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As archi was a very wise woman she tried to show Samantha what Islam really was and how it is right now. She read some parts of the holy book Quran for her and translated to English. Samantha liked Islam but it was so hard to change her life like this.The rules were unfamiliar and so different from Christianity . Archi introduced her some books for further information and told her to feel free to ask any question any time.Every one decided to let Samantha think and decide her self.
Meanwhile, Mohammad and Archi let Samantha to live in their house to get more familiar with Iran, it's culture and the peopleShe
she read about Islam....... Asked Archi the vague questions she encountered..... it was about one week that she's been wondering to gravitate Islam..... Then she decided...... She just couldn't accept to be a muslim person since she couldn't get used to it.... Then she told her friends what she had decided to do....... Mohammad couldn't believe what Samantha was saying..... But he didn't say anything as he knew "Dar din Ejbari nist" [ برای مشاهده لینک ، با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

@mir was the one confused.... So how could they get married? Back to the first square!...... All that night @mir was awake and was thinking how to solve the problem...... Tomorrow morning, they were having breakfast in silence..... "I'm going to gravitate Christion religion!" Amir said....... Eveybody stopped eating and looked at him..... Mohammad cried and left the kitchen......


samantha was just staring at this terrible event she hadn’t expect such this as a matter of fact …. amir then went directly toward Mohammad and said : I’m sorry I know that I just made a foolish decision .... see ; how love impressed you dear ; it’s not logical at all to change your religion and become apostate ; after all if you do so you’ll be killed “ Mohammad said while his face was red of fear and nervous .

now it was noon ; all the family and guests gathered in the kitchen to have lunch and probably to reach at decision ; then Mohammad destroyed the deep silence with his attractive smile and said : “here we are “; suddenly samantha exploded into tears
and said “ I’m sorry … I’m really sorry … I don’t know how I can explain that .” ;
then archi calmly said : “ dear we are patient enough to listen to any kind of unexpected matter”

:Then samantha said

“oh well … I want you to excuse me ; I just wanted to test him if he really loves me ";
But .. I hadn’t expect that situation … indeed after my investigation I’ve got understand that islam is the best religion so I want to accept it as my religion “


At last, Samantha converted to Islam consensually and eagerly. @mir suggested her to change her name to an Islamic one. They agreed on "Maryam". There was not any other obstacle before @mir and Maryam to get married. Thus, they wanted to celebrate their wedding as soon as possible. @mir and Maryam wanted their wedding ceremony to be a unisex party, but Mahommad was against this idea. He said that a unisex party is full of sin and this irritates God.

@mir and Maryam wasn't happy about the situation. Maryam decided to talk to Archi , may be she could help. It was the best choice. As Mohammad loved Archi very much, he couldn't resist her request. Archi told Mohammad that everybody is free and they can have their wedding party as they wish. "Just remember that Samantha has recently become a muslim,They really like to see us in theirparty, Don't disappoint her " Archi said. ". Mohammad accepted the reason. Archi was so happy and immediately phoned Maryam to let them know.

Everything was going well and they were preparing for the party when Maryam received a call from US. After the phone call, she fainted

? amir who was next to Maryam shocked and said : what's the matter dear

uncle sam .... my love ....died

she was crying while amir calmly touched her soft face and cleaned her teares. that made her sedate then she said .we must set out to london when my uncle is going to be buried.then amir expressed his disapproval and said : but we're gonna.... .then Maryam interrupted him and said : we have to delay our wedding ceremony. that made amir so worried as if that was the worth event which could be happened preventing their marriage

While they were arguing about going to the funeral of Maryam's uncle, suddenly @mir felt a severe pain in his head and lost his balance and fell on the ground, however, he stood up quickly and rubbed his eyes. Maryam was worried. She asked whart had happened. @mir told her that it was not important and this happened occasionally. But finally Maryam could convince him to visit a brain specialist.

Everything was mixed up, uncle's death, @mir's frequent headaches, their wedding ceremony and .... Mohmmad suggest @mir to be go with Maryam to London, may be she needed some help there. But there was a problem about getting the visa. As maryam was originally American she could have the visa as soon as she wanted, but it wasn't the same for @mir. They decided that Maryam should go with the first flight to London and @mir would join her later, Maryam and @mir were so sad about the situation but there was no other choice, they should be separated for some weeks.

The day arrived, Maryam, @mir, Archi and Mohammad were at the air port. "Don't forget to visit a doctor for your frequent headache, I'll be waiting for you honey" Maryam said. " I'll miss you so much" @mir replied. "I love you :40: and will wait for you for as long as it takes" Maryam added. They said good bye as they were both in tears and Maryam flied to London

Hey why no one continue the story?:41:, I want to know what will happen to Maryam and @mir :31:l

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As archi was a very wise woman she tried to show Samantha what Islam really was and how it is right now. She read some parts of the holy book Quran for her and translated to English. Samantha liked Islam but it was so hard to change her life like this.The rules were unfamiliar and so different from Christianity . Archi introduced her some books for further information and told her to feel free to ask any question any time.Every one decided to let Samantha think and decide her self.
Meanwhile, Mohammad and Archi let Samantha to live in their house to get more familiar with Iran, it's culture and the peopleShe
she read about Islam....... Asked Archi the vague questions she encountered..... it was about one week that she's been wondering to gravitate Islam..... Then she decided...... She just couldn't accept to be a muslim person since she couldn't get used to it.... Then she told her friends what she had decided to do....... Mohammad couldn't believe what Samantha was saying..... But he didn't say anything as he knew "Dar din Ejbari nist" [ برای مشاهده لینک ، با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

@mir was the one confused.... So how could they get married? Back to the first square!...... All that night @mir was awake and was thinking how to solve the problem...... Tomorrow morning, they were having breakfast in silence..... "I'm going to gravitate Christion religion!" Amir said....... Eveybody stopped eating and looked at him..... Mohammad cried and left the kitchen......


samantha was just staring at this terrible event she hadn’t expect such this as a matter of fact …. amir then went directly toward Mohammad and said : I’m sorry I know that I just made a foolish decision .... see ; how love impressed you dear ; it’s not logical at all to change your religion and become apostate ; after all if you do so you’ll be killed “ Mohammad said while his face was red of fear and nervous .

now it was noon ; all the family and guests gathered in the kitchen to have lunch and probably to reach at decision ; then Mohammad destroyed the deep silence with his attractive smile and said : “here we are “; suddenly samantha exploded into tears
and said “ I’m sorry … I’m really sorry … I don’t know how I can explain that .” ;
then archi calmly said : “ dear we are patient enough to listen to any kind of unexpected matter”

:Then samantha said

“oh well … I want you to excuse me ; I just wanted to test him if he really loves me ";
But .. I hadn’t expect that situation … indeed after my investigation I’ve got understand that islam is the best religion so I want to accept it as my religion “


At last, Samantha converted to Islam consensually and eagerly. @mir suggested her to change her name to an Islamic one. They agreed on "Maryam". There was not any other obstacle before @mir and Maryam to get married. Thus, they wanted to celebrate their wedding as soon as possible. @mir and Maryam wanted their wedding ceremony to be a unisex party, but Mahommad was against this idea. He said that a unisex party is full of sin and this irritates God.

@mir and Maryam wasn't happy about the situation. Maryam decided to talk to Archi , may be she could help. It was the best choice. As Mohammad loved Archi very much, he couldn't resist her request. Archi told Mohammad that everybody is free and they can have their wedding party as they wish. "Just remember that Samantha has recently become a muslim,They really like to see us in theirparty, Don't disappoint her " Archi said. ". Mohammad accepted the reason. Archi was so happy and immediately phoned Maryam to let them know.

Everything was going well and they were preparing for the party when Maryam received a call from US. After the phone call, she fainted

? amir who was next to Maryam shocked and said : what's the matter dear

uncle sam .... my love ....died

she was crying while amir calmly touched her soft face and cleaned her teares. that made her sedate then she said .we must set out to london when my uncle is going to be buried.then amir expressed his disapproval and said : but we're gonna.... .then Maryam interrupted him and said : we have to delay our wedding ceremony. that made amir so worried as if that was the worth event which could be happened preventing their marriage

While they were arguing about going to the funeral of Maryam's uncle, suddenly @mir felt a severe pain in his head and lost his balance and fell on the ground, however, he stood up quickly and rubbed his eyes. Maryam was worried. She asked whart had happened. @mir told her that it was not important and this happened occasionally. But finally Maryam could convince him to visit a brain specialist.

Everything was mixed up, uncle's death, @mir's frequent headaches, their wedding ceremony and .... Mohmmad suggest @mir to be go with Maryam to London, may be she needed some help there. But there was a problem about getting the visa. As maryam was originally American she could have the visa as soon as she wanted, but it wasn't the same for @mir. They decided that Maryam should go with the first flight to London and @mir would join her later, Maryam and @mir were so sad about the situation but there was no other choice, they should be separated for some weeks.

