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[Sha7ab]

I cant say that a film is best in my life or forever . there are many great film in history that i hint some of them here ...
one of the best film in history is Heat ! in said film there were two great actor Alpacino and Robert Deniro .
in Heat Robert Deniro Shows a wonderful performance from himself and in my opinion he is better than Alpacino in that film.
one of the others film that i have seen and has been a great film is The Dark Knight.
DK' director is Christopher Nolan who made The Prestige and Batman Begins befor than. Heath Ledger in the said film shows the best performance that i have seen until yet. Ledger dead for DK and for JOKER . Yes He dead for Joker . Joker killed him.
verily GodFather(1) was a grear film . GF made in 1972 and directed by a famous man named Francis Ford Coppola ... Marlon Brando and Alpacino was GF' stars .said film is in secound place in the IMDB list aright now .... !
other good film thet i have seen are : The Pursuit of Happyness , Braveheart , The Sixth Sense , The Shawshank Redemption and ...
and I have to want you to excuse me for my bad english.
Tank u every body.

[sepid12ir]

I cant say that a film is best in my life or forever . there are many great film in history that i hint some of them here ...
one of the best film in history is Heat ! in said film there were two great actors Alpacino and Robert Deniro .
in Heat Robert Deniro Shows a wonderful performance from himself and in my opinion he is better than Alpacino in that film.
one of the others film that i have seen and hasbeen a great film is The Dark Knight.
DK' director is Christopher Nolan who made The Prestige and Batman Begins befor than. Heath Ledger in the said film shows the best performance that i have seen until yet. Ledger dead for DK and for JOKER . Yes He dead for Joker . Joker killed him.
verily GodFather(1) was a grear film . GF made in 1972 and directed by a famous man named Francis Ford Coppola ... Marlon Brando and Alpacino was GF' stars .said film is in secound place in the IMDB list aright now .... !
other good filmS thet i have seen are : The Pursuit of Happyness , Braveheart , The Sixth Sense , The Shawshank Redemption and ...
and I have to want you to excuse me for my bad english.
Tank u every body.

hey buddy, how 'ya doin?
first off: Never Say Sorry For The Mistakes You Make! Be sure these mistakes can help us learn English Better

now, I've corrected some of yr mistakes, have a look at them n in case there was any question, ask!

many great film: many great films
well, film is countable, u've also used many, after many which is just used for countable nouns, we should use 's' to make the noun Plurar

hint: mention
'Hint' is not an appropriate verb here

one of the best film: one of the best filmsیکی از بهترین فیلمهایی که ...!it should be plurar

in said: the mentioned
فیلم ذکر شده; u've used this phrase a lot, all of them are wrong n u can change them to the mentioned

one of the others film: an other movie that I've seen

that i have seen until yet: that I have ever seen
whenever u want to say: ّبهترین/بدترین و ...، چیزی که تاحالا دیدم/شنیدیم و ...:
the best/the worst/the most beautiful/whatever + that I've ever+(p.p of the verb)

He dead for Joker : sorry I couldn't get wot u meant in here

happy studying

[singleguy]

Hi
Yes. You’re right that it’s hard to talk about the best film I’ve ever watched. But our purpose is to improve our English writing.
I confused because I don’t know which film I like most.
But I want to talk about one of my favorite films played by one of my favorite actors.
What Dreams May Come is one of my favorite films that Robin Williams is the first cast in that film. This film is a kind of drama fantasy and romance film released in 1998 in USA.
Chris Neilson is a doctor who marred with Annie. They had 2 wonder children that died in a car accident and 4 years later Chris dies in a natural way and then he goes to heaven. When Chris dies and goes to Heaven he meets Albert and discovers that Heaven is even more wondrous than anything he could have imagined. But his wife is very sad because of these events and she becomes a woman with mental problems and finally she decides to kill herself to go to the next world in order to be with his family. But unfortunately she goes to the hell because she comes to the next world by suicide. But when he finds out his wife had committed suicide, he desperately searches for her spirit, journeying through Heaven and Hell along the way.

[Sha7ab]

hey buddy, how 'ya doin?
first off: Never Say Sorry For The Mistakes You Make! Be sure these mistakes can help us learn English Better

now, I've corrected some of yr mistakes, have a look at them n in case there was any question, ask!

many great film: many great films
well, film is countable, u've also used many, after many which is just used for countable nouns, we should use 's' to make the noun Plurar

hint: mention
'Hint' is not an appropriate verb here

one of the best film: one of the best filmsیکی از بهترین فیلمهایی که ...!it should be plurar

in said: the mentioned
فیلم ذکر شده; u've used this phrase a lot, all of them are wrong n u can change them to the mentioned

one of the others film: an other movie that I've seen

that i have seen until yet: that I have ever seen
whenever u want to say: ّبهترین/بدترین و ...، چیزی که تاحالا دیدم/شنیدیم و ...:
the best/the worst/the most beautiful/whatever + that I've ever+(p.p of the verb)

He dead for Joker : sorry I couldn't get wot u meant in here

happy studying

thank you so much dear sepid for corrected my mistakes.

He dead for Joker : sorry I couldn't get wot u meant in here

my purpose was : او به خاطر جوکر مرد .
that was wrong , right?

What Dreams May Come

mentioned film was one of the best filmS of Robin Williams . I have to say that there is Cuba Gooding Jr in mentioned film. I like Cuba Gooding Jr play in his films . for example "Radio" was a film that released in 2003 and Cuba Gooding Jr got very awards for his wonderful play.

