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[sepid12ir]

Brain's Writing

In The Name Of God

Writing Activity
What Is The Disadvantage Of Being Alone

Most of people like to associate with others so much and when they haven't close relations with others they feel loneliness feeling.The alone people feel nobody hear them well.When these people sense seclusion, they think that they have nobody.

We all sometimes feel loneliness feeling but loneliness feeling's some people is a chronic loneliness feeling.Chronic loneliness feeling is uncomfortable situation and it brings physics and mental disorders.It even can bring imminent death.Lately researches has shown who alone students have mental pressure more than other group students and they have bad situation asleep too.

Researchers researched in more than twenty countries then they discovered marrieds feel loneliness feeling less than bachelors.

The women and men find many different reasons for their loneliness.The men trounce themselves and the women trounce external causes.The men are bred as who start contacts and the women are bred as who wait and then answer.Maybe the men trounce themselves for they feel did a work for their loneliness while the women say why someone didn't telephone me.

How do you know that you are alone or not? If you say that you can't contact with others or you never find a ideal friend, maybe you will be alone forever

they haven't close friends: they don't have close friends

Lonliness feeling: feeling lonely
you've used it a lot, have u seen it sw?!l

nobody hear: nobody hears
for (nobody,anyone,somebody,someone) we always use singular verb of third person

who alone students: students who are alone; lonely students

marrieds feel lonliness feelings: married ones feel lonely

bred: ?!... sorry I couldn't get it

alone vs. lonely:

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There is a difference between being alone and being lonely. You can be in a crowd of people at Grand Central Station and still feel lonely. You might use the word alone when you describe the situation: "I feel so alone." However, you're in Grand Central freaking Station. You're not alone. You're lonely.

Maybe your job sent you on a trip to a foreign country. You're in a comfortable hotel, and just down stairs there's a lobby and a bar and a restaurant.. Maybe you're in a major metropolitan area. A real tourist trap with hundreds of thousands of people within spitting distance from your window. However, your spouse and your kids and your family and your friends and everyone you hold dear is on the other side of the ocean, or maybe the whole planet. You might be alone in your hotel room, but you're not alone in the world. You may however, feel lonely.

You can also be the only person in your house, and you haven't been with anyone notable for awhile and you don't plan to be with anyone notable for the forseeable future. Maybe it doesn't bother you. Maybe you meant for this to happen. Maybe you need to work on a project of some sort and need no distractions so you can concentrate. Maybe you're going to write that novel you've been meaning to write all your life. Maybe you need to do your taxes. Doesn't matter. The point is, you're alone and it doesn't bother you at all. You chose to be alone. You're comfortable with yourself and who you are. You're alone but you're not lonely.

It's uncomfortable to be lonely, but if you're not alone you can usually do something about it. If you're alone but not lonely, there's no problem at all, is there? The thing to avoid is being alone and lonely at the same time. That is perhaps the greatest trap to anything living

Grammer

Past Continuous

I was playing football when you called me.
They were climbing mountain.
She was reading her lessons at library.
We were not looking for baby.
You were washing dirty dishes when I was going out

I was going out: I went out
I think simple past here can be a better choice

Present Prefect 1

I haven't cooked dinner because of I haven't bought its materials yet.
She has brushed her teeth but she hasn't whashed her mouth.
They have done their work very good.
He has just gone , if you go faster you can see him.
Haven't you fed baby yet

Present Perfect 2

I have never fished , this is my first time.
You haven't flown with airplanein last week.
She hasn't forgiven me yet.
They haven't left our city.
I have never ridden a bike

Present Perfect Continuous

I have been standing here for some hours.
We have been talking about him.
You are still resting, you have been resting all the day.
He has been living there when he has born.
They have been working on my car but they have not repaired it yet

when he has born: since he was born

Vocabulary

Living Room

We don't have waste-paper bin in our house.
We don't have enough cushions for our guests.
Our mat has sludged very dirty, We should wash it.
This old rug is valuable and expensive.
Their house's ceiling has got wet and it maybe falls to(falls down on) them

