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@mir returned home from hospital and they thanked God sincerely for his very valuable reward. They had sit in the room and were discussing about the details of the wedding ceremony that once Mohammad noticed that he could not hear Ali's voice. He asked Archi where he was. But Archi also didn't know. They all investigated everywhere but Ali was not anywhere. He had been disappeared. Mohammad rushed to the street agitatedly and asked everyone if he had seen Ali. Finally one of the neighbors told him that he had seen AminTNT that had kidnapped Ali.

AminTNT was the head of teenage rabble gang of the neighborhood and he was really a vicious boy. He was called TNT because everywhere he went, a very bad thing happebned there. The habitants of the neighborood were really annoyed and also fearful of him. Mohammad was really anxious. He could abuse his little son. What could he do?c

Amintnt continues:

Mohammad was terribly afraid....... He directly came back to the home and rushed to the telephone........ Archi, Amir and Samantha wondered why Mohammad was so afraid........ They asked him but got no replies........ " Please help me..... My son.... My son has been kidnapped by Amintnt......." Mohammad said to the officer on the phone.........." Please calm down, we will do our best to find him" Officer tried to cool him down........ He told the officer all the story..... Other folks also were listening to him...... l

At the police station........ l

As they entered the police station, detective Narges known as love-to-learn appeared...... She was one of the strangest and cleverest detective in the city...... l

"Amintnt...... He's the fiercest criminal in the city....... But don't worry..... I do know my job and I know how to handle this case" Love-to-learn said..........l

Archi and Mohammad was so worried about their son..they couldn't even eat or sleep. Archi was crying all the time..She couldn't imagine that her lovely son was in the hands of a very scary criminal "Amin tnt" . " What do you think he's doing now" She asked Maryam. "Did they give enough food to Ali" She continued." Maryam and @mir was trying to calm them down but they couldn't. It wasn't so easy. They had completely forgotten their marriage. A few days later in the early morning, @mir went to Maryam's bed and he whispered" will you marry me now?" ..."oh my God, what in earth you're doing here ??What are you talking about? In this situation..It's not fair, Archi and Mohammad are in their very bad days and you're talking about marriage?".. Amir answered that they would go to the place just to become legally wedded husband and wife. And after everything finished they could hold their party .." I feel much better this way" Amir added.l

I wish I don't interrupt you my friends this topic is really useful
i think this can help you if you want to write detective stories

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i love detective stories too
specially Sherlock Holmes's stories

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amir returned home from hospital and they thanked God sincerely for his very valuable reward. They had sit in the room and were discussing about the details of the wedding ceremony that once Mohammad noticed that he could not hear Ali's voice. He asked Archi where he was. But Archi also didn't know. They all investigated everywhere but Ali was not anywhere. He had been disappeared. Mohammad rushed to the street agitatedly and asked everyone if he had seen Ali. Finally one of the neighbors told him that he had seen AminTNT that had kidnapped Ali.

AminTNT was the head of teenage rabble gang of the neighborhood and he was really a vicious boy. He was called TNT because everywhere he went, a very bad thing happebned there. The habitants of the neighborood were really annoyed and also fearful of him. Mohammad was really anxious. He could abuse his little son. What could he do?c

Amintnt continues:

Mohammad was terribly afraid....... He directly came back to the home and rushed to the telephone........ Archi, Amir and Samantha wondered why Mohammad was so afraid........ They asked him but got no replies........ " Please help me..... My son.... My son has been kidnapped by Amintnt......." Mohammad said to the officer on the phone.........." Please calm down, we will do our best to find him" Officer tried to cool him down........ He told the officer all the story..... Other folks also were listening to him...... l

At the police station........ l

As they entered the police station, detective Narges known as love-to-learn appeared...... She was one of the strangest and cleverest detective in the city...... l

"Amintnt...... He's the fiercest criminal in the city....... But don't worry..... I do know my job and I know how to handle this case" Love-to-learn said..........l

Archi and Mohammad was so worried about their son..they couldn't even eat or sleep. Archi was crying all the time..She couldn't imagine that her lovely son was in the hands of a very scary criminal "Amin tnt" . " What do you think he's doing now" She asked Maryam. "Did they give enough food to Ali" She continued." Maryam and @mir was trying to calm them down but they couldn't. It wasn't so easy. They had completely forgotten their marriage. A few days later in the early morning, @mir went to Maryam's bed and he whispered" will you marry me now?" ..."oh my God, what in earth you're doing here ??What are you talking about? In this situation..It's not fair, Archi and Mohammad are in their very bad days and you're talking about marriage?".. Amir answered that they would go to the place just to become legally wedded husband and wife. And after everything finished they could hold their party .." I feel much better this way" Amir added