The day arrived, Maryam, @mir, Archi and Mohammad were at the air port. "Don't forget to visit a doctor for your frequent headache, I'll be waiting for you honey" Maryam said. " I'll miss you so much" @mir replied. "I love you :40: and will wait for you for as long as it takes" Maryam added. They said good bye as they were both in tears and Maryam flied to London

While Maryam was in London for the fueral of her uncle, headaches of @mir got more severe and more frequent. Finally, Mohammad could persuade @mir to visit a specialist. c

@mir and Mohammad were sitting in the doctor's room and he was looking at the results of CT Scan. After a while, the doctor told @mir to go out. He told Mohammad that there is a malignant tumor in @mir's brain and he is in the last six months of his life:41:c

As archi was a very wise woman she tried to show Samantha what Islam really was and how it is right now. She read some parts of the holy book Quran for her and translated to English. Samantha liked Islam but it was so hard to change her life like this.The rules were unfamiliar and so different from Christianity . Archi introduced her some books for further information and told her to feel free to ask any question any time.Every one decided to let Samantha think and decide her self.
Meanwhile, Mohammad and Archi let Samantha to live in their house to get more familiar with Iran, it's culture and the peopleShe
she read about Islam....... Asked Archi the vague questions she encountered..... it was about one week that she's been wondering to gravitate Islam..... Then she decided...... She just couldn't accept to be a muslim person since she couldn't get used to it.... Then she told her friends what she had decided to do....... Mohammad couldn't believe what Samantha was saying..... But he didn't say anything as he knew "Dar din Ejbari nist" [ برای مشاهده لینک ، با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

@mir was the one confused.... So how could they get married? Back to the first square!...... All that night @mir was awake and was thinking how to solve the problem...... Tomorrow morning, they were having breakfast in silence..... "I'm going to gravitate Christion religion!" Amir said....... Eveybody stopped eating and looked at him..... Mohammad cried and left the kitchen......


samantha was just staring at this terrible event she hadn’t expect such this as a matter of fact …. amir then went directly toward Mohammad and said : I’m sorry I know that I just made a foolish decision .... see ; how love impressed you dear ; it’s not logical at all to change your religion and become apostate ; after all if you do so you’ll be killed “ Mohammad said while his face was red of fear and nervous .

now it was noon ; all the family and guests gathered in the kitchen to have lunch and probably to reach at decision ; then Mohammad destroyed the deep silence with his attractive smile and said : “here we are “; suddenly samantha exploded into tears
and said “ I’m sorry … I’m really sorry … I don’t know how I can explain that .” ;
then archi calmly said : “ dear we are patient enough to listen to any kind of unexpected matter”

:Then samantha said

“oh well … I want you to excuse me ; I just wanted to test him if he really loves me ";
But .. I hadn’t expect that situation … indeed after my investigation I’ve got understand that islam is the best religion so I want to accept it as my religion “


At last, Samantha converted to Islam consensually and eagerly. @mir suggested her to change her name to an Islamic one. They agreed on "Maryam". There was not any other obstacle before @mir and Maryam to get married. Thus, they wanted to celebrate their wedding as soon as possible. @mir and Maryam wanted their wedding ceremony to be a unisex party, but Mahommad was against this idea. He said that a unisex party is full of sin and this irritates God.

@mir and Maryam wasn't happy about the situation. Maryam decided to talk to Archi , may be she could help. It was the best choice. As Mohammad loved Archi very much, he couldn't resist her request. Archi told Mohammad that everybody is free and they can have their wedding party as they wish. "Just remember that Samantha has recently become a muslim,They really like to see us in theirparty, Don't disappoint her " Archi said. ". Mohammad accepted the reason. Archi was so happy and immediately phoned Maryam to let them know.

Everything was going well and they were preparing for the party when Maryam received a call from US. After the phone call, she fainted

? amir who was next to Maryam shocked and said : what's the matter dear

uncle sam .... my love ....died

she was crying while amir calmly touched her soft face and cleaned her teares. that made her sedate then she said .we must set out to london when my uncle is going to be buried.then amir expressed his disapproval and said : but we're gonna.... .then Maryam interrupted him and said : we have to delay our wedding ceremony. that made amir so worried as if that was the worth event which could be happened preventing their marriage

While they were arguing about going to the funeral of Maryam's uncle, suddenly @mir felt a severe pain in his head and lost his balance and fell on the ground, however, he stood up quickly and rubbed his eyes. Maryam was worried. She asked whart had happened. @mir told her that it was not important and this happened occasionally. But finally Maryam could convince him to visit a brain specialist.

Everything was mixed up, uncle's death, @mir's frequent headaches, their wedding ceremony and .... Mohmmad suggest @mir to be go with Maryam to London, may be she needed some help there. But there was a problem about getting the visa. As maryam was originally American she could have the visa as soon as she wanted, but it wasn't the same for @mir. They decided that Maryam should go with the first flight to London and @mir would join her later, Maryam and @mir were so sad about the situation but there was no other choice, they should be separated for some weeks.

The day arrived, Maryam, @mir, Archi and Mohammad were at the air port. "Don't forget to visit a doctor for your frequent headache, I'll be waiting for you honey" Maryam said. " I'll miss you so much" @mir replied. "I love you :40: and will wait for you for as long as it takes" Maryam added. They said good bye as they were both in tears and Maryam flied to London

While Maryam was in London for the fueral of her uncle, headaches of @mir got more severe and more frequent. Finally, Mohammad could persuade @mir to visit a specialist. c

@mir and Mohammad were sitting in the doctor's room and he was looking at the results of CT Scan. After a while, the doctor told @mir to go out. He told Mohammad that there is a malignant tumor in @mir's brain and he is in the last six months of his life c


After awaring of this news ; he got quiet anxious and hopeless

How can I tell amir ; he thought

then he went toward the hall ; opened the door ; but there was someone behind it ;reclining on the floor

Yes he was that poor amir who listened to the chance remarks of passerby

and now was unconscious and fainted

At last, Samantha converted to Islam consensually and eagerly. @mir suggested her to change her name to an Islamic one. They agreed on "Maryam". There was not any other obstacle before @mir and Maryam to get married. Thus, they wanted to celebrate their wedding as soon as possible. @mir and Maryam wanted their wedding ceremony to be a unisex party, but Mahommad was against this idea. He said that a unisex party is full of sin and this irritates God.

@mir and Maryam wasn't happy about the situation. Maryam decided to talk to Archi , may be she could help. It was the best choice. As Mohammad loved Archi very much, he couldn't resist her request. Archi told Mohammad that everybody is free and they can have their wedding party as they wish. "Just remember that Samantha has recently become a muslim,They really like to see us in theirparty, Don't disappoint her " Archi said. ". Mohammad accepted the reason. Archi was so happy and immediately phoned Maryam to let them know.

Everything was going well and they were preparing for the party when Maryam received a call from US. After the phone call, she fainted

? amir who was next to Maryam shocked and said : what's the matter dear

uncle sam .... my love ....died

she was crying while amir calmly touched her soft face and cleaned her teares. that made her sedate then she said .we must set out to london when my uncle is going to be buried.then amir expressed his disapproval and said : but we're gonna.... .then Maryam interrupted him and said : we have to delay our wedding ceremony. that made amir so worried as if that was the worth event which could be happened preventing their marriage

While they were arguing about going to the funeral of Maryam's uncle, suddenly @mir felt a severe pain in his head and lost his balance and fell on the ground, however, he stood up quickly and rubbed his eyes. Maryam was worried. She asked whart had happened. @mir told her that it was not important and this happened occasionally. But finally Maryam could convince him to visit a brain specialist.

Everything was mixed up, uncle's death, @mir's frequent headaches, their wedding ceremony and .... Mohmmad suggest @mir to be go with Maryam to London, may be she needed some help there. But there was a problem about getting the visa. As maryam was originally American she could have the visa as soon as she wanted, but it wasn't the same for @mir. They decided that Maryam should go with the first flight to London and @mir would join her later, Maryam and @mir were so sad about the situation but there was no other choice, they should be separated for some weeks.

The day arrived, Maryam, @mir, Archi and Mohammad were at the air port. "Don't forget to visit a doctor for your frequent headache, I'll be waiting for you honey" Maryam said. " I'll miss you so much" @mir replied. "I love you [ برای مشاهده لینک ، با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] and will wait for you for as long as it takes" Maryam added. They said good bye as they were both in tears and Maryam flied to London

While Maryam was in London for the fueral of her uncle, headaches of @mir got more severe and more frequent. Finally, Mohammad could persuade @mir to visit a specialist. c

@mir and Mohammad were sitting in the doctor's room and he was looking at the results of CT Scan. After a while, the doctor told @mir to go out. He told Mohammad that there is a malignant tumor in @mir's brain and he is in the last six months of his life c


After awaring of this news ; he got quiet anxious and hopeless.How can I tell amir ; he thought . Then he went toward the hall ; opened the door ; but there was someone behind it ;reclining on the floor. Yes he was that poor amir who listened to the chance remarks of passerby and now was unconscious and fainted.

After @mir gained his conscience He couldn't talk even a world. he was so depressed and didn't know what he could do in 6 months. "oh my God , How about Maryam, what should I do about her " he thought. He decided not to call or see Maryam. She should forget him.

Maryam was worried there was no phone call from @mir for the past two weeks. Not @mir nor Mohmmad, no one answered his calls.At last one day when she was trying to call Mohammad's home,Ali (Mohmmad and Archi's son :27:) answered the phone. She couldn't understand a lot because Ali's English wasn't so good. She just could get a sentence from him " Uncle @mir is sick"
What could have happened for @mir? Is this the reason that he didn't answer my calls. She decided to come back to Iran with the first flight. Now @mir was the most and only important thing in his life..So how could she leave him alone in that situation ???l

At last, Samantha converted to Islam consensually and eagerly. @mir suggested her to change her name to an Islamic one. They agreed on "Maryam". There was not any other obstacle before @mir and Maryam to get married. Thus, they wanted to celebrate their wedding as soon as possible. @mir and Maryam wanted their wedding ceremony to be a unisex party, but Mahommad was against this idea. He said that a unisex party is full of sin and this irritates God.

@mir and Maryam wasn't happy about the situation. Maryam decided to talk to Archi , may be she could help. It was the best choice. As Mohammad loved Archi very much, he couldn't resist her request. Archi told Mohammad that everybody is free and they can have their wedding party as they wish. "Just remember that Samantha has recently become a muslim,They really like to see us in theirparty, Don't disappoint her " Archi said. ". Mohammad accepted the reason. Archi was so happy and immediately phoned Maryam to let them know.

