Grammatical Problems

[moonish]

سلام به همگی
واقعا خوشحالم از اینکه اینجارو پیدا کردم , فکر می کنم مفید ترین فاروم ایرانییه که تا حالا دیدم , به شدت دوست دارم تو تاپیکهای انگلیسی شرکت کنم ولی متاسفانه چون تازه عضو شدم باید پست هام رو به فارسی بنویسم.
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[saba_moha]

hi,could you please tell me the grammatical wrongs in this sentences?

[seymour]

hi,could you please tell me the grammatical wrongs in this sentences?

which sentence? ... oh, you mean the same sentence? ... in that case : better to use errors instead of wrongs ..

[saba_moha]

which sentence? ... oh, you mean the same sentence? ... in that case : better to use errors instead of wrongs ..

ohh...haha....really sorry,i dont know what is wrong with my mind sometimes?!my mean was this sentence,ofcourse its a simple sentence but i wanna know still it has any problem or is it vagu to understand or no?...........thank you very much......:
well,my problem is this that i never can see someone that i allways think of him in my daily life,in my dreams!but ofcourse i dont see him in my daily life alot too!but allways im thinking of him,by contrast i can see some of my classmates in my dreams that i see them every day too,but not thinking of them as that person,so what do you think about this?do you think just our visual memeory can influence our dreams?not our mind?or our memory from someone that we allways keep it in our mind?

سلام.اشکال این جمله چیه که توی word مدام ازم ایراد میگیره؟!
Increasing the amount of oxytocin during s_x, can help to attain a better sleep. also sleeping well , can help a lot to control blood pressure and weight .

[saba_moha]

سلام این متن رو به انگلیسی نوشتم،میخواستم لطف کنید اشکالاتش رو بهم بگید.
This is clear that a safe s -x realationship has positive effects on our mental and physical health.i will explain the most 10 important of these effects here:

1-reduce stress
People who have s-x regularly , have lower digree of blood pressure and stress in compare with them ,who ,don’t experience regular one.

2-reinforcing the immune system
People who have s-x activity about 1 to 2 times in a week,have more amount of A immunoglobulin(some kind of antibody which discharges against of microbes in our blood ) ,so less than others get diseases.

3-burning calorie &weight control

Researches show that ,each time s-x activity lasts about 30 minutes,causes 85 calorie to burn.maybe its not considerable amount of energy burning ,but during the time it causes the burning of large amount of energy and helps alot to lose weight.


4-improving the cardiovascular system's health

A research which has been edited in Journal of Epidemiology and Community Health shows , that, doing s-x activity 2 times in a week can reduce the possibility of heart stroke in men.

5-improve confidence
If s-x activity is based on love and interest for both of partners, can improve the confidence, which, this can improve the s-x activity too.


6-increase the devotion

S-x increases the degree of oxytocin hormone in the body, which increases the emotional dependence and devotion among persons .and because of this, is called (love hormone).


7-reduction of pain sensation


As oxytocin increases by in blood, the amount of endorphin gets high too. Endorphin is one of natural narcotics, which, discharge in our body. And why after s-x,your headache or your joint pain recover is because of discharging of this 2 hormones during s-x.


8-reduce prostate cancer risk in men

Researches show that, men who have ejaculated 5 times or more than it in a week, improve reducing prostate cancer risk about 30%.

9-reinforce the buttock muscles in woman


10-improve sleep quality

Increase the amount of oxytocin during s-x, can help to attain a better sleep. Also sleeping well, can help a lot to control blood pressure and weigh.

[amintnt]

سلام...

explain the most 10 important

The 10 most important

in compare with them

Compared with those who...l

so less than others get diseases

احساس ميکنم اين جمله خيلي انگليسي نيست... شايدم باشه! در مثالايي که از ديکشنري ميخوندم شايد بشه از Suffer هم استفاده کرد... به هر حال اگه جمله رو درست درنظر بگيريم بايد يه They اضافه کنيد: Less than others they get diseases

its not considerable amount

A considerable amount

A research which has been edited

اگه منظور از Edit ، انجام آزمايش هست، اين افعال مناسب ترن: to do / conduct / undertake research..... اگه هم نيست، که هيچ!

If s-x activity is based on love and interest for both of partners, can improve the confidence

It can improve

can improve the confidence, which, this can improve the s-x activity too

قسمتي که برجسته کردم کمي نامتعارف به نظر مياد... ميتونيد به جاش بگين:
which improves.... l
which leads to improvements in s-xual activity too.....l
من بودم اولي رو انتخاب ميکردم... چون اطمينان ندارم دومي به انگليسي معيار کاملا درست باشه.... هرچند دومي دهن پر کن تره!

[seymour]

ohh...haha....really sorry,i dont know what is wrong with my mind sometimes?!my mean was this sentence,ofcourse its a simple sentence but i wanna know still it has any problem or is it vagu to understand or no?...........thank you very much......:
well,my problem is this that i never can see someone that i allways think of him in my daily life,in my dreams!but ofcourse i dont see him in my daily life alot too!but allways im thinking of him,by contrast i can see some of my classmates in my dreams that i see them every day too,but not thinking of them as that person,so what do you think about this?do you think just our visual memeory can influence our dreams?not our mind?or our memory from someone that we allways keep it in our mind?

I've changed it a little :


well,my problem is that i can never dream about someone i always think of in my daily life (i.e. when I'm awake)! actually i don't see him in my daily life a lot too!but hey,I always think of him. in comparison, i can see some classmates in my dreams: i see them every day ,but don't think about them as much as that person. so what do you think about the whole thing?do you think our visual memory influences our dreams?but not our mind?what about our memory from someone we always keep in our minds?

سلام.اشکال این جمله چیه که توی word مدام ازم ایراد میگیره؟!
Increasing the amount of oxytocin during s_x, can help to attain a better sleep. also sleeping well , can help a lot to control blood pressure and weight .

I don’t see any serious problem with it …I assume Word says which word is the problem … which is it ? … (probably the technical names? .. in that case don't worry

[saba_moha]

در پاسخ به amintnt......

اون رو اشتباها به جای edition نوشته بودم edit......خیلی لطف کردین ،ممنون

in reply to seymour

my mean was word program on computer,yes the problem just was some fragments not any grammatical problem...........thank you very much...

is this sentence common or true ? imagine it has been sent by some knid of yahoo mail systems..i have doubt about invite in this sentence..........


did you get my invite?

[seymour]

is this sentence common or true ? imagine it has been sent by some knid of yahoo mail systems..i have doubt about invite in this sentence..........


did you get my invite?

it's OK and common

[baran_1000]

درچه موقعیتهایی از make sure و making sure در نقش اسم استفاده میشه مثلاً تفاوت دو جمله زیر چیه چرا در یکی فرم Ingدار استفاده شده و در دیگری فرم ساده؟

Their first priority is making sure the people who search Google can get the best and most relevant results. It is not that you get the best deal on clicks.

what we can do is make sure that at least some of the waste that exists in the system that’s not making anybody’s mom better