Maryam agreed with what amir had told her, she felt much better this way, to be with him and around him all the time. So they became legally wedded husband and wife. On their way home they went to Police station to ask about Ali and amintnt. They talked to detective love-to-learn. She told them that they're doing their best to find a trace form amintnt, but he's nowhere and nobody has seen them since he kidnapped Ali. "I have one of our best detectives and he'll help us to take amin in captivity he's so professional in his job ..his name is "Vahed" . Detective said.l

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I'll continue myself

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I'll join to you but let me first finish reading all story up to here. i't seems it's very long dramatic story. i'd have good minds to continue story...
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i think it would be better if you and each people who writes here not to copy all pervious posts just write the following. by this topic won't be such crowded/

THANKS

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amir returned home from hospital and they thanked God sincerely for his very valuable reward. They had sit in the room and were discussing about the details of the wedding ceremony that once Mohammad noticed that he could not hear Ali's voice. He asked Archi where he was. But Archi also didn't know. They all investigated everywhere but Ali was not anywhere. He had been disappeared. Mohammad rushed to the street agitatedly and asked everyone if he had seen Ali. Finally one of the neighbors told him that he had seen AminTNT that had kidnapped Ali.

AminTNT was the head of teenage rabble gang of the neighborhood and he was really a vicious boy. He was called TNT because everywhere he went, a very bad thing happebned there. The habitants of the neighborood were really annoyed and also fearful of him. Mohammad was really anxious. He could abuse his little son. What could he do?c

Amintnt continues:

Mohammad was terribly afraid....... He directly came back to the home and rushed to the telephone........ Archi, Amir and Samantha wondered why Mohammad was so afraid........ They asked him but got no replies........ " Please help me..... My son.... My son has been kidnapped by Amintnt......." Mohammad said to the officer on the phone.........." Please calm down, we will do our best to find him" Officer tried to cool him down........ He told the officer all the story..... Other folks also were listening to him...... l

At the police station........ l

As they entered the police station, detective Narges known as love-to-learn appeared...... She was one of the strangest and cleverest detective in the city...... l

"Amintnt...... He's the fiercest criminal in the city....... But don't worry..... I do know my job and I know how to handle this case" Love-to-learn said..........l

Archi and Mohammad was so worried about their son..they couldn't even eat or sleep. Archi was crying all the time..She couldn't imagine that her lovely son was in the hands of a very scary criminal "Amin tnt" . " What do you think he's doing now" She asked Maryam. "Did they give enough food to Ali" She continued." Maryam and @mir was trying to calm them down but they couldn't. It wasn't so easy. They had completely forgotten their marriage. A few days later in the early morning, @mir went to Maryam's bed and he whispered" will you marry me now?" ..."oh my God, what in earth you're doing here ??What are you talking about? In this situation..It's not fair, Archi and Mohammad are in their very bad days and you're talking about marriage?".. Amir answered that they would go to the place just to become legally wedded husband and wife. And after everything finished they could hold their party .." I feel much better this way" Amir added

Maryam agreed with what amir had told her, she felt much better this way, to be with him and around him all the time. So they became legally wedded husband and wife. On their way home they went to Police station to ask about Ali and amintnt. They talked to detective love-to-learn. She told them that they're doing their best to find a trace form amintnt, but he's nowhere and nobody has seen them since he kidnapped Ali. "I have one of our best detectives and he'll help us to take amin in captivity he's so professional in his job ..his name is "Vahed" . Detective said.

Vahed was an expert , well- exprienced and kind-hearted detective

Mohammad and archi - his lovely but now disapointed wife - finally decided to look for their son seriously due to the heavy burden of loneliness

therefor they talked to detective vahed to get more information and follow the best solution

: he said as his final report about amintnt

unfortunately I have got to tell you that he has escaped to the United States and he is now in New York city

following his trace ; I have to travel there

: Immidiately Mohammad burst into tears and said

Do you mean that I should stay at home and die looking forward to see my son once again

! I never can tolerate this state then he added : I will come with you

l

amir returned home from hospital and they thanked God sincerely for his very valuable reward. They had sit in the room and were discussing about the details of the wedding ceremony that once Mohammad noticed that he could not hear Ali's voice. He asked Archi where he was. But Archi also didn't know. They all investigated everywhere but Ali was not anywhere. He had been disappeared. Mohammad rushed to the street agitatedly and asked everyone if he had seen Ali. Finally one of the neighbors told him that he had seen AminTNT that had kidnapped Ali.

