Let's Complete The Story

[mir@]

After passing all usual works for going to NY, they phoned Vahed and told the entire story to him and Mohammad. “Wow! How can I believe it? Are you right? Oh my god… thanks, thanks god! My son is alive..” Mohammad said happily. So Archi, Maryam, Amir, Narges and Minizoro went to US and visited Vahed and Mohammad, “It’s a bit strange for me, what’s your Boss’s motive?” Vahed said to Archi . Archi said “In fact I don’t know!!! I’m completely confused” all of them were thinking about that subject, after an enigmatic reticence Narges suddenly said “we can find AminTNT, and by finding him we can attain to Sara and her husband and also finally to dear Ali!” “But, how can we find AminTNT?” asked Minizoro. “Oo, yeah! Why I hadn’t thought about that hitherto?! Let’s go! I know how…” Vahed answered.
Everyone there, were wondered, so Vahed explained that there is a special Club in Manhattan that all wrongdoers join there which named “TNT Midnight Club”
“Of course we can find AminTNT or a clue of him in that club” Vahed said stalwartly.
Maryam and Amir decided to be near Archi in a hotel and Vahed, Narges and Minizoro went to Manhattan…l

Finally they reached to the club.
"Now, how should we found him?" asked Narges.
"Let's do a trick. I think it would be better to introduce our selves as his friends" suggested Vahed.
"Great opinion, but not all of us one of us, what's your idea if I go on?" minizoro said.
"I think its better. Your right" said Vahed.
"But honey be careful it would be dangerous." said Narges.
"Ok, ok don't worry about it have you forgot that I've got black belt, now you'd better go to the hotel I'll join you as soon as I can." minizoro replied.
Minizoro tried a lot and finally he got AminTNT.
"Are you Amin TNT?"minizoro asked. "Yeah I'm and you?" Amin said. "Do you remember Mike(Sara's husband)? He told me that you can do lot's of things." minizoro said.
a:"What kind?" m:"For example killing somebody." a:"well it depends; because Mike has sent you to me ok but how much would you pay?" m:"100$ is it ok?" a:"ok,Who is it?" m:"She is a woman named Narges. You should kill her by string in a hotel, and this is the address of hotel kill her tomorrow." a:"And money?" m:"Here is 50$ and the rest will be given tomorrow when you killed her" a:"it seems that everything is ok so the job will be ok too" m:"ok see you tomorrow evening bye."
Minizoro got back to the hotel. "Vahed have you told our plan to others" minizoro asked Vahed. "Yeah my friend, and does every thing went on ok?" asked Vahed "Yes great tomorrow every thing will be solved" minizoro replied.
And the next day they waited for amin TNT. Every one hid at room except Narges. Finally amin TNT reached. He attacked Narges to kill her. He was choking her that minizoro shot him on the ground. "Do you think I'll let you to kill my wife?" minizoro shouted amin tnt. Amin TNT turned around to ran away but he suddenly shoked by Maryam & Archi s' guns. "Hands up" said Archi. Vahed & @mir rushed to Amin TNT and arrested him

Vahed asked AminTNT about Ali. At first, he didn't answer, however, after Vahed's persistence and two tough slaps in his face, he told the whole story. He explained that he worked for Mike and Mike was the head of an international Mafia band that kidnapped children from their own families and sold them to rich families that suffered from lack of child. He added that they had sold Ali to a family that lived in Berlin, Germany and whose name was Zimmermann. Mr. Zimmermann was a senior manager of BMW company.l

Archi continues:
"Oh my goddd..you've sold my kid " Mohammad said and jumped toward Amintnt. @mir took Mohammad back and told him to control himself. Archi was moaning and crying in the arms of Maryam . "What have I done that I should face this consequences ???" Detective Minizoro got the complete information about Mr. Zimmermann and he arrested Amintnt. Minizoro sent back Amintnt and vahed to Iran for further investigations. They took the first flight to Berlin. Archi, Mohammad,@mir, Maryam, Love-to-learn and minzoro was on their way to Berlin.
It wasn't that hard to find BMW office in Berlin. "we don't have any proof about our claim to Mr. Zimmerman" Archi said. "The DNA test will find the truth " @mir replied. "But don't forget that it's not so easy to deal with the manager of BMW " Minizoro answered

