she think the sinking of the Titanic destroyed?
Answer 1.) The idea that a ship, or any of the works of men, were indestructible.


Question 2.) What does the speaker say was the disadvantage of the era of chivalry?
Answer 2.) That it was an age of restriction when women could not marry the men that they chose.


Question 3.) Why does she think that the film represented the end of an era?
Answer 3.) Because shortly after that there were many changes that brought about the end of the values of the Edwardian era.


Question 4.) What did she think attracted most people, especially young people, to see the film?
Answer 4.) The story of two young people falling in love just before the ship hit the iceberg.


Question 5.) What does she think is essential for a movie to become popular all over the world?
Answer 5.) She thinks that it needs to be able to be many things to many different people; in other words it has to be appealing for a variety of reasons.










Tomorrow we should study the first lesson of the Elementary Vocabulary. Maybe Sepid12ir is going to tell you something about that

Have fun
Single Boy:11:

[sepid12ir]

hey guys, how are 'ya doin?
well, I was away for a while but I'm glad to see this topic lively :10:, hope u all enjoy the holiday
today we should all work on vocabulary. as u know, we work on 'Elementary Vocabulary By B J THOMA', since it is easy I think it would be better if u all could cover two units of that today n if there was any question about the words or the examples dun hesitate n ask us, it will be answered soon

besides, if u like u can have some of yr own examples today to see whether they are correct or not
have a happy day:11:l
Sepideh:11:l

[singleguy]

I have a problem. What is the first unite? Dictionary practice or The family?
let me ask it in other way: is the Dictionary practice a unite itself or not?
Thanks:11:

[sepid12ir]

I have a problem. What is the first unite? Dictionary practice or The family?
let me ask it in other way: is the Dictionary practice a unite itself or not?
Thanks:11:



no, u should go thru 'the family'
dictionary practice is just sorta trying to make learners familir with the usage of dictionary n how to look up the words...of course there should be a small practice for new learners how to use a dictionary but since u are almost familiar with the whole stuff about dic u should go thru the topics:10:n I asked u to cover two units bcuz that's a duck soup...really easy n it is just a review
happy studyin:11:l

[singleguy]

Hi....
Is there any volunteer to explain the second grammar lesson?
If yes, hurry up

[masoudtr]

it's really good idea for voc
but it's very easy and i don't think no one have question about it

Is there any volunteer to explain the second grammar lesson?

what is the second grammar?
is your INTENTION from the BOOK (English Grammar in Use with Answers

[brain]

Lesson 2
Present Simple ( I do )

1 . This tense is used when you talk about things in general. Something happens all the time or repetedly, or that something is true in general.

I / you / we / they + drive / work / do etc
He / she / it + drives / works / does tec

example:

I usually go to the movies at the weekends

He eats launch at 12 oclock everyday

Notice:

I work but He works ......... they teach but My sister teaches

2.We use do / does to make question and negative sentences

example:

I go to the movies at the weekends
Do you go to the movies at the weekends

He eats launch at 12 oclock everyday
He doesn't eat launch at 12 oclock everyday


Notice:

He works but Does he work? .......... She teaches but Does she teach?

3. Present Simple can be used with these periods of time


every + (year-day etc)
each + (year-day etc)
during + (a day etc)
every other + (day-week etc)


example:

I go to travel every year

I go to bathroom every other day

4.Present Simple can be used with these adverbs of frequency

ever-never-always-usually-often-sometimes

example:

They never play golf

5.This tense could be used in passive tense

are/is + p.p

example:

We eat food ...... Food is eaten

I pick up oranges ..... Oranges are picked



درس 2
حال ساده

1-حال ساده در مواردی استفاده می شود که ما کاری را به صورت عادت و تکرار انجام می دهیم.

I / you / we / they + drive / work / do etc
He / she / it + drives / works / does tec

مثال:

I usually go to the movies at the weekends

He eats launch at 12 oclock everyday

نکته:

وجود s / es در آخر فعل سوم شخص الزامی می باشد.

He works اما I work
My sister teaches اما They teach

2-با استفاده از do / does می توان جملات حال ساده را سوالی یا منفی نمود.