AminTNT was the head of teenage rabble gang of the neighborhood and he was really a vicious boy. He was called TNT because everywhere he went, a very bad thing happebned there. The habitants of the neighborood were really annoyed and also fearful of him. Mohammad was really anxious. He could abuse his little son. What could he do?c

Amintnt continues:

Mohammad was terribly afraid....... He directly came back to the home and rushed to the telephone........ Archi, Amir and Samantha wondered why Mohammad was so afraid........ They asked him but got no replies........ " Please help me..... My son.... My son has been kidnapped by Amintnt......." Mohammad said to the officer on the phone.........." Please calm down, we will do our best to find him" Officer tried to cool him down........ He told the officer all the story..... Other folks also were listening to him...... l

At the police station........ l

As they entered the police station, detective Narges known as love-to-learn appeared...... She was one of the strangest and cleverest detective in the city...... l

"Amintnt...... He's the fiercest criminal in the city....... But don't worry..... I do know my job and I know how to handle this case" Love-to-learn said..........l

Archi and Mohammad was so worried about their son..they couldn't even eat or sleep. Archi was crying all the time..She couldn't imagine that her lovely son was in the hands of a very scary criminal "Amin tnt" . " What do you think he's doing now" She asked Maryam. "Did they give enough food to Ali" She continued." Maryam and @mir was trying to calm them down but they couldn't. It wasn't so easy. They had completely forgotten their marriage. A few days later in the early morning, @mir went to Maryam's bed and he whispered" will you marry me now?" ..."oh my God, what in earth you're doing here ??What are you talking about? In this situation..It's not fair, Archi and Mohammad are in their very bad days and you're talking about marriage?".. Amir answered that they would go to the place just to become legally wedded husband and wife. And after everything finished they could hold their party .." I feel much better this way" Amir added

Maryam agreed with what amir had told her, she felt much better this way, to be with him and around him all the time. So they became legally wedded husband and wife. On their way home they went to Police station to ask about Ali and amintnt. They talked to detective love-to-learn. She told them that they're doing their best to find a trace form amintnt, but he's nowhere and nobody has seen them since he kidnapped Ali. "I have one of our best detectives and he'll help us to take amin in captivity he's so professional in his job ..his name is "Vahed" . Detective said.

Vahed was an expert , well- exprienced and kind-hearted detective.
Mohammad and archi - his lovely but now disapointed wife - finally decided to look for their son seriously due to the heavy burden of loneliness,therefor they talked to detective vahed to get more information and follow the best solution: he said as his final report about amintnt.unfortunately I have got to tell you that he has escaped to the United States and he is now in New York city,following his trace ; I have to travel there: Immidiately Mohammad burst into tears and said:Do you mean that I should stay at home and die looking forward to see my son once again,I never can tolerate this state then he added : I will come with you.

Archi was so shocked, loosing Mohammad and Ali at the same time was unbearable for her. She decided to travle with them. "But I can only take one person with me " Detective Vahed said. "But how can I stay here all alone " Archi replied. They were so depressed when they reached the house , as soon as Archi saw Maryam she burst into tears and told her that she can't go to US with Mohammad. Maryam told her that she can get the visa for her as she's an american. " But it'll take some time" Maryam added. Archi told her that it didn't matter how much time it took. She just want to be with her husband.
Mohammad and Vahed left a week after that. Archi and @mir was waiting for their visa to join them soon. After 3 weeks, They got an email from Us embassy that their visas are ready. Archi was in a Megga happy mood. She had contact with Mohmmad during the past 3 weeks and he was so depressed without her.But good news was that they could find amintnt's trace in NY

Abstract of the story up to now
Once upon a time, Samantha and Nicholas, two poor young mates lived. In an accident Nicholas became paralyzed while his wife was pregnant. Nicholad hanged himself after a hard depression and Samantha missed her fetus because she reached at the hospital late. Then her friend's husband wanted her to become his secratary. She went there but soon realized that he had devilish intentions in his mind.
Then she decided to quit USA and migrate to Iran. In the airport, she saw @mir and they fell in love with each other. They went to Qom to visit @mir's friend and his family, Archi and Ali, their little son, in order to ask how could they marry. Finally Samantha converted to Islam and chsnged her name to Maryam in order to get married with @mir. While they were getting prepared for wedding, they knew that @mir had a malignant tumor in his brain and he was in the last six months of his life. Maryam went to Jamkaran and beseeched God to save his life and God granted @mir's health again.

amir returned home from hospital and they thanked God sincerely for his very valuable reward. They had sit in the room and were discussing about the details of the wedding ceremony that once Mohammad noticed that he could not hear Ali's voice. He asked Archi where he was. But Archi also didn't know. They all investigated everywhere but Ali was not anywhere. He had been disappeared. Mohammad rushed to the street agitatedly and asked everyone if he had seen Ali. Finally one of the neighbors told him that he had seen AminTNT that had kidnapped Ali.

