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What Dreams May Come is one of my favorite films that Robin Williams is the first cast in that film. This film is a kind of drama fantasy and romance film released in 1998 in USA.
Chris Neilson is a doctor who marred with Annie. They had 2 wonder children that(who) died in a car accident and 4 years later Chris dies in a natural way and then he goes to heaven. When Chris dies and goes to Heaven he meets Albert and discovers that Heaven is even more wondrous than anything he could have imagined. But his wife is very sad because of these events and she becomes a woman with mental problems and finally she decides to kill herself to go to the next world in order to be with his family. But unfortunately she goes to the hell because she comes to the next world by suicide. But when he finds out his wife had committed suicide, he desperately searches for her spirit, journeying through Heaven and Hell along the way.
really nice writing:10:
but a suggetion, when u r retelling or describing sth all the sentences should follow the same tense. if it is past tense, all of the should follow the structure of past tense. If it is present tense, all of sentences should follow the present tense.
and for retelling the stories, both past n present tenses are recommended. And present tense is usually used to have more effect on readers
now, yr mistakes:10:
who married with: who married Annie
Marry as a verb does not accept any prep: Marry Sb
be careful, these kina sentences are usually used in passive tense n then that'll be: who's married to sb
Wonder: Wonderful
she became a woman with mental problem: She got sick mentally; she got mental problems; she faced mental problems
yr sentence is not wrong grammatically, but I think it's not actually common
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What’s the best movie I have ever watched?
As the other friends said I think it’s really hard to choose just one movie for the whole life so I’m going to write about one of my favorite movies not the best one. Choosing he best one is impossible for me!
One of my favorite movies is Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind in witch there’s the story of a man who is going to erase his girlfriend from his mind, he is going to erase a part of his memories that includes her. There’s a big company with high technical equipments for erasing people’s mind from their loves but it doesn’t work at all! It’s a complex story witch I can’t explain it, and it’s a complex movie too. It’s one of those movies you should see it more than once to get exactly what are they going to do!
You can erase someone from your mind. Getting them out of your heart is another story! I think it was the main message of this movie, maybe you can try to forget some one you loved before, maybe with some techniques you could erase all his/her memories but you can’t do anything for you heart and it will still love him/her! l
I was a little in hurry so I couldn't concentrate and write as much as I liked :D
although u were in hurry, it was absolutely great
I gotto watch this movie once more:46:; thanks
I could not catch anything wrong here:10:l
