Just Speak In English_Topic: No topic

[hezaro-yekshab]

make sentences:
1- Men, are ,Smarter, than, women! (I'm kidding...)
2- Cris, Moderator, Ban, P30world, YAZZ, why, hot Chair?
3- President , Petrol , Iran , Expensive , best, bad , foolishly(!)
4- Cellphone , Laptop, Photoshop, Windows 95, peasant
5- lady, kill, pizza man, Friday, pan , buy

Please make them and test your grammar and mind's ability!
thanks........................

Men are smarter than women(im not kidding )
few yeas ago Cris was a moderator,one day yazz banned of P30world,do u ask why? coz he used bad words in hotchair topic(do u like my story?)
perisident foolishly will sell petrol to us in Iran with expensive cost,he think thats the best way,but i think thats the bad way
a peasant sold his cellphone coz he wanna have a laptab with win 95 to make a wallpaper of hiz village whith photoshop
a lady when he was buying pizza of pizzaman on friday killed him with her pan

[zhone]

Wow! welcome my new friend!
Your English is good enough! im happy for having you here! and we all hope that you will be active and useful here!
be successful pal
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Correcting your post:
Improve (not "Improme")
there - That (orthographic Mistakes)
Moderators - P30world's
Laptop (not "lap-top")
A-Pizza-Man
be more careful my dear friend

Thank you Vahed,
I try to learn more from you and other members here.
I have to ready to move up to Canada near future. Can any body tell me how can i improve my english specially in listening .
Thanks millinos in advance.

[Parnyan]

Dear Parnyan, could you pls write with another color?l
Thanks Dear, I mentioned some of your mistakes, hope it's useful for u and others

I think here can help u improve ur English ---->Here will help u to improve yr English
I think coming here it's not enough----> coming here is not enough
u should do everything 4 improving---> u should do everything to improve
I think coming here it's not enough 4 being a professional-----> coming here is not enough to become a professional

HI pall
how do U do ?? first of ALL let me appreciate U 4 correctng my post >>> tnx alot<<<and another thing about color of my post ok i'm going to change it hey do u like this one i think it's better than that 1.what do U think? ll

AlL ThE BesT

[A r c h i]

Dear Parnyan, Thanks for yr attention to my posts

My god... Yellow ... I can't even read it l but the purple looks much betterl

[Cris_Y]

hi
dear parnyan. if you dont change your color you can at least write with a larger font. your posts are very hard to read!
and dear zhone, the best thing that you can do is to listen to everything you find and also try to rhink in english. in iran thinking persian doesnt makes any problems, coz everyone does that. but in an english speaking country you will have many problems if you try to think persian.
and dear sadegh, your last sentence had lots of problems so that i didnt understand your meaning. plz correct it!
have a nice time

[hezaro-yekshab]

on friday a lady killed pizza man by her pan,when she was buying pizza
is it beetter?
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Dear archi girl
can u explain
Love means never happen to say I'm sorry*
i can understand what does it mean?

[Vahed]

Hi buddies
I also hope other friends (vahed and others) did not get sad of me ....l
One more thing, Y U R worried about Ur mistakes, hah? Common pal, it's not important ... other friends like dear shahrzad, dear vahed and dear cris sometimes help us so just try 2 study hard .l
gd night l



AlL ThE BesT l

Hi My dear friends
Dear Parnyan, your (and also other friend's) Ideas about here and about every other things is reverent and everyone here is completely free! so im not sad, at all!
Be blissful pal

[Vahed]

Hi every one, seems that I've lost some pages in 2 days , vahed I like this making the sentence thingie * l



It's obvious that men are not smarter than womenl
why do u think yazz ban moderator on p30world about cris on hot chair?l
how do you explain Iran's best president (ever!!!) act toward petrol ?Doest It seem foolishly?bad or what?l
how could you possibly use photoshop on windows 95 ,while you're talking with your cellphone with a peasant and working with your laptop?ll
pizza man delivered a pan to that lady on friday evening while I was buying a new pair of shoesl




* I've seen this world a lot .l

Dear Archi-Girl, hows it going pal?
well, at the first let me say that your sentences was very good and perfect! but at the 5th sentences i can't find the world : Kill!
and about the word: thingie! do you mean "thingies" by that?
have fun dear

[Vahed]

I think here can help u improve ur English ---->Here will help u to improve yr English
I think coming here it's not enough----> coming here is not enough
u should do everything 4 improving---> u should do everything to improve
I think coming here it's not enough 4 being a professional-----> coming here is not enough to become a professional

Dear friend! thanks for your correction
but some of them (Parnyan's Sentences) isn't false at all!
for example:
I think here can help u improve ur English >>> can help you to improve
(the sentences is true but you should use "TO")
u should do everything 4 improving >>> This sentence is quite true!
(we can use "for+ing" or "to+ simple verb")
thanks...............

[Vahed]

hi
dear vahed, you have some grammer mistakes in your recent posts.theyre not important. give a look yourself
and about your answer to your 2nd question, do you want yazz to kill me!!!!!!!
and also you asked for one sentence not 3 or 4 of them(actually your 5th answer)!
anyway pretty nice answers that made me laugh too!

Hi my friend Cris!
o! you are right i checked them, thanks pal.
and no! YAZZ won't kill you don't be worry, Germans (according to YAZZ's posts!) never kill humans!
and about my 5th answer! it was a story(!) pal!
be successful
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Correcting:
Grammar (not "grammer")
They aren't (if you want to synopsis the words you should always change the second world's structure)
thanks................