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Your Writings

  محتوای مخفی: Atefe's Writing 

Topic:The most fun I’ve had recently

Birthday party carried on rarely. But it is a good reason to be happy and 1.enjoyable event for all family members.L  
Last time my mom gave the idea to celebrate my little brother’s birthday and my little sister at same time because both days are near to each other. She
invited the guests few days before.L
We went to shopping center to buy gifts for them and other necessary items for the party one day before. I wrapped the gifts. Then we decorated the drawing room with colorful paper’s flower and different2.shape of balloons. My dad and I went to confectionary to order 3.the cake in the morning. It was on Thursday afternoon. Guests 4.have come  one after another at 5 pm and we 5.welcome 6.them with warmth. Then we 6.receive them with orange juice. Afterward my dad brought the cake and my mom put it on the table in front of the guests. It was square in shape 7.that a cartoon character 8.has drawn on it with colorful cream. I put the candles on the cake. Number six for my sister and number 3 for my brother. When they were going to 9.blew out my sister 10.turn on the camera to catch to picture of them at this special moment.L 

1. An enjoyable event
2. Kinds of
3. A cake
4. Came
5. Welcomed
6. ____ ("welcome" as a verb means: accept warmly. So you don't need to use that phrase.)L
7. And
8. Has been drawn (You must use passive.)L
9. Blow out (After "going to" you should use simple form of the verb.) L
10. Turned on
Tip: Be careful about tenses of your sentences.
Your score: 6/10

  محتوای مخفی: Amir Ali's Writing 

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Your score: 0/10

  محتوای مخفی: Brain's Writing 

Topic: My Worst Vacation

My worst travel occurred in the Summer of 2006.Our family decided to go on a journey with my all aunts and uncles.We first wanted to go to Mashhad and then to north.We started the trip very well and with laugh but problems were going to start when we arrived to Mashhad , 1.one of my aunt had rented a house there and we 2. supposed to go there together but when we 3.see the house , it was small , just three families could stay there , after a small discussion my family and 4.one of my uncle went to a hotel. We all were tired and didn't 5.except it and this made all of us more tired.Tomorrow we went to the city and personally I didn't like Mashhad much so I was a little upset all the day.

Some days passed like that and then we decided to go to north.We 6.were in way whole of the day and 7.stop somewhere to get some 8.new fresh.When we arrived to Golestan , it was night and we didn't know where to stay that night , we were looking for some villas there for 2 hours and everyone was going to get angry , my father and my other uncles were discussing , everyone told something and no one couldn't decide and again we started to find a place to sleep , city was too 9.busy , with heavy traffic.At last we found somewhere to spend that damn night.Tomorrow we started to move to next city, 10.in way my uncle had car accident but nothing special happened.We arrived to next city and the last problem was going to happen again11. and this time a serious discussion occurred between my aunt's husband and my uncle, my father had gone to find a villa.After an hour finally we found a villa , this time , it was turn for women discussing. I was getting crazy , I 12.insist on to come back as soon as possible , that night passed very 13.bad.Tomorrow we all came back home with upset faces. L

I always hated to go to travel with many people, and I knew such things 14.will happen but with all problems we had some good moments too which I didn't 15.tell.I can never forget this journey. 

1.One of my aunts
2. Were
3. Saw
4. One of my aunts
5. Accept
6. spent the whole day on the road
7. Stopped
8. Rest
9. Crowded
10. On the way
11.. This time
12. Insisted on coming back
13. Badly
14. Will
15. Mention

Tip: Be careful about tenses.
Your score: 4/10

  محتوای مخفی: Legend of zelda's Writing 

Topic: How to make new friends? 

well it's not a simple question. Making friends is one of the1. complicated topics at present because 2.nowaday the humans can't find a link between each other easily, just because of the different behaviors 3.between them! But what i said is not4. about 5.every people in the world.
The first thing 6.in findingfriend IMO is finding a link between yourself and the one who wanna make her/him your friend. For example this link can be a favorite movie, 7.interesting in 7. videogamesor a music genre.
you can start a friendship 8.with speaking about weather. Actualy i think 9.start a friendship is easy but holding it and stading by it is 10.more difficult coz a friend must try11. be a good friend.

