A Group To Study English (schedule at the first page)l

[masoudtr]

First of them is The Command

it's condemn


syncronic is false

synchronic

[devil_ff2008]

it's condemn


syncronic is false

synchronic

I didn't remember it's name and wrote that
and type errors result of my fast typing

thank u so much

[sepid12ir]

Like all freindS I can't choose a film as best movie I've ever watched
But I wanna discribe 2 of best action films
First of them is The Cndemn

This is a story of a rich man who massES 10 of stark people that jailbirded for ever and He buy? Them from jail's moderator
Then trasmit? Them to a little island and attach a timer bomb to Their foot and tell Them 1 of u that kill others can gain the freedom key
And syncronic install many video cameraS in island for a great TV program and gain a big money for him
And for know continuance of this story u can go and see this film

And the next film is Resident Evil 3

Oh, This is really a great action film
I can't too discribe this film
Only short of it's story :
T-Virus prevalence in further points of the earth and many people convert to Zombies
A realization group wanna solve the problem and discovery a anti virus for convert zombies to human again
And syncronic they work on Alis project
Alis is a girl that has a weird power and can kill many Zombie
This group wanna make several copy(several copies) fom Alis to attack to Zombies
And continuance of the story

Some of movies that i seen and like them :
Tokio Drift , 30 Day Of Night , God Father , ...

Sorry for my bad english
Plz catch my mistakes
beforehand thanks from dear Sepid for correction

the condemn, ya, a great action movie; Although I'm not into action style, this one attracted me n I really enjoyed watchin that
I also recommend all of u to watch this movie n also Eternal Sunshine which dear karin mentioned. as she said it is sorta complicated n simple at the same time but it should be watched several times to be grasped properly a bit hard to feel it
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about yr English, as I said to dear Singleguy, u guys should be more careful about the tenses u use in yr speeches n words...
in yr words u haven't used 's' for the third person! He Works...He trasmits; he buys
n if u wanted to use past tense u should have used: he bought, he transmitted

as best movie:as the best movie
whenever u use 'best' and 'worst' dun forget to use 'the' before them: the best movie, the worst novel

First of them: the first one; first of all
bcuz u r just mentioning two movies, then it's better to use: 'the first one'; if it was more than two, u could use: first of all

10 of stark people: 10 stark people
no need to use 'of' in here

jailbirded: who were imprisoned
jailbird is noun n here u had to use a verb

And for know continuance: and for knowing the rest
after 'for' u have to use the 'ing form' of the verb: for knowing, for using n ...! and here the word 'continiue' is not correct, 'the rest' is much better

I can't too discribe this film: I can't describe this film either

syncronic: what is it? I couldn't get

happy studying buddy, never say sorry for the mistakes u makel

[sepid12ir]

I couldn't understand what you said! could you explain more and set some examples?

well, it's not really common in Parsi language, using passive tenses while among english speakers it is really typical. here is the same; when u are describing sb it's better to have:
he is 40 yrs old, and he is a doctor who's married to an architect
here it is sorta description of a person n it's better to use simple present tense so that readers can feel it better. but by just saying: he is a doctor who married an architect; it is like that u r jumping from present time to the past time so that it may not have a good effect on readers
hope u understood; if not I can explain for u in farsi

[devil_ff2008]

Thx a lot dear Sepid

syncronic: what is it? I couldn't get

Cynchronic
My mean is : Hamzaman

[singleguy]

Hello everybody
Unfortunately Brain had a serious problem and I'm not ready for the reading activity. One of the members should prepare the reading for tomorrow.
as you know the reading should be short and including important points in order to improve our english.please share your ideas before doing that
try to keep the group alive untill tomorrow night
Bye till tomorrow night
good luck

[Sha7ab]

Hello everybody
Unfortunately Brain had a serious problem and I'm not ready for the reading activity. One of the members should prepare the reading for tomorrow.
as you know the reading should be short and including important points in order to improve our english.please share your ideas before doing that
try to keep the group alive untill tomorrow night
Bye till tomorrow night
good luck

Im so sad now for Brain left . I dont know what happened that he had to leave us !
Dear singleguy of cours we can keep alive this topic .
Im ready for reading ...
GL

[hoseinist]

hi guys
brain had a problem so he couldn't preparer a story for the reading activity .
i found a short story but i m gonna ask ur opinion about it
maybe other guys have the better one!


Mrs. Black was old and rich. She lived in a splendid house and owned a lot of valuable things. Then she died and there was a big funeral.
Notices were sent out to relatives and friends, and they cane form far and near to attended the funeral.
The service took place in Mrs. Black’ s old church, and then her body was taken back to be buried in a special place in her garden .the hearse carrying her body moved along slowly, followed by the relatives and friends ,the women and children in cars, and the men on foot.
One of Mrs. Black’s cousins saw a poorly dressed man following the hearse and crying bitterly.
The cousin said to him kindly, were you a relative of the dead woman too?
‘No ‘, the man answered.
‘Then why are you crying? the dead woman’ s relative asked.
‘That’s exactly why I’m crying ‘, the poorly dressed man answered.


1-Answer these questions:
1.Who came to Mrs. Block’s funeral?
2.Whom did one of Mrs. Block’s cousins see ?
3.Why was the poorly dressed man crying?

2-Find words in the story which mean about the opposite of:
1.Cruelly
2.Dug up
3.Miserable
4.Sweetly

3- Chose a good title for this story!

[devil_ff2008]

Im ready for reading ...

Me 2
I prepare a short story for reading
If all member agree it I can put it for tomorrow activity

A Box Full of Kisses

The story goes that some time ago, a man punished his 3-year-old daughter for wasting a roll of gold wrapping paper. Money was tight and he became infuriated when the child tried to decorate a box to put under the Christmas tree. Nevertheless, the little girl brought the gift to her father the next morning and said, "This is for you, Daddy"
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sorry I post it before see dear hoseinist's post

[dampayi]

hi friend
آقا من یه ذره خیلی زیاد انگیلیسم ضایس!! فقط نخندینا!!!
i'm new entrance!!!!(تازه واردم!!!)
and i am leg to improve my bad english!!!(من پایم انگیلیسیمو آره)
please help me!
rightly (راستی) !! can u explain to me what should we do here?
for example what is reading activity?

thanks