Everything was going well and they were preparing for the party when Maryam received a call from US. After the phone call, she fainted

? amir who was next to Maryam shocked and said : what's the matter dear

uncle sam .... my love ....died

she was crying while amir calmly touched her soft face and cleaned her teares. that made her sedate then she said .we must set out to london when my uncle is going to be buried.then amir expressed his disapproval and said : but we're gonna.... .then Maryam interrupted him and said : we have to delay our wedding ceremony. that made amir so worried as if that was the worth event which could be happened preventing their marriage

While they were arguing about going to the funeral of Maryam's uncle, suddenly @mir felt a severe pain in his head and lost his balance and fell on the ground, however, he stood up quickly and rubbed his eyes. Maryam was worried. She asked whart had happened. @mir told her that it was not important and this happened occasionally. But finally Maryam could convince him to visit a brain specialist.

Everything was mixed up, uncle's death, @mir's frequent headaches, their wedding ceremony and .... Mohmmad suggest @mir to be go with Maryam to London, may be she needed some help there. But there was a problem about getting the visa. As maryam was originally American she could have the visa as soon as she wanted, but it wasn't the same for @mir. They decided that Maryam should go with the first flight to London and @mir would join her later, Maryam and @mir were so sad about the situation but there was no other choice, they should be separated for some weeks.

The day arrived, Maryam, @mir, Archi and Mohammad were at the air port. "Don't forget to visit a doctor for your frequent headache, I'll be waiting for you honey" Maryam said. " I'll miss you so much" @mir replied. "I love you [ برای مشاهده لینک ، با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] and will wait for you for as long as it takes" Maryam added. They said good bye as they were both in tears and Maryam flied to London

While Maryam was in London for the fueral of her uncle, headaches of @mir got more severe and more frequent. Finally, Mohammad could persuade @mir to visit a specialist. c

@mir and Mohammad were sitting in the doctor's room and he was looking at the results of CT Scan. After a while, the doctor told @mir to go out. He told Mohammad that there is a malignant tumor in @mir's brain and he is in the last six months of his life c


After awaring of this news ; he got quiet anxious and hopeless.How can I tell amir ; he thought . Then he went toward the hall ; opened the door ; but there was someone behind it ;reclining on the floor. Yes he was that poor amir who listened to the chance remarks of passerby and now was unconscious and fainted.

After @mir gained his conscience He couldn't talk even a world. he was so depressed and didn't know what he could do in 6 months. "oh my God , How about Maryam, what should I do about her " he thought. He decided not to call or see Maryam. She should forget him.

Maryam was worried there was no phone call from @mir for the past two weeks. Not @mir nor Mohmmad, no one answered his calls.At last one day when she was trying to call Mohammad's home,Ali (Mohmmad and Archi's son :27:) answered the phone. She couldn't understand a lot because Ali's English wasn't so good. She just could get a sentence from him " Uncle @mir is sick"
What could have happened for @mir? Is this the reason that he didn't answer my calls. She decided to come back to Iran with the first flight. Now @mir was the most and only important thing in his life..So how could she leave him alone in that situation ???l

Maryam came to Iran with the first flight. She directly went to Qom and Mohammad's and Archi's home. When she heard the story, first she couldn't believe what she had heard, after a while she burst into tears suddenly. "NO...NO...Not again, I cannot tolerate this much misery" She wanted to go and hug and kiss @mir, but she couldn't do that since they had not gotton married yet and @mir was a stranger. "What can I do" she thought. Suddenly she heard the sound of Azan (call for prayers) from Hazrate Masoomeh's holy shrine. Now she was a muslim. Something stroke her mind. Yes,... she rushed to the shrine, knelt in front of it and beseeched Hazrate Masoome to ask God to save @mir's life:42:c

[[left]At last, Samantha converted to Islam consensually and eagerly. @mir suggested her to change her name to an Islamic one. They agreed on "Maryam". There was not any other obstacle before @mir and Maryam to get married. Thus, they wanted to celebrate their wedding as soon as possible. @mir and Maryam wanted their wedding ceremony to be a unisex party, but Mahommad was against this idea. He said that a unisex party is full of sin and this irritates God.

@mir and Maryam wasn't happy about the situation. Maryam decided to talk to Archi , may be she could help. It was the best choice. As Mohammad loved Archi very much, he couldn't resist her request. Archi told Mohammad that everybody is free and they can have their wedding party as they wish. "Just remember that Samantha has recently become a muslim,They really like to see us in theirparty, Don't disappoint her " Archi said. ". Mohammad accepted the reason. Archi was so happy and immediately phoned Maryam to let them know.

Everything was going well and they were preparing for the party when Maryam received a call from US. After the phone call, she fainted

? amir who was next to Maryam shocked and said : what's the matter dear

uncle sam .... my love ....died

she was crying while amir calmly touched her soft face and cleaned her teares. that made her sedate then she said .we must set out to london when my uncle is going to be buried.then amir expressed his disapproval and said : but we're gonna.... .then Maryam interrupted him and said : we have to delay our wedding ceremony. that made amir so worried as if that was the worth event which could be happened preventing their marriage

While they were arguing about going to the funeral of Maryam's uncle, suddenly @mir felt a severe pain in his head and lost his balance and fell on the ground, however, he stood up quickly and rubbed his eyes. Maryam was worried. She asked whart had happened. @mir told her that it was not important and this happened occasionally. But finally Maryam could convince him to visit a brain specialist.

Everything was mixed up, uncle's death, @mir's frequent headaches, their wedding ceremony and .... Mohmmad suggest @mir to be go with Maryam to London, may be she needed some help there. But there was a problem about getting the visa. As maryam was originally American she could have the visa as soon as she wanted, but it wasn't the same for @mir. They decided that Maryam should go with the first flight to London and @mir would join her later, Maryam and @mir were so sad about the situation but there was no other choice, they should be separated for some weeks.

The day arrived, Maryam, @mir, Archi and Mohammad were at the air port. "Don't forget to visit a doctor for your frequent headache, I'll be waiting for you honey" Maryam said. " I'll miss you so much" @mir replied. "I love you [ برای مشاهده لینک ، با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] and will wait for you for as long as it takes" Maryam added. They said good bye as they were both in tears and Maryam flied to London

While Maryam was in London for the fueral of her uncle, headaches of @mir got more severe and more frequent. Finally, Mohammad could persuade @mir to visit a specialist. c

@mir and Mohammad were sitting in the doctor's room and he was looking at the results of CT Scan. After a while, the doctor told @mir to go out. He told Mohammad that there is a malignant tumor in @mir's brain and he is in the last six months of his life c


After awaring of this news ; he got quiet anxious and hopeless.How can I tell amir ; he thought . Then he went toward the hall ; opened the door ; but there was someone behind it ;reclining on the floor. Yes he was that poor amir who listened to the chance remarks of passerby and now was unconscious and fainted.

After @mir gained his conscience He couldn't talk even a world. he was so depressed and didn't know what he could do in 6 months. "oh my God , How about Maryam, what should I do about her " he thought. He decided not to call or see Maryam. She should forget him.

Maryam was worried there was no phone call from @mir for the past two weeks. Not @mir nor Mohmmad, no one answered his calls.At last one day when she was trying to call Mohammad's home,Ali (Mohmmad and Archi's son :27:) answered the phone. She couldn't understand a lot because Ali's English wasn't so good. She just could get a sentence from him " Uncle @mir is sick"
What could have happened for @mir? Is this the reason that he didn't answer my calls. She decided to come back to Iran with the first flight. Now @mir was the most and only important thing in his life..So how could she leave him alone in that situation ???l

Maryam came to Iran with the first flight. She directly went to Qom and Mohammad's and Archi's home. When she heard the story, first she couldn't believe what she had heard, after a while she burst into tears suddenly. "NO...NO...Not again, I cannot tolerate this much misery" She wanted to go and hug and kiss @mir, but she couldn't do that since they had not gotton married yet and @mir was a stranger. "What can I do" she thought. Suddenly she heard the sound of Azan (call for prayers) from Hazrate Masoomeh's holy shrine. Now she was a muslim. Something stroke her mind. Yes,... she rushed to the shrine, knelt in front of it and beseeched Hazrate Masoome to ask God to save @mir's life:42:c
she felt a strong hope in her heart ; she knew that the God loved her ; since she was a new muslim and she was quiet clean of any kinds of sins

she had listened a little bit about a holy Masjed called jamkaran
after prayer it dawned on her to go there which was located nearby
it was tuesday night and all of Imam Zaman's lovers were there
Wow ! what a crowdness is here ; she thought
she felt speciall feeling there ; she was not longer thinking of her love but a new love
she felt in Love of an existence who could made her life changed
something was brightening in her heart and that made her quiet sedate and hopeful
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p.s Masjed is a new word recently entered in English is written in the new edition of Longman Dic

At last, Samantha converted to Islam consensually and eagerly. @mir suggested her to change her name to an Islamic one. They agreed on "Maryam". There was not any other obstacle before @mir and Maryam to get married. Thus, they wanted to celebrate their wedding as soon as possible. @mir and Maryam wanted their wedding ceremony to be a unisex party, but Mahommad was against this idea. He said that a unisex party is full of sin and this irritates God.

@mir and Maryam wasn't happy about the situation. Maryam decided to talk to Archi , may be she could help. It was the best choice. As Mohammad loved Archi very much, he couldn't resist her request. Archi told Mohammad that everybody is free and they can have their wedding party as they wish. "Just remember that Samantha has recently become a muslim,They really like to see us in theirparty, Don't disappoint her " Archi said. ". Mohammad accepted the reason. Archi was so happy and immediately phoned Maryam to let them know.