مثال:

I go to the movies at the weekends
Do you go to the movies at the weekends?

He eats launch at 12 oclock everyday
He doesn't eat launch at 12 oclock everyday

نکته:

Does he work? اما He works
Does she teach? اما She teaches

3-قیود زمان



every + (year-day etc)
each + (year-day etc)
during + (a day etc)
every other + (day-week etc)




مثال:

I go to travel every year

I go to bathroom every other day

4-قیود تکرار

ever-never-always-usually-often-sometimes

مثال:

They never play golf

5-حال ساده در حالت مجهول :

are/is + p.p

مثال:

We eat food ...... Food is eaten

I pick up oranges ..... Oranges are picked


End

If you do all practice absolutely understand better this lesson
If you have questions plz ask
Have fun


s your INTENTION from the BOOK (English Grammar in Use with Answers
Yes

but it's very easy and i don't think no one have question about it
We know it but againest the schedule, we should do it
:31:

[singleguy]

Thanks to dear Brain who explained the grammar.
why don't you tell me your idea about the subject of Writing activity?::19:

send Brain or me your idea and suggestion about the subject till tonight. If not, maybe we have to choose a subject that you don't like
I will explain more about what you should do for this activity at night. so bye till night

[winter+girl]

send Brain or me your idea and suggestion about the subject till tonight. If not, maybe we have to choose a subject that you don't like


we have 2 write?
when?
how?
why?

[singleguy]

we have 2 write?
when?
how?
why? _first welcome to our group:11:. I hope you don't leave us like many other members
Didn't you read the schedule at first page? we should start doing the writing activity from tomorrow for 4days. I'll tell you the subject of this activity tonight and you should write an essay including at least 100 words.
in addition to the writing you should write 10 examples including the words you learned from the 1st and 2nd vocabulary lessons+ 5 examples related to this grammar lesson+ 5examples related to the last grammar lesson
as I told you in Persian in the schedule:


یازدهم تا چهاردهم = فعالیت رایتینگ در مورد موضوع مربوطه(شامل حداقل 100 کلمه)+ ساختن حد اقل 10 جمله در مورد کلمات خوانده شده در کتاب لغت+ساخت حداقل 10 جمله در مورد مطالب خوانده شده در کتاب گرامر(هر 3 مورد در یک پست)




but it's very easy and i don't think no one have question about itYes of course it is easy but I don't know all of the ways to use the simple present

for example could you answer the questions blow?

which one is more common for telling a report or in ads?
Simple present or present continuous? :13:

Which one used in news paper headings? simple present or present continuous? in last grammar lesson I found some ad headings with the Present continuous while I've just found a news paper heading with the Simple Present. for example:
some news paper heading:
Iraq Lost Billions to War Profits
NIGEC Set For Armenia Exports
Malaysians Eager to Invest In Chabahar FTZ
.
.
.

and some ads:
Theater Royal
The Hampton Drama Society is Performing

The City Concert Hall
Simon Lee and Martha Glassen are playing
.
.
.


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should we use just simple present to tell a jock? :13:
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When I listen to English reporters who describe a sport mach on radio or TV they always use the simple present while they are talking about an event that is occurring at the moment (at the same time) WHY??????!!!!!!

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and a some questions about the exercise book:
please tell me the correct sentence in each number:
1
What do you think of my hair? or What are you thinking of my hair?

2
you look great today or you are looking great today

3
Are you enjoying your meal? or Do you enjoy your meal?

[winter+girl]

Who should answer this questions
sorry
i know i ask a lot
if it's unusuall
tell me plz
: D

[winter+girl]

Didn't you read the schedule at first page?