1. Most
2. Nowadays
3. _____
4. True
5. All
6. You should do to find a friend
7. A videogame
8. By
9. Starting
10. _____
11. To
Tips: Write more than two paragraphs. Be careful about punctuation.
Your Score: 4/10

  محتوای مخفی: Masoud's Writing 

Topic: My Worst Vacation


It all happened 5 years ago in the middle of summer.

At that time I had1. jackass friend. Although he was 2. foolish person  but I enjoyed his company and we had a 3.greet time together.

We planned  a little trip together from Mashhad to Esfehan . We arranged that I 4.took care of tent & sleeping bag for camping & motorcycle for 5.ride and he 6.took care of money & food.

The first day was ok. The first problem 7.was occurred when I found out my friend forgot to buy a  conserve for dinner .of course  I could tolerate  it.

One night was not a big deal.

Second day was awesome the tire was flat and in the garage I realized he had only 10000 toman. I 8.can't stand it any more but he 9.calmed down me and promised he can solve our problem.

I don't want you get bored. We carried on our trip we and 10.pretend we got mugged and lost our money. It was so 11.embarrassed  that I don't want to mention it. We 12.snitch here and there and finally called our family to send 13.a money  for us. By the way, we fell out over money last year.
 

1. A
2. A
3. Great
4. Take
5. Riding
6. Takes
7. Ocuured
8. Couldn't
9. Calmed me down
10. Pretended
11. Embarassing
12. Snitched
13. _____
Tip: Be careful about tenses.
Your Score: 6/10

  محتوای مخفی: Mohammad's Writing 

Topic: An unforgettable dream

It's hard to speak about only one unforgettable dream because I think everybody has several special dreams in his life but some of them are more 1.highlight than the others !and I want to explain one of my most special dreams I've ever had !
It was my high school time and 2.I also in final examination time ( khordad ) . and I had 3.Amar exam.
The whole day I didn't study at all and our book I think 4.had about 150 pages .it got 5.night and still I was non-studied ! at last my sister forced me to study a little and I 6.study about 50 pages of that hellish book suddenly I fell asleep.
Now I exactly remember that when I was asleep I had a dream , and in that dream the true story occurred ! I mean in my dream I watched myself that I didn't study anything and fell asleep !!!
It was one of the most unforgettable and also bitter dreams 7.I ever had.

1. Highlighted
2. It was also final examinations time/ I also had final examination.
3. Statistics
4. Was
5. Dark
6. Studied
7. I've ever had
Tips: look up the words you don't know in English. Be careful about tenses and word choice.
Your Score: 5/10

  محتوای مخفی: Reyhane's Writing 

Topic: My Worst Vacation


It happened to me long ago in a summer vacation when I was about 8 years old. I remember I was a naughty child and that cost me a breakage in my arm bone.
I was playing with my coeval cousins along the stairs of our house which was a 1.building with two floors. While playing I suggested the other kids to compete with each other to see who can better jump from the corner of the bar along the stairs! I did so but unfortunately I lost my control after the jump and fell down on the next step of stair in front of me and then on the next and the nest and  so on till forth or fifth one which was the last stair!
 
Thank god I just hurt my arm. My parent got me to the hospital. I must not forget to mention that I got to hospital quickly but after visiting a person in our2.area who had been claiming himself a professionalin treating joint displacements and I still remember how his quick act on my joint caused me bitter pain and how I screamed loudly there. That was the time when my parents found out that that was not a simple joint displacement but a bone breakage. 
Anyhow, I was treated by astrologists in hospital and had bandage over my arm for about 40 days till I was recovered completely. And a few days later I had to return to school after having my worst summer vacation.