Everything was going well and they were preparing for the party when Maryam received a call from US. After the phone call, she fainted

? amir who was next to Maryam shocked and said : what's the matter dear

uncle sam .... my love ....died

she was crying while amir calmly touched her soft face and cleaned her teares. that made her sedate then she said .we must set out to london when my uncle is going to be buried.then amir expressed his disapproval and said : but we're gonna.... .then Maryam interrupted him and said : we have to delay our wedding ceremony. that made amir so worried as if that was the worth event which could be happened preventing their marriage

While they were arguing about going to the funeral of Maryam's uncle, suddenly @mir felt a severe pain in his head and lost his balance and fell on the ground, however, he stood up quickly and rubbed his eyes. Maryam was worried. She asked whart had happened. @mir told her that it was not important and this happened occasionally. But finally Maryam could convince him to visit a brain specialist.

Everything was mixed up, uncle's death, @mir's frequent headaches, their wedding ceremony and .... Mohmmad suggest @mir to be go with Maryam to London, may be she needed some help there. But there was a problem about getting the visa. As maryam was originally American she could have the visa as soon as she wanted, but it wasn't the same for @mir. They decided that Maryam should go with the first flight to London and @mir would join her later, Maryam and @mir were so sad about the situation but there was no other choice, they should be separated for some weeks.

The day arrived, Maryam, @mir, Archi and Mohammad were at the air port. "Don't forget to visit a doctor for your frequent headache, I'll be waiting for you honey" Maryam said. " I'll miss you so much" @mir replied. "I love you [ برای مشاهده لینک ، با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] and will wait for you for as long as it takes" Maryam added. They said good bye as they were both in tears and Maryam flied to London

While Maryam was in London for the fueral of her uncle, headaches of @mir got more severe and more frequent. Finally, Mohammad could persuade @mir to visit a specialist. c

@mir and Mohammad were sitting in the doctor's room and he was looking at the results of CT Scan. After a while, the doctor told @mir to go out. He told Mohammad that there is a malignant tumor in @mir's brain and he is in the last six months of his life c


After awaring of this news ; he got quiet anxious and hopeless.How can I tell amir ; he thought . Then he went toward the hall ; opened the door ; but there was someone behind it ;reclining on the floor. Yes he was that poor amir who listened to the chance remarks of passerby and now was unconscious and fainted.

After @mir gained his conscience He couldn't talk even a world. he was so depressed and didn't know what he could do in 6 months. "oh my God , How about Maryam, what should I do about her " he thought. He decided not to call or see Maryam. She should forget him.

Maryam was worried there was no phone call from @mir for the past two weeks. Not @mir nor Mohmmad, no one answered his calls.At last one day when she was trying to call Mohammad's home,Ali (Mohmmad and Archi's son [ برای مشاهده لینک ، با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] ) answered the phone. She couldn't understand a lot because Ali's English wasn't so good. She just could get a sentence from him " Uncle @mir is sick"
What could have happened for @mir? Is this the reason that he didn't answer my calls. She decided to come back to Iran with the first flight. Now @mir was the most and only important thing in his life..So how could she leave him alone in that situation ???l

Maryam came to Iran with the first flight. She directly went to Qom and Mohammad's and Archi's home. When she heard the story, first she couldn't believe what she had heard, after a while she burst into tears suddenly. "NO...NO...Not again, I cannot tolerate this much misery" She wanted to go and hug and kiss @mir, but she couldn't do that since they had not gotton married yet and @mir was a stranger. "What can I do" she thought. Suddenly she heard the sound of Azan (call for prayers) from Hazrate Masoomeh's holy shrine. Now she was a muslim. Something stroke her mind. Yes,... she rushed to the shrine, knelt in front of it and beseeched Hazrate Masoome to ask God to save @mir's life [ برای مشاهده لینک ، با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] c
she felt a strong hope in her heart ; she knew that the God loved her ; since she was a new muslim and she was quiet clean of any kinds of sins

she had listened a little bit about a holy Masjed called jamkaran
after prayer it dawned on her to go there which was located nearby
it was tuesday night and all of Imam Zaman's lovers were there
Wow ! what a crowdness is here ; she thought
she felt speciall feeling there ; she was not longer thinking of her love but a new love
she felt in Love of an existence who could made her life changed
something was brightening in her heart and that made her quiet sedate and hopeful

As soon as she reached Home, She looked for Archi to talk about her new feelings, "I'm sure he'll get well" Maryam said. Archi hugged her and they both prayed for @mir. All of a sudden Mohammad called from hospital. " @mir feels so good today " He mentioned. "you can come and visit him" He added. When Maryam and Archi got there , doctor told them that something like miracle has happened to @mir, there's no sign of sickness anymore. He added that they would do further examination the day after to make sure that the sickness has gone

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-Thanks Mohammad for the info about Masjed,
-Anyway I think that "crowdness" is not a word...Crowd is just fine itself

Abstract of the story up to now
Once upon a time, Samantha and Nicholas, two poor young mates lived. In an accident Nicholas became paralyzed while his wife was pregnant. Nicholad hanged himself after a hard depression and Samantha missed her fetus because she reached at the hospital late. Then her friend's husband wanted her to become his secratary. She went there but soon realized that he had devilish intentions in his mind.
Then she decided to quit USA and migrate to Iran. In the airport, she saw @mir and they fell in love with each other. They went to Qom to visit @mir's friend and his family, Archi and Ali, their little son, in order to ask how could they marry. Finally Samantha converted to Islam and chsnged her name to Maryam in order to get married with @mir. While they were getting prepared for wedding, they knew that @mir had a malignant tumor in his brain and he was in the last six months of his life. Maryam went to Jamkaran and beseeched God to save his life and God granted @mir's health again.

Now @mir continues.....

@mir returned home from hospital and they thanked God sincerely for his very valuable reward. They had sit in the room and were discussing about the details of the wedding ceremony that once Mohammad noticed that he could not hear Ali's voice. He asked Archi where he was. But Archi also didn't know. They all investigated everywhere but Ali was not anywhere. He had been disappeared. Mohammad rushed to the street agitatedly and asked everyone if he had seen Ali. Finally one of the neighbors told him that he had seen AminTNT that had kidnapped Ali.

AminTNT was the head of teenage rabble gang of the neighborhood and he was really a vicious boy. He was called TNT because everywhere he went, a very bad thing happebned there. The habitants of the neighborood were really annoyed and also fearful of him. Mohammad was really anxious. He could abuse his little son. What could he do?c

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Finally one of the neighbors told him that he had seen AminTNT that had kidnapped Ali.

AminTNT was the head of teenage rabble gang of the neighborhood and he was really a vicious boy. He was called TNT because everywhere he went, a very bad thing happebned there. The habitants of the neighborood were really annoyed and also fearful of him. Mohammad was really anxious. He could abuse his little son. What could he do?c

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Amintnt could do what?????:18: Abuse him???? Let's change this verb:18:...... I think "Harm" is better:19:........ l

@mir returned home from hospital and they thanked God sincerely for his very valuable reward. They had sit in the room and were discussing about the details of the wedding ceremony that once Mohammad noticed that he could not hear Ali's voice. He asked Archi where he was. But Archi also didn't know. They all investigated everywhere but Ali was not anywhere. He had been disappeared. Mohammad rushed to the street agitatedly and asked everyone if he had seen Ali. Finally one of the neighbors told him that he had seen AminTNT that had kidnapped Ali.

AminTNT was the head of teenage rabble gang of the neighborhood and he was really a vicious boy. He was called TNT because everywhere he went, a very bad thing happebned there. The habitants of the neighborood were really annoyed and also fearful of him. Mohammad was really anxious. He could abuse his little son. What could he do?c

Amintnt continues:

Mohammad was terribly afraid....... He directly came back to the home and rushed to the telephone........ Archi, Amir and Samantha wondered why Mohammad was so afraid........ They asked him but got no replies........ " Please help me..... My son.... My son has been kidnapped by Amintnt......." Mohammad said to the officer on the phone.........." Please calm down, we will do our best to find him" Officer tried to cool him down........ He told the officer all the story..... Other folks also were listening to him...... l

At the police station........ l

As they entered the police station, detective Narges known as love-to-learn appeared...... She was one of the strangest and cleverest detective in the city...... l

"Amintnt...... He's the fiercest criminal in the city....... But don't worry..... I do know my job and I know how to handle this case" Love-to-learn said..........l

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P.s: You all got married but me:19:........ Amiiiiiiiiiiiirrrrr, I'll kill you........ You know how? I'll put a TNT in your mouth:31:l

@mir returned home from hospital and they thanked God sincerely for his very valuable reward. They had sit in the room and were discussing about the details of the wedding ceremony that once Mohammad noticed that he could not hear Ali's voice. He asked Archi where he was. But Archi also didn't know. They all investigated everywhere but Ali was not anywhere. He had been disappeared. Mohammad rushed to the street agitatedly and asked everyone if he had seen Ali. Finally one of the neighbors told him that he had seen AminTNT that had kidnapped Ali.

