نقل قول:5/5
note: a large range of vocab is used and the organization of ideas from the beginning to the results were perfect.
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نقل قول:5/5
note: a large range of vocab is used and the organization of ideas from the beginning to the results were perfect.
نقل قول:4.75/5
The conclusion is really suitable. more vocab could be used. some errors in panctuation
نقل قول:3/5
usage of conjunctions is perfect. The whole essay is irrelevant with the title. It should be about the advantages and disadvantages of the both marriage types NOT the reason why marriages don't last in some cases.
Summery
Education is not a value tag that determines price of a human being but it's only a medium to help him in living a better life. It means we can not say a man with a high degree of education is 100% prefect and extra ordinary creature because he is only a man who has passed through different stages of education system and the significant thing is not the degree but the knowledge, skills and manners he has got from those stages. A true educated person is the one who is ready to do any job according to his abilities and skills not his degree to improve his life
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I knew he was in pain. I pushed him down to the ground. He fell onto the grass in front of the steps to the apartment building. Now it was my turn to take control.
I stood over him and asked, “Who are you? What do you want?” He didn’t answer. He had a ski hat on, so I couldn’t see his face
“Just get the hell away from this apartment building! You’re not welcome here!” he said.
I grabbed him by the shirt, pushed his face into the ground, and put his arm behind his back. He yelled even louder now. I think he was finally ready to stop fighting.
“Now, who are you? Why can’t I go inside the apartment?” I was getting angry and wanted some answers. I saw a few people come out of the apartment building to see what was happening.
But the man still didn’t say a word. He lifted himself up suddenly, and pushed me away. He looked at me coldly for a second, then ran into the street.
فهمیدم که درد داره. به زور روی زمین کشیدمش. افتاد روی چمن روبروی پله های ورودی. حالا نوبت من بود که اوضاع رو کنترل کنم
بالای سرش ایستادم و پرسیدم:"کی هستی؟ چی می خوای؟" جواب نداد. یه کلاه اسکی سرش بود، نمی تونستم صورتش رو ببینم (نمی تونستم صورتش رو ببینم چون یه کلاه اسکی سرش بود.)
گفت: فقط از این آپارتمان(لعنتی) دور شو! تو نباید اینجا باشی.
پیراهنش رو گرفتم، صورتش رو هل دادم سمت زمین، و دستش رو بردم پشتش. شروع کرد بلندتر داد بزنه. فکر کردم بالاخره می خواد تسلیم بشه(می خواد دعوا رو تمام کنه)
ازش پرسیدم: "حالا بگو کی هستی؟ چرا نمی تونم برم توی آپارتمان؟" خیلی عصبانی بودم و جواب می خواستم. چند نفر از ساختمان بیرون اومدن که ببینن چی شده.
اما یارو هنوزهیچی نمی گفت. یه دفعه بلند شد و به یه طرف هلم (هل م) داد. برای چند لحظه با بی تفاوتی نگاهم کرد و بعد دوید توی خیابان.
READING ACTIVITY
education is a way to improve the country's progress. and we should notice that, it is not the aim by itself, but it is a mean to reach the aim
if we want to have a succesful education system, we mustn't limit ourself with usual systems, we should examine them and also we could examine new systems and ideas
although education and educated people are soo valuable for a country, but we cann't discalaim the influence of uneducated people like street sweepers
. and they are as required as the educated people
.
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I knew he was in pain. I pushed him down to the ground. He fell onto the grass in front of the steps to the apartment building. Now it was my turn to take control.
I stood over him and asked, “Who are you? What do you want?” He didn’t answer. He had a ski hat on, so I couldn’t see his face.
“Just get the hell away from this apartment building! You’re not welcome here!” he said.
I grabbed him by the shirt, pushed his face into the ground, and put his arm behind his back. He yelled even louder now. I think he was finally ready to stop fighting.
“Now, who are you? Why can’t I go inside the apartment?” I was getting angry and wanted some answers. I saw a few people come out of the apartment building to see what was happening.
But the man still didn’t say a word. He lifted himself up suddenly, and pushed me away. He looked at me coldly for a second, then ran into the street.
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میدونستم که داره درد میکشه . هولش دادم رو زمین . افتاد روی چمنهای روبه روی پله های ساختمون . حالا نوبت من بود که بر اوضاع سیطره پیدا کنم .
بالای سرش ایستادم و ازش پرسیدم " تو کی هستی ؟ چی میخوای ؟ " جوابم رو نداد .
یک کلاه اسکی سرش بود ، لذا نتوستم صورتش رو ببینم . بهم گفت : " فقط گورتو از این ساختمون گم کن ! حضور تو در اینجا اصلا خوشایند نیست ! "
پیراهنش رو گرفتم ، صورتش رو چسبوندم به زمین و دستش رو گذاشتم پشتش . حالا دیگه حتی داشت بلندتر هم داد میزد.
فکر کردم بالاخره آماده شده که دعوا رو تموم کنه . " بینم حالا کی هستی ؟ چرا من نمیتونم برم تو ساختمون ؟ " دیگه داشتم قاطی میکردم و جواب میخواستم.
چند نفر رو دیدم که از ساختمون میان بیرون تا ببینن چه اتفاقی داشت میافتاد . اما این یارو هنوز یک کلمه هم حرف نزده بود .
یهو خودشو بلند کرد و منو پرتم کرد اونور . یه لحظه نگاه سردی بهم انداخت بعدش به سمت خیابون دوید .... .
In the name of AllahThe Summery:
As education is a way to prepare individual for better life so we should choose a good system of education that help children in this way. In the modern countries it has been common to supply free education for all the people, but due to their degrees they refuse to do work with their hands as they thought it dirty and shameful. But we know that the work of a farmer is more important than a professor. Therefore in an educated society every one should do his job which is suited to his brain and ability. We can realize that all jobs are necessary to society, and it is very bad to be ashamed of one's work, or to scorn someone else is. Only such a type of education can be called valuable to society.
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I turned to find Anne to make sure she was okay. “Do you know who he was? Have you seen him before?” I asked.برگشتم که مطمئن بشم حال آن خوبه. ازش پرسیدم: "می دونی اون کی بود؟ قبلا دیدیش؟"
“No, Dr. Reeves. I don’t come to my sister’s apartment very often. I don’t know who he is.”
Let me back up a minute: This morning in my office Anne had explained that two days ago, she was supposed to have lunch with her sister, Sarah Salas. When her sister didn’t come to the restaurant, Anne called Sarah’s apartment. There was no answer.
Anne went to her sister’s apartment right away and knocked on the door, but there was no one home. She called Sarah’s work. Her boss told Anne that Sarah had been missing for two days. So Anne decided to ask me to help find her sister and her sister’s husband, Bill, who was also missing.l
"نه، دکتر ریوز. من زیاد به خونه ی خواهرم نمی یام. اون مرد رو نمی شناسم."
اجازه بدید چند دقیقه برم بالا؛ امروز صبح تو دفترم آن گفت که دو روز قبل، می خواسته با خواهرش، سارا سالاس، ناهار برن بیرون. وقتی خواهرش به رستوران نمی ره، آن به آپارتمان سارا زنگ می زنه و کسی جواب نمی ده.
آن فورا به آپارتمان خواهرش می ره. در می زنه، ولی کسی خونه نبوده. رییس سارا به آن گفته که سارا دو روز بوده که سرکار نرفته. برای همین آن تصمیم می گیره برای پیدا کردن خواهر و شوهرخواهرش،بیل ،که اون هم گم شده بود، از من کمک بخواد.