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    If people behave differently when they wear different clothes?l

    I undoubtedly agree that people’s behaviors are affected by their kind of clothing, and there so many arguments that this thought is true and through this essay I will convey some reasons to support this idea.

    One clear example that helps to approach this idea is that when you wear formal clothes and take part in a serious meeting or even walk in the street your actions are completely differently than when you wear casual clothing like T-shirt and jeans. In the first case, you try to show yourself as a gentleman and treat tactfully, whereas, in the second situation you are more free and convenient to make jokes with other people or even you can neglect some social costumes. Besides that, wearing stuff like hat or sunglasses more often than not cause some sense of confidence and coolness; or usually people wear things like necklace to make themselves appear better-looking or to imply their some particular beliefs.

    Moreover, one of the places that the effect of kind of clothing is detectable is office. Usually in offices the employees were uniform, perhaps one reason for that is to make distinction between clients and employees. But, I think when employees were such uniforms they comprehend that they are working for what firm or corporation and they must obey its rules, otherwise, defrauders and deceiver must compensate for their irresponsible actions.

    Finally, clothe color is also an important factor and truly has an effect on their owners’ feelings. For example, black color brings the feelings seriousness and grief, or red color makes happy and thriving sensation, and green color causes harmony and peace.

    All in all, from what has been discussed above, I can safely draw the conclusion that clothes which we wear do influences our manners and feelings and there are so many evidences and fact that approve this idea

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    Micheal, the neglected child of our former story who was detected by a couple was hospitalized for a while in a luxury hospital after his accident. he was released after three weeks when doctors became sure that he is healthy with no defection; by the time he wanted to leave the hospital, the head of hospital asked him to work with them in the hospital n become one the employees of this luxury hospital, since he was so popular among the people in his home-town n this could increase the number of clients of this hospital
    Undoubtedly this offer was one of the best offers Michael had ever given, it was one of his wishes, working in such a hospital. But he hesitated n did not reply very soon; first he wanted to consult with her parents. When he shared this offer with his parents, they were shocked n could not comprehend it well, they were so happy n they just thanked God for the gift which was given to them.l

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    If people behave differently when they wear different clothes?l


    I undoubtedly agree that people’s behaviors are affected by their kind of clothing, and there so many arguments that this thought is true and through this essay I will convey some reasons to support this idea.

    One clear example that helps to approach this idea is that when you wear formal clothes and take part in a serious meeting or even walk in the street your actions are completely differently than when you wear casual clothing like T-shirt and jeans. In the first case, you try to show yourself as a gentleman and treat tactfully, whereas, in the second situation you are more free and convenient to make jokes with other people or even you can neglect some social costumes. Besides that, wearing stuff like hat or sunglasses more often than not cause some sense of confidence and coolness; or usually people wear things like necklace to make themselves appear better-looking or to imply their some particular beliefs.

    Moreover, one of the places that the effect of kind of clothing is detectable is office. Usually in offices the employees were uniform, perhaps one reason for that is to make distinction between clients and employees. But, I think when employees were such uniforms they comprehend that they are working for what firm or corporation and they must obey its rules, otherwise, defrauders and deceiver must compensate for their irresponsible actions.

    Finally, clothe color is also an important factor and truly has an effect on their owners’ feelings. For example, black color brings the feelings seriousness and grief, or red color makes happy and thriving sensation, and green color causes harmony and peace.


    All in all, from what has been discussed above, I can safely draw the conclusion that clothes which we wear do influences our manners and feelings and there are so many evidences and fact that approve this idea
    vey nice subject a very nice essay. thaaanks
    well, I think it should be 'different'; not sure

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    پيش فرض Lesson 7

    In general, people are living longer. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon


    One of the outcomes of developing human’s science and culture is definitely increase in the average number of years that humans live on and this is a massive achievement which is unique to men that have an ability to interfere in nature in their own favor to postpone the time of death. In the following I will provide more explanation for my speculation.

    The most important reason for this phenomenon is development in knowledge that includes fields like anatomy, genetics, psychology, biology and also other nonmedical areas that are connected with medicine technically such as electronics, mechanics or alike. By using this knowledge diseases like rabies, malaria never threaten human’s life as before and nowadays vaccines (vaccine?) of so many diseases have been made that in past were the main reason of fatalities in big and small communities. This is very interesting that capsules that contain a special substance can preserve thousands of lives. Beside that, today we can forecast devastating natural disasters like torrents, cyclones, and floods that were gloomy and unforeseen phenomena for our ancestors and they tried to connect these events to the sky for example they taught that it is because of God’s resentment. Consequently, thanks to our increased data we can prepare ourselves before encountering these ex-tragedies.