In The Street

Some drivers sometimes cross lamp-box when it is red.
Gutters of this city are very dirty.
Pedestrains should walk in pavement not in the street.
Weather is rainy and roads are wet and dangerous.
Some people are waiting for bus at bus-stop

Goood Luckl
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extreme2006gh

My Writing Activity

Disadvantages of LONLINESS

What is Loneliness?
Does it just mean: nobody is around you?
What are the disadvantages of loneliness?
Loneliness is not just being alone. Maybe you are in the group but you feel loneness again. Therefore I think we have two kinds of loneliness when you are physically alone and when you don t feel relax in the group, another type of loneliness. There are so many disadvantages for loneliness like feeling depressed after a while (can I use this collocation?), your social skills don t improve, you wouldn t be success in comparison when you are not alone.
When you are alone you don t have any interactions whit others and you have more time to think about everything. And it usually causes you think about negative issues. It means you think pessimistically and see everything in a bad way, then after a period of time you become depressed logically. Because it is result of pessimism.
Another disadvantage of loneliness is not improving your social and relationship skills. Because man is a social creature and he/she can grow in society. Having relationship and interactions whit other causes you face special situations and problems and make active your mind to solve them and eventually you learn how to act in this situation if you face it again.
One of the other disadvantages of loneliness is lack of success in life. I think it is a natural effect of two previous harms of loneliness. Because when you feel sick and depressed, you avoid of society then you can not have effective relationship and consequently your skills don t grow to comply your needs. And this means you are not successful. Because nowadays most important thing for succeeding is social relations.
Although loneness have so many disadvantages but it has some advantages too. For example you can sit somewhere alone and think about yourself and your behavior you had before and find your mistakes and finally reach to self knowing.
Therefore we sometimes need to be alone but we shouldn t allow it will became a habit.

you wouldn't be succes in comparision when you are not alone: you wouldn't(couldn't be) be successful in comparison with the time you are not alone

Another disadvantage of loneliness is not improving your social and relationship skills: another disadtg of being alone is not being able to improve your social and relationship skills..l
u could also write: another disavtg of being alone is that it prevets you form improving ...l

whit: with

avoid of society: avoid society(no article after that)

Although loneliness...., but....: although........., .......... . (no need to use 'but')

we shouldn't allow it will become: we shouldn't allow it become

Grammar

Present perfect 1, 2

• I have done my homework.
• It has stopped raining recently.
• The buildings have just changed in our neighbourhood.
• Don t forget to do your homework. I ve already done them.
• Have n t you washed your hands yet ?
• Have you ever ridden a aeroplane?
• No, I have never ridden a plane.
• I have phoned her 4 times today.
• I haven, t gotten my driving license yet.
• It, s the fourth times I, ve come here but nobody has been here to answer.

Past continuous

• It was snowing when I went out.
• When I got home, everybody was eating dinner.
• Were you doing your homework at 10 last night?
• I wasn t sleeping when you phoned.

Present perfect continuous

• We have been sitting here for 2 hours.
• He is a specialist engineer in his course. He has been studying for 10 years.
• How long have you been waiting here?

Perfectl

Vocabulary

Living room

• I clean the bottom of my shoes on mat, when I got home.
• when it is hot I turn on the fan and sit on the sofa.
• bookcase keeps book against wreck.
• I turn lamp on when I go to bed.
• I watch television after lunch everyday.

In the street

• Traffic light prevents cars to disturb the street.
• Eech street usually has kerb to limit cars to drive in line.
• Nowadays we can see a lot of posters on walls in the street, advertise many things.
• Some houses have railings around themselves.
• There are always long queue in bakery.

thanks....perfect
goood luckl

[armita2007]

In the name of God

"THE DISADVANTAGES OF BEING ALONE"

Humans have been the sociable creatures at all times. They have been sharing their needs and ideas with each other .they have been organizing a big community in the best way which there is not any evidence from its creation. But with the advent of technology and new facilities in the recent centuries, people have been better and happier life by using some means like telephone, computer. Although the advantages of the new processes on both social matters and economical issues are influenced more than before, it is raised one important question: have human s tendencies and characteristics changed during this era due to the new development? Of course, the answer of this question is completely clear. Saying that one of its negative effects which they have had more influence on people has been that they tend to be intrinsic instead of extrinsic. Most of people usually like to lie down the sofa or armchair watching TV or to access to internet digging information more times for hours.

