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Blue Ray
03-04-2009, 20:20
Hi everybody !
I'm so sorry for missing the listening activity.
But Here's my writing and vocab assignments :


What you’ve done in norooz ?

This norooz was sort of different to me.My family went to travel but I pereferd not to go.Actually I wasn’t in the mood ! So I spent an unaccompanied holiday .
You might consider it as the worst thing might happened to someone in norooz but frankly , it was a good experience.Being responsible for everything , not answering anybody for what you do , feeling kind of independent ! These are some of bright sides of being alone even in norooz.I spent my time watching movies , listening to music and also sometimes hanging out with friends.

Elementary Vocabulary Lesson 1 (Family) – 10 Examples



My aunt ,the sister of my mother, is a kind woman.
If I had a niece , I’d be her uncle !
I respect my parents.
most of my cousins are older than me.
I can’t count on cousin because his not reliable.
My aunt’s husband is an angry man.
His sister is good with children.
My grandmother has many experiences.


English Grammar In Use (Present Continuous)



My father is reading a newspaper
I’m studing for the exams for the time being
I think I’m doing my job well.
it seems his trying to say something.
Be quiet please,I’m listening to the radio.


English Grammar In Use (Present Simple)



I don’t think if it is a good idea.
Do you usually talk so load?
Everytime I see you , you look beter !
I usually sleep late.
The glasses are broken.

JEFF_HARDY
03-04-2009, 20:29
I don't know what should I say be couse I do any thing in norooz except eatin and sleeping I know u expect that I write about the lessons and the time of learning becouse I'm a student but I didn't learn my lessons.

I just went to my aunt house for 3 days and had fun time with my cousins.the other days I was at home and searches the internet and forums.
I found a lot of freinds and learned a lot of things
some days we had guests same the others but a night my uncles came our house one of them has a doghter her name is 3pide.
and she slept in my room but it's better I tell u we didn't sleep. we stay up till 6:00 AM . I couldn't say what we did but I can't tell u we laughed a lot ( If s.one wants to know ask in my profile I don't say it was a good work but plz u read it with out no equivocation) at the end I should write sorry of this irrelevent writing becouse:1
it was my first writing
2.
we don't have 100 days weekend to write 100 sentences.



be couse: becouse

do any thing : did nothing,or didn`t do anything

learn my lessons: didn`t study my lessons

aunt house:aunt`s house

had fun time :had fun,or had a fun time

searches: searching

I was at :stayed at home

same the others :same as others,or like others

our house :our home

doghter :daughter

we stay up :we were awake

can't: can

ask in: ask me at

u read it :just read it

with out no :without any

write sorry :say i`m sorry

of this :about this

have 100 days weekend: have 100 weekend days

JEFF_HARDY
03-04-2009, 20:40
Hi everybody !

I'm so sorry for missing the listening activity.
But Here's my writing and vocab assignments :



What you’ve done in norooz ?


This norooz was sort of different to me.My family went to travel but I pereferd not to go.Actually I wasn’t in the mood ! So I spent an unaccompanied holiday .
You might consider it as the worst thing might happened to someone in norooz but frankly , it was a good experience.Being responsible for everything , not answering anybody for what you do , feeling kind of independent ! These are some of bright sides of being alone even in norooz.I spent my time watching movies , listening to music and also sometimes hanging out with friends.




different to me: different for me

of bright sides: some of the bright sides

brain
03-04-2009, 22:08
What Have You Done In Norooz
First Day, I went to my grandparent's house ... oh what a boring day :23:
Second Day, I went to my grandparent's house too and we ate dinner at there :7:
3th Day , My aunt(my mother's sister) came to our house. Oh and I knew a good point in this day and it was about my ADSL and it was Free until 7th and I started to download some files :26:
4th Day, all of my uncles and aunts and cousins came to our house and I had a hard day cuz of I had to entertain our guests :37:. My pc was turning on and downloading too :31:
5th Day, I was searching on the webs to find some files to download all the day :8:
6th Day, Oh yes , at last we started to visit our relatives and it is good for me cuz they entertained me very good. We went to my one of big uncle's house :40: and My pc was turning on and ...
7th Day, we went to my second uncle's house and My pc ..:32: :31:
8th Day, We went to my aunt's house and My pc turned off this time:D
9th Day , our far relatives came to our house and this time I escaped from reception and my sister did
it:25:
10th Day, we went to my aunt's house (my mother's sister) and there I played football with my little cousin:10:
11th Day, I went to my friend's house:20:
12th Day , at last all of parties finished and I took relax breathing:34:
13th Day, I went to 13 Bedar and I had a very good day with my relatives:16::10:

Main works in Norooz : go to other houses
and kissing each others
and eating Ajil and then have a stomachacke
and laughing
and ...
:34:

Grammer
Lesson 1
1-We are learning english in this group
2-We are collaborating together to learn english better
3-Many members are leaving this group
4-I am doing my group's homworks
5-Some masters are helping us to learn english better

Lesson 2
1-I want to go to travel today
2-We need help to stay alive
3-They stay at the camp for two weeks
4-Mary leaves his husband she never loves him
5-You have many mistakes in your last exam

Vocabulary
Lesson 1
1-I haven't brother and sister
2-One of my uncle died many years ago
3-I always play with my cousins
4-I have two bad aunts
5-I like my parents and they like their children
6-My grandparents want to go to Mecca
7-They have 5 grandsons and 5 granddaughters
8-I don't have father in law and mother in law and sister in law and brother in law because I don't have wife
9-I only have one nephew
10-His mother(my aunt) love her husband but I don't like them

The End
:11:
Sorry , I have a lot of mistakes because I did it at minute 90
:31:

3ッドマクス
03-04-2009, 23:09
من کجا میتونم به انگلیسی صحبت کنم و دوستان اشتباهات کارم رو بهم بگن ! البته در یک جمله 10 کلمه ای فکر کنم 8 تا اشتباه داشته باشم ! در کل من تازه واردم ممکنه این پست هم به اشتباه تو این تاپیک زده باشم شرمنده ...

ویرایش :

خب یکی از دوستان گفتند که تو این تاپیک میتونم چنین کاری انجام بدم . سعی میکنم صحبت کنم البته به صورت خیلی ابتدایی که تو همونش هم مشکل دارم .

singleguy
04-04-2009, 00:14
Mistakes are facts of life. It is the response to error that counts.
Niki Giovanni- American writer


A Long Walk Home
by Jason Bocrro
from chicken soup for the teenage soul
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I grew up in the south of Spain in a little community called Estepona. I was 16 when one morning, my father told me I could drive him into a remote village called Mijas, about 18 miles away, on the condition that I take(1) the car in to be serviced(2) at a nearby garage. Having just leaned to drive and hardly ever having the opportunity to use the car, I readily accepted. I drove Dad into Mijas and promised to pick him up at 4 p.m., then drove to a nearby garage and dropped off the car.Because I had a few hours to spare(3), I decided to catch a couple of movies at a theater near the garage. However, I became so immersed(4) in the films that I completely lost track of time(5). when the last movie had finished, I looked down at my watch. It was six o'clock. I was two hours late!

I knew Dad would be anger if he found out I'd been watching movies. He'd never let me drive again. I decided to tell him that the car needed some repairs and that they had taken longer than had been expected. I drove up to the place where we had planned to meet and saw Dad waiting patiently on the corner. I apologized for being late and told him that I'd come as quickly as I could, but the car had needed some major repairs. I'll never forget the look he gave me(6)

"I'm disappointed that you feel you have to lie to me, Jason."
"What do you mean? I'm telling the truth"

Dad looked at me again. "When did not show up, I called the garage to ask if there were any problems, and they told me that you had not picked up the car. So you see, I know there were no problems with the car." A rush of guilt ran through me as I feebly confessed to(7) my trip to the movie theater and real reason for my tardiness. Dad listened intently as a sadness passed through him.

“I’m angry, not with you but with myself. You see, I realize that I have failed as a father if after all these years you feel that you have to lie to me. I have failed because I have brought up a son who cannot contemplate (8) where I have gone wrong all these years.”

“But Dad, It’s 18 miles to home. It’s dark. You can’t walk home.”
My protests, my apologies and the rest of my utterances were useless. I had let my father down (9), and I was about to learn one of the most painful lessons of my life. Dad began walking along the dusty road. I quickly jumped in the car and followed behind, hoping he would relent (10). I pleaded all the way, telling him how sorry, I was, but he simply ignored me, continuing on silently, thoughtfully and painfully. For 18 miles I drove behind him, average about five miles per hour.

Seeing my father in so much physical and emotional pain was the most distressing and painful experience that I have ever faced. However it was also the most successful lesson. I have never lied him since.


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1-on the condition that I take if I look
2-to be serviced to be checked for problems and repaired if necessary
3-had a few hours to spare had a few free hours
4-immersed interested in, fascinated by
5-lost track of time didn't pay attention to the time
6-the look gave me the way he looked at me
7-confessed to told the truth about
8-contemplate think seriously about
9-let my father down disappointed my father
10-relent do what he said he wouldn't do(i.e., ride home in the car)
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Reading activities

A. order the events.
Number the events in the story " A Long Walk Home" from the first (1) to last (10)
_____He apologized to his father for being late
_____He went to a movie theater
_____He dropped the car off at the garage to be serviced
_____He realized his father knew he was lying
_____He realized it was six o'clock and his father was waiting for him
_____He followed his father the whole 18 miles home
_____He picked up the car at the garage and then went pick up his father
_____He told his father a lie
__1__Jason drove his father into town and dropped him off
_____He tried to persuade his father to get into the the car

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B. Consider the issues.
work with your partner to answer the questions blow
1- What do you think Jason said when he apologized to his father?
2- What is your opinion of the way Jason's father responded to his son's late?
3-Jason said that he learned something from this experience. Beside learning not to lie, What do you think he learned?

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C.

Using Context
When you read, you can use context( the surrounding words and ideas) to guess the meaning of many unfamiliar words
In the sentences blow use context to guess the meaning of the highlighted words.choose the letter your answer
1- On the condition that I take the car in to be serviced at nearby garage
a. building b.restaurant c.repair shop

2-Having just learned to drive, and hardly ever having the opportunity to use the car, I readily accepted
a.quickly b.quietly c.sadly

3- Because I had few hours to spare, I decided to catch a couple of movies at a theater near the garage
a.find b.watch c.ignore

4- my protests, my apologies and the rest of my utterances were useless
a.friends b.clothes c.words

Blue Ray
04-04-2009, 09:08
different to me: different for me

of bright sides: some of the bright sides

thanks friend.about the "some of the bright sides" yes yor right!

but about the for i doubt it !

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JEFF_HARDY
04-04-2009, 10:44
different to me: different for me




of bright sides: some of the bright sides



thanks friend.about the "some of the bright sides" yes yor right!

but about the for i doubt it !

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سلام
آقا دمت گرم،ما رو به چالش كشوندي!خيلي خوشحالم مطالبم برات مفيد بوده،از دقت و ادامه و پي گيريت هم ممنونم.

اگه اجازه بديد بريم سراغ نكته آموزشي
شما فرموديد


this norooz was sort of different to me


كه من به ذهنم رسيد حالت كامل كننده جمله شما اين هست

this norooz was sort of different for me


و شما فرموديد طبق ديكشنري لانگ من,different to صحيح هست،بنا بر مثال


her jacket`s different to mine


الا با اجازه من مثال ديكشنري لانگ من رو ترجمه مي كنم


her jacket`s different to mine: كت اون خانوم با مال من تفاوت دارد


اگه دقت كرده باشيد،مقايسه بين دو چيز هست،و دو شي،پس different to رو (متفاوت از،يا متفاوت با)ترجمه مي كنيم.

حالا بريم سراغ متن اصليمون و ترجمه جمله شما
:نوروز امسال يه جورايي با من تفاوت داشت: this norooz was sort of different to me:

يعني شما خودتون رو با نوروز مقايسه كرده ايد،كه از نظر گرامري غلط هست.

با توجه به اندك تجربه اي كه داشتم احتمال دادم شما منظورتون اين جمله فارسي هست

نوروز امسال يه جورايي براي من متفاوت بود
براي من:for me
پس در نهايت جمله صحيح:

نوروز امسال يه جورايي براي من متفاوت بود :this norooz was sort of different for me


خيلي پر حرفي كردم،اميدوارم منظور رو رسونده باشم.

poopa
04-04-2009, 11:27
Hi folk , Im an English learner as you are .It's very interesting studing as an English group , I really want to join you,How can i ?

JEFF_HARDY
04-04-2009, 11:32
What Have You Done In Norooz

First Day, I went to my grandparent's house ... oh what a boring day :23:
Second Day, I went to my grandparent's house too and we ate dinner at there :7:
3th Day , My aunt(my mother's sister) came to our house. Oh and I knew a good point in this day and it was about my ADSL and it was Free until 7th and I started to download some files :26:
4th Day, all of my uncles and aunts and cousins came to our house and I had a hard day cuz of I had to entertain our guests :37:. My pc was turning on and downloading too :31:
5th Day, I was searching on the webs to find some files to download all the day :8:
6th Day, Oh yes , at last we started to visit our relatives and it is good for me cuz they entertained me very good. We went to my one of big uncle's house :40: and My pc was turning on and ...
7th Day, we went to my second uncle's house and My pc ..:32: :31:
8th Day, We went to my aunt's house and My pc turned off this time:D
9th Day , our far relatives came to our house and this time I escaped from reception and my sister did
it:25:
10th Day, we went to my aunt's house (my mother's sister) and there I played football with my little cousin:10:
11th Day, I went to my friend's house:20:
12th Day , at last all of parties finished and I took relax breathing:34:
13th Day, I went to 13 Bedar and I had a very good day with my relatives:16::10:


Main works in Norooz : go to other houses
and kissing each others
and eating Ajil and then have a stomachacke
and laughing
and ...
:34:


:31:


45 دقيقه داشتم رو متن كار مي كردم كه برق رفت همه اديت هام پاك شدن

brain جان جسارت من رو ببخش،شرمندم به خدا


we ate dinner at there :we ate dinner there

and I knew a good point in this day and it was about :and i found out a good point that that day which was about

to download : started downloading

cuz of:because


My pc was turning on and downloading too :my pc was turned on and was downloading too

searching on the webs :seraching the web

اينو مطمئن نيستن ولي خوب اينجور به ذهنم ميرسه to visit : visiting

it is good for me : it was fun for me


very good: very well

We went to my one of big uncle's house :we went to one of my grat uncle`s house

turning on :was turned on


turned off :was turned off or got turned off


of parties finished :all of the parties got finished,or all of the parties were over

took relax breathing :took a relax breathing

go to other houses : going to other`s houses

each others:eachother

have a stomachacke :suffering stomache


brain جان،ملا نقطه اي بازي در اوردم،جايي مشكلي بود يا من اشتباه كردم خوشحال مي شم توضيح بدي،من مبتدي هستم،اومدم از شما ياد بگيرم،از شما كه كاربر فعال و پيشكسوت هستي.

afsane b
04-04-2009, 12:09
Hey pals


I'm so sorry for not showing up during holidays:11:


:20:Here is my summary


This reading is about a boy who got permission from his father to drive a car for the first time, they planed, the boy take the car into a nearby garage in order to service it then pick up her father and go to a far village; checking the car didn’t take long so he decided to go to a theatre and take advantage of his extra time but he got interested in the show and forgot about his father who was waiting for him for too long.


At last he drove up to the place where his father was waiting, since it was the first time his father allowed him to drive, the boy decided to lie but his father knew every thing so he desperately confessed

brain
04-04-2009, 12:17
Hi
Really thx dear Jeff

I am a beginner not you
:31:

By the way

اينو مطمئن نيستم ولي خوب اينجور به ذهنم ميرسه to visit : visiting

both of these are correct :
we started to visit our relatives
and
we started visiting our relatives

sepid12ir
04-04-2009, 14:12
1-
now i want to tell you what did i do in norouz.as in Tir i have university entrance exam i must spend my free times on studing,but i went to see my relatives too.watching tv and going out with my friend are the other things i did in norouz.my family and i went on a 2days long trip to neyriz,we enjoyed the nature and we spent a lot of time in the nature because neyriz has a beautiful nature.i played computer games a lot,and saw some movies.i though , i though a lot about my life,my future life and what i am going to do,and what i want to do in my life.i made a new friend tooabsolutely great:11:
I want to tell you what did I do: I want to tell you what I did--->it's an indirect sentence

as: since...I think u wanted to say:
از آنجایی که
so you should have used:
since


2-
1- i have one brother and one sister.
2- my uncle and his wife live in tehran.
3- my cousins is a very big boy.
4- i like my parents so much.
5- my aunt's husband works in a bank.
6- old families in iran have many children.
7- i am the younger grandson.
8- both of my grandmother and grandfather are still alive.
9- Ali has a very kind father_in_law.
10_ Ali doesn't have any niece or cousins to play with.
so u r a boy? I thought u r a lady..:46:l
no mistake..just 1 thing: one cousin...two cosuins

3-1
1- i am studing
2- teacher asks student not to make noises when she is teaching
3- i see that my english is getting better since i joined the group
4- i am happy now because today i studing a lot
5- as i have a exam next week i am studing harderStuding: Studying

noises:noise---> to make noise...in such a sentence noise should be used in uncountable form

I studing a lot: I am studying a lot

as: since

3-2
1- Ali doesn't go on the trip because he is sick
2- my little brother asks me to do his homeworks
3- i suggest my brother not to go fishing today
4- jack promise he never be late again
5- my friend goes mountain climbing always in fridays

in Fridays: On Fridays---> for all the days u should use on: On Sat/Sun/Mon/Tue/Wed/Tur/Fri


good luck
Sepideh:11:l

JEFF_HARDY
04-04-2009, 21:01
What you’ve done in norooz

well,this norooz was one of the worst new yeas i`ve ever passed in my life.it was really booring for me.my sister is going to take the konkoor exam befor summer,so we didn`t take a trip to anywhere around,even during 13bedar we stayed at home whatching telly! During the holidays i just stayed at home,searching the web,and watching TV,and also if i got luckey we would go to a relative`s home for a change.i don`t know,perhaps its my habit that i love to go around alot,and when its nessecery that i stay home,it really makes me sick!anyhow,i would stay awake till 3 in the midnight,then woke up 12 in the noon,which wasn`t what i really like to do,but that was the best way for me to waste time.i experienced anything to kill time with, watching TV which i rarely do,whatching movies by using the laptop,anything you can imagine.and also the university is getting started from tomorrow,and thats what i also hate, so i don`t now what to wish,this crappy boring hollidays stays longer or the annoying university starts!

Blue Ray
04-04-2009, 21:55
سلام
آقا دمت گرم،ما رو به چالش كشوندي!خيلي خوشحالم مطالبم برات مفيد بوده،از دقت و ادامه و پي گيريت هم ممنونم.

اگه اجازه بديد بريم سراغ نكته آموزشي
شما فرموديد


this norooz was sort of different to me


كه من به ذهنم رسيد حالت كامل كننده جمله شما اين هست

this norooz was sort of different for me


و شما فرموديد طبق ديكشنري لانگ من,different to صحيح هست،بنا بر مثال


her jacket`s different to mine


الا با اجازه من مثال ديكشنري لانگ من رو ترجمه مي كنم


her jacket`s different to mine: كت اون خانوم با مال من تفاوت دارد


اگه دقت كرده باشيد،مقايسه بين دو چيز هست،و دو شي،پس different to رو (متفاوت از،يا متفاوت با)ترجمه مي كنيم.

حالا بريم سراغ متن اصليمون و ترجمه جمله شما
:نوروز امسال يه جورايي با من تفاوت داشت: this norooz was sort of different to me:

يعني شما خودتون رو با نوروز مقايسه كرده ايد،كه از نظر گرامري غلط هست.

با توجه به اندك تجربه اي كه داشتم احتمال دادم شما منظورتون اين جمله فارسي هست

نوروز امسال يه جورايي براي من متفاوت بود
براي من:for me
پس در نهايت جمله صحيح:

نوروز امسال يه جورايي براي من متفاوت بود :this norooz was sort of different for me


خيلي پر حرفي كردم،اميدوارم منظور رو رسونده باشم.


yes, you're abso-bloody-lutely right !!


برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید

Thanks for learning me sth.

By the way, when is the deadline for new reading ???

masoudtr
04-04-2009, 21:59
What you’ve done in norooz

well,this norooz was one of the worst new yeas i`ve ever passed in my life.it was really booring for me.my sister is going to take the konkoor exam befor summer,so we didn`t take a trip to anywhere around,even during 13bedar we stayed at home whatching telly! During the holidays i just stayed at home,searching the web,and watching TV,and also if i got luckey we would go to a relative`s home for a change.i don`t know,perhaps its my habit that i love to go around alot,and when its nessecery that i stay home,it really makes me sick!anyhow,i would stay awake till 3 in the midnight,then woke up 12 in the noon,which wasn`t what i really like to do,but that was the best way for me to waste time.i experienced anything to kill time with, watching TV which i rarely do,whatching movies by using the laptop,anything you can imagine.and also the university is getting started from tomorrow,and thats what i also hate, so i don`t now what to wish,this crappy boring hollidays stays longer or the annoying university starts!



JESUSCHRIST
i understand you
because all of my noroz is exactly the same of this noroz

JEFF_HARDY
04-04-2009, 22:18
yes, you're abso-bloody-lutely right !!



Thanks for learning me sth.



By the way, when is the deadline for new reading ???


:31:
Thanks for learning me sth :thanks for teaching me sth

JEFF_HARDY
04-04-2009, 22:20
JESUSCHRIST
i understand you
because all of my noroz is exactly the same of this noroz


all of my noroz is exactly the same of this noroz:are the same as this norooz,or are simulair to,


hey,thanks,now someone can feel what i am talking about.i was counting on this new year as a new start,but now i feel more exhusted than before the holidays,honestly i don`t know when god is going to help me improve my life

singleguy
05-04-2009, 00:32
hi guys
fist of all thanks to dear Afsane who did her activity so soon. She even didn't let me to finish that:31::10:
I guess it's enough to talk about the last activity. now the activity is reading and you shouldn't talk about the writing activity anymore!
I've just finished typing the reading but I'm really sorry again because I was in a hurry and maybe there are some problems in typing. and i also didn't have time to type the activities. by the way I'm going to add the activities tomorrow night and check the essay again.
single boy:11:

brain
05-04-2009, 11:55
Hi everyone

Singleguy will add the reading's questions tonight and 2 members should to answer them.

Blue Ray :10:
and
Sada :10:

This is my activity about the Reading :

Summary of Reading

This reading is about a boy who grew up in the south of Spain in a little society called Estepona.He defined a memento about when he was 16.A morning his father wanted to him to pick him up to the remote village called Mijas by car.After servicing the car they drove to the village, it was about 18 miles.He should pick his father up at 4 p.m.He came back to the Estepona and dropped off the car.He had a few free hours to do some works.He decided to go to the theater because he intrested in movies.He was watching movies and he completely lost track of time.When the last movie had finished , the time was 6 o'clock and it was late, two hours late.He decided to lie to him.He drove as fast as he could to where they had planned to meet and saw his father.He apologized for lateness and told him the car needed some repairs and it took long some hours.But his father knew everything because he called the garage to ask if there were any problems.The son shocked and decided to tell him truth.Father was angry not with his son but with himself because he failed.He brought up a son who could not think seriously.After discussion he started to walk to home lonely and the son drove the car and followed behind him and tried to tell him sorry and hoping he would relent.It was a bad event for the son however it was a good lesson for him because he has never lied his father since.
Mistakes are facts of life

New Words

response
My response to the question was true.

soul
The colour is the soul of paiting.

remote
My house is remote from city.

opportunity
I had a golden opportunity to get a good job.

readily
Victory is readily in our hand.

drop off
I kept dropping off when I was watching tv.

spare
My spare time is not much.

catch
Three robbers caught the president's girl.

couple
I wanted to see couple of movies.

immerse
I was immersed to my work when I was painting.

patiently
I am waiting patiently at bus stop.

apologize
I don't know how I can apologize.

disappoint
I'm sorry to have disappointed you.

rush
They rush home as fast as they can.

guilt
I had a terrible feeling of guilt.

feebly
My gradnfather was very old and feeble.

confess
you can not make me confess.

tardiness
I am really sorry for my tardiness.

intently
He listened intently to my story.

realize
You can not realize what I meant.

contemplate
He contemplates problems.

protest
he protested his innocence.

utterance
I am sure that my utterances are useful.

let down
I'm sorry to let you down.

dusty
My room is dusty I have to clean it.

relent
The storm finally relented.

plead
I plaeaded all way to relent him.

thoughtfully
I need to walk thoughtfully.

distressing
We should concealed our distress.

fascinated by
I became so fascinated by the films



The End :11:l

extreme2006gh
05-04-2009, 18:03
hi buddies

Once a person asks his child to drive his car and go him to a far village and come back to picke him up after he does his work. Because his child haven t had Opportunity to drive yet , he easily accepts. He promises his father to come back at a preappointed time to picke him up . but seemingly the car need to be repaired and he has to take it to the garage . he take it to the garage and because he has spare time , he decides to go to the movies . the movie is very interesting and he forgets his appointment , suddenly he look at his watch and find out he is late 2 hours then he decides to lie his father and make the car an excuse for his lateness. He lies to his father, but his father tells him I know the fact and he is forced to confess.

afsane b
06-04-2009, 09:42
I completed my summary:11:


This reading is about a boy who got permission from his father to drive a car for the first time, they planed, the boy take the car into a nearby garage in order to service it then pick up her father and go to a far village; checking the car didn’t take long so he decided to go to a theatre and take advantage of his extra time but he got interested in the show and forgot about his father who was waiting for him for too long.


At last he drove up to the place where his father was waiting, since it was the first time his father had allowed him to drive, the boy decided to lie but his father knew every thing so he desperately confessed, his father got more angry because had brought up a boy who wasn’t trustful, he decided walk back to home despite of his son's apologies. This painful event taught the boy the most important lesson in her life and he never lied his father (I think he should have learned not to lie anybody not just his father:27:)


:46:Are we supposed to answer the questions after sada and blue ray?

Blue Ray
06-04-2009, 21:16
My Summary :


The story is about a sixteen year old boy , named Jason , who wanted to get his first experience of driving.His father asked him to drive him to a village and also take the car at a garage in order to be repaired.But he went to catch some movies so he wasn’t on time.He decided to lie to his father about why he was late.His father understood he was lying.So he didn’n get into the car . instead , he walked all the way to home on foot to learn his son not to lie.Jason considered this as one of his most painful lessons he ever learned in his life.


Answers of questions : (answers are in pink)


A. order the events.
Number the events in the story " A Long Walk Home" from the first (1) to last (10)
___6__He apologized to his father for being late
___3__He went to a movie theater
___2__He dropped the car off at the garage to be serviced
___8__He realized his father knew he was lying
___4__He realized it was six o'clock and his father was waiting for him
___10__He followed his father the whole 18 miles home
___5__He picked up the car at the garage and then went pick up his father
___7__He told his father a lie
__1__Jason drove his father into town and dropped him off
___9__He tried to persuade his father to get into the the car


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B. Consider the issues.
work with your partner to answer the questions blow
1- What do you think Jason said when he apologized to his father?
He probably said he was worry about his(the father)reaction and also he was afraid that his father wouldn’t give him the car anymore.But he understood that he shouldn’t lie and he wouldn’t do it again !
2- What is your opinion of the way Jason's father responded to his son's late?
I personally believe that his reaction was approximately good but a little extreme !
3-Jason said that he learned something from this experience. Beside learning not to lie, What do you think he learned?
He might also learn to focus more on his responsibilities.
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C.
نقل قول:
Using Context
When you read, you can use context( the surrounding words and ideas) to guess the meaning of many unfamiliar words



In the sentences blow use context to guess the meaning of the highlighted words.choose the letter your answer
1- On the condition that I take the car in to be serviced at nearby garage
a. building b.restaurant c.repair shop
>>>>>> C


2-Having just learned to drive, and hardly ever having the opportunity to use the car, I readily accepted
a.quickly b.quietly c.sadly
>>>>>> a


3- Because I had few hours to spare, I decided to catch a couple of movies at a theater near the garage
a.find b.watch c.ignore
>>>>>>b


4- my protests, my apologies and the rest of my utterances were useless
a.friends b.clothes c.words
>>>>>>I think the bold word should be utterances , not useless.
If so , the answer will be “C”
__________________________________________________ ____



Useful Words and Structures :


Community /kə'mjuːnətɪ/
اجتماع‌
the people who live in the same area, town etc:
Þ The new arts centre will serve the whole community.
Þ community education programmes


On the condition that
تحت این شرایط
Þ He was released on bail on condition that he did not go within half a mile of his mother's address.


Readily /'redɪlɪ/
به سرعت و مشتاقانه
quickly, willingly, and without complaining:
Þ Jack readily agreed to help.


Drop somebody/something ↔ off
to take someone or something to a place by car and leave them there on your way to another place:
Þ I'll drop you off on my way home.


Spare time/moment/hour etc /sper/
time when you are not working:
Þ What do you do in your spare time?
Þ Eric spent every spare moment he had in the library.


Catch / kætʃ /
spoken especially American English - to go somewhere in order to do or see something:
Þ We could catch a movie (=go to a movie).


Keep/Lose track of somebody/something to pay attention to someone or something, so that you know where they are or what is happening to them, or to fail to do this:
Þ It's difficult to keep track of all the new discoveries in genetics.
Þ I just lost all track of time.


Patient / 'peɪʃənt /
able to wait calmly for a long time or to accept difficulties, people's annoying behaviour etc without becoming angry [≠ impatient]:
Þ You'll just have to be patient and wait till I'm off the phone.
patient with
Þ Louise was very patient with me.
—patiently adverb:
Þ He waited patiently for Katherine to speak.





Give somebody a look
an expression that you make with your eyes or face
Þ Mike gave him such a severe look he didn't dare argue.
Þ Why has Jake been giving me dirty looks (=unfriendly looks) all morning?


A rush of guilt ran through me
احساس گناه زیادی به من هجوم آورد


Feeble adj / 'fɪːbəl/
ضغيف‌، كم‌ زور، ناتوان‌، عاجز، سست‌
extremely weak
Þ His voice sounded feeble and far away.
Þ She was too feeble to leave her room.
Feebly adv


Tardy adj / 'tɑrdɪ/
داراي‌ تاخير، دير
Formal - arriving or done late:
Þ Do please forgive this tardy reply.
Þ He's been tardy three times this semester.
Tardiness adv


Intent adj / ɪn'tent /
توجه و دقت کامل
giving careful attention to something so that you think about nothing else:
Þ his intent gaze
intent on/upon
Þ Intent upon her work, she didn't notice the cold.
—intently adverb:
Þ Jake listened intently.


Angry with/at
Þ 'Please don't be angry with me,' she said.
angry about/over
Þ Kate's still so angry about the whole thing.
angry (that)
Þ The workers are angry that they haven't been paid for the week.
angry with/at yourself
feeling strongly that you wish you had done something or had not done something:
Þ David was angry with himself for letting the others see his true feelings.



Bring up
پرورش‌ دادن‌، رشد دادن‌
Þ His mother had brought him up.



Contemplate /'kɑːntempleɪt/
تفكر كردن‌، درنظر داشتن‌، انديشيدن‌
1 [transitive] to think about something that you might do in the future [= consider]:
Þ He had even contemplated suicide.
contemplate doing something
Þ Did you ever contemplate resigning?
2 to think about something seriously for a period of time [= consider]:
Þ Jack went on vacation to contemplate his future.
contemplate what/whether/how etc
Þ She sat down and contemplated what she had done.


Utterance / 'ʌtərəns /
سخن‌، نطق‌، گفتن‌
formal
1 [countable] something you say:
Þ Politicians are judged by their public utterances.
2 [uncountable] the action of saying something


Let somebody/something ↔ down phrasal verb
to not do something that someone trusts or expects you to do:
Þ She had been let down badly in the past.
Þ The worst feeling is having let our fans down.
let the side down (British English) (=disappoint a group of people that you belong to)


Be about to do something
if someone is about to do something, or if something is about to happen, they will do it or it will happen very soon:
Þ We were just about to leave when Jerry arrived.
Þ Work was about to start on a new factory building.


Relent /rɪ'lent/
نرم‌ شدن‌، رحم‌ بدل‌ اوردن‌، پشيمان‌ شدن‌
[intransitive] formal
to change your attitude and become less strict or cruel towards someone [= give in]:
Þ At last her father relented and came to visit her.


Plead / plɪːd /
[intransitive and transitive] to ask for something that you want very much, in a sincere and emotional way [= beg]:
Þ 'Don't go!' Robert pleaded.
plead for
Þ Civil rights groups pleaded for government help.
plead with somebody (to do something)
Þ Moira pleaded with him to stay.




Distressing adj /dɪ'stresɪŋ/
ناراحت کننده‌
Also : Distressful /dɪ'stresfəl/
making you feel very upset:
Þ a distressing experience
—distressingly [I]adverb

singleguy
06-04-2009, 22:20
hi every body
Unfortunately I have to give this topic a miss for 2 months or more and I have to leave you. I don't have time to study English anymore. But I'm going to check What you are doing every day and I'll update the table of contents at the first page regularly
Dear Brain is going to prepare the activities instead of me
Thanks to all of you who keep this group alive by doing the activities
You built up this group and I hope you keep it alive
Single boy:11:

poopa
07-04-2009, 08:18
hi folkI am a new member ,actually I was an English learner and I 've passed 21 terms at kish institute,but now I cant study anymore and I'm so worried about that,I want to know your idea about a way of self -study,AND ABOUT FOLLOW ME (CDS AND BOOK),THANK YOU SO MUCH

masoudtr
07-04-2009, 11:12
Hello everybody
I think this store is about father & son and relationship of them
Father give his car to his son and boy pick up car and drive to garage and give car to them to repair it
& he have free time
So he decided to go to theater he love that movie so he lost time and suddenly he look to wach
Oh my go he must pick up his father two hour ago
He drive very fast and when meet his father lie to him
Boy said car need more repair and i’m so sorry
But father called to garage & know his son lied about this
So father walk to home with his feet and son follow him with car
But man so sad because he heard a lie from his son
So son after that decide to never lie to his father

sepid12ir
07-04-2009, 13:38
hey guys,
well, I just had a look at yr activities, it's really admiring, I'm glad to see determined guys like u
be sure it can be of some help for u n dun give up
anyway, I just highlightened the mistakes in reading part n in case u liked correct them yrself n if there was any question left dun hesitate to ask:11:l
attention: mistakes are not only grammatical mistakes, I also highlighten spelling mistakes :10:l




Hey pals

I'm so sorry for not showing up during holidays:11:

:20:Here is my summary

This reading is about a boy who got permission from his father to drive a car for the first time, they planed, the boy take the car into a nearby garage in order to service it then pick up her father and go to a far village; checking the car didn’t take long so he decided to go to a theatre and take advantage of his extra time but he got interested in the show and forgot about his father who was waiting for him for too long.

At last he drove up to the place where his father was waiting, since it was the first time his father allowed him to drive, the boy decided to lie but his father knew every thing so he desperately confessed



good, thanks
but Afsaneh, I got confused, I think the tenses were not followed correctly




Hi everyone

Singleguy will add the reading's questions tonight and 2 members should to answer them.

Blue Ray :10:
and
Sada :10:

This is my activity about the Reading :

Summary of Reading

This reading is about a boy who grew up in the south of Spain in a little society called Estepona.He defined a memento about when he was 16.A morning his father wanted to him to pick him up to the remote village called Mijas by car.After servicing the car they drove to the village, it was about 18 miles.He should pick his father up at 4 p.m.He came back to the Estepona and dropped off the car.He had a few free hours to do some works.He decided to go to the theater because he intrested in movies.He was watching movies and he completely lost track of time.When the last movie had finished , the time was 6 o'clock and it was late, two hours late.He decided to lie to him.He drove as fast as he could to where they had planned to meet and saw his father.He apologized for lateness and told him the car needed some repairs and it took long some hours.But his father knew everything because he called the garage to ask if there were any problems.The son shocked and decided to tell him truth.Father was angry not with his son but with himself because he failed.He brought up a son who could not think seriously.After discussion he started to walk to home lonely and the son drove the car and followed behind him and tried to tell him sorry and hoping he would relent.It was a bad event for the son however it was a good lesson for him because he has never lied his father since.
Mistakes are facts of life

New Words

response
My response to the question was true.

soul
The colour is the soul of paiting.

remote
My house is remote from city.

opportunity
I had a golden opportunity to get a good job.

readily
Victory is readily in our hand.

drop off
I kept dropping off when I was watching tv.

spare
My spare time is not much.

catch
Three robbers caught the president's girl.

couple
I wanted to see couple of movies.

immerse
I was immersed to my work when I was painting.

patiently
I am waiting patiently at bus stop.

apologize
I don't know how I can apologize.

disappoint
I'm sorry to have disappointed you.

rush
They rush home as fast as they can.

guilt
I had a terrible feeling of guilt.

feebly
My gradnfather was very old and feeble.

confess
you can not make me confess.

tardiness
I am really sorry for my tardiness.

intently
He listened intently to my story.

realize
You can not realize what I meant.

contemplate
He contemplates problems.

protest
he protested his innocence.

utterance
I am sure that my utterances are useful.

let down
I'm sorry to let you down.

dusty
My room is dusty I have to clean it.

relent
The storm finally relented.

plead
I plaeaded all way to relent him.

thoughtfully
I need to walk thoughtfully.

distressing
We should concealed our distress.

fascinated by
I became so fascinated by the films



The End :11:l




wow:18:! Brain, that was one of the bests...really
it was wonderful, not only did I like the structures but also the way u've written n the words u've used
thanks buddy
it perked me up:10:l



hi buddies

Once a person asks his child to drive his car and go him to a far village and come back to picke him up after he does his work. Because his child haven t had Opportunity to drive yet , he easily accepts. He promises his father to come back at a preappointed time to picke him up . but seemingly the car need to be repaired and he has to take it to the garage . he take it to the garage and because he has spare time , he decides to go to the movies . the movie is very interesting and he forgets his appointment , suddenly he look at his watch and find out he is late 2 hours then he decides to lie his father and make the car an excuse for his lateness. He lies to his father, but his father tells him I know the fact and he is forced to confess.





very good, thanks
by the way pal, u should be more careful about the tenses; I couldn't follow that
u mostly have used simple present while it would be better if u had used simple past.
it is mostly recommended to use Past Tenses for summing up the stories, events n stuff like that
n besides, u forget to use 's' for the third person: she talks, she walks, he studies n ...
good luck




My Summary :


The story is about a sixteen year old boy , named Jason , who wanted to get his first experience of driving.His father asked him to drive him to a village and also take the car at a garage in order to be repaired.But he went to catch some movies so he wasn’t on time.He decided to lie to his father about why he was late.His father understood he was lying.So he didn’n get into the car . instead , he walked all the way to home on foot to learn his son not to lie.Jason considered this as one of his most painful lessons he ever learned in his life.



wow! absolutely perfect
well done man:10:where have u learnt English that good?l



Hello everybody
I think this store is about father & son and relationship of them
Father give his car to his son and boy pick up car and drive to garage and give car to them to repair it
& he have free time
So he decided to go to theater he love that movie so he lost time and suddenly he look to wach
Oh my go he must pick up his father two hour ago
He drive very fast and when meet his father lie to him
Boy said car need more repair and i’m so sorry
But father called to garage & know his son lied about this
So father walk to home with his feet and son follow him with car
But man so sad because he heard a lie from his son
So son after that decide to never lie to his father


Well, buddy
i see no tense in yr words? present/past? be more careful about the tenses...n 's'--> he walks, he decides, he gives n if it is past tesne: he decided, he walked n .......:10:l
Happy Studdying
Sepideh:11:l

afsane b
07-04-2009, 14:39
hi folkI am a new member ,actually I was an English learner and I 've passed 21 terms at kish institute,but now I cant study anymore and I'm so worried about that,I want to know your idea about a way of self -study,AND ABOUT FOLLOW ME (CDS AND BOOK),THANK YOU SO MUCH


Welcome dear poopa, as did you, I used to study English in Kish institute but gave it up:41:, you can follow it in here by writing, reading, listening …..activities


:10:Good luck

afsane b
07-04-2009, 15:03
This reading is about a boy who got permission from his father to drive a car for the first time, his father asked him to take the car into a nearby garage in order to service it then pick up him and go to a far village; checking the car didn’t take long so he decided to go to a theatre and take advantages of his extra time but he got interested in the show and forgot about his father who was waiting for him for too long.




At last he drove up to the place where his father was waiting, since it was the first time his father had allowed him to drive, the boy decided to lie but his father knew every thing so he desperately confessed, his father got more angry because had brought up a boy who wasn’t trustful, he decided walk back to home despite of his son's apologies. This painful event taught the boy the most important lesson in her life and he never lied his father (I think he should have learned not to lie anybody not just his father:27:)


:46:Are we supposed to answer the questions after sada and blue ray?


dear sepid you didnt check my comlete summary
i corrected it

sepid12ir
07-04-2009, 15:21
dear sepid you didnt check my comlete summary
i corrected it

then, accept my apology :11:l


This reading is about a boy who got permission from his father to drive a car for the first time, his father asked him to take the car into a nearby garage in order to service it then pick up him and go to a far village; checking the car didn’t take long so he decided to go to a theatre and take advantages of his extra time but he got interested in the show and forgot about his father who was waiting for him for too long.