1. duplex one
2. neighborhood
Tips: A fantabulous writing. I did enjoy reading it. By the way, those are not your mistakes, a few suggestions.
Your Score: 10/10

  محتوای مخفی: Sina's Writing 

Topic: My First School Memories



One Day , When I Was 7 Years Old, In the yard of our School , My Classmates And I Were Playing Football. Suddenly one of them hit me on my Leg and I fell down on my back. He Stood and Looked down at me for a Second and Then he ran away. After That 1.Happening I decided to get revenge.
I was waiting for a good opportunity, until, after a few days I saw him alone in a Street. I 2.was hiding behind a tree and picked up 3.a Piece of Stone and threw it 4.to him. I Broke his head .All Over his head was full of Blood. I was afraid because I Thought He gave up the ghost, therefore I quickly ran away. 
Next Day in the School I Saw him with a Bandage on his head. I Thought That I'm a Strong Man and nobody can hurt me anymore .a few Years ago I told him the story and he Forgave Me.
It was one of my best (or maybe worst) memories during the age of my elementary school. I can never forget it.

1. Accident
2. hid
3. Stone ( a piece of stone is exactly translated from Persian to English)
4. At
Tips: That was a nice one. You could even write more.
Your Score: 9/10

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Final Scores



Atefe
23/50


Amir Ali
37/50


Brain
36/50


Legend of zelda
17/50


Masoud
42/50


Mohammad
37/50


Reyhane
48/50


Sina
43/50

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Reading Keys


1. frightening
2. real
3. dangers
4. necessary
5. dark
6. see
7. yourself
8. visible
9. adult
10. inspect










Your Results


Sina
10/10


Masoud
10/10


Brain
10/10


Atefeh
8/10


dimah2005
7/10

Amir Ali
9/10

Reyhane
10/10

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Transcription

Police Officer: Hello. 24th Precinct. Officer Jones speaking.

Man: Help. Yeah, uh, it was wild, I mean really bizarre.

Police Officer: Calm down sir! Now, what do you want to report?

Man: Well, I'd like to report a UFO sighting.

Police Officer: A what?

Man: What do you mean "what?" An unidentified flying object!

Police Officer: Wait, tell me exactly what you saw.

Man: Well, I was driving home from a party about three hours ago, so it was about 2:00 AM, when I saw this bright light overhead.

Police Officer: Okay. And then what happened?

Man: Oh, man. Well, it was out of this world. I stopped to watch the light when it disappeared behind a hill about a kilometer ahead of me.

Police Officer: Alright. Then what?

Man: Well, I got back in my car and I started driving toward where the UFO landed.

Police Officer: Now, how do you know it was a UFO? Perhaps you only saw the lights of an airplane [No], or the headlights of an approaching car [No]. Things like that happen, you know.

Man: Well if it was that, how do you explain "the BEAST"?

Police Officer: What do you mean, "the BEAST"?

Man: Okay. I kept driving for about five minutes when all of a sudden, this giant, hairy creature jumped out in front of my car.

Police Officer: Oh, yeah.Then what?

Man: Well, then, the beast picked up the front of my car and said, "Get out of the car. I'm taking you to my master!" Something like that.

Police Officer: Wow? A hairy alien who can speak English! Come on!

Man: I'm not making this up, if that's what you're suggesting. Then, when I didn't get out of the car, the beast opened the car door, carried me on his shoulders to this round-shaped flying saucer, and well, that's when I woke up along side the road. The beast must have knocked me out and left me there.

Police Officer: Well, that's the best story I've heard all night, sir. Now, have you been taking any medication, drugs, or alcohol in the last 24 hours? You mentioned you went to a party.

Man: What? Well, I did have a few beers, but I'm telling the truth.

Police Officer: Okay, okay. We have a great therapist that deals with THESE kinds of cases.

Man: I'm not crazy.

Police Officer: Well, we'll look into your story. Thank you.L

Key Vocabulary

Precinct: the office of a police department in a particular area
- Let's go down to the police precinct and report the burglary.

Bizarre: strange or unusual
- That's the most bizarre story I've ever heard.

Unidentified: unknown or impossible to determine the origin
- The police were able to capture the criminal through an unidentified source.

Out of this world: unbelievable, incredible
- You have to see his enormous house. It's out of this world.