[sepid12ir]

What Dreams May Come

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but I have a totally different idea, it was a good movie but the story was really poor! sorta fiction it was n I've never been fond of fiction
Robin William as always was great in this job n wot I did not enjoy was the poor story! those who create these kinda movies are really brave in my idea bcuz they are changelling with lots of people with different believes! anyway, it is absolutely worth watching since it makes u think
I fancy everything which make us think

thank you so much dear sepid for corrected my mistakes.
my purpose was : او به خاطر جوکر مرد .
that was wrong , right?

ahan, he died/ passed away for/bcuz of Joker
Dead is noun noun die is verb

[karin]

What’s the best movie I have ever watched?
As the other friends said I think it’s really hard to choose just one movie for the whole life so I’m going to write about one of my favorite movies not the best one. Choosing he best one is impossible for me!

One of my favorite movies is Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind in witch there’s the story of a man who is going to erase his girlfriend from his mind, he is going to erase a part of his memories that includes her. There’s a big company with high technical equipments for erasing people’s mind from their loves but it doesn’t work at all! It’s a complex story witch I can’t explain it, and it’s a complex movie too. It’s one of those movies you should see it more than once to get exactly what are they going to do!

You can erase someone from your mind. Getting them out of your heart is another story! I think it was the main message of this movie, maybe you can try to forget some one you loved before, maybe with some techniques you could erase all his/her memories but you can’t do anything for you heart and it will still love him/her! l

I was a little in hurry so I couldn't concentrate and write as much as I liked

[sepid12ir]

What Dreams May Come is one of my favorite films that Robin Williams is the first cast in that film. This film is a kind of drama fantasy and romance film released in 1998 in USA.
Chris Neilson is a doctor who marred with Annie. They had 2 wonder children that(who) died in a car accident and 4 years later Chris dies in a natural way and then he goes to heaven. When Chris dies and goes to Heaven he meets Albert and discovers that Heaven is even more wondrous than anything he could have imagined. But his wife is very sad because of these events and she becomes a woman with mental problems and finally she decides to kill herself to go to the next world in order to be with his family. But unfortunately she goes to the hell because she comes to the next world by suicide. But when he finds out his wife had committed suicide, he desperately searches for her spirit, journeying through Heaven and Hell along the way.

really nice writing
but a suggetion, when u r retelling or describing sth all the sentences should follow the same tense. if it is past tense, all of the should follow the structure of past tense. If it is present tense, all of sentences should follow the present tense.
and for retelling the stories, both past n present tenses are recommended. And present tense is usually used to have more effect on readers
now, yr mistakes
who married with: who married Annie
Marry as a verb does not accept any prep: Marry Sb
be careful, these kina sentences are usually used in passive tense n then that'll be: who's married to sb

Wonder: Wonderful

she became a woman with mental problem: She got sick mentally; she got mental problems; she faced mental problems
yr sentence is not wrong grammatically, but I think it's not actually common

What’s the best movie I have ever watched?
As the other friends said I think it’s really hard to choose just one movie for the whole life so I’m going to write about one of my favorite movies not the best one. Choosing he best one is impossible for me!

One of my favorite movies is Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind in witch there’s the story of a man who is going to erase his girlfriend from his mind, he is going to erase a part of his memories that includes her. There’s a big company with high technical equipments for erasing people’s mind from their loves but it doesn’t work at all! It’s a complex story witch I can’t explain it, and it’s a complex movie too. It’s one of those movies you should see it more than once to get exactly what are they going to do!

You can erase someone from your mind. Getting them out of your heart is another story! I think it was the main message of this movie, maybe you can try to forget some one you loved before, maybe with some techniques you could erase all his/her memories but you can’t do anything for you heart and it will still love him/her! l

I was a little in hurry so I couldn't concentrate and write as much as I liked

although u were in hurry, it was absolutely great
I gotto watch this movie once more; thanks
I could not catch anything wrong herel

[masoudtr]

hi guys
What’s the best movie I have ever watched?
it is godfather1
it's so beautiful and very nice
it's about boss of mafia that marlonberando play this role
and his sun who is alpacino
it's about relation of family and job

[singleguy]

be careful, these kina sentences are usually used in passive tense n then that'll be: who's married to sb

I couldn't understand what you said! could you explain more and set some examples?

[devil_ff2008]

Like all freind I can't choose a film as best movie I've ever watched
But I wanna discribe 2 of best action films
First of them is The Command

This is a story of a rich man who mass 10 of stark people that jailbirded for ever and He buy Them from jail's moderator
Then trasmit Them to a little island and attach a timer bomb to Their foot and tell Them 1 of u that kill others can gain the freedom key
And syncronic install many video camera in island for a great TV program and gain a big money for him
And for know continuance of this story u can go and see this film

And the next film is Resident Evil 3

Oh, This is really a great action film
I can't too discribe this film
Only short of it's story :
T-Virus prevalence in further points of the earth and many people convert to Zombies
A realization group wanna solve the problem and discovery a anti virus for convert zombies to human again
And syncronic they work on Alis project
Alis is a girl that has a weird power and can kill many Zombie
This group wanna make several copy fom Alis to attack to Zombies
And continuance of the story

Some of movies that i seen and like them :
Tokio Drift , 30 Day Of Night , God Father , ...

Sorry for my bad english
Plz catch my mistakes
beforehand thanks from dear Sepid for correction