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[Kevin_Rad]

_ I used to play video game so much 2 or three years ago , but now I don’t have enough time and of course I couldn’t find good ones .
I love action ones, For example I love IGI a lot , but as u know IGI1 is more better and wonderful than second one !
As u know this game is influence in people , specially children mind .
It doesn’t have any good effective and it’s so harmful for buddies !

have a good time
so long for now

Hi dear Diana,s
With your permission I would like to offer you some corrections because I found some fundamental problems:d
this game is influence in people ---> This game influences people (if I got you right though!)j
specially children mind --> Especially children's minds.s
There is a big difference between Specially and Especially and some people use them interchangeably. Yes, perhaps you think "both of them have the same meaning!". Yeah, you're kinda right! But based on Practical English Usage book, page 168, when "E/spacially" means "Above all" you have to use especially instead of specially. There are two examples mentioned in the book:s

We play a lot of tennis, especially on Sundays.s
I like all kinds of fruits, especially apples.s

It doesn’t have any good effective and it’s so harmful for buddies --> It doesn't have any good effects and it is so harmful to the people Or to the friends (buddies).j
Keep in mind that the proposition that you have to use with "harmful" is "to" not "for". Do NOT translate Persian to English directly! Because in many cases direct translation (literal translation) may go wrong!s

Good luck bud!d

[diana_1989]

Hi dear Diana,s
With your permission I would like to offer you some corrections because I found some fundamental problems:d
this game is influence in people ---> This game influences people (if I got you right though!)j
specially children mind --> Especially children's minds.s
There is a big difference between Specially and Especially and some people use them interchangeably. Yes, perhaps you think "both of them have the same meaning!". Yeah, you're kinda right! But based on Practical English Usage book, page 168, when "E/spacially" means "Above all" you have to use especially instead of specially. There are two examples mentioned in the book:s

We play a lot of tennis, especially on Sundays.s
I like all kinds of fruits, especially apples.s

It doesn’t have any good effective and it’s so harmful for buddies --> It doesn't have any good effects and it is so harmful to the people Or to the friends (buddies).j
Keep in mind that the proposition that you have to use with "harmful" is "to" not "for". Do NOT translate Persian to English directly! Because in many cases direct translation (literal translation) may go wrong!s

Good luck bud!d

Dear kevin thanks a lot for your correction
I had so stupid mistakes
I’m confused this daysssssss and I don’t know what do I do ? sorry again !
Pray for me !
Thanks a lot
Bye

[niusha_z]

Hi all! hope you'll accept a new member (well new to this part of the forum) among you and won't consider my uninvited entrance an intrusion! anyways for a short bio, I'm gonna be 19 in 3 months, I'm addicted to movies and most of my time is spent watching them. I love cats!


and at last, are you having a discussion on a particular subject? I have no idea and I'm too lazy to read 186 pages

[DiDiSks]

hi friends how are you???

[Mr.K2]

hi friends how are you???

we are all fine....

why dont you participate and answer the questions????

[azita61]

hi friends


I come back again as you know I always have lots of question so be ready

[sepid12ir]

Hi buddies, How R U?!
iT'S My first time here that I'm sending a message .
The reason which caused me to write here is English, I do love it. And I Try my best to learn it well.
I hope to find new friends here

Love you

Sepideh

[A r c h i]

Hi buddies, How R U?!
iT'S My first time here that I'm sending a message .
The reason which caused me to write here is English, I do love it. And I Try my best to learn it well.
I hope to find new friends here

Love you

Sepideh

Hey Sepide,
Welcome to the English Speaking room. I hope this room will be a help for you to improve your english.
I want to take your attention to a trifle things in this topic

your posts will be corrected by other members, (it's a rule),I just wanted to warn you about this to pay more attention to what you write, and try to check-spell the words you're not sure about.

Wish you luck
Azadeh

[sepid12ir]

Wow, Tnx dear for your alarm. It's great. I didn't know that. I'm waiting for my friends to correct my mistakes. It's lovely.

[Vahed]

hi friends


I come back again as you know I always have lots of question so be ready

Dear Azita,
welcome back my friend
please start asking your great questions buddy!
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All new Friends,
welcome to this topic, hope you to enjoy here!
we miss your great activities and English practices.
For the first time please read this post (our #1 post in JSIE topic) :

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