Approaching: coming closer
- Citizens have been urged to flee the area because of the approaching hurricane.L

Q's Keys


1.A


2.C


3.C


4.C


5.B




Your Results


Sina
10/10


Masoud
9/10


Brain
7/10


Atefeh
6/10


dimah2005
5/10


Amir Ali
10/10



Reyhane
9/10

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Grammar Keys

Exercise 21.1
2. I'll switch/I'll turn/I'll put
3. I'll go
4. I'll do
5. I'll show/I'll teach
6. I'll have
7. I'll send
8. I'll give/I'll bring
9. I'll stay/ I'll wait

Exercise 21.2
2. I'll go to bed
3. I think I'll walk
4. I'll play tennis (today).
5. I don't think I'll go swimming.

Exercise 21.3
1. I'll meet
2. I'll lend
3. I'm having
4. I won't forget
5. does your train leave
6. won't tell
7. are you doing
8. will you come

Exercise 21.4
2. shall I buy it?
3. what shall I give/buy/get Helen (for her birthday) ?
4. where shall we go (on holiday)?
5. shall we go bye car or (shall we) walk?/...or (shall we go) on foot?
6. what time shall I phone (you)?L

Your Results

sina
9/10


Masoud
9/10


Brain
7/10


Atefeh
7/10


dimah2005
7/10


Amir Ali
10/10



Reyhane
10/10

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Vocabulary Keys

Suitable word for the picture: wager


Exercise.1

1. Dismal
2. Wager
3. Peril
4. Recline
5. Shriek
6. Sinister
7. Conceal
8. Inhabit
9. Frigid
10. Numb
11. Corpse
12. Tempt

Your Results

sina
8/10

Masoud
10/10

Brain
6/10

Atefeh
5/10

dimah2005
9/10

Amir Ali
9/10

Reyhane
10/10

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Your Writings

  محتوای مخفی: Sina's Writing 

Topic: If I could be someone else, I would be...

That is actually hard to answer; I don't want to be anyone else. I like being me. But if I absolutely had to be someone else, I would want to be a new person. I would like to be a mother to experience their feelings about everything, especially about their children.
 A mother is the truest and the best friend that we can have. When you are a mother, you have to share your attention and your love among your children .I really like to know how she can do it so 1.good, but I'm sure It's too difficult for men to understand it .To me, a mother is not just the one who brings us into this world, she's the one who cares for us, feeds us and loves us like 2.no other and  3.no matter what. So I think all of us have to 4. proud of our 5.mother. 
I've always wanted to experience this personality but I know that I can't because I'm not a 6.mother.
 

1. You must use “well”. You need an adverb here not an adjective.
2. “No one else”
3. No matter what happens
4. Don’t forget to use “be” after “have to” and before an adjective.
5. Mothers because you used “our”
6. You can never be a mother Sina! Use “woman” instead!
Your Score: 8/10

 

  محتوای مخفی: Masoud's Writing 

Topic: Book characters I'd like to meet


What a cliché question.

When I think about this question a lot of names cross my mind

I'd like to meet Sherlock Holmes face to face because he is a remarkable detective character & always 1.beat  his opponents with notice to small details & uses them to guess what has happened.

I love his phrase   ‘Elementary, my dear Watson’   

I'd like to meet Judy abbot the main character of  My daddy long legs because she was a cheerful & intelligent & quick study girl although she was orphan but finally she achieved a fantastic goal which is 2.graduate from university and 3.married  to her daddy . Although she wasn’t beautiful 4.but she obtained his heart with passion  & kindness.

But most of all I'd like to meet Sara Crewe the character of little princess's book.

I love her etiquette & attitude .At first every one in her boarding school thought she is a spoiled child

And every one was her friend because of her fortune but after death of her father her fair weather friends abandoned her & she had to live in attic and so on, and so forth

The reason I'd love to meet her is that she was my hero in my childhood and I thought I can deal with every one 5.with being nice and useful and generous of course it didn't work out and I found out I have to eat or be eaten. All I want to tell her is a simple quote 

In a real world kindness is nothing. 

