Writing & Editing & Tips

[3ッドマクス]

Hi . I want to writ in english ! but i have a problem ! im a noob
please help me !

[sepid12ir]

Hi . I want to writ in english ! but i have a problem ! im a noob
please help me !

I think u just sell yourself short
you can write a sentence with the least possible mistakes so be brave, go on...write about whatever you like in a paragraph and we help you to find out yr mistakes if there was any... By the way, I think a group tp study English can also be of a great help for youl
Dun hesitate, write whatever you like, yr problems will be solvedl

[3ッドマクス]

you know what sepid12ir ! you are a good man thank you for help . i owe you

[sepid12ir]

hey guys,

I think this topic is one which can be of a great help for all of us, n since Singleguy is done with his own topic those who r interested in keeping their writings I do recommend u to join us here... we can come up with a topic n ask interested ones to have a piece of writing in at least 6 lines n for sure all writings will be corrected
... so if u r in just go on n rock here... it can be of some help indeed

Good luck guysl
Sepidehl

[brain]

Hi , sorry if I brought this topic up
Could you please someone take a look at this short story , and tell me my mistakes
There are many beautiful farms in our planet but
they are always in danger because
there are always some little creatures , we called them Dirty Bugs, and they
want to attack the farms and eat them all. You must defeat them and help the farmers to keep farms beauty as always. All farmers will appreciate your good job.

[sepid12ir]

Hi , sorry if I brought this topic up
Could you please someone take a look at this short story , and tell me my mistakes
There are many beautiful farms in our planet but
they are always in danger because
there are always some little creatures , we called them Dirty Bugs, and they
want to attack the farms and eat them all. You must defeat them and help the farmers to keep farms beauty as always. All farmers will appreciate your good job.

don't be sorry for bringing this topic up, I for one would be happy to see this topic up again i
it was good, but would be better if you had used "which are" instead of "they are". since we have "there are" twice and besides "they are" which sounds like "there are" and it's like having repetition which is better to be avoided ( I mean repetition )

We called: We call

want to: why not omitting it and use attack alone

good luck Brian, my dear old pal l

[singleguy]

hi
I steel have many problems writing formal letters

I want to write a letter to a master in a foreign university and I want to ask him to let me translate his article/book

can I put my essay here, and will anyone correct it?

[sepid12ir]

hi
I steel have many problems writing formal letters

I want to write a letter to a master in a foreign university and I want to ask him to let me translate his article/book

can I put my essay here, and will anyone correct it?

ye, definitely, why not?
no need to ask i

[singleguy]

Hello Professor --------
I'm studying electrical engineering in --------university and I'm interested in your book , ----------. My teacher Dr------- who was also graduated in A&M university of technology and I attempt to translate your book to Persian language and publish it in Iran and then we will set some courses based on this book in order to make a team and do activities in this field.
Thank you for taking the time to read this e-mail. I look forward to your response.
My Name
My phone number
My Email

[sepid12ir]

Hello Professor --------
I'm studying electrical engineering in --------university and I'm interested in your book , ----------. My teacher Dr------- who was also graduated in A&M university of technology and I attempt to translate your book to Persian language and publish it in Iran and then we will set some courses based on this book in order to make a team and do activities in this field.
Thank you for taking the time to read this e-mail. I look forward to your response.
My Name
My phone number
My Email

much better to use my instructor instead of my teacher! Teacher is kinda low, though it is correct and used.

attempt is also a correct word, but if I were you I would say eager to grab the attention
when u say attempt it's as if u have already decided on that while eager can be a kinda polite request
hmm?
so I would write my instructor and I are eager to translate your book

of course that's just an idea

good luck l