A Group To Study English (schedule at the first page)l

[JEFF_HARDY]

it's worst job in iran
you can't buy anything as you want for your children and you must work hard and you lose your happiness across a time
and when you will retire you can see very well you don't have anty thing to spend your life

wellTwhat hosseinist is planning to be in futur is university proffesors.and in this level, money isn`t the most important thing for a university proffesor,the most important thing is how he or shhe can improve her skils and be a better person in her society,and thats what really matters,and i have nevers seen a university teacher who can`t afford to buy thing for his childeren,and as a matter of fact most of the university teachers go abroad after their retirement .so they can have more fun or they can shair their knowledge with others easier.and thises are all facts

[sepid12ir]

hey guys
how r u doin?
well, today, I just highlighten the mistakes n I want u to correct them yrself...since it is more useful when u correct yr mistakes yrself n it sticks into yr mind
anyway, I'm done n now it's yr turnl
Regards,
Sepideh

here is my first part of writing

Writing Subject : What job do you like to have in future

When I was a child I always used to dream of being a teacher in a school, since some of my teachers tended to be bad tempered, I liked to be a kind, sympathetic, devoted teacher who never took stuffs difficult to students, especially about exams and absences. But as I grew up I changed my mind as well, when I was a teenager I wanted to be a nurse who worked in a big governmental hospital and helped the poor to recover their diseases promptly, particularly I was interested in helping the pregnant women to give birth to their babies, due to my emotions to the newly birth babies.

But it was not the end of the story, as some years passed, this dream became fainter and a new aspiration took its place, now I hoped to become an actress who had the universal fame and her magic plays dropped everybody's jaw. But this one didn’t come true the same as others. as I became an adult I tried to adopt myself to the situation and wish sth obtainable so, when I entered the university I tried to study hard to become an ordinary manager, due to my field. Despite putting a lot into it, this wish hasn’t happened yet also.

wow! long story
wish u good luck wherever u r my dear pall
I think 'stuff' as a noun is uncountable

Writing Subject : What job do you like to have in future ?

Hmmmm ... I really want to be a Basketball player in United states national basketball association (NBA) as a player ... I really like basketball but because of the school i wasn't able to practice as much as i wanted ... But i will do this in this summer ...
But i've also wanted to be a karikaturist ... or maybe a musician ... but I don't like teaching at all ... Because it reminds me school days wich i hate them everytime
I don't know what else to write about it l

hey, how r u doing!
dear Korosh! am I right, dun u mind correcting the mistakes yrself? I'm waiting for thatl

when i was a child i wanted to be a doctor to help people
i wntad to treatment a poor people free
but when i grow up i realized that it was just a dream
i couldn't be a doctor
i wanted to be a fireman too
and i wanted to scientist

but now i understand this fact in iran we can't choose a job with our tendency and our ability and capacity
we have to work for money to can survive
we can't enjoy from our job
for example i'm a photographer and some day i can get money and some days i can't get money as much as i want and i always worry about a future
i don't have a job security and i see my dreams fall down and dies and i become older and older and i can't do nothing for myself

good man,
if it's okay with u, I wait for yr correctionl

When I was kid I always liked to be a teacher , a good teacher just like my Mom , a teacher that loves her Job and her students and lives for her students ! when I was at high school one day I told her about my wish ,against of my expectation she asked me to change my decision ! and for having a better quality life I choose another course ! so now I’m a Dr. pharmacist . but because of liking my last wish ( being a teacher ) now I like to continue my education and I hope I will be able to be a teacher at university as a good teacher ! plz pray for me that I will be able to achieve this my plan.

wow!
I do pray for u
n I do cross my fingers for u...I'm sure it happens n that day is not so farl

[C. Breezy]

hey, how r u doing!
dear Korosh! am I right, dun u mind correcting the mistakes yrself? I'm waiting for thatl

oH ! you mean I myself should correct my mistakes ?? But that's too hard for me ... I just can guess this one :

... write about it

I think it should be omitted ... am I right ? ( NO ! )

[sepid12ir]

Hmmmm ... I really want to be a Basketball player in United states national basketball association (NBA) as a player ... I really like basketball but because of the school i wasn't able to practice as much as i wanted ... But i will do this in this summer ...
But i've also wanted to be a karikaturist ... or maybe a musician ... but I don't like teaching at all ... Because it reminds me school days wich i hate them everytime
I don't know what else to write about it

that's easy man, but I think u r a bit lazy to go thru it! hmm...well, the one u corrected.. yup, u r right, no need to write 'it'

n 'as a player' should be omitted as well, since u've mentioned it before: I want to be a basketball player---> so no need to have player again

u r talking about sth at the moment so why have u used 'wasn't?!

which or wich?

