Let's Complete The Story

[minizoro]

NEW STORY

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Introduction about the story:
Story's Name:

NANIT

News: scientists have said that we'll be able to send tiny nano machines into human's body to cure various diseases. Nano machines can decompose cancer tumors; or other uses to improve human wealth.
News: scientists have said that artificial intelligence will reach to human's intelligence and then I'll pass through human's intelligence in future.

Now the story, which I inspired it by these news, will discuss about the advantages and disadvantages of these new technologies. I my self believe that artificial intelligence never can't reach human's intelligence; and if it does so maybe the nano machines do something against human in our body!
I know that some of you my dear friends are and some aren't agree with my view points about this matter. Maybe some body say rules can stop such this thing.
So just continue the story as you like I just want to say you what the story will about.
Indeed Nanit is the name of a very high-tech nano machine.

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STORY:

NANIT:

Year 2073 (65 years later) 6th of September:
Archi: Oh Mini, aren't you anxious that you are going to be the first person who is going to decompose his cancer tumor?
@mir: what kind of hesitation would he have that's so exiting [ooff, @mir jumps]
Minizoro: well you know Archi; how ever I am worry about the surgery's result but it's the best choice.
mohammad.clergyman: oh yeah and the most expensive one [everybody laugh]
Reporter comes over this old friendly group and interrupts their desirable enjoy, maybe if they know it'll be one of their last happiness they wouldn't let to the reporter to come in.
Reporter: May I enter?
@mir: [stops his laughing] Oh, of course. Hey mini here you are.
Reporter: Put the camera over there. Where is my shit microphone?
Mr. Minizoro; as the manager of the biggest communication company in whole world, the only person who been able to pay this surgery's charge, don't you think that if this surgery wouldn't be successful what will the company's destination be?
Mini: In the name of God. First of all we have organized this corporation and not just me, by the way I've trusted to all doctors and all machines which have helped to our corporation too, so why I shouldn't get back to life? And 1% if it happens my their friend will manage the company as we have done till now, just I'll be deleted, that's not important.
Reporter: But Mr. Zoro, we all know that you are the most important manager of the company, aren't you?
Mini: I said we are managers not me. Please ask another question.

NOTE:
1. c

ontinue as you like just not so much. I won't say so much any more.
2.Copy pervious parts in your posts

[SCYTHE]

Hey, it's a cool topic
Let's start to create a story?l

Are there any companions? If so, raise your hands

[nafare_aval]

i want to raise my hand but it says to me :im tired of typing!!!so what should i do

[C. Breezy]

? But what should we do

[محمد88]

I think someone should start a story and the other guys continue that
and they end it how they like
" if I'm not mistaken "

[SCYTHE]

Once, in a land so far away from here there was an abandoned village and in the village there was a garden with tall surrounding fences, no-one dared to enter the garden because each night frightening screams stroke the heavy eyelid of the village inhabitants

But it happened that a stranger passed that place

[محمد88]

Once, in a land so far away from here there was an abandoned village and in the village there was a garden with tall surrounding fences, no-one dared to enter the garden because each night frightening screams stroke the heavy eyelid of the village inhabitants
But it happened that a stranger passed that place

The stranger was a tall and vigorous young man who never scared from anything.He wanted to pass that village to get to his grandmother home in the next village because it was long time no news from her

when he entered the village , villagers showed him a long way to go to his grandmam's village , but he found out that this garden could be shortcut to go there
he reposed all over the day in the headman's house as a guest the headman was an old hospitable man and feed the young man very well
"at the moment of departure and when sun was going to set he told the young man " you should pass our village only from the way which we have showed you today morning and nothung else...and young man nodded to obey
!when he got far from that village he thought with himself " what a fool man! I chose this goddamned long way , while I could choose a better shortcutand he returned...when he got to the garden it was midnight and wolves were crying out
he thought that he will be safe from wolves in that huge garden surrounded by fences even though he was really brave

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...and at last he entered the garden
...he took about 15 steps and at that time he realized that he lost the way
at first he was very cool and was searching the gate he entered from...but no result
he was getting a little worried but wanted to preserve his coolness
he lighted a match...but wind didn't let it stay kindled
he lighted a new one but a bat collided to his hands and the second fire of match went out and also the match box fell down and got wet and out of order
"he brought out his knife of the pocket and shouted " ha ha ha...who the hell wants to beat me...come on!!
at that moment someone tapped on his shoulder he scared and returned while he wasn't able to see anything he began to running
he was runing constantly untill his left foot collided to a stone and he fell down....it thundered and make the place clear...in the light of thunder he saw thousands of people arround himself
"he was stabing with his knife but it seems nobody is here....suddenly someone told his name and also told " I'm here , I'll get you off the hook
.but he was scared as hell and attacked to the owner of voice and stabed her twenty time with her knife
he was shouting and stabing the woman that a branch fell on his head because s serve wind was blownig...he fainted
!!when he opened up his eyes he saw the poor granmam under his body and also he saw the trees which were very similar to human's body

[محمد88]

dear SCYTHE , I think nobody here wants to continue this topic
anyway thank you to put this story...and also nobody told me that my effort was bad or terrible
or anythingelse

[C. Breezy]

at first I thought it's like games in some English forums .... They start a story , next one continue it in for example 20 words , and this goes and goes and every one just write the continue of the story in 20 words , or some thing like this

[brain]

Hi guys
I always like this idea " Let's Complete The Story "
I agree with C.breezie's idea .... everyone should continue only with 20 words or something like this ...
dear Mohammad you wrote a lot ...anyway thank you
maybe I'll continue that as soon as possible.
c u soon