AminTNT was the head of teenage rabble gang of the neighborhood and he was really a vicious boy. He was called TNT because everywhere he went, a very bad thing happebned there. The habitants of the neighborood were really annoyed and also fearful of him. Mohammad was really anxious. He could abuse his little son. What could he do?c

Mohammad was terribly afraid....... He directly came back to the home and rushed to the telephone........ Archi, Amir and Samantha wondered why Mohammad was so afraid........ They asked him but got no replies........ " Please help me..... My son.... My son has been kidnapped by Amintnt......." Mohammad said to the officer on the phone.........." Please calm down, we will do our best to find him" Officer tried to cool him down........ He told the officer all the story..... Other folks also were listening to him...... l

At the police station........ l

As they entered the police station, detective Narges known as love-to-learn appeared...... She was one of the strangest and cleverest detective in the city...... l

"Amintnt...... He's the fiercest criminal in the city....... But don't worry..... I do know my job and I know how to handle this case" Love-to-learn said..........l

Archi and Mohammad was so worried about their son..they couldn't even eat or sleep. Archi was crying all the time..She couldn't imagine that her lovely son was in the hands of a very scary criminal "Amin tnt" . " What do you think he's doing now" She asked Maryam. "Did they give enough food to Ali" She continued." Maryam and @mir was trying to calm them down but they couldn't. It wasn't so easy. They had completely forgotten their marriage. A few days later in the early morning, @mir went to Maryam's bed and he whispered" will you marry me now?" ..."oh my God, what in earth you're doing here ??What are you talking about? In this situation..It's not fair, Archi and Mohammad are in their very bad days and you're talking about marriage?".. Amir answered that they would go to the place just to become legally wedded husband and wife. And after everything finished they could hold their party .." I feel much better this way" Amir added

Maryam agreed with what amir had told her, she felt much better this way, to be with him and around him all the time. So they became legally wedded husband and wife. On their way home they went to Police station to ask about Ali and amintnt. They talked to detective love-to-learn. She told them that they're doing their best to find a trace form amintnt, but he's nowhere and nobody has seen them since he kidnapped Ali. "I have one of our best detectives and he'll help us to take amin in captivity he's so professional in his job ..his name is "Vahed" . Detective said.

Vahed was an expert , well- exprienced and kind-hearted detective.
Mohammad and archi - his lovely but now disapointed wife - finally decided to look for their son seriously due to the heavy burden of loneliness,therefor they talked to detective vahed to get more information and follow the best solution: he said as his final report about amintnt.unfortunately I have got to tell you that he has escaped to the United States and he is now in New York city,following his trace ; I have to travel there: Immidiately Mohammad burst into tears and said:Do you mean that I should stay at home and die looking forward to see my son once again,I never can tolerate this state then he added : I will come with you.

Archi was so shocked, loosing Mohammad and Ali at the same time was unbearable for her. She decided to travle with them. "But I can only take one person with me " Detective Vahed said. "But how can I stay here all alone " Archi replied. They were so depressed when they reached the house , as soon as Archi saw Maryam she burst into tears and told her that she can't go to US with Mohammad. Maryam told her that she can get the visa for her as she's an american. " But it'll take some time" Maryam added. Archi told her that it didn't matter how much time it took. She just want to be with her husband.
Mohammad and Vahed left a week after that. Archi and @mir was waiting for their visa to join them soon. After 3 weeks, They got an email from Us embassy that their visas are ready. Archi was in a Megga happy mood. She had contact with Mohmmad during the past 3 weeks and he was so depressed without her.But good news was that they could find amintnt's trace in NY

Next morning, the telephone rang. @mir picked up the phone. It was detective love-to-learn. After common greetings, love-to-learn told @mir that they had found a corpse of a little boy in the deserts around Qom whose specifications completely matched with Ali. Love-to-learn said "I'm so sorry to inform you that we could find signs of hitting and striking, stabbing with a knife, burning with cigarettes and sexual abuse on his body. You should come tomorrow to identify the dead body."
@mir was really shocked. How could he tell Archi about this heart-breaking, onerous and tremendous disaster?c

