hey guys, how are u doing?...good job, for a day I was totally out n a page has been added; great
thank you
but i HAVE A SUGGETION, I think it would be better if u could have a sorta writing,, complete writing better to sau; Just answering the questions may not be helpful if u long to improve yr English unless u answer them sorta completely n long but anyhow, have an organized writing will be much better...
n I think, first it's a good idea to start with these short n small writings then we can go thru it more seriously n we can learn a standard writing, hmm?...
attention: mistakes which dun need any explation will be corrected in its quoted section by GREEN color
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Can i use your question ?
yes ?
oh thx and i use ur question and answer them !
2-Why do you like Computers Games?
who say(S) this ?
I dont llike but for entertainment i spesify a few time for this
specify...well, it doesn't make sense here! u should have used:
devote
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When I was seven years old , my father buy a Nintedo(nes) (it said Micro too in Iran) console for me. Well I remember that I were happy so much . The first game I played on the Nes was Super Mario . The StoryLine of said game was about a man that(who is) searching for his princess and in himself(his) path he see many problem among fighting with the final boss of the levels. Genre of that game was platformer ... And now meke a nostalgic sense to me when I remember that events .
I love the FPS , action adventure and Survival horror genre in all genre and if I wanna say some my favorite games in said genre I have to say : Resident Evil series , Silent Hill series ,COD series , POP Trilogy , DMC4 , HL series , etc.
The best game in my life was/is/will be Mafia and then Fahrenheit. Every gamers knows that Mafia hase been what wonderful game ! the mafia' genre was action adventure and TPS(third persion shooter) . The mafia' story is about a guy that for his (bad&good) luck join(S) to the gangster group and then he will be to one of the bosses group. Graphically and soundly , Mafia was a best game in itself age .
If I wanna say about myself, I must say "I am a game addict" !!! I play about three & four hours or more in day. Right now there are twelve games on my computer among : COD4 , COD5 , Fallout3 , L4D , POP , GH3(legend of rock) , GH:Aerosmith , Mirror's Edge , GTA IV and etc that I playing them parallel !
My strength love to the computer games causes I join to critic's group games and now I write for a game magazine .
tell me my wrongs
Good Luck
wow! Professional! do u really write for game magazine?...great job
my father buy a Nintedo: my father bought...
u are talking about past(when u were a child so u should use past tense)
it said: it is named
it said: آن گفت!!!
it is named: نام گزاری شده/ اسمش هست
He see many problem: he faces many problems
1. when u are describing a game or whatever u should use Present tenses
2. for "Movajeh shodan ba moshkelat" u should use "face a problme"
3. u have used 'many' here so it mean more than one problem so u should make it plural
was/is/will be Mafia: Mafia is my best game (for)ever
that is the most common answer
a best: the best
best always come with "the"
good luck n happy studying:10:l
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1-What Game Set do you like much more?
Racing&
Adventure Games
no mistakes buddy, great words u used, thank you:10: the only mistake:
Adventurous Games: adj+n
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Computer Games
Let me talk about my child days.
When I was 4 years old, my mom bought A Nintedo exactly like Legend-Of-Zelda for me and my brothers. I played a lot in those days.I only liked : Super mario. Ramboo and ...
After 4 years We bought a Sega. I played with it a lot too and my best game was Tiny-Toon.
Again after 7 years we bought a Computer and I entered to the World Of Computer Games. I liked it very much and I played more than 4 houres each days(each day/ s should be omitted). I could do better works but I was really addicted to it
.And days passed untill I decided to leave Computer Games.
I broked my CDs Games it was hard for me but I made up my mind and now I don't play any Computer Games forever.
Anyway let me to answer the questions.My best game set was Role-Playing cuz of(omit it) I can speak to other forign people in around world and it improve my English,
anyway I liked other gameS set like Action Adventure, Fatastic Games and...
I have a lot of souvenirs of them. First game that I played in(with) computer was Max Payne1 and IGI I liked them a lot. I play a lot of computer games, maybe 80% of them. Yeah I was crazy.
My favorite games were The Neverhood,Hitman, WoW , and ....
I think Computer Games didn't any help to us cuz of they waste our time and everybody can do better works instead of it.
Those games only improve a little my english and not other thing.
I recommend to you didn't play Computer Games I know you will relent
:31:
:31:
I entered to the World: I entered Computer World
Enter comes with out "to"---> enter a place
I broked my CDs: I broke my CDs
break ---> Broke---> Broken
I have a lot of souvenirs of them: ??? I couldn't get what u meant n I couldn't correct it
Games didn't any help to us cuz of: Games were not helpfun in any way/ Game helped us in no way/ Games were just sorta waste of time/ Games didn't help us in anyway
I recommend to you didn't play: I recommend you not to play
the correct form of Recommend: Recommend sb to do sth
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My writing is weak I have to improve it but I don't know HOW .. can somebody help me and us
I wrote scattered
Thanks for ur Essaies...they are very good especially Legend-of-Zelda
I meant u have to answer the questions and then write an essay with them, not ONLY ANSWERS
well, Why are u in hurry:31:...u've just started learning n u expect a writing with no mistake:18:...if u keep going like that u can definitely improve it n be sure after a while u'll see yr imrpovement
+ let me add sth
writing, there are some rules which should be followed but it is a bit soon to talk about them right now; the only thing which we can be useful is just : keep writing for the time being