They were really confused that what they could do. They have had lots of counseling's but they couldn't reach particular result. Finally @mir decided minizoro that if he could counsel to Vahed too. So minizoro called Vahed in Iran and asked him if he knows any ways for rescuing poor Ali. "Well I have been thinking of this since I finished works which are related to AminTNT. First of all you should prove that already Zimmermann had bought Ali from AminTNT" said Vahed. "yeah I know but how?!" minizoro said."You can film Zimmermann when he or his wife is with Ali, can't you" Vahed said. "Oh yeah your right" minizoro replied.
So minizoro said to other's what he's heard from Vahed. "So now here it's your turn to show that what you have learned in "p30world forums" is not vain, you are very professional in photographing and filming, here you are show what ever you are…" Mohammad said proudly to @mir. And now @mir

@mir continues

@mir got the address of Zimmermann's house from minizoro and took his camera. He went to Maryam's room to say goodbye. Maryam was absolutely worried. "@mir ... for God's sake ... don't go ... You are the only person I have in this world" She told. "Don't worry. I'll be back soon. God protects me" He moved to the door ... but Maryam couldn't suppress her tears ... @mir came back and hugged her strongly and kissed her lips with such a clamorous smack that Mohammad and Archi in the next room heard that and looked at each other and smiled c

It was an hour after midnight. @mir was on the roof of a building in front of Zimmermann's house. "This is not just a house ... This is a palace..." He muttered. All of a sudden, he noticed Mr. Zimmermann and his wife entered a room. He turned on the camera and zoomed on that window. Mrs. Zimmermann took off her robe and ... after 2 minutes ... "ooooooh..." ... @mir was gaping at the LCD of the camera ... suddenly he closed his eyes and turned off the camera .... "What am I doing? I should be ashamed of myself...I shouldn't film others' prvate relationships" But something occurred to him at once "But wait ...Yes ... I can film their relationship in order to extort from Mr, Zimmermann!! Maybe this persuades him to return Ali!" and laughed viciously and turned on the camera again ...D

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P.S.1 Dear archi-girl...Thank you very much! I could kiss my wife at last.
P.S. 2 I think the story was getting too boring. It needed such contents. This is the salt of the story

[minizoro]

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P.S 1: Shrewd @mir your made it so salt I can't eat it. Uh. Uh Archi I think if you wouldn't make @mir marry with Marryam @mir would make marry with some one else, for sure. Oh @mir, I wish for you not to be sad ever. You made me laugh a long time. You changed story. Story assumed like a great one. First we started it by a romantic one then a detective one and now a multi-romantic & s e x u a l one. Thanks; really thanks.(You think I'll let you go? No, I won't do that if I don't kick your goose.
it means: (پدرت را در مي‌آورم)
Because you made Ali like this.
Now read the rest of the story.

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@mir captured their any action, tricky, wickedly & enviously. Chk. Chk. Chk.
"Wow, let her go. Let her go." @mir whispered him self. "Now it’s the time, you should show that you are a prejudiced man."
@mir left his camera and all his attachments on the roof; he just took a knife. Then nothing could be seen, just breaking luminosity-window's glasses.
Zimmermann & the girl shocked. When Zimmermann separated him self from the girl to attack @mir, girl went onto Zimmermann with a vase. She broke it into his head. The girl ran unto @mir & said: "Oh, thank God he is my save angle, thank you Mr. . . . " "@mir" @mir replied. "Now we should ran away." When they wanted to ran out of the room they shocked with Zimmermann's guards.