    The other important factor is improvement in humanity and understanding of human-kind. During man’s history so many bloody battles happened resulted in many casualties. In past, any not consenting claims simply caused two sides (that could be two persons or tribes or nations) start to molest and fight one another. However, today there are organizations like national committee or court that people and governments can denounce their disagreements completely in a diplomatic manner without any violent actions.

    Overall, today’s people have more chance to breathe longer and I reckon two prominent factors of higher knowledge and culture are mainly involved in this improvement

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    Micheal, the neglected child of our former story who was detected by a couple was hospitalized for a while in a luxury hospital after his accident. he was released after three weeks when doctors became sure that he is healthy with no defection; by the time he wanted to leave the hospital, the head of hospital asked him to work with them in the hospital n become one of the employees of this luxury hospital, since he was so popular among the people in his home-town n this could increase the number of clients of this hospital
    Undoubtedly this offer was one of the best offers Michael had ever been given, it was one of his wishes, working in such a hospital. But he hesitated n did not reply very soon; first he wanted to consult with her parents. When he shared this offer with his parents, they were shocked n could not comprehend it well, they were so happy n they just thanked God for the gift which was given to them.l
    A fantastic and catchy storyl
    So nice! thanks a lot
    ==
    About "defection" I think it is better to use "infection"
    home-town=> hometown

    "consult with her parents", I'm not sure about this check it yourself:
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    Thanks a million for your attention and timel
    I'm learning a lot through this process, I hope this helpful exercise goes on

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    A fantastic and catchy storyl

    So nice! thanks a lot
    ==
    About "defection" I think it is better to use "infection"
    home-town=> hometown

    "consult with her parents", I'm not sure about this check it yourself:
    کد:
    برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید

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    Thanks a million for your attention and timel
    I'm learning a lot through this process, I hope this helpful exercise goes on
    I should be thaankful for yr nice considerationl
    about 'consult', that's what is written in Oxford: Consult~ (with) sb (about / on sth) to discuss sth with sb to get their permission for sth, or to help you make a decision

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    سلام.
    ببخشید من وقتی میخوام یه چیزی رو به انگلیسی بگم ، حتما باید قبلش فارسی شو بنویسم بعد تبدیلش کنم به انگلیسی ...
    خیلی کم پیش میاد که همین طوری یه جمله انگلیسی بدونه فکر به فارسی بگم .... باید چی کار کنم ؟
    در ضمن بهترین راه برای افزایش دایره لغت چیه ؟ متنه انگلیسی خوندن ؟
    (مثلا همین پست رو اگه میخواستم به انگلیسی بگم اصلا نمیشه ، حتما باید فارسیش جلوم باشه تا تبدیلش کنم )
    فکر کنم ضعف در جمله سازیه .... بهترین تمرین برای جمله سازی چیه ؟
    مرسی
    Hi
    sorry .... when I wnat to write somthing to english , certainly I have to write it to farsi and then I translate it to englsih
    meantime which way is better for increasing vocabularies
    reading english passeges ?
    (like if i want to write this sentece to english surly its farsi must in front of my eyes for translatoring )
    I think thtas why for making sentences ..... which way is better for make sentences ?
    thanks
    (قرار شد پست هامو به انگلیسی اینجا بگم و اساتید ایراداتشو بگیرن ) ty
    Last edited by brain; 24-01-2009 at 13:41.

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    Hi
    sorry .... when I wnat to write somthing to english , certainly I have to write it to farsi and then I translate it to englsih
    meantime which way is better for increasing vocabularies
    reading english passeges ?
    (like if i want to write this sentece to english surly its farsi must in front of my eyes for translatoring )
    I think thtas why for making sentences ..... which way is better for make sentences ?
    thanks
    (قرار شد پست هامو به انگلیسی اینجا بگم و اساتید ایراداتشو بگیرن ) ty
    well,
    to English: write in English/Farsi

    way is better for increasing : I think this is not correct; if I were you I would write: Which way is recommenِded/better if I want to improve my vocabulary?

    like: for example

    its farsi must in front of my eyes for translatoring: I couldn't get? what were u trying to say?did u mean: I have to have the farsi text with my self if I want to write in English?l

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    Plz keep writing in English in this topic(Farsi is forbidden here, n if there was any mistake which u had question about, u can ask here or even in grammatical problems' topic or even in سوالات خود را به فارسی مطرح کنید)l
    good luck



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    (مثلا همین پست رو اگه میخواستم به انگلیسی بگم اصلا نمیشه ، حتما باید فارسیش جلوم باشه تا تبدیلش کنم )
    فکر کنم ضعف در جمله سازیه .... بهترین تمرین برای جمله سازی چیه ؟
    For example, I can't write this post in English and I need to have it in Farsi available till I can translate it
    I guess the problem is my weakness in making English sentences... so, what's the best exercise for improving that?
    Your answer: KEEP GOING

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    really nice ....
    thanks thanks ....
    I really surprise
    nice nice....

    I learn many thing with ur answers
    TY

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