Being alone is a framework that could be taken for granted in the present .there are not any physical and emotional touches (contacts) among people .one of the main disadvantages of solitude could be related to a psychological process in this way that it can be very depressing and debilitating. Second, these groups of society can't communicate and share their ideas with others easily. On the one hand, they can't rely on persons(individuals) whether in the environment of their offices or not and make friends as the best way and on the other hand nobody can't adapt themselves in tune with their statues let alone to talk with them with mutual agreement. In fact, they have their own world that it is so different from common people one

In conclusion, the disadvantages of solitude have outweighed the advantages of it. So such awareness allows us to retain more viewpoints about this topic in order to enjoy our life with our families and friends.

vocabulary

Armchair: sitting in an armchair this man found his socks

Sofa: her grandfather sat on the sofa near door

Light: when the light of my room has suddenly flickered, I turned it off immediately

TV: I have thrown away my TV into the trash can

Car park: there isnot enough car parks next to this streets

Radio: your professor s lecture is broadcasting from the radio now .listen to it carefully

Road: police has arrested this thief in a narrow road

Bus stop: unfortunately, I have waited for you next to bus stop for 2 hours

Cross roads: it has been an accident at the next cross roads

Present perfect

I have planted many flowers in this garden since 1999

He has used milk up .there is anything to drink. Sorry

Your doctor has prescribed for you to heal up

Have you heard about this terrible news

why have you rang me up before I told you

Present perfect continues

Our teacher has been getting up early. He is yawning in the class now

Due to the accident, she hasn’t been driving with her own car

The dishes are so bright; surely Sally has been washing them carefully

They are so tired. They have been working on this project

She has been practicing more times for learning how to ride bike

Past continues

The weather was being so bad when I came home

I was reading my favorite story when you watched TV all the night

Were they putting up this picture on the wall for me

he was committing the crime when the police came there

I couldn’t understand that word ; she was speaking English very quickly

[extreme2006gh]

Another disadvantage of loneliness is not improving your social and relationship skills: another disadtg of being alone is not being able to improve your social and relationship skills..l
u could also write: another disavtg of being alone is that it prevets you form improving ...l

thanks for guiding
could you tell me what the wrong is with Another disadvantage of loneliness ?
why can t I use this structure ?

[گیسو]

disadvantege of being alone

Some people are feel loneliness in any age because of many reasons such as social, personal or economical one. Although being alone has its advantages in some point of view but it has its disadvantages. One of most important perniciousness of being alone is that living in her or him thought and far it away of real world. This one can cause of many mental diseases. Other disadvantage of being alone is no one to share things with and make the person to become selfish. The third one is no stimulating conversation, no partner in pain and these are can effect on the person.
In the elder age it’s a difficult problem since in this section individual needs a companion and sympathetic partner for her or his life to take care of it. So find a
good partner.

Present perfect

I’ve lost my certificate.
They have bought a new house.
It’s her weeding and I haven’t bought her present.
When has he done his report?

Present perfect continues

They have been talking for the last hour.
She has been working at that company for three years.
We have been waiting here for over two hours.]
Have you been exercising lately?

Past continues

I was watching TV when she called.
When the phone rang, she was washing the dishes.
Mina was waiting for us when we got off the plane.

Vocabulary

Living room

Sofa: he was sleep on the sofa.
Floor: the walls and floor are damp for last night rain.
Television: he turned on the television to watch the move.
Radio: I heard the news on the radio.
Carpet: what’s the brand of your carpet?

In the street

Poster: the election posters already exist around the city.
Post box: most of post boxes are yellow.
Litter bin: There is a litter bin across his house.
Crossroads: the accident occurred at a busy crossroads in the center of the town.