At last he drove up to the place where his father was waiting, since it was the first time his father had allowed him to drive, the boy decided to lie but his father knew every thing so he desperately confessed, his father got more angry because had brought up a boy who wasn’t trustful, he decided walk back to home despite of his son's apologies. This painful event taught the boy the most important lesson in her life and he never lied his father (I think he should have learned not to lie anybody not just his father

thaaanks n again sorry for the mistake I made:11:l

brain
08-04-2009, 10:45
Hi Everyone
Today is 19th

نوزدهم = کتاب لغت
You shuold study Lesson 2 and ask question about it if you have
Lesson 2 : Transport
Notice :

اگه دوره شامل یک فعالیت لغت بود اعضای گروه به همراه پستی که در مورد رایتینگ قراره بذارن 10مثال مینویسن و اگه دوره شامل دو فعالیت لغت بود برای هر درس 5 مثال باید بنویسن.
This period has 2 Vocabulary Activities. Today (19th) and :

بیست و چهارم = کتاب لغت
so You should to make 5 sentences for Lesson 2 and make 5 sentences for Lesson 3 that we will study on 24th
and put them with Writing Activity Post on 25th until 28th

بیست و پنجم تابیست و هشتم = فعالیت رایتینگ


Have Fun

Aqu-NELLY
08-04-2009, 12:51
!hi guys what are u doing here ? plz accept me in your group

brain
08-04-2009, 22:10
plz accept me in your group
ٌWelcome to our group
plz read First Post
and then if u have questions ask them with Private Message
:11:
Lesspn 2 of Vocabulary book was very easy maybe we study 2 lesson each time since then
:10:
Tomorrow Dear Afsane teaches Lesson 3 to us

بیستم = مطالعه و رفع اشکال در مورد گرامر
Have Fun
:31:

brain
09-04-2009, 17:58
Sorry for late
Dear Afsane gave Lesson's explanation to me but I forgot to put that
Really sorry
:11:

درس 3

حال استمراری و حال ساده 1
(I Am Doing and I Do)

مقایسه حال استمراری و حال ساده با یکدیگر :

حال استمراری : (I Am Doing)
حال استمراری را زمانی مورد استفاده قرار میدهیم که چیزی در حال اتفاق افتادن در پاره از زمان هستند.
در حقیقت عملی که هنوز تمام نشده است.

مثال:
The water is boiling.Can you turn it off

Listen to those people.What language are they speaking


همینطور حال استمراری رو در موقعیت های لحظه ای و موقتی نیز استفاده میکنیم.

مثال:
I'm living with some friends until I find a plcae of my own

A: You're working hard today
B: Yes I have a lot to do

حال ساده : (I Do)

حال ساده را زمانی استفاده میکنیم که چیزی به طور عمومی و مکرر اتفاق می افتد.

مثال:
Water boils at 100 degress Celsius

Excuse me, do you speak english

حال ساده رو در موقعیت های ثابت و دائمی نیز استفاده میکنیم.

مثال:
My parents live in London.They have lived there all their lives

Jhon isn't lazy.He works hard most of the time

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ادامه :

من همیشه انجام میدهم و من همیشه دارم انجام میدم
I always do and I am always doing

من همیشه انجام میدهم (چیزی رو) : من همیشه با اتومبیل به سرکار میرم
I always do (something) : I always go to work by car not I'm always going

من همیشه دارم انجام میدم چیزی رو : من همیشه دارم خودکارمو گم میکنم
I am always doing (something) : I am always losing my pen not I always lose

چند مثال دیگر :

You're always watching TV. You should do something more active = You watch TV too often

Tim is never satisfied.He's always complaining = He complains too much

پایان درس 3




I hope you do all exercises.It surley is useful :27:
If you have questions don't hesitate to ask
This Lesson is simple too and maybe we will study 2 lessons each time
I will put Listening Activitie's materials tonight
Have Fun :11:

extreme2006gh
09-04-2009, 21:05
I hear we can use Present continous for certain action that will occurred in future.
Is that right ?

example :
my parents are coming on next monday.
or
we are going to movies tonight.

brain
09-04-2009, 22:09
we are going to movies tonight

I think " going to " is not present continues. It is meaning
" قصد داشتن"


my parents are coming on next monday.
Yeah .. I think it is right but Im not sure
:31:

singleguy
09-04-2009, 22:24
hi every body
happy studying:31:


I think " going to " is not present continues. It is meaning
" قصد داشتن"



:31:


no...no...
in this sentence "going to" it is the main verb because we can't see any verbs after "going to" so it's present continuous
Something that you meant is like this:
we are going to go to movies tonight (this is not present continuous)

by the way I'm so weak to tell my idea about this. let my master, Sepideh, to explain more:27:
Thanks. that was a really good question

brain
09-04-2009, 22:24
L i s t e n i n g - A c t i v i t y

let's start the listening activity.
Every one should know the rules of this activity:

هیچ یک از اعضا گروه اجازه نداره متن را توی تاپیک بنویسه بلکه متن لیسنینگ را به شخصی که اون فعالیت را گذاشته توسط پیام خصوصی فرستاده میشه
some of the activities are too long. you don't have to write all of that. try to write as much as you can and You don't have To answer questions.
Good Luck


The 1st one

My Name

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

The speaker talks about his name, and how it was given to him


Length: 0:44
Accent: General American
Gender: M
Speed: Medium


Question 1.) Where did his last name come from?

Question 2.) Who gave him his first name?

Question 3.) Where did his middle name come from?

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برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید




The 2nd one

The Ancient Olymics

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A woman talks about the thrill of visiting the site of the ancient Olympics in Greece


Length: 2:32
Accent: General American
Gender: F
Speed: Very Slow


Question 1.) What did the speaker enjoy most about her trip to Greece?

Question 2.) How much of the ancient Olympia was still standing?

Question 3.) Why was the new Olympic stadium built outside of the city center?

Question 4.) What does the speaker think the huge stones she saw on the island were used for?

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برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید





The 3rd one

My Own Works

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

A man explains that the books he likes best are the ones he has written; and he illustrates this by describing the content of two of them


Length: 3:10
Accent: General American
Gender: M
Speed: Medium


Question 1.) Do you think the speaker enjoys writing books?

Question 2.) Who are the three main characters in the novel called Lyrics?

Question 3.) Who is the speaker's favorite author?

Question 4.) What does the angel do to help the student?

Question 5.) In the short story called Angels Wine, who lives in West Sixty-Six Street?

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برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید

sepid12ir
09-04-2009, 22:58
I hear we can use Present continous for certain action that will occurred in future.
Is that right ?

example :
my parents are coming on next monday.
or
we are going to movies tonight.



hi every body
happy studying:31:



no...no...
in this sentence "going to" it is the main verb because we can't see any verbs after "going to" so it's present continuous
Something that you meant is like this:
we are going to go to movies tonight (this is not present continuous)

by the way I'm so weak to tell my idea about this. let my master, Sepideh, to explain more:27:
Thanks. that was a really good question






first, thanks buddy to call me yr master but as a matter of fact I'm nobody just a friend of yrs:11:l
then, yup! u r both correct
One of the usages of Present Continous is talking about future! it hasn't been mentioned in our grammar lessons yet, just for yr info I will give u a breif explanation:
when you have arranged sth to do n u have planned for it u can use Present Continous...it is mostly used when u have a plan n u have arranged it with sb...Visiting or seeing sb are the most common examples of this grammar tip:
e.g:
I'm visiting my doctor next Monday: It means that u have arranged it before n u'r gonna do it

both sentences which extreme has mentioned can kinda be followed by this rule:
My Parents are coming on next Monday: it means that his/her parents have arranged evrything , maybe they have baught the ticket or sth like that

We are going to movies tonight: it means that u have arranged yr time with sb n u have yr resevred tickets in advance n that's wot u gonna do tonight
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+ there is no specific difference between 'going to' and 'present continous' when u want to talk about future
they can usually be used instead of each other

brain
12-04-2009, 22:16
Listening Answers

Blue ray

My name
my name is scott christian anderson.my first name scott was given to me by my parents and i think that i was named after scotland which is my mother’s home country.my middle name christian i think is a name after the religion of my parents which is christianity and my last name anderson is from my fathers and sisters who all named andesron and the reason they were named andesron is because in sweden , someone name was ander and then he had a son , the last name of that son would be anderson or anderson / æ / and so my name is scott christian anderson

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Hoseinist

My name
my name is scathe kristin anderson, my first name scathe was going to me by my parents and i think …….after scotland, which is my mother s home country . My middle name kristin i think is a name after a the religion of my parents christianity ,and my last name anderson is from my fathers .. Sister who all name anderson and the reason name is anderson is because in suede some of them name of under he had a son the last name of that son was anderson or anderson , so my name is scathe kristin anderson.

question 1.) where did his last name come from? From his father .. Sister
question 2.) who gave him his first name? His parents
question 3.) where did his middle name come from? It is a name after a religion name

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Masoudrejae

My name
my name is scott crystin anderson
my first name scott was going to be my parents
and i think that i was name after scottland which is my mother’s home country
my middle name crystin i think is a name after the religion of my parents which is crystianety and my last name anderson is from my
father’s and sister who all named anderson and there is ----anderson is because insuide some one name was under’s and he had a son the last name of that son would be anderson or anderson
so my name is scott crystin andersont

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Brain

My Name

my name is scott cristian anderson. My first name is scott was going to
... My parents and i think ... Scotland which is my mother's home ocuntry
my little name cristian i think is a name after the religion my parents of my crisitianity
and my last name is anderson is from my ... Who are named anderson
and the reason name were named anderson is because in sweden some one
was anders and he had a son the last name of that son be anderson and
so my name is scott cristian anderson.

question 1.) where did his last name come from?

In sweden some one was anders and he had a son the last name of that
son be anderson

question 2.) who gave him his first name?

His mother

question 3.) where did his middle name come from?

From religion his parents

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The Ancient Olymics

when we were in greece my greatest pleasure was to arrive to the city
and we ... A regional i love the a stadium ... It was so...
For they when they ... The olympics ahh it was quick large but
behind a hard at a city could not really take care of all the people
coming there so they had to build another one ... Out very ... City
ahh we saw, we saw the stadium i ... Very first ... We ... With that
we decied to go visit the island with they had olypia. And there is
variety very first olympic ahh remand first ... And they e e we had ...
The ... Medium was ... And a practice field and each sectional ... Was
... A diffrent kind of of performance and mostly it was a ... They are working
for and working on but most of the time they were ... Because the ... And
they had already ... So we saw only what was ... The ... However to ... Where we
walked where ... And they were ... And there we pictured where ... Practicing
and of course we couldn't ... What they ... For ... We saw ... But it was
enjoyable because we were so close to history and ... Very first olympics
... Practice and it was very nice.

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My Own Works

i think that i'm one only have serious ... I say the i am only favorite offer
i like to ... Editing them one is short ... Cold lyrics has to do with the
russian amercians ... Who loses his work after ... Moon ... Fires
scientists ... Houndreds when that task is over in the ... One of this people
he's ... Directly ataches to his wife ... But he can work it so he just
... He can get some job as a ... Man a ... Man who ... And that's ...
The ... That is wood running ... After book is about his life how we get
these wood other people working with hand and his wife has a broke down
he has somebody also he has a young woman ... Mistrust and things go ...
Bad to worst but ... I got that thing done maybe more to the point would be
one of the short story ... Cold angels ... It is story ... Angel who gets
mad and ... Alley in newyork city yeah this is ... He meets a young man
was blind ... He ... Know whats happening him ... The angel was ... Was
...heads of the head he has the ... Know much ... He came from anyway
he takes ... Blinds students and ... Blindness ... The young guy brings
the angel by cat to his ... Was sixty six ... Beautiful ... Mixed back ...
Public singer ... Lovely apartment wow the musician ... The angels ... He
first tries to make for him ... Martiny and go ... To drugs ... And the
angel is very ... But he knows he can't to ... About that ... It is story
... Angel who he is ... To prophet he suddenly feels a terrible ...
So he knows longer ... Angel... Powerful and mortal he loses ... Black
body that ... Some die but then he realize that he is a prophet and it
some makes sense ... If you read it more than ... Just ... Angels ...
The angels ... Have a great time at the singing at look it at the face
of god ... The ... Make and do he's so ... Of human ... That's ... All
the angels and that's enaugh.



Main Scripts And Answers

The 1st One

My Name

my name is Scot Christian Anderson. my first name Scot was given to me by my parents. and i think that i was named after Scotland which is my mother's home country. my middle name Christian i think is a name after the religion of my parents which is christianity. and my last name Anderson is from my father's ancestors, who were all named Anderson. and the reason they were named Anderson is because, in Sweden, um if someone's name was Anders and he had a son the last name of that son would be Anderson or Anderson [with different pronunciation]. and so, my name is Scot Christian Anderson.

Question 1.) Where did his last name come from?

Answer 1.) His father's ancestors.


Question 2.) Who gave him his first name?

Answer 2.) His parents.


Question 3.) Where did his middle name come from?

Answer 3.) The religion of his parents

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The 2nd One

The Ancient Olymics

when we were in Greece my greatest pleasure was to ride through the city and be shown where the original Olympia stadium was. it was the_ it was the one built for the_ when they revie- renewed the Olympics. ah it was quite large but being in the heart of the city could not really take care of all the people coming there so they had to build another one further out for the very next Olympics. ah we saw_ we saw the stadium and where the very first torch was lit. we were so intrigued with that we decided to go visit the island where they had Olympia. and there is where the very first Olympic ... ah the men first practised and they_ ah we had the ah_ all of their ah_ the entire stadium was laid out in a practise field and each section of it was set aside for a different kind of_ of performance and mostly it was ah the strength of the men that they were working for and working on. but most of the time they were all in ruins because the, columns were made of granite and they had already crumbled so we saw only what was left of these columns. however_ the where we walked were cobble stones and they were_ we were informed they were the original cobble stones and there we pictured where the men were practising and of course we couldn't figure out what they would use for weight lifting unless it was the stones that we saw, these_ these huge stones. but it was enjoyable because we were so close to history and where the very first Olympics were being practised and it was very nice


Question 1.) What did the speaker enjoy most about her trip to Greece?

Answer 1.) Riding through the city and being shown the original Olympic stadium.


Question 2.) How much of the ancient Olympia was still standing?

Answer 2.) It was mostly ruins, and the columns had crumbled. But the speaker was told that the cobble stones were original.


Question 3.) Why was the new Olympic stadium built outside of the city center?

Answer 3.) The heart of the city was not big enough to cater for the large numbers of people who were expected to attend the Olympics.


Question 4.) What does the speaker think the huge stones she saw on the island were used for?

Answer 4.) She speculates that they were used for weight-lifting practice.

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The 3rd one

My Own Works

i think that i'm uh only half serious when i say that i am my own favorite author. i like the things i have written even after having spent a lot of time editing them. one is a short novel called Lyrics. it has to do with the Russian American physicist, who loses his work after the Americans have successfully landed on the moon. NASSER fires scientists by the thousands, by the hundreds, when that task is over and he is one of these people_ he is to some extent neurotically attached to his wife who is kidding him that he can't get work and so he just grabs the first thing he can get. he gets a job as a garbage man, a sanitation man for the New York Department of Sanitation. and that is what he does. the_ the joke that is running throughout the book is about his life and how he deals with other people, working with him and, his wife um has a breakdown. he has somebody else though. he_ he has a young woman who is his mistress and things go from bad to worse, but at any rate, i am very pleased that i got that thing done.
maybe more to the point would be one of the short stories i have written. one is called Angels Wine. it's a story of an angel who gets mugged in uh Schubert alley in New York_ in New York City. yeh this_ this is easier to deal with um he meets a young man who is blind at the end of Schubert Alley. he himself does not know what is happening, he himself the angel was mugged, he was hit on the head and he has amnesia, doesn't know much of what he came from. anyway he takes pity on this young blind student and cures his blindness and in vast gratitude the young guy brings the angel by cab to his own apartment in West Sixty-Six Street which is beautiful he didn't expect a beggar, a public singer, a street singer to have such a lovel- lovely apartment. well the musician plies the angel with drinks. he first tries to make for him a martini and it goes on from there to drugs and so forth and the angel is very patient but he knows he can't do much about that. at any rate it's the story of an angel who is demoted to prophet. he suddenly feels a terrible withdrawal spasm so he no longer feels himself to be an angel working miracles, powerful and mortal. all he has is a withering_ a_ a_ a wrinkling black body that might soon die. but then he realizes that he is a prophet and it some_ makes sense if you read it more than what i am describing it. Angel's Wine. the angels themselves have a great time after singing and looking at the face of God and all that. the best thing they can do is to drink the tears of human penitence. that's wine to all the angels. you see. um and that's enough.


Question 1.) Do you think the speaker enjoys writing books?

Answer 1.) Yes, he speaks about it very enthusiastically.


Question 2.) Who are the three main characters in the novel called Lyrics?

Answer 2.) A Russian American physicist, his wife and his mistress.


Question 3.) Who is the speaker's favorite author?

Answer 3.) Himself.


Question 4.) What does the angel do to help the student?

Answer 4.) He cures his blindness.


Question 5.) In the short story called Angels Wine, who lives in West Sixty-Six Street?

Answer 5.) A young blind student who is a musician and street singer

brain
12-04-2009, 22:20
Vocabulary

Tomorrow is 24th

بیست و چهارم = کتاب لغت ( لینک دانلود ، انتهای پست اول )

We should to study 2 Lessons

Lesson 3 : Parts Of The Body
and
Lesson 4 : Clothes

and make 5 examples for each lessons and then put them with Writing Post at 25th to 28th

Happy Studying

ا S a d e g h ا
:11:

brain
13-04-2009, 17:58
Hi my pals
:10:
Which subject would you like to write about it?

1-The exams

2-What job do you like to have in future

3-the advantages and disadvantages of t.v

4-do you like to travel on your own or with sb? why

5-Childhood memories

Everyone, plz choose one of them and tonight the one which has the highest rank will be chosen as the writing subject

ا S a d e g h ا
:11:

M O B I N
13-04-2009, 18:24
.hello brain long time no see

C. Breezy
13-04-2009, 18:59
.hello brain long time no see




Ehem ... Ehem ... ! :31:
The Group is Closed due to the college and school final exams
:23:

masoudtr
13-04-2009, 19:28
i'm thinking this better than another
What job do you like to have in future

M O B I N
13-04-2009, 20:03
Ehem ... Ehem ... ! [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
The Group is Closed due to the college and school final exams
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
How romantic
well we are classmates and you'd better know that we haven't got anything from second grade of high school yet/:27:

C. Breezy
13-04-2009, 20:12
i'm thinking this better than another
What job do you like to have in future

How romantic
well we are classmates and you'd better know that we haven't got anything from second grade of high school yet/[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Look at this :



قوانین تاپیک
تمام چیزایی که در بالا گفته شد باید دقیقا اجرا بشن پس حتما بخونیدشون
همه اعضای گروه باید تمام فعالیت های مربوطه را در بازه زمانی مشخص شده انجام بدن
گذاشتن پست های فارسی در تاپیک خلاف قوانین انجمن و این گروهه پس پست فارسی نذارید
از گذاشتن پست های بی مورد در تاپیک خود داری کنید و تاپیک را تبدیل به چت روم نکنید. اگه سوالی در مورد فعالیت ها دارید میتونید توسط پیام از یکی از اشخاص گروه بپرسید نه این که اون را در قالب پست بذارید تو تاپیک


ooooH ! we should leave here and continue our conversation in Chat Room , it's next door ! :27:

extreme2006gh
13-04-2009, 20:19
hello everybody
what happend ?
brain informed me activities are going to be hanged untill summer
but seemingly it s in another way
can somebody tell me what is happening?

by the way I select third subject about TV

C. Breezy
13-04-2009, 20:43
hello everybody
what happend ?
brain informed me activities are going to be hanged untill summer
but seemingly it s in another way
can somebody tell me what is happening?

by the way I select third subject about TV
yes ... Sadegh was right ... I was just telling others these news about the Group

Blue Ray
13-04-2009, 21:13
I vote for :What job do you like to have in future

masoudtr
13-04-2009, 21:59
ooooH ! we should leave here and continue our conversation in Chat Room , it's next doorexcuse me but do you think my post was UNCAUSED?????
i just PARTICIPATEd in election

C. Breezy
13-04-2009, 22:26
excuse me but do you think my post was UNCAUSED?????
i just PARTICIPATEd in electionno no no no ! the Bold part was about Mobin and me ... I mean the Part :


همه اعضای گروه باید تمام فعالیت های مربوطه را در بازه زمانی مشخص شده انجام بدنAnd the Group is inactive until summer

brain
13-04-2009, 23:55
Today is 25th


بیست و پنجم تابیست و هشتم = فعالیت رایتینگ در مورد موضوع مربوطه(شامل حداقل 100 کلمه)+ ساختن 15 جمله در مورد کلمات خوانده شده در کتاب لغت(هر درس 5 جمله)+گرامر هیچی :27:

Part 1 : Writing

Writing Subject : What job do you like to have in future ?

Part 2 : Vocabulary

5 Sentences for Lesson 2 : Transport


5 Sentences for Lesson 3 : Part Of The Body


5 Sentences for Lesson 4 : Clothes

Part 3 : Grammer

Nothing :8:

Happy Studying
ا S A D E G H ا
:11:

afsane b
14-04-2009, 15:51
here is my first part of writing

Writing Subject : What job do you like to have in future


When I was a child I always used to dream of being a teacher in a school, since some of my teachers tended to be bad tempered, I liked to be a kind, sympathetic, devoted teacher who never took stuffs difficult to students, especially about exams and absences. But as I grew up I changed my mind as well, when I was a teenager I wanted to be a nurse who worked in a big governmental hospital and helped the poor to recover their diseases promptly, particularly I was interested in helping the pregnant women to give birth to their babies, due to my emotions to the newly birth babies:11:.


But it was not the end of the story, as some years passed, this dream became fainter and a new aspiration took its place, now I hoped to become an actress who had the universal fame and her magic plays dropped everybody's jaw. But this one didn’t come true the same as others:18:. as I became an adult I tried to adopt myself to the situation and wish sth obtainable so, when I entered the university I tried to study hard to become an ordinary manager, due to my field. Despite putting a lot into it, this wish hasn’t happened yet also. :31:

C. Breezy
14-04-2009, 17:59
Writing Subject : What job do you like to have in future ?

Hmmmm ... I really want to be a Basketball player in United states national basketball association (NBA) as a player ... I really like basketball but because of the school i wasn't able to practice as much as i wanted ... But i will do this in this summer ...
But i've also wanted to be a karikaturist ... or maybe a musician ... but I don't like teaching at all ... Because it reminds me school days wich i hate them everytime :2:
I don't know what else to write about it :14:l

masoudtr
15-04-2009, 13:31
when i was a child i wanted to be a doctor to help people
i wntad to treatment a poor people free
but when i grow up i realized that it was just a dream
i couldn't be a doctor
i wanted to be a fireman too
and i wanted to scientist

but now i understand this fact in iran we can't choose a job with our tendency and our ability and capacity
we have to work for money to can survive
we can't enjoy from our job
for example i'm a photographer and some day i can get money and some days i can't get money as much as i want and i always worry about a future
i don't have a job security and i see my dreams fall down and dies and i become older and older and i can't do nothing for myself

hoseinist
15-04-2009, 19:38
Writing Subject : What job do you like to have in future ?

When I was kid I always liked to be a teacher , a good teacher just like my Mom , a teacher that loves her Job and her students and lives for her students ! when I was at high school one day I told her about my wish ,against of my expectation she asked me to change my decision ! and for having a better quality life I choose another course ! so now I’m a Dr. pharmacist . but because of liking my last wish ( being a teacher ) now I like to continue my education and I hope I will be able to be a teacher at university as a good teacher ! plz pray for me that I will be able to achieve this my plan.:D:11:

masoudtr
15-04-2009, 20:00
plz pray for me that I will be able to achieve this my plan.:D


it's worst job in iran
you can't buy anything as you want for your children and you must work hard and you lose your happiness across a time
and when you will retire you can see very well you don't have anty thing to spend your life

afsane b
16-04-2009, 09:25
it's worst job in iran
you can't buy anything as you want for your children and you must work hard and you lose your happiness across a time
and when you will retire you can see very well you don't have anty thing to spend your life
i oppose you...........:41:
i think your viewpoint about teachers is not true in the reality as i know lots of theachers who has the wealthy life,also it is not the worst job even in iran , there are a few jobs which not only has no money but also no prestige, though i believe working is divine in its essence

masoudtr
16-04-2009, 09:32
[QUOTE]i think your viewpoint about teachers is not true in the reality as i know lots of theachers who has the wealthy life,also it is not the worst job even in iran , there are a few jobs which not only has no money but also no prestige, though i believe working is divine in its essence [/QUOTE
]
i respect of your idea.
but truth is bitter
i suggest you to go to countryside and see with your eyes that this fact
many of teachers lives in SHED

JEFF_HARDY
16-04-2009, 09:49
it's worst job in iran
you can't buy anything as you want for your children and you must work hard and you lose your happiness across a time
and when you will retire you can see very well you don't have anty thing to spend your life

wellTwhat hosseinist is planning to be in futur is university proffesors.and in this level, money isn`t the most important thing for a university proffesor,the most important thing is how he or shhe can improve her skils and be a better person in her society,and thats what really matters,and i have nevers seen a university teacher who can`t afford to buy thing for his childeren,and as a matter of fact most of the university teachers go abroad after their retirement .so they can have more fun or they can shair their knowledge with others easier.and thises are all facts

sepid12ir
16-04-2009, 16:47
hey guys
how r u doin?
well, today, I just highlighten the mistakes n I want u to correct them yrself...since it is more useful when u correct yr mistakes yrself n it sticks into yr mind
anyway, I'm done n now it's yr turn:46:l
Regards,
Sepideh



here is my first part of writing

Writing Subject : What job do you like to have in future


When I was a child I always used to dream of being a teacher in a school, since some of my teachers tended to be bad tempered, I liked to be a kind, sympathetic, devoted teacher who never took stuffs difficult to students, especially about exams and absences. But as I grew up I changed my mind as well, when I was a teenager I wanted to be a nurse who worked in a big governmental hospital and helped the poor to recover their diseases promptly, particularly I was interested in helping the pregnant women to give birth to their babies, due to my emotions to the newly birth babies:11:.


But it was not the end of the story, as some years passed, this dream became fainter and a new aspiration took its place, now I hoped to become an actress who had the universal fame and her magic plays dropped everybody's jaw. But this one didn’t come true the same as others:18:. as I became an adult I tried to adopt myself to the situation and wish sth obtainable so, when I entered the university I tried to study hard to become an ordinary manager, due to my field. Despite putting a lot into it, this wish hasn’t happened yet also. :31:





wow! long story
wish u good luck wherever u r my dear pal:11:l
I think 'stuff' as a noun is uncountable
:11:



Writing Subject : What job do you like to have in future ?

Hmmmm ... I really want to be a Basketball player in United states national basketball association (NBA) as a player ... I really like basketball but because of the school i wasn't able to practice as much as i wanted ... But i will do this in this summer ...
But i've also wanted to be a karikaturist ... or maybe a musician ... but I don't like teaching at all ... Because it reminds me school days wich i hate them everytime :2:
I don't know what else to write about it :14:l





hey, how r u doing!
dear Korosh! am I right, dun u mind correcting the mistakes yrself? I'm waiting for that:10:l




when i was a child i wanted to be a doctor to help people
i wntad to treatment a poor people free
but when i grow up i realized that it was just a dream
i couldn't be a doctor
i wanted to be a fireman too
and i wanted to scientist

but now i understand this fact in iran we can't choose a job with our tendency and our ability and capacity
we have to work for money to can survive
we can't enjoy from our job
for example i'm a photographer and some day i can get money and some days i can't get money as much as i want and i always worry about a future
i don't have a job security and i see my dreams fall down and dies and i become older and older and i can't do nothing for myself


good man,
if it's okay with u, I wait for yr correction:46:l





When I was kid I always liked to be a teacher , a good teacher just like my Mom , a teacher that loves her Job and her students and lives for her students ! when I was at high school one day I told her about my wish ,against of my expectation she asked me to change my decision ! and for having a better quality life I choose another course ! so now I’m a Dr. pharmacist . but because of liking my last wish ( being a teacher ) now I like to continue my education and I hope I will be able to be a teacher at university as a good teacher ! plz pray for me that I will be able to achieve this my plan.:D:11:


wow!
I do pray for u
n I do cross my fingers for u...I'm sure it happens n that day is not so far:10:l

C. Breezy
16-04-2009, 18:31
hey, how r u doing!
dear Korosh! am I right, dun u mind correcting the mistakes yrself? I'm waiting for that[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

oH ! you mean I myself should correct my mistakes ?? :31: But that's too hard for me ... I just can guess this one :


... write about it [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
I think it should be omitted ... am I right ? ( NO ! )
:27:

sepid12ir
16-04-2009, 19:52
Hmmmm ... I really want to be a Basketball player in United states national basketball association (NBA) as a player ... I really like basketball but because of the school i wasn't able to practice as much as i wanted ... But i will do this in this summer ...
But i've also wanted to be a karikaturist ... or maybe a musician ... but I don't like teaching at all ... Because it reminds me school days wich i hate them everytime
I don't know what else to write about it

that's easy man, but I think u r a bit lazy to go thru it! hmm:D...well, the one u corrected.. yup, u r right, no need to write 'it'

n 'as a player' should be omitted as well, since u've mentioned it before: I want to be a basketball player---> so no need to have player again

u r talking about sth at the moment so why have u used 'wasn't?!

which or wich?

brain
16-04-2009, 22:30
:20:
Hi
Writing Post

A Doctor, a Fireman, an Artist, a Seller ... which one ?!
Everyone makes for a special work in the world.
When I was a child I wanted to be a good artist because of my brother's major
was Graphic and he liked his major a lot and taught me everything he learned.
He told me that I can be a good artist in future. I copied my brother's works until school
to high school. Then I chose Graphic in high school to study, however my adviser
recommended to me it is better for me if I study Mathematics but I like art
more than other things. I live with art.
Let me say something about my art's master or art world's master. He is no one, except Picasso. Maybe everyone knows him because he is one of the most recognized figures in 20th-century art. He drew and drew for 15 hours in a day. When he was 12 years old, his master told him that he draw like Leonardo da Vinci. He was very active and effective. I like to be like him but I still can't because he was exception. My major has some sprouts: Graphic Designer, Typographer, Painter, Illustrator, Photographer, Sculpture. I like all of them and I really confused to choose one of them. I like Illustrations more than others but sometimes I see a typography or painting I'm tempted to start working.
Every works needs effort and everyone have more effort he will successful
but a right effort in a right way. Everyone will serve to people with that work. I found my way and it is Art and I hope to be a good artist in future. I wish to serve to people with it in near future or far future.
What's your way to serve to people?


Vocabulary

Lesson 2: Transport

1-I have not ever traveled with ship
2-I traveled with aeroplane when I was 2 years old
3-Driving a lorry is very hard
4-I like traveling with train
5-I like to see all of world with bike

Lesson 3 : Parts of the Body

1-I had a bad headache yesterday
2-I brush my teeth every morning
3-We wash our hairs in bathroom
4-We hear everythings with our ears
5-I need my hands to do my works

Lesson 4 : Clothes

1-We wear sweater when weather is cold
2-somebody have stolen my shoes at mosque
3-Wearing tie is not fashionable in iran
4-I always like to wear overcoat
5-Washing machine washed my suit


ا S A D E G H ا
:11:

hoseinist
17-04-2009, 07:31
hi dear Sepideh ,
at first im gonna say tanks for ur corporation in this group, we couldn't go on without u:11:
.OK i corrected my mistakes :D

,against of my expectation she asked me to change my decision ! and for having a better quality life I choose another course !
i think ,i must omit of and just say against my expectation.
but about second mistake, one thing i could understand is just about the tense of sentence, and choose mused be changed to chose ! not more :31::D

JEFF_HARDY
17-04-2009, 10:07
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! and for having a better quality life I choose another course !




.


but about second mistake, one thing i could understand is just about the tense of sentence, and choose mused be changed to chose ! not more :31::D



:
:I`m not sure,but i think yr sentence should be something like
برای افزایش کیفیت زندگی ام: to increase the quality of my life :

or to have a better life quality: برای داشتن زندگی بهتر

JEFF_HARDY
17-04-2009, 16:58
:20:
Hi
Writing Post


A Doctor, a Fireman, an Artist, a Seller ... which one ?!
Everyone makes for a special work in the world.
When I was a child I wanted to be a good artist because of my brother's major
was Graphic and he liked his major a lot and taught me everything he learned.
He told me that I can be a good artist in future. I copied my brother's works until school
to high school. Then I chose Graphic in high school to study, however my adviser
recommended to me it is better for me if I study Mathematics but I like art
more than other things. I live with art.
Let me say something about my art's master or art world's master. He is no one, except Picasso. Maybe everyone knows him because he is one of the most recognized figures in 20th-century art. He drew and drew for 15 hours in a day. When he was 12 years old, his master told him that he draw like Leonardo da Vinci. He was very active and effective. I like to be like him but I still can't because he was exception. My major has some sprouts: Graphic Designer, Typographer, Painter, Illustrator, Photographer, Sculpture. I like all of them and I really confused to choose one of them. I like Illustrations more than others but sometimes I see a typography or painting I'm tempted to start working.
Every works needs effort and everyone have more effort he will successful
but a right effort in a right way. Everyone will serve to people with that work. I found my way and it is Art and I hope to be a good artist in future. I wish to serve to people with it in near future or far future.
What's your way to serve to people?



ا S A D E G H ا
:11:



because of my brother's major was graphic:becouse my brother`s major was graphic

a lot: alot


I copied my brother's works until school to high school: untill high school.



recommended to me: recommended me

he was exception:he was an exeption

I really confused: I am really confused or i was really confused

I'm tempted : I get tempted

works: work


everyone have more effort : anybody who putts more effort


serve to people :will serve people

brain
17-04-2009, 20:00
Thank u Mr Jeff
I want to put a Goodbye post a fwe days later

Blue Ray
17-04-2009, 20:15
wait wait ! don't close the doors ! I didn't post my assignment yet !:20:

Writing : What job do you like to have in future

When I was a child I wanted to become a doctor. Because I had a grandma who always complained about her pains and illness. I promised her (when I was 4 or 5) to become a doctor and cure her ! However she passed away 6 years ago and I couldn’t keep my promise.
When I was a teenager , I felt I sort of had a talent for working with computers. I enjoyed working with different softwares and creating new things. So I came to the conclusion that I could be a good computer engineer. Therefore I made my decision and now I am a student of computer sciences , hope to continue my education and find an appropriate job in this field.

Vocabulary : Lesson 2



I never take a bus to the university.
I prefer to go by car.
He carries bricks by his lorry.
That van looks suspicious to me.
Did you see the helicopter which just passed by ?


Vocabulary : Lesson 3



I was looking at her when she was combing her hair.
Her baby always sucks his thumb.
Something sticked to my sole.
She wears high-heeled shoes.
He had misshapen teeth.


Vocabulary : Lesson 4



It was cold , so I decided to put on my sweater.
He wore stylish trousers.
I like my checked tee-shirt.
She buckled her brown belt around her waist.
Players wear sport shorts in the football field.

JEFF_HARDY
17-04-2009, 21:03
i`ve jus came,but im gonna miss here

SCYTHE
17-04-2009, 22:44
a lot: alot

I'm tempted : I get tempted



I just stopped by this thread and imo the red ones are OK, no mistakes

brain
18-04-2009, 01:05
Hello my pals
:20:
This was Our Last Activity in this Group
All guys know that because of The Exams we will close this Group for 2 Months
and we will start it together again on Summer
Please don't send any new post, since we want to have this post as the last one at the moment so that everybody can have a look at it
:10:
Good Bye until Summer
ا S i n g l e B o y . S e p i d e h ا

Aqu-NELLY
18-04-2009, 17:27
hi dear brian, whats up here ? because of my konkoonr exam i didnt allow come to net ,and another my problem is i cant give u any messages no PM no another way!! so i had to write here ,sorry ! but i m going to join u after my exam.:D:11:

singleguy
22-06-2009, 20:48
hi guys
I missed this group and all of you a lot... [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] . I've forgotten many points that I learned from all of you and also many thing about English[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
I decided to talk with you about some problems related to starting the activities again
As you can see dear Brain told you the group will start again at summer but it hasn't started yet. [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
The university exams haven't finished yet and the damn Konkoor hasn't finished yet. So I decided to start the group from the second period (as you can see in the schedule at the first page).
But there is an other big problem. Maybe I'll take the summer semester at the university and if I take it, I don't have enough time to handle this group and prepare the activities for you.
I don't like to abandon this group because dear Sepideh and Brain and me spent a lot of time to designed this schedule.
please tell me your idea!!! What do you suggest?
Single boy
:11:

seymour
23-06-2009, 19:31
hi guys
I missed this group and all of you a lot... [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] . I've forgotten many points that I learned from all of you and also many thing about English[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]


you've forgotten them already ? [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] so fast !!! ... ([ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] kidding)

masoudtr
23-06-2009, 21:51
i have some suggest
you know why this group take a lot of time from you?
i think one reason is you search every section for lesson
but we don't need this
we can use for ex VOA for listening
or follow me bbc
and for reading another book and writting .........
and it has benefit for us
1- decrase your time for find a lesson
2- we can use our progress i mean for ex lesson one for first section
lesson two of book for second section &...
every lesson is more difficult than previous lesson and it help us alot
so what's your opinion about my suggest?

singleguy
23-06-2009, 22:12
i have some suggest
you know why this group take a lot of time from you?
i think one reason is you search every section for lesson
but we don't need this
we can use for ex VOA for listening
or follow me bbc
and for reading another book and writting .........
and it has benefit for us
1- decrase your time for find a lesson
2- we can use our progress i mean for ex lesson one for first section
lesson two of book for second section &...
every lesson is more difficult than previous lesson and it help us alot
so what's your opinion about my suggest?



Thank God [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] . finally one body told his idea. Thanks Masoud:11:
No...I don't spend alot of time searching for for the source. My listening source is one of the sites. As you saw I prepared 3 listening activities in 3 levels for you. But I don't know the source that you told [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
ex for VOA listening? What is that? [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] and what is the level?
and you told BBC!!! don't you think its hard? I can't understand all the words.
but for BBC news I have an other plane that is not in our schedule. maybe I'll tell you later [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
for the reading my source is SELECT READING (intermediate)
I have to type it for you and choose some of the exercises for you. yes you're right. It takes a lot of time to type it. So if all of you have this book with yourself I don't have to spend so much time to type that.
but can all of you buy this book?!!
for the grammar and vocab you know our sources
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

extreme2006gh
23-06-2009, 23:37
hi buddies
I m so glad that group is going to start
this is good place to improve my english and I m eager to start activities
but I dont have any new Ideas about the way activitis should go on, because I didn t have much experiences in this group then and I agree with the schedule we were acting on before

I m very busy now , but I ll try to participate in group surely
.

Sha7ab
24-06-2009, 01:54
hello
please take good decisions and i absolutely agree with them .
Im in .

mahsa1469
24-06-2009, 10:33
hi
it,s very good
i trying to using this group during new period
bye

Isabella
24-06-2009, 16:50
Wow
nice group!!
one of my friends tell me to join you 3 month a go. but I didn't have time to join you
I'm afraid. My english is not good. can I join this group?!!
If I do activity I'll make this group shir 2shir:31:
the schedule is very nice. but I'm very worry about my speaking:41:
don't you have any program for that?

singleguy
25-06-2009, 12:01
Wow
nice group!!
one of my friends tell me to join you 3 month a go. but I didn't have time to join you
I'm afraid. My english is not good. can I join this group?!!
If I do activity I'll make this group shir 2shir:31:
the schedule is very nice. but I'm very worry about my speaking:41:
don't you have any program for that?




hi my friend.:10:
finally you came here..!! welcome:20:
This group is not for showing our English to other friends. By this group we learn English. So don't worry. My English is not good. like you
but about speaking...Sorry we can't do anything. In last schedule we had something for speaking but we didn't do that even for one time. So we can't improve our speaking here.
:46:

Sha7ab
25-06-2009, 12:14
Wow
nice group!!
one of my friends tell me to join you 3 month a go. but I didn't have time to join you
I'm afraid. My english is not good. can I join this group?!!
If I do activity I'll make this group shir 2shir:31:
the schedule is very nice. but I'm very worry about my speaking:41:
don't you have any program for that?



Hello and wellcome
My English is worst :31: but i am here and tring to improve . I have annoyanced my friends because this my bad English but there no other way ... i have to try more and more

hoseinist
25-06-2009, 12:28
wow !!
hi my friends! i missed all of u:10: ! i hope during this course we have more members because of summer and ur free time :27: :D

sepid12ir
25-06-2009, 18:47
hey guys,
nice to see this group lively again, hope it helps us all during the summer to make a huge progress...we can if we just take it seriously
some of u have mentioned the speaking part, unfortunately for the time being we have no plan for that, for some reasons...
but, I think besides Reading,Writing n Listening we gotta do sth for our speaking n accent. if u guys accept, u can record yr voice n share it with others so that we can see what yr problems are, how fluent you are n we can indeed help u thru Prononciation...so, if u accept we can put it into our schedule as well! ...
dun be ashamed of such a thing n I kinda like to know wot yr idea is about this?!...
have fun
Sepideh:11:l

singleguy
25-06-2009, 19:23
hey guys,
nice to see this group lively again, hope it helps us all during the summer to make a huge progress...we can if we just take it seriously
some of u have mentioned the speaking part, unfortunately for the time being we have no plan for that, for some reasons...
but, I think besides Reading,Writing n Listening we gotta do sth for our speaking n accent. if u guys accept, u can record yr voice n share it with others so that we can see what yr problems are, how fluent you are n we can indeed help u thru Prononciation...so, if u accept we can put it into our schedule as well! ...
dun be ashamed of such a thing n I kinda like to know wot yr idea is about this?!...
have fun
Sepideh:11:l



Thanks dear Sepideh:11:
that was a great suggestion.:27: It's also really better that voice chat(that was in the first schedule). If most of the members agree with this idea we will add it to the schedule as soon as possible.
I guess the only problem is that some of our friends don't have ADSL and it's hard for them to upload their files
so I want all of you to tell me your idea till Tir 14th

sepid12ir
25-06-2009, 21:10
.
I guess the only problem is that some of our friends don't have ADSL and it's hard for them to upload their files




there is no need to have a long piece of speaking, those who dun have access to ADSL can have a very short peice of recorded file, around 20 seconds to one min..it shouldn't be that hard!!