NO IREAD IT BUT IDON'T UNDERESTAND


in addition to the writing you should write 10 examples including the words you learned from the 1st and 2nd vocabulary lessons+ 5 examples related to this grammar lesson+ 5examples related to the last grammar lesson

U MEAN I SHOULD WRITE THESE sentences seprate of my writing or in whole of it?
thanks for the answers

[masoudtr]

why don't you tell me your idea about the subject of Writing activity?:[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

UNFORTUNATELY i don't have a good idea but i believe that your idea is good and useful

[sepid12ir]

[
Yes of course it is easy but I don't know all of the ways to use the simple present

for example could you answer the questions blow?

which one is more common for telling a report or in ads?
Simple present or present continuous? :13:

Which one used in news paper headings? simple present or present continuous? in last grammar lesson I found some ad headings with the Present continuous while I've just found a news paper heading with the Simple Present. for example:
some news paper heading:
Iraq Lost Billions to War Profits
NIGEC Set For Armenia Exports
Malaysians Eager to Invest In Chabahar FTZ
.
.
.

and some ads:
Theater Royal
The Hampton Drama Society is Performing

The City Concert Hall
Simon Lee and Martha Glassen are playing
I'm not pretty sure about my answer but I think it mostly depends on the verbs and the events n according to that not only simple present or continious can be used but also past n future tenses can be included.
should we use just simple present to tell a jock? :13:Beats me!
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When I listen to English reporters who describe a sport mach on radio or TV they always use the simple present while they are talking about an event that is occurring at the moment (at the same time) WHY??????!!!!!!well, u mean while reporting the game or no in the news? if u mean while playing the game they used simple present it's not that's weird, everything can happen in spoken language...I actually have never paid attention to that, I gotta ask or some other experts can explain it here but I think grammatically it's not correct to use simple present for the action which are happening at the moment.
I'm sitting, I'm typing n I'm listening to music!..
anyway, not sure, I try to find it out:10:l

What do you think of my hair? or What are you thinking of my hair?
2
you look great today or you are looking great today

3

Are you enjoying your meal? or Do you enjoy your meal?


[/quote]

some english verbs have stative meaning n they are mostly used in simple present; such as 'like', 'taste', 'smell' , 'love', 'like' , believe' n ...l
I try to search more about the questions which were above my knowladge n let u know the answers

[brain]

Hi
:31::11:

1-

فعالیت رایتینگ در مورد موضوع مربوطه(شامل حداقل 100 کلمه)

Writing Subject : What you've done in Norooz

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2-

ساختن حد اقل 10 جمله در مورد کلمات خوانده شده در کتاب لغت Elementary Vocabulary

Elementary Vocabulary > Lesson 1 ( The Family )

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3-

ساخت حداقل 10 جمله در مورد مطالب خوانده شده در کتاب گرامر

English grammar in use > Lesson 1 and 2

Five Sentences For Lesson 1
Five sentences For Lesson 2

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(هر 3 مورد در یک پست در همین تاپیک)

مهلت ارسال : 11th to 14th

Bye
:10::5:


(اگر سوالی هست در پروفایل من یا Singleguy پرسیده شود ، تشکر)

[hoseinist]

Hi my friends :10:
I wanted to be the first one to do this homework!:46:
Part 1: about using new words in sentences

Sara is Ray’s daughter and Ray is Bill’s son , so Sara is Bill’s granddaughter.
Kit is Bill’swife and Kelly is Bill’ssister, now Kelly is Kit’ssister-in-law.
Evan is Kelly’s son and Bill is Kelly’s brother so Evan is Bill’s nephew.
So Evan is Ray s cousin! Hey guys can u image this family in your mind because i got confused!!:blink::31:

Part 2:
Present continues:
A: Listen ! Can u believe that! I saw Shila (my last classmate) in cinema!
B: Oh did you? What is she doingthese days?
A: She is at university.
B: What is she studying ?
A: She is studying English at Hafez university .
B: Is she enjoying it?
A: Yes she is ,she said its her favorite course !:thumbsup:

Present Simple :
1.He seldom smiles flowers because he has allergic whit them.
2. Because of his hearing loss, he scarcely hears sounds.
3.My brother doesn’t know how to play guitar.
4.What do usually do in the evening?
5.What kind of music do u like?
6.She complains that her son sometimes doesn’t listen to her .
7.I often go on studying trip.