AminTNT was the head of teenage rabble gang of the neighborhood and he was really a vicious boy. He was called TNT because everywhere he went, a very bad thing happebned there. The habitants of the neighborood were really annoyed and also fearful of him. Mohammad was really anxious. He could abuse his little son. What could he do?c

Amintnt continues:

Mohammad was terribly afraid....... He directly came back to the home and rushed to the telephone........ Archi, Amir and Samantha wondered why Mohammad was so afraid........ They asked him but got no replies........ " Please help me..... My son.... My son has been kidnapped by Amintnt......." Mohammad said to the officer on the phone.........." Please calm down, we will do our best to find him" Officer tried to cool him down........ He told the officer all the story..... Other folks also were listening to him...... l

At the police station........ l

As they entered the police station, detective Narges known as love-to-learn appeared...... She was one of the strangest and cleverest detective in the city...... l

"Amintnt...... He's the fiercest criminal in the city....... But don't worry..... I do know my job and I know how to handle this case" Love-to-learn said..........l

Archi and Mohammad was so worried about their son..they couldn't even eat or sleep. Archi was crying all the time..She couldn't imagine that her lovely son was in the hands of a very scary criminal "Amin tnt" . " What do you think he's doing now" She asked Maryam. "Did they give enough food to Ali" She continued." Maryam and @mir was trying to calm them down but they couldn't. It wasn't so easy. They had completely forgotten their marriage. A few days later in the early morning, @mir went to Maryam's bed and he whispered" will you marry me now?" ..."oh my God, what in earth you're doing here ??What are you talking about? In this situation..It's not fair, Archi and Mohammad are in their very bad days and you're talking about marriage?".. Amir answered that they would go to the place just to become legally wedded husband and wife. And after everything finished they could hold their party .." I feel much better this way" Amir added.l

I wish I don't interrupt you my friends this topic is really useful
i think this can help you if you want to write detective stories

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i love detective stories too
specially Sherlock Holmes's stories

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amir returned home from hospital and they thanked God sincerely for his very valuable reward. They had sit in the room and were discussing about the details of the wedding ceremony that once Mohammad noticed that he could not hear Ali's voice. He asked Archi where he was. But Archi also didn't know. They all investigated everywhere but Ali was not anywhere. He had been disappeared. Mohammad rushed to the street agitatedly and asked everyone if he had seen Ali. Finally one of the neighbors told him that he had seen AminTNT that had kidnapped Ali.

AminTNT was the head of teenage rabble gang of the neighborhood and he was really a vicious boy. He was called TNT because everywhere he went, a very bad thing happebned there. The habitants of the neighborood were really annoyed and also fearful of him. Mohammad was really anxious. He could abuse his little son. What could he do?c

Amintnt continues:

Mohammad was terribly afraid....... He directly came back to the home and rushed to the telephone........ Archi, Amir and Samantha wondered why Mohammad was so afraid........ They asked him but got no replies........ " Please help me..... My son.... My son has been kidnapped by Amintnt......." Mohammad said to the officer on the phone.........." Please calm down, we will do our best to find him" Officer tried to cool him down........ He told the officer all the story..... Other folks also were listening to him...... l

At the police station........ l

As they entered the police station, detective Narges known as love-to-learn appeared...... She was one of the strangest and cleverest detective in the city...... l

"Amintnt...... He's the fiercest criminal in the city....... But don't worry..... I do know my job and I know how to handle this case" Love-to-learn said..........l

Archi and Mohammad was so worried about their son..they couldn't even eat or sleep. Archi was crying all the time..She couldn't imagine that her lovely son was in the hands of a very scary criminal "Amin tnt" . " What do you think he's doing now" She asked Maryam. "Did they give enough food to Ali" She continued." Maryam and @mir was trying to calm them down but they couldn't. It wasn't so easy. They had completely forgotten their marriage. A few days later in the early morning, @mir went to Maryam's bed and he whispered" will you marry me now?" ..."oh my God, what in earth you're doing here ??What are you talking about? In this situation..It's not fair, Archi and Mohammad are in their very bad days and you're talking about marriage?".. Amir answered that they would go to the place just to become legally wedded husband and wife. And after everything finished they could hold their party .." I feel much better this way" Amir added

Maryam agreed with what amir had told her, she felt much better this way, to be with him and around him all the time. So they became legally wedded husband and wife. On their way home they went to Police station to ask about Ali and amintnt. They talked to detective love-to-learn. She told them that they're doing their best to find a trace form amintnt, but he's nowhere and nobody has seen them since he kidnapped Ali. "I have one of our best detectives and he'll help us to take amin in captivity he's so professional in his job ..his name is "Vahed" . Detective said.l

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I'll join to you but let me first finish reading all story up to here. i't seems it's very long dramatic story. i'd have good minds to continue story...
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i think it would be better if you and each people who writes here not to copy all pervious posts just write the following. by this topic won't be such crowded/

THANKS

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amir returned home from hospital and they thanked God sincerely for his very valuable reward. They had sit in the room and were discussing about the details of the wedding ceremony that once Mohammad noticed that he could not hear Ali's voice. He asked Archi where he was. But Archi also didn't know. They all investigated everywhere but Ali was not anywhere. He had been disappeared. Mohammad rushed to the street agitatedly and asked everyone if he had seen Ali. Finally one of the neighbors told him that he had seen AminTNT that had kidnapped Ali.

AminTNT was the head of teenage rabble gang of the neighborhood and he was really a vicious boy. He was called TNT because everywhere he went, a very bad thing happebned there. The habitants of the neighborood were really annoyed and also fearful of him. Mohammad was really anxious. He could abuse his little son. What could he do?c

Amintnt continues:

Mohammad was terribly afraid....... He directly came back to the home and rushed to the telephone........ Archi, Amir and Samantha wondered why Mohammad was so afraid........ They asked him but got no replies........ " Please help me..... My son.... My son has been kidnapped by Amintnt......." Mohammad said to the officer on the phone.........." Please calm down, we will do our best to find him" Officer tried to cool him down........ He told the officer all the story..... Other folks also were listening to him...... l

At the police station........ l

As they entered the police station, detective Narges known as love-to-learn appeared...... She was one of the strangest and cleverest detective in the city...... l

"Amintnt...... He's the fiercest criminal in the city....... But don't worry..... I do know my job and I know how to handle this case" Love-to-learn said..........l

Archi and Mohammad was so worried about their son..they couldn't even eat or sleep. Archi was crying all the time..She couldn't imagine that her lovely son was in the hands of a very scary criminal "Amin tnt" . " What do you think he's doing now" She asked Maryam. "Did they give enough food to Ali" She continued." Maryam and @mir was trying to calm them down but they couldn't. It wasn't so easy. They had completely forgotten their marriage. A few days later in the early morning, @mir went to Maryam's bed and he whispered" will you marry me now?" ..."oh my God, what in earth you're doing here ??What are you talking about? In this situation..It's not fair, Archi and Mohammad are in their very bad days and you're talking about marriage?".. Amir answered that they would go to the place just to become legally wedded husband and wife. And after everything finished they could hold their party .." I feel much better this way" Amir added

Maryam agreed with what amir had told her, she felt much better this way, to be with him and around him all the time. So they became legally wedded husband and wife. On their way home they went to Police station to ask about Ali and amintnt. They talked to detective love-to-learn. She told them that they're doing their best to find a trace form amintnt, but he's nowhere and nobody has seen them since he kidnapped Ali. "I have one of our best detectives and he'll help us to take amin in captivity he's so professional in his job ..his name is "Vahed" . Detective said.

Vahed was an expert , well- exprienced and kind-hearted detective

Mohammad and archi - his lovely but now disapointed wife - finally decided to look for their son seriously due to the heavy burden of loneliness

therefor they talked to detective vahed to get more information and follow the best solution

: he said as his final report about amintnt

unfortunately I have got to tell you that he has escaped to the United States and he is now in New York city

following his trace ; I have to travel there

: Immidiately Mohammad burst into tears and said

Do you mean that I should stay at home and die looking forward to see my son once again

! I never can tolerate this state then he added : I will come with you

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amir returned home from hospital and they thanked God sincerely for his very valuable reward. They had sit in the room and were discussing about the details of the wedding ceremony that once Mohammad noticed that he could not hear Ali's voice. He asked Archi where he was. But Archi also didn't know. They all investigated everywhere but Ali was not anywhere. He had been disappeared. Mohammad rushed to the street agitatedly and asked everyone if he had seen Ali. Finally one of the neighbors told him that he had seen AminTNT that had kidnapped Ali.

AminTNT was the head of teenage rabble gang of the neighborhood and he was really a vicious boy. He was called TNT because everywhere he went, a very bad thing happebned there. The habitants of the neighborood were really annoyed and also fearful of him. Mohammad was really anxious. He could abuse his little son. What could he do?c

Amintnt continues:

Mohammad was terribly afraid....... He directly came back to the home and rushed to the telephone........ Archi, Amir and Samantha wondered why Mohammad was so afraid........ They asked him but got no replies........ " Please help me..... My son.... My son has been kidnapped by Amintnt......." Mohammad said to the officer on the phone.........." Please calm down, we will do our best to find him" Officer tried to cool him down........ He told the officer all the story..... Other folks also were listening to him...... l

At the police station........ l

As they entered the police station, detective Narges known as love-to-learn appeared...... She was one of the strangest and cleverest detective in the city...... l

"Amintnt...... He's the fiercest criminal in the city....... But don't worry..... I do know my job and I know how to handle this case" Love-to-learn said..........l

Archi and Mohammad was so worried about their son..they couldn't even eat or sleep. Archi was crying all the time..She couldn't imagine that her lovely son was in the hands of a very scary criminal "Amin tnt" . " What do you think he's doing now" She asked Maryam. "Did they give enough food to Ali" She continued." Maryam and @mir was trying to calm them down but they couldn't. It wasn't so easy. They had completely forgotten their marriage. A few days later in the early morning, @mir went to Maryam's bed and he whispered" will you marry me now?" ..."oh my God, what in earth you're doing here ??What are you talking about? In this situation..It's not fair, Archi and Mohammad are in their very bad days and you're talking about marriage?".. Amir answered that they would go to the place just to become legally wedded husband and wife. And after everything finished they could hold their party .." I feel much better this way" Amir added

Maryam agreed with what amir had told her, she felt much better this way, to be with him and around him all the time. So they became legally wedded husband and wife. On their way home they went to Police station to ask about Ali and amintnt. They talked to detective love-to-learn. She told them that they're doing their best to find a trace form amintnt, but he's nowhere and nobody has seen them since he kidnapped Ali. "I have one of our best detectives and he'll help us to take amin in captivity he's so professional in his job ..his name is "Vahed" . Detective said.