JEFF_HARDY
25-06-2009, 21:13
and in a 20 sec speaking non of the mistakes wont be shown. if u choose some spescial words and check the speaking, i think it would have better results,and by the way

and also how u want to tell the mates which part they pronounced incorrectly?

sepid12ir
25-06-2009, 21:44
and in a 20 sec speaking non of the mistakes wont be shown. if u choose some spescial words and check the speaking, i think it would have better results,and by the way

and also how u want to tell the mates which part they pronounced incorrectly?

ya, for sure we can chose some esp readings or a esp topic that others can talk about
I think even in 20 second there are some errors or mistakes which can be corrected
if there was any problem with the prononciation of the words, I can record the correct form thru one of the well-known dic n share it with others
hmm?!l

masoudtr
25-06-2009, 21:51
why you use voice chat ?
i think it's very better and help us to know each other and you can get a correct prononciation in that time without delay

singleguy
25-06-2009, 22:11
why you use voice chat ?
i think it's very better and help us to know each other and you can get a correct prononciation in that time without delay

All of the members can't log on in chat room at the same time but by Sepideh's idea this problem will be solved

rayhaneh
26-06-2009, 12:48
Hi guys
1st of all im very eager to join this grp and to improve my english with u people
i think its OK to start the activities again from 14th teer


Maybe I'll take the summer semester at the university and if I take it, I don't have enough time to handle this group and prepare the activities for you

this can be solved by sharing the work i mean division of work so that u will be able to contiue with the grp along with ur studies at university.

محمد88
27-06-2009, 15:05
u can record yr voice n share it with others


in continuation of Sepideh's useful advices
...I add an important way to improve your speaking skill
once a Language expert told me that , when you want to learn a new language
"there is a power inside your brain named " ego
?? and what does it do
...it doesn't want to let you to speak another language and insist to speak in your mother tongue
?? but...how can we overcome it
!! yeah
...that is what I quoted from dear Sepideh with a few sample different
...as she said you speak in English with yourself for 4-3 minutes and record your voice
!! after that you share it with yourself
this know-how helps you to overcome it and of course causes to improve speaking
!! I have done it and it really worked for me
...I suggest you to do this and I guarantee that you will see its influence after 10 times
:11::11:
.
.

sepid12ir
27-06-2009, 20:21
in continuation of Sepideh's useful advices
...I add an important way to improve your speaking skill
once a Language expert told me that , when you want to learn a new language
"there is a power inside your brain named " ego
?? and what does it do
...it doesn't want to let you to speak another language and insist to speak in your mother tongue
?? but...how can we overcome it
!! yeah
...that is what I quoted from dear Sepideh with a few sample different
...as she said you speak in English with yourself for 4-3 minutes and record your voice
!! after that you share it with yourself
this know-how helps you to overcome it and of course causes to improve speaking
!! I have done it and it really worked for me
...I suggest you to do this and I guarantee that you will see its influence after 10 times
:11::11:
.
.


you are absolutely right:11:l
but this method has a disadvantage! sometimes, by just talking to yrself, u dun notice some mistakes n u keep repeating them not aware of yr mistakes n those mistakes will put u inti touble sometime, since forgeting the mistakes which have been sticked into our minds n replacing the corrected forms is absolutely hard
some mistakes need to be corrected

sepid12ir
28-06-2009, 13:40
btw guys, u didn't tell yr idea
do u agree with recording yr voice n sharing with us? so that it can help ypu thru prononciation n speaking?! let us know so that we can decide on this matter


some of u have mentioned the speaking part, unfortunately for the time being we have no plan for that, for some reasons...
but, I think besides Reading,Writing n Listening we gotta do sth for our speaking n accent. if u guys accept, u can record yr voice n share it with others so that we can see what yr problems are, how fluent you are n we can indeed help u thru Prononciation...so, if u accept we can put it into our schedule as well! ...
dun be ashamed of such a thing n I kinda like to know wot yr idea is about this?!...

محمد88
28-06-2009, 14:06
...I do agree with this idea
...but we should specify the duration
...and also a subject for each time
and there is still the problem of uploading the file
:20:for guys such as myself who use Dial Up
:46:but I totally agree with that

rayhaneh
28-06-2009, 16:36
i am also agree with sepideh's idea
but how about those who r studding with British pronunciation like me
while majority of people are speaking american one ,i guess
isn't it a hurdle for u to correct them

brain
28-06-2009, 19:17
Hi my old and new pals
:10: :40:


I'm really happy that I see this group is going to be lively again like before :26: :31:
I really agree with Sepide's idea because we only hadn't speaking practice and now she solved it for us with this idea :27:
I thank her for that and Singleboy for his Group :11:
I will try to join as much as I can :20:
well I gonna go .... Ciao
:11:

[S A D E G H]

JEFF_HARDY
28-06-2009, 19:24
i am also agree





i agree


well, i have a mixture of american and english accent, but ill try to work on my english, and i think whoever is going to correct the listenings, must be familier with both english and american accent, so if more than one teacher would correct the listening it would havea better result...that what i think

sepid12ir
28-06-2009, 19:26
i am also agree with sepideh's idea
but how about those who r studding with British pronunciation like me
while majority of people are speaking american one ,i guess
isn't it a hurdle for u to correct them


wow, then I'm more eager to hear yr accent
well, I'm sorta familiar with British accent it shouldn't be a big deal...besides, I've got both birtish n american prononciation Dictionary n it can be solved...

so if more than one teacher would correct the listening it would havea better result
definitley

محمد88
29-06-2009, 00:29
:10:...hi pals
I have a complementary suggestion for
( this new idea ( recording the voice
:20:my suggestion is uploading the text of your speaking with your media file
I think it helps the other guys to understand your voice better
...and according to that , they will help you better
your view about this suggestion, will make me happy
:11::11:

sepid12ir
29-06-2009, 01:03
:10:...hi pals
I have a complementary suggestion for
( this new idea ( recording the voice
:20:my suggestion is uploading the text of your speaking with your media file
I think it helps the other guys to understand your voice better
...and according to that , they will help you better
your view about this suggestion, will make me happy
:11::11:


do agree:11:l

Naser_helboy
29-06-2009, 12:50
hi gyus
i'm newbi in english
i,m gonna join to your group
what's your plan for future?

JEFF_HARDY
29-06-2009, 13:11
sorry dear teachers, sepid12ir and singleguy, why don`t you start the new structure which everybody agreed with?

singleguy
29-06-2009, 13:24
sorry dear teachers, sepid12ir and singleguy, why don`t you start the new structure which everybody agreed with?


I'm not a teacher I'm a learner:31:. I'm still studying interchange1:31:
.by the way, In each month we have 2 periods, and we want to start from the second period (Tir 14th). and If we add speaking to our schedule we should change the schedule a little, so I'm waiting for Sepideh's and your order to change the schedule

hi gyus
i'm newbi in english
i,m gonna join to your group
what's your plan for future?


If you follow the posts these days, you find out that we are talking about adding speaking activity to our schedule and we have other activities as well (you can read them in the first post)
have fun
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masoudtr
29-06-2009, 13:25
sorry dear teachers, sepid12ir and singleguy, why don`t you start the new structure which everybody agreed with?
i think they are waiting for more student
or mabye their exam didn't finish or mabye this class started at fall
like school class:21::21:

mahsa1469
29-06-2009, 14:27
i think they are waiting for more student
or mabye their exam didn't finish or mabye this class started at fall
like school class:21::21:

no!!
this class start in 14-th of this mounth and we must waiting yet

masoudtr
29-06-2009, 15:30
no!!
this class start in 14-th of this mounth and we must waiting yet

i know that
i'm just kidding

dampayi
29-06-2009, 15:41
hi dear friends!
! finally i took my damnable exam (konkoor) & now i'm ready to do activities here !!


hi guys can i ask whats this in english?
دروغ گو دشمن خداست
lier is enemy of god
is that right?

hi
i think u should ask ur question here :


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have a good time

mahsa1469
29-06-2009, 16:34
i know that
i'm just kidding

ow yes, i know you kiddin i say for or frind(JEFF_HARDY)to know

rayhaneh
29-06-2009, 17:24
my suggestion is uploading the text of your speaking with your media file
I think it helps the other guys to understand your voice better
...and according to that , they will help you better
your view about this suggestion, will make me happy

u r absolutely right
but how about that group leaders select
? a specific text and we all speak that out


i agree

thanks a lot 4 correction ,i had confusion about that while writing it

well, i have a mixture of american and english accent, but ill try to work on my english

i have the same condition i dont like to stay in the same condition:41: ,rather i like to learn and speak only one of the correctly

wow, then I'm more eager to hear yr accent

as i told before mine is a miixed one and also a poor one !!
so,dont expect from me a prefect british accent
:31:

well, I'm sorta familiar with British accent it shouldn't be a big deal...besides, I've got both birtish n american prononciation Dictionary n it can be solved...

that,s very nice
:11:

محمد88
29-06-2009, 19:15
u r absolutely right
but how about that group leaders select
? a specific text and we all speak that out

I agree with a specific subject
...:46:but about specific text
I think for us , improvisation is more useful than
...memorizing
...anyway , it depend on majority's view
:11::11:

Naser_helboy
30-06-2009, 10:53
hey guys
what's your level in english ?
i don't understand your sentences very well
i study intro itnterchange unit 12
tnx

singleguy
30-06-2009, 11:27
hey guys
what's your level in english ?
i don't understand your sentences very well
i study intro itnterchange unit 12
tnx



Hi my friend...Don't worry about your level. I'm studying interchange 1:46:
The vocabulary book that we study is Elementary Vocabulary and the grammar book that we study is English grammar in use and for each listening activity I'll prepare 3 listenings in 3 levels (easy, medium, hard) and for writing activity we choose a subject and you should write about that
so don't worry about your level My English is not really good too
:10:

Naser_helboy
30-06-2009, 11:33
Hi my friend...Don't worry about your level. I'm studying interchange 1:46:
The vocabulary book that we study is Elementary Vocabulary and the grammar book that we study is English grammar in use and for each listening activity I'll prepare 3 listenings in 3 levels (easy, medium, hard) and for writing activity we choose a subject and you should write about that
so don't worry about your level My English is not really good too
:10:




ok
i have both of those books

tnx alot

mahsa1469
30-06-2009, 11:42
Hi my friend...Don't worry about your level. I'm studying interchange 1:46:

The vocabulary book that we study is Elementary Vocabulary and the grammar book that we study is English grammar in use and for each listening activity I'll prepare 3 listenings in 3 levels (easy, medium, hard) and for writing activity we choose a subject and you should write about that
so don't worry about your level My English is not really good too
:10:





ow,i have not any of books:41:
??is necessary to have this books

rayhaneh
30-06-2009, 15:47
ow,i have not any of books[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ](40).gif
??is necessary to have this books

i also dont have them
but u can download th E version of 2 of them
from 1st page of this group
here:

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m007007
30-06-2009, 16:07
No advanced levels yet???

rayhaneh
30-06-2009, 16:19
what's your level in english
intermediate

farshad_miki
03-07-2009, 00:11
hi guys
I wanna to join this group
but my level is interchange :19:1
can i join this group???

Sha7ab
03-07-2009, 17:28
hi guys
I wanna to join this group
but my level is interchange :19:1
can i join this group???
why not ? wellcome


I wanna to join this group
you must write one of the two under sentence
I wanna join this group
or
I want to join this group

Wanna = Want to
Wanna to = Want to to

singleguy
05-07-2009, 11:58
Hi there...Finally I started the first activity of summer:5:
The schedule tell us that we should start from tomorrow but we start from today (because I misread the schedule and told all of you, we start from Tir 14th [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] )
Thanks to dear Masoudrejae and Mohammad88 who helped me typing this reading:11:
Please [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] read the first post in order to find out what you should do for the reading activity
The reading is so long and pretty hard but it's really beautiful and it improves your English and you have enough time to do your activity
you must finish your activity till Tir 18th




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Culture is everything .Culture is the way you dress, the way we carry our heads, the way we walk, the way we tie our ties.
Amie Zesair-French writer (1913- )
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Culture Shock
By bob Weinstein
From the Boston Glob

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Saying Tamara Blackmore experienced culture shock when she arrived here last September is an understatement. It was more like culture trauma(1) for this adventurous student who left Melbourne's Monash University to spend her junior year at Boston College (BC). Blackmore, 20 , was joined at BC by 50 other exchange students from around the world. Like the thousands of exchange students who enroll in American colleges each year, Blackmore discovered firsthand(2) there is a sea of difference(3) between reading about and experiencing America firsthand. She felt the difference as soon as she stepped off the plane.





As soon as she landed in Boston, Blackmore could feel the tension in the air. She was about to test a lifestyle (4) far more hectic than the one she left. "driving in Boston is crazy", says Blackmore. "It took me a while to get used to the roads and the driving style here. I was always afraid someone was going to hit me. It was particularly tricky since the steering wheel was on the wrong side of the car. In Australia it's on the right side. "Beyond the cars and traffic jams, Blachmore said it took a while to get used to so many people in one place, all of whom seemed like they were moving at warp speed(5).

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There are only 18 million people in Australia spread out over an entire country," she says," compared to more than six million people in the state of Massachusetts alone. We don't have the kind of congestion you have in Boston. There is a whole different perception of space."



The pressing problem for Blackmore was making a quick adjustment to the American lifestyle that felt like it was run by a stopwatch. For this easygoing Australian, Americans seemed like perpetual-motion machines(6). "Americans are very time-oriented," Blachmore says. "Everything is done according to a schedule. They're always busy, which made me feel guilty about waiting to just sit around and occasionally watch television. Australians, on the other hand, value their leisure time. The pace there is a lot slower because we don't feel the need to always be busy. It's not that Australians are lazy, it's just that they have different concept of how time should be spent. Back home, I used to spend a lot more time just talking to my friends."



It didn't take long for Blackmore to adjust to American rhythms(7). "I felt the pressure to work harder and do more because everyone was running around doing so much," she says. When BC students weren't huddled over books, Blackmore found it odd that they were compulsively jogging, running, biking, or doing aerobics in order to be thin. "Compared to home, the girls here are very skinny," she says. "Before I got here, I heard a lot of stories about the pressure to be thin and that many young American women have eating disorders. I'll go out with a friend and just tuck into a good meal(8) and have a good time, whereas an American girl would just pick at her food.(9)"
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When it comes to drinking, Blackmore says Australian have a lot more freedom. "we are more casual about drinking at home," she says , "whereas there are many rules and regulations attached to when and where you can drink in the united states," not to mention a legal drinking age of 21 compared with Australia's legal drinking age of 18.




But it’s BC's laid-back(10) and friendly learning environment that sets it apart from her Melbourne college experience.” Generally speaking, learning facilities are a lot better in Boston,” she says. “In Australia, students and teachers have little contact outside the classroom. It’s a formal and depersonalized relationship. College is a place you go for a few hours every day and then go home. Your social life and school life are separate.”


It’s just the opposite at BC, according to Blackmor. “BC students and faculty are like one big happy family,” she says. “There is real sense of team spirit. It’s like we’re all in this together. Going to school here is a lifestyle, whereas at home we’re just a number. We attend school to get a degree so we can graduate, get a job, and get on with our lives(11).”


.Another pleasant shocker(12) was the close and open relationships American students enjoy with their teachers. It's a sharp contrast to Australia, where college students keep a discreet but respectful distance from their teachers. "I was surprised when I learned students go out to dinner with their lectures," she says. "We just don't do that back home. Professors deal with hundreds of students and you're lucky if they remember your name."

When Blackmore returns to Australia at the end of the school year, she'll have plenty of memories, most of them good ones. BC, like most American colleges, has gone out of its way to create a memorable experience for Blackmore and its other exchange studentsَ. .
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(1)
Culture trauma: extreme form of "culture shock"


(2)
Discovered firsthand: learned by directly seeing or experiencing


(3)
Sea of difference: very big difference


(4)
Test a lifestyle experience a way of life


(5)
Moving at warp speed: traveling very, very quickly


(6)
Perpetual-motion machines: machines that never stop moving


(7)
Adjust to American rhythms: get used to American lifestyle


(8)
Tuck into a good meal: enjoy a meal (Australian expression)


(9)
Pick at her food: eat only small amount of food on her plate


(10)
Laid back: relaxed


(11)
Get on with our lives: move ahead in our lives


(12)
Shocker: surprise



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singleguy
05-07-2009, 12:46
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I don't know why the second half of the first post vanished away!!!:13::19:
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But there is enough information about reading activity there.
I'm going to complete the first post as soon as possible

singleguy
06-07-2009, 16:19
Summary Of The Reading
The reading is about an Australian girl called Tamara Blackmore who experienced culture shock by spending the junior year in an American college. She felt the difference of culture from the first moment that she was getting off the plane. American lives was very strange for Blackmore such as being time-oriented and Americans was always busy while Australians didn't feel to be busy.
one of the other things that was very odd for Blackmore was the American women who had eating disorders in order to be thin and skinny.
The difference between the legal drinking age in Australia and America was also another strange thing for Blackmore and The most thing that made Blackmore surprised was the relationship between students and teachers...!!! they all were like a big happy family
most of American colleges have gone out of their way to make a memorable experience for all Blackmores


could one of the masters in this forum like sepid12ir or JEFF_HARDY or linhu or SCYTHE or..... tell me my mistakes?!!!
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New Words(for me)

Understatement
Meaning: the practice of making things less important
Example: my speeches about myself always are understatement

Culture shock
M: a feeling of confusion and anxiety that someone experiences when they visit another country

Trauma
M: a mental condition caused by sever shock

Adventurous
M: willing to take risks and try new ideas
Ex: Some of my friends always want to be more adventurous

Junior
M: connected with the year before last year in a high school or university
Ex: I'm spending my junior year

Exchange students
M: students who go to high schools or universities outside of their home country

Enroll
M: to arrange to officially join some where
Ex: I have to enroll in university course

Tension
M: a feeling of anxiety and stress that make it impossible to be relax
Ex: I feel an unusual tension before all exams

Hectic
M: very busy
Ex: all of us have to deal with a hectic life

Tricky
M: difficult to do or deal with
Ex: fighting more than 3 minutes is tricky in competitions

Steering
M: the machinery in a vehicle that you use to control the direction it goes
Ex: I loosed the control of the steering when my car crashed

Congestion
M: the state of being crowded and full of traffic
Ex: Tehran has the most congestion in Iran

Perception
M: The way you notice things
Ex: just a few people have the real perception of love

Space
M: the freedom and time to think or do what you want

Adjustment
M: a small change made to something in order to correct or improve it
Ex: I've made some adjustments to my daily schedule

Perpetual motion
Ex: the heart is a perpetual motion muscle in our body

Guilty
M: feeling ashamed because you have done sth wrong
Ex: I always have a guilty feeling when I cheat in exams

Occasionally
M: sometimes but not often
Ex: I occasionally want to be online

pace
M: the speed that sth happens
Ex: my pace in studying is really slow

Concept
M: an idea connected with sth
Ex: the concept of people about politics is different from each other

Huddle
M: hold your arms and legs close to your body
Ex: I often huddle over my dreams

Odd
M: strange and unusual
Ex: the most odd thing for me is that I never can be successful

Compulsive
M: difficult to stop or control
Ex: she was so beautiful that everyone was watching her, compulsively

Skinny
M: very thin

Disorder
M: public violence

Eating disorder
M: a medical condition caused by intense fear of being overweight

Regulation
M: rule
Ex: Universities have some funny regulations in Iran

Set sth apart
M: to make sth different from others
Ex: his hairstyle sets him apart from others

Depersonalize
M: to make sth less personal

Faculty
M: all the teachers of a university or college
Ex: most of the teachers in azad university faculty can't teach as well as the teachers in the high school

Spirit
M: feeling
Ex: nothing is as powerful as the love spirit in the world

Sharp
M: clear
Ex: there was a sharp difference between votes in the election

Discreet
M: careful in what you say or you do, in order to keep sth secret
Ex: there is a discreet relationship between most of friends

Lecturer
M: a person who teaches in a university or college
Ex: he is a lecturer in math at our university

Go out of its away
M: to make a special effort to do sth

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now its your turn
have fun
Single Boy
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JEFF_HARDY
06-07-2009, 16:33
Summary Of The Reading
The reading is about an Australian girl called Tamara Blackmore who experienced culture shock by spending the junior year in an American college. She felt the difference of culture from the first moment that she was getting off the plane. American lives was very strange for Blackmore such as being time-oriented and Americans was always busy while Australians didn't feel to be busy.
one of the other things that was very odd for Blackmore was the American women who had eating disorders in order to be thin and skinny.
The difference between the legal drinking age in Australia and America was also another strange thing for Blackmore and The most thing that made Blackmore surprised was the relationship between students and teachers...!!! they all were like a big happy family
most of American colleges have gone out of their way to make a memorable experience for all Blackmores
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maybe I add the new words to this post
could one of the masters in this forum like sepid12ir or JEFF_HARDY or linhu or SCYTHE or..... tell me my mistakes?!!!
now It's your turn
have fun





dude its truly an honer, and i don`t know why you keep sayying you have forgotten English structure, you write as a native!
OK, things i thought could be told in a better way in my opinion are onderlined in red, and i tried to be picky ,so tell me where im wrong please

American lives: The american`s lifestyle

had eating: eat or were eating

most thing that made Blackmore surprised: the most surprising thing for blackmore was...

brain
07-07-2009, 14:07
Hi there. It's my turn :20:
Summary Of The Reading

This reading is about culture shock.An Australian girl called Tamara Blackmore who left Melbourne's Monash University to spend her junior year at Boston College In America and who experienced the culture shock. Blackmore had read about American culture but she didn't know what she read about that is difference from experiencing that.She felt a sea of difference as soon as she arrived at America. First difference that she felt was about driving.The steering wheel was on the wrong side of the car whereas in Australia that's on the right side.The American ways were very busy with heavy traffic. American people were like a machine and they were always busy but in Australia it was difference. The other thing which she felt was about American women who were very skinny that is why they had eating disorders. They always just picked at her food while she always tucked into a good meal with her friend. In America was many rules for drinking like the legal drinking age was 21 but in Australia was more freedom about it, the legal drinking age was 18. And she saw some other differences at there which were about relationship between teachers and students at college and this difference made Blackmore surprised more than other differences. At the end of the school year Blackmore returned to Australia with many memories.


New Words
(for me)

understatement

Culture trauma

trauma

junior

exchange

enroll

Test a lifestyle

Sea of difference

Discovered firsthand

land

tension

hectic

particularly

tricky

steering

Moving at warp speed

spread out

congestion

perception

easygoing

perpetual-motion machines

orient

leisure

Adjust to American rhythms

huddled

compulsively

jogging

skinny

disorder

tuck into a good meal

pick at her food

casual

regulations

legal

laid-back

apart

facilities

depersonalized

faculty

spirit

attend

pleasant

shocker

discreet

respectful

deal

Get on with our lives

tie

Please tell me my mistakes :11:

Maybe if god wants I'll make sentences with my new words which I learned from the reading :46:

Goodbye. Thanks

:10:

sepid12ir
07-07-2009, 16:54
Summary Of The Reading
The reading is about an Australian girl called Tamara Blackmore who experienced culture shock by spending the junior year in an American college. She felt the difference of culture from the first moment that she was getting off the plane. American lives was very strange for Blackmore such as being time-oriented and Americans was always busy while Australians didn't feel to be busy.
one of the other things that was very odd for Blackmore was the American women who had eating disorders in order to be thin and skinny.
The difference between the legal drinking age in Australia and America was also another strange thing for Blackmore and The most thing that made Blackmore surprised was the relationship between students and teachers...!!! they all were like a big happy family
most of American colleges have gone out of their way to make a memorable experience for all Blackmores
hey, thanks
I actually dun like to go thru the mistakes in reading activity with details, just some which I think are worth mentioning
thanks to Jeff also for his nice consideration; n let me approve of wot he said singleguy, u r an absolutely a great English learner

that she was getting off the plane : that she got of the plane I think is a better choice rather than using Past Continious

strange for Blackmore: strange to Blackmore


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btw Dear Jeff, Singleguy has used 'eating' here as a noun n it seems to be correct
to have eating disorder

JEFF_HARDY
07-07-2009, 17:25
Hi there. It's my turn :20:
Summary Of The Reading

This reading is about culture shock.An Australian girl called Tamara Blackmore who left Melbourne's Monash University to spend her junior year at Boston College In America and who experienced the culture shock. Blackmore had read about American culture but she didn't know what she read about that is difference from experiencing that.She felt a sea of difference as soon as she arrived at America. First difference that she felt was about driving.The steering wheel was on the wrong side of the car whereas in Australia that's on the right side.The American ways were very busy with heavy traffic. American people were like a machine and they were always busy but in Australia it was difference. The other thing which she felt was about American women who were very skinny that is why they had eating disorders. They always just picked at her food while she always tucked into a good meal with her friend. In America was many rules for drinking like the legal drinking age was21 but in Australia was more freedom about it, the legal drinking age was 18. And she saw some other differences at there which were about relationship between teachers and students at college and this difference made Blackmore surprised more than other differences. At the end of the school year Blackmore returned to Australia with many memories.






Hey dude. to be honest, i think you have really improved since last time i had the honer of correcting yout writting. these were the things i thought might be abit problem maker in your writting, tell me where im wrong please

wholeft: left

and who experienced: experienced

she read about that is difference : she read about is different from

experiencing that: experiencing it


American ways: American highways, american reads


had eating : were eating, ate



In America was many rules: in America there were many rules


at there : there


.

JEFF_HARDY
07-07-2009, 17:31
btw Dear Jeff, Singleguy has used 'eating' here as a noun n it seems to be correct
to have eating disorde
i don`t findany order when i check it,i feel like its just lacking something, it should be at least

had been eating


as far as i know

sepid12ir
07-07-2009, 17:45
i don`t findany order when i check it,i feel like its just lacking something, it should be at least



as far as i know



have a look at Oxford dic n look up the word 'eating'
it's noun: to have eating disorders; that's exactly the emaple of oxford
but the rest of the sentence doesn't seem to be correct:
American women who had eating disorders in order to be thin and skinny.it could be 'she was too skinny bcuz of having eating disorders'; makes sense, but 'to have eating disorders in order to'...doesn't make sense; it's like u r saying the eating diorder has been of some benfits to her while such a thing is not logical...u gotta correct it Singleguy, wot did u want to say?!l

armita2007
07-07-2009, 17:59
Summary of "cultural shock"


This reading is about a girl called Tamara Blackmore that she has entered a new environment for continuing her graduation .She has faced many problems that we named it "cultural shock" .First of all, driving rules and regulations made her surprised. Then, the intimate and friendly relationship between teachers and students was very different from her country.

rayhaneh
07-07-2009, 18:50
MY SUMERY OF THE READING



The reading as whole is about culture shock. Tamara Blackmore was one of the exchange students from an Australian university to Boston university of America. She has shared with readers her firsthand experience of culture shock which she herself faced it while passing her junior year far from her country in America. Blackmore compared extensively the two cultures, Australian culture versus American culture, and the difficulties one would face while shifting from one culture or country to another. According to her American people was more time oriented and busy than Australian who was seemed to have more free time. Women in America were slim and skinny as they were not eating properly, this was not so with Australian women. Faculty in American universities had more friendly and open relations with the students as compared to Australian teachers who were formal and strict. There were much more new things for her in American culture which surprised her. But in her point of view studying in Boston University and living among Americans was a happy and nice experience for her.




NEW WORDS




Enroll=register



Hectic=busy, active



Get used to=become familiar with through experience



Tricky=difficult, complicated



Steering wheel=device for guiding the car



Warp speed=very rapid speed



Perception= sense, understanding



Pressing problem=under pressure; urgent



Easygoing=relaxed; loving comfort and ease



Huddled=crowded together



Compulsively=compelling



Jogging=act of pushing or shaking



Skinny=thin, lean, slim



Tuck into=eat food heartily



Pick at=eat slowly, eat very little



Casual=random, accidental



Laid-back=relaxed, calm



Depersonalized relationship= formal relationship



Get on with=be successful in one's life or career


Discreet=careful,respectful
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mahsa1469
07-07-2009, 18:53
summery of reading
thise reading is about an Australian girl called tamara blackmore who experienced culture shock. she spending her junior year in an American college. tamara compare culture shock in australia with america and she perceiv that life in America is verry diffrence than Australia such as driving , relationship between students and their theacherss and ... . this diffrence was verry attractive
for tamara blackmore.


this is my mind about this reading i know this text is full of
:31:mistake
please tell me my mistake:11:

sepid12ir
07-07-2009, 19:37
Summary of "cultural shock"

This reading is about a girl called Tamara Blackmore that she has entered a new environment for continuing her graduation .She has faced many problems that we named it "cultural shock" .First of all, driving rules and regulations made her surprised. Then, the intimate and friendly relationship between teachers and students was very different from her country.



good, hope next time u chose a better font:31:...
she has entered a new environment for continuing: she has entered a new enviroment to continue her education( here u r talking about the purpose of sth, so u have to use 'to' not 'for')l

Reyhane's Summary

The reading as whole is about culture shock. Tamara Blackmore was one of the exchange students from an Australian university to Boston university of America. She has shared with readers her firsthand experience of culture shock which she herself faced it while passing her junior year far from her country in America. Blackmore compared extensively the two cultures, Australian culture versus American culture, and the difficulties one would face while shifting from one culture or country to another. According to her American people was more time oriented and busy than Australian who was seemed to have more free time. Women in America were slim and skinny as they were not eating properly, this was not so with Australian women. Faculty in American universities had more friendly and open relations with the students as compared to Australian teachers who were formal and strict. There were much more new things for her in American culture which surprised her. But in her point of view studying in Boston University and living among Americans was a happy and nice experience for herwow, how perfect u r Reyhane, so we ... u just summed it up very beautifully with nice structures
the only thing which I noticed:
American people was more time oriented and busy than Australian who was seemed to have more free time: American people were more ... Australian who seemed to have more free time

perfect, Good luck:11:l

Mahsa's Summary

thise reading is about an Australian girl called tamara blackmore who experienced culture shock. she spending her junior year in an American college. tamara compare culture shock in australia with america and she perceiv that life in America is verry diffrence than Australia such as driving , relationship between students and their theacherss and ... . this diffrence was verry attractive
for tamara blackmore
don't worry about yr mistakes dear Mahsa, just have a look at them:
she spending: she was/is/has been spending - since u r describing her situation it's best to use past continious

tamara compare: Tamara compares/compared - again u gotta chose yr tense?! past or present?!l

different than Australia: different from Australia

good luck guys:11:l

rayhaneh
07-07-2009, 20:06
American people was more time oriented and busy than Australian who was seemed to have more free time: American people were more ... Australian who seemed to have more free time

thanks dear sepideh
actually it was the MS WORD that highlighted my sentence of(people were...)and suggested me to correct it to(people was...)anyhow ,now i learned not to trust the microsoft word always!!:31: but trust my own abilities...best wishes

sepid12ir
07-07-2009, 20:20
thanks dear sepideh
actually it was the MS WORD that highlighted my sentence of(people were...)and suggested me to correct it to(people was...)anyhow ,now i learned not to trust the microsoft word always!!:31: but trust my own abilities...best wishes


no, about Grammar structure the Microsoft Word is not reliable, but for spelling it's perfect

brain
07-07-2009, 22:21
Hi
Thanks Mr Jeff for telling my mistakes
:11:
As you know my coin is thwart and because of this reason I have some questions about my mistakes
:31:

Tamara Blackmore who left Melbourne's Monash University
I wanted to say this
یک دختر استرالیایی که اسمش تامارا بلاکموره ، کسی که ترک کرد ملبورن رو و...
why can't I use "who" in this sentence


An Australian girl called Tamara Blackmore who left Melbourne's Monash University to spend her junior year at Boston College In America and who experienced the culture shock.





well if it is not correct so plz tell me when I want to say

" کسی که شوک فرهنگی رو تجربه کرد"

what word shall I use ? why




I actually cant understand which one is correct



had eating disorders
or
ate disorders
or
were eating disorders


WHY ???





I have another question about stracture .. . Can anyone explain me about it and tell me how I can learn it




Thank my masters

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sepid12ir
07-07-2009, 23:02
Hi
Thanks Mr Jeff for telling my mistakes
:11:
As you know my coin is thwart and because of this reason I have some questions about my mistakes
:31:

I wanted to say this
یک دختر استرالیایی که اسمش تامارا بلاکموره ، کسی که ترک کرد ملبورن رو و...
why can't I use "who" in this sentence





well if it is not correct so plz tell me when I want to say

" کسی که شوک فرهنگی رو تجربه کرد"

what word shall I use ? why




I actually cant understand which one is correct

WHY ???





I have another question about stracture .. . Can anyone explain me about it and tell me how I can learn it




Thank my masters

:11:



Dun really like to interfere in Dear Jeff's job, but I think 'who' is correct...let me read it over n over...

An Australian girl called Tamara Blackmore who left Melbourne's Monash University to spend her junior year at Boston College In America and who experienced the cultureI doubt now:31:...but seems to be correct, maybe if u had written "Tamara Blackmore is an Australian girl who left..." this sounds more natural but yr own one seems to be correct...maybe I'm wrong

n about 'eating' again u were right...to have eating disorders or to suffer from eating disorders...
u n singleguy both have used 'eating' as a noun so yr sentence has no problem

singleguy
07-07-2009, 23:26
Jogging=act of pushing or shaking




wow...
your English is so good...
excellent:20:
but I have a problem in this word: Jogging.
Is your definition right?
I guess you meant Joggle
I found these definitions in my dictionary:
Joggle: to move or to make sb/sth move quickly up and down or from one side to another
Jog: to run slowly and steadily for a long time, especially for exercise

sorry... I'm not sure because I'm so weak in English. If I'm not right please tell me
Single Boy
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JEFF_HARDY
08-07-2009, 09:19
An Australian girl called Tamara Blackmore who left Melbourne's Monash University to spend her junior year at Boston College In America and who experienced the culture shock

یک دختر استرالیایی که نامش تامارا بلکموره و کسی که دانشگاه موناش ملبورن رو ترک کردبرای گذراندن سال آخرش در کالج بوستون در آمریکا کسی که شوک فرهنگی رو تجربه کرد
من فکر کردک اینجوری جمله ناقص هست، اینجوری خواننده جمله منتظر هست که نتیجه گیری جمله رو بخونه.خلاصه جمله اینجوری اگه بشه یه جوری جمله مفعول نداره،یا قسمت مفعولی. سعی می کنم منظورمو برسونم.

یک دختر استرالیایی که نامش تامارا بلکموره و کسی که دانشگاه موناش ملبورن رو ترک کردبرای گذراندن سال آخرش در کالج بوستون در آمریکا ....( خوب چی؟ چه اتفاقی براش افتاده؟چطور شد؟)کسی که شوک فرهنگی رو تجربه کرد( کسی که شوک رو تجربه کرد نتیجه اش چی شد؟)

به خاطر همین برای اینکه از این حالت در بیاد من ترجیه دادم who رو حذف کنم تا اینجوری بدو who معنی بهتری بده


An Australian girl called Tamara Blackmore left Melbourne's Monash University to spend her junior year at Boston College In America and experienced the culture shock

یک دختر استرالیایی به نام تارا بلکمور،دانشگاه موناش ملبورن رو ترک کرد تا سال آخرش رو در کالج بوستون در آمریکا بگذرونه و اونجا شوک فرهنگی رو تجربه کرد

rayhaneh
08-07-2009, 16:47
wow...
your English is so good...
excellent


are u kidding me?!plz don't repeat this word as i really don't deserve it (corrected by G4meH4ker)a



but I have a problem in this word: Jogging.
Is your definition right?
I guess you meant Joggle
I found these definitions in my dictionary:

Joggle:to move or to make sb/sth move quickly up and down or from one side to another


Jog: to run slowly and steadily for a long time, especially for exercise

and about the

mentioned word i meant the same as i wrote

which is the second choice as u asked


Jog: to run slowly and steadily for a long time,push lightly

its the same as it appeared in babylon dictionary and

also this one which i posted before

Jogging=act of pushing or shaking

both are the same word with the addition of ing in second one



sorry... I'm not sure because I'm so weak in English.



again kidding!! i think all of u(sepideh,single guy,brain ,jeff...)are better than me in english 100%

and we all are learning something from each other .that is good

ALt3rnA
08-07-2009, 17:23
In The Name Of THe LA

I Didnt Want To Join At First . But Here I Am Any Way
What Should i Do now ?

brain
08-07-2009, 17:47
Wow welcome buddy
:10:
Don't worry about your homeworks :31: Im sure they're easy for you


From 15th to 18th is about Reading
You should :
1) Read this reading and then Write a summary of it

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extra homeworks of reading :
1)making sentences with new words which you learn from reading
Sample :

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Notice : You only can put them until tomorrow night
Be happy
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Whansinnig
08-07-2009, 17:57
Hello every body

Do you accept a new member?

I really like to join here but I don’t know what I should do…

Any way what you decide I follow…

With regards

brain
08-07-2009, 18:21
Do you accept a new member?
Hi
Yeah
We surlely will be happy if you join us
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but I don’t know what I should do
1) Read this reading and then Write a summary of it


Reading Link

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extra homeworks :
Making sentences with new words which you learn from reading


Notice : You only can put them until tomorrow night


After Reading Activity we have another activity , if you want to know more please read the First Post

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Be happy
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masoudtr
08-07-2009, 20:29
This story is about girl who traveled to america for continues her studies as exchange student
When she landed in boston she feels she is in the bad situation
At first she had problem with car because the steering wheel was on the left side and she always scares from crossing a road .
America is more crowded than australia.there are only 18 million people in australia and they don’t have congestion like america.
American are very time oriented , black more says.it means they act very quickly and they have always schedule.On the other hand Australians have a lot of leisure time.They don’t lazy but they have different idea about time .
When we talk about drinking we understand that american have a lot of rule for example adolescent under 21 mustn’t drink wine whereas the age of legal drinking for Australian is 18.
But amreica has a advantage .Collage in ameriaca is more relaxed than australia.you can meet your faculty out of university .and drink a tea with them without no pressure .
Another pleasant shocker was about relationship of student and their faculty.you can eat dinner in your teacher home and sleep in her bedroom:31::31::31::27:
Whereas student don’t do that in asturalia. Professors can’t remember your name
Althou you have course with them.
When black more returns to asturalia she has unforgettable experience of college

farshad_miki
08-07-2009, 23:34
this reading is about an Australian girl that experinced culture shock.driving in Boston and .pressure of work ..relationships between student and teachers ....all of them were experinced that weren't forgettable .she saw people behaves in the another country is so difference than her country .when she landed in Boston blackmore could feel this difference.when she returns to Australia blackmore knows a lot of things about American culture

sepid12ir
08-07-2009, 23:46
This story is about a girl who traveled to america for continues her studies as exchange student
When she landed in boston she feels she is in the bad situation
At first she had problem with car because the steering wheel was on the left side and she always scares from crossing a road .
America is more crowded than australia.there are only 18 million people in australia and they don’t have congestion like america.
AmericanS are very time oriented , black more says.it means they act very quickly and they have always schedule.On the other hand Australians have a lot of leisure time.They don’t lazy but they have different idea about time .
When we talk about drinking we understand that american have a lot of ruleS for example adolescent under 21 mustn’t drink wine whereas the age of legal drinking for Australian is 18.
But amreica has a advantage .Collage in ameriaca is more relaxed than australia.you can meet your faculty out of university .and drink a tea with them without no pressure .
Another pleasant shocker was about relationship of student and their faculty.you can eat dinner in your teacher home and sleep in her bedroom:31::31::31::27:
Whereas student don’t do that in asturalia. Professors can’t remember your name
Althou you have course with them.
When black more returns to asturalia she has unforgettable experience of college



who traveled to america for continues her studies as exchange student: who traveled to America to continue her studies...l

she always scares from crossing a road: She is always scared of crossing a/the road
Scare is verb: ترساندن
to be scared of: ترسیدن

They don’t lazy: they are not lazy

btw, dear Masoud, u gotta be more careful about the tenses, all yr tenses should follow eachother, otherwise they don't make sense
good luck:11:l

محمد88
09-07-2009, 13:05
.Tamara Blackmore is a student from Melbourne, who left her college in her own town and went to Boston College
She was with 50 another students that all of them enrolled in American colleges
At first Tamara was afraid of many things, like driving in Boston, because the steering wheel was in another side that she had been used to
She thought with herself it took time to get used to these new conditions
.And also there was difference between population in her town in Australia and Boston
Another problem was the way to spending time in America; they use to work on and on, inverse in Australia, people value relaxing more than working
And the culture of fitness and eating was another difference between these two countries…American people do exercises
!! to be thin and Australian value their stomach to enjoy the life
.After eating, drinking culture is different too…there are more freedom in Australia to drink in proportion to America
And…in America the relationship between students and teachers are friendlier than Australia, in America students and faculties are such as a big happy family and in her opinion it is better in America
After these experiences, when she returns to her town she’ll have lots of memories
PLEASE NOTICE MY MISTAKES



Understatement – trauma – tension - tricky - congestion – perception – easygoing – oriented – leisure – concept – huddle – compulsively – whereas –

Casual – environment – depersonalized – faculty – discreet – pace

ALt3rnA
09-07-2009, 17:31
.Tamara Blackmore is an student from Melbourne


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Sorry I Had time Just For First Sentence ! :d
I Have To Go To A Wedding Party :2:
But i Will Put My Summery Tonight

Luck

SCYTHE
09-07-2009, 17:34
Sorry I Had time Just For First Sentence ! :d
I Have To Go To A Wedding Party :2:
But i Will Put My Summery Tonight

Luck



Summary, a common spelling error

محمد88
09-07-2009, 17:46
Sorry I Had time Just For First Sentence ! :d
I Have To Go To A Wedding Party :2:
But i Will Put My Summery Tonight


Luck


?? why an
" I think for student we should use " a " not " an
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sepid12ir
09-07-2009, 20:48
this reading is about an Australian girl that experinced culture shock.driving in Boston and .pressure of work ..relationships between student and teachers ....all of them were experinced that weren't forgettable .she saw people behaves in the another country is so difference than her country .when she landed in Boston blackmore could feel this difference.when she returns to Australia blackmore knows a lot of things about American culture



first off, welcome to this group
n then, u started with past tense n the very last sentences were shifted to present tense! hmm?!...u have to be more careful about it
an Australian girl that experinced: 'who' is better than 'that' here(that is not wrong, just who can be a better choice)l

she saw people behaves in the another country is so difference than her country: she saw(noticed) people's behaviour in the other country so different from her country...l
.