1. Beats
2, graduating
3. getting married
4. You’d better omit “but”
5. Use “by” instead of “with”
6. Be careful about punctuations.


Your Score: 9/10

  محتوای مخفی: Atefeh's Writing 

Topic: a visit to relatives home


A couple of years 1.before we went to my uncle’s house to visit them after three years that we left them.
 It was a memorable journey for our family, because we visited my grand mom and our family friends too. In addition so may changes 2. occurred during 3.these years; children became taller, young persons got married, some of 4.family had new 5.baby, 6.as fact of this life some 6.family lost their members.
We 7.have a lot of fun during one month being with them. We enjoyed 8.in going for  walking with my uncle and my sweet nieces in the early morning, going to parks 9.in the weekends, having 10.gathering in our relatives’ house and visiting historical places and beautiful natural 11.sight such as 12.water falling.

1. Ago
2. Had
3. Those
4. Families
5. Babies
6. And as a fact of this life
7. Had
8. ___
9. At the weekends
10. Gatherings
11. Sights
12. Waterfalls

Your Score: 6/10

  محتوای مخفی: Amir Ali's Writing 

Topic: The worst food I've ever ate

There is more than one 1.eatenfood that I can call 2.it "the worst food".
I don't like some foods and they're not few but sometimes we're forced to 3.do sth and I might eat them in some situations but about eggplants I prefer to die. There is some "worst food"s here.
One of the worst 4.food 5.I ever ate and also I keep on eating that is my university restaurant foods. These foods belong to that group that I described earlier; sometimes I have to eat them.
My "worst food " was 6.a sabzi polo (cooked rice blended with some vegetables, this food is served with ku-ku or fish) but here's the point: my favorite food is sabzi polo too. One time I've been invited over for a lunch; they've cooked me sabzi polo but in an awful way I don't know which way but I didn't like it. The main thing was its rice it was Indian (Yuck) I hate this kind of rice, the fish was smelly but I love fish and I ate it the way that they thought that I've never ate something like this. Of course they were right and of course this food belongs to 7.that earlier group that I described.

1.___
2.___
3. You’d better say eat something
4. Foods
5. I've ever
6.___
7. The


Your Score: 7/10

  محتوای مخفی: Reyhane's Writing 

Topic: My first friend


Friendship adds joy and beauty to our lives. We learn many things from our friends; we share our happiness and sorrow with them and get their 0.help and suggestion during ups and downs of life. A person is really lucky if he has a true friend.
 
My first friend as I remember right now was Habibe Haidarzadeh. I had been appreciating her attitude a lot at that time. She was1. kind, quite and clever student at school and a hard working and good girl for her family. I think I was the one who offered the friendship request and she willingly accepted it. We were happy and active friends and the things were going as I wished until they moved from their old house and she changed her school 2.also. We 3.still remained best friends after that but 4.again as 5.  result of our 6.elder’s decision I lost my first friendship 7.relation. 
 
Since then I have been friends with many people and I do remember all my good friends and the happy moments I 8.passed with them but due to continuous changes I faced in my life until now usually the 9.relation between me and my friends has been for a short span of time except my present friend who is 10. saying to me that I am her best friend forever!
 
At the end I wish you all have a group of good friends in every stage of your life and I hope my all friends be successful and happy.

0. Better to say helps and suggestions
1. Don’t forget to use A/An
2. Instead of “also”, you should use “too” at the end of your sentence.
3. Still is not necessary here to convey the meaning.
4.  You’d better omit “again” too.
5.1
6. “Previous” is more appropriate here.
7.___
8. Spent
9. Relations
10.. If you “tell” instead of “say to”, not only you shorten your sentence, but also you make it more accurate.


Your Score: 7/10

پ.ن. از کورش عزیز که در تصحیح رایتینگ ها کمکم کرد تشکر می کنم   

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Final Scores


Sina
45/50


Masoud
47/50


Brain
30/50

  
Atefeh
32/50


dimah2005
28/50


Amir Ali
45/50


Reyhane
46/50

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