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P.S 2:
Luminosity-window'= (پنجره روشنايي)
is that true?
P.S3: post edited by me. thanks @mirfor your notification. I thought it wouldn't make any problems. however i deleted useless parts, and please youedit your post,there fore no body else wouldn't know this, mis understanding. Thank you again

Persian version of this topic:

برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید

[mir@]

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[A r c h i]

Vahed asked AminTNT about Ali. At first, he didn't answer, however, after Vahed's persistence and two tough slaps in his face, he told the whole story. He explained that he worked for Mike and Mike was the head of an international Mafia band that kidnapped children from their own families and sold them to rich families that suffered from lack of child. He added that they had sold Ali to a family that lived in Berlin, Germany and whose name was Zimmermann. Mr. Zimmermann was a senior manager of BMW company.l

Archi continues:
"Oh my goddd..you've sold my kid " Mohammad said and jumped toward Amintnt. @mir took Mohammad back and told him to control himself. Archi was moaning and crying in the arms of Maryam . "What have I done that I should face this consequences ???" Detective Minizoro got the complete information about Mr. Zimmermann and he arrested Amintnt. Minizoro sent back Amintnt and vahed to Iran for further investigations. They took the first flight to Berlin. Archi, Mohammad,@mir, Maryam, Love-to-learn and minzoro was on their way to Berlin.
It wasn't that hard to find BMW office in Berlin. "we don't have any proof about our claim to Mr. Zimmerman" Archi said. "The DNA test will find the truth " @mir replied. "But don't forget that it's not so easy to deal with the manager of BMW " Minizoro answered

They were really confused that what they could do. They have had lots of counseling's but they couldn't reach particular result. Finally @mir decided minizoro that if he could counsel to Vahed too. So minizoro called Vahed in Iran and asked him if he knows any ways for rescuing poor Ali. "Well I have been thinking of this since I finished works which are related to AminTNT. First of all you should prove that already Zimmermann had bought Ali from AminTNT" said Vahed. "yeah I know but how?!" minizoro said."You can film Zimmermann when he or his wife is with Ali, can't you" Vahed said. "Oh yeah your right" minizoro replied.
So minizoro said to other's what he's heard from Vahed. "So now here it's your turn to show that what you have learned in "p30world forums" is not vain, you are very professional in photographing and filming, here you are show what ever you are…" Mohammad said proudly to @mir. And now @mir

@mir continues

@mir got the address of Zimmermann's house from minizoro and took his camera. He went to Maryam's room to say goodbye. Maryam was absolutely worried. "@mir ... for God's sake ... don't go ... You are the only person I have in this world" She told. "Don't worry. I'll be back soon. God protects me" He moved to the door ... but Maryam couldn't suppress her tears ... @mir came back and hugged her strongly and kissed her lips with such a clamorous smack that Mohammad and Archi in the next room heard that and looked at each other and smiled c

It was an hour after midnight. @mir was on the roof of a building in front of Zimmermann's house. "This is not just a house ... This is a palace..." He muttered. All of a sudden, he noticed Mr. Zimmermann and his wife entered a room. He turned on the camera and zoomed on that window. Mrs. Zimmermann took off her robe and ... after 2 minutes ... "ooooooh..." ... @mir was gaping at the LCD of the camera ... suddenly he closed his eyes and turned off the camera .... "What am I doing? I should be ashamed of myself...I shouldn't film others' prvate relationships" But something occurred to him at once "But wait ...Yes ... I can film their relationship in order to extort from Mr, Zimmermann!! Maybe this persuades him to return Ali!" and laughed viciously and turned on the camera again ...D
@mir captured their any action, tricky, wickedly & enviously. Chk. Chk. Chk.
"Wow, let her go. Let her go." @mir whispered him self. "Now it’s the time, you should show that you are a prejudiced man."
@mir left his camera and all his attachments on the roof; he just took a knife. Then nothing could be seen, just breaking luminosity-window's glasses.
Zimmermann & the girl shocked. When Zimmermann separated him self from the girl to attack @mir, girl went onto Zimmermann with a vase. She broke it into his head. The girl ran unto @mir & said: "Oh, thank God he is my save angle, thank you Mr. . . . " "@mir" @mir replied. "Now we should ran away." When they wanted to ran out of the room they shocked with Zimmermann's guards.