Vahed was an expert , well- exprienced and kind-hearted detective.
Mohammad and archi - his lovely but now disapointed wife - finally decided to look for their son seriously due to the heavy burden of loneliness,therefor they talked to detective vahed to get more information and follow the best solution: he said as his final report about amintnt.unfortunately I have got to tell you that he has escaped to the United States and he is now in New York city,following his trace ; I have to travel there: Immidiately Mohammad burst into tears and said:Do you mean that I should stay at home and die looking forward to see my son once again,I never can tolerate this state then he added : I will come with you.

Archi was so shocked, loosing Mohammad and Ali at the same time was unbearable for her. She decided to travle with them. "But I can only take one person with me " Detective Vahed said. "But how can I stay here all alone " Archi replied. They were so depressed when they reached the house , as soon as Archi saw Maryam she burst into tears and told her that she can't go to US with Mohammad. Maryam told her that she can get the visa for her as she's an american. " But it'll take some time" Maryam added. Archi told her that it didn't matter how much time it took. She just want to be with her husband.
Mohammad and Vahed left a week after that. Archi and @mir was waiting for their visa to join them soon. After 3 weeks, They got an email from Us embassy that their visas are ready. Archi was in a Megga happy mood. She had contact with Mohmmad during the past 3 weeks and he was so depressed without her.But good news was that they could find amintnt's trace in NY

Abstract of the story up to now
Once upon a time, Samantha and Nicholas, two poor young mates lived. In an accident Nicholas became paralyzed while his wife was pregnant. Nicholad hanged himself after a hard depression and Samantha missed her fetus because she reached at the hospital late. Then her friend's husband wanted her to become his secratary. She went there but soon realized that he had devilish intentions in his mind.
Then she decided to quit USA and migrate to Iran. In the airport, she saw @mir and they fell in love with each other. They went to Qom to visit @mir's friend and his family, Archi and Ali, their little son, in order to ask how could they marry. Finally Samantha converted to Islam and chsnged her name to Maryam in order to get married with @mir. While they were getting prepared for wedding, they knew that @mir had a malignant tumor in his brain and he was in the last six months of his life. Maryam went to Jamkaran and beseeched God to save his life and God granted @mir's health again.

amir returned home from hospital and they thanked God sincerely for his very valuable reward. They had sit in the room and were discussing about the details of the wedding ceremony that once Mohammad noticed that he could not hear Ali's voice. He asked Archi where he was. But Archi also didn't know. They all investigated everywhere but Ali was not anywhere. He had been disappeared. Mohammad rushed to the street agitatedly and asked everyone if he had seen Ali. Finally one of the neighbors told him that he had seen AminTNT that had kidnapped Ali.

AminTNT was the head of teenage rabble gang of the neighborhood and he was really a vicious boy. He was called TNT because everywhere he went, a very bad thing happebned there. The habitants of the neighborood were really annoyed and also fearful of him. Mohammad was really anxious. He could abuse his little son. What could he do?c

Mohammad was terribly afraid....... He directly came back to the home and rushed to the telephone........ Archi, Amir and Samantha wondered why Mohammad was so afraid........ They asked him but got no replies........ " Please help me..... My son.... My son has been kidnapped by Amintnt......." Mohammad said to the officer on the phone.........." Please calm down, we will do our best to find him" Officer tried to cool him down........ He told the officer all the story..... Other folks also were listening to him...... l

At the police station........ l

As they entered the police station, detective Narges known as love-to-learn appeared...... She was one of the strangest and cleverest detective in the city...... l

"Amintnt...... He's the fiercest criminal in the city....... But don't worry..... I do know my job and I know how to handle this case" Love-to-learn said..........l

Archi and Mohammad was so worried about their son..they couldn't even eat or sleep. Archi was crying all the time..She couldn't imagine that her lovely son was in the hands of a very scary criminal "Amin tnt" . " What do you think he's doing now" She asked Maryam. "Did they give enough food to Ali" She continued." Maryam and @mir was trying to calm them down but they couldn't. It wasn't so easy. They had completely forgotten their marriage. A few days later in the early morning, @mir went to Maryam's bed and he whispered" will you marry me now?" ..."oh my God, what in earth you're doing here ??What are you talking about? In this situation..It's not fair, Archi and Mohammad are in their very bad days and you're talking about marriage?".. Amir answered that they would go to the place just to become legally wedded husband and wife. And after everything finished they could hold their party .." I feel much better this way" Amir added

Maryam agreed with what amir had told her, she felt much better this way, to be with him and around him all the time. So they became legally wedded husband and wife. On their way home they went to Police station to ask about Ali and amintnt. They talked to detective love-to-learn. She told them that they're doing their best to find a trace form amintnt, but he's nowhere and nobody has seen them since he kidnapped Ali. "I have one of our best detectives and he'll help us to take amin in captivity he's so professional in his job ..his name is "Vahed" . Detective said.

Vahed was an expert , well- exprienced and kind-hearted detective.
Mohammad and archi - his lovely but now disapointed wife - finally decided to look for their son seriously due to the heavy burden of loneliness,therefor they talked to detective vahed to get more information and follow the best solution: he said as his final report about amintnt.unfortunately I have got to tell you that he has escaped to the United States and he is now in New York city,following his trace ; I have to travel there: Immidiately Mohammad burst into tears and said:Do you mean that I should stay at home and die looking forward to see my son once again,I never can tolerate this state then he added : I will come with you.

Archi was so shocked, loosing Mohammad and Ali at the same time was unbearable for her. She decided to travle with them. "But I can only take one person with me " Detective Vahed said. "But how can I stay here all alone " Archi replied. They were so depressed when they reached the house , as soon as Archi saw Maryam she burst into tears and told her that she can't go to US with Mohammad. Maryam told her that she can get the visa for her as she's an american. " But it'll take some time" Maryam added. Archi told her that it didn't matter how much time it took. She just want to be with her husband.
Mohammad and Vahed left a week after that. Archi and @mir was waiting for their visa to join them soon. After 3 weeks, They got an email from Us embassy that their visas are ready. Archi was in a Megga happy mood. She had contact with Mohmmad during the past 3 weeks and he was so depressed without her.But good news was that they could find amintnt's trace in NY

Next morning, the telephone rang. @mir picked up the phone. It was detective love-to-learn. After common greetings, love-to-learn told @mir that they had found a corpse of a little boy in the deserts around Qom whose specifications completely matched with Ali. Love-to-learn said "I'm so sorry to inform you that we could find signs of hitting and striking, stabbing with a knife, burning with cigarettes and sexual abuse on his body. You should come tomorrow to identify the dead body."
@mir was really shocked. How could he tell Archi about this heart-breaking, onerous and tremendous disaster?c

Abstract of the story up to now
Once upon a time, Samantha and Nicholas, two poor young mates lived. In an accident Nicholas became paralyzed while his wife was pregnant. Nicholad hanged himself after a hard depression and Samantha missed her fetus because she reached at the hospital late. Then her friend's husband wanted her to become his secratary. She went there but soon realized that he had devilish intentions in his mind.
Then she decided to quit USA and migrate to Iran. In the airport, she saw @mir and they fell in love with each other. They went to Qom to visit @mir's friend and his family, Archi and Ali, their little son, in order to ask how could they marry. Finally Samantha converted to Islam and chsnged her name to Maryam in order to get married with @mir. While they were getting prepared for wedding, they knew that @mir had a malignant tumor in his brain and he was in the last six months of his life. Maryam went to Jamkaran and beseeched God to save his life and God granted @mir's health again.

amir returned home from hospital and they thanked God sincerely for his very valuable reward. They had sit in the room and were discussing about the details of the wedding ceremony that once Mohammad noticed that he could not hear Ali's voice. He asked Archi where he was. But Archi also didn't know. They all investigated everywhere but Ali was not anywhere. He had been disappeared. Mohammad rushed to the street agitatedly and asked everyone if he had seen Ali. Finally one of the neighbors told him that he had seen AminTNT that had kidnapped Ali.

AminTNT was the head of teenage rabble gang of the neighborhood and he was really a vicious boy. He was called TNT because everywhere he went, a very bad thing happebned there. The habitants of the neighborood were really annoyed and also fearful of him. Mohammad was really anxious. He could abuse his little son. What could he do?c

Mohammad was terribly afraid....... He directly came back to the home and rushed to the telephone........ Archi, Amir and Samantha wondered why Mohammad was so afraid........ They asked him but got no replies........ " Please help me..... My son.... My son has been kidnapped by Amintnt......." Mohammad said to the officer on the phone.........." Please calm down, we will do our best to find him" Officer tried to cool him down........ He told the officer all the story..... Other folks also were listening to him...... l

At the police station........ l

As they entered the police station, detective Narges known as love-to-learn appeared...... She was one of the strangest and cleverest detective in the city...... l

"Amintnt...... He's the fiercest criminal in the city....... But don't worry..... I do know my job and I know how to handle this case" Love-to-learn said..........l

Archi and Mohammad was so worried about their son..they couldn't even eat or sleep. Archi was crying all the time..She couldn't imagine that her lovely son was in the hands of a very scary criminal "Amin tnt" . " What do you think he's doing now" She asked Maryam. "Did they give enough food to Ali" She continued." Maryam and @mir was trying to calm them down but they couldn't. It wasn't so easy. They had completely forgotten their marriage. A few days later in the early morning, @mir went to Maryam's bed and he whispered" will you marry me now?" ..."oh my God, what in earth you're doing here ??What are you talking about? In this situation..It's not fair, Archi and Mohammad are in their very bad days and you're talking about marriage?".. Amir answered that they would go to the place just to become legally wedded husband and wife. And after everything finished they could hold their party .." I feel much better this way" Amir added

Maryam agreed with what amir had told her, she felt much better this way, to be with him and around him all the time. So they became legally wedded husband and wife. On their way home they went to Police station to ask about Ali and amintnt. They talked to detective love-to-learn. She told them that they're doing their best to find a trace form amintnt, but he's nowhere and nobody has seen them since he kidnapped Ali. "I have one of our best detectives and he'll help us to take amin in captivity he's so professional in his job ..his name is "Vahed" . Detective said.