Part 3: writing about Norooz:
Because of my expert exam in khordad , this holiday I just stayed at home and studied my lessons! This was like a konkoor after 7 years again ! ;) so I didn’t have any exiting expert for this writing !
book جشن های آب But I read an interesting subject about norooz in .
and i like telling u : u know Norooz is a historcal ceremony since Babelies
and the reason of using the number 7 is for holy of this number. Number 7 pointed to 7 angels that people believed they come from sky and investigate to people’ s act .although some scientist believed that maybe Haftsine was really Hatfshine! Because people make 7 things from Shin on that time such as sugar and milk and sweet and etc.
(شکر شیر شیرینی و...)
They prepared them in to 7 sini so it named Haftsini and as the time went it change to Haftsine!:D

i hope u become more intrested about our historical events in our country and study more about them!:D:11:

[masoudtr]

Writing Subject : What you've done in Noroozhello every one
I don’t do special thing in noroz

I just visit my family & search in web for download music & film

I ‘m so chill because a don’t have exciting noroz

So i’m trying to write about why should i do in noroz

I really love spring because every thing change

And the weather is so fresh and these thing help us to change ourself and help to make a better life for us

I think you can use noroz to think about something you did in last year and something you want do in this year

Oh sorry

I almost forgot happy new year




Elementary Vocabulary > Lesson 1 ( The Family ) i have nice nephew i call him dodo but his name is sasan

he is similar to his grandmother

i have twele cousins & have two aunt

i don’t have wife but i hate of mother in law

so i’m searchig for girl that don’t have mum

i have a beautiful cousin

she marrid last year so my aunt have a INCAPABLE birdegroom

i said from many years ago that donkey eat good apple ago but i don’t believe that until this happen:18::27:








English grammar in use > Lesson 1 and 2
Present Simple
I go to shop every day & i help to my parents to make meal for lunch i love classic music but i often listen to pap music i don’t know why?

Present continues

I’m writing a few word about present continue i’m trying to use keyboard as a professional typer

My mother making meal at this moment

she calling me to eating lunch so i’m sorry i’m must leaving this writing

[sepid12ir]

Hi my friends :10:
I wanted to be the first one to do this homework!:46:
Part 1: about using new words in sentences

Sara is Ray’s daughter and Ray is Bill’s son , so Sara is Bill’s granddaughter.
Kit is Bill’swife and Kelly is Bill’ssister, now Kelly is Kit’ssister-in-law.
Evan is Kelly’s son and Bill is Kelly’s brother so Evan is Bill’s nephew.
So Evan is Ray s cousin! Hey guys can u image this family in your mind because i got confused!!:blink::31:

Part 2:
Present continues:
A: Listen ! Can u believe that! I saw Shila (my last classmate) in cinema!
B: Oh did you? What is she doingthese days?
A: She is at university.
B: What is she studying ?
A: She is studying English at Hafez university .
B: Is she enjoying it?
A: Yes she is ,she said its her favorite course !:thumbsup:

Present Simple :
1.He seldom smiles(Smells:46:) flowers because he has allergic whit them.
2. Because of his hearing loss, he scarcely hears sounds.
3.My brother doesn’t know how to play guitar.
4.What do usually do in the evening?
5.What kind of music do u like?
6.She complains that her son sometimes doesn’t listen to her .
7.I often go on studying trip.

Part 3: writing about Norooz:
Because of my expert exam in khordad , this holiday I just stayed at home and studied my lessons! This was like a konkoor after 7 years again ! ;) so I didn’t have any exiting expert for this writing !
book جشن های آب But I read an interesting subject about norooz in .
and i like telling u : u know Norooz is a historcal ceremony since Babelies
and the reason of using the number 7 is for holy(holiness) of this number. Number 7 pointed to 7 angels that people believed they come from sky and investigate to people’ s act .although some scientist believed that maybe Haftsine was really Hatfshine! Because people make 7 things from Shin on that time such as sugar and milk and sweet and etc.
(شکر شیر شیرینی و...)
They prepared them in to 7 sini so it named Haftsini and as the time went it changed to Haftsine!:D

i hope u become more intrested about our historical events in our country and study more about them!:D:11:




hey, how are you doing buddy?
great; thaanks for being Pioneer:11:l
it was perfect, thanks for the info u shared with us n I cross my fingers for u to pass the !damn exam;
well, I've corrected some in yr the quoted part n some are here:
allergic whit them: allergic to them---> the preposition of allergic is to

interested about: interested in---> the preposition of interested is in

[extreme2006gh]

hello everybody

what have you done in norooz ?