One of the guards asked @mir who was he and what he was doing down there, they didn't see him go in. "It was a game" the girl said. "We decided to surprise Mr Zimmerman" The guard asked where was the Zimmerman and they told him that he wanted to see the guards..all the guards. So all guards went in. @mir and the girl took this chance and escaped, they ran as far as they can. When they reached home Mohammad surprisingly said " Hey @mir ..who is this girl..you were supposed to take Ali, what has happened that she is here instead??? "
@mir explained all the story. Minizoro said "oh my god, they saw your face..so police can identify you two easily...What a situation we are in!!!!! " Maryam huged @mir and she burst into tears. " I can not tolerate all these accidents ... I warned you not to go " . " Be patient Honey.... Be patient " @mir desperately replied.
Mohammad asked what should they do with the girl. "what's your name " love-to-learn asked. "My name is Amanda " The girl replied and burst into tears " I have a miserable life.. I don't know when my miseries will end ". Love-to-learn asked her to tell them her story.
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@mir came back and hugged her strongly and kissed her lips with such a clamorous smack that Mohammad and Archi in the next room heard that and looked at each other and smiled

P.S.@mir I love this part l

[mir@]

Vahed asked AminTNT about Ali. At first, he didn't answer, however, after Vahed's persistence and two tough slaps in his face, he told the whole story. He explained that he worked for Mike and Mike was the head of an international Mafia band that kidnapped children from their own families and sold them to rich families that suffered from lack of child. He added that they had sold Ali to a family that lived in Berlin, Germany and whose name was Zimmermann. Mr. Zimmermann was a senior manager of BMW company.l

Archi continues:
"Oh my goddd..you've sold my kid " Mohammad said and jumped toward Amintnt. @mir took Mohammad back and told him to control himself. Archi was moaning and crying in the arms of Maryam . "What have I done that I should face this consequences ???" Detective Minizoro got the complete information about Mr. Zimmermann and he arrested Amintnt. Minizoro sent back Amintnt and vahed to Iran for further investigations. They took the first flight to Berlin. Archi, Mohammad,@mir, Maryam, Love-to-learn and minzoro was on their way to Berlin.
It wasn't that hard to find BMW office in Berlin. "we don't have any proof about our claim to Mr. Zimmerman" Archi said. "The DNA test will find the truth " @mir replied. "But don't forget that it's not so easy to deal with the manager of BMW " Minizoro answered

They were really confused that what they could do. They have had lots of counseling's but they couldn't reach particular result. Finally @mir decided minizoro that if he could counsel to Vahed too. So minizoro called Vahed in Iran and asked him if he knows any ways for rescuing poor Ali. "Well I have been thinking of this since I finished works which are related to AminTNT. First of all you should prove that already Zimmermann had bought Ali from AminTNT" said Vahed. "yeah I know but how?!" minizoro said."You can film Zimmermann when he or his wife is with Ali, can't you" Vahed said. "Oh yeah your right" minizoro replied.
So minizoro said to other's what he's heard from Vahed. "So now here it's your turn to show that what you have learned in "p30world forums" is not vain, you are very professional in photographing and filming, here you are show what ever you are…" Mohammad said proudly to @mir. And now @mir

@mir continues

@mir got the address of Zimmermann's house from minizoro and took his camera. He went to Maryam's room to say goodbye. Maryam was absolutely worried. "@mir ... for God's sake ... don't go ... You are the only person I have in this world" She told. "Don't worry. I'll be back soon. God protects me" He moved to the door ... but Maryam couldn't suppress her tears ... @mir came back and hugged her strongly and kissed her lips with such a clamorous smack that Mohammad and Archi in the next room heard that and looked at each other and smiled c

