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[Marichka]

when two opposite genders love each other, certainly they want to live a long life time by taking care of each other no matterwhat other s say. Whereas arranged marriage is something arranged by our elders who always wish their children to be happy. There is a huge margin between these two marriages.It is really difficult to make a concrete choice between arranged marriage and love marriage. People who strongly believe in arranged marriages are likely to look askance at a love marriage and firmly believe that the romantic couple find themselves amidst deep shock when their short sighted pleasure-seeking comes to an end. These are people who are convinced about arranged marriages and claim that their reasons for doing so are absolutely rational and sensible.
People who enter into arranged marriages usually do so for religious or cultural reasons. People who marry for love do so at the urgings of their own heart and mind. Many times, our culture and our religion are strong enough to hold even bad marriages together. And sometimes our "love" for a person lessens with time and circumstances. Without the culture and/or religious glue, love marriages have nothing to keep them together after the love has gone.

5/5

note: a large range of vocab is used and the organization of ideas from the beginning to the results were perfect.

[Marichka]

Difference between love marriage and arranged marriage

As we are observing these days love marriages are getting more common among the people while it was so for arranged marriages in the last decade but it doesn’t mean that love marriage is more successful.I compare them in this way : love marriage is just like a burning and hot matchstick which is very strong in the beginning and can easily burn something or somebody and obviously it will finish as quickly as it was burned .On the other hand an arranged marriage is like hot water inside a kettle so it will not burn so intensely and it will get cooled in a longer time as its inside a protection. But as whole I think neither of them is complete and the marriage which is formed by intermixing of these two is betterthan love marriage or arranged marriage.The third type of marriage is love come arranged

4.75/5

The conclusion is really suitable. more vocab could be used. some errors in panctuation

[Marichka]

In the name of freedom

Writing Activity : arranged marriage and love marriage

NOTICE: in this writing when I say love marriage and arranged marriage I mean definite kind of them and not an average kind
Though these types of discussions need deep studies, but I think none of them (arranged marriage and love marriage) is .... suitable without the other one.
I mean if two opposite genders love each other and love and love but an untactful love, there is not a bright future for them and I think all of us know a couple with these particulars.
On the other hand, I believe that if a couple only think about traditions and formalities and they don’t think about a lovely life for their future, there is not a bright future for them either.

If we want to classify these two types, I would call the first group “the result of unsatisfied l.u.s.t “and the second one “the result of being under some pressures like the limitation of age of marriage “
Unfortunately in countries such as Iran people usually aren’t satisfied. Majority of them try not to show... this but we can recognize that very easily. I give you some examples
One of the most highlighted examples is having roving eyes between men! It may be ridiculous but it’s a fact, when a man with a wife and child looks at a girl like what we are used too see... ....., it tells you He Is Not Satisfied in having s.e.x with his wife. And that have become a mental pain for him and for his social life.

Or another example; studies show that a large percentage of the reasons of divorcements is not being satisfied, especially for women…and it may be unreasonable too, but it’s a fact as well!
Investigations shows While 75 percent of men always reach orgasm during s.e.x, only 29 percent of women report the same. And it may cause bigger problems even divorcement as I told above.
I didn’t want to consider this discussion only in this manner, but we must know the reason of unsuccessful marriages,
whether love marriage or arranged marriage. And one of the most important reasons is this kind of problems.

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By the way, I do believe if we want to have a lifetime constant friend we should contemplate both love and arrangement and don’t forget that none of them aren’t useful lonely and they can filling void that is left by vanishing the other one in some special times. And both of them are incomplete without the other one and there is no difference between incomplete and incomplete.
.Wish every one have a successful marriage

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3/5

usage of conjunctions is perfect. The whole essay is irrelevant with the title. It should be about the advantages and disadvantages of the both marriage types NOT the reason why marriages don't last in some cases.

[rayhaneh]

Summery


Education is not a value tag that determines price of a human being but it's only a medium to help him in living a better life. It means we can not say a man with a high degree of education is 100% prefect and extra ordinary creature because he is only a man who has passed through different stages of education system and the significant thing is not the degree but the knowledge, skills and manners he has got from those stages. A true educated person is the one who is ready to do any job according to his abilities and skills not his degree to improve his life

[Madame Tussaud]

I knew he was in pain. I pushed him down to the ground. He fell onto the grass in front of the steps to the apartment building. Now it was my turn to take control.
I stood over him and asked, “Who are you? What do you want?” He didn’t answer. He had a ski hat on, so I couldn’t see his face

“Just get the hell away from this apartment building! You’re not welcome here!” he said.
I grabbed him by the shirt, pushed his face into the ground, and put his arm behind his back. He yelled even louder now. I think he was finally ready to stop fighting.
“Now, who are you? Why can’t I go inside the apartment?” I was getting angry and wanted some answers. I saw a few people come out of the apartment building to see what was happening.

But the man still didn’t say a word. He lifted himself up suddenly, and pushed me away. He looked at me coldly for a second, then ran into the street.

فهمیدم که درد داره. به زور روی زمین کشیدمش. افتاد روی چمن روبروی پله های ورودی. حالا نوبت من بود که اوضاع رو کنترل کنم


بالای سرش ایستادم و پرسیدم:"کی هستی؟ چی می خوای؟" جواب نداد. یه کلاه اسکی سرش بود، نمی تونستم صورتش رو ببینم (نمی تونستم صورتش رو ببینم چون یه کلاه اسکی سرش بود.)


گفت: فقط از این آپارتمان(لعنتی) دور شو! تو نباید اینجا باشی.