Tamara Blackmore is a student from Melbourne, who left her college in her own town and went to Boston College
She was with 50 another students that all of them enrolled in American colleges
At first Tamara was afraid of many things, like driving in Boston, because the steering wheel was in another side that she had been used to
She thought with herself it took time to get used to these new conditions
.And also there was difference between population in her town in Australia and Boston
Another problem was the way to spending time in America; they use to work on and on, inverse in Australia, people value relaxing more than working
And the culture of fitness and eating was another difference between these two countries…American people do exercises
!! to be thin and Australian value their stomach to enjoy the life
.After eating, drinking culture is different too…there are more freedom in Australia to drink in proportion to America
And…in America the relationship between students and teachers are friendlier than Australia, in America students and faculties are such as a big happy family and in her opinion it is better in America
After these experiences, when she returns to her town she’ll have lots of memories
PLEASE NOTICE MY MISTAKES

50 another students: 50 other students

And also there was difference between population: and there was a difference...l


way to spending: way of spending


in proportion: would u plz explain wot it means?! I think it should be in comparison to America...hmm?! I dun know this expression so I'd be thankful if u could describe it

btw guys, just wanted to mention that I don't go thru all the mistakes of yrs for some reasons

Keep my fingers crossed for u all
Have fun
Sepideh:11:l

Atefeh1
09-07-2009, 22:40
IN THE NAME OF ALLAH

Hi to all
Im a new member plz check my summery and tell me my mistake.thanks :11:



THE SUMMERY OF READING





The story is about an Australian girl named Tamara Blackmore, who left her country to spend her junior year at Boston College (BC) by 50 other exchange students. She expresses her experience in America and several differences among their cultures that she found by living there. First of all Blackmore says about driving style in Boston, the position of the steering wheel is change, Americans people are busy and very time-oriented opposite to Australians. The girls are very skinny there, for they eat very little. The legal age of drinking in U.S.A is 21but in Australia its 18.the other matter which made her surprise is that in BC collage students and faculty have good relationship like a happy family.


At the end of her journey she is cheerful and has plenty memories about one year ago which she passed in BC collage.

singleguy
09-07-2009, 23:49
Hi everybody
Time for reading activity is over....But if some one wants to put his activity, he should put his activity just tonight not tomorrow...!
Tomorrow we should cover 2 topics of our vocabulary book
Let me tell you the topics that you should cover:
Clothes
Bathroom and bedroom
I uploaded related pages of the book for you:

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Have fun
Single Boy
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ALt3rnA
09-07-2009, 23:54
?? why an
" I think for student we should use " a " not " an
:20:


You Are Right ! I Dont Know !! Take A Look



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Then Here :



برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید



:31::31::31:

ALt3rnA
10-07-2009, 00:20
In The Name Of LA

The Text Is About A 20 years old Student Called Tamara BlackMore Who Experiences A Culture Shock Because of Her Travel From Australia To United States .
She 's Explaining Why She Had Experienced A Culture Shock.
As We Proceed We Can See Differeces In Australian And American Cultures Explained By Tamara And Why She Was SO Surprised At First.
Like The Different Kind Of Driving As Long As The Steering Wheel Location is different .
She Adds About The mechanical Life Of American People . ANd Im Agree Cuz They Only Thinks Of Job And Only job .
SHe Tells Us Even About Food In Those Countries . Like Their Australian Casualty In Drinking Despite Amercian Peoples . Or The Food Disorder Which Seems To Be An Epidemy Between American Girls .
And She Tell How Surprised She Was When She Saw The Friendly Student & Teacher Relationship . while In Australia Students Are More Respectful To Their Teachers
But At The End She Starts To Get Use To New Culture . Sure This Events Would Be Lots Of Good Memories For Her In Future !

End !!

Ok Here It Is
Now Correct Me


And Please Someone Tell Me Which One Is Correct ?
An Student ? Or A Student ?
Tnx To ALL

JEFF_HARDY
10-07-2009, 10:43
In The Name Of LA

The Text Is About A 20 years old Student Called Tamara BlackMore Who Experiences A Culture Shock Because of Her Travel From Australia To United States .
She 's Explaining Why She Had Experienced A Culture Shock.
As We Proceed We Can See Differeces In Australian And American Cultures Explained By Tamara And Why She Was SO Surprised At First.
Like The Different Kind Of Driving As Long As The Steering Wheel Location is different .
She Adds About The mechanical Life Of American People . ANd Im Agree Cuz They Only Thinks Of Job And Only job .
SHe Tells Us Even About Food In Those Countries . Like Their Australian Casualty In Drinking Despite Amercian Peoples . Or The Food Disorder Which Seems To Be An Epidemy Between American Girls .
And She Tell How Surprised She Was When She Saw The Friendly Student & Teacher Relationship . while In Australia Students Are More Respectful To Their Teachers
But At The End She Starts To Get Use To New Culture . Sure This Events Would Be Lots Of Good Memories For Her In Future !


And Please Someone Tell Me Which One Is Correct ?
An Student ? Or A Student ?
Tnx To ALL




Culture Shock : cultural shock

At First: at the beginning

As Long As : like, as

is different: which is different


Im Agree: i agree

Like Their Australian Casualty In Drinking Despite Amercian Peoples: This sentence is meaningless for me


She Tell : she tells


And Please Someone Tell Me Which One Is Correct ?
An Student ? Or A Student ?

when a word starts with vowel letter ( A, I, O, U, E) we use an befor the word. if not, we start with a

Whansinnig
10-07-2009, 13:51
Excuse me for my delay,


I was so sick…


If the time past please tell me to edit my post


With best wishes,


Wahnsinnig


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In The Name Of God


This story is about Tamara Blackmore who came to Boston College and she experienced culture shock.She felt the tension in air when she stepped off the plane because of cultural differences. First of them was about driving, she believe " driving in Boston is crazy". So it took her a while to get used to it.


The others were about population congestion, Americans busy life and their punctuality, their food habits and rules of them especially about some drinks, the way of their speaking and their relation ship between a student and a teacher or...


In the end she returns hometown with some memories, especially good ones.
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Dear G4meH4ker
thanks for your attention, I hope it get better now...
with regards

ALt3rnA
10-07-2009, 14:04
Excuse me for my delay,


I was so sick…


If the time past please tell me to edit my post


With best wishes,


Wahnsinnig


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In The Name Of God


This story is about Tamara Blackmore who came to Boston College and she experienced culture shock. She felt the tension in air when she stepped off the plane because of cultural differences. First of them was about driving, she believe "driving in Boston is crazy". So it took her a while to get used to it.
The others were about population congestion, Americans busy life and their punctuality, their food habits and rules of them especially about some drinks, the way of their speaking and their relation ship between a student and a teacher or...


In the end she returns hometown with some memories, especially good ones.


Thank You For Your Summary .
Your Font Size Is Very Low Its Hard To Read
I Dont Know Maybe its My Pcs Fault

singleguy
10-07-2009, 16:37
Hi everybody
I hope you study those two topics of your vocabulary book very well today
Tomorrow we should study 2 unites of our grammar book
We need some one to explain these two units(both in Persian and English) tonight (or tomorrow morning)
let me tell you the names of the unites:
Present continuous and present simple 2(I am doing and I do)
Past simple (I did)


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please send me a massage as soon as possible if you are ready to explain these unites
Single Boy
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singleguy
12-07-2009, 00:02
Hi every body. Unfortunately no one described the grammar units for us. I don't know why? This group includes more than 8 members...Don't afraid...you should say something to know your mistakes. and if you don't ask anything you wont be a good learner
by the way exam will include some questions about the grammar unites and you yourself should study that and time for grammar activity is over

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Listening Activity

1-Download the file
2-listen file and write at least 100words of that
3-send your essay for me by private massage
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you shouldn't put the listening script in the topic and you should send it for me till Tir 23th evening

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Nancys self interdoction

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passage description: An American woman introduces herself, and talks about her home and her family.


Topic: Self Introduction
Length: 1:53
Accent: General American
Gender: F
Speed: Slow

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Tamil Nadu
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passage description: A young Indian man talks about his home state in India, Tamil Nadu.

Topic: Travel
Length: 1:43
Accent: Indian
Gender: M
Speed: Slow
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Strange Behavior in the Dorm
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passage describtion: A young woman talks about how she reacted to her new life in the university dorm, during her freshman year at college, with some really odd behaviour.

Topic: University Life
Length: 5:3
Accent: General American
Gender: F
Speed: Fast
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سلام بر همگی!!!
چون ظاهرا اون بالا خیلی بد توضیح داده بودم به فارسی میگم
کاری که شما برای این فعالیت باید انجام بدید اینه که از سه تا لیسنینگ بالا باتوجه به سطحتون حداقل یکی را انتخاب کنید و گوش کنید و بعد بنویسیدش و بعد اون متن را که نوشتید برای من بفرستید. چون بعضی لیسنینگ ها مثل لیسنینگ سومی خیلی طولانی هست، من گفتم اگه دیدید طولانی هست و نمیتونید همشو بنویسید حداقل 100کلمه یا به عبارتی یک پاراگرافش را بنویسید! اگه هم وقت دارید و میتونید همشو بنویسید وبرام بفرستید .درضمن کسی توی تاپیک پست لیسنینگ نذاره. همه متنهاشون را برای من میفرستن و من در آخر روز سوم متن همه را به همراه متن اصلی لیسنینگ میذارم
برای این فعالیت هم همونطور که در بالا گفته شد تا 23 تیر یعنی 2روز دیگه وقت دارید
Single Boy


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ugly_girl_a
12-07-2009, 12:46
hi
i like to join to ur group
i like english alot and i alike to improve it

ALt3rnA
12-07-2009, 15:44
hi
i like to join to ur group
i like english alot and i alike to improve it


I Think
I Like To Join Your Group
Is Better

Luck

JEFF_HARDY
12-07-2009, 15:45
Hi To All Entourage....
I hopeful You Every Day Like lucrative To Perseverance
You Lucrative

(من انگلیسیم زیاد خوب نیست لطفاً اگه جملاتم مشکل داره راهنمایی کنید ممنونم:20:).

Hey my dear friend,a and wellcome around.
if you feel like your english isn`t that much strong, why don`t you start with making easy sentences? what you wrote above is like Shakespeare. and it also doesn`t make sense
I hopefull you everyday is not correct, it can`t even be translated,
also Like lucrative To Perseverance doesn`t mean what was in your mind, becoase as far as i know its gramatically incorrect
really try to use easy and common words in your sentences, dont try to talk with words u find in dictionerry, make your own sentences with your oun words.
in persian what were u trying to say in this line?

I hopeful You Every Day Like lucrative To Perseverance


hi

i like to join to ur group
i like english alot and i alike to improve it

hey my dear new friend, and welcome here
alike : شبیه
i like to inprove it
by the way, u can findout what we do if you look at the first page of this topic, as singleguy has done a massive and perfect job by making this group rocking
.

ugly_girl_a
12-07-2009, 20:33
Hey my dear friend,a and wellcome around.

if you feel like your english isn`t that much strong, why don`t you start with making easy sentences? what you wrote above is like Shakespeare. and it also doesn`t make sense
I hopefull you everyday is not correct, it can`t even be translated,
also Like lucrative To Perseverance doesn`t mean what was in your mind, becoase as far as i know its gramatically incorrect
really try to use easy and common words in your sentences, dont try to talk with words u find in dictionerry, make your own sentences with your oun words.
in persian what were u trying to say in this line?




hey my dear new friend, and welcome here
alike : شبیه
i like to inprove it
by the way, u can findout what we do if you look at the first page of this topic, as singleguy has done a massive and perfect job by making this group rocking
.

i know that.
i wrote that quickly so it became like that.im not as weak as u think.
i afraid of speaking here :42::37:

JEFF_HARDY
12-07-2009, 21:33
i know that.
i wrote that quickly so it became like that.im not as weak as u think.
i afraid of speaking here :42::37:

hey my dearest friend
i am afraid of speaking here by the way
by the way, why are u frightened from speaking? don`t be! noone is perfect, spesially when we are talking about a different language, and we all may make mistakes, we are all here to improve our skills, and me myself am the weakest user here, and honestly god nows how many new things i learn here by talking to other friends like you. so don`t be afraid of talking here, say whatever you want in your own words, and we try to correct any accidental mistake so others also can get benefit from it.
i really hope to see you more around

JEFF_HARDY
12-07-2009, 21:38
Hi...
Ve
I Don't Heedful



hey
honestly whenever i read your post i have to check dictionery becouse of loads of unusual words you use! its not a bad thing, but when we can talk with our own vocabulary...
i am not heedful: im no tcareful, im not watchful
you should use easier and more common vocabulary in your writting my friendl

ugly_girl_a
12-07-2009, 22:08
hey my dearest friend

i am afraid of speaking here by the way
by the way, why are u frightened from speaking? don`t be! noone is perfect, spesially when we are talking about a different language, and we all may make mistakes, we are all here to improve our skills, and me myself am the weakest user here, and honestly god nows how many new things i learn here by talking to other friends like you. so don`t be afraid of talking here, say whatever you want in your own words, and we try to correct any accidental mistake so others also can get benefit from it.
i really hope to see you more around


thank u but now im the weakest user here be happy cause im weaker?than u

عــــلی
12-07-2009, 23:19
hey
honestly whenever i read your post i have to check dictionery becouse of loads of unusual words you use! its not a bad thing, but when we can talk with our own vocabulary...
i am not heedful: im no tcareful, im not watchful
you should use easier and more common vocabulary in your writting my friendl
Hi anew
Yes Yes
Very Tank You
i am not heedful

you should use easier and more common vocabulary in your writing my friend
Ok
Tanks
How Are You?
What is Your Dictionary Name?
What is your Name?
My Name is Ali
Tank You
Good Luck

singleguy
14-07-2009, 21:49
Listening scripts



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I like to see if you ... Tamil Nadu this ... sudden ...
in the India this the place that was born and raise for and people
visit Tamil Nadu ... intersting aspects is ... temples which
... strip corner ... visit the Minantion temple in Madraie just
... all the temples and there are three other temples ... all
over the state ... artifical aspect the other aspect of ...
language Tamil India very ... language the language has the
grammatical structure was establish two thousand years ago ...
has been reserve without my changes for ... and the ... is
very intersting those of family of the language of course they'll
know that ... can ... english translations to know ... the stories
and how ... all culture of Tami Nadu was the other intersting
aspect of the Tami Nadu is ... cooking style is very unite ...
although check that out when you visit Tami Nadu and ... Tamil
Nadu is very intersting place to visit

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Hello

My name is Nancy. I live in United States in the state of New Jersey. The town I live in is called mongro tension.i live in a lovely house on eight acres. My yard consists of a garden and a large area of woods that I can walk around in. I also have a very nice swimming pool. I have two children one a daughter 24 years old that’s not living with me any longer and the other a son 14 years old living with me. his name is Daniel and we spend a lot of fun time together. I work as a dental hygienist or a dentist in a town called prinstune. A dental hygienist cleans people's teeth. I like my job very much. I usually work four days a week which allows me some free time to do the things that I like to do. My hobbies consist of hiking and gardening I also like music very much. I have been taking piano lessons for the passed year dancing had also become a hobby for me and I have been taking dance lessons to try to get better. My parents livening by in a retirement community. You have to be 55 years old to live in that community. I visit them once or twice a week and they come to me for many special occasions. Now that my children are not so small I hope to do what I really wanted to do and that’s trouble




MEDIUM



I would like to say if you were abroad Tamil Nadu is southern most state in India. it is the place where I was born and raised. For people who visit Tamil Nadu, surely one of the interesting aspects are the temples which are found in every street corner. They should surely visit the MINAKSHI temple in Madraey.It is probably the biggest of all the temples. And Tamil Nadu's temples spread all over the state where they can go and visit the unique architectural aspects. The other aspect of Tamil Nadu's is at its own language.

Tamilians are very proud of their language. Their language has, it's grammatical structure was established 2000 years ago and it has been preserved without no changes for all these years. And the literature itself is very interesting. Those who are familiar of the language of course will know that. Those who can not read Tamal should surely read the English translations to know about the stories and the, how the old culture of Tamil Nadu was. The other interesting aspect of Tamil Nadu is its visin, the cooking style is unique, you should also check that out when you visit Tamil Nadu. So, Tamil Nadu is a very interesting place to visit




HARD

Today I got a letter from a friend of mine who just went away to college for the first year. And this is funny that it brought back a lot of memory of from main him. He just finished going to welcome week where he had subjected a lot of …people he just met and you know a sort of force bounded activities with the people on his dorm. And I think of how I went away to college. I was more less deter minted and alienated myself in as an active. well, from everyone that I met. That turns into a pretty bizarre experience for me in my first year. I was living in a campus at Turn Stay College. And I prim it determent after a bare week that I didn't like anyone in my entire dorm. And rather than behaving in a mature way about this. I decided… apparent everyone and I just kept myself aimed up of becoming rather post friend of my roomy. But I think we made it really obvious that we did not want to interact with anyone and it became labouredly game between us and the people in our dorm who just thought we are being very mysterious……




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Hello
My name is nancy, I live in ailine states in state newjercy. The ten eleven is code manual tenche. I live in a lovely house on earthy grass, my yard consists of garden and large earth wit’s that I can walk a random, I also have very nice swimming pool. I have two children. One a daughter, 24 years old that’s doesn’t with me any longer. Any other son, 14 years old living with me, he's name is Daniel and we spend a lot fun time together. I work in danel hajeyanest for a dentist in a ten conpenstan. Dental hajeyanest …. People tea. I like my job very much, I usually work four days a week, watches about some free tome to do the thing I like to do. My habit’s consist of hayking, in gardening; I also like music very much. I has been taking piano lessons for a past year. That's in has also become a habit for me when I went taking dace lessons to chare get better. My parents live in … in every time come… You have to be 45 years old to live in come... I visit them once, twice a week and come to me for many specially kyzhent. Neither my children is not so small I hope to do we are really want to do …Travel

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hello, my name is Nancy. i live in the United States, in the state of New Jersey. the town i live in is called Monroe township. i live in a lovely house on eight acres. my yard consists of a garden and a large area of woods that i can walk around in. i also have a very nice swimming pool. i have two children, one, a daughter, twenty-four years old that does not live with me any longer, and the other, a son, fourteen years old living with me. his name is Daniel, and we spend a lot of fun time together. i work as a dental hygienist for a dentist in a town called Princeton. a dental hygienist cleans people's teeth. i like my job very much. i usually work four days a week, which allows me some free time to do the things that i like to do. my hobbies consist of hiking, and gardening, i also like music very much. i've been taking piano lessons for the past year. dancing has also become a hobby for me and i've been taking dance lessons to try to get better. my parents live near by in a retirement community. you have to be fifty-five years old to live in that community. i visit them once or twice a week and they come to me for many special occasions. now that my children are not so small, i hope to do what i really want to do, and that's travel
Medium
i'd like to say a few words about Tamil Nadu. this southern most state in India. this is the place i was born and raised. and for people who visit Tamil Nadu, surely one of the interesting aspects is_ are the temples which are found in every street corner. they should surely visit uh Minakushi Temple in Madurai, which is probably the mo- the biggest of all the temples. and uh several other temples spread all over the state where they can go and see the unique architectural aspects. the... other aspect of Tamil Nadu is that it has its own language. the Tamilians are very proud of the language. the language has_ the grammatical structure was established two thousand years ago. and it has been preserved without much changes for all these years. and the literature itself is very interesting. those who are familiar with the language of course will know that. those who cannot read Tamil should surely read the english translations to know about the stories uh and the how the old culture of Tamil Nadu was. the other interesting aspect of Tamil Nadu is its cuisine. the cooking style is very unique. should also... check that out when you visit Tamil Nadu. uh so Tamil Nadu is a very interesting place to visit.






Hard


uh today i got a letter from a friend of mine, who just went away to college for his first year. and it was funny. it was bringing back lots of memories for me. he just finished going through welcome week where he was subjected to lots of really awkward ice breakers with people he just met, and yaknow all sorts of forced bonding activities with the... the people in his dorm. and i was thinking about how when i first went away to college, i was more or less determined to alienate myself as an act of will hehe from everyone that i met. and it it turned into a pretty pretty bizarre experience for me. in my first year i was living on campus at Trenton State College. and uh i pretty much determined after about a week there that i really didn't like anyone in my entire dorm. and huh rather than yaknow behaving in a mature way about this, i decided to make that apparent to everyone and i just kept myself. i ended up becoming rather close friends with my room mate. but uh i think we made really obvious that we didn't want to interact with anyone. and it became almost this elaborate game between us and the people in our dorm who just thought we were being really mysterious. and of course they were all incredibly intrigued by the fact that we didn't want to interact with them. and... hah we were constantly in these ridiculous feuds with people on our floor over things that really didn't matter. we were just trying to assert that we were above them by yaknow not wanting anything to do with them. every single day, i remember, people would leave notes our message board asking us to go to lunch with them because the whole floor had a habit of eating together. a whole process that we found to be really appalling at the time. but every single day, we didn't show up. but for some reason they just felt the need to extend the invitation every single day.


and_ i don't know after a while i think it turned into a it turned into a very entertaining thing for us. um there was yaknow there was certain something to that interaction that was bit_ yaknow added i think a good amount of adolescent melodramatic tension to my life. and i think i really enjoyed myself. but uh but the tragic part of it was that about the three quarter of the way through to the year i just got kind of bored with it. and i realized that i had completely isolated myself from every possible person who wanted anything to do with me. and... there was a point which my roommate and i both realized this. and we just_ we couldn't believe yaknow what we have done with our yaknow our potential ah personal lives at college. and uh it was it was really really kind of sad. i mean first year at college you you don't have a car or anything and you're just stuck with the people that you live with. and you're living in this little microcosm of a world where everything is incredibly out of proportion. by that time all drama all the yaknow admittedly self created drama that had been perpetuated throughout the year was completely out of control. yaknow we had all these very bizarre convoluted situations with everyone that we had ever interacted with and no one knew what to make of us. everybody thought we were just these aliens. and it was sad. it was really a sad experience. and finally by my sophomore year we wound up moving to a different dorm. and there were a few people from our freshman year who, for whatever reason be it the challenge or haha just completely generic boredom, decided to try to forge these friendships with with us, regardless of the fact that we,we had been so difficult for the entire first year living there. and some of those people actually became my closest friends for the yaknow the remainder of my college experience.


but it's funny to this day when i talk to some of these people they're just like "what were you doing, what were you doing freshman year. yaknow why were you like that, i don't understand yaknow, what were you doing with yourself?" and it's funny. i mean i look back on it now and i'm just like "man yaknow what was that all about?" i mean, it's funny because now when i go into a new situation where i don't know anyone, i always have that same knee jerk reaction somehow where i'm just like "i don't even wanna have to try, i don't wanna have to try to be friends with these people. yaknow let them come to me, let them come to me" and yaknow it's kind of a shoot yourself in the foot kind of uh kind of idea, i guess, to live your life by. not exactly a productive philosophy but ... it's wierd i mean i just moved to a new town and uh yaknow i have all these room mates who i don' know from a hole in the wall really. we all just kind of randomly got together. and... i'm finding myself having a lot of flash backs to freshman year because i'm i'm having some of these old like inclinations rising up where i'm just like "ah i just want to be really antisocial, i don't want to deal with these people, i don't want to have to pretend to socialize." and i don't know, i'm just just kind of wondering yaknow wondering if i can possibly handle myself little bit better this time around than i did the first time around.







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سلام به همگی:11:
وقت برای تحویل فعالیت لیسنینگ تمام شد:5:
باید به عرض همه شما عزیزان برسانم که من دیگه نیستم....من نمیتونم این همه وقت بذارم برای این 2تا پست لیسنینگ که فقط 3نفر بیان تحولش بدن...
اون هم از فعالیت گرامر که هیچ کس نیومد توضیح بده چون احساس میکنم هیچ کدومتون وقتشو نداشتید که بیاید یه پست نسبتا وقت گیر بذارید.....بچه هایی که دوره قبل درخدمتشون بودم واقعا فوق العاده بودن و نظم خیلی خوبی داشتن (که الان فقط 2تاشون بین شماها هستن و یکیشون هم لیسنینگ تحویل نداد:31:) مثلا برای همین فعالیت لیسنینگ همون روز اول یا دوم دیگه حداقل 4نفر تحویل داده بودن متنشون راولی حالا.... یا همشون سرو کله میشکوندن که بیان مثلا این پست گرامر را بذارن...!!! واقعا من دیگه نمیتونم اینجور ادامه بدم!!!
جا داره از JEFF_HARDYجون و دوست عزیزم، sepid12ir تشکر کنم که همیشه اینجا به بچه ها کمک میکردند. همچنین از دوستانی همچون Rayhaneh با اون لینینگ فوق العادش :40:و همچنین همه بچه های دوره قبل: hoseinist:40: , blueray:40:, karin:40: , sada:40: , brain:40: , masoudrejae:40:, :40:legend of zelda- ,Fara360:40: , C.breezy:40:, afsaneh:40: , :40:extereme2006, که الان اینجا نیستن تشکر کنم:11:
همتونو به خدای بزرگ میسپارم:46:
Single Boy
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Whansinnig
15-07-2009, 10:30
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سلام به همگی:11:










وقت برای تحویل فعالیت لیسنینگ تمام شد:5:









باید به عرض همه شما عزیزان برسانم که من دیگه نیستم....من نمیتونم این همه وقت بذارم برای این 2تا پست لیسنینگ که فقط 3نفر بیان تحولش بدن...









اون هم از فعالیت گرامر که هیچ کس نیومد توضیح بده چون احساس میکنم هیچ کدومتون وقتشو نداشتید که بیاید یه پست نسبتا وقت گیر بذارید.....بچه هایی که دوره قبل درخدمتشون بودم واقعا فوق العاده بودن و نظم خیلی خوبی داشتن (که الان فقط 2تاشون بین شماها هستن و یکیشون هم لیسنینگ تحویل نداد:31:) مثلا برای همین فعالیت لیسنینگ همون روز اول یا دوم دیگه حداقل 4نفر تحویل داده بودن متنشون راولی حالا.... یا همشون سرو کله میشکوندن که بیان مثلا این پست گرامر را بذارن...!!! واقعا من دیگه نمیتونم اینجور ادامه بدم!!!









جا داره از JEFF_HARDYجون و دوست عزیزم، sepid12ir تشکر کنم که همیشه اینجا به بچه ها کمک میکردند. همچنین از دوستانی همچون Rayhaneh با اون لینینگ فوق العادش :40:و همچنین همه بچه های دوره قبل: hoseinist:40: , blueray:40:, karin:40: , sada:40: , brain:40: , masoudrejae:40:, :40:legend of zelda- ,Fara360:40: , C.breezy:40:, afsaneh:40: , :40:extereme2006, که الان اینجا نیستن تشکر کنم:11:









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Single Boy









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Dear singleguy


I know we are lazy student but its really take some time to get used to this way,


For example I didn’t know what should I do with grammar?


I didn’t know I must explain it at this topic, until you say it when the time over…


Or about the listening I downloaded it and I write it again with delay


So I see the time is over and I didn’t send it to you


I know its my problem and I must try more but I really need some time to get used to it ..


You know I understand your effort and I really thank you, but please be patient with us one more.


Excuse me if I ventured and say this,


I just like to say we are trying more, and we understand you and we are thankful with all your effort…


I am really willing to improve my English in this way


Please guide us again and be with us,


This time we try to be better students …


With best regards,


Wahnsinnig

singleguy
15-07-2009, 17:05
Dear singleguy



I know we are lazy student but its really take some time to get used to this way,


For example I didn’t know what should I do with grammar?


I didn’t know I must explain it at this topic, until you say it when the time over…


Or about the listening I downloaded it and I write it again with delay


So I see the time is over and I didn’t send it to you


I know its my problem and I must try more but I really need some time to get used to it ..


You know I understand your effort and I really thank you, but please be patient with us one more.


Excuse me if I ventured and say this,


I just like to say we are trying more, and we understand you and we are thankful with all your effort…


I am really willing to improve my English in this way


Please guide us again and be with us,


This time we try to be better students …


With best regards,


Wahnsinnig


Thanks...
You were a new member and I didn't expect you to prepare that activities.... but how about others? hummmm?:13:...And I'm also angry about some POSTERS who just wanna increase their posts and don't do anything in this group [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] ....like all the posts you see after Listening activity (expect JEFFs' posts)...sending post after listening activity is meaningless..!!! I'm vary sensitiv about ruls and discipline in group activities...
Jeff anf sepid12ir are the teachers
I want at least 10 permanent members who CERTIFICATE that they always will do all the avctivities...Is there really 10 members who can do this? I don't think so
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and let me add...!!! If some one wants to continue instead of me, he can do that. Is any body ready to that?
have fun

Whansinnig
15-07-2009, 19:47
Thanks...






You were a new member and I didn't expect you to prepare that activities.... but how about others? hummmm?:13:...And I'm also angry about some POSTERS who just wanna increase their posts and don't do anything in this group
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] ....like all the posts you see after Listening activity (expect JEFFs' posts)...sending post after listening activity is meaningless..!!! I'm vary sensitiv about ruls and discipline in group activities...


Jeff anf sepid12ir are the teachers


I want at least 10 permanent members who CERTIFICATE that they always will do all the avctivities...Is there really 10 members who can do this? I don't think so


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and let me add...!!! If some one wants to continue instead of me, he can do that. Is any body ready to that?


have fun



Dear singleguy


You're right, as you said I am new here and I don’t know how many members are participate here,


But I know what you say and it is very good that you be sensitive about


rules in this group, it is useful and it can help us to try more…


I don’t know how many members really promise to do the activities?!!


I am very sorry if any body doesn't want to …


I am very sorry if my note makes you to add the last sentence,


I don’t like to see you separate of here, I m not happy to read that,


I just want to have a friendly group with rules to improve our level in English.


And it's not possible if we don’t do the activities or you are not with us…


Any way what ever you decide to do I follow it


and I thanks for all your effort again…
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دوست گرامي جناب singleguy


آنقدر انگليسي نمي دانم كه بتوانم همه چيزهايي كه بايد گفته شود ، بيان دارم ، پس اين را بر من ببخشاييد اگر فارسي مي نويسم ...

خواستم بيافزايم با تمامي مواردي كه ذكر نموديد موافقم اما گمان مي كردم دوستان هم قدمي بردارند ،

فارغ از اين كه برخي ها خود را به نديدن زدند و برخي ها به ... اكتفا كردند ...

( اضافه مي كنم من تقريبا هيچ كدام از دوستان را نمي شناسم و حتي شما را پس اميد است براي دوستان سوءتفاهم نشود ... )

اما مشتاق بودم تا اگر قرار است چيزي بياموزيم در كنار هم ياد بگيريم ،

ادامه ي كار درصورتي كه دوستان نخواهند چه تاثير خواهد داشت ؟!!

واقعا دلم مي خواست همانقدر كه صبح از نوشته ام مطمئن بودم اكنون هم از جانب همه دوستان با همان اطمينان

مي گفتم هستيم حتي اگر گاهي دست پا شكسته ...

اما چه سود وقتي تلنگرها هم تاثيرگذار نيستند ...

جملات آخرتان مرا متاسف كرد كه چرا ما ....

دوست گرامي حضور شما در كنار آن اساتيدي كه بيان داشتيد ، ارزشمند است و لذا نبودنتان ...

نمي دانم شايد ايراد از باورهاي من باشد ،

پيروز باشيد و برقرار ...

مجنون

armita2007
15-07-2009, 20:05
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in the India this the place that was born and raise for and people


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... all the temples and there are three other temples ... all


over the state ... artifical aspect the other aspect of ...


language Tamil India very ... language the language has the


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has been reserve without my changes for ... and the ... is


very intersting those of family of the language of course they'll


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although check that out when you visit Tami Nadu and ... Tamil


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Hello







My name is Nancy. I live in United States in the state of New Jersey. The town I live in is called mongro tension.i live in a lovely house on eight acres. My yard consists of a garden and a large area of woods that I can walk around in. I also have a very nice swimming pool. I have two children one a daughter 24 years old that’s not living with me any longer and the other a son 14 years old living with me. his name is Daniel and we spend a lot of fun time together. I work as a dental hygienist or a dentist in a town called prinstune. A dental hygienist cleans people's teeth. I like my job very much. I usually work four days a week which allows me some free time to do the things that I like to do. My hobbies consist of hiking and gardening I also like music very much. I have been taking piano lessons for the passed year dancing had also become a hobby for me and I have been taking dance lessons to try to get better. My parents livening by in a retirement community. You have to be 55 years old to live in that community. I visit them once or twice a week and they come to me for many special occasions. Now that my children are not so small I hope to do what I really wanted to do and that’s trouble







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I would like to say if you were abroad Tamil Nadu is southern most state in India. it is the place where I was born and raised. For people who visit Tamil Nadu, surely one of the interesting aspects are the temples which are found in every street corner. They should surely visit the MINAKSHI temple in Madraey.It is probably the biggest of all the temples. And Tamil Nadu's temples spread all over the state where they can go and visit the unique architectural aspects. The other aspect of Tamil Nadu's is at its own language.







Tamilians are very proud of their language. Their language has, it's grammatical structure was established 2000 years ago and it has been preserved without no changes for all these years. And the literature itself is very interesting. Those who are familiar of the language of course will know that. Those who can not read Tamal should surely read the English translations to know about the stories and the, how the old culture of Tamil Nadu was. The other interesting aspect of Tamil Nadu is its visin, the cooking style is unique, you should also check that out when you visit Tamil Nadu. So, Tamil Nadu is a very interesting place to visit







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Today I got a letter from a friend of mine who just went away to college for the first year. And this is funny that it brought back a lot of memory of from main him. He just finished going to welcome week where he had subjected a lot of …people he just met and you know a sort of force bounded activities with the people on his dorm. And I think of how I went away to college. I was more less deter minted and alienated myself in as an active. well, from everyone that I met. That turns into a pretty bizarre experience for me in my first year. I was living in a campus at Turn Stay College. And I prim it determent after a bare week that I didn't like anyone in my entire dorm. And rather than behaving in a mature way about this. I decided… apparent everyone and I just kept myself aimed up of becoming rather post friend of my roomy. But I think we made it really obvious that we did not want to interact with anyone and it became labouredly game between us and the people in our dorm who just thought we are being very mysterious……











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hello, my name is Nancy. i live in the United States, in the state of New Jersey. the town i live in is called Monroe township. i live in a lovely house on eight acres. my yard consists of a garden and a large area of woods that i can walk around in. i also have a very nice swimming pool. i have two children, one, a daughter, twenty-four years old that does not live with me any longer, and the other, a son, fourteen years old living with me. his name is Daniel, and we spend a lot of fun time together. i work as a dental hygienist for a dentist in a town called Princeton. a dental hygienist cleans people's teeth. i like my job very much. i usually work four days a week, which allows me some free time to do the things that i like to do. my hobbies consist of hiking, and gardening, i also like music very much. i've been taking piano lessons for the past year. dancing has also become a hobby for me and i've been taking dance lessons to try to get better. my parents live near by in a retirement community. you have to be fifty-five years old to live in that community. i visit them once or twice a week and they come to me for many special occasions. now that my children are not so small, i hope to do what i really want to do, and that's travel


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i'd like to say a few words about Tamil Nadu. this southern most state in India. this is the place i was born and raised. and for people who visit Tamil Nadu, surely one of the interesting aspects is_ are the temples which are found in every street corner. they should surely visit uh Minakushi Temple in Madurai, which is probably the mo- the biggest of all the temples. and uh several other temples spread all over the state where they can go and see the unique architectural aspects. the... other aspect of Tamil Nadu is that it has its own language. the Tamilians are very proud of the language. the language has_ the grammatical structure was established two thousand years ago. and it has been preserved without much changes for all these years. and the literature itself is very interesting. those who are familiar with the language of course will know that. those who cannot read Tamil should surely read the english translations to know about the stories uh and the how the old culture of Tamil Nadu was. the other interesting aspect of Tamil Nadu is its cuisine. the cooking style is very unique. should also... check that out when you visit Tamil Nadu. uh so Tamil Nadu is a very interesting place to visit.








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uh today i got a letter from a friend of mine, who just went away to college for his first year. and it was funny. it was bringing back lots of memories for me. he just finished going through welcome week where he was subjected to lots of really awkward ice breakers with people he just met, and yaknow all sorts of forced bonding activities with the... the people in his dorm. and i was thinking about how when i first went away to college, i was more or less determined to alienate myself as an act of will hehe from everyone that i met. and it it turned into a pretty pretty bizarre experience for me. in my first year i was living on campus at Trenton State College. and uh i pretty much determined after about a week there that i really didn't like anyone in my entire dorm. and huh rather than yaknow behaving in a mature way about this, i decided to make that apparent to everyone and i just kept myself. i ended up becoming rather close friends with my room mate. but uh i think we made really obvious that we didn't want to interact with anyone. and it became almost this elaborate game between us and the people in our dorm who just thought we were being really mysterious. and of course they were all incredibly intrigued by the fact that we didn't want to interact with them. and... hah we were constantly in these ridiculous feuds with people on our floor over things that really didn't matter. we were just trying to assert that we were above them by yaknow not wanting anything to do with them. every single day, i remember, people would leave notes our message board asking us to go to lunch with them because the whole floor had a habit of eating together. a whole process that we found to be really appalling at the time. but every single day, we didn't show up. but for some reason they just felt the need to extend the invitation every single day.






and_ i don't know after a while i think it turned into a it turned into a very entertaining thing for us. um there was yaknow there was certain something to that interaction that was bit_ yaknow added i think a good amount of adolescent melodramatic tension to my life. and i think i really enjoyed myself. but uh but the tragic part of it was that about the three quarter of the way through to the year i just got kind of bored with it. and i realized that i had completely isolated myself from every possible person who wanted anything to do with me. and... there was a point which my roommate and i both realized this. and we just_ we couldn't believe yaknow what we have done with our yaknow our potential ah personal lives at college. and uh it was it was really really kind of sad. i mean first year at college you you don't have a car or anything and you're just stuck with the people that you live with. and you're living in this little microcosm of a world where everything is incredibly out of proportion. by that time all drama all the yaknow admittedly self created drama that had been perpetuated throughout the year was completely out of control. yaknow we had all these very bizarre convoluted situations with everyone that we had ever interacted with and no one knew what to make of us. everybody thought we were just these aliens. and it was sad. it was really a sad experience. and finally by my sophomore year we wound up moving to a different dorm. and there were a few people from our freshman year who, for whatever reason be it the challenge or haha just completely generic boredom, decided to try to forge these friendships with with us, regardless of the fact that we,we had been so difficult for the entire first year living there. and some of those people actually became my closest friends for the yaknow the remainder of my college experience.






but it's funny to this day when i talk to some of these people they're just like "what were you doing, what were you doing freshman year. yaknow why were you like that, i don't understand yaknow, what were you doing with yourself?" and it's funny. i mean i look back on it now and i'm just like "man yaknow what was that all about?" i mean, it's funny because now when i go into a new situation where i don't know anyone, i always have that same knee jerk reaction somehow where i'm just like "i don't even wanna have to try, i don't wanna have to try to be friends with these people. yaknow let them come to me, let them come to me" and yaknow it's kind of a shoot yourself in the foot kind of uh kind of idea, i guess, to live your life by. not exactly a productive philosophy but ... it's wierd i mean i just moved to a new town and uh yaknow i have all these room mates who i don' know from a hole in the wall really. we all just kind of randomly got together. and... i'm finding myself having a lot of flash backs to freshman year because i'm i'm having some of these old like inclinations rising up where i'm just like "ah i just want to be really antisocial, i don't want to deal with these people, i don't want to have to pretend to socialize." and i don't know, i'm just just kind of wondering yaknow wondering if i can possibly handle myself little bit better this time around than i did the first time around.