Vahed was an expert , well- exprienced and kind-hearted detective.
Mohammad and archi - his lovely but now disapointed wife - finally decided to look for their son seriously due to the heavy burden of loneliness,therefor they talked to detective vahed to get more information and follow the best solution: he said as his final report about amintnt.unfortunately I have got to tell you that he has escaped to the United States and he is now in New York city,following his trace ; I have to travel there: Immidiately Mohammad burst into tears and said:Do you mean that I should stay at home and die looking forward to see my son once again,I never can tolerate this state then he added : I will come with you.

Archi was so shocked, loosing Mohammad and Ali at the same time was unbearable for her. She decided to travle with them. "But I can only take one person with me " Detective Vahed said. "But how can I stay here all alone " Archi replied. They were so depressed when they reached the house , as soon as Archi saw Maryam she burst into tears and told her that she can't go to US with Mohammad. Maryam told her that she can get the visa for her as she's an american. " But it'll take some time" Maryam added. Archi told her that it didn't matter how much time it took. She just want to be with her husband.
Mohammad and Vahed left a week after that. Archi and @mir was waiting for their visa to join them soon. After 3 weeks, They got an email from Us embassy that their visas are ready. Archi was in a Megga happy mood. She had contact with Mohmmad during the past 3 weeks and he was so depressed without her.But good news was that they could find amintnt's trace in NY

Next morning, the telephone rang. @mir picked up the phone. It was detective love-to-learn. After common greetings, love-to-learn told @mir that they had found a corpse of a little boy in the deserts around Qom whose specifications completely matched with Ali. Love-to-learn said "I'm so sorry to inform you that we could find signs of hitting and striking, stabbing with a knife, burning with cigarettes and sexual abuse on his body. You should come tomorrow to identify the dead body."
@mir was really shocked. How could he tell Archi about this heart-breaking, onerous and tremendous disaster?

@mir decided to tell the truth to Maryam so that she could tell Archi and he himself talked with Mohammad. It was such a bad moment for all of them. As soon as Archi heard the news she fainted. Maryam and @mir took her to hospital. Maryam told @mir that detective Vahed would tell the truth to Mohammad and they would be back in Iran so soon. The next day they went to identify the body, Archi was still in hospital. So @mir and Maryam went there. After a while they saw a dead body of a child without head :18:. " But how I can identify him, there's no head " Ali told the officer. " Do you know any sign in his body" Officer asked. @mir answered that he should ask his mother .l

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p.s.

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signs of hitting and striking, stabbing with a knife, burning with cigarettes and sexual abuse on his body

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Hey this is my son you're talking about, @mir I'll kill you with my own hands:27:l

minizoro begins

Rest of Story
Mohammad & detective Vahed still haven't got back from US. When @mir went to Archi and asked her to aware him if there are any other signs of Ali's identity except his head Archi couldn't answer him.
In fact Archi in that kind of spiritual condition couldn't think true about anything, so what could @mir do? When @mir consulted with his wife she advised him to call
Mohammad, as he is Ali's father and surly he could help them in the horrible case.
At that day evening @mir called Mohammad. Fortunately Mohammad & Vahed haven't leaved US because of visa problems.
At first @mir completely explained to Mohammad what had happened at legal medicine and that Archi couldn't help them. Mohammad shocked when he heard that that body had lost its head.
"…So Mohammad is there any signs in his body that is special for Ali please tell me now, we should make sure if that body isn't Ali's"
"On the phone Mohammad suddenly stopped groaning:
"Sign?!" Mohammad said, after a while he continued "Oh, I think I can remember one."
"What, what's that?" @mir asked.
"When he was a child and we were going to cut out his navel suddenly the doctor made a deep pain in his skin. If you look for it very carefully you won't miss it"

Tomorrow morning @mir got to legal medicine as early as he could, he went to the corpse but he couldn't find any sign of every thing that Mohammad had talk about it.
@mir got back to Archi and told her what happened. Archi became more comfort.
"Oh really @mir… Gee @mir you made my mind free. but for being sure I'd like to chek it by my self" Archi said.
@mir & Maryam agreed too.
Archi got the same result by checking out the corpse of miserable boy. While they were getting out the legal medicine Archi saw detective Narges (love-to-learn) who was running unto her. She had a bad run
"Uh he...llo Ar…chi … thank God …" detective Narges said while she was panting deeply.
"Calm down" Archi said to Narges. "What's wrong?"
"Good news … that's not Ali" detective Narges replied. "DNA tests proves it"
"Uh my dear firend thank you but we already know this" Archi said
"And do you know where is Ali?" detective Narges continued. "Ali is in US but he isn't in Amintnt. He just rubbed it from Iran by the order of someone else"
"Really??? Who???" Maryam asked
"We don't know exactly who, but my husband minizoro gusses that it would be by the order of your boss."
"Your husband?? My boss?? What are you talking about??" Maryam Asked
"See my husband minizoro had worked by the most famous detective Sherlock Holmes. He is very profitional in vague cases. Do you remember Sara? Your friend in US. You had worked for his husband a while and you have came to Iran.

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p.s: now i think it's enough detective
thanks mohammad
what does p.s stands for??

Abstract of the story up to now
Once upon a time, Samantha and Nicholas, two poor young mates lived. In an accident Nicholas became paralyzed while his wife was pregnant. Nicholad hanged himself after a hard depression and Samantha missed her fetus because she reached at the hospital late. Then her friend's husband wanted her to become his secratary. She went there but soon realized that he had devilish intentions in his mind.
Then she decided to quit USA and migrate to Iran. In the airport, she saw @mir and they fell in love with each other. They went to Qom to visit @mir's friend and his family, Archi and Ali, their little son, in order to ask how could they marry. Finally Samantha converted to Islam and chsnged her name to Maryam in order to get married with @mir. While they were getting prepared for wedding, they knew that @mir had a malignant tumor in his brain and he was in the last six months of his life. Maryam went to Jamkaran and beseeched God to save his life and God granted @mir's health again.

amir returned home from hospital and they thanked God sincerely for his very valuable reward. They had sit in the room and were discussing about the details of the wedding ceremony that once Mohammad noticed that he could not hear Ali's voice. He asked Archi where he was. But Archi also didn't know. They all investigated everywhere but Ali was not anywhere. He had been disappeared. Mohammad rushed to the street agitatedly and asked everyone if he had seen Ali. Finally one of the neighbors told him that he had seen AminTNT that had kidnapped Ali.

AminTNT was the head of teenage rabble gang of the neighborhood and he was really a vicious boy. He was called TNT because everywhere he went, a very bad thing happebned there. The habitants of the neighborood were really annoyed and also fearful of him. Mohammad was really anxious. He could abuse his little son. What could he do?c

Mohammad was terribly afraid....... He directly came back to the home and rushed to the telephone........ Archi, Amir and Samantha wondered why Mohammad was so afraid........ They asked him but got no replies........ " Please help me..... My son.... My son has been kidnapped by Amintnt......." Mohammad said to the officer on the phone.........." Please calm down, we will do our best to find him" Officer tried to cool him down........ He told the officer all the story..... Other folks also were listening to him...... l

At the police station........ l

As they entered the police station, detective Narges known as love-to-learn appeared...... She was one of the strangest and cleverest detective in the city...... l

"Amintnt...... He's the fiercest criminal in the city....... But don't worry..... I do know my job and I know how to handle this case" Love-to-learn said..........l

Archi and Mohammad was so worried about their son..they couldn't even eat or sleep. Archi was crying all the time..She couldn't imagine that her lovely son was in the hands of a very scary criminal "Amin tnt" . " What do you think he's doing now" She asked Maryam. "Did they give enough food to Ali" She continued." Maryam and @mir was trying to calm them down but they couldn't. It wasn't so easy. They had completely forgotten their marriage. A few days later in the early morning, @mir went to Maryam's bed and he whispered" will you marry me now?" ..."oh my God, what in earth you're doing here ??What are you talking about? In this situation..It's not fair, Archi and Mohammad are in their very bad days and you're talking about marriage?".. Amir answered that they would go to the place just to become legally wedded husband and wife. And after everything finished they could hold their party .." I feel much better this way" Amir added

Maryam agreed with what amir had told her, she felt much better this way, to be with him and around him all the time. So they became legally wedded husband and wife. On their way home they went to Police station to ask about Ali and amintnt. They talked to detective love-to-learn. She told them that they're doing their best to find a trace form amintnt, but he's nowhere and nobody has seen them since he kidnapped Ali. "I have one of our best detectives and he'll help us to take amin in captivity he's so professional in his job ..his name is "Vahed" . Detective said.

Vahed was an expert , well- exprienced and kind-hearted detective.
Mohammad and archi - his lovely but now disapointed wife - finally decided to look for their son seriously due to the heavy burden of loneliness,therefor they talked to detective vahed to get more information and follow the best solution: he said as his final report about amintnt.unfortunately I have got to tell you that he has escaped to the United States and he is now in New York city,following his trace ; I have to travel there: Immidiately Mohammad burst into tears and said:Do you mean that I should stay at home and die looking forward to see my son once again,I never can tolerate this state then he added : I will come with you.