[sepid12ir]

legend-of-zelda

My Writing
Loneliness ! I heard this word for the first time in a song of Anathema band . If I wanna say the truth about my feels , the mentioned word isn't so bad … sometimes that word makeS me enjoyment and can make me more happy and think better. I don’t know why but its right .
But in this subject (What Is The Disadvantage Of Being Alone) we can propound a question . Is there any Disadvantage in Being Alone ? my answer is Yes ! for sure seclusion is a psychical malady that can make humen as psycho by the period of time . unfortunately in today societies , so many people are alone and pensive . But why ? Is that answer unless mechanic life and dependence to machines ? Sometimes I have seen people that even don’t talk ! they can thalk but don’t … I think this is one of the disadvantage of being alone .
Being alone is an adjective that come worry after that . everybody that is alone hasn’t any friend or hasn’t any good respect with his/her frinds . this can bring worry after a long time .The last question that propound , is "what should people do for solve theme Loneliness?" my answer by truth is "I don’t know"

I joined the group frome 5 or 6 days ago and its why my essay isn't good . anyway please excuse my wrongs

دوستان چون من از همین فعالیت وارد گروه شدم نتونستم گرامر و لغت رو بنویسم . از تمرین بعدی حتما اونارو هم مینویسم . ضمنا رایتینگم هم شرمنده مشکل زیاد داره ... اینم تمرین بعدی رفع میکنم .

that word make me enjoyment: that word brings me joy
makes me enjoyment can not be true....makes me happy is better

this is one of the diadvantage: this is one of the disadvantages

that come worry after that: well, this sentence is not good! if I were you I would write 'that ends up in anxious'...l

hasn't any good respects with his/her friends: doesn't have respect for his friends

what should people to for slove them loneliness: what should people do for not feeling lonely?!l...
I think we never solve lonliness, it doesn't need to be solved; we should do some actions to get out of being lonely; to end being lonely

by truth: honestly

What is the disadvantage of being alone?

Being of alone has several disadvantages for everybody, for example: unable to do some works, have a low supporation from others and be depressing.
We are able to do some works correctly but for others doing we need somebody’s help.This is included about personal and social works too. When we are alone, we get low supporation from others in our life. But we need to be perfect protection in our life. In long time, loneliness may be was serious reason for our depressing. Every body needs to have somebody in his life for support from mental aspect.
Finally, we should put equally between our solitude and relationship. In result of, we will have a normal life
.

Grammar

.

We have gone to ltaly.

being of alone: being alone

be depressing: be depressed
a situation or sth(weather, a song, a movie ,... ) can be depressing, and a person can be depressed

we get low supportation: we get low support

we need to be perfect protection in our life: we need to be protected well in our life

lonliness may be was serious reason: Lonliness may be a serious reason

and the only mistake in yr examples:
we have gone to Italy: we have been to Italy

Writing essay
Disadvantages of being alone

What do you know about the disadvantages of loneliness? Some body who don't want to communicate with other people is an alone person and Loneliness has different levels. Some people are moody, some times they don't want to communicate with any other people and some time they don't feel good with loneliness and some people want to be alone in any situation.
Being alone has many advantages and disadvantages. Actually I've been a normal alone guy and I'll be alone for ever I guess. So I can tell you some disadvantages of being alone
It's pretty hard for an alone person to be happy. That's the first bad feeling of being alone in my opinion. No body pay much attention to an alone person because he/she don't talk to other people so no one knows his/er mistakes to pay attention to them and maybe it makes the alone person depressed and being depress is really dangerous and harmful for every one and it can cause mental or physical mistakes.
In my opinion every one need's some one to talk to and lean on, share his/er feelings, joys, sadness, secrets and etc, and an alone person can't bet for anything. He/she also can't tell any body how bad or good was the day and how bad/good luck was her/him for the day… and when the alone person wantS to really say something no one listen to him/her.
so It doesn't worth to be alone for long period of time and I suggest all of you not to leave your friends, family, partner and don't let the loneliness to overcome you. people around you need you, they feel you and maybe there is some one who loves you. You didn't created to spend your life lonely. so try enjoy your life and share it with others.