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سلام به همگی:11:





وقت برای تحویل فعالیت لیسنینگ تمام شد:5:




باید به عرض همه شما عزیزان برسانم که من دیگه نیستم....من نمیتونم این همه وقت بذارم برای این 2تا پست لیسنینگ که فقط 3نفر بیان تحولش بدن...




اون هم از فعالیت گرامر که هیچ کس نیومد توضیح بده چون احساس میکنم هیچ کدومتون وقتشو نداشتید که بیاید یه پست نسبتا وقت گیر بذارید.....بچه هایی که دوره قبل درخدمتشون بودم واقعا فوق العاده بودن و نظم خیلی خوبی داشتن (که الان فقط 2تاشون بین شماها هستن و یکیشون هم لیسنینگ تحویل نداد:31:) مثلا برای همین فعالیت لیسنینگ همون روز اول یا دوم دیگه حداقل 4نفر تحویل داده بودن متنشون راولی حالا.... یا همشون سرو کله میشکوندن که بیان مثلا این پست گرامر را بذارن...!!! واقعا من دیگه نمیتونم اینجور ادامه بدم!!!




جا داره از JEFF_HARDYجون و دوست عزیزم، sepid12ir تشکر کنم که همیشه اینجا به بچه ها کمک میکردند. همچنین از دوستانی همچون Rayhaneh با اون لینینگ فوق العادش :40:و همچنین همه بچه های دوره قبل: hoseinist:40: , blueray:40:, karin:40: , sada:40: , brain:40: , masoudrejae:40:, :40:legend of zelda- ,Fara360:40: , C.breezy:40:, afsaneh:40: , :40:extereme2006, که الان اینجا نیستن تشکر کنم:11:




همتونو به خدای بزرگ میسپارم:46:




Single Boy




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hi singleguy
pls dont be angry at me for not doning my homeworks. this week unfortunately i m so busy
pls give my friends and me another opportunity to do them.
thx and excuse me

extreme2006gh
20-07-2009, 23:12
hi buddies
Dear singleguy! what happend ? why did you leave the group? please don t be angry about the members . I think the group has started recently after about two months off . That s why some members couldn t participate in activities .but I understand you too. because you efforted a lot and nobody didn t pay attention to exercises. We don t want to miss you , good teacher ,active person in this group. I am not colloguing , but this is fact . Then I ask you come back and start group again. I hope you come back and start. . . . thanks a lot

brain
23-07-2009, 14:34
In         The         Name         Of         God
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"The same person cannat be skilled in everything ; Each has special excellence"

Euripides Greek playuright
(C.485-406 BC)
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A Young Whiz(1) on Computers
by Tom Petzinger
from the wall street journal




Sometimes, a perceived disability (2) turns out to be an asset on the job. Though he is only 18 years old and blind,Suleyman Gokiygit (pronounced gok-yi-it) is among the top computer technicians and programmers at InteliData technologies corp., a large software company with several offices across the United States.
“After a merger (3) last October, two disparate computer networks (4) were driving us crazy,” recalls Douglas Braun, an InteliData vice president.“we couldn’t even send e-mail to each other.” In three weeks, Mr. Gokiygit, a university of Toledo Sophomore who works
Part-time at InteliData’s office in the city, created the software needed to integrate the two networks.
“None of the company’s 350 other employees could have done the job in three months,” says Mr. Braun.
“Suleyman can literally ‘see’ into the heart of the computer.”
Mr. Gokiygit gift, as Mr. Braun calls it, is an unusual ability to conceptualize (5) the innards (6) of a machine.
“The computer permits me to reach out into the world and do almost anything I want to do,” says Mr. Gokiygit, who
Is a computer science engineering major with straight As.



Like most blind people who work with computers, Mr. Gokyigit uses a voice-synthesizer that reads the video display on his monitor in mechanical voice. Devices that produce Braille screen displays are also available but Mr. Gokyigit says they "waste time". Instead, he depends on memory. Turning the synthesizer to top speed, he remembers almost everything he hears, at least until a project is completed. While the synthesizer talks, Mr. Gokyigit mentally "maps" the computer screen with number coordinate (such as three across, two down) and memorizes the location of each icon on the grid so he can call up files with his mouse.
The young programmer is also at home with (8) hardware, thanks partly to a highly developed sense of touch. Mitzi Nowakowski, an office manager at InteliData, recalls how he easily disconnected and reconnected their computer systems during a move last year. " Through feel, Suleyman can locate (9) connectors, pins and wires much faster than most other people with sight," she says.



Several months ago , on a trip to San Fransisco , Mr Braun had difficulty accessing (10) the company's mainframe using his laptop.He needed specific numbers to get into four InteliData files . Instead of asking someone to manually search thick logbook (11) of computer addresses , he called Mr Gokyigit who had committed the logbook to memory and produced the proper numbers "in ten seconds" Mr Braun says.
Much of the students programmer's speed comes from his ability to block out (12) distractions while at the computer. When typing, he listens intently to the synthesizer . His long, thin fingers fly over the keyboard."Nothing seems to shake his concentration" says Mrs.Nowakowski , his immediate boss (13).
Mr Gokyigit is the only company employee on call (14) 24 hours a day."We consider him our top troubleshooter (15)" say Mr.Braun.


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1-whiz very talented person

2-a perceived disability something you think of as a disability or negative thing

3-merger a combining two or more companies into one

4-two disparate computer networks two groups of computers that can't communicate whit each other

5-to conceptualize to form an idea

6-the innards of the inside of

7-grid a pattern of evenly spaced vertical and horizontal lines

8-at home with comfortable with ; good with

9-locate find position of

10-accessing getting into ; getting information from

11-logbook written record of information

12-block out ignore

13-his immediate boss the person he reports directly to

14-on call available to go to work

15-troubleshooter problem solver


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dourtarin
25-07-2009, 10:55
Hi friends, this is my summary:
This reading is about a person who is whiz in computer. Though He is very young and blind but he is one of the top and good employees at intellidata technologies corp. Mr. Braun an IntelliData vice president recalls a different ability of his in computer programs that solve them difficult problems in networks. Mr. Gokyigit says about his unusual ability in this manner that computer permit me to reach out into the world and do almost anything I want to do. He work by computer like other blind people and he use the voice-synthesizer system but devices by Braille screen a display is in her mind “waste time”. By map that consist of coordinate number and memorizes the location of each icon on the grid, he can work by computer. His ability to work by hardware is recalls by his immediate boss. At last by reading this text we can understand that Mr. Gokyigit is a top troubleshooter for IntelliData crop and a perceived disability turns out to be an asset on the job.
Some words:
Whiz, A perceived disability, Merger, conceptualize, grid, logbook, block out, on call.
Plz give your ideal about my work.

extreme2006gh
25-07-2009, 11:09
hi

This story is about a person who has some special abilities. His name is suleyman Gokiygit, he is blind but very clever and intelligent. He is studying in Toledo university and works part-time at InteliData company.
His famousness is because of work he does. Fore example he produced a software that connected two big computer network. Work which nobody of employees couldn t do that in three months. Another case is that once his boss wanted to get into a computer but he forgot the numbers and instead of asking someone to look for them in thick logbook, he called suleyman and he recalled the numbers in ten second.
He also has ability to understand the inner structure of a machine and turning it to operational idea.
He has a good imaginative mind and he can easily map everything he hears, although there are some devices that change voices to Braille script but he doesn t use them and believe that they waist time, then he is dependent on his memory. Therefore he use voice-synthesizer to hear things on monitor.
It seems nothing can distract his mind in compare to other people when they work at the computer .

I think we have a proverb in our culture say :
God if closes a door wisely, opens another door kindly :42:

armita2007
25-07-2009, 18:13
[quote=brain;4001858]

In The Name Of God
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"The same person cannat be skilled in everything ; Each has special excellence"


Euripides Greek playuright
(C.485-406 BC)
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A Young Whiz(1) on Computers
by Tom Petzinger
from the wall street journal




Sometimes, a perceived disability (2) turns out to be an asset on the job. Though he is only 18 years old and blind,Suleyman Gokiygit (pronounced gok-yi-it) is among the top computer technicians and programmers at InteliData technologies corp., a large software company with several offices across the United States.
“After a merger (3) last October, two disparate computer networks (4) were driving us crazy,” recalls Douglas Braun, an InteliData vice president.“we couldn’t even send e-mail to each other.” In three weeks, Mr. Gokiygit, a university of Toledo Sophomore who works
Part-time at InteliData’s office in the city, created the software needed to integrate the two networks.
“None of the company’s 350 other employees could have done the job in three months,” says Mr. Braun.
“Suleyman can literally ‘see’ into the heart of the computer.”
Mr. Gokiygit gift, as Mr. Braun calls it, is an unusual ability to conceptualize (5) the innards (6) of a machine.
“The computer permits me to reach out into the world and do almost anything I want to do,” says Mr. Gokiygit, who
Is a computer science engineering major with straight As.




Like most blind people who work with computers, Mr. Gokyigit uses a voice-synthesizer that reads the video display on his monitor in mechanical voice. Devices that produce Braille screen displays are also available but Mr. Gokyigit says they "waste time". Instead, he depends on memory. Turning the synthesizer to top speed, he remembers almost everything he hears, at least until a project is completed. While the synthesizer talks, Mr. Gokyigit mentally "maps" the computer screen with number coordinate (such as three across, two down) and memorizes the location of each icon on the grid so he can call up files with his mouse.
The young programmer is also at home with (8) hardware, thanks partly to a highly developed sense of touch. Mitzi Nowakowski, an office manager at InteliData, recalls how he easily disconnected and reconnected their computer systems during a move last year. " Through feel, Suleyman can locate (9) connectors, pins and wires much faster than most other people with sight," she says.




Several months ago , on a trip to San Fransisco , Mr Braun had difficulty accessing (10) the company's mainframe using his laptop.He needed specific numbers to get into four InteliData files . Instead of asking someone to manually search thick logbook (11) of computer addresses , he called Mr Gokyigit who had committed the logbook to memory and produced the proper numbers "in ten seconds" Mr Braun says.
Much of the students programmer's speed comes from his ability to block out (12) distractions while at the computer. When typing, he listens intently to the synthesizer . His long, thin fingers fly over the keyboard."Nothing seems to shake his concentration" says Mrs.Nowakowski , his immediate boss (13).
Mr Gokyigit is the only company employee on call (14) 24 hours a day."We consider him our top troubleshooter (15)" say Mr.Braun.



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1-whiz very talented person


2-a perceived disability something you think of as a disability or negative thing


3-merger a combining two or more companies into one


4-two disparate computer networks two groups of computers that can't communicate whit each other


5-to conceptualize to form an idea


6-the innards of the inside of


7-grid a pattern of evenly spaced vertical and horizontal lines


8-at home with comfortable with ; good with


9-locate find position of


10-accessing getting into ; getting information from


11-logbook written record of information


12-block out ignore


13-his immediate boss the person he reports directly to


14-on call available to go to work


15-troubleshooter problem solver


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this is my summary


This reading is about a genius and his works for IntelData company. Although Suleyman Gokiygit is 18 years old and he is blind, he is genius in computer and programming at InteliData company. He believed that the Braille screen displays waste the time and he uses his memory and a voice synthesizer that reads the video display. One problem happened in the computer networks and he created the software needed to integrate the two networks.


Several months ago, Mr. Braun had a problem with accessing the main network of company by his laptop. He asked someone to help him called "Mr. Gokyigit". He is known as "troubleshooter" .it means that he can repair and resolve many malfunctions in computer.


In conclusion, a perceived disability turns out to be an asset on the job.

Whansinnig
25-07-2009, 19:40
This reading is about human skills that shows every one can not be skilled in a subject,


as the text said some times a perceived disability turns out to be an asset on the job.


There is a person ( Mr. suleyman Gokiygit ) who is whiz in computer because


he can do some thing in a short time that no body can do it may be even in a long time.


For example creating the software needed to integrate the two networks, finding


the specific number for his boss to get in to four InteliData files only in 10 second …..


According to Mr. Gokiygit , the computer permit him to reach out into the world and


do almost any thing he want to do .


At the end his ability to do this thing made a famous person of him that Mr. Brauns


believe he is the only company employee on call 24 hours a day.


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I know there is many mistake in my summary but I couldn't write any thing instead of them , so I will be happy if you say your idea…
With thanks…

masoudtr
25-07-2009, 23:24
Did you hear this idiom

No one is perfect but any one has a special ability

This story is about blind person with a great memory.

He find a good job in a InteliData technologies corp.in this place best technicians work for prepare the better future for people.he can fix a big problem for them.because they couldn’t even send e-mail to each other.he uses a voice-synthesizer that reads the video display on his monitor and i think it is very difficult to memorize something without see that.

And also the chief of InteliData was proud of him because several month age he need specific number to access four files in his laptop.instead of search in laptop he called Mr Gokyigit and he told him in few second.

Btw i didn’t like this story but i understand disability isn’t good excuse for jobless.and also you must n’t forget godbecause


خدا گر زحکمت ببندد دری ز رحمت گشاید در دیگری

mahsa1469
26-07-2009, 16:13
my summary
this reading is about a blind person whit special abilitis in computer.he studying in univercity and
contemporary works
in one company he was very kidness for her brain in computer potency. such az , produce a software to contact two computer network.
the best deduction of this reading is:we dont disregard abilitis of one person such az suleyman that could not see and....

محمد88
26-07-2009, 20:15
:20:if it is based on turn....now it is mine
Suleyman Gokiygit is a 18 years old boy
He is blind but while he has such a problem he is talented in computer
He can solve the problems in a short time that some of computer experts are disabled to do that
Suleyman uses his extraordinary intelligence to do the works that relate to software and hardware both.
…Even He can guess where the icon is
Also he has no problem with hardware… and some people believes he is more skilful in this major than the other guys in the office
In the company he is famous for troubleshooter, because he is able to solve the most complicated problems


Asset
Recall
Vice
Sophomore
Integrate
Literally
Conceptualize
Straight as
Voice-synthesizer
Grid
Thick
Logbook
Distractions
Intently

rayhaneh
26-07-2009, 22:49
MY SUMERY


This reading is about a blind but talented young man of 18, who is named Suleyman Gokiygit. Although he is blind and it’s a big disability but he had hide that shortage by using and improving his other senses. Like other blind people he uses voice-synthesizer for speaking out the video display of monitor for him but unlike others Suleyman consider usage of devices that produce Brail screen as waste of time. He is successful in his job like a normal and healthy person or even more. Suleyman works for InteliData technologies corp. and his boss and all his cohorts consider him as a top programmer and technician in the company. They all remember his great helps on troubleshooting several big problems during last years. Once he solved a problem which no one of 350 technicians of the InteliData could solve it during three months.



This story reminds us of a proved point that every human has gotten a special ability and talent from Allah Almighty which she or he has to discover and use it during her or his life.

sepid12ir
27-07-2009, 00:49
Hi friends, this is my summary:
This reading is about a person who is whiz in computer. Though He is very young and blind but he is one of the top and good employees at intellidata technologies corp. Mr. Braun an IntelliData vice president recalls a different ability of his in computer programs that solve them difficult problems in networks. Mr. Gokyigit says about his unusual ability in this manner that computer permitS me to reach out into the world and do almost anything I want to do. He workS by computer like other blind people and he use the voice-synthesizer system but devices by Braille screen a display is in her mind “waste time”. By map that consists of coordinate number and memorizes the location of each icon on the grid, he can work by computer. His ability to work by hardware is recalls by his immediate boss. At last by reading this text we can understand that Mr. Gokyigit is a top troubleshooter for IntelliData crop and a perceived disability turns out to be an asset on the job.
Some words:
Whiz, A perceived disability, Merger, conceptualize, grid, logbook, block out, on call.
Plz give your ideal about my work.



if u want my idea, I think u try to have a writing upper than yr level...may I ask wot yr level is?!l

whiz in: whiz at

recalls a different ability of his in computer programs: I want to know wot 'recall' means here?!l...instead of 'his' u gotta use 'him'...although I'm not sure about the whole sentence!!l





hi

This story is about a person who has some special abilities. His name is suleyman Gokiygit, he is blind but very clever and intelligent. He is studying in Toledo university and works part-time at InteliData company.
His famousness is because of work he does. Fore example he produced a software that connected two big computer network. Work which nobody of employees couldn t do that in three months. Another case is that once his boss wanted to get into a computer but he forgot the numbers and instead of asking someone to look for them in thick logbook, he called suleyman and he recalled the numbers in ten second.
He also has ability to understand the inner structure of a machine and turning it to operational idea.
He has a good imaginative mind and he can easily map everything he hears, although there are some devices that change voices to Braille script but he doesn t use them and believe that they waist time, then he is dependent on his memory. Therefore he use voice-synthesizer to hear things on monitor.
It seems nothing can distract his mind in compare to other people when they work at the computer .

I think we have a proverb in our culture say :
God if closes a door wisely, opens another door kindly :42:




wow, perfect
Work which nobody of employees couldn t do: work which none of the employees could do
here u've used nobody(none of them) n these kinda words make a sentence negative n there is no need to have the negative form of the vern

in compare: in comparison

sepid12ir
27-07-2009, 01:02
this is my summary


This reading is about a genius and his works for IntelData company. Although Suleyman Gokiygit is 18 years old and he is blind, he is genius in computer and programming at InteliData company. He believed that the Braille screen displays waste the time and he uses his memory and a voice synthesizer that reads the video display. One problem happened in the computer networks and he created the software needed to integrate the two networks.


Several months ago, Mr. Braun had a problem with accessing the main network of company by his laptop. He asked someone to help him called "Mr. Gokyigit". He is known as "troubleshooter" .it means that he can repair and resolve many malfunctions in computer.


In conclusion, a perceived disability turns out to be an asset on the job.



a perfect writing...no mistake...just one small one:
genius in: genius at

waste the time: If I were u I would write: ...is such a waste of time



This reading is about human skills that shows every one can not be skilled in a subject,


as the text said some times a perceived disability turns out to be an asset on the job.


There is a person ( Mr. suleyman Gokiygit ) who is whiz in computer because


he can do some thing in a short time that no body can do it may be even in a long time.


For example creating the software needed to integrate the two networks, finding


the specific number for his boss to get in to four InteliData files only in 10 second …..


According to Mr. Gokiygit , the computer permitS him to reach out into the world and


do almost any thing he wantS to do .


At the end his ability to do this thing made a famous person of him that Mr. Brauns


believe he is the only company employee on call 24 hours a day.


------------------------------
I know there is many mistake in my summary but I couldn't write any thing instead of them , so I will be happy if you say your idea…
With thanks…


It was perfect, dun sell yrself short

whiz in: whiz at

made a famous person of him: made him famous

Atefeh1
27-07-2009, 01:23
:11:hi
sorry fore its late
THIS IS MY SUMMERY:
The story is about an 18 years old boy, a blind person. His name is Suleyman Gokiygit.
In spite of his disability, he is a talented computer engineer. He can solve most of the complicated problems which Intel Data's office was faced. Fore example he created the software needed to integrate the two networks.
Mr. Gokyigit uses a voice-synthesizer on his computer, in this condition he possesses a sharp memory to remember almost every thing he hears. He uses his highly developed sense of touch when he works by hardware. His immediate boss says that he is good in interchanging the words which he hears into text and types them with high speed . Another fellow Mr. Braun, an Intel Data vice president admires his abilities and called him as top troubleshooter of his office.

rayhaneh
27-07-2009, 08:45
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Unite 7
Present Prefect
(I have done)




1This tense is used when an act has happened in the past and completed in the past but its effects or evidences are still available at the time of speaking.
Example: I have broken my leg.


2Stracture of sentences in this tense
A) Positive sentences
Subject+have/has+3rd form of the verb +object
She + has + done + her homework.


B) Negative Sentences
Subj+helping verb(have/has)+not+3rd form of verb +obj.
She +has + not+ done +her homework


C) Interrogative Sentences
Have/has+subj+3rd form of the verb+ obj
Has + she + done +her homework



3Helping verbs in present prefect are: have and has
Have is used for plurals (I/ we/they)1
Has is used for singulars (he/she/it)1
We can use their short form as: Have= 've / Has= 's



4For mentioning time three words are used here: just, already, yet


Just: when act happens a short time before speaking
Example: I have just had my dinner, I'm not hungry anymore.


Yet: when speaker expect something to happen, yet is used in –ve sentences or questions.
Example: I have written the letter but I haven't it yet.


Already: when act happens sooner than expected time
Example:Don't forget to sent the letter to her, I have already sent it


درس هفتم
Present Prefect
(I have done)
1-این زمان در فارسی معادل ماضی نقلی یا حال کامل هست.یعنی کاری در گذشته به طور کامل انجام شده ولی اثر آن کار درزمان حال هم آشکار یا موجود است.
مثلا:
من نهارم را خورده ام
I have had my lunch

2- ساختار جمله ها در زمان حال کامل
جمله مثبت: فاعل+فعل کمکی(have/has)+فعل اصلی(صورت سوم فعل)+مفعول یا ادامه جمله+.
مثال:She has done her homework
او تکالیفش را انجام داده است.

جمله منفی: فاعل+فعل کمکی(have/has)+کلمه منفی(not)+مفعول+.
مثال: She has not done her homework
او تکالیفش را انجام نداده است

جمله سوالی: فعل کمکی(have/has)+فاعل+فعل اصلی(صورت سوم فعل)+مفعول+؟
مثال: Has she done her homework؟
آیا او تکالیفش را انجام داده است؟

3- فعل کمکی مورد استفاده در زمان حال کامل (have وhas) هستند که
Have برای فاعلهای جمع (I/ we/they)هست و
Has برای فاعل های مفرد (he/she/it) هست

4- برای واضح کردن زمان وقوع فعل از سه کلمه (just, already, yet) استفاده میشود. مثلا:
Justوقتی فعل در زمان خیلی کمی قبل از زمان صحبت گوینده صورت گرفته باشد
I have just had my dinner, I'm not hungry anymore.
من تازه شامم را خورده ام , من دیگه احساس گرسنگی نمیکنم.

Yet وقتی گوینده انتظار وقوع عملی را دارد و معمولا از این کلمه در جمله های سوالی ومنفی استفاده می شود.
I have written the letter but I haven't it sent yet.
من نامه را نوشته ام ولی هنوز آن را نفرستاده ام

Already وقتی فعل زودتر از زمانی که انتظارش میرود اتفاق میافتد
Don't forget to sent the letter to her, I have already sent it.
یادت نرود نامه را به او بفرستی.(نفر دوم : )من نامه را قبلافرستاده ام.



سلام به همگی:11:
من سعی کردم واضح و کامل توضیح بدم(دوساعت وقت گذاشتم!:31: ) ولی اگه اینطور نبوده،ببخشید و درضمن اگر سوالی داشتید حتما بپرسید .
و برای اینکه مطمن (یای همزه دار کجای کیبورده؟!:17:)بشید این درس رو کامل بلدید حتماتمرین های این درس رو از لینک پایینی دانلود و حل کنید:27: :
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امیدوارم در پایان، زمان حال کامل رو خوب یادگرفته باشید
موفق وپایدار باشید

dourtarin
27-07-2009, 12:43
if u want my idea, I think u try to have a writing upper than yr level...may I ask wot yr level is?!l

whiz in: whiz at

recalls a different ability of his in computer programs: I want to know wot 'recall' means here?!l...instead of'his' u gotta use 'him'...although I'm not


I dont try to go upper of my level in this summary, I dont know my level because i dont go any class but i read many science article , maybe for it? this summary is good or i should be better than?

sepid12ir
27-07-2009, 12:55
I dont try to go upper of my level in this summary, I dont know my level because i dont go any class but i read many science article , maybe for it? this summary is good or i should be better than?

it is good, but not based on structures.. I mean I sometimes lost the point while reading yr summary... I do recommend u to go thru some grammar books besides catching up on some articles....
but since u've never been in Eng class then I gotta say that was perfect...keep going:10:l

sepid12ir
27-07-2009, 13:01
من سعی کردم واضح و کامل توضیح بدم(دوساعت وقت گذاشتم![ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] ) ولی اگه اینطور نبوده،ببخشید و درضمن اگر سوالی داشتید حتما بپرسید .
perfect :10:... good job
it was perfect n wot u did is so admiring:11:l
gotta ask two questions:
just two Qs...If I say 'I have watched Titanic' n imagine that 'I've forgotten the story', dun remember even a bit I just now that I've watched it....then wot's the effect now?!... l

n besides, wot's the difference between simple past n present perfect?! mostly in usage?!l


و برای اینکه مطمن (یای همزه دار کجای کیبورده؟![ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ])
isn't it 'M' button?!:46:l
مطمئن

masoudtr
27-07-2009, 16:22
Past Continuous

FORM

was/were + ing

it means in past you was in the middle of doing somthing

Examples:


You were studying when she called.
Were you studying when she called?
You were not studying when she called.


I / he / she / it was - was not

you / we / they were - were not

there is different between Past Continuous

and past simple

in past simple you did Completed Action

but in Past Continuous you was in the middle of an action


p.s

 I saw a movie yesterday.

 I didn't see a play yesterday.

 Last year, I traveled to Japan.

 Last year, I didn't travel to Korea.

p.c

 I was listening to my iPod

 You were not listening to me when I told you to turn the oven off.

 While John was sleeping last night, someone stole his car.

We use p.s & p.c together to say that something happened in the middle of something else.

Ali phoned while we were having dinner


گذشته استمراری هنگامی استفاده میشود که ما در وسط کاری در گذشته باشیم




مثلا دیشب ساعت 10 شروع به خوردن شام کردیم و ساعت 12 شام خوردن تمام شده پس در ساعت 11 در وسط شام بودیم



I WAS HAVING DINNER AT 11 PM


تفاوتی که بین گذشته ساده و گذشته استمراری است در این است که در گذشته ساده کار تمام شده ولی در گذشته استمراری کار هنوز تمام نشده و در میانه کار هستیم






گاهی اوقات گذشته استمراری و گذشته ساده را باهم می آوریم تا نشان دهیم کاری در گذشته در میانه کار دیگری انجام شده



Ali phoned while we were having dinner

rayhaneh
27-07-2009, 19:10
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gotta ask two questions:
just two Qs...If I say 'I have watched Titanic' n imagine that 'I've forgotten the story', dun remember even a bit I just now that I've watched it....then wot's the effect now?!... l

n besides, wot's the difference between simple past n present perfect?! mostly in usage?!l


Thanks dear sepideh:11:

ولی اگه اینطور نبوده،ببخشید و درضمن اگر سوالی داشتید حتما بپرسید .
1st of all u know what? by that sentence I actually was thinking that u would answer the questions of other friends and me about this tense:31:any how
About ur 1st Q. As i got from ur post u want to remind me of the point which i didn't mention. :27: So
honestly speeking i don't know ur answer exactly.plz inform me of that if u or anybody else knows but what i can say now is that the condition i wrote is aplicable in most of the cases but present prefect tense has many uses more than what mentioned in the lesson

And about the 2nd one,there are many differences btw present prefect and past simple but as far as their usage is concerned
Past simple
An exact time is mentioned(yesterday,last year
It is used for older passed events
and the time period is finished now

present prefect
The exact time is not mentioned
It is used for recent happenings
the time period has not finishes (as its name shows present prefect
Waiting for one of u to correct my mistake...:11:

sepid12ir
27-07-2009, 20:13
Hello All

Could I ask you, type in complete format of words?

I can't understand .

like :
"gotta ask two questions:
just two Qs...If I say 'I have watched Titanic' n imagine that 'I've forgotten the story', dun remember even a bit I just now that I've watched it....then wot's the effect now?!... l"


sorry
I try to follow it
n= and
wot= what
dun = don't




1st of all u know what? by that sentence I actually was thinking that u would answer the questions of other friends and me about this tense:31:any how
sure I do... I answer the questions which I've info about:10:l

About ur 1st Q. As i got from ur post u want to remind me of the point which i didn't mention. :27: So
honestly speeking i don't know ur answer exactly.plz inform me of that if u or anybody else knows but what i can say now is that the condition i wrote is aplicable in most of the cases but present prefect tense has many uses more than what mentioned in the lesson
honestly, I don't know either... I dun know why it has been mentioned in lots of books but I see no reason! I think that is Present Perfect Continious in which we can feel the effects...
but I'd be thankful if anybody would come n explain it to us:10:l



And about the 2nd one,there are many differences btw present prefect and past simple but as far as their usage is concerned
Past simple
An exact time is mentioned(yesterday,last year
It is used for older passed events
and the time period is finished now

present prefect
The exact time is not mentioned
It is used for recent happenings
the time period has not finishes (as its name shows present prefect
Waiting for one of u to correct my mistake...:11:



I was waiting for that the time period has not finished in present perfect :10:n that's sth which most of the students have problem with; as an example: I've eaten Pizza this week

I think Present Perfect is one of the most important parts of the English grammar, n if u all pay attention u can see that native speakers use it alot while speaking; so hope u all understand it well n try to use it more often in yr speeches... if there is any question left, don't hesitate to ask

Good luck guys:10:l
n thaanks to Reyhaneh:11: for describing it in its best possible way

extreme2006gh
28-07-2009, 07:37
just two Qs...If I say 'I have watched Titanic' n imagine that 'I've forgotten the story', dun remember even a bit I just now that I've watched it....then wot's the effect now?!... l








I didn t exactly understand what you meant of these questions.
could you say in persion plz
If it s prohibited( persion) plz tell me in PM
thanks

singleguy
28-07-2009, 08:06
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People In The US
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An Indian man talks about how he likes the friendliness and politeness of people in the US.
Topic: Foreign Customs
Length: 0:44
Accent: Indian
Gender: M
Speed: Medium

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Building an African house
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An American woman talks about how people built their houses in an African village.
Topic: Foreign Customs
Length: 2:15
Accent: General American
Gender: F
Speed: Very Slow
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Snickers Arrives
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The speaker tells about about when her father brought home a small kitten for his children.
Topic: Pets
Length: 1:5
Accent: General American
Gender: F
Speed: Very Fast
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singleguy
30-07-2009, 23:21
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Masoudrejae
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I like to tell you how they build houses in an african village where i lived .first they would dig a lot of dirt then they pour on it and get it wet.they put this mod in to a rectangular woodin frame.the size of brick.then they would pour it on the ground to dry.they’ll let the bricks dry in a sun for several days.they call this green bricks because they were not bite in a fire they just dry in the sun.when they got ready to bulid the house they would put four dirty logs in the ground to be the four corners of the house.they would leid the bricks a round
Making a walls of the house.between the bricks they put mods which acts
They would be a door and wooden frame to hold the door in place.one i was time to make a roof they would get puls and attach them to the logs at the corner of the house.the poles would goes up to the center making a point then they would attach straw on to the poles and make it lovely grass roof .that would be a basic house often they would bulid more than hot on a compound for family for example they would be small hot for a kitchen things also it was common that each wife would half room for sleeping and the husband had his room .the young children slept with their mother .that was a typical house




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People in US

One of the aspects of common people that is interesting about American that they really well behavior each other even if you are a stranger, so that makes it really nice to live here because if you are in a same room waiting for some doctor and you are stranger there. It is really nice the people wishes each other and make some small …. And sitting the staff than ignoring each other and it’s very nice aspect of US … each other like this
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I’d like to tell about how they built houses in an Africa village where I lived. Firs they … a lot of dirt and then pour water on it and get it wet. They’d put this mud in to a rectangular wooden frame, the size of a brick. Then they pour it out on the ground to dry. They’d let the bricks dry in the sun for the several days. They called these green bricks because they are not baked in fire, they just dry in the sun. When they got ready to build a house they would put four …logs in the ground to be four corners of the house. They would lay the bricks around making the walls of the house, between the bricks, they put mud which acted is more then. They would be a door and a wooden frame to hold the door in place. One of the times to make a roof they would get … and attach then to the logs of the corners of the house. The … would go up to the center making a point, then they would attach straw on the … and then make a lovely grass roof. That would be a basic house. Often they would build more than one hut on a compound for family, for example, they would be a small hut for the kitchen things, also it was common that each wife would have her own room for sleeping and a husband had his room, the young children sleep in with their mother. That was a typical house





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One of the aspects of common people that it s interesting about American to ….. they are really well friendly in .... even if you are stranger. So that makes it really nice to live here. Because if you are sick in the room, waiting for some doctors than you are stranger that .it is really nice that people……than Makes a small dog land the seating this stuff than you know ignoring details …and it s very nice aspect of US ...like this
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I d like to tell you about how they build houses in an African village where I live. First, they would dig up a lot of dirt and then they never pour the water and get it wet. They put this mud into the rectangular wooden frame, the size of brick. They pour it onto the ground to dry. They let the brick dry in the sun for the several days. They called it "green bricks". Because they would not ……in the fire. They just dry in the sun. When they got ready to build houses, they would put the form, steady logs in the ground to be formed the corner of the house. They would let the bricks around making the wall of house .between the bricks they put mud which acted it s moulded .they would be a door and wooden frame to hold the door in place .one of the t.. to make the roof they would get the polls and attach them to the logs of corners of house. The polls would go up to the centure making the polls. then they would attach straw onto the polls and then they make lively grass woods. That would be a basic house. Often, they would be more than one hut on the compound for family. For example, they would be a small hut for the kitchen things .Also, it was common that each wife would have a room for sleeping and a husband had his room. The young children slept with their mothers .that was a typical house


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I'd like to tell you how they build houses in African village for I lived first they ... a lot of ... then ... and get it wet.They put this mud into a ... wooding frame the size of the brick then they ... on the ground to dry they let breaks dry in the sun for several days they cold these green bricks because they are not ... in a fire they just dry in the sun when they got ready to build the house they would put four sturdy logs in the gorund to be the four corners of the house they would lay the bricks around making the walls of the house between the bricks they put mud which ... they would ... door and wooding frame to hold the door in place one of ... time to make the roof they would get pools and attach them to the logs at the corners of the house the pools would go up to the centre making a point then they would attach straw on to the pools and make a lovley glass roof that would be a basic house often they would ... more than ... hot on a ... for a family for example they would be small hot for the
kitchen things also it ... that each wife would have for own ... sleeping and a husband had his room the young children slept with her mother that was a typical house. The End



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One of aspects of common people is interesting about Americans that they will be very behavic ittelle even if you be a stranger. So that makes it very nice to live here because if you stay in a room madding for some darkle you have stranger there

Its really nice people wisheted them make some dark land it’s the sitting in the staff you know ignoring ittelle .And it’s a very nice aspects of us locknut like this

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One of the aspects of common people that is interesting about , American say that they really will behave each other even if you are a stranger, so that makes it really nice to --- have ,because if you are in the same room waiting for some doctor and you have stranger , it really nice that people wish each other and make some small --- rather than this sitting ----- ignoring each other , and it very nice aspect of you ask ----
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I d like to tell you about how they build houses in an African village where I live. First day they dig up a lot of ---- then they would pour water on it and get it wet. They would put this mud into a rectangular wooden frame the size of a brick, then they would pour it on the ground to dry, they would let the bricks drying in the sun for several days. They call these green bricks, because they were not baked in the fire, they ve just dried in the sun. when they got ready to build the house they would put form ---- logs in the ground to be the four corners of the house, they would lay the bricks around making the walls of the house, between the bricks they put mud which acted as a murder, they would be a door and wooden frame to hold the door in place. When it was time to make a roof, they would get poles and attached them to the logs at the corners of the house. The poles would go up to the center making a point, then they would attach straw onto the poles. It make a lovely grass roof that would be a basic house, often they would build more than one hat on a compound for a family. For example they would be a small hat for the kitchen things. Also it was common that each wife would have her own room for sleeping and the husband had his room. The young children slept in with their mother. That was a typical house.

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People in the US
One of the aspects of comment people that is in to staying about American is that they very well behaved each other even if you are the stranger so that makes totally nice to live here because if other the stays room made in for some doctors and you have strangers that, it really nice the people wait sheet has may comes more dog land is this siding stuff than ignore in it is and it’s very nice aspect of U.S pegre Each other leg this

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I would like to tell you about how they build houses in an African village where I've lived. First they would dig up a lot of dirt then they would pour water on it and get it wet. They would put this mud into a rectangular wooden frame, the size of a brick. Then they would pour it out on the ground to dry. They would let the bricks dry in the sun for several days. They call these green bricks because they were not baked in a fire; they just dried in the sun. When they got ready to build the house, they would put four stodgy logs in the ground to be the four corners of the house. They would lay the bricks around making the walls of the house. Between the bricks they put mud which acts as molder. There would be a door and a wooden frame to hold the door in place. When it was the time to make the roof they would get poles and attach them to the logs at the corners of the house. The poles would go up to the center making a point. Then they would attach straw onto the poles and make a lovely grass roof. That would be a basic house. Often they would build more than one hut on a compound for a family. For example there would be a small hut for kitchen things also it was common that each wife would have her own room for sleeping and the husband had his room, the young children slept in with their mothers. That was a typical house.

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I like to tell you about how they built houses in African village which I have lived first they will dig a block of ……….then they pour water on it and getting wet they would this mud into a rectangular wooden frame, their size were brake. They never pour water on the ground dry. They will let the brakes dry in the sun for several days. They call these green brakes because they would not bake in the fire they just dry in the sun. When they got ready to build the house they would put four steady logs in the ground to be four corner of the house. They would lay the brake rounds making the walls of the house, between the brakes they put mud which acted is more there. There would be a door and a wooden frame to hold the door in place. One there is time to make the roof, they would get polls and attaché them to the logs at the corners of the house the polls will go up to the center making a point. Then they would attaché straw under the polls and make a lovely grass roof. there would be a basic house, often there would be more than one hut On a compound for a family for example there would be a small hut for the kitchen things also it was common that each wife would have for own room for sleeping and the husband had his room the young children slept with their mother. There was a topical house

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I like to tell you how they build houses
in an African village wided....first they would dig a derm
they never pour water on it and get it wet
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the size of a break
they never pour it out on the ground to dry
they would let the breaks dry in the sun for several days
they cold these green breaks
because they are not bate in the fire....they just dry it in the sun
when they got ready to build the house
they would put four sturdy logs in the ground to be the four corners of the house
they would lay the breaks around
making the walls of the house....between the breaks they put mud
wich acted is morder
they would be a door and a wooden frame to hold the door in place
when they stime(!) to make the roof....they would get pals
and attache them to the logs at the corners of the house
the pals would go up to the center making appoint...then they would attaches straw until the pals
and make a lovely glass roof
that would be a basic house...often they would build more than one hod
on a compound for family....for example they would be a small hod for the kitchen things
also it was common that each wife would have her own room for sleeping
and the housband hod his room
the young children slept in with their mother
that was a typical house

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One of the aspects of common people that is interesting about Americans is that-----behave each other even if you are stranger so that makes it nice to live here because you-------------- . It's really nice that they wish each other and make some -------a stuff that ignoring each other and It's very nice that people like each other…..[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]


I'd like to tell you how we build houses in an African village where I lived. First they would………….then they would pour water on it and get it wet. They would put this mud into a ….wooden frame the size of a brick. Then they'd put it on the ground to dry. They'd let the brick dry in the sun for several days. They call this green brick because they aren't baked in the fire. They just dried in the sun when they got ready to build the house. They'd put 4……..in the ground to be the 4 corners of the house. They'd ……..bricks around making the walls of the house. Between the bricks they put mud which……… . they'd be a door and wooden frame to hold in the place. Now when is time the roof they'd get……….and attach………..on to the …….. and make a lovely grass roof. That would be a basic house often they would build more than one…..and compound for family. For example there would be small ……kitchen things also it was common that each wife would have her own room sleeping and the husband has his room. The young children sleeping with their mother


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Easy
People In The US
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one of the aspects of uh um common people that is interesting about americans is that they're really well behaved with each other, even if you are a stranger. so that makes it really nice to live here, because if you have to stay in a room waiting for some doctor and you have some strangers there, it's really nice that people wish each other, and makes some small-talk rather than just sit- sitting there stuffed and you know ignoring each other. and it's it's a very nice aspect of U-S that they greet each other like this

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Medium
Building an African house
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i'd like to tell you about how they build houses in an african village where i lived. first, they would dig up a lot of dirt. then they would pour water on it and get it wet. they would put this mud into a rectangular wooden frame, the size of a brick. then they would pour it out on the ground to dry. they would let the bricks dry in the sun for several days. they called these green bricks because they were not baked in a fire. they just dried in the sun. when they got ready to build the house, they would put four sturdy logs in the ground to be the four corners of the house. they would lay the bricks around, making the walls of the house. between the bricks they put mud which acted as mortar. there would be a door and a wooden frame to hold the door in place. when it was time to make the roof, they would get poles and attach them to the logs at the corners of the house. the poles would go up to the center making a point. then they would attach straw onto the poles, and make a lovely grass roof. that would be a basic house. often they would build more than one hut on a compound for a family. for example there would be a small hut for the kitchen things. also it was common that each wife would have her own room for sleeping and the husband had his room. the young children slept in with their mother. that was a typical house.


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Snickers Arrives
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we didn't have a cat for a couple of years after one of our cats had died. and my parents didn't really want to get a pet because it was always hard for_ it was always hard for us the kids when one of the pets would die. but a lot of people used to bring in pets to where my dad would work cuz they would find them on the streets and they would need new homes. so one day... someone, one of the ladies who works for my dad, brought in a little cat. and she was little and she was pretty calm. and my dad picked her up and he took her and she just sat on his lap all day. and she was all cuddly and cute. and she was all so friendly. and she would follow him around. and my dad thought this would be the perfect pet for my kids. so he packs Snickers up in this little picnic basket and he brought her home in the car. he hadn't told any of us then. he got into the house. he just told me_ he's like "Stephanie, there's something in the car, go out and get it." so i went out into the car and pull up this picnic basket and all of a sudden this little head popped up. and i was like"it's a cat, it's a cat." and we were all so happy to have this cat. so i brought her into the house and all sudden she saw four little kid faces and eight little hands trying to reach out and grab her. and she ran and she hid in the closet. and from that very day on she hasn't been very friendly.