Abstract of the story up to now
Once upon a time, Samantha and Nicholas, two poor young mates lived. In an accident Nicholas became paralyzed while his wife was pregnant. Nicholad hanged himself after a hard depression and Samantha missed her fetus because she reached at the hospital late. Then her friend's husband wanted her to become his secratary. She went there but soon realized that he had devilish intentions in his mind.
Then she decided to quit USA and migrate to Iran. In the airport, she saw @mir and they fell in love with each other. They went to Qom to visit @mir's friend and his family, Archi and Ali, their little son, in order to ask how could they marry. Finally Samantha converted to Islam and chsnged her name to Maryam in order to get married with @mir. While they were getting prepared for wedding, they knew that @mir had a malignant tumor in his brain and he was in the last six months of his life. Maryam went to Jamkaran and beseeched God to save his life and God granted @mir's health again.

amir returned home from hospital and they thanked God sincerely for his very valuable reward. They had sit in the room and were discussing about the details of the wedding ceremony that once Mohammad noticed that he could not hear Ali's voice. He asked Archi where he was. But Archi also didn't know. They all investigated everywhere but Ali was not anywhere. He had been disappeared. Mohammad rushed to the street agitatedly and asked everyone if he had seen Ali. Finally one of the neighbors told him that he had seen AminTNT that had kidnapped Ali.

AminTNT was the head of teenage rabble gang of the neighborhood and he was really a vicious boy. He was called TNT because everywhere he went, a very bad thing happebned there. The habitants of the neighborood were really annoyed and also fearful of him. Mohammad was really anxious. He could abuse his little son. What could he do?c

Mohammad was terribly afraid....... He directly came back to the home and rushed to the telephone........ Archi, Amir and Samantha wondered why Mohammad was so afraid........ They asked him but got no replies........ " Please help me..... My son.... My son has been kidnapped by Amintnt......." Mohammad said to the officer on the phone.........." Please calm down, we will do our best to find him" Officer tried to cool him down........ He told the officer all the story..... Other folks also were listening to him...... l

At the police station........ l

As they entered the police station, detective Narges known as love-to-learn appeared...... She was one of the strangest and cleverest detective in the city...... l

"Amintnt...... He's the fiercest criminal in the city....... But don't worry..... I do know my job and I know how to handle this case" Love-to-learn said..........l

Archi and Mohammad was so worried about their son..they couldn't even eat or sleep. Archi was crying all the time..She couldn't imagine that her lovely son was in the hands of a very scary criminal "Amin tnt" . " What do you think he's doing now" She asked Maryam. "Did they give enough food to Ali" She continued." Maryam and @mir was trying to calm them down but they couldn't. It wasn't so easy. They had completely forgotten their marriage. A few days later in the early morning, @mir went to Maryam's bed and he whispered" will you marry me now?" ..."oh my God, what in earth you're doing here ??What are you talking about? In this situation..It's not fair, Archi and Mohammad are in their very bad days and you're talking about marriage?".. Amir answered that they would go to the place just to become legally wedded husband and wife. And after everything finished they could hold their party .." I feel much better this way" Amir added

Maryam agreed with what amir had told her, she felt much better this way, to be with him and around him all the time. So they became legally wedded husband and wife. On their way home they went to Police station to ask about Ali and amintnt. They talked to detective love-to-learn. She told them that they're doing their best to find a trace form amintnt, but he's nowhere and nobody has seen them since he kidnapped Ali. "I have one of our best detectives and he'll help us to take amin in captivity he's so professional in his job ..his name is "Vahed" . Detective said.

Vahed was an expert , well- exprienced and kind-hearted detective.
Mohammad and archi - his lovely but now disapointed wife - finally decided to look for their son seriously due to the heavy burden of loneliness,therefor they talked to detective vahed to get more information and follow the best solution: he said as his final report about amintnt.unfortunately I have got to tell you that he has escaped to the United States and he is now in New York city,following his trace ; I have to travel there: Immidiately Mohammad burst into tears and said:Do you mean that I should stay at home and die looking forward to see my son once again,I never can tolerate this state then he added : I will come with you.

