A Group To Study English (schedule at the first page)l

[extreme2006gh]

hello everybody

what have you done in norooz ?

this norooz was quite like norooz of last years for me . most of people go to visit their relatives in norooz and I did it too. I think that is a nice custom in our culture going to visit our relatives specially in this era .
Now we are in the era of technology and industry that has been affected our life , it causes people is made away (I don t know it is right or not the structure that I use forthis sentence ) from each other for example. people have more stresses and tension than before in these days, and they dont have enough time to visit each other , then it s good time to do that .
then I try to go to visit my relatives in every norooz and I did it this year too . I went to visit my grandmother and grandfather first then I went ...
but I did some another activities in norooz like studing my retard lessons and sometime i have activity in this froum with you .


because I didn t study vocabulary and grammar book I can t do other exercises. I m sorry but I ll try to participate more in activities in future .

[sada]

hi
sorry i'm late
but here it is my homeworks

1-
now i want to tell you what did i do in norouz.as in Tir i have university entrance exam i must spend my free times on studing,but i went to see my relatives too.watching tv and going out with my friend are the other things i did in norouz.my family and i went on a 2days long trip to neyriz,we enjoyed the nature and we spent a lot of time in the nature because neyriz has a beautiful nature.i played computer games a lot,and saw some movies.i though , i though a lot about my life,my future life and what i am going to do,and what i want to do in my life.i made a new friend too

2-
1- i have one brother and one sister.
2- my uncle and his wife live in tehran.
3- my cousins is a very big boy.
4- i like my parents so much.
5- my aunt's husband works in a bank.
6- old families in iran have many children.
7- i am the younger grandson.
8- both of my grandmother and grandfather are still alive.
9- Ali has a very kind father_in_law.
10_ Ali doesn't have any niece or cousins to play with.

3-1
1- i am studing
2- teacher asks student not to make noises when she is teaching
3- i see that my english is getting better since i join the group
4- i am happy now because today i studing a lot
5- as i have a exam next week i am studing harder

3-2
1- Ali doesn't go on the trip because he is sick
2- my little brother asks me to do his homeworks
3- i suggest my brother not to go fishing today
4- jack promise he never be late again
5- my friend goes mountain climbing always in fridays

[JEFF_HARDY]

hello everybody

what have you done in norooz ?

this norooz was quite like norooz of last years for me . most of people go to visit their relatives in norooz and I did it too. I think that is a nice custom in our culture going to visit our relatives specially in this era .
Now we are in the era of technology and industry that has been affected our life , it causes people is made away (I don t know it is right or not the structure that I use forthis sentence ) from each other for example. people have more stresses and tension than before in these days, and they dont have enough time to visit each other , then it s good time to do that .
then I try to go to visit my relatives in every norooz and I did it this year too . I went to visit my grandmother and grandfather first then I went ...
but I did some another activities in norooz like studing my retard lessons and sometime i have activity in this froum with you .

because I didn t study vocabulary and grammar book I can t do other exercises. I m sorry but I ll try to participate more in activities in future .

سلام.گفتم شايد كمكي كرده باشم،اشكالات كوچكي كه به ذهن من رسيد اينا بود.

most of people go to visit their relatives in norooz and I did it too: and so did i

people have more stresses: peole are more stressed (stress is uncountable,stresses is incorrect


in these days:these day


some another :some other

[sepid12ir]

I don’t do special thing in noroz

I just visit my family & search in web for download music & film

I ‘m so chill because a don’t have exciting noroz

So i’m trying to write about why should i do in noroz

I really love spring because every thing change

And the weather is so fresh and these thing help us to change ourself and help to make a better life for us

I think you can use noroz to think about something you did in last year and something you want do in this year