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singleguy
31-07-2009, 08:58
hi every body
It's time to cover 2 topics of our vocabulary book
The topics are:
Living room
In the street
You shouldn't do anything for vocabulary....just study. You should cover these to topics because the exam includes them

here are the pages which I uploaded for you:



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extreme2006gh
31-07-2009, 19:49
Hello everybody
This is my grammar activity


First lesson about present perfect was explained by our friend Rayhaneh
This is the second lesson about present perfect and the lesson is not going to explain about structure but it will explain situations and adverbs that is used in this tense.


Unit 8

Present perfect 2 (I have done)
1. We use this tense to talk about a period of time or an unspecified time that has started in and continues up to now.
We often use adverbs like ever, never, since, for, up to now, recently, so far . . . and every adverbs that shows a period of time.


Examples:
1-1. Have you ever traveled to china?
No, I have never traveled to china.
1-2. I haven t eaten anything since morning.

1-3. Have you heard from ali recently?

1-4. Been (to) = visited:
Example: I have never been to china.


2. We also use this tense with defined time that has not finished yet. Like today, this year, and …
Examples:
2-1. I have drunk four cups of tea today.
2-2. I haven t studied hard this term

* Difference between these adverbs and adverbs in number 1 is that adverbs in number 2 are defined time apparently but in meaning they haven t finished yet, but adverbs in number 1 exactly show a period of time.


3. Finally we use present perfect to say something that has happened first time. (first time regarding recent period of time. Maybe it is actually first time like example1 or maybe it is not the first time but regarding that has happened before, it is the first time like example 2.
Example:
3-1. He is driving a car. It’s the first time he has driven a car.
3-2. He has lost his keys again. This is the third times he has lost them.






این ساختار را در مواردی که یک عمل یا یک موقعیت در یک دوره زمانی یا یک زمان نامشخص که در گذشته شروع شده و تا هم‌اکنون نیز ادامه دارد مورد استفاده قرار می‌دهیم.


مثال:

1-1 تا حالا به چین سفر کردی(کرده‌ای)؟

نه هیچ وقت به اونجا سفر نکردم(نکرده‌ام).

1-2 از صبح تا حالا چیزی نخوردم(نخورده‌ام)

1-3 اخیرا از علی خبری داری؟


هم چنین این ساختار را در مورد یک زمان مشخص که هنوز به اتمام نرسیده نیز مورد استفاده قرار می‌دهیم.


این مورد با مورد قبل تفاوتی ندارد فقط در مورد اول بطور مشخص یک بازه زمانی رو نشان میدهد ولی در مورد دومی ظاهرا یک نقطه زمانی را نشان میدهد ولی از نظر معنایی باز هم یک بازه زمانی مد نظر می‌باشد.

مثال:

2-1. امروز 4 فنجان چای خوردم ( خورده‌ام).

2-2. این ترم خوب (سخت) درس نخواندم(نخوانده‌ام).


نهایتا زمان حال کامل را برای بیان اعمالی که بار اول اتفاق افتاده است مورد استفاده قرار می‌دهیم.( منظور از بار اول ممکن است عملی باشد که واقعا بار اول اتفاق افتاده باشد مانند مثال 1 و یا اینکه دقیقا بار اول نباشد ولی با توجه به اینکه این عمل در گذشته اتفاق افتاده و یک بازه زمانی از آن طی شده است مجددا پس از این بازه زمانی اتفاق افتاده است.)


3-1. او در حال رانندگی است. اولین دفعه هست که ماشین می‌راند(رانده است).

3-2. دوباره کلیدهایش را گم کرده است. سومین دفعه هست که آنها را گم می‌کند(کرده است).

در مجموع همه موارد ذکر شده زمان حال کامل (present perfect) در یک بازه زمانی را که در گذشته آغاز شده و تا زمان فعلی ادامه دارد استفاده می‌شود، هر چند که شاید از نظر ظاهری اینطور نباشد ولی از لحاظ معنایی مد نظر می‌باشد.




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گیسو
01-08-2009, 10:03
Present perfect continuous



(I have been doing)


A: Is it raining?
No, but the ground is wet.
It has been raining.
Have/has been –ing is the present perfect continuous:

I/we/they/you have
He/she/it has


been
Doing
Waiting
Playing etc.


We use the present perfect continuous for an activity that has recently stopped or just stopped.
There is a connection with now:

*You’re out of breath. Have you been running? (= you’re out of breath now)
*Paul is very tired. He’s been working very hard. (= he’s tired now)

B: It began raining two hours ago and it is still raining.
How long has it been raining?
It has been raining for two hours.

We use the present perfect continuous in this way with how long, for… and since…. The activity is still happening (as in this example) or has just stopped.
*How long have you been learning English? (= you’re still learning English)
* Tim is still watching television. He’s been watching television all day.


C: compare I am doing and I have been doing:






حال کامل استمراری




ادامه جمله+مفعول+ ing +فعل+ been + Have/has +فاعل



این زمان نشان می دهد که کاری در گذشته در یک زمان معین یا نامعین شروع شده و تا زمان حال ادامه داشته و هنوز هم ادامه دارد.

البته در افعالیکه در حالت سکون هستند بهتر است از زمان حال کامل استمراری استفاده شود تا زمان حال کامل.
افعالیکه در حالت سکون هستند مثل:
Stay, sit, rest, work, sleep, live, stand, wait, talk, learn, look, lie, listen, study.





طرز شناختن حال کامل استمراری:




شناختن این زمان مثل حال کامل می باشد با این فرق که ماضی نقلی در زمان حال کامل می شود ولی ماضی نقلی استمراری هنوز در زمان حال ادامه دارد که البته حروف اضافه و یا قیودی که برای ماضی نقلی بکار می رود برای ماضی استمراری هم صدق می کند

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- He is lying on the floor now.حال استمراری
- He has been lying there for two hours.حال کامل استمراری



طرز ساختن حال کامل استمراری:
این زمان را با ماضینقلی فعل بودن (have/has been) بعلاوه ی شکل (ing) فعل اصلی میسازند.




طرز منفی و سوالی کردن حال کامل استمراری:


در انگلیسیبریتانیایی عیناً مانند ماضی نقلی، سوالی و منفی می شود اما در دستور زبان انگلیسیآمریکایی، از فعل کمکی does برای سوالی کردن قبل از سوم شخص (she, He, It) و doesn’t بعد از آن برای منفی کردن استفاده می شود. و در بقیه اشخاص (I, You, We, They) از فعل کمکی do قبل از فاعل، برای سوالی کردن و don’t بعد از آن برای منفیکردن استفاده می شود.

singleguy
01-08-2009, 16:25
I have a question


In unite 8, exercise 8.4, for example we should answer the question number 2 like this: l

Have you played tennis before? l


No, it's the first time I have played tennis



And my question is:l

Is it wrong to say: "No, it's the first time I'm playing tennis…"?l


If it's wrong:l

Can we use present continuous here(in this situation)?l







If yes:l

How should we use present continuous here?l
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sepid12ir
01-08-2009, 21:32
I have a question


In unite 8, exercise 8.4, for example we should answer the question number 2 like this: l

Have you played tennis before? l


No, it's the first time I have played tennis



And my question is:l

Is it wrong to say: "No, it's the first time I'm playing tennis…"?l


If it's wrong:l

Can we use present continuous here(in this situation)?l







If yes:l

How should we use present continuous here?l
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well, as u've answered yourself, this answer is true:

No, it's the first time I'm playing tennis

according to yr answer n action u can use any kinda tense in answering a question....it is also worth mentioning that it is just short answers of questions which should have the same tense as the questions...but the long n complete answer can be due to the situation u r:

Have you played tennis before?!
Yes, I have. I first played tennis when I was ten years old

Have you ever played tennis before?!
No, I haven't. it's the first time I'm playing tennis

singleguy
02-08-2009, 00:02
Hi every body
Time for writing activity is from Mordad 11th till Mordad 14th
for doing this activity you should send A post including:
1- an essay about the subject sepid12ir told you
2- Setting examples related to each grammar unite we studied in this period (at least 5 examples for each unit)
3- setting examples about the 2 lessons you studied from our vocabulary book (at least 5 examples for each lesson) ll
For more information go to our social group
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brain
04-08-2009, 00:03
In The Name Of God
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Writing Activity
What Is The Disadvantage Of Being Alone

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Most of people like to associate with others so much and when they haven't close relations with others they feel loneliness feeling.The alone people feel nobody hear them well.When these people sense seclusion, they think that they have nobody.

We all sometimes feel loneliness feeling but loneliness feeling's some people is a chronic loneliness feeling.Chronic loneliness feeling is uncomfortable situation and it brings physics and mental disorders.It even can bring imminent death.Lately researches has shown who alone students have mental pressure more than other group students and they have bad situation asleep too.

Researchers researched in more than twenty countries then they discovered marrieds feel loneliness feeling less than bachelors.

The women and men find many different reasons for their loneliness.The men trounce themselves and the women trounce external causes.The men are bred as who start contacts and the women are bred as who wait and then answer.Maybe the men trounce themselves for they feel did a work for their loneliness while the women say why someone didn't telephone me.

How do you know that you are alone or not? If you say that you can't contact with others or you never find a ideal friend, maybe you will be alone forever



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Grammer
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Past Continuous

I was playing football when you called me.
They were climbing mountain.
She was reading her lessons at library.
We were not looking for baby.
You were washing dirty dishes when I was going out

Present Prefect 1

I haven't cooked dinner because of I haven't bought its materials yet.
She has brushed her teeth but she hasn't whashed her mouth.
They have done their work very good.
He has just gone , if you go faster you can see him.
Haven't you fed baby yet

Present Perfect 2

I have never fished , this is my first time.
You haven't flown with airplanein last week.
She hasn't forgiven me yet.
They haven't left our city.
I have never ridden a bike

Present Perfect Continuous

I have been standing here for some hours.
We have been talking about him.
You are still resting, you have been resting all the day.
He has been living there when he has born.
They have been working on my car but they have not repaired it yet




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Vocabulary
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Living Room

We don't have waste-paper bin in our house.
We don't have enough cushions for our guests.
Our mat has sludged very dirty, We should wash it.
This old rug is valuable and expensive.
Their house's ceiling has got wet and it maybe falls to them

In The Street

Some drivers sometimes cross lamp-box when it is red.
Gutters of this city are very dirty.
Pedestrains should walk pavement not in the street.
Weather is rainy and roads are wet and dangerous.
Some people are waiting for bus at bus-stop


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The End
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extreme2006gh
04-08-2009, 12:13
My Writing Activity


Disadvantages of LONLINESS



What is Loneliness?
Does it just mean: nobody is around you?
What are the disadvantages of loneliness?
Loneliness is not just being alone. Maybe you are in the group but you feel loneness again. Therefore I think we have two kinds of loneliness when you are physically alone and when you don t feel relax in the group, another type of loneliness. There are so many disadvantages for loneliness like feeling depressed after a while (can I use this collocation?), your social skills don t improve, you wouldn t be success in comparison when you are not alone.
When you are alone you don t have any interactions whit others and you have more time to think about everything. And it usually causes you think about negative issues. It means you think pessimistically and see everything in a bad way, then after a period of time you become depressed logically. Because it is result of pessimism.
Another disadvantage of loneliness is not improving your social and relationship skills. Because man is a social creature and he/she can grow in society. Having relationship and interactions whit other causes you face special situations and problems and make active your mind to solve them and eventually you learn how to act in this situation if you face it again.
One of the other disadvantages of loneliness is lack of success in life. I think it is a natural effect of two previous harms of loneliness. Because when you feel sick and depressed, you avoid of society then you can not have effective relationship and consequently your skills don t grow to comply your needs. And this means you are not successful. Because nowadays most important thing for succeeding is social relations.
Although loneness have so many disadvantages but it has some advantages too. For example you can sit somewhere alone and think about yourself and your behavior you had before and find your mistakes and finally reach to self knowing.
Therefore we sometimes need to be alone but we shouldn t allow it will became a habit.



Grammar

Present perfect 1, 2


I have done my homework.
It has stopped raining recently.
The buildings have just changed in our neighbourhood.
Don t forget to do your homework. I ve already done them.
Have n t you washed your hands yet ?
Have you ever ridden a aeroplane?
No, I have never ridden a plane.
I have phoned her 4 times today.
I haven, t gotten my driving license yet.
It, s the fourth times I, ve come here but nobody has been here to answer.


Past continuous


It was snowing when I went out.
When I got home, everybody was eating dinner.
Were you doing your homework at 10 last night?
I wasn t sleeping when you phoned.


Present perfect continuous


We have been sitting here for 2 hours.
He is a specialist engineer in his course. He has been studying for 10 years.
How long have you been waiting here?




Vocabulary
Living room


I clean the bottom of my shoes on mat, when I got home.
when it is hot I turn on the fan and sit on the sofa.
bookcase keeps book against wreck.
I turn lamp on when I go to bed.
I watch television after lunch everyday.


In the street


Traffic light prevents cars to disturb the street.
Eech street usually has kerb to limit cars to drive in line.
Nowadays we can see a lot of posters on walls in the street, advertise many things.
Some houses have railings around themselves.
There are always long queue in bakery.

Sha7ab
04-08-2009, 16:01
My Writing
Loneliness ! I heard this word for the first time in a song of Anathema band . If I wanna say the truth about my feels , the mentioned word isn't so bad … sometimes that word make me enjoyment and can make me more happy and think better. I don’t know why but its right .
But in this subject (What Is The Disadvantage Of Being Alone) we can propound a question . Is there any Disadvantage in Being Alone ? my answer is Yes ! for sure seclusion is a psychical malady that can make humen as psycho by the period of time . unfortunately in today societies , so many people are alone and pensive . But why ? Is that answer unless mechanic life and dependence to machines ? Sometimes I have seen people that even don’t talk ! they can thalk but don’t … I think this is one of the disadvantage of being alone .
Being alone is an adjective that come worry after that . everybody that is alone hasn’t any friend or hasn’t any good respect with his/her frinds . this can bring worry after a long time .The last question that propound , is "what should people do for solve theme Loneliness?" my answer by truth is "I don’t know"

I joined the group frome 5 or 6 days ago and its why my essay isn't good . anyway please excuse my wrongs

دوستان چون من از همین فعالیت وارد گروه شدم نتونستم گرامر و لغت رو بنویسم . از تمرین بعدی حتما اونارو هم مینویسم . ضمنا رایتینگم هم شرمنده مشکل زیاد داره ... اینم تمرین بعدی رفع میکنم .

dourtarin
04-08-2009, 17:44
What is the disadvantage of being alone?



Being of alone has several disadvantages for everybody, for example: unable to do some works, have a low supporation from others and be depressing.
We are able to do some works correctly but for others doing we need somebody’s help.This is included about personal and social works too. When we are alone, we get low supporation from others in our life. But we need to be perfect protection in our life. In long time, loneliness may be was serious reason for our depressing. Every body needs to have somebody in his life for support from mental aspect.
Finally, we should put equally between our solitude and relationship. In result of, we will have a normal life
.


Grammar


Lesson 6: past continuous


I was watching TV at 6 o’clock last Monday.
She was playing tennis at 7 o’clock yesterday evening.
While you were reading, I saw you.
When you came, I was doing my homework.
He was speaking by his father half an hour ago.


Lesson 7: present perfect 1


I have just finished my homework.
He has already written to his father.
She hasn’t finished her dinner yet.
They have just been to the shops. They’ve bought lots of things.
We have gone to ltaly.


Lesson 8: present perfect 2
I have taught English for 5 years.
She has been in France since 1980.
He has read this book for half an hour.
We haven’t seen her today.
? Have they driven a car before.


Lesson 9: present perfect continuous


She has been watching TV for half an hour.
He has been swimming since 4 o’clock.
We have been learning English for six months.
I have been teaching for 5 years.
They have been living here since 1990.


Vocabulary


Living room:


The television is on the table.
The lamp is behind the television.
The radio is near the bookcase.
The sofa is in front of the fan.
The switch is next to lamp.


The street:


You can put your waste paper in a little bin.
He can stand in a queue at the bus –stop.
The traffic-lights have turned to green.
The pedestrian can cross the road at a crossing.
The sings help people to find their way.

singleguy
04-08-2009, 18:35
Writing essay
Disadvantages of being alone
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What do you know about the disadvantages of loneliness? Some body who don't want to communicate with other people is an alone person and Loneliness has different levels. Some people are moody, some times they don't want to communicate with any other people and some time they don't feel good with loneliness and some people want to be alone in any situation.
Being alone has many advantages and disadvantages. Actually I've been a normal alone guy and I'll be alone for ever I guess. So I can tell you some disadvantages of being alone
It's pretty hard for an alone person to be happy. That's the first bad feeling of being alone in my opinion. No body pay much attention to an alone person because he/she don't talk to other people so no one knows his/er mistakes to pay attention to them and maybe it makes the alone person depressed and being depress is really dangerous and harmful for every one and it can cause mental or physical mistakes.
In my opinion every one need's some one to talk to and lean on, share his/er feelings, joys, sadness, secrets and etc, and an alone person can't bet for anything. He/she also can't tell any body how bad or good was the day and how bad/good luck was her/him for the day… and when the alone person want to really say something no one listen to him/her.
so It doesn't worth to be alone for long period of time and I suggest all of you not to leave you friends, family, partner and don't let the loneliness to overcome you. people around you need you, they feel you and maybe there is some one who loves you. You didn't created to spend your life lonely. so try enjoy your life and share it with others.

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Grammar activity
past continuous
I was ding some exercise when my mobile ranged.
when they were living in that tiny apartment, they had their first son.
I crashed with my car while I was driving fast.
I was looking her when I fall in the pool.
I want called you yesterday but you were looking somewhere else.


present perfect 1
new material has discovered to reduce the spoiling degree of water
I wrote very thing but I've lost the paper
no body is in the home,I guess they've gone out
how long have you been here?
it's night... haven't you done your homework yet
he has gone for touring the campus

present perfect 2
I've eaten alot in recent days
I haven't seen you in ages...what have you done lately?
have you had any problem this year?
It was the last time that I forgotten where my keys are
have you ever been to NYC?

present perfect continuous
you are out of breath...have you been exercising?
the door is wet. the painter has been painting it.
the motor is hot....have it been working?
I've been searching for this book for last week.
I've been sleeping all the night so I couldn't hear anything
I've been playing this sport since I was 10
I've been spending my time for 2years
how have been bearing this pain?
I called you but there was no answer...where have you been?
how long have you been smoking?
the food is a bit strange for them because they haven't been eating

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vocabulary
Livingroom
I turn off the lights and the lamp at night befor go to bed
I try to update my bookcase every year
when I come home after exercising I lean on the sofa or sit in the armchair to rest a little
the mats and the rug ate too messy let's wash them
leaning on the cousion make me faling asleep
pick up the papers on the floor and put them in the wast paper bin
the light hangs from the cilling

In the street
the most regulat thing on the streets are kerbs
signs are something that tell us the rules in the streets
you can put your letter in the post box in order to post it
you must cross the street when the traffic light is red and you are supposed to cross from the crossing.
you can't jump the queue when you are wating for the bus in the bus station
a park wardon is a person who take cares of the cars in a car park
pedestratios must wak just in the pavement not on the road


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sepid12ir
04-08-2009, 23:43
Brain's Writing



In The Name Of God
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Writing Activity
What Is The Disadvantage Of Being Alone

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Most of people like to associate with others so much and when they haven't close relations with others they feel loneliness feeling.The alone people feel nobody hear them well.When these people sense seclusion, they think that they have nobody.

We all sometimes feel loneliness feeling but loneliness feeling's some people is a chronic loneliness feeling.Chronic loneliness feeling is uncomfortable situation and it brings physics and mental disorders.It even can bring imminent death.Lately researches has shown who alone students have mental pressure more than other group students and they have bad situation asleep too.

Researchers researched in more than twenty countries then they discovered marrieds feel loneliness feeling less than bachelors.

The women and men find many different reasons for their loneliness.The men trounce themselves and the women trounce external causes.The men are bred as who start contacts and the women are bred as who wait and then answer.Maybe the men trounce themselves for they feel did a work for their loneliness while the women say why someone didn't telephone me.

How do you know that you are alone or not? If you say that you can't contact with others or you never find a ideal friend, maybe you will be alone forever


they haven't close friends: they don't have close friends

Lonliness feeling: feeling lonely
you've used it a lot, have u seen it sw?!l

nobody hear: nobody hears
for (nobody,anyone,somebody,someone) we always use singular verb of third person

who alone students: students who are alone; lonely students

marrieds feel lonliness feelings: married ones feel lonely

bred: ?!... sorry I couldn't get it

alone vs. lonely:

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There is a difference between being alone and being lonely. You can be in a crowd of people at Grand Central Station and still feel lonely. You might use the word alone when you describe the situation: "I feel so alone." However, you're in Grand Central freaking Station. You're not alone. You're lonely.

Maybe your job sent you on a trip to a foreign country. You're in a comfortable hotel, and just down stairs there's a lobby and a bar and a restaurant.. Maybe you're in a major metropolitan area. A real tourist trap with hundreds of thousands of people within spitting distance from your window. However, your spouse and your kids and your family and your friends and everyone you hold dear is on the other side of the ocean, or maybe the whole planet. You might be alone in your hotel room, but you're not alone in the world. You may however, feel lonely.

You can also be the only person in your house, and you haven't been with anyone notable for awhile and you don't plan to be with anyone notable for the forseeable future. Maybe it doesn't bother you. Maybe you meant for this to happen. Maybe you need to work on a project of some sort and need no distractions so you can concentrate. Maybe you're going to write that novel you've been meaning to write all your life. Maybe you need to do your taxes. Doesn't matter. The point is, you're alone and it doesn't bother you at all. You chose to be alone. You're comfortable with yourself and who you are. You're alone but you're not lonely.

It's uncomfortable to be lonely, but if you're not alone you can usually do something about it. If you're alone but not lonely, there's no problem at all, is there? The thing to avoid is being alone and lonely at the same time. That is perhaps the greatest trap to anything living



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Grammer
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Past Continuous

I was playing football when you called me.
They were climbing mountain.
She was reading her lessons at library.
We were not looking for baby.
You were washing dirty dishes when I was going out


I was going out: I went out
I think simple past here can be a better choice




Present Prefect 1

I haven't cooked dinner because of I haven't bought its materials yet.
She has brushed her teeth but she hasn't whashed her mouth.
They have done their work very good.
He has just gone , if you go faster you can see him.
Haven't you fed baby yet

Present Perfect 2

I have never fished , this is my first time.
You haven't flown with airplanein last week.
She hasn't forgiven me yet.
They haven't left our city.
I have never ridden a bike

Present Perfect Continuous

I have been standing here for some hours.
We have been talking about him.
You are still resting, you have been resting all the day.
He has been living there when he has born.
They have been working on my car but they have not repaired it yet

when he has born: since he was born





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Vocabulary
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Living Room

We don't have waste-paper bin in our house.
We don't have enough cushions for our guests.
Our mat has sludged very dirty, We should wash it.
This old rug is valuable and expensive.
Their house's ceiling has got wet and it maybe falls to(falls down on) them

In The Street

Some drivers sometimes cross lamp-box when it is red.
Gutters of this city are very dirty.
Pedestrains should walk in pavement not in the street.
Weather is rainy and roads are wet and dangerous.
Some people are waiting for bus at bus-stop




Goood Luck:11:l
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extreme2006gh


My Writing Activity


Disadvantages of LONLINESS



What is Loneliness?
Does it just mean: nobody is around you?
What are the disadvantages of loneliness?
Loneliness is not just being alone. Maybe you are in the group but you feel loneness again. Therefore I think we have two kinds of loneliness when you are physically alone and when you don t feel relax in the group, another type of loneliness. There are so many disadvantages for loneliness like feeling depressed after a while (can I use this collocation?), your social skills don t improve, you wouldn t be success in comparison when you are not alone.
When you are alone you don t have any interactions whit others and you have more time to think about everything. And it usually causes you think about negative issues. It means you think pessimistically and see everything in a bad way, then after a period of time you become depressed logically. Because it is result of pessimism.
Another disadvantage of loneliness is not improving your social and relationship skills. Because man is a social creature and he/she can grow in society. Having relationship and interactions whit other causes you face special situations and problems and make active your mind to solve them and eventually you learn how to act in this situation if you face it again.
One of the other disadvantages of loneliness is lack of success in life. I think it is a natural effect of two previous harms of loneliness. Because when you feel sick and depressed, you avoid of society then you can not have effective relationship and consequently your skills don t grow to comply your needs. And this means you are not successful. Because nowadays most important thing for succeeding is social relations.
Although loneness have so many disadvantages but it has some advantages too. For example you can sit somewhere alone and think about yourself and your behavior you had before and find your mistakes and finally reach to self knowing.
Therefore we sometimes need to be alone but we shouldn t allow it will became a habit.



you wouldn't be succes in comparision when you are not alone: you wouldn't(couldn't be) be successful in comparison with the time you are not alone

Another disadvantage of loneliness is not improving your social and relationship skills: another disadtg of being alone is not being able to improve your social and relationship skills..l
u could also write: another disavtg of being alone is that it prevets you form improving ...l

whit: with

avoid of society: avoid society(no article after that)

Although loneliness...., but....: although........., .......... . (no need to use 'but')

we shouldn't allow it will become: we shouldn't allow it become



Grammar

Present perfect 1, 2


I have done my homework.
It has stopped raining recently.
The buildings have just changed in our neighbourhood.
Don t forget to do your homework. I ve already done them.
Have n t you washed your hands yet ?
Have you ever ridden a aeroplane?
No, I have never ridden a plane.
I have phoned her 4 times today.
I haven, t gotten my driving license yet.
It, s the fourth times I, ve come here but nobody has been here to answer.


Past continuous


It was snowing when I went out.
When I got home, everybody was eating dinner.
Were you doing your homework at 10 last night?
I wasn t sleeping when you phoned.


Present perfect continuous


We have been sitting here for 2 hours.
He is a specialist engineer in his course. He has been studying for 10 years.
How long have you been waiting here?


Perfect:10:l




Vocabulary
Living room


I clean the bottom of my shoes on mat, when I got home.
when it is hot I turn on the fan and sit on the sofa.
bookcase keeps book against wreck.
I turn lamp on when I go to bed.
I watch television after lunch everyday.


In the street


Traffic light prevents cars to disturb the street.
Eech street usually has kerb to limit cars to drive in line.
Nowadays we can see a lot of posters on walls in the street, advertise many things.
Some houses have railings around themselves.
There are always long queue in bakery.


thanks....perfect
goood luck:11:l

armita2007
04-08-2009, 23:53
In the name of God




"THE DISADVANTAGES OF BEING ALONE"




Humans have been the sociable creatures at all times. They have been sharing their needs and ideas with each other .they have been organizing a big community in the best way which there is not any evidence from its creation. But with the advent of technology and new facilities in the recent centuries, people have been better and happier life by using some means like telephone, computer. Although the advantages of the new processes on both social matters and economical issues are influenced more than before, it is raised one important question: have human s tendencies and characteristics changed during this era due to the new development? Of course, the answer of this question is completely clear. Saying that one of its negative effects which they have had more influence on people has been that they tend to be intrinsic instead of extrinsic. Most of people usually like to lie down the sofa or armchair watching TV or to access to internet digging information more times for hours.



Being alone is a framework that could be taken for granted in the present .there are not any physical and emotional touches (contacts) among people .one of the main disadvantages of solitude could be related to a psychological process in this way that it can be very depressing and debilitating. Second, these groups of society can't communicate and share their ideas with others easily. On the one hand, they can't rely on persons(individuals) whether in the environment of their offices or not and make friends as the best way and on the other hand nobody can't adapt themselves in tune with their statues let alone to talk with them with mutual agreement. In fact, they have their own world that it is so different from common people one



In conclusion, the disadvantages of solitude have outweighed the advantages of it. So such awareness allows us to retain more viewpoints about this topic in order to enjoy our life with our families and friends.


vocabulary




Armchair: sitting in an armchair this man found his socks



Sofa: her grandfather sat on the sofa near door



Light: when the light of my room has suddenly flickered, I turned it off immediately



TV: I have thrown away my TV into the trash can



Car park: there isnot enough car parks next to this streets



Radio: your professor s lecture is broadcasting from the radio now .listen to it carefully



Road: police has arrested this thief in a narrow road



Bus stop: unfortunately, I have waited for you next to bus stop for 2 hours



Cross roads: it has been an accident at the next cross roads




Present perfect



I have planted many flowers in this garden since 1999



He has used milk up .there is anything to drink. Sorry



Your doctor has prescribed for you to heal up



Have you heard about this terrible news



why have you rang me up before I told you



Present perfect continues



Our teacher has been getting up early. He is yawning in the class now



Due to the accident, she hasn’t been driving with her own car



The dishes are so bright; surely Sally has been washing them carefully



They are so tired. They have been working on this project



She has been practicing more times for learning how to ride bike



Past continues


The weather was being so bad when I came home



I was reading my favorite story when you watched TV all the night



Were they putting up this picture on the wall for me



he was committing the crime when the police came there



I couldn’t understand that word ; she was speaking English very quickly

extreme2006gh
05-08-2009, 09:26
Another disadvantage of loneliness is not improving your social and relationship skills: another disadtg of being alone is not being able to improve your social and relationship skills..l
u could also write: another disavtg of being alone is that it prevets you form improving ...l





thanks for guiding :11:
could you tell me what the wrong is with Another disadvantage of loneliness ?
why can t I use this structure ?

گیسو
05-08-2009, 10:40
disadvantege of being alone


Some people are feel loneliness in any age because of many reasons such as social, personal or economical one. Although being alone has its advantages in some point of view but it has its disadvantages. One of most important perniciousness of being alone is that living in her or him thought and far it away of real world. This one can cause of many mental diseases. Other disadvantage of being alone is no one to share things with and make the person to become selfish. The third one is no stimulating conversation, no partner in pain and these are can effect on the person.
In the elder age it’s a difficult problem since in this section individual needs a companion and sympathetic partner for her or his life to take care of it. So find a
good partner.




Present perfect


I’ve lost my certificate.
They have bought a new house.
It’s her weeding and I haven’t bought her present.
When has he done his report?



Present perfect continues



They have been talking for the last hour.
She has been working at that company for three years.
We have been waiting here for over two hours.]
Have you been exercising lately?



Past continues


I was watching TV when she called.
When the phone rang, she was washing the dishes.
Mina was waiting for us when we got off the plane.



Vocabulary



Living room


Sofa: he was sleep on the sofa.
Floor: the walls and floor are damp for last night rain.
Television: he turned on the television to watch the move.
Radio: I heard the news on the radio.
Carpet: what’s the brand of your carpet?





In the street


Poster: the election posters already exist around the city.
Post box: most of post boxes are yellow.
Litter bin: There is a litter bin across his house.
Crossroads: the accident occurred at a busy crossroads in the center of the town.

sepid12ir
05-08-2009, 11:42
legend-of-zelda




My Writing
Loneliness ! I heard this word for the first time in a song of Anathema band . If I wanna say the truth about my feels , the mentioned word isn't so bad … sometimes that word makeS me enjoyment and can make me more happy and think better. I don’t know why but its right .
But in this subject (What Is The Disadvantage Of Being Alone) we can propound a question . Is there any Disadvantage in Being Alone ? my answer is Yes ! for sure seclusion is a psychical malady that can make humen as psycho by the period of time . unfortunately in today societies , so many people are alone and pensive . But why ? Is that answer unless mechanic life and dependence to machines ? Sometimes I have seen people that even don’t talk ! they can thalk but don’t … I think this is one of the disadvantage of being alone .
Being alone is an adjective that come worry after that . everybody that is alone hasn’t any friend or hasn’t any good respect with his/her frinds . this can bring worry after a long time .The last question that propound , is "what should people do for solve theme Loneliness?" my answer by truth is "I don’t know"

I joined the group frome 5 or 6 days ago and its why my essay isn't good . anyway please excuse my wrongs

دوستان چون من از همین فعالیت وارد گروه شدم نتونستم گرامر و لغت رو بنویسم . از تمرین بعدی حتما اونارو هم مینویسم . ضمنا رایتینگم هم شرمنده مشکل زیاد داره ... اینم تمرین بعدی رفع میکنم .


that word make me enjoyment: that word brings me joy
makes me enjoyment can not be true....makes me happy is better

this is one of the diadvantage: this is one of the disadvantages

that come worry after that: well, this sentence is not good! if I were you I would write 'that ends up in anxious'...l

hasn't any good respects with his/her friends: doesn't have respect for his friends

what should people to for slove them loneliness: what should people do for not feeling lonely?!l...
I think we never solve lonliness, it doesn't need to be solved:46:; we should do some actions to get out of being lonely; to end being lonely

by truth: honestly






What is the disadvantage of being alone?




Being of alone has several disadvantages for everybody, for example: unable to do some works, have a low supporation from others and be depressing.
We are able to do some works correctly but for others doing we need somebody’s help.This is included about personal and social works too. When we are alone, we get low supporation from others in our life. But we need to be perfect protection in our life. In long time, loneliness may be was serious reason for our depressing. Every body needs to have somebody in his life for support from mental aspect.
Finally, we should put equally between our solitude and relationship. In result of, we will have a normal life
.


Grammar



.



We have gone to ltaly.


being of alone: being alone

be depressing: be depressed
a situation or sth(weather, a song, a movie ,... ) can be depressing, and a person can be depressed

we get low supportation: we get low support

we need to be perfect protection in our life: we need to be protected well in our life

lonliness may be was serious reason: Lonliness may be a serious reason

and the only mistake in yr examples:
we have gone to Italy: we have been to Italy




Writing essay
Disadvantages of being alone
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What do you know about the disadvantages of loneliness? Some body who don't want to communicate with other people is an alone person and Loneliness has different levels. Some people are moody, some times they don't want to communicate with any other people and some time they don't feel good with loneliness and some people want to be alone in any situation.
Being alone has many advantages and disadvantages. Actually I've been a normal alone guy and I'll be alone for ever I guess. So I can tell you some disadvantages of being alone
It's pretty hard for an alone person to be happy. That's the first bad feeling of being alone in my opinion. No body pay much attention to an alone person because he/she don't talk to other people so no one knows his/er mistakes to pay attention to them and maybe it makes the alone person depressed and being depress is really dangerous and harmful for every one and it can cause mental or physical mistakes.
In my opinion every one need's some one to talk to and lean on, share his/er feelings, joys, sadness, secrets and etc, and an alone person can't bet for anything. He/she also can't tell any body how bad or good was the day and how bad/good luck was her/him for the day… and when the alone person wantS to really say something no one listen to him/her.
so It doesn't worth to be alone for long period of time and I suggest all of you not to leave your friends, family, partner and don't let the loneliness to overcome you. people around you need you, they feel you and maybe there is some one who loves you. You didn't created to spend your life lonely. so try enjoy your life and share it with others.

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Grammar activity

It was the last time that I forgotten where my keys ar

I turn off the lights and the lamp at night befor go to bed




a mistake which u've made two or three times:
we treat with 'nobody,someone, somebody, anyone' like a third person so we use singular verb of the third person...nobody knows...
some body who don't want: somebody who doesn't want

Being depress: being depressed

it doesn't worth to be alone: it is not worth being alone

n two mistakes which caught my eyes:
It was the last time that I forgot where my keys are

befor go: befor going

sepid12ir
05-08-2009, 11:45
thanks for guiding :11:
could you tell me what the wrong is with Another disadvantage of loneliness ?
why can t I use this structure ?



hey, yrwelcome
that one is not wrong, disavtg of being alone seems more naturall to me... it shouldn't be wrong:46:l

masoudtr
05-08-2009, 14:45
What do you know about the disadvantages of loneliness?
You know i think i have the master degree in loneliness
Because i always was loneliness.it dosent means nobody wasn’t around me
It means i know people more than another .they want to use me and when i finish for them they forget me.they leave me and find new one
So i prefer to be alone it is not pretty bad. Of course you must work harder .You must ignore some heartbeat
And you become more moody than before
You can’t trust to other people
you lose your friends. I mean real friends
I have a lot of friend they always call me and want me to join them in party ,meeting,outside,but they aren’t real friends because when you have a problem they reject you.
I think we have just two real friends one mother
Two father
past continuous
i was fighting with my ole enemy when you killed my dog
i was shooting the birds in sky when you ran to jungle
she insult me while i was leaving her
you were in my home when i was searching for you
my parents were searching for you when you hide in dresser
Present Prefect
I have already seen him
I have found the letter
I have done it
I have eaten my launch
He hasn’t done his work
Present perfect 2
Have you ever seen ricky martin in live cocert?
I havent killed any body yet
She hasn’t any boyfriend yet
Have you ever danced in street ?
He has hit me agein.

i'm sorry i can't finish my vocab
:41::41:

rayhaneh
05-08-2009, 21:43
Disadvantages of loneliness

"Pray that your loneliness may spur you into finding

something to live for, great enough to die for."

Dag Hammarskjold--


Loneliness has many different types .sometimes people around us leave us alone, in this case we are forced to be alone and it's painful. In other case we chose by our self to be alone; this type can be more fruitful and less harmful. But as whole when loneliness becomes a long term situation or feeling and exceeds the time limit, then it harms the person and escaping from it becomes difficult.



The first disadvantage of loneliness is that it make its prey depressed and blue and draw away his/her hope of living and this feeling could be very destructive.

Human being is a social animal; he learns everything from his surroundings, people and things; obviously, when he goes away from them then he will not learn, enjoy and live a productive life.

As we have a quote in Persian, the mistake of a man remains hide and uncorrected until he begins speaking, it's true. So, loneliness in a way

prevents us from improving and correcting our faults.



At the end, I want to conclude it that harmfulness or usefulness of everything in this world depends on the way we use that. Loneliness could have advantages as well as disadvantages!


Grammar
Present prefect1

I have worked hard

You haven't washed your clothes yet.

Has she visited you since last week?

He has already gone.

Have you seen my pen somewhere here?

Present prefect1

Have you ever been to India?

I've never drunk tea after dinner.

She's not eaten anything since morning.

Have you seen that movie?

He has read that novel three times.





Past continues

I was writing the letter at eight o'clock.

She was cleaning the house when I visited her.

We were not sleeping when you called.

Was he reading while you called on him?

They were going out at that time.

Present prefect continues

I have been working here since 2005.

She has been reading for 3 hours.

Have they been eating since we went.

Has she been waiting for us since 2 o'clock?

How long have you been studding English?





Vocabulary

The living room

I bought a fan yesterday.

Your key is on the sofa.

Her shoe is on the mat, pick it up.

They wash the carpet together.



In the street

Pedestrians should walk on the pavement.

I put the paper in the liter-bin

She was standing in the queue at the bus stop.

We parked our car in a car park.

There was no parking meter on the road.

محمد88
05-08-2009, 23:03
WRITING
.

even though I see no disadvantage of being alone, I wanna talk about probable disadvantages
.at first, I want to tell you my deduction about this
I think when you are alone there are some advantages and of course some disadvantages
and it is not justly if you think it has only AD or disAD
anyway....whenever I was alone in my life, I have made my best desicion, therefore I think loneliness is the time
for thinking, focussing of attention, listening to calm musics, watching some special movies, reading books and ascending your soul
and also when you are alone you can get rid of some people who you don't enjoy to connect them
in spite of this, you should be able to know how to relate to people
these ADs that I've mentioned above, don't mean that I advise you to be alone all the times
because in my opinion, if somebody remains alone for a long time; he'll get into a depression mood
and that is the first disAD of loneliness....the second one is getting lack of good public relations
(and it happens in a long time, too)

by the way I will be alone all the times, after this summer, because my best friend will go to Malaysia for living
he has been my friend for 10 years and we have had houndreds of good memories with each other

.
GRAMMER
.

PAST CONTINOUS
.the dog was barking when I went into the yard
.Hassan was doing his homework while I was fooling around
:31:I was shouting in his ear when he was asleep
.it was starting to rain when I went out
.He was palying football while the glass got broken
.
PRESENT PERFECT
.I have done my home work
.she has been in this town for 5 days
.Mina has been able to write since she was 5
.Ali Kbar has eaten his food
:31:I've just finished my present perfect acivity
.
PRESENT PERFECT CONTINUOS
?how long have you been getting here
.I have been writing for the exam
.she has been joking in a bad time
.I have been nagging to my friend for an hour

.
VOCABLUARY
.

LIVING ROOM
radio : the radio, right over there, is too old and out of order
!! TV : I didn't touch the TV, I don't know why it is so dirty
floor : plz clean the floor yourself
.sofa : last night, I fell aslpeet on the sofa
.carpet : the carpet got torn up, because the child pulled it so hard
.
IN THE STREET
.pavement : the pavements in Tehran are usually narrow
!! bus stop : there is no bus stop in this street
:31:poster : I do hate the posters which belongs to somebody
queue : I hate to stand in queue of bus ticket
.trafic light : the trafic light in this street is red most of the times

sepid12ir
05-08-2009, 23:48
In the name of God




"THE DISADVANTAGES OF BEING ALONE"




Humans have been the sociable creatures at all times. They have been sharing their needs and ideas with each other .they have been organizing a big community in the best way which there is not any evidence from its creation. But with the advent of technology and new facilities in the recent centuries, people have been better and happier life by using some means like telephone, computer. Although the advantages of the new processes on both socialmatters and economical issues are influenced more than before, it is raised one important question: have human s tendencies and characteristics changed during this era due to the new development? Of course, the answer of this question is completely clear. Saying that one of its negative effects which they have had more influence on people has been that they tend to be intrinsic instead of extrinsic. Most of people usually like to lie down the sofa or armchair watching TV or to access to internet digging information more times for hours.