پیراهنش رو گرفتم، صورتش رو هل دادم سمت زمین، و دستش رو بردم پشتش. شروع کرد بلندتر داد بزنه. فکر کردم بالاخره می خواد تسلیم بشه(می خواد دعوا رو تمام کنه)


ازش پرسیدم: "حالا بگو کی هستی؟ چرا نمی تونم برم توی آپارتمان؟" خیلی عصبانی بودم و جواب می خواستم. چند نفر از ساختمان بیرون اومدن که ببینن چی شده.


اما یارو هنوزهیچی نمی گفت. یه دفعه بلند شد و به یه طرف هلم (هل م) داد. برای چند لحظه با بی تفاوتی نگاهم کرد و بعد دوید توی خیابان.

[محمد88]

READING ACTIVITY

education is a way to improve the country's progress. and we should notice that, it is not the aim by itself, but it is a mean to reach the aim
if we want to have a succesful education system, we mustn't limit ourself with usual systems, we should examine them and also we could examine new systems and ideas
although education and educated people are soo valuable for a country, but we cann't discalaim the influence of uneducated people like street sweepers
. and they are as required as the educated people
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[محمد88]

I knew he was in pain. I pushed him down to the ground. He fell onto the grass in front of the steps to the apartment building. Now it was my turn to take control.

I stood over him and asked, “Who are you? What do you want?” He didn’t answer. He had a ski hat on, so I couldn’t see his face.

“Just get the hell away from this apartment building! You’re not welcome here!” he said.

I grabbed him by the shirt, pushed his face into the ground, and put his arm behind his back. He yelled even louder now. I think he was finally ready to stop fighting.

“Now, who are you? Why can’t I go inside the apartment?” I was getting angry and wanted some answers. I saw a few people come out of the apartment building to see what was happening.

But the man still didn’t say a word. He lifted himself up suddenly, and pushed me away. He looked at me coldly for a second, then ran into the street.

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میدونستم که داره درد میکشه . هولش دادم رو زمین . افتاد روی چمنهای روبه روی پله های ساختمون . حالا نوبت من بود که بر اوضاع سیطره پیدا کنم .
بالای سرش ایستادم و ازش پرسیدم " تو کی هستی ؟ چی میخوای ؟ " جوابم رو نداد .
یک کلاه اسکی سرش بود ، لذا نتوستم صورتش رو ببینم . بهم گفت : " فقط گورتو از این ساختمون گم کن ! حضور تو در اینجا اصلا خوشایند نیست ! "
پیراهنش رو گرفتم ، صورتش رو چسبوندم به زمین و دستش رو گذاشتم پشتش . حالا دیگه حتی داشت بلندتر هم داد میزد.
فکر کردم بالاخره آماده شده که دعوا رو تموم کنه . " بینم حالا کی هستی ؟ چرا من نمیتونم برم تو ساختمون ؟ " دیگه داشتم قاطی میکردم و جواب میخواستم.
چند نفر رو دیدم که از ساختمون میان بیرون تا ببینن چه اتفاقی داشت میافتاد . اما این یارو هنوز یک کلمه هم حرف نزده بود .
یهو خودشو بلند کرد و منو پرتم کرد اونور . یه لحظه نگاه سردی بهم انداخت بعدش به سمت خیابون دوید .... .

[Atefeh1]

In the name of Allah

The Summery:

As education is a way to prepare individual for better life so we should choose a good system of education that help children in this way. In the modern countries it has been common to supply free education for all the people, but due to their degrees they refuse to do work with their hands as they thought it dirty and shameful. But we know that the work of a farmer is more important than a professor. Therefore in an educated society every one should do his job which is suited to his brain and ability. We can realize that all jobs are necessary to society, and it is very bad to be ashamed of one's work, or to scorn someone else is. Only such a type of education can be called valuable to society.

[singleguy]

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[Madame Tussaud]

I turned to find Anne to make sure she was okay. “Do you know who he was? Have you seen him before?” I asked.
“No, Dr. Reeves. I don’t come to my sister’s apartment very often. I don’t know who he is.”
Let me back up a minute: This morning in my office Anne had explained that two days ago, she was supposed to have lunch with her sister, Sarah Salas. When her sister didn’t come to the restaurant, Anne called Sarah’s apartment. There was no answer.
Anne went to her sister’s apartment right away and knocked on the door, but there was no one home. She called Sarah’s work. Her boss told Anne that Sarah had been missing for two days. So Anne decided to ask me to help find her sister and her sister’s husband, Bill, who was also missing.l

برگشتم که مطمئن بشم حال آن خوبه. ازش پرسیدم: "می دونی اون کی بود؟ قبلا دیدیش؟"
"نه، دکتر ریوز. من زیاد به خونه ی خواهرم نمی یام. اون مرد رو نمی شناسم."
اجازه بدید چند دقیقه برم بالا؛ امروز صبح تو دفترم آن گفت که دو روز قبل، می خواسته با خواهرش، سارا سالاس، ناهار برن بیرون. وقتی خواهرش به رستوران نمی ره، آن به آپارتمان سارا زنگ می زنه و کسی جواب نمی ده.
آن فورا به آپارتمان خواهرش می ره. در می زنه، ولی کسی خونه نبوده. رییس سارا به آن گفته که سارا دو روز بوده که سرکار نرفته. برای همین آن تصمیم می گیره برای پیدا کردن خواهر و شوهرخواهرش،بیل ،که اون هم گم شده بود، از من کمک بخواد.