Grammar activity

It was the last time that I forgotten where my keys ar

I turn off the lights and the lamp at night befor go to bed

a mistake which u've made two or three times:
we treat with 'nobody,someone, somebody, anyone' like a third person so we use singular verb of the third person...nobody knows...
some body who don't want: somebody who doesn't want

Being depress: being depressed

it doesn't worth to be alone: it is not worth being alone

n two mistakes which caught my eyes:
It was the last time that I forgot where my keys are

befor go: befor going

[sepid12ir]

thanks for guiding
could you tell me what the wrong is with Another disadvantage of loneliness ?
why can t I use this structure ?

hey, yrwelcome
that one is not wrong, disavtg of being alone seems more naturall to me... it shouldn't be wrongl

[masoudtr]

What do you know about the disadvantages of loneliness?
You know i think i have the master degree in loneliness
Because i always was loneliness.it dosent means nobody wasn’t around me
It means i know people more than another .they want to use me and when i finish for them they forget me.they leave me and find new one
So i prefer to be alone it is not pretty bad. Of course you must work harder .You must ignore some heartbeat
And you become more moody than before
You can’t trust to other people
you lose your friends. I mean real friends
I have a lot of friend they always call me and want me to join them in party ,meeting,outside,but they aren’t real friends because when you have a problem they reject you.
I think we have just two real friends one mother
Two father
past continuous
i was fighting with my ole enemy when you killed my dog
i was shooting the birds in sky when you ran to jungle
she insult me while i was leaving her
you were in my home when i was searching for you
my parents were searching for you when you hide in dresser
Present Prefect
I have already seen him
I have found the letter
I have done it
I have eaten my launch
He hasn’t done his work
Present perfect 2
Have you ever seen ricky martin in live cocert?
I havent killed any body yet
She hasn’t any boyfriend yet
Have you ever danced in street ?
He has hit me agein.

i'm sorry i can't finish my vocab

[rayhaneh]

Disadvantages of loneliness

"Pray that your loneliness may spur you into finding

something to live for, great enough to die for."

Dag Hammarskjold--

Loneliness has many different types .sometimes people around us leave us alone, in this case we are forced to be alone and it's painful. In other case we chose by our self to be alone; this type can be more fruitful and less harmful. But as whole when loneliness becomes a long term situation or feeling and exceeds the time limit, then it harms the person and escaping from it becomes difficult.

The first disadvantage of loneliness is that it make its prey depressed and blue and draw away his/her hope of living and this feeling could be very destructive.

Human being is a social animal; he learns everything from his surroundings, people and things; obviously, when he goes away from them then he will not learn, enjoy and live a productive life.

As we have a quote in Persian, the mistake of a man remains hide and uncorrected until he begins speaking, it's true. So, loneliness in a way

prevents us from improving and correcting our faults.

At the end, I want to conclude it that harmfulness or usefulness of everything in this world depends on the way we use that. Loneliness could have advantages as well as disadvantages!

Grammar

Present prefect1

I have worked hard

You haven't washed your clothes yet.

Has she visited you since last week?

He has already gone.

Have you seen my pen somewhere here?

Present prefect1

Have you ever been to India?

I've never drunk tea after dinner.

She's not eaten anything since morning.

Have you seen that movie?

He has read that novel three times.

Past continues

I was writing the letter at eight o'clock.

She was cleaning the house when I visited her.

We were not sleeping when you called.

Was he reading while you called on him?

They were going out at that time.

Present prefect continues

I have been working here since 2005.

She has been reading for 3 hours.

Have they been eating since we went.

Has she been waiting for us since 2 o'clock?

How long have you been studding English?

Vocabulary

The living room

I bought a fan yesterday.

Your key is on the sofa.

Her shoe is on the mat, pick it up.

They wash the carpet together.