Being alone is a framework that could be taken for granted in the present .there are not any physical and emotional touches (contacts) among people .one of the main disadvantages of solitude could be related to a psychological process in this way that it can be very depressing and debilitating. Second, these groups of society can't communicate and share their ideas with others easily. On the one hand, they can't rely on persons(individuals) whether in the environment of their offices or not and make friends as the best way and on the other hand nobody can't adapt themselves in tune with their statues let alone to talk with them with mutual agreement. In fact, they have their own world that it is so different from common people one



In conclusion, the disadvantages of solitude have outweighed the advantages of it. So such awareness allows us to retain more viewpoints about this topic in order to enjoy our life with our families and friends.



perfect, yr examples had no problem

n yr writing was one the bests here

people have been better life: doesn't make sense?! people's life has got better n happier

it is raised: it has raised

nobody can't adopt themselevs: nobody can adopt him/erself
nobody itself makes a sentence negative, no need to bring 'not'... besides, as I said before nobody should be treated like a third person...l





Some people are feel loneliness in any age because of many reasons such as social, personal or economical one. Although being alone has its advantages in some point of view but it has its disadvantages. One of most important perniciousness of being alone is that living in her or him thought and far it away of real world. This one can cause of many mental diseases. Other disadvantage of being alone is no one to share things with and make the person to become selfish. The third one is no stimulating conversation, no partner in pain and these are can effect on the person.
In the elder age it’s a difficult problem since in this section individual needs a companion and sympathetic partner for her or his life to take care of it. So find a





goood, couldn't find any mistake in yr examples
but yr writing:
some people are feel loneliness: some people feel lonely

one of most important: one of the most important

other disadvatage: other disadvantages

is no one to share things with: is not having anyone to share things with
you have made this mistake for three times:
is no stimulating conversation
no partner in pain

these are can effect on the person: these can effect on people






What do you know about the disadvantages of loneliness?
You know i think i have the master degree in loneliness
Because i always was loneliness.it dosent means nobody wasn’t around me
It means i know people more than another .they want to use me and when i finish for them they forget me.they leave me and find new one
So i prefer to be alone it is not pretty bad. Of course you must work harder .You must ignore some heartbeat
And you become more moody than before
You can’t trust to other people
you lose your friends. I mean real friends
I have a lot of friend they always call me and want me to join them in party ,meeting,outside,but they aren’t real friends because when you have a problem they reject you.
I think we have just two real friends one mother
Two father




thanks for the examples, no important mistake
but the writing:
I was always loneliness: I have always been lonely

it doesn't means nobody wasn't: it doesn't mean that nobody is/was around me... if I were you I would write: It doesn't mean that I have nobody around

when I finish for them: when I'm done with them= when I finish the tasks

more moody: moodier

trust to other: trust others






Disadvantages of loneliness
"Pray that your loneliness may spur you into finding
something to live for, great enough to die for."
Dag Hammarskjold--



Loneliness has many different types .sometimes people around us leave us alone, in this case we are forced to be alone and it's painful. In other case we chose by our self to be alone; this type can be more fruitful and less harmful. But as whole when loneliness becomes a long term situation or feeling and exceeds the time limit, then it harms the person and escaping from it becomes difficult.
The first disadvantage of loneliness is that it make its prey depressed and blue and draw away his/her hope of living and this feeling could be very destructive.
Human being is a social animal; he learns everything from his surroundings, people and things; obviously, when he goes away from them then he will not learn, enjoy and live a productive life.
As we have a quote in Persian, the mistake of a man remains hide and uncorrected until he begins speaking, it's true. So, loneliness in a way
prevents us from improving and correcting our faults.
At the end, I want to conclude it that harmfulness or usefulness of everything in this world depends on the way we use that. Loneliness could have advantages as well as disadvantages!



sooooooooooooooooooooo perfect
I just think instead of 'hide' there u gotta use 'hidden'l



WRITING
.

even though I see no disadvantage of being alone, I wanna talk about probable disadvantages
.at first, I want to tell you my deduction about this
I think when you are alone there are some advantages and of course some disadvantages
and it is not justly if you think it has only AD or disAD
anyway....whenever I was alone in my life, I have made my best desicion, therefore I think loneliness is the time
for thinking, focussing of attention, listening to calm musics, watching some special movies, reading books and ascending your soul
and also when you are alone you can get rid of some people who you don't enjoy to connect them
in spite of this, you should be able to know how to relate to people
these ADs that I've mentioned above, don't mean that I advise you to be alone all the times
because in my opinion, if somebody remains alone for a long time; he'll get into a depression mood
and that is the first disAD of loneliness....the second one is getting lack of good public relations
(and it happens in a long time, too)

by the way I will be alone all the times, after this summer, because my best friend will go to Malaysia for living
he has been my friend for 10 years and we have had houndreds of good memories with each other

.


.He was palying football while the glass got broken
.



I just could find one mistake:10:l

whenever I've been alone

Atefeh1
06-08-2009, 01:21
My writing activity


What is the disadvantage of loneliness?


Loneliness is darkness
a never-ending night.
Even though the black won't go away,
you'll never fall asleep.(by k.l)

Loneliness is an emotional state in which a person has strong feeling of emptiness, hopeless and isolation.

Many people experience loneliness in their life. Its very common when a person losses an important relationship, one might fell lonely, even in the company of others. Loneliness may occur after marriage and after the birth of child for women or where the feeling of love can not be given or received. Loneliness contains many kinds and has different levels.

Loneliness can lead many disadvantages for example anxiety, panic attacks, phobias, depression, suicide, drug addiction, and chronic illness. Chronic loneliness (as opposed to the normal loneliness everyone feels from time to time) can be a serious condition and has been associated with an increased risk of death from cancer as well as stroke and cardiovascular disease. People who are socially isolated also report poor sleep quality and thus have diminished restorative processes.

Not feeling lonely may mean that you have a sense of balance in your life between being with others and being alone, and that you feel loved and cared about. This connection is so strong that, even when you are by yourself, you feel bonded to someone that others are there and will be there in spirit if not in person for you always. You have true friends and close family and the security of having someone there for you when you need them.

Vocabulary:

Living room

1. I sometimes listen to music from radio.

2. We have bought a new carpet for our living room

3. I have a bookcase in which I keep many kind of books

4. She turned off the light before sleeping

5. My mother put her foots on a carpet whenever she come out of bathroom

In the street

There is no bus stop near our house

The signs helped us to find our way when we travelled to Mashhad last time

The garden was surrounded by railing

There are many cars on the roads

I saw a long queue of people in front of bread shop

Present perfect 1, 2

You have seen every thing with your own eyes

My mother has gone for the hajj

I have not learnt this poem by heart

When has he bought a dozen eggs?

I have sent you a letter; please check your mail box

This is the best film I have ever seen

I finished my typing but I have not post it yet

We have already studied about structure of computer

Present perfect continue

I have been working since morning

Has she been living in this house for five years?

He has been working in our college since 1970

You have not been playing here for long

They have been repairing this wall for three days

Past continue

The light went out when I was reading

We were watching TV all evening

When I saw him he was going to his work

It was raining when we went out

My friends were waiting for me in the busstop



:41: sorry for late but did my best ............

dourtarin
06-08-2009, 22:33
In The Name Of God



Reading Activity


Require Time For This Activity = 15st - 18th Mordad










̏ Music is your own experience, your thoughts, your wisdom.



If you don’t live it, it won’t come out of your horn.”





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POP GROUPS USE OF FOLK



SONG STIRS DEBATE1




from National Public Radio




Over the past decade, combining traditional music from Africa, Latin America, and Asia with Western pop (2) and jazz has become commonplace.(3) But for a singer of traditional music, having your voice on a hit record (4) does not necessarily make you any money. Take the case of (5) Lee Fong Gwo, a Taiwanese rice farmer. His performance of a traditional song was recorded and later sold without his knowledge to a group of German pop musicians. The German musicians used the farmer’s voice in a song that became a big hit. All this has stirred an interesting debate: Who owns traditional music and should Lee Fong Gwo be paid for his performance?


FRANK KOLLER, REPORTER: For thousands of years, Lee Fong Gwo̓s family has made a living growing rice in the mountains of southern Taiwan. Gwo is an Ami; his ancestors came to Taiwan from the islands of Southeast Asia long before Chinese immigrants arrived from the mainland. Now 76, Lee Fong Gwo remembers learning to sing in these fields as a young boy.


LEE FONG GWO, AMI SINGER: [through a translator] Our water buffaloes needed someone to take care of them, and that was my Job until I was 12. In those days, I’d hear my whole family singing together as they worked in the rice paddies (6), and that’s how I first learned the songs.


FRANK KOLLER: A few miles away in the town of Taitung, you still see traces of (7) traditional Ami culture in Lee Fong Gwo̓s garage. We spent the afternoon sitting on small plastic chairs around a wok(8) filled with burning charcoal until Lee Fong Gwo asked me if I’d Like to hear him and his wife sing one of the old songs.
Lee Fong Gwo and his wife sing a traditional song which fades into (9)the pop song “Return to Innocence


This song, “Return to Innocence,” was recorded by the German band Enigma in 1994. “Return to Innocence” sold more than five million copies around the world that year, staying on the pop charts for more than six months. The man whose unique chanting starts and ends “Return to Innocence,” Lee Fong Gwo was never asked to be on the record and never received a cent (10) and that was never supposed to happen, says Professor Hsu Chang-Wei, an ethnomusicologist (11)at Taiwan University.
In 1987, with support from the Taiwanese government and the French Ministry of Culture, Hsu arranged for a group of Ami singers led by Lee Fong Gwo to visit Europe for a series of concerts.


PROFESSOR HSU CHANG – WEI, ETHNOMUSICOLOGIST, TAIWAN UNIVERSITY: [through a translator] In France, academics really liked the music and suggested that the performance be recorded. At that time, it was very rare to have Taiwanese ethnic music performed outside of Taiwan. It was agreed that the Ami singer could be recorded and published in France, but just one CD for academic research purposes only.


FRANK KOLLER: The problem was, no one ever asked the Ami singers. In 1992, the musicians of Enigma heard the CD and purchased from the France Ministry of culture what they assumed were the complete rights (12) to use Lee Fong Gwo̓s voice. Enigma paid $ 6,000. The problem was, once again, no one asked Lee Fong Gwo.
LEE FONG GWO: Two years ago, my granddaughter brought a tape home and played me the song on the Enigma record. That’s the first time I heard that Enigma had used my voice. I was very surprised and happy. It felt good to have people using my voice, but I was also surprised because I never sang such a song with all those other sounds, and I wondered how it was made.


FRANK KOLLER: When Ami leaders learned the story of Lee Fong Gwo̓s chanting on “Return to Innocence,” they wrote to Enigma in Germany. The band replied that since a legal contract had been signed with the French government, no further payments would be made. For its part, the French Ministry of Culture has not responded and Robin Lee, the director of Taiwan’s Association of Copyright Owners, says there’s little chance for appeal.(13) Lee says the copyright (14) for a piece of music belongs to its composer, but a rice farmer such as Lee Fong Gwo does not qualify.


ROBIN LEE, DIRECTOR, TAIWAN ASSOCIATION OF COPYRIGHT OWNERS: Because traditional music, by definition, is passed down from generation to generation over hundreds of years, we have lost who the original author is. It doesn’t just simply follow that anyone who performs traditional music owns the copyright for it. This is not music that belongs to Lee Fong Gwo. It is his culture’s music. It can’t belong to one man.


FRANK KOLLER: But the Ami do believe that the music belongs to Lee Fong Gwo. In fact, because Lee Fong Gwo is one of the oldest members of the tribe, they believe he is the music (15) and so does Professor Hsu Chang-Wei, the ethnomusicologist.


HSU CHANG – WEI: It’s really more a moral issue than a legal one. In cases like this, copyrights should apply to the tribal peoples themselves. If Enigma has indeed made a lot of money from using this tribal music, then it’s as if they were taking a treasure right from the tribe. They should pay something for that.



1. Stirs debate gets people talking about an issue
2. Western pop popular music from North America and Europe
3. Commonplace ordinary
4. a hit record a very successful record
5. take the case of consider the example of
6. rice paddies wet land where rice is grown
7. traces of signs of; example of
8. a wok a large pan that is shaped like a bowl
9. fades into slowly changes into
10. never received a cent didn’t get any money
11. ethnomusicologist someone who studies traditional music
12. complete rights full legal permission
13. for appeal for a legal review
14. copyright ownership
15. he is the music he has kept the music alive





The End

brain
08-08-2009, 11:44
My Summary
This reading is about a rice farmer who sings as a traditional singer.The name of the rice farmer is Lee Fong Gwo.One time he and his wife song one of the old songs for a reporter, Frank Koller.The song which they song faded into the pop song "Return to Innocence".This song was recorded by Enigma group and sold more than five million copies and Lee Fong Gwo never received a cent.This happen has stirred an intersting debate and someone opined about it


My New Words
stir
Wind stirred our ship in sea

decade
In next decade I will promise you this country will destroy

traditional music
I always hear the traditional music of Iran

commonplace
Most of musics have become commonplace

ancestor
One of my ancestor had been a scientist

immigrant
Many immigrants always come to city from villages

from generation to generation
This finger is arrived from generation to generation from our ancestors

dourtarin
08-08-2009, 11:52
This reading is about an Ami singer Lee Fong Gwo with his biography and copyright role in protection from tribal music. Of course we’ll see in this reading that copyright couldn’t protect from Lee Fong song. Frank koller a reporter says: Lee Fong Gwo family was rice farmers and came to Taiwan before Chinese immigrate. Lee Fong Gwo says that when he was taking care of their water buffaloes he understand how to learned the songs. Frank koller says that Lee Fong requested him to hear their sings. The song that they were singed was fades into the pop song “Return of Innocence.” Professor Hsu Chang-Wei, an ethnomusicologist at Taiwan University says: “Return of Innocence” song was much hit and gets much money for German band Enigma without Lee Fong knowledge and gets a cent of it. In 1987 a group of Ami singers led by Lee Fong went to Europe for a series of concerts. Professor Hsu Chang-Wei, Says: In France, academics suggested to records the music performs. Ami singers get allow recording one CD of their songs for academic research purpose in France. Frank koller says: In 1992, CD of Ami singers were bought by musicians of Enigma without asked from Lee Fong Gwo. Lee Fong was very surprise when heard his voice on the Enigma record. Ami leaders’ effort to get payment of That CD was unsuccessful. Lee, the director of Taiwan’s Association of Copyright Owners says the copyright for a piece of music belongs to its composer, but a rice farmer such as Lee Fong Gwo does not qualify. He says: This is not music that belongs to Lee Fong Gwo. It is his culture’s music. It can’t belong to one man. Frank Koller says: the Ami do believe the music belongs to Lee Fong, because he was one of the oldest members of the tribe. Hsu Chang-Wei Says: copyrights should apply to the peoples themselves and this case is a moral issue. Finally, for a singer of traditional music, having your voice on a hit record does not necessarily make you any money. Take the case of Lee Fong Gwo, a Taiwanese rice farmer.




New words:


Wisdom, Horn, Ancestor, Innocence, Chanting, ethnic, Owners, moral, treasure

armita2007
08-08-2009, 21:08
In the name of God



My summary




This story is about a farmer and singer called " Lee Fong Gwo". His performance of a traditional song was recorded and later sold without GAINING ANY MONEY BY a group of German pop musicians. The German musicians used the farmer’s voice in a song that became a big hit. He added that "Two years ago, my granddaughter brought a tape home and played me the song on the Enigma record. That’s the first time I heard that Enigma had used my voice. I was very surprised and happy. It felt good to have people using my voice, but I was also surprised because I never sang such a song with all those other sounds, and I was amazed how it was made". For this copyright, he was surprised and one person wrote a letter for that band which they had sung that song. THEY HAD A LEGAL ANSWER FOR THAT WORK



But some people say that the music belonged to Lee Fong Gwo.however, because Lee Fong Gwo is one of the oldest members of the tribe, they believe he has
kept the music alive
.

گیسو
09-08-2009, 15:49
In the name of God



This reading is about a traditional song which Lee Fong Gwo, a Taiwanese rice farmer sung it accidentally for a reporter and it became a famous song then the German musicians utilized his voice and didn’t pay him any money. It added that experts believe the original author of this sung is unknown but Ami believe that the music belongs to Lee Fong Gwo since he is the oldest member of clan.


Difficult words:


Commonplace: ordinary, unexceptional, undistinguished.
Qualify: gain certification, train
Tribe: ethnic group, family, dynasty, clan
Moral: good, righteous, upright, ethical
Indeed: in fact, in point of fact, truly, really, surely

Sha7ab
09-08-2009, 20:04
WOW ... there are somethings in this reading that surprised me ... I should say that Enigma is one of my favorite bands about two years and i have heard Return to Innocence more than ten times ! i never was thinking that Enigma take this sound from a man that is a farmer and live in Taiwan !! that surprised me ... special thank from dear dourtarin that choised this text to reading activity .
we are iranian people and every one of us know that pirate is a commonplace job in our country ... i think take a former's sound and use that in a track without his knowledge isnt good job and is a pirate active . but in totally that reading was very interesting and i should thank to dear dourtarin once more ...

and ultimately i want you to read Lyrics of "Return to Innocence"
Its awesome


Thats not the beginning of the end
Thats the return to yourself
The return to innocence.
Love - devotion
Feeling - emotion
.
Love - devotion
Feeling - emotion
.
Dont be afraid to be weak
Dont be too proud to be strong
Just look into your heart my friend
That will be the return to yourself
The return to innocence
.
If you want, then start to laugh
If you must, then start to cry
Be yourself dont hide
Just believe in destiny
.
Dont care what people say
Just follow your own way
Dont give up and use the chance
To return to innocence
.
Thats not the beginning of the end
Thats the return to yourself
The return to innocence
.
Dont care what people say
Follow just your own way
Follow just your own way
Dont give up, dont give up
To return, to return to innocence.
If you want then laugh
If you must then cry
Be yourself dont hide
Just believe in destiny.

sepid12ir
09-08-2009, 20:55
I wanted to thank everyone's corporation here, since the aim of Reading part is comprehending a passage so I almost never go thru the mistakes, but I read some of yr summaries; they mostly seem well-managed but in order to get more familiar with having a better and more well-organazied summary I just share an article on this matter which can be really useful and from now on, you guys can follow the tips to have a better summary of the articles you go thru:


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Atefeh1
09-08-2009, 21:40
Summery of the story


This story is about Lee Fong Gwo, a Taiwanese rice farmer. He is a traditional singer belongs to Ami tribe. A reporter named by Frank Koller made an interview with Lee Fong Gwo and find out the problem of Ami singers with France Ministry of culture. He reported that his performance of a traditional song was recorded by and later sold without his knowledge to German pop musicians. They used the farmer's voice in a song that became a big hit but Lee Fong Gwo was never asked to be on the record and did not get any money!



The Enigma (a group of German pop musicians) said sine a legal agreement had been signed with the French government; no further payments would be made. And the French Ministry of culture has not responded. but the Ami do think that the music belongs to Lee Fong Gwo.



At the end I am agree with HSU CHANG-WEI: If Enigma has indeed made a lot of money from using tribal music, they should pay something for that.

محمد88
09-08-2009, 22:07
.LEE FONG GWO is a rice farmer from Taiwan
He has been singing traditional music belongs to his tribe… and lots of people believe that, he is the keeper
Of this kind of traditional music
"Once he and his wife recorded a song which was similar to one of Enigma’s songs named "return to innocence
And Enigma used his voice in their song without paying a penny to poor man
: What has affected me was his beautiful spirit…when he said
".... I was very surprised and happy. It felt"
:37:Thereafter I read his speeches as a soft-hearted guy’s speech


.mainland : the main land is the main part of a country, in contrast to the islands around it
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. purchase : it is the act of buying something
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assume : if you assume something is true. you suppose that it is true, sometimes wrongly
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. chant : a chant is a word or group of words that is repeated over and over again
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contract : a contract is a written legal agreement. especialy one connected with the sale of some thing or with the caryying out of a job
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. moral : concerned with right or wrong behaviour

masoudtr
09-08-2009, 22:12
This story is about copy write
& rice farmer in taiwan who was lee fong
He & his wife sing a song for american reporter and this type receive to pop group and they use it into their song and get a lot of money but they didn’t pay any cent to lee fong

extreme2006gh
09-08-2009, 22:59
I hope I am not late

there are 3 minutes to 19th and then I still have time to put my summary::31::31:





Something stir debate us





It was started when Fong Gow a farmer who live in Taiwan composed a song is called Return to Innocence. Because of his condition he learnt to sing in childhood. When he was child the he remembers member of his family singing when they worked on rice paddies. Then he learnt to sing too.

Professor Hsu chang Wei, a ethnomusicologist at Taiwan university invited Fong Gow to have some concerts in Europe. They formed a band and went to France for performing concerts.

After they performed concerts in France, the academics who enjoyed that asked for recording it. Fong Gow accepted just one for researching purposes.

After that a German groupe, Enigma which heard their CD, bought the complete right of that CD without acquaintance of Fong Gow. They mixed it with some other voices and sold it all around the world. And they could earn a lot of money and famousness but nothing received to Fong Gow.

A few years later Fong Gow s granddaughter brought a tape home and played it and that was the moment he found this is his voice but he couldn t remember how it has happened.

Then he wrote to the German band but they told him we have legal permission and we bought it. He contact to French government but the ministry of culture didn reply. And this is the problem : who is the owner of the music?

Some say the copyright of music doesn t belong to one man but it belongs to people s culture.

Some people say it belongs to Fong Gow. Because he is the oldest man in his tribe.

And finally some say it is more moral problem than a legal one. Therefore people who earn a lot of money from Fong Gow s art should pay to him.





Hello Difficult Word :


Stir debated
We are stired debate on sth in the class.

Western music
I doin t like pop music at all because of it makes a lot of loudness.

Commonplace
Not observing the rules have become commonplace in this city.

A hit record
The poem which he compose have been become a hit record.

Rice paddy
There are a lot of rice paddies in north of Iran

Wok
We put coal in wok and fire them to keep ourselves warm.


Fade into
Hot weather is going to fade to cold during we pass summer to autumn.

Never received a cent
I did a lot of work for them but never received a cent.

Ethnomusicologist
Unfortunately we don t have any ethnomusicology course in our university and thus we don t have any ethnomusicologist.

Complete right
You don t have complete right for doing anything you like here.

For appeal ( I don’t understand the meaning . can somebody explain for me plz. I think it means Explain of something or someone but here we have for a legal review ????)

Copyright
We don’t have copyright law in our country and therefore producer of virtual goods don t gain their complete rights.

He is the music
Esfehani and Eftekhari are the music in our country.



I thank anybody if tell me my mistakes



good night

rayhaneh
09-08-2009, 23:33
My summery of the reading
In this reading a reporter FRANK KOLLER talks to us about the wrong use of composers of pop music from folklore music of Taiwan. His report is about the case,in which a German musician used the voice of a Taiwanese rice farmer, Lee Fong Gwo, in his song with out consulting him and paying him any money or even mentioning his name. the reporter talks to different related people about this fact and he tries to say that in under-discussion case copyright is preserved for Taiwanese farmer who sung the song since his childhood according to his tradition which he has inherited. But pop group paid no respect or attention to him morally and legally.

:11:

محمد88
10-08-2009, 00:57
" sorry...my dear Brain(:40: )has put this sentence for the word " decade
:20:I don't know why I think there is some thing wrong with this

decade
In next decade I will promise you this country will destroy
?maybe after " destroy " at the end of the sentence an object is used...what you think

sepid12ir
10-08-2009, 01:18
" sorry...my dear Brain(:40: )has put this sentence for the word " decade
:20:I don't know why I think there is some thing wrong with this

?maybe after " destroy " at the end of the sentence an object is used...what you think


the problem is destroy itself! it should be passive
In next decade, I promise you that this country will be destroyed
bcuz a country can't destroy anything, sth or sb destroys it

rayhaneh
10-08-2009, 05:54
vocabulary

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Hi my dear friends :11:
Today we have to study 2 pages of our vocabulary book
These two pages are about:

The seaside

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The country

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You need nothing to post in the topic for vocabulary now.
But have a look on the above pages and study these two topics by yourself.
Good Luck
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محمد88
10-08-2009, 22:29
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
GRAMMER ACTIVITY
UNIT 11
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? ... ( How Long Have You ( Been


: PART A
: Main Explanation
. we use the present perfect to talk about some thing that began in the past and still continues now[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
: compare the present and the present perfect
. Bill is in hospital[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
. He has been in hospital since Monday[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
. not Bill is in hospital since Monday[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
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? Do you know each other well[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
? Have you known each other for a long time[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
. not do you know[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
.
.She's waiting for somebody[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
.She's been waiting all morning[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
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? do they have a car[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
? How long have they had their car[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
.
: PART B
. I have known/ had/ lived etc. is the present perfect simple[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
. I have been learning / been waiting / been doing etc. is the present perfect continues[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
..
( when we ask or say ' how long ' , the continues is more usual ( see unit 10[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
.I've been learning English for six months[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
.It's been raining since lunchtime[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
.Richard has been doing the same job for 20 years[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
? How long have you been driving[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
. Since I was 17 ...


some verbs ( for example, know / like / believe ) aren't normally used in the continuous[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
( How long have you known Jane ? ( not have you been knowing[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
( I've had a pain in my stomach all day. ( not I've been having[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
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: PART C
: You can use either the present perfect continuous or simple with live and work[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
. Julia has been living / has lived in Paris for a long time[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
? How long have you been working / have you worked here[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
.
. But we use the simple ( I've lived , I've done etc. ) with always[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
( I've always lived in the country. ( not always been living[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
.
: PART D
: ( We say ' I haven't done something since/for.... ' ( present perfect simple [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
( I haven't seen Tom since Monday. ( Monday was the last time I saw him[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
( Sue hasn't phoned for ages. ( the last time she phoned was ages ago[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]


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بخش اول :
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] ما زمان ماضی نقلی را وقتی استفاده میکنیم که در گذشته اتفاق افتاده ، ولیکن هنوز ادامه داره ( یا تاثیرش هنوز موجوده )
جملات زیر رو با هم مقایسه کنید...
.
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]بیل در بیمارستان است ( یعنی همین حالا تو بیمارستانه . ) = Bill is in hospital
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]او از دوشنبه در بیمارستان است ( توجه شود که در گذشته بوده و حالا هم ادامه داره ) = He has been in hospital since Monday
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] is hospital since monday غلط میباشد...
.
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]آیا شما همدیگر رو به خوبی میشناسید ؟ = ? do you know each other well
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]آیا مدت زیادی است که شما همدیگر رو شناخته اید ؟ = ?Have you known each other for a long time
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]توجه شود که در جمله ی دوم باز هم نمیتوان do you know به کار برد....
.
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]او در حال صبر کردن برای کسی است = She's waiting for somebody
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]او تمام صبح را صبر کرد = She's been waiting all morning
.
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]آیا اونا یک ماشین دارن؟ = ? do they have a car
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]چه مدت است که آنها ماشینشان را دارن؟ = ? How long have they had their car
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بخش دوم :
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] افعالی مانند I have known / had / livedو ... ماضی نقلی هستند.
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] افعالی مانند I have been learning / been waiting / been doing و .... مربوط به زمان present perfect continuous میشوند.
.
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]زمانی که از How Long استفاده میکنیم ( چه خبری و چه پرسشی ) استفاده از present perfect continuous رایج تر میباشد.
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]من شش ماه است که انگلیسی می آموزم . = I've been learning English for six months
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]از زمان ناهار دارد باران میبارد = It's been rainig since lunchtime
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]بیست سال است که ریچارد همان کار را انجام میدهد = Richard has been doing the same job for 20 years
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]چه مدت است که رانندگی میکنی ؟ = ? How long Have you been driving
..از زمانیکه هفده ساله بودم = since I was 17
.
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]بعضی افعال ( مانند know / like / believe ) معمولا در present perfect conyinuous مورد استفاده قرار نمیگیرند.
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]چه مدت است که جین را میشناسی ؟ = ? How long have you known Jane
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]تمام طول روز معده درد داشتم = I've had a pain in my stomach all day
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]توجه شود که در دو جمله ی بالا have you been knowning و have been having به کار نمیرود.
.
بخش سوم :
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]برای افعالی مانند work و live میتوان هر دو زمان را به کار برد :
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] has been living / has lived in Paris for a ling time
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] How Long have you been working / have you worked here
.
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]اما زمانی که always رو در جمله می آوریم ، دیگر نمیتوان از continuous استفاده کرد و تنها میتوان present perfect معمولی رو به کار برد.
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]'ve always lived in the country
.
بخش چهارم :
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] haven't done something since/for
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] haven't seen Tom since Monday ( مفهوم این جمله این را میرساند که " من آخرین باری که تام را دیدم ، دوشنبه بود. " )
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] hasn't phoned for ages ( مفهوم این جمله این را می رساند که " آخرین باری که سو زنگ زد ، سالها پیش بود ".)


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Atefeh1
11-08-2009, 15:58
Unite: 12 When …? and How long …?




We use for and since to say how long something has been happening.




Use of for:



We use for + a period of time:



Two hours, a week, six months, ages, 50 years etc.))



I have been waiting for two hours.



Use of since:



We use since + the start of a period:



(8 o'clock, 1987, Christmas, Monday, lunchtime etc.)



Sally has been working here since April.



Compare of past simple and present perfect:



A: When did it start raining?



B: It started raining an hour ago / at 1 o'clock.




A: how long has it been raining?



B: It's been raining for an hour / since 1 o'clock.




We can use since / how long in another form:



It's + since something happened':



Its two years since I last saw Joe.



It means that I have not seen Joe for two years.




How long is it since…?'



How long is it since you last saw Joe?



It means when did you last see Joe?




[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]




درس 12
ما ازfor وsince برای بیان اینکه کار در چه مدت زمانی اتفاق افتاده استفاده میکنیم.
استفاده از for
For+مدت زمان
مثلا : I have been waiting for two hours
من برای دو ساعت منتظر مانده ام
قید هایی که میتوانیم برای نشان دادن مدت زمان استفاده کنیم اینها هستند:


Two hours, a week, six months, ages, 50 years etc.))



استفاده از since
Since +زمان شروع کار
مثلا: Sally has been working here since April
.سالی از ماه آوریل تا به حال در اینجا مشغول کار است.


مقایسه زمان گذشته ساده و زمان حال کامل:
A: When did it start raining?
الف: باران از کی شروع به باریدن کرده:
B: It started raining an hour ago / at 1 o'clock.
ب: از ساعت یک/ از یک ساعت پیش تا به حال باران در حال باریدن است.


مامیتوانیم از since / how long به صورتی دیگر استفاده کنیم:
میتوانیم از How long در جمله های سوالی استفاده کنیم
? (ادامه جمله) How long is it since…
مثلا: How long is it since you last saw Joe?
چه مدت از آخرین باری که جو را دیدی میگذرد؟
یعنی آخرین بار کی جو را دیدی؟


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It's + از زمانی که کار اتفاق افتاده
مثلا: Its two years since I last saw Joe
الان دوسال از وقتی که جو را برای اخرین بار دیدم میگذرد
یعنی دوسال است که جو را ندیده ام
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11-08-2009, 23:32
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Teaching English

Stephanie talks about her part-time job teaching English as a second language

Topic: Work
Length: 0:57
Accent: General American
Gender: F
Speed: Slow

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Princess Kaguya

This is an old tale about a poor couple, who adopt a very special baby

Topic: Folk Tales: Japanese
Length: 11:16
Accent: Japanese
Gender: F
Speed: Very Slow

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Rumblestiltskin

A fairy story about a little man who helps a young woman to spin gold from hay, but demands too much in return

Topic: Fairy Stories
Length: 5:35
Accent: General American
Gender: F
Speed: Medium

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14-08-2009, 23:15
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Whansinnig


Hello, my name is dafeny. I teach English as a second language in the united state we call it ESL

I went teaching ESL for 4 years .I started it when I started collage. I used to teach on

Thursday and Friday for one hour and a half every night. Most of my students are from

Guatemala and Mexico. Although I have some students from Czechoslovakia and Poland .

I really enjoy teaching English because it lets me people from others countries and it's very

nice to see how the students progressed. I like it even I spend a lot of time to try to teach

some one some thing and he finally learn it. It's very exciting


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rayhaneh


EASY


Hello my name is Stephanie. I teach English as a second language in the United States we called that ESL. I have been teaching ESL for four years. I started when I started college. I use to teach on Thursdays and Fridays for an hour and half every night. Most of my students are from Guatemala and Mexico, although


I've also had students from Czechoslovakia and Poland. I really enjoy teaching English because it lets me meet people from other countries and it's nice to see how the students progress. I really like it when I spend a lot of time trying to teach someone something and they finally learn it. It's very exiting.

MEDIUM

Once upon a time a very poor but with a very kind heart young man lived with a – his wife in a very poor village….she narrates so slow and in a very sleepy mood

HARD

Once upon a time there was a miller. Now the miller had to pay with the king acts what you have to offer. So the miller said, I have a daughter who can spin gold from hay. So the king said, ok well, how about you show this to me? So next day the miller brought his daughter to the king and the king placed her in a room with a big pile of hay and said, spin this gold by the end of the night or you lose your life. So the daughter sat there weeping and crying and thinking what gona I do I can not spin gold. So a couple of minutes later a little man walked in the door. Little man said, what's wrong? The daughter said, well the king asking to spin gold from this hay and I can not do that. So he said, well I can do it. What will you give me if I do it for you? She said, well I have nothing to give but I can give you necklace. So she took off necklace from her neck and she gave it on. So he sat there and woom, woom and he spin a whole wire of gold. Next morning, the king entered and said, wow, you spin the whole wire of gold that’s amazing! Well, she said, can I leave now? He said: No, you have to spin this bigger pile of hay. So she sat there, thinking and thinking and hoping the little man will return. So a couple of minutes later, he returned and said, what's wrong? well, I have to spin this bigger bigger pile of hay and I don't know how to do it. so she asked the little man: could you please owe me again. He said: what you give me this time? Well I don't have anything left but I have a ring in my finger. Would you like that? And so he said: sure so he sat there and woom woom woom and even faster and by the morning time the hay were all finished and all spin of gold. The king entered and said: wow and this time he got to be greedier and he said he gave her even more hay this time!! Bigger bigger pile of
hay to spin gold.soon a couple minutes later the little man entered the room and


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Madame Tussaud


Rumblestiltskin


Once up on a time, there was a miller. Now, ------- had a king and the king ask "what do you have to offer?" So, the miller said "I have a daughter who can spin gold from hay. So, the king said "OK, how about you show this to me". So, next day the miller brought his daughter to the king and the king placed her in a room with big pall hay & said "spin this gold but end of the night or you would life. So, the daughter was sad there, crying and think what I want to do. I can't spin gold. So couple minutes later, a little man walked in the door. Little man said " what's wrong ? " the daughter said " well , the king's asking me to spin gold from this hay " and I can't do that . So, he said "well, I can do it. What you give me if I do it for you? "She said" well, I have -------- to give but I can give you my necklace. So, she took off necklace of her neck and she gave it to him . So, he said them Rom …..Rom …. And spin all of hay----- gold. Next morning, the king entered and said "wow, you spin whole of hay to gold. That's amazing. "She said" can I leave now? " . He said "no. You have to spin this bigger, bigger pall of hay". So, she's sad and thinking and hopes the little man return. So, a couple minutes, little man returned and he said "what's wrong?" " well , I have to spin this bigger , bigger pall of hay and I don't know how do it ? " . So , she ask to man ( little man ) " could you please do it to me , again ? " . He said "what you give me this time?" "Well, I don't have any more things to left but I have a ring in my finger. Would you like that? " . He said "sure". So, he said "Row….Row…" and even faster and by the morning time, the hay was all finished and all spin to gold. The king entered to room and said wow, and this time you be quicker and he said he give her more hay this time, bigger, bigger pall of hay and spin more gold. So, on couple of minutes, little man returned, again and he asked do you have the same problem this night, lady? She said "yes, I do, but he want bigger, bigger mount of hay. Can you do it all? He said "sure. I could. But what do you have to offer this time? " . She said "nothing". So, the little man said "how about when you become queen, you give me your first son and daughter. The daughter said "sure. OK". She can't think anything else to do. So, he spins and spins all night until all finished and in the next morning, the king took the daughter as his wife. So, after she born child, little man came in to her room and said "Well, can I have my child, now? And she's sad then & crying and said "no, I'll give you anything, anything but my child ..." He said "we'll have 3 days, 3 whole days to figure out my name. If you can figure out after 3 days, you keep your child. So, she found a massager. She sent him out to looking, searching and searching for the most unusual names and when he came back she said "Is your name Casper?" He said "no". "Hiller?" He said "no". "Scamlly?" He said "no". On the 2nd day, little man returned and she told him ------name. "Askeborn?" He said "no". "Hillerd?" He said "no" and she mention like 5 more names. On 3ed day , she sent a massager out and he walked around the wood and he heard a man ( a little man )'s happy on one leg and crying : tomorrow I brew , today I bake and then the child I will take . -------------- The Rumblestitlskin is my name and he took this back to the queen and said "queen, I found it, I found it. I saw a little man and he said Rumblestitlskin is his name". So, when the little man returned she said "Is your name Harry?" he said "no". "Joan?" He said "no". "Rumblestitlskin". He said "What…. ---- told you. ----told you" and she ---- smiled and enjoyed and he return and spin and spin around. --------


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atefeh1


Easy:

Hello, my name is Stephanie. I teach English as a second language. In the united state we called that E. S. L. I have been teaching E. S. L, for four years. I stated it when I started the collage. I use to teach on Thursdays and Friday, for an hour and half every night. Most of my students are from Guatemala and Mexico. Although I also had some students from … and Poland. I really enjoyed in teaching English because it lets me meet people from other countries. And it's very nice to see, how the students progress. I really
like when, I spend a lot of time, try to teach someone something and I finally learn it. It's very exciting


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extreme2006gh


1
Hello
My name is Stephanie. I teach English as a second language. In the united state we call them ESL. I have been teaching ESL for four years. I started when I started college. I used to teach on Thursdays and Fridays for an hour and half every night. Most of my students are from Guatemala and Mexico. Although I also had student from Czechoslovakia and Poland. I really enjoy teaching English because it lets me meet people from other countries and it s very nice to see how the student progress. I really like it when I spend a lot of time to teach someone something and they finally learn it. It s very exciting.


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once upon a time a very poor but with very kind heart young man lived with his wife in a very poor village. The village is nearby actually fishing aport and he lived with got to sea and fishing fishes. Behind his very little tiny house there was a big bamboo -----
there are so many bamboo, bamboos and one day he came back from the sea and told his wife I see something is shiny in the ---- bamboot and his wife said oh yeah and so they looked the back of their backyard and the bamboo, lots of bamboos in their backyard and going through the mountain and then she said let s go and take a look so both went to see and what is really shiny in their bamboot dark bamboot among bamboos and then they found one bamboo very shiny and beautiful, so they said look at this why this bamboo is so shiny? And man said ok let cut it, so they cut the bamboo and they found a beautiful baby there. Gold baby and woman said look I found a little tiny baby here in this bamboo and man said oh yeah she is so beautiful. We don’t have at all babies, let adapt her and Id like to live here and she said yeah I love her ----- and they picked up little girl baby from bamboo. Baby was so beautiful and husky --- and I saw shiny and very very beautiful baby. Man said oh I find another shiny stuff, what is it? oh this is gold coin I found and so he picked up gold coin and went home, they were very poor and but they had very warm heart and kind gentle of people and they give a lot candy send cookies to kids and their neighbourhood who are always ---- so that they don t have anything to eat to use in their house. But the man just came back from the sea so they had a fish but they just picked up also gold coin and the they said ok let buy a beautiful clothes for baby and let s you know give her enough food and feed her. So they went to town and they came back with food and feed baby and they named baby Kagoya. And after that strange things was kept appearing, when they saw we would like to have a nice house, so that two ---- kagoya is going to enjoy -----. And then they always find shiny bamboo in the backyard and they go there and cut bamboo, then they find always gold coins there, so they bought a beautiful house and they bought beautiful ---for their daughter and they started living very happily and the kagoya became prettier and taller and taller and finally she has become a teenager, then she started sometimes looking up the moon and crying, so man and woman asked what happened to my daughter, what makes you so sad, then kagoya looked up her parents and said: dad and mum nothing, but I just said, I m just very very sad. I didn t tell dad and mum anything why she is crying. And when she reach seventeen years old, how beauty and nice gentle personality became famous and many many young men wanted to merry her and they came to their house and asked kagoya to be their wife. However kagoya didn t want to merry to anybody and one day loud of that region heard about beauty of kagoya and he came to see her and feeling lovely with her ---- ----- and so he proposed her but kagoya looks sad and said I can not merry you, and one they it was a forenoon and it was -----.and kagoya was looking after moon. Then they saw beautiful ship coming down from the moon to her and ship finally arrived near by her then four strong and worriers --- -------------- and they came to kagoya and they said princes kagoya I am old spring and second man said I am old winter and third man I am ------
-----------.and then behind four gentleman worrier there are seven beautiful ---- girl ---and then next girl said princes kagoya I am a lady one day and second one said I m lady Tuesday, lady Wednesday, lady Thursday, lady Friday, lady Saturday, lady Sunday, I m your servant ----- .
And they bought very ---- princes kagoya .
And the man and woman was so surprised because they treated kagoya so wonderful and they called kagoya ----- princes kagoya and then the man called ------.