[brain]

Hi
Writing Post

A Doctor, a Fireman, an Artist, a Seller ... which one ?!
Everyone makes for a special work in the world.
When I was a child I wanted to be a good artist because of my brother's major
was Graphic and he liked his major a lot and taught me everything he learned.
He told me that I can be a good artist in future. I copied my brother's works until school
to high school. Then I chose Graphic in high school to study, however my adviser
recommended to me it is better for me if I study Mathematics but I like art
more than other things. I live with art.
Let me say something about my art's master or art world's master. He is no one, except Picasso. Maybe everyone knows him because he is one of the most recognized figures in 20th-century art. He drew and drew for 15 hours in a day. When he was 12 years old, his master told him that he draw like Leonardo da Vinci. He was very active and effective. I like to be like him but I still can't because he was exception. My major has some sprouts: Graphic Designer, Typographer, Painter, Illustrator, Photographer, Sculpture. I like all of them and I really confused to choose one of them. I like Illustrations more than others but sometimes I see a typography or painting I'm tempted to start working.
Every works needs effort and everyone have more effort he will successful
but a right effort in a right way. Everyone will serve to people with that work. I found my way and it is Art and I hope to be a good artist in future. I wish to serve to people with it in near future or far future.
What's your way to serve to people?


Vocabulary

Lesson 2: Transport

1-I have not ever traveled with ship
2-I traveled with aeroplane when I was 2 years old
3-Driving a lorry is very hard
4-I like traveling with train
5-I like to see all of world with bike

Lesson 3 : Parts of the Body

1-I had a bad headache yesterday
2-I brush my teeth every morning
3-We wash our hairs in bathroom
4-We hear everythings with our ears
5-I need my hands to do my works

Lesson 4 : Clothes

1-We wear sweater when weather is cold
2-somebody have stolen my shoes at mosque
3-Wearing tie is not fashionable in iran
4-I always like to wear overcoat
5-Washing machine washed my suit


ا S A D E G H ا

[hoseinist]

hi dear Sepideh ,
at first im gonna say tanks for ur corporation in this group, we couldn't go on without u
.OK i corrected my mistakes

,against of my expectation she asked me to change my decision ! and for having a better quality life I choose another course !

i think ,i must omit of and just say against my expectation.
but about second mistake, one thing i could understand is just about the tense of sentence, and choose mused be changed to chose ! not more

[JEFF_HARDY]

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! and for having a better quality life I choose another course !

.

but about second mistake, one thing i could understand is just about the tense of sentence, and choose mused be changed to chose ! not more

:
:I`m not sure,but i think yr sentence should be something like
برای افزایش کیفیت زندگی ام: to increase the quality of my life :

or to have a better life quality: برای داشتن زندگی بهتر

[JEFF_HARDY]

Hi
Writing Post

A Doctor, a Fireman, an Artist, a Seller ... which one ?!
Everyone makes for a special work in the world.
When I was a child I wanted to be a good artist because of my brother's major
was Graphic and he liked his major a lot and taught me everything he learned.
He told me that I can be a good artist in future. I copied my brother's works until school
to high school. Then I chose Graphic in high school to study, however my adviser
recommended to me it is better for me if I study Mathematics but I like art
more than other things. I live with art.
Let me say something about my art's master or art world's master. He is no one, except Picasso. Maybe everyone knows him because he is one of the most recognized figures in 20th-century art. He drew and drew for 15 hours in a day. When he was 12 years old, his master told him that he draw like Leonardo da Vinci. He was very active and effective. I like to be like him but I still can't because he was exception. My major has some sprouts: Graphic Designer, Typographer, Painter, Illustrator, Photographer, Sculpture. I like all of them and I really confused to choose one of them. I like Illustrations more than others but sometimes I see a typography or painting I'm tempted to start working.
Every works needs effort and everyone have more effort he will successful
but a right effort in a right way. Everyone will serve to people with that work. I found my way and it is Art and I hope to be a good artist in future. I wish to serve to people with it in near future or far future.
What's your way to serve to people?

ا S A D E G H ا

because of my brother's major was graphic:becouse my brother`s major was graphic

a lot: alot


I copied my brother's works until school to high school: untill high school.



recommended to me: recommended me

he was exception:he was an exeption

I really confused: I am really confused or i was really confused

I'm tempted : I get tempted

works: work


everyone have more effort : anybody who putts more effort


serve to people :will serve people

[brain]

Thank u Mr Jeff
I want to put a Goodbye post a fwe days later

[Blue Ray]

wait wait ! don't close the doors ! I didn't post my assignment yet !

Writing : What job do you like to have in future

When I was a child I wanted to become a doctor. Because I had a grandma who always complained about her pains and illness. I promised her (when I was 4 or 5) to become a doctor and cure her ! However she passed away 6 years ago and I couldn’t keep my promise.
When I was a teenager , I felt I sort of had a talent for working with computers. I enjoyed working with different softwares and creating new things. So I came to the conclusion that I could be a good computer engineer. Therefore I made my decision and now I am a student of computer sciences , hope to continue my education and find an appropriate job in this field.

Vocabulary : Lesson 2

• I never take a bus to the university.
• I prefer to go by car.
• He carries bricks by his lorry.
• That van looks suspicious to me.
• Did you see the helicopter which just passed by ?

Vocabulary : Lesson 3

• I was looking at her when she was combing her hair.
• Her baby always sucks his thumb.
• Something sticked to my sole.
• She wears high-heeled shoes.
• He had misshapen teeth.

Vocabulary : Lesson 4

• It was cold , so I decided to put on my sweater.
• He wore stylish trousers.
• I like my checked tee-shirt.
• She buckled her brown belt around her waist.
• Players wear sport shorts in the football field.