Archi was so shocked, loosing Mohammad and Ali at the same time was unbearable for her. She decided to travle with them. "But I can only take one person with me " Detective Vahed said. "But how can I stay here all alone " Archi replied. They were so depressed when they reached the house , as soon as Archi saw Maryam she burst into tears and told her that she can't go to US with Mohammad. Maryam told her that she can get the visa for her as she's an american. " But it'll take some time" Maryam added. Archi told her that it didn't matter how much time it took. She just want to be with her husband.
Mohammad and Vahed left a week after that. Archi and @mir was waiting for their visa to join them soon. After 3 weeks, They got an email from Us embassy that their visas are ready. Archi was in a Megga happy mood. She had contact with Mohmmad during the past 3 weeks and he was so depressed without her.But good news was that they could find amintnt's trace in NY

Next morning, the telephone rang. @mir picked up the phone. It was detective love-to-learn. After common greetings, love-to-learn told @mir that they had found a corpse of a little boy in the deserts around Qom whose specifications completely matched with Ali. Love-to-learn said "I'm so sorry to inform you that we could find signs of hitting and striking, stabbing with a knife, burning with cigarettes and sexual abuse on his body. You should come tomorrow to identify the dead body."
@mir was really shocked. How could he tell Archi about this heart-breaking, onerous and tremendous disaster?

@mir decided to tell the truth to Maryam so that she could tell Archi and he himself talked with Mohammad. It was such a bad moment for all of them. As soon as Archi heard the news she fainted. Maryam and @mir took her to hospital. Maryam told @mir that detective Vahed would tell the truth to Mohammad and they would be back in Iran so soon. The next day they went to identify the body, Archi was still in hospital. So @mir and Maryam went there. After a while they saw a dead body of a child without head :18:. " But how I can identify him, there's no head " Ali told the officer. " Do you know any sign in his body" Officer asked. @mir answered that he should ask his mother .l

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signs of hitting and striking, stabbing with a knife, burning with cigarettes and sexual abuse on his body

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Hey this is my son you're talking about, @mir I'll kill you with my own hands:27:l

minizoro begins

Rest of Story
Mohammad & detective Vahed still haven't got back from US. When @mir went to Archi and asked her to aware him if there are any other signs of Ali's identity except his head Archi couldn't answer him.
In fact Archi in that kind of spiritual condition couldn't think true about anything, so what could @mir do? When @mir consulted with his wife she advised him to call
Mohammad, as he is Ali's father and surly he could help them in the horrible case.
At that day evening @mir called Mohammad. Fortunately Mohammad & Vahed haven't leaved US because of visa problems.
At first @mir completely explained to Mohammad what had happened at legal medicine and that Archi couldn't help them. Mohammad shocked when he heard that that body had lost its head.
"…So Mohammad is there any signs in his body that is special for Ali please tell me now, we should make sure if that body isn't Ali's"
"On the phone Mohammad suddenly stopped groaning:
"Sign?!" Mohammad said, after a while he continued "Oh, I think I can remember one."
"What, what's that?" @mir asked.
"When he was a child and we were going to cut out his navel suddenly the doctor made a deep pain in his skin. If you look for it very carefully you won't miss it"

Tomorrow morning @mir got to legal medicine as early as he could, he went to the corpse but he couldn't find any sign of every thing that Mohammad had talk about it.
@mir got back to Archi and told her what happened. Archi became more comfort.
"Oh really @mir… Gee @mir you made my mind free. but for being sure I'd like to chek it by my self" Archi said.
@mir & Maryam agreed too.
Archi got the same result by checking out the corpse of miserable boy. While they were getting out the legal medicine Archi saw detective Narges (love-to-learn) who was running unto her. She had a bad run
"Uh he...llo Ar…chi … thank God …" detective Narges said while she was panting deeply.
"Calm down" Archi said to Narges. "What's wrong?"
"Good news … that's not Ali" detective Narges replied. "DNA tests proves it"
"Uh my dear firend thank you but we already know this" Archi said
"And do you know where is Ali?" detective Narges continued. "Ali is in US but he isn't in Amintnt. He just rubbed it from Iran by the order of someone else"
"Really??? Who???" Maryam asked
"We don't know exactly who, but my husband minizoro gusses that it would be by the order of your boss."
"Your husband?? My boss?? What are you talking about??" Maryam Asked
"See my husband minizoro had worked by the most famous detective Sherlock Holmes. He is very profitional in vague cases. Do you remember Sara? Your friend in US. You had worked for his husband a while and you have came to Iran.

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p.s: now i think it's enough detective
thanks mohammad
what does p.s stands for??