And then beautiful music and beautiful smell just felt by air and kagoya said to her mum and dad thank you very much father and mother. Now I have to go back to my country so I can not merry to ---- and thank you very much I love you for ever. If you miss me look at moon then I am going to smile at you. Then princes kagoya boarded in the ship and then the ship going up to moon -----
The man and woman cried cried and cried because they miss kagoya so much so that every day they looked at the moon and talking about kagoya how are you? I miss you so much, I love you so much they said moon smiled .


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dourtarin


Easy: Teaching English

Hello, my name is Stephanie, I teach English as a second language in united stated we call E.S.L. I went teaching E.S.L. for four years. I started when I started collage. I used to teach on Thursdays and Fridays for an hour half every night. Most my student are from Guatemala and Mexico, also I was so here students from Czechoslovakia and Poland. I really enjoy teaching English because a lets meet people from other country. It’s very nice to see how that student progressed. I really like them. I spent a lot time to teach something and finally learn it. It’s very exciting.

Medium: Princess Kaguya

One …. Time a very poor but with very kind heart young man lived withhis wife in very poor village. The village is actually near by fishing port and he lived go to sea and fishing fishes. Behind his very little, tiny house there was big bamboo wood. There are so many bamboo woods and one day, he came back from sea and told his wife: I see some thing shine in there wood, bamboo wood and his wife said: oh, ya and so they looked back the bag yard and bamboo, bamboo woods in bag yard and going sure the moon time and then she said: let’s go and take a look, so both went to see, Oh, what really shining in there on bamboo dugs among bamboo woods. And then they found one bamboo are very shine, and are beautiful. So she said: look at this, what is bamboo, it’s so shine and man said: ok, letcut it. So he then cut bamboo and they found beautiful baby were gold baby and woman said: look I found a little tiny baby here in this bamboo and man said: oh, ya oh, she so beautiful. She is we don’t have awa babies. Let have adopt her and I like to live her and she said: ya, I love her very and they picked up…… baby from bamboo. Baby was so beautiful and has kiss pink and eyes shine and very very beautiful baby. Man said: oh, I found another shine stuff what is it? Oh, this is gold coin; I found and so they pick up the gold coin and went home. They were very poor and but they have very whom hard and kind gentle people and they give a lot kinds sand cook it’s to kids, in neva food how are always stopped, so that they don’t have any thing to eat, to use in the house but among just came back from sea so they have the fish. The just picked up the also gold coin and when wife said: ok let by beautiful o close baby and let you know give her enough food and fit her. So they went to town and came back with food and fit baby and they named baby Kaguya and after that ……, man one day said: oh, would you like have a nice house so that awa daughter kaguya is going to enjoy more space and then they always found shining bamboo in the bagyard and they go there, and cut bamboo when they found always gold coins there. So there …… beautiful house, and they bought beautiful crossed to the daughter and they started live in very happy and Kaguya be came been prettier, prettier and taller and taller and finally, she has became teenager. When she started some times looking up the moon and creak, so man and woman asked: what happened my daughter, what makes you so sad? Kaguya looked up….. and said: dad and mam, nothing but I just sad, I am just very very sad and didn’t tell on dad, mam anything why she is cry. And who she leg seventeen years old how beauty, and nice gentle personality be came famous and many many young man wanted marry her and they came to house and asked Kaguya to be their wife, wife. However kaguya didn’t want to married anybody, and one day, lolob that region her about beautiful kaguya and he came to see her and feeling love her, and so he per posed her but kaguya looked sad and said: no, I cannot married and one day it was fore moone and it was moone was beautiful and kaguya was looking at moone then they saw beautiful sheep coming down from moone to her and sheep finally arrived near by her then four foest toung and….. face final uni manner and they came to kaguya and said: princess kaguya I am lord spring. Second man said: I am lord winter and three man said: I am lord summer and Four man said: I am lord autumn and then behind four gentle men whole there are seven beautiful servants. Go….. And the next garset said: princess kaguya you harness, I am lady Monday, and second lady said: I am lady Tuesday, lady Wednesday, lady Thursday, lady Friday, lady Saturday, lady Sunday. I am your servant, your harness, you are wish is my command and they want very gentle told princess kaguya. The man and woman was so surprised because the tree kaguya so, so wonderful and they told kaguya, you harness princess kaguya and then the man cold lord winter told the man and woman: princess kaguya is my awa kings daughter… moon and we came here to bring come back to moone because she is now seventeen years old and then beautiful music and beautiful smile just feel with ear, and kaguya said to her mam and dad thank you very much father and mother now I have to go back to my country . So that I can on married to a lord and thank you very much I love you forever. When you miss me, you look at moone, then I am going to smile at you, then princess kaguya ….. in the sheep and sheep….. going up the moon and everybody said: goodbye princess kaguya. The man and woman cried, cried, cried because they missed the kaguya so much. So that everyday they looked moone at talking about kaguya, how are you, I miss you so
much, I love you so much, they is time they see moone smiles


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masoudrejae


One step one time a baby poor but with baby kind heart.
The village is actually near bye fishing pool and he live with .behind the baby little tiny house there was a big bamboo.there are so many bamboo bamboos and one day he came back from sea and told his wife i see something shiny in there wood bamboo and his wife said oh yeah so they look back yard and going through mountain and she said let’s go and take a look so both went to see what really shiny in the bamboo
Then they find one bamboo very shiny and beautiful.so he said look at this bamboo it’s so shiny and mom said ok lets cut it .and they find a beautiful gold baby.and mum said look i find little tiny baby in this bamboo


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once upon a time there was a miller now they know .... a king and the king act what do you have to offer so the miler said I have a doughter who can ... gold from hey so the king ... okay well how about it show this to me so the next day the ... of his daughter to the king the king ... what the big ... but end the night all usually life so the daughter sat there within crying and thinking one ... I do I can ... gold so ... later a little man opened the door little man said what's wrong the daughter said one of the king ... gold from the ... and I cant do that so ... I can do it who give if I can do it for you she said Ahh why ...must to give but I can give you negress so she took ... she ... so he sat there hmm hmm and ... whole gold next morning the king answered wow you ... whole of the gold that's amazing what she said can I leave now he said no you have to ... bigger bigger ... pay so she sat there and thinking and thinking ... return so ... minutes little man returend and said what's wrong well I have to ... bigger bigger ... pay and I don't know how do it so she asked the man little man could you please do it for me again he said owe you give this time well ... finger ... bad would you like that he said sure so he sat there hmm hmm even faster and by the morning time the pay ... finished ... gold the king entered the room and said wow and this time ... and he sat ... ever more give this time bigger bigger ... the pay ... more gold so ... minutes little man returned again and he asked ... this ... my lady she said yes I do but I need bigger and bigger once of ... king ... do it all he said sure I could but ... this time she said Ah nothing so the little man said well how about ... using come queen you give a first a son or daughter the daughter said sure okay she can ... anything else to do so he ... all night so ... all finished and the next morning the king set the daughter as his wife so after more child little man came into room and said ... my child now and she said there is ... and said no I couldn't do anything anything with my child he said we have ... three whole days to figure out my name and you can figure out that you can keep your child so she send messenger she ... looking and searching and searching by them ost usual name and when he came back she said ... your name Casper he said no Hailor he said no Skingly he said no on second days little man returned and she ... most ... names aske Born he said no Hailor he said no and she said by five more names and third day she sent a messenger out and he walk around the world and he ... man a little man ...



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محمد88




once upon a time ******* kind heart
Young Man living with his wife in a very poor village
The village is actually nearby fishing aport and he lived go to sea and fishing fishes
behind his very little tiny house there was big bamboo oot
there are so many bamboo, bamboo, bamboose...in monday he came back farom sea and told
his wife " I see something shiny their ootd, bamboo oodt"...and his wife said : "oh,yeah ??! " and so they looked,looked back, their back yard
and bamboo,lots of bamboos in their back yard... and going through the mountain
and then she said : "let's go and take look." so both went to see what really shining in the bamboo,dark bamboo, among bamboose
and then they found one bamboo very shiny and beautiful so visited
? look at this !! why this bamboo is so shiny
".and man said : " ok, let cut it
so he...they cut the bamboo... and they found a beautiful baby...gold baby
" and woman said : " look !! I found a little tiny baby here, in this bamboo
...and man said : " oh...yeah...oh she is so beautiful
."we don't have baby...let adopt her and I'd like to live her
and she said : " yeah...I love her *** ... and they picked up that little gar baby from bamboo...baby was so beautiful


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گیسو


Hello my name is Stefani; I teach English as a second language, in the United State we call that ESL. I’ve been teaching ESL for four years. I started it when I started collage. I use to teach Thursdays and Fridays for an hour and a half every night. Most of my students are from Guatemala and Mexico, although I‘ve also had students from Czechoslovakia and Poland. I really enjoy teaching English because it let’s me meet people from other countries and it’s very nice to see how the student progress. I really like it when I spend a lot of time trying to teach someone, something and they finally learn it, it’s very exciting.
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Once upon a time a very poor but with a very kind heart young man living with his wife in a very poor village. The village is actually near by a fishing port and he live go to sea and fishing fishes. Behind his very little …house there was a big bamboo… there are so many bamboos, and one day, he came back from sea and told his wife:” I see something is shiny in there …bamboo…, and his wife said: “ oh, yeah? And so they look to the back yard and the bamboo, lots of bamboos in the back yard and going thorough the mountain and then she said: “let’s go and take a look so both went to sea what really shining in the bamboo, dark bamboo among bamboos and then they found one bamboo very shiny and beautiful so they said look at this why this bamboo is so shiny? And man said ok let cut it, so they cut the bamboo and they found a beautiful baby there girl baby and woman said look, I found a little tiny baby here in this bamboo and man said:”oh, yeah, she is so beautiful, see we don’t have baby, and let’s adapt her and I’d like to raise her” and she said: “yeah, I love her already and they pick it up the little girl baby from bamboo. Baby was so beautiful and… is a pink and I saw shiny and very very beautiful baby. Man said “oh I found another shiny stuff, what is it? Oh this is gold coin, I found and so they pick it up gold coin and went home. They were very poor but they have very worm heart and kind gentle people and they give lots of candy cookies to kids in their neighborhood how are always stomped. So they don’t have anything to eat to use in their house, but a man just came back from sea so they had a fish, but they just pick it up also gold coin and then they said: ok let’s buy a beautiful cloths for baby and let’s give her enough food and feed her, so they went to town and came back with food and feed baby and they named the baby Kagoya and after that strange things happening. When men one day saw we would like to have a nice house so that have a daughter, Kagoya is going to enjoy most face and then they always found shiny bamboo in the back yard and they go there and cut bamboo and they found always gold coin there. So they built a beautiful house and they bought beautiful cloths to the daughter and they started living very happily and Kagoya became prettier prettier and taller and taller and finally she has become a teenager. Then she started sometimes looking up the moon and crying. So man and woman ask: what happen to my daughter? What’s make you so sad? Then Kagoya looked up… and said dad and mom, nothing but I just said I just very very sad and didn’t tell dad and mom anything why she is crying? And when she reach 17 years old how beauty and nice gentle…became famous and many many young man wanted to marry her and they came to their house and asked the Kagoya to be their wife. However Kagoya didn’t want to marry anybody and one day lord of that region heard about beauty of Kagoya and he came to see her and feel in love with her let him way and he propose to her, but Kagoya look and said: No, I can not marry you and one day it was a…moon and Kagoya was looking up moon. Then they saw beautiful sheep coming down from the moon to her and sheep finally a lived near by her then for strong worries…find to face and…find manner and then came to Kagoya and said: princes Kagoya


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hello, my name is Stephanie. i teach English as a second language. in the United States we call that E-S-L. i've been teaching E-S-L for four years. i started when i started college. i used to teach on Thursdays and Fridays for an hour and half every night. most of my students are from Guatemala and Mexico. although i've also had students from Czechoslovakia and Poland. i really enjoy teaching English because it lets me meet people from other countries, and it's very nice to see how the students progress. i really like it when i spend a lot of time trying to teach someone something and they finally learn it. it's very exciting.



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once upon a time, a very poor but with very kind heart young man lived with uh uh his wife in a very poor village. the village is actually nearby fishing port. and he lived_ uh go to sea and fishing uh um fishes. behind his very little uh tiny house, there was a big bamboo woods. there are so many bamboo, bamboo, bamboos... and uh one day... he he came back from sea and told his wife "i see something shinny in the wood, bamboo wood." And his wife said "oh yeah?" and so they looked uh looked back their back yard and bamboo, lots of bamboos in their backyard and going through the mountain. and then she said "let?s go and take a look." so both went to see uh what really shining in the uh bamboo, dark bamboo among bamboos. and then they found uh one bamboo uh very shinny and uh beautiful. so they said, "look at this, why this bamboo is so shinny. and the man said "ok, let?s cut it." so he they cut bamboo, and they found a beautiful baby there, girl baby. and woman said "look, i found a little tiny baby here in this bamboo." and man said "oh yea, oh she is so beautiful. since we don?t have baby, our babies, let?s adopt her and i?d like to raise her." and she said "yea, I love her already." and they picked up little girl baby from bamboo. the baby was so beautiful. and her skin is pink and eyes are shinny and very very beautiful baby. man said "oh I found I found another shiny stuff." "what is it?" "oh this is gold coin i found." and so they picked up gold coin and went home...
they they are very poor and but they?re_ they have very hear- warm heart and kind gentle people. and they gave a lots of candies and cookies to kids in their neighborhood who are always starved. so that they don?t have anything to eat usually in their house. but a man just came back from sea so they had fish. but they just picked up also gold coin. and then they said "ok, let?s buy a beautiful clothe for a baby and uh let?s yaknow give her enough food and uh feed her." so they went to town and came back with food and uh fed baby. and they named baby Kaguya... and uh after that, the strange things kept happening. when men thou- they thought "oh, we would like to have a nice house so that our daughter Kaguya is going to enjoy more space." and then they always found shinny bamboo in the back yard. and they go there and cut bamboo then they found always gold coins there. so they built a hou- beautiful house. and they bought beautiful clothes to their daughter and, and they started living very happily. and Kaguya became prettier and prettier and taller and taller. and finally, she has become teenager. then she started uh sometimes looking up the moon and uh crying. so man and woman asked "what happened to my daughter. what makes you so sad?." Kaguya looked up her parents and said "dad and mum, nothing. but i just sad, i?m just very very sad." and didn?t tell dad and mum anything why she?s crying. and when she reached seventeen years old, her beauty and nice gentle personality became famous. and many many young men wanted to marry her. and they came to their house and asked her, Kaguya, to be their wife, wife. however, Kaguya didn?t want to marry to anybody. and one day uh Lord of uh that region heard about beauty of Kaguya and he came to see her and fell in love with her right away. so he, he proposed her. but Kaguya looked sad and said "no, i cannot marry you."
and one day it was full moon. and it was_ moon was beautiful and Kaguya was looking up moon. then they saw beautiful ship coming down from moon to her. and ship finally arrived nearby her. then four four strong and_ warriors with dignified face and dignified manner and they came to Kaguya and said "Princess Kaguya, i am Lord Spring." and the second man said "i am the Lord Winter." and the third man said "i am Lord Spring, Summer." and fourth one said "i am Lord Autumn." and then behind four gentlemen warrior, there are seven beautiful servant girls are there. and then next, girls said "Princess Kaguya, your highness, i am uh i am Lady Monday." and second one said "i am Lady Tuesday..." " Lady Wednesday. Lady Thursday. Lady Friday. Lady Saturday. Lady Sunday. i?m your servant, your highness. your wish?s my command." and they bowed very gently toward Princess Kaguya... and the man and woman was so surprised because they treated Kaguya so so wonderful and they called Kaguya"your highness, Princess Kaguya." and then, uh the man called Lord Winter told the man and woman. "Princess Kaguya is my_ our king?s daughter, ruling moon. and we came here to uh bring her back to moon. because she?s now seventeen years old. and then beautiful music, and beautiful smell just filled with air. and Kaguya said to her mom and dad, "thank you very much, father and mother, now i have to go back to my country. so that i cannot marry marry to your Lord. and thank you very much. i love you forever. when you miss me, you look at moon, then, i?m going to smile at you." then Princess Kaguya... well, uh uh sh- boarded in a ship and they_ ship gradually going up to the moon. and everybody said "good bye, Princess Kaguya."
the man and woman cried, cried, cried because they missed Kaguya so much. so that everyday they looked at moon, and talking about Kaguya, "how are you? i miss you so much. i love you so much." then each time they say moon smiles.




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once upon a time there was miller. now the miller had favor with the king and the king asked "what do you have to offer?" so the miller said "i have a daughter who can spin gold from hay." so the king said "okay, well how 'bout you show this to me. so the next day the miller brought his daughter to the king and the king placed her in a room with a big pile of hay and said "spin this gold by the end of the night or you'll lose your life." so the daughter sat there weeping and crying and thinking "what am i gonna do? i cannot spin gold." so a couple of minutes later a little man walked in the door, little man said "what's wrong?" the daughter said "well the king has asked me to spin spin gold from this hay and i cannot do that." so he said "well i can do it. what will you give me if i can do it for you?" she said, "um. well i have nothing else to give but i can give you a necklace." so she took her necklace off her neck and she gave it to him. so he sat there and went vroom vroom and spin out the_ a whole wheel of gold. next morning the king entered and said "wow, you spin a whole thing of gold, that's amazing." "well" she said um "can i leave now?" he said "no. you have to spin this bigger, bigger pile of hay."
so she sat there thinking and thinking and hoping the little man would return. so in a couple of minutes the little man returned and he said "what is wrong?" "well i have to spin this bigger, bigger pile of hay and i don't know how to do it." so she asked the man the little man "could you please do it for me again?" and he said "what will you give me this time?" "well. i don't know if i've any more of that left, but i have a ring on my finger would you like that?" and so he sa_ he said "sure." so he sat down and vroom, vroom, vroom, even even faster and and by the morning time the hay was all finished and all spun of gold. the king entered the room and said "wow" and this time he got a little bit greedier and he said_ he gave her even more hay this time, bigger bigger piles of hay to spin more gold. so in a couple of minutes the little man returned again and he asked "do you have the same problem this night, my lady?" she said "yes i do. but it's even bigger and bigger amounts of hay. can you do it all?" he said "sure i could, but what do you have to offer this time?" she said uh "nothing." so the little man said, "well how about when you become queen you give me your first er son or daughter?" the daughter said "sure. okay." she couldn't think of anything else to do. so he spun and spun and spun all night until it was all finished, and the next morning the king took the daughter as his wife
so after after she bore a child the little man came into her room and said, "well can i have my child now?" and she sat there and cried and said "no. i'll give you anything, anything but my child." he said "well you have three days, three whole days to figure out my name. if you can figure it out on the third day, you can keep your child." so she found a messenger and she sent him out looking and searching and searching for the most unusual names. and when he came back, she said "is your name Caspar?" he said "no." "Hilary?" he said "no." "Skengly?" he said "no." on the second day the little man returned and then she had even more extraordinary names "Askaborn?" he said, "no," "Hilleard?" he said "no." and she mentioned like five more names. on the third day she sent the messenger out and he walked around the woods and he heard he heard a man, a little man, hopping on one leg and crying, "tomorrow i brew today i bake and then the child away i'll take, for Little Deans's my royal dame and Rumpelstiltskin is my name." and he took this back to the to the queen and said " er queen, i have found it i have found it. i saw the little man and he said Rumpelstiltskin is his name." so when the little man returned, she said "is your name er Harry?" he said "no." "John?" he said, "no." "Rumpelstiltskin?" and he said "what, a demon told you, a demon told you." and she just sat there and smiled in joy. and he turned and spun and spun





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rayhaneh
15-08-2009, 02:06
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This is the time to study our vocabulary book.The two topics which we have to cover today are


The house
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The weather
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don't forget to learn them all as these topics are included in the test .
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extreme2006gh
16-08-2009, 11:27
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How can we obstruct depressing in life ?


Remember these
1.At least 100 words, and tips dear sepid 12 told us

2. 5 example of Grammar

3. 5 example of Vocabulary

t.63
16-08-2009, 16:18
Hi guys

I am a new person and I like to join your group:20:

Is it possible? plz

extreme2006gh
18-08-2009, 04:33
How can we obstruct depressing in life?

Nowadays many people has faced this problem. For answering this question we should first know what depression is and which factors cause it. In this way we can answer the problem better. Knowing about the ingredients of every issues help us to find out it better to solve.
Actually depression is the normal result do feeling disability and discontent. Disability of doing something or acquiring something. If you attenuate about people who are depressed you will find that feeling disability as a main reason that creates depression.
We should know more about man and world which man live in it. Man is limited and world is very vast and expanded physically, intellectually and spiritually. Then another reason that can create depression is limitation of man. These factors I named them are the most important factors that creates depression and we can associate root of every reason to them.
Now we know well about the reason we can talk about how obstruct it.
The only way for preventing or obstructing of depression is changing your attitude and being content about what you have and what you are according what psychologists say. But only changing attitude is not enough, you should change to a right attitude, and because a man couldn t know about whole of world because of his limitation, he needs something extraterrestrial to guide him and give him discretion to the world then we need to the divine religious like Islam Christian and jewish.
For example Islam give us this attitude to the world and life:
It is temporary and you should ready for another world, then if you have any deficiency and disability consider God, being temporarily of world and existing another world. If you believe this attitude you will never be depressed or if you feel you can quickly recover yourself.


Grammar

(lesson 11)
1.I have been waiting here for two hours.
2.How long have they been married?
3.How long have you been learning English?
4.I have been living/ have lived in this neighborhood for two years.
5.I have been working/ have worked in this company since I left school.

(Lesson 12)
1.It s 3 years since we divorced.
2.It s 2 years since I started to learn English.
3.How long have you been divorced?
4.How long is it since you started learning English.





Vocabulary



The seaside
1.we have a bunglow outside the city in the countryside.
2.we can do sea sport like swimming, sailing, ride a rowing boat, kayak and canoe when we went to seaside.
3.you need a sunshade against harmful rays of sun when you lie on the beach.
4.last time we went to the beach, we didn t go to the hotel, we camped out.

The country
1.We collect all products and crops in the barn.
2.There is a beautiful valley with a lot of waterfalls in it near our city.
3.Every year in 15 Esfand we shovel the spoil with a shovel and plant a tree.
4.A forest is bigger than a wood with diversity of trees in it.
5.We can usually see horses and foals, chicken and chick, duck and duckling in a farm.

The house
1.Having a satellite dish is prohibited in Iran.
2.I installed a blind and curtain on the windows against sunshine.
3.We live in an apartment, on tenth floor.
4.Houses in countryside usually have fences around themselves.
5.people who are living in apartment don t have personal garden.

The weather
1.The weather was foggy we I left home in the morning.
2.Tropical areas in the world have hot and wet weather.
3.We have a freezing cold weather in north and south pole.
4.when it is snowy it s a good time to do winter sport like skiing.
5.In autumn we have a windy and changeable weather in our area.

dourtarin
18-08-2009, 11:23
How can we obstruct depressing in life?



We are human by different feeling and boiling. Everything in our existence inside and outside can effect on ours feeling. For example: one dear person death, sickness and etc. That is related to everybody ideal that how obstruct his depressing for example: sport, music, watching movie, travel, reading book and meditation but I have some scientific suggestion for everybody: tell your feeling, get decide, looking for answers, don’t be display, accept principle and belief to others
There are some feelings that were stopped in our existence. They should get time to show theirs. Speak, conversation, word… are good means to help our. When we have doubt and don’t get decide, we become worry that it makes we depressed early. Negative persons only see the problems and don’t see answers. We can looking for answers and solve our problems. Surely in this time we have a good feeling. The man that always tries to show him in perfect and good situation had to bear a heavy onus on his shoulder. We have a well mind by accept the truth in life. Who don’t belief to others don’t have good relationship with others. Don’t have deep relation. He doesn’t understand friendship means.
Finally these are good suggestion to do but maybe you have your special method. When I get depressed, I think of the good old memories and it returns smile back on my face.



Grammar:


Lesson11: How long have you (been)…?


1- How long has Mary been in holiday?
She has been in holiday since Sunday.


2- How long have you been worked in office?
I have been worked in office for two years.


3- How long have they repaired their car?
They have been repaired their car for one hour.


4- How long have you teaching Spanish?
I have been teaching Spanish for six years.


5- How long has she driving car?
She has been driving for two hour.


Lesson 12:for and since, when..? and how long..?


1-when did she see her mother?
She saw her mother an hour ago/ in hospital.


2- How long have you been played tennis?
I have been played tennis since morning.


3- How long is it since you went holiday?
It’s been since Monday.


4- How long is it since he made house?
It’s been since April.


5- It’s has been three months since she went French.


Vocabulary:


The seaside
1- Sunshade protects everybody from sun damages.
2- Horizon is very beautiful at sunset.
3- When sea is quiet we can get a special feeling.
4- There are hotel and bungalow around the sea.
5- We can travel by sailing boat to far away place.


The country:
1- Duck and duckling were swimming in pond.
2- Waterfall and stream are two beauty of environment.
3- I love living in field because everything is natural and lovely.
4- The bridge connects two away places together.
5- Farmers do many traveling works by tractor.



The house:
1- They put the satellite dish on house roof.
2- Please close the door, outside is cold.
3- Curtain was going back and front by wind blows.
4- He must paint the house face because it was old and dirty.
5- Garden is full of beautiful flowers.


The weather:
1- Everybody should wear warm clothes in snow days.
2- London is famous for it always fog.
3- When clouds cover the sky we don’t see the sun.
4- Green leafs on tree were moved by wind blows.
5- Nowadays forecast is important for agriculture.


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گیسو
18-08-2009, 15:15
In the name of my God



How can we obstruct depressing in life?
Soundness of mind is the most essential and basis part of individual’s health. In daily life we are face varieties problem that influence health of our mind and lack of attention can be dangerous for our health and it may cause of many physical and mental diseases and impress all aspect of our life so control of depressing has a main role to have a healthy life.
When we try to manage or control our depressing, depends of our point of view, can be positive or negative so each have differences affect on health of our body and spirit. In my opinion to prevent depressing in life has some simple way. First, communicate with other; there is no need to solve your problem singly, so you can speak with reliable friend who can be your best friend or one of your family’s members. The next is to calm the mind; each person has differences way for this item such as: listen to favorite music, reading a book, painting, meditation, deep breath, yoga. All are so useful to relaxation of mind. Third one is exercising; it’s the best way to increasing power of mind and body health. Forth; Have a restful sleep is so useful to decrease depressing. The next is helping others; this act can help you to be in company and encourage you to be in society. Other way is to write; try to write the best way of solving problem, it can really help you to think. Next one is omitting negative words; instead of using (disability) make use of (ability). At the end is praying; speak to God and ask him for help it help you a lot. Although these are so hard but try to make your life happier after this moment.


Grammar



Unit 11



1. How long has marry been a nurse?



2. How long have you been painting?



3. How long has she been studying physics?



4. How long has he been working in this position?



5. How long has mina been playing tennis?


Unit 12
1. She has been living here for two years.
2. I have been painting since I was seven years.
3. The post officer has been closed since 5 o’clock.
4. We have been working here for two years.
5. She has owned the book shop for ten years.

The weather
Forecast: he is the professional weather forecast.
Fog: Fog is blocking the airport.
Snow: out side the snow lay thick on the ground.
Rain: a light rain is begun to fall.
Sun: we all sat on the sun.
Wind: there was a fierce wind blowing.

The house
Fence: this prison has an electronic fence.
Path: he went up the path to his front door.
Stairs: he ran up the stairs.
Door: it has a safety door in back of building.
Gate: The prison gates are close behind him.

The country
Farm: his father worked on a farm.
Chicken: this hen has 2 chickens.
Forest: she has a group to cleaning the forest.
Valley: she is from a far valley.
Bridge: you’ll continuo the process of building the bridge.

The seaside
Tent: she boughs a big tent for their travel.
Horizon: she sees the smoke on the horizon.
Sand: he made the fish with sand.
Rocks: I sat down on the rock.
Towel: she has the pink towel for swimming.

armita2007
18-08-2009, 16:22
In the name of my God



How can we obstruct depressing in life?


In these days, human has dealt with new concerns such as developing new technologies and creating new means and facilities. Furthermore, our world has gotten progress rather than previous centuries. Today’s human adapt himself to this new process, but there is an important question; have these new facilities and development can use to help decreasing our depressing and stress? The answer is clear “no”.
We as a human have sometimes forgotten our sprit and mental needs. We just have been concerning our physical needs and we’ve turned to materialist. As psychologist believed “we can make a change if our situation in life doesn’t be as normal as the recent days”, so we just want to change. First of all, it should be distinguished why we feel depressing. “What problem cause to be felt it?” answering to these items can be the first step to solve our problem. Second, the most crucial factor in this matter is based on our will and motivation.
When we have known the reasons of depressing, it’s easy to reduce this problem. We should frank with other ourselves “I want to live at the best; I don’t want to be upset” The meditation and advising classes with psychologists are new modern ways in curing and getting over of depressing.
In other way in my opinion is attended in groups and to share our idea as opinions with other people. Of course it should be considered this wrote relationship with optimistic and happy people” this group of people to us to reduce regularly the negative feeling against all life scour family.
In conclusion, in order to have better life it is up to us what feeling we have had and will have in life’s viewing in people around us.



Grammar unit 11





How long have you lived in Los Angeles?

How long have you been married?

How long has she been skating?

How long has he worn glasses?

How long have you been studying math?



Grammar unit 12

He has been here since 9am.

He has been working since he arrived.

I have worked at the bank for two years.

He has played football for five years.

She has waiting here for 10 minuets.

The weather



Cloud: there were little white clouds high in the blue sky.
Rain: you can’t go home in this rain.
Snow: it was snowing quite heavily.
Mist: she likes the mist of early morning.
Sun: you need plenty of sun and fresh air.

The house
Garage: he parked his car in the open rather in a lock up garage.
Satellite dish: they put the satellite dish on the roof.
Chimney: factory chimneys belch out soot in to the atmosphere.
Curtain: his room has a dark blue curtain.
Gate: they closed the airport gate to make the plan ready to fly.

The country
Waterfall: their village has a beautiful waterfall.
Cow: she feed her baby from cow’s milk.
Wood: we gather wood for making fire.
Tractor: he pares the tractor engine.
Farm: john is working with tractor on a farm.

The seaside
Sunshade: her pink sunshade protect her skin of sun light.
Stones: he built a shelter with stones.
Wave: the waves broke on the beach.
Beach: he’s dealing with pollution on beach.
Sand: the children played in the sand.

Madame Tussaud
18-08-2009, 20:20
How can we obstruct depressing in life
Life consists of defeats and successes. Defeats and successes make a lovely life together same as ugliness and beauty, bitterness and sweetness that having meaning significant together. Everyone experienced defeat and success in different form and had different reaction to confront with them. Defeat usually has a bad influence on person. It's natural he feel bad about that but the way to face with defeat is very important. Trying to learn of defeats is the success key of prosperous people. On the other hand, some people are weak in front of defeats and become depressed. Depressed people think that the world is against their desire, future is dark and they're unable to confront with problems. This people will lose their confidence, soon. This kind of people should do some things to get rid of depressing , like replace positive ideas with negative ideas , exercise , engage in their interests , spend times with their close friends , determining some available aims for themselves , meet a counselor to get some advise and many other useful acts .


Grammer

Lesson11

How long has she been a lawyer

How long have you had your car

They have been watching TV for a few minutes

She has had a headache since she got up this morning

How long have you been on vacation?

Lesson12

The sun's been shining all day.
He's been driving for 7 hours

They've worked in the hotel since January

He's had a beard since he was 20

I bought these earrings since my birthday






Vocabulary


The country

Farmers keep their crops in barn after the harvest

The highest waterfall in the world is Angel in Venezuela

Gardener digs the ground with spade and plant flowers

He plough field with tractor

They gave her a foal as her birthday's gift



The seaside

They spend the weekend at the seaside.

Sea is usually wavy in winter's days. Its dangers to sailing

They participated in a rowing boat race 3 months ago

On of the mountain climbers fell from cliff and died

Children played in the sand at the beach under the sunshade



The house

Curtains are stain. They need to wash

He wants to paint the living room's wall

He's repairing the roof. It's leaking

The fences are broken by the storm

They have some old equipment in their garage



The weather

It was foggy. They miss the path

Trees in the street are broken because it was windy yesterday

You have to take a raincoat. It's wet

The weather's warm and humid in the summer.
In the winter, the weather is very cold. The water is freezing

Whansinnig
18-08-2009, 21:12
How can we obstruct depressing in life?


This is a serious question that always humans ask and try to find some answers for it. But as the human's effort the problem also develop, so every simple subject became harder and finding answer became harder too. This reel is always happening and no one can cut it, however the most important thing is how we can reduce this things.
Some how heumans think modern technologies can help them to pass depressing time in their life, such as all of communication systems and …
In other side there is some idea about religion and the effect of it in humans life, we can not say that is not effective in humans life but the most important thing is how we look at the religion in our life, how we believe it and how we use it in our life. It's not important which religion do humans have, all of them even undivided religions has this effect on life, although the important thing is we separate superstitions of religions. In this case religion can have an incredible effect to obstruct depressing in life
The other thing that it is always under consideration is the way of people think to their life. when ever the humans think change in looking to their life we can hope to reduce it. Even if some facilities are not available, or people have hard life.


Grammar:


Lesson 11:
1- Have you ever lived in foreign country?
2- I have written poems since I was 10.
3- I have lived in Austria for several years.
4- She has spoken nonstop for 3 hours.
5- He has done this work for a long time.


Lesson 12:
1-she has play piano since she was 15.
2- He has spoken English for several years.
3- How long have you work as a manager?
4-it has been the same condition since I was born.
5- Nobody has forgotten him for a long time.



Vocabulary:
Seaside:
1- The children like to play on sand.
2- There was left a lot of garbage on beach.
3- Sunset make a nice sight on see.
4- Some boat are waiting at pier to get on board the passengers.
5- There are a lot of hotel near the sea.


The country:
1- He works in a farm near the city.
2- She has afraid of going on the old bridge.
3- Woods are export to a lot of countries these days.
4- He doesn't have any power to use spade again.
5- The car passed the road around the hill speedy.



The house:
1- The children shouldn’t play in the garden.
2 - The walls really need to repaint.
3- There are some limited rules to put up the satellite dish on the roof.
4- Be sure you brings the keys before closing the door.
5- I like to draw the curtains during the sun rise and sun set


Weather:
1- Some times weather forecast is wrong.
2- The leaves were moved by wind.
3-the snow surrounds all over the city.
4-the sky has very beautiful view during the sunset.
5- Some areas dose not has any rain during a day.

sepid12ir
19-08-2009, 12:10
Before I go thru correcting yr mistakes, guys, I need yr help...lots of you are soooooooooooooo perfect at english and I'm so sure that u can notice some of the mistakes of yr friends...so plzzzzzz lift a finger n help me... :10:l
n besides, don't you guys think that there is a problem with the subject itself?!... wouldn't it be better if it was:
How can we obstruct depression in life[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]


How can we obstruct depressing in life?

Nowadays many people has faced this problem. For answering this question we should first know what depression is and which factors cause it. In this way we can answer the problem better. Knowing about the ingredients of every issues help us to find out it better to solve.
Actually depression is the normal result do feeling disability and discontent. Disability of doing something or acquiring something. If you attenuate about people who are depressed you will find that feeling disability as a main reason that creates depression.
We should know more about man and world which man liveS in it. Man is limited and world is very vast and expanded physically, intellectually and spiritually. Then another reason that can create depression is limitation of man. These factors I named them are the most important factors that creates depression and we can associate root of every reason to them.
Now we know well about the reason we can talk about how obstruct it.
The only way for preventing or obstructing of depression is changing your attitude and being content about what you have and what you are according what psychologists say. But only changing attitude is not enough, you should change to a right attitude, and because a man couldn t know about whole of world because of his limitation, he needs something extraterrestrial to guide him and give him discretion to the world then we need to the divine religious like Islam Christian and jewish.
For example Islam giveS us this attitude to the world and life:
It is temporary and you should ready for another world, then if you have any deficiency and disability consider God, being temporarily of world and existing another world. If you believe this attitude you will never be depressed or if you feel you can quickly recover yourself.



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no mistake in grammar n vocabulary part
but reading, so small problems

nowadays many people has faced this probkem: nowadays many people have/face this problem
since u've used 'nowadays' you have to use 'simple present'...l

now we know well about the reason we can talk about how obstruct it: now that we know well about the reasons, we can talk about obstructing it/we can talk about how to obstruct it
of course the first choise seems more natural to me....(obstructing it)l

should ready: shoud be ready

Consider God: sorry, I didn't quit get u here?! would u plz clarify it more...l

btw, be more careful about the third person 's' l

I correct others' mistakes as well.... :46:l
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How can we obstruct depressing in life?



We are human by different feelingS and boiling. Everything in our existence inside and outside can effect on ours feeling. For example: one dear person death, sickness and etc. That is related to everybody ideal that how obstruct his depressing for example: sport, music, watching movie, travel, reading book and meditation but I have some scientific suggestions for everybody: tell your feeling, get decide, looking for answers, don’t be display, accept principle and belief to others
There are some feelings that were stopped in our existence. They should get time to show theirs. Speak, conversation, word… are good means to help our. When we have doubt and don’t get decide, we become worry that it makes we depressed early. Negative persons only see the problems and don’t see answers. We can looking for answers and solve our problems. Surely in this time we have a good feeling. The man that always tries to show himSELF in perfect and good situation had to bear a heavy onus on his shoulder. We have a well mind by acceptING the truth in life. Who don’t belief to others don’t have good relationship with others. Don’t have deep relation. He doesn’t understand friendship means.
Finally these are good suggestion to do but maybe you have your special method. When I get depressed, I think of the good old memories and it returns smile back on my face.



2- How long have you been worked in office?
I have been worked in office for two years.


3- How long have they repaired their car?
They have been repaired their car for one hour.


4- How long have you teaching Spanish?
I have been teaching Spanish for six years.


5- How long has she driving car?
She has been driving for two hour.



2- How long have you been played tennis?
I have been played tennis since morning.


before I go thru the mistakes of yr writing, I gotta say about Present Perfect Progressive which seems you have problem with[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

first there is a difference between Present Perfect and Present Perfect Progressive;
First of all stick into yr mind that present perfect progressive is only used with action verbs; n its difference with Present Perfect is that in Progressive we are mentioning an action which hasn't finished yet and it is continuing...or you can see the result of what u've been doing
have a look at this example:
The phone bill is enormous. You've been calling your boyfriend in Australia, haven't you?l

But present perfect refers to an action which is finished... n the result of that is not so emphasized...l

the mistake u've made in yr examples is mostly about 'been'... been make a present perfect tense, progressive and the verb which comes with it should be progressive form:
- I've been playing tennis
- how long has she been driving car?l
n other mistakes which I want u to correct them yrself...

if there was any question left, let us know pal:11:l
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n now the mistakes of yr writing, u r pretty well at following a standard form of writing; way to go man
first off: be more careful of the countable nouns; when u use adverbs of quantity like some, a lot, ... u have to use 's' for the countable nouns:
different feelings
some suggestions

ours feeling: our feelings

don't be display: ?! sorry, I didn't get u here?!l

belief to others: believe others
belief ---> noun
believe---> verb

They should get time to show theirs: they should find time to show themselves= they should get the chance/ they should have the opportunity to show themselves

don’t get decide: can't decide

become worry: get worried

Negative persons: no grammar mistake, totally correct; but those people who are negetive are called pessimistic

We can looking: we can look
after modal verbs we have the present time of the verb... never gerund, never 's'...l

Who don’t belief to others don’t have good relationship: those who don't believe others, don't have a good relationship...

He doesn’t understand friendship means: he doesn't understand what friendship means



In the name of my God



How can we obstruct depressing in life?
Soundness of mind is the most essential and basis part of individual’s health. In daily life we are face varieties problem that influence health of our mind and lack of attention can be dangerous for our health and it may cause of many physical and mental diseases and impress all aspect of our life so control of depressing has a main role to have a healthy life.
When we try to manage or control our depressing, depends of our point of view, can be positive or negative so each have differences affect on health of our body and spirit. In my opinion to prevent depressing in life has some simple wayS. First, communicate with other; there is no need to solve your problem singly, so you can speak with reliable friend who can be your best friend or one of your family’s members. The next is to calm the mind; each person has differences way for this item such as: listen to favorite music, reading a book, painting, meditation, deep breath, yoga. All are so useful to relaxation of mind. Third one is exercising; it’s the best way to increasing power of mind and body health. Forth; Have a restful sleep is so useful to decrease depressing. The next is helping others; this act can help you to be in company and encourage you to be in society. Other way is to write; try to write the best way of solving problem, it can really help you to think. Next one is omitting negative words; instead of using (disability) make use of (ability). At the end is praying; speak to God and ask him for help it help you a lot. Although these are so hard but try to make your life happier after this moment.
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neither grammar, nor vocab mistake could I find:10:l
writing:

we are face varieties problem: we face variety of problems
face itself is a verb, no need to use 'are'l

it may cause of many: it may cause many

depressing: depression

family’s members: family members
no need to use 's

differences way: different way

to increasing: to increase
after to we mostly have the present form of a verb

p.s: since in yr writing u've been thru different reasons, it's highly recommended to use 'ing' form of the verb for mentioning the reasons...n all the reasons which are mentioned should follow the same form
as an examples u've written: have a useful sleep....while it's much better to wuse: having a restful sleep
n if u read it again, u see that u've written some of them in ing form n others in simple form... so try to follow it for furthur writings:10:l