Oh sorry

Hey dude, happy new yr ...hope u enjoy the rest of the new yr n do fabulous things
I just visit my family & search in web for download music & film: to download music and movie/films

every thing change: everything changes--->the words like 'everything, everybody, everyone, someone and somebody' should be treated like a third person so dun forget the 's' of third person for the verbs which come after them

these thing: these things ---> after these /those u should use plular nouns

ourself: ourselves

want do: want to do--->want is an infinitive verb so a verb comes after it you should use 'to' after 'want'l

i have a nice nephew i call him dodo but his name is sasan

he is similar to his grandmother

i have twele cousins & have two aunts

i don’t have wife but i hate of mother in law

so i’m searchig for a girl that(who) don’t(doesn't) have mum

i have a beautiful cousin

she marrid last year so my aunt have a INCAPABLE birdegroom

i said from many years ago that donkey eat good apple ago but i don’t believe that until this happen

I hate of mother-in-law: I hate mother-in-laws--->after hate there is no preposition: hate sth


my aunt have: my aunt has--> aunt is the third person so instead of have, u should have used 'has' l

Present Simple
I go to shop every day & i help to my parents to make meal for lunch i love classic music but i often listen to pap music i don’t know why?

Present continues

I’m writing a few wordS about present continue i’m trying to use keyboard as a professional typer

My mother making meal at this moment

she calling me to eating lunch so i’m sorry i’m must leaving this writing

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Well, Masoud?(Am I right, yr real name is Masoud?)...anyhow, I'd like u correct the mistakes of this part
I'm waiting for that
thanksl

[masoudtr]

oh
thanks a lot
i think correct of sentence in UP is


Present Simple
I go to shop every day & i help my parents to make meal for lunch i love classic music but i often listen to pap music i don’t know why?

Present continues

I’m writing a few words about present continue i’m trying to use keyboard as a professional typer

My mother's making meal at moment

she's calling me to eat lunch so i’m sorry i’m leaving this writing

[singleguy]

What have you done in Norooz

Actually I didn't do anything special in Norooz. I just stayed home caught up on my studying.and some of the days I went to library to study more efficiently. I just went to my brother's and my uncle's house and anywhere else. I need to do some exercises so my father helped me in some of activities that I wasn't able to do by myself.
Let me talk about the most exciting day in Norooz the ''Nurture day''. My parents and i went somewhere beautiful and quite with few people camping there. My father and I went mountain climbing. My father became rest in the middle of mountain climbing so he sat somewhere and I continued my way lonely however it was so dangerous. I arrived somewhere in the mountain where very dangerous to continue with no especial supplies but there was really high and I found some snow to play with. That was really cold. that was so funny because I was playing with snow and laughing and cheering with myself like a crazy man.

Grammar

I exercise 3 times a week

My father goes to work every day in the morning
Your car looks cleaner today
Your dressing looks better than the last party
Every one does her/his best in this group
I'm trying to change my life style
What do you think of my job?
I'm trying to achieve some better jobs
My father is working for a company at the moment
The new music group is playing at the big hall of our university this year
My brother is driving to Isfahan at the moment
The prices of goods are decreasing this month

Vocabulary

cousin is brother of your father or mother
nephew is your sister's or brother's son
niece is your brother's or sister's daughter
Who is your daughter of your wife of your uncle's brother? Your sister
Grand son is someone's son's son
grand daughter is some one's son's or daughter's daughter
son in law is someone's daughter's husband
brother in law is someone's sister's husband or someone's wife's brother or someone's wife's or husband's sister's husband (that's confusing )
My ante always nag my uncle to take my nephew and my niece to school
My father always compliment my nephew while I do every thing better than him

[JEFF_HARDY]

What have you done in Norooz

Actually I didn't do anything special in Norooz. I just stayed home caught up on my studying.and some of the days I went to library to study more efficiently. I just went to my brother's and my uncle's house and anywhere else. I need to do some exercises so my father helped me in some of activities that I wasn't able to do by myself.