Abstract of the story up to now
Once upon a time, Samantha and Nicholas, two poor young mates lived. In an accident Nicholas became paralyzed while his wife was pregnant. Nicholad hanged himself after a hard depression and Samantha missed her fetus because she reached at the hospital late. Then her friend's husband wanted her to become his secratary. She went there but soon realized that he had devilish intentions in his mind.
Then she decided to quit USA and migrate to Iran. In the airport, she saw @mir and they fell in love with each other. They went to Qom to visit @mir's friend and his family, Archi and Ali, their little son, in order to ask how could they marry. Finally Samantha converted to Islam and chsnged her name to Maryam in order to get married with @mir. While they were getting prepared for wedding, they knew that @mir had a malignant tumor in his brain and he was in the last six months of his life. Maryam went to Jamkaran and beseeched God to save his life and God granted @mir's health again.

amir returned home from hospital and they thanked God sincerely for his very valuable reward. They had sit in the room and were discussing about the details of the wedding ceremony that once Mohammad noticed that he could not hear Ali's voice. He asked Archi where he was. But Archi also didn't know. They all investigated everywhere but Ali was not anywhere. He had been disappeared. Mohammad rushed to the street agitatedly and asked everyone if he had seen Ali. Finally one of the neighbors told him that he had seen AminTNT that had kidnapped Ali.

AminTNT was the head of teenage rabble gang of the neighborhood and he was really a vicious boy. He was called TNT because everywhere he went, a very bad thing happebned there. The habitants of the neighborood were really annoyed and also fearful of him. Mohammad was really anxious. He could abuse his little son. What could he do?c

Mohammad was terribly afraid....... He directly came back to the home and rushed to the telephone........ Archi, Amir and Samantha wondered why Mohammad was so afraid........ They asked him but got no replies........ " Please help me..... My son.... My son has been kidnapped by Amintnt......." Mohammad said to the officer on the phone.........." Please calm down, we will do our best to find him" Officer tried to cool him down........ He told the officer all the story..... Other folks also were listening to him...... l

At the police station........ l

As they entered the police station, detective Narges known as love-to-learn appeared...... She was one of the strangest and cleverest detective in the city...... l

"Amintnt...... He's the fiercest criminal in the city....... But don't worry..... I do know my job and I know how to handle this case" Love-to-learn said..........l

Archi and Mohammad was so worried about their son..they couldn't even eat or sleep. Archi was crying all the time..She couldn't imagine that her lovely son was in the hands of a very scary criminal "Amin tnt" . " What do you think he's doing now" She asked Maryam. "Did they give enough food to Ali" She continued." Maryam and @mir was trying to calm them down but they couldn't. It wasn't so easy. They had completely forgotten their marriage. A few days later in the early morning, @mir went to Maryam's bed and he whispered" will you marry me now?" ..."oh my God, what in earth you're doing here ??What are you talking about? In this situation..It's not fair, Archi and Mohammad are in their very bad days and you're talking about marriage?".. Amir answered that they would go to the place just to become legally wedded husband and wife. And after everything finished they could hold their party .." I feel much better this way" Amir added

Maryam agreed with what amir had told her, she felt much better this way, to be with him and around him all the time. So they became legally wedded husband and wife. On their way home they went to Police station to ask about Ali and amintnt. They talked to detective love-to-learn. She told them that they're doing their best to find a trace form amintnt, but he's nowhere and nobody has seen them since he kidnapped Ali. "I have one of our best detectives and he'll help us to take amin in captivity he's so professional in his job ..his name is "Vahed" . Detective said.

Vahed was an expert , well- exprienced and kind-hearted detective.
Mohammad and archi - his lovely but now disapointed wife - finally decided to look for their son seriously due to the heavy burden of loneliness,therefor they talked to detective vahed to get more information and follow the best solution: he said as his final report about amintnt.unfortunately I have got to tell you that he has escaped to the United States and he is now in New York city,following his trace ; I have to travel there: Immidiately Mohammad burst into tears and said:Do you mean that I should stay at home and die looking forward to see my son once again,I never can tolerate this state then he added : I will come with you.