this norooz was quite like norooz of last years for me . most of people go to visit their relatives in norooz and I did it too. I think that is a nice custom in our culture going to visit our relatives specially in this era .
Now we are in the era of technology and industry that has been affected our life , it causes people is made away (I don t know it is right or not the structure that I use forthis sentence ) from each other for example. people have more stresses and tension than before in these days, and they dont have enough time to visit each other , then it s good time to do that .
then I try to go to visit my relatives in every norooz and I did it this year too . I went to visit my grandmother and grandfather first then I went ...
but I did some another activities in norooz like studing my retard lessons and sometime i have activity in this froum with you .


because I didn t study vocabulary and grammar book I can t do other exercises. I m sorry but I ll try to participate more in activities in future .

[sada]

hi:10:
sorry i'm late:41::31:
but here it is my homeworks:5:

1-
now i want to tell you what did i do in norouz.as in Tir i have university entrance exam i must spend my free times on studing,but i went to see my relatives too.watching tv and going out with my friend are the other things i did in norouz.my family and i went on a 2days long trip to neyriz,we enjoyed the nature and we spent a lot of time in the nature because neyriz has a beautiful nature.i played computer games a lot,and saw some movies.i though , i though a lot about my life,my future life and what i am going to do,and what i want to do in my life.i made a new friend too

2-
1- i have one brother and one sister.
2- my uncle and his wife live in tehran.
3- my cousins is a very big boy.
4- i like my parents so much.
5- my aunt's husband works in a bank.
6- old families in iran have many children.
7- i am the younger grandson.
8- both of my grandmother and grandfather are still alive.
9- Ali has a very kind father_in_law.
10_ Ali doesn't have any niece or cousins to play with.

3-1
1- i am studing
2- teacher asks student not to make noises when she is teaching
3- i see that my english is getting better since i join the group
4- i am happy now because today i studing a lot
5- as i have a exam next week i am studing harder

3-2
1- Ali doesn't go on the trip because he is sick
2- my little brother asks me to do his homeworks
3- i suggest my brother not to go fishing today
4- jack promise he never be late again
5- my friend goes mountain climbing always in fridays

[JEFF_HARDY]

hello everybody



what have you done in norooz ?


this norooz was quite like norooz of last years for me . most of people go to visit their relatives in norooz and I did it too. I think that is a nice custom in our culture going to visit our relatives specially in this era .
Now we are in the era of technology and industry that has been affected our life , it causes people is made away (I don t know it is right or not the structure that I use forthis sentence ) from each other for example. people have more stresses and tension than before in these days, and they dont have enough time to visit each other , then it s good time to do that .
then I try to go to visit my relatives in every norooz and I did it this year too . I went to visit my grandmother and grandfather first then I went ...
but I did some another activities in norooz like studing my retard lessons and sometime i have activity in this froum with you .



because I didn t study vocabulary and grammar book I can t do other exercises. I m sorry but I ll try to participate more in activities in future .


سلام.گفتم شايد كمكي كرده باشم،اشكالات كوچكي كه به ذهن من رسيد اينا بود.


most of people go to visit their relatives in norooz and I did it too: and so did i

people have more stresses: peole are more stressed (stress is uncountable,stresses is incorrect


in these days:these day


some another :some other

[sepid12ir]

I don’t do special thing in noroz

I just visit my family & search in web for download music & film

I ‘m so chill because a don’t have exciting noroz

So i’m trying to write about why should i do in noroz

I really love spring because every thing change

And the weather is so fresh and these thing help us to change ourself and help to make a better life for us

I think you can use noroz to think about something you did in last year and something you want do in this year