In the street

Pedestrians should walk on the pavement.

I put the paper in the liter-bin

She was standing in the queue at the bus stop.

We parked our car in a car park.

There was no parking meter on the road.

[محمد88]

WRITING
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even though I see no disadvantage of being alone, I wanna talk about probable disadvantages
.at first, I want to tell you my deduction about this
I think when you are alone there are some advantages and of course some disadvantages
and it is not justly if you think it has only AD or disAD
anyway....whenever I was alone in my life, I have made my best desicion, therefore I think loneliness is the time
for thinking, focussing of attention, listening to calm musics, watching some special movies, reading books and ascending your soul
and also when you are alone you can get rid of some people who you don't enjoy to connect them
in spite of this, you should be able to know how to relate to people
these ADs that I've mentioned above, don't mean that I advise you to be alone all the times
because in my opinion, if somebody remains alone for a long time; he'll get into a depression mood
and that is the first disAD of loneliness....the second one is getting lack of good public relations
(and it happens in a long time, too)

by the way I will be alone all the times, after this summer, because my best friend will go to Malaysia for living
he has been my friend for 10 years and we have had houndreds of good memories with each other

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GRAMMER
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PAST CONTINOUS
.the dog was barking when I went into the yard
.Hassan was doing his homework while I was fooling around
I was shouting in his ear when he was asleep
.it was starting to rain when I went out
.He was palying football while the glass got broken
.
PRESENT PERFECT
.I have done my home work
.she has been in this town for 5 days
.Mina has been able to write since she was 5
.Ali Kbar has eaten his food
I've just finished my present perfect acivity
.
PRESENT PERFECT CONTINUOS
?how long have you been getting here
.I have been writing for the exam
.she has been joking in a bad time
.I have been nagging to my friend for an hour

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VOCABLUARY
.

LIVING ROOM
radio : the radio, right over there, is too old and out of order
!! TV : I didn't touch the TV, I don't know why it is so dirty
floor : plz clean the floor yourself
.sofa : last night, I fell aslpeet on the sofa
.carpet : the carpet got torn up, because the child pulled it so hard
.
IN THE STREET
.pavement : the pavements in Tehran are usually narrow
!! bus stop : there is no bus stop in this street
poster : I do hate the posters which belongs to somebody
queue : I hate to stand in queue of bus ticket
.trafic light : the trafic light in this street is red most of the times

[sepid12ir]

In the name of God

"THE DISADVANTAGES OF BEING ALONE"

Humans have been the sociable creatures at all times. They have been sharing their needs and ideas with each other .they have been organizing a big community in the best way which there is not any evidence from its creation. But with the advent of technology and new facilities in the recent centuries, people have been better and happier life by using some means like telephone, computer. Although the advantages of the new processes on both socialmatters and economical issues are influenced more than before, it is raised one important question: have human s tendencies and characteristics changed during this era due to the new development? Of course, the answer of this question is completely clear. Saying that one of its negative effects which they have had more influence on people has been that they tend to be intrinsic instead of extrinsic. Most of people usually like to lie down the sofa or armchair watching TV or to access to internet digging information more times for hours.

Being alone is a framework that could be taken for granted in the present .there are not any physical and emotional touches (contacts) among people .one of the main disadvantages of solitude could be related to a psychological process in this way that it can be very depressing and debilitating. Second, these groups of society can't communicate and share their ideas with others easily. On the one hand, they can't rely on persons(individuals) whether in the environment of their offices or not and make friends as the best way and on the other hand nobody can't adapt themselves in tune with their statues let alone to talk with them with mutual agreement. In fact, they have their own world that it is so different from common people one

In conclusion, the disadvantages of solitude have outweighed the advantages of it. So such awareness allows us to retain more viewpoints about this topic in order to enjoy our life with our families and friends.

perfect, yr examples had no problem

n yr writing was one the bests here

people have been better life: doesn't make sense?! people's life has got better n happier

it is raised: it has raised

nobody can't adopt themselevs: nobody can adopt him/erself
nobody itself makes a sentence negative, no need to bring 'not'... besides, as I said before nobody should be treated like a third person...l