Let me talk about the most exciting day in Norooz the ''Nurture day''. My parents and i went somewhere beautiful and quite with few people camping there. My father and I went mountain climbing. My father became rest in the middle of mountain climbing so he sat somewhere and I continued my way lonely however it was so dangerous. I arrived somewhere in the mountain where very dangerous to continue with no especial supplies but there was really high and I found some snow to play with. That was really cold. that was so funny because I was playing with snow and laughing and cheering with myself like a crazy man.

hey mate,i think these points would be interesting for you to check in.
i thought these things would make your note more like a profesional,tell me if im wrong somewhere.

anywhere else: nowhere else.هيچ جاي ديگري نرفتم


helped me in some of activities:helped me with some of the activities

mountain climbing:mountain neering is more used in this case كوهنوردي

lonely: on my own به تنهايي

became rest: became tired خسته شد

where very dangerous :where was very dangerouse

cheering with myself :cheering by myself

[sepid12ir]

first off I shall thank JEFF_HARDY for being concered about the stuff we do here n correcting the mistakes...I appreciate thatl
n besides, thanks Masoud, they were all correctl

Grammar

I exercise 3 times a week

My father goes to work every day in the morning
Your car looks cleaner today
Your dressing looks better than the last party
Every one does her/his best in this group
I'm trying to change my life style
What do you think of my job?
I'm trying to achieve some better jobs
My father is working for a company at the moment
The new music group is playing at the big hall of our university this year
My brother is driving to Isfahan at the moment
The prices of goods are decreasing this month

absolutely great dear Pall
[QUOTE]

Vocabulary

cousin is brother of your father or mother?
nephew is your sister's or brother's son
niece is your brother's or sister's daughter
Who is your daughter of your wife of your uncle's brother? Your sister
Grand son is someone's son's son
grand daughter is some one's son's or daughter's daughter
son in law is someone's daughter's husband
brother in law is someone's sister's husband or someone's wife's brother or someone's wife's or husband's sister's husband (that's confusing )
My ante always nag my uncle to take my nephew and my niece to school
My father always compliment my nephew while I do every thing better than him

well, I think the very first one is not correct; uncle is bro of one's mom or dad...! so then, who is cousin?l
nag my uncle: nag at my uncle

btw, in some parts u've forgotten the third person 's' for some verbs. I'm sure u can find 'em out yrself
Warm Regards,
Sepideh

[extreme2006gh]

سلام.گفتم شايد كمكي كرده باشم،اشكالات كوچكي كه به ذهن من رسيد اينا بود.

most of people go to visit their relatives in norooz and I did it too: and so did i

people have more stresses: peole are more stressed (stress is uncountable,stresses is incorrect


in these days:these day


some another :some other

thank you very much dear friend
I ll be glad if anybody tell me my mistakes.

[winter+girl]

I don't know what should I say be couse I do any thing in norooz except eatin and sleeping I know u expect that I write about the lessons and the time of learning becouse I'm a student but I didn't learn my lessons.
I just went to my aunt house for 3 days and had fun time with my cousins.the other days I was at home and searches the internet and forums.
I found a lot of freinds and learned a lot of things
some days we had guests same the others but a night my uncles came our house one of them has a doghter her name is 3pide.
and she slept in my room but it's better I tell u we didn't sleep. we stay up till 6:00 AM . I couldn't say what we did but I can't tell u we laughed a lot ( If s.one wants to know ask in my profile I don't say it was a good work but plz u read it with out no equivocation) at the end I should write sorry of this irrelevent writing becouse:1
it was my first writing
2.
we don't have 100 days weekend to write 100 sentences.
1- Do u know D.R Mike? yeah sure I'm his wife
2- How did u introduce with ur husband?
3- he was my friend's brother
4-we saw each other in a party. that day was his niece birthday
5- I have a son and a daughter of him
6- my son in same his grandfather
u mean ur father?
7- no my father in low
8- but my daughter is same her aunt
9- u mean ur sister in low?
no same my sister
10- I really love my husband and my childeren


1-
I am writing my sentences
2. he is calling me
3- my mother is making dinner
4- my father is watchin TV
5- the sun is shining yet
6- I don't love u
7- he does't underestand me
8- Do u have pen
9- my mother is a teacher
10- she speaks a lot