Oh sorry



Hey dude, happy new yr :11:...hope u enjoy the rest of the new yr n do fabulous things
I just visit my family & search in web for download music & film: to download music and movie/films



every thing change: everything changes--->the words like 'everything, everybody, everyone, someone and somebody' should be treated like a third person so dun forget the 's' of third person for the verbs which come after them



these thing: these things ---> after these /those u should use plular nouns

ourself: ourselves



want do: want to do---> want is an infinitive verb so a verb comes after it you should use 'to' after 'want'l


i have a nice nephew i call him dodo but his name is sasan

he is similar to his grandmother

i have twele cousins & have two aunts

i don’t have wife but i hate of mother in law

so i’m searchig for a girl that(who) don’t(doesn't) have mum

i have a beautiful cousin

she marrid last year so my aunt have a INCAPABLE birdegroom

i said from many years ago that donkey eat good apple ago but i don’t believe that until this happen:18::27:



I hate of mother-in-law: I hate mother-in-laws--->after hate there is no preposition: hate sth


my aunt have: my aunt has--> aunt is the third person so instead of have, u should have used 'has' l






Present Simple
I go to shop every day & i help to my parents to make meal for lunch i love classic music but i often listen to pap music i don’t know why?

Present continues

I’m writing a few wordS about present continue i’m trying to use keyboard as a professional typer

My mother making meal at this moment

she calling me to eating lunch so i’m sorry i’m must leaving this writing]


Well, Masoud?(Am I right, yr real name is Masoud?)...anyhow, I'd like u correct the mistakes of this part
I'm waiting for that
thanks:11:l

[masoudtr]

oh
thanks a lot
i think correct of sentence in UP is


Present Simple
I go to shop every day & i help my parents to make meal for lunch i love classic music but i often listen to pap music i don’t know why?

Present continues

I’m writing a few words about present continue i’m trying to use keyboard as a professional typer

My mother's making meal at moment

she's calling me to eat lunch so i’m sorry i’m leaving this writing

[singleguy]

What have you done in Norooz

Actually I didn't do anything special in Norooz. I just stayed home caught up on my studying.and some of the days I went to library to study more efficiently. I just went to my brother's and my uncle's house and anywhere else. I need to do some exercises so my father helped me in some of activities that I wasn't able to do by myself.
Let me talk about the most exciting day in Norooz the ''Nurture day''. My parents and i went somewhere beautiful and quite with few people camping there. My father and I went mountain climbing. My father became rest in the middle of mountain climbing so he sat somewhere and I continued my way lonely however it was so dangerous. I arrived somewhere in the mountain where very dangerous to continue with no especial supplies but there was really high and I found some snow to play with:31:. That was really cold:31:. that was so funny because I was playing with snow and laughing and cheering with myself like a crazy man.:31:


Grammar

I exercise 3 times a week

My father goes to work every day in the morning
Your car looks cleaner today
Your dressing looks better than the last party
Every one does her/his best in this group
I'm trying to change my life style
What do you think of my job?
I'm trying to achieve some better jobs
My father is working for a company at the moment
The new music group is playing at the big hall of our university this year
My brother is driving to Isfahan at the moment
The prices of goods are decreasing this month



Vocabulary

cousin is brother of your father or mother
nephew is your sister's or brother's son
niece is your brother's or sister's daughter
Who is your daughter of your wife of your uncle's brother? Your sister :D
Grand son is someone's son's son
grand daughter is some one's son's or daughter's daughter
son in law is someone's daughter's husband
brother in law is someone's sister's husband or someone's wife's brother or someone's wife's or husband's sister's husband (that's confusing [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] )
My ante always nag my uncle to take my nephew and my niece to school
My father always compliment my nephew while I do every thing better than him

[JEFF_HARDY]

What have you done in Norooz





Actually I didn't do anything special in Norooz. I just stayed home caught up on my studying.and some of the days I went to library to study more efficiently. I just went to my brother's and my uncle's house and anywhere else. I need to do some exercises so my father helped me in some of activities that I wasn't able to do by myself.