Some people are feel loneliness in any age because of many reasons such as social, personal or economical one. Although being alone has its advantages in some point of view but it has its disadvantages. One of most important perniciousness of being alone is that living in her or him thought and far it away of real world. This one can cause of many mental diseases. Other disadvantage of being alone is no one to share things with and make the person to become selfish. The third one is no stimulating conversation, no partner in pain and these are can effect on the person.
In the elder age it’s a difficult problem since in this section individual needs a companion and sympathetic partner for her or his life to take care of it. So find a

goood, couldn't find any mistake in yr examples
but yr writing:
some people are feel loneliness: some people feel lonely

one of most important: one of the most important

other disadvatage: other disadvantages

is no one to share things with: is not having anyone to share things with
you have made this mistake for three times:
is no stimulating conversation
no partner in pain

these are can effect on the person: these can effect on people

What do you know about the disadvantages of loneliness?
You know i think i have the master degree in loneliness
Because i always was loneliness.it dosent means nobody wasn’t around me
It means i know people more than another .they want to use me and when i finish for them they forget me.they leave me and find new one
So i prefer to be alone it is not pretty bad. Of course you must work harder .You must ignore some heartbeat
And you become more moody than before
You can’t trust to other people
you lose your friends. I mean real friends
I have a lot of friend they always call me and want me to join them in party ,meeting,outside,but they aren’t real friends because when you have a problem they reject you.
I think we have just two real friends one mother
Two father

thanks for the examples, no important mistake
but the writing:
I was always loneliness: I have always been lonely

it doesn't means nobody wasn't: it doesn't mean that nobody is/was around me... if I were you I would write: It doesn't mean that I have nobody around

when I finish for them: when I'm done with them= when I finish the tasks

more moody: moodier

trust to other: trust others

Disadvantages of loneliness
"Pray that your loneliness may spur you into finding
something to live for, great enough to die for."
Dag Hammarskjold--

Loneliness has many different types .sometimes people around us leave us alone, in this case we are forced to be alone and it's painful. In other case we chose by our self to be alone; this type can be more fruitful and less harmful. But as whole when loneliness becomes a long term situation or feeling and exceeds the time limit, then it harms the person and escaping from it becomes difficult.
The first disadvantage of loneliness is that it make its prey depressed and blue and draw away his/her hope of living and this feeling could be very destructive.
Human being is a social animal; he learns everything from his surroundings, people and things; obviously, when he goes away from them then he will not learn, enjoy and live a productive life.
As we have a quote in Persian, the mistake of a man remains hide and uncorrected until he begins speaking, it's true. So, loneliness in a way
prevents us from improving and correcting our faults.
At the end, I want to conclude it that harmfulness or usefulness of everything in this world depends on the way we use that. Loneliness could have advantages as well as disadvantages!

sooooooooooooooooooooo perfect
I just think instead of 'hide' there u gotta use 'hidden'l

WRITING
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even though I see no disadvantage of being alone, I wanna talk about probable disadvantages
.at first, I want to tell you my deduction about this
I think when you are alone there are some advantages and of course some disadvantages
and it is not justly if you think it has only AD or disAD
anyway....whenever I was alone in my life, I have made my best desicion, therefore I think loneliness is the time
for thinking, focussing of attention, listening to calm musics, watching some special movies, reading books and ascending your soul
and also when you are alone you can get rid of some people who you don't enjoy to connect them
in spite of this, you should be able to know how to relate to people
these ADs that I've mentioned above, don't mean that I advise you to be alone all the times
because in my opinion, if somebody remains alone for a long time; he'll get into a depression mood
and that is the first disAD of loneliness....the second one is getting lack of good public relations
(and it happens in a long time, too)

by the way I will be alone all the times, after this summer, because my best friend will go to Malaysia for living
he has been my friend for 10 years and we have had houndreds of good memories with each other

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.He was palying football while the glass got broken
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I just could find one mistakel

whenever I've been alone