It was an hour after midnight. @mir was on the roof of a building in front of Zimmermann's house. "This is not just a house ... This is a palace..." He muttered. All of a sudden, he noticed Mr. Zimmermann and his wife entered a room. He turned on the camera and zoomed on that window. Mrs. Zimmermann took off her robe and ... after 2 minutes ... "ooooooh..." ... @mir was gaping at the LCD of the camera ... suddenly he closed his eyes and turned off the camera .... "What am I doing? I should be ashamed of myself...I shouldn't film others' prvate relationships" But something occurred to him at once "But wait ...Yes ... I can film their relationship in order to extort from Mr, Zimmermann!! Maybe this persuades him to return Ali!" and laughed viciously and turned on the camera again ...D
@mir captured their any action, tricky, wickedly & enviously. Chk. Chk. Chk.
"Wow, let her go. Let her go." @mir whispered him self. "Now it’s the time, you should show that you are a prejudiced man."
@mir left his camera and all his attachments on the roof; he just took a knife. Then nothing could be seen, just breaking luminosity-window's glasses.
Zimmermann & the girl shocked. When Zimmermann separated him self from the girl to attack @mir, girl went onto Zimmermann with a vase. She broke it into his head. The girl ran unto @mir & said: "Oh, thank God he is my save angle, thank you Mr. . . . " "@mir" @mir replied. "Now we should ran away." When they wanted to ran out of the room they shocked with Zimmermann's guards.

One of the guards asked @mir who was he and what he was doing down there, they didn't see him go in. "It was a game" the girl said. "We decided to surprise Mr Zimmerman" The guard asked where was the Zimmerman and they told him that he wanted to see the guards..all the guards. So all guards went in. @mir and the girl took this chance and escaped, they ran as far as they can. When they reached home Mohammad surprisingly said " Hey @mir ..who is this girl..you were supposed to take Ali, what has happened that she is here instead??? "
@mir explained all the story. Minizoro said "oh my god, they saw your face..so police can identify you two easily...What a situation we are in!!!!! " Maryam huged @mir and she burst into tears. " I can not tolerate all these accidents ... I warned you not to go " . " Be patient Honey.... Be patient " @mir desperately replied.
Mohammad asked what should they do with the girl. "what's your name " love-to-learn asked. "My name is Amanda " The girl replied and burst into tears " I have a miserable life.. I don't know when my miseries will end ". Love-to-learn asked her to tell them her story

When Amanda wanted to begin telling her story, @mir stopped her indignantly and told her "We ourselves are the most miserable and helpless human beings in the universe, so plz keep your story for yourself and go home. RIGHT NOW!!" Amanda was absolutely offended, hence she quit their place quickly and after a while they could hear her voice sobbing . Maryam told @mir "You shouldn't have done that to her. She needed our help." Suddenly @mir flared out at Maryam and shouted "Shut up!!! .... we have our own problems ... I can not cope with this much trouble... Ali is missing?!! what the heck... who cares?!... It has nothing to do with me... why are we here now? Ali is Mohammad and Archi's son and this is their problem ... It's none of my business .... I and you will return to Iran as soon as possible" He slammed the door and went out ... Maryam was absolutely ashamed of what @mir had told ...she wanted to say something but Mohammad asked her not to say anything ...l

[amintnt]

The kid was found safe and sound. @mir married the girl he loved, amintnt was wrongly caught, in fact he was a good guy! And everyone ended up in a happy ending.

The story is over now!

It could be the bestseller story ever, if it was published!

Thanks to dear writers!

[A r c h i]

oh my god...look what topic is up again

Thanks Amin, it reminds me of good old days, you don't know how much I laughed while writing or reading the story, It was awesome

Thanks everyone, And thank you for the ending l

[mohammad.clergyman]

The kid was found safe and sound. @mir married the girl he loved, amintnt was wrongly caught, in fact he was a good guy! And everyone ended up in a happy ending.

The story is over now!

It could be the bestseller story ever, if it was published!

Thanks to dear writers!

! Hey Dear Amin

thanks alot !

you re-born the topic

but let me tell a suggestion

who is leg ( Payeh) to start another story

[minizoro]

hi muhammad
how do you do?
well count on me to start
another one
but what the story will be about?

[mohammad.clergyman]

hi muhammad
how do you do?
well count on me to start
another one
but what the story will be about?

hey dear zoro

long time no kiss

you totally have permission to start a new story

I'll probabaly be off for a week , but soon i'll join you