Let me talk about the most exciting day in Norooz the ''Nurture day''. My parents and i went somewhere beautiful and quite with few people camping there. My father and I went mountain climbing. My father became rest in the middle of mountain climbing so he sat somewhere and I continued my way lonely however it was so dangerous. I arrived somewhere in the mountain where very dangerous to continue with no especial supplies but there was really high and I found some snow to play with:31:. That was really cold:31:. that was so funny because I was playing with snow and laughing and cheering with myself like a crazy man.:31:







hey mate,i think these points would be interesting for you to check in.
i thought these things would make your note more like a profesional,tell me if im wrong somewhere.
anywhere else: nowhere else.هيچ جاي ديگري نرفتم


helped me in some of activities:helped me with some of the activities

mountain climbing:mountain neering is more used in this case كوهنوردي

lonely: on my own به تنهايي

became rest: became tired خسته شد

where very dangerous :where was very dangerouse

cheering with myself :cheering by myself

[sepid12ir]

first off I shall thank JEFF_HARDY for being concered about the stuff we do here n correcting the mistakes...I appreciate that:10:l
n besides, thanks Masoud, they were all correct:11:l


Grammar

I exercise 3 times a week

My father goes to work every day in the morning
Your car looks cleaner today
Your dressing looks better than the last party
Every one does her/his best in this group
I'm trying to change my life style
What do you think of my job?
I'm trying to achieve some better jobs
My father is working for a company at the moment
The new music group is playing at the big hall of our university this year
My brother is driving to Isfahan at the moment
The prices of goods are decreasing this month

absolutely great dear Pal:11:l




[QUOTE]Vocabulary

cousin is brother of your father or mother?
nephew is your sister's or brother's son
niece is your brother's or sister's daughter
Who is your daughter of your wife of your uncle's brother? Your sister :D
Grand son is someone's son's son
grand daughter is some one's son's or daughter's daughter
son in law is someone's daughter's husband
brother in law is someone's sister's husband or someone's wife's brother or someone's wife's or husband's sister's husband (that's confusing [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] )
My ante always nag my uncle to take my nephew and my niece to school
My father always compliment my nephew while I do every thing better than him







well, I think the very first one is not correct; uncle is bro of one's mom or dad...! so then, who is cousin?:46:l
nag my uncle: nag at my uncle

btw, in some parts u've forgotten the third person 's' for some verbs. I'm sure u can find 'em out yrself
Warm Regards:11:,
Sepideh

[extreme2006gh]

سلام.گفتم شايد كمكي كرده باشم،اشكالات كوچكي كه به ذهن من رسيد اينا بود.


most of people go to visit their relatives in norooz and I did it too: and so did i

people have more stresses: peole are more stressed (stress is uncountable,stresses is incorrect


in these days:these day


some another :some other




thank you very much dear friend
I ll be glad if anybody tell me my mistakes.

[winter+girl]

I don't know what should I say be couse I do any thing in norooz except eatin and sleeping I know u expect that I write about the lessons and the time of learning becouse I'm a student but I didn't learn my lessons.
I just went to my aunt house for 3 days and had fun time with my cousins.the other days I was at home and searches the internet and forums.
I found a lot of freinds and learned a lot of things
some days we had guests same the others but a night my uncles came our house one of them has a doghter her name is 3pide.
and she slept in my room but it's better I tell u we didn't sleep. we stay up till 6:00 AM . I couldn't say what we did but I can't tell u we laughed a lot ( If s.one wants to know ask in my profile I don't say it was a good work but plz u read it with out no equivocation) at the end I should write sorry of this irrelevent writing becouse:1
it was my first writing
2.
we don't have 100 days weekend to write 100 sentences.
1- Do u know D.R Mike? yeah sure I'm his wife
2- How did u introduce with ur husband?
3- he was my friend's brother
4-we saw each other in a party. that day was his niece birthday
5- I have a son and a daughter of him:31:
6- my son in same his grandfather
u mean ur father?
7- no my father in low
8- but my daughter is same her aunt
9- u mean ur sister in low?
no same my sister:21:
10- I really love my husband and my childeren:40::40::40:


1-
I am writing my sentences
2. he is calling me
3- my mother is making dinner
4- my father is watchin TV
5- the sun is shining yet
6- I don't love u
7- he does't underestand me
8- Do u have pen
9- my mother is a teacher
10- she speaks a lot