Archi was so shocked, loosing Mohammad and Ali at the same time was unbearable for her. She decided to travle with them. "But I can only take one person with me " Detective Vahed said. "But how can I stay here all alone " Archi replied. They were so depressed when they reached the house , as soon as Archi saw Maryam she burst into tears and told her that she can't go to US with Mohammad. Maryam told her that she can get the visa for her as she's an american. " But it'll take some time" Maryam added. Archi told her that it didn't matter how much time it took. She just want to be with her husband.
Mohammad and Vahed left a week after that. Archi and @mir was waiting for their visa to join them soon. After 3 weeks, They got an email from Us embassy that their visas are ready. Archi was in a Megga happy mood. She had contact with Mohmmad during the past 3 weeks and he was so depressed without her.But good news was that they could find amintnt's trace in NY

Next morning, the telephone rang. @mir picked up the phone. It was detective love-to-learn. After common greetings, love-to-learn told @mir that they had found a corpse of a little boy in the deserts around Qom whose specifications completely matched with Ali. Love-to-learn said "I'm so sorry to inform you that we could find signs of hitting and striking, stabbing with a knife, burning with cigarettes and sexual abuse on his body. You should come tomorrow to identify the dead body."
@mir was really shocked. How could he tell Archi about this heart-breaking, onerous and tremendous disaster?

@mir decided to tell the truth to Maryam so that she could tell Archi and he himself talked with Mohammad. It was such a bad moment for all of them. As soon as Archi heard the news she fainted. Maryam and @mir took her to hospital. Maryam told @mir that detective Vahed would tell the truth to Mohammad and they would be back in Iran so soon. The next day they went to identify the body, Archi was still in hospital. So @mir and Maryam went there. After a while they saw a dead body of a child without head [ برای مشاهده لینک ، با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] . " But how I can identify him, there's no head " Ali told the officer. " Do you know any sign in his body" Officer asked. @mir answered that he should ask his mother .

Mohammad & detective Vahed still haven't got back from US. When @mir went to Archi and asked her to aware him if there are any other signs of Ali's identity except his head Archi couldn't answer him.
In fact Archi in that kind of spiritual condition couldn't think true about anything, so what could @mir do? When @mir consulted with his wife she advised him to call Mohammad, as he is Ali's father and surly he could help them in the horrible case.
At that day evening @mir called Mohammad. Fortunately Mohammad & Vahed haven't leaved US because of visa problems.At first @mir completely explained to Mohammad what had happened at legal medicine and that Archi couldn't help them. Mohammad shocked when he heard that that body had lost its head.
"…So Mohammad is there any signs in his body that is special for Ali please tell me now, we should make sure if that body isn't Ali's""On the phone Mohammad suddenly stopped groaning:"Sign?!" Mohammad said, after a while he continued "Oh, I think I can remember one." "What, what's that?" @mir asked. "When he was a child and we were going to cut out his navel suddenly the doctor made a deep pain in his skin. If you look for it very carefully you won't miss it"

Tomorrow morning @mir got to legal medicine as early as he could, he went to the corpse but he couldn't find any sign of every thing that Mohammad had talk about it. @mir got back to Archi and told her what happened. Archi became more comfort. "Oh really @mir… Gee @mir you made my mind free. but for being sure I'd like to chek it by my self" Archi said.
@mir & Maryam agreed too. Archi got the same result by checking out the corpse of miserable boy. While they were getting out the legal medicine Archi saw detective Narges (love-to-learn) who was running unto her. She had a bad run "Uh he...llo Ar…chi … thank God …" detective Narges said while she was panting deeply. "Calm down" Archi said to Narges. "What's wrong?" "Good news … that's not Ali" detective Narges replied. "DNA tests proves it" "Uh my dear firend thank you but we already know this" Archi said
"And do you know where is Ali?" detective Narges continued. "Ali is in US but he isn't in Amintnt. He just rubbed it from Iran by the order of someone else"
"Really??? Who???" Maryam asked. "We don't know exactly who, but my husband minizoro gusses that it would be by the order of your boss."
"Your husband?? My boss?? What are you talking about??" Maryam Asked
"See my husband minizoro had worked by the most famous detective Sherlock Holmes. He is very professional in vague cases. Do you remember Sara? Your friend in US. You had worked for his husband a while and you have came to Iran.

Archi was so confused . What was all this about ? The only thin she could think about was her lovely son and nothing else. "So what should I do to get my son" Archi asked. "Mmmm .. well we're holding a meeting this afternoon to talk about this case, I think the best choice is going to US with detective minizoro and join Vahed and Mohammad there " Love-to learn answered. @mir added that they should pack so soon to reach to the first flight that was going to US.

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p.s. Hey minizoro, just please add one or two paragraphs to the story , not that much long. But the story you've made was great and it shows that you 've read all the story carefully.
anyway, you professionally added yourself to the story :31:l

p.s.2. " P.S." Stands for
PostScript: you write at the end of your letter to add something