Archi was so shocked, loosing Mohammad and Ali at the same time was unbearable for her. She decided to travle with them. "But I can only take one person with me " Detective Vahed said. "But how can I stay here all alone " Archi replied. They were so depressed when they reached the house , as soon as Archi saw Maryam she burst into tears and told her that she can't go to US with Mohammad. Maryam told her that she can get the visa for her as she's an american. " But it'll take some time" Maryam added. Archi told her that it didn't matter how much time it took. She just want to be with her husband.
Mohammad and Vahed left a week after that. Archi and @mir was waiting for their visa to join them soon. After 3 weeks, They got an email from Us embassy that their visas are ready. Archi was in a Megga happy mood. She had contact with Mohmmad during the past 3 weeks and he was so depressed without her.But good news was that they could find amintnt's trace in NY

Next morning, the telephone rang. @mir picked up the phone. It was detective love-to-learn. After common greetings, love-to-learn told @mir that they had found a corpse of a little boy in the deserts around Qom whose specifications completely matched with Ali. Love-to-learn said "I'm so sorry to inform you that we could find signs of hitting and striking, stabbing with a knife, burning with cigarettes and sexual abuse on his body. You should come tomorrow to identify the dead body."
@mir was really shocked. How could he tell Archi about this heart-breaking, onerous and tremendous disaster?

@mir decided to tell the truth to Maryam so that she could tell Archi and he himself talked with Mohammad. It was such a bad moment for all of them. As soon as Archi heard the news she fainted. Maryam and @mir took her to hospital. Maryam told @mir that detective Vahed would tell the truth to Mohammad and they would be back in Iran so soon. The next day they went to identify the body, Archi was still in hospital. So @mir and Maryam went there. After a while they saw a dead body of a child without head [ برای مشاهده لینک ، با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] . " But how I can identify him, there's no head " Ali told the officer. " Do you know any sign in his body" Officer asked. @mir answered that he should ask his mother .

Mohammad & detective Vahed still haven't got back from US. When @mir went to Archi and asked her to aware him if there are any other signs of Ali's identity except his head Archi couldn't answer him.
In fact Archi in that kind of spiritual condition couldn't think true about anything, so what could @mir do? When @mir consulted with his wife she advised him to call Mohammad, as he is Ali's father and surly he could help them in the horrible case.
At that day evening @mir called Mohammad. Fortunately Mohammad & Vahed haven't leaved US because of visa problems.At first @mir completely explained to Mohammad what had happened at legal medicine and that Archi couldn't help them. Mohammad shocked when he heard that that body had lost its head.
"…So Mohammad is there any signs in his body that is special for Ali please tell me now, we should make sure if that body isn't Ali's""On the phone Mohammad suddenly stopped groaning:"Sign?!" Mohammad said, after a while he continued "Oh, I think I can remember one." "What, what's that?" @mir asked. "When he was a child and we were going to cut out his navel suddenly the doctor made a deep pain in his skin. If you look for it very carefully you won't miss it"

Tomorrow morning @mir got to legal medicine as early as he could, he went to the corpse but he couldn't find any sign of every thing that Mohammad had talk about it. @mir got back to Archi and told her what happened. Archi became more comfort. "Oh really @mir… Gee @mir you made my mind free. but for being sure I'd like to chek it by my self" Archi said.
@mir & Maryam agreed too. Archi got the same result by checking out the corpse of miserable boy. While they were getting out the legal medicine Archi saw detective Narges (love-to-learn) who was running unto her. She had a bad run "Uh he...llo Ar…chi … thank God …" detective Narges said while she was panting deeply. "Calm down" Archi said to Narges. "What's wrong?" "Good news … that's not Ali" detective Narges replied. "DNA tests proves it" "Uh my dear firend thank you but we already know this" Archi said
"And do you know where is Ali?" detective Narges continued. "Ali is in US but he isn't in Amintnt. He just rubbed it from Iran by the order of someone else"
"Really??? Who???" Maryam asked. "We don't know exactly who, but my husband minizoro gusses that it would be by the order of your boss."
"Your husband?? My boss?? What are you talking about??" Maryam Asked
"See my husband minizoro had worked by the most famous detective Sherlock Holmes. He is very professional in vague cases. Do you remember Sara? Your friend in US. You had worked for his husband a while and you have came to Iran.

Archi was so confused . What was all this about ? The only thin she could think about was her lovely son and nothing else. "So what should I do to get my son" Archi asked. "Mmmm .. well we're holding a meeting this afternoon to talk about this case, I think the best choice is going to US with detective minizoro and join Vahed and Mohammad there " Love-to learn answered. @mir added that they should pack so soon to reach to the first flight that was going to US.

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p.s. Hey minizoro, just please add one or two paragraphs to the story , not that much long. But the story you've made was great and it shows that you 've read all the story carefully.
anyway, you professionally added yourself to the story :31:l

p.s.2. " P.S." Stands for
PostScript: you write at the end of your letter to add something

[ برای مشاهده لینک ، با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Please Wait ....

Now Vahed Is Going To Continue The Story!
I will put it here soon, thanks chums

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p.s. Hey minizoro, just please add one or two paragraphs to the story , not that much long. But the story you've made was great and it shows that you 've read all the story carefully.
anyway, you professionally added yourself to the story l

p.s.2. " P.S." Stands for
PostScript: you write at the end of your letter to add something

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thanks Archi well i think inorder to add my self to the story it was necesery
it will be very intresting
i'll continue again i'm thinking of it
you know I think adding just 1 or 2 paragraphs is not enough. if we want to write good and be profitional writer we should write more comprehensive
i think i have lot's of gramatcal problems in my text please inform me

I've put the first part of the old story "THE MAN WHO ESCAPED" please read it. It's an old story. That I don’t think you can find it.

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http://forum.p30world.com/showthread.php?p=1381449

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Abstract of the story up to now

Once upon a time, Samantha and Nicholas, two poor young mates lived. In an accident Nicholas became paralyzed while his wife was pregnant. Nicholas hanged himself after a hard depression and Samantha missed her fetus because she reached at the hospital late. Then her friend's husband wanted her to become his secretary. She went there but soon realized that he had devilish intentions in his mind. Then she decided to quit USA and migrate to Iran. In the airport, she saw @mir and they fell in love with each other. They went to Qom to visit @mir's friend and his family, Archi and Ali, their little son, in order to ask how they could marry. Finally Samantha converted to Islam and changed her name to Maryam in order to get married with @mir. While they were getting prepared for wedding, they knew that @mir had a malignant tumor in his brain and he was in the last six months of his life. Maryam went to Jamkaran and beseeches God to save his life and God granted @mir's health again.

Story resumption:amir returned home from hospital and they thanked God sincerely for his very valuable reward. They had sit in the room and were discussing about the details of the wedding ceremony that once Mohammad noticed that he could not hear Ali's voice. He asked Archi where he was. But Archi also didn't know. They all investigated everywhere but Ali was not anywhere. He had been disappeared. Mohammad rushed to the street agitatedly and asked everyone if he had seen Ali. Finally one of the neighbors told him that he had seen AminTNT that had kidnapped Ali.AminTNT was the head of teenage rabble gang of the neighborhood and he was really a vicious boy. He was called TNT because everywhere he went, a very bad thing happened there. The habitants of the neighborhood were really annoyed and also fearful of him. Mohammad was really anxious. He could abuse his little son. What could he do?cMohammad was terribly afraid....... He directly came back to the home and rushed to the telephone........ Archi, Amir and Samantha wondered why Mohammad was so afraid........ They asked him but got no replies........ “Please help me..... My son.... My son has been kidnapped by Amintnt......." Mohammad said to the officer on the phone.........." Please calm down, we will do our best to find him" Officer tried to cool him down........ He told the officer the entire story..... Other folks also were listening to him...... l

At the police station........!
As they entered the police station, detective Narges known as love-to-learn appeared...... She was one of the strangest and cleverest detectives in the city...... l"Amintnt...... He's the fiercest criminal in the city....... But don't worry..... I do know my job and I know how to handle this case" Love-to-learn said..........lArchi and Mohammad was so worried about their son…They couldn't even eat or sleep. Archi was crying all the time..She couldn't imagine that her lovely son was in the hands of a very scary criminal "Amin tnt" . “What do you think he's doing now" She asked Maryam. "Did they give enough food to Ali" She continued." Maryam and @mir was trying to calm them down but they couldn't. It wasn't so easy. They had completely forgotten their marriage. A few days later in the early morning, @mir went to Maryam's bed and he whispered" will you marry me now?" ..."oh my God, what in earth you're doing here?? What are you talking about? In this situation..It's not fair, Archi and Mohammad are in their very bad days and you're talking about marriage?".. Amir answered that they would go to the place just to become legally wedded husband and wife. And after everything finished they could hold their party .." I feel much better this way" Amir addedMaryam agreed with what amir had told her, she felt much better this way, to be with him and around him all the time. So they became legally wedded husband and wife. On their way home they went to Police station to ask about Ali and amintnt. They talked to detective love-to-learn. She told them that they're doing their best to find a trace form amintnt, but he's nowhere and nobody has seen them since he kidnapped Ali. "I have one of our best detectives and he'll help us to take amin in captivity he's so professional in his job ..his name is "Vahed" . Detective said.

Analyzing the adventure!
Vahed was an expert, well- experienced and kind-hearted detective.Mohammad and archi - his lovely but now disappointed wife - finally decided to look for their son seriously due to the heavy burden of loneliness,therefor they talked to detective vahed to get more information and follow the best solution: he said as his final report about amintnt.unfortunately I have got to tell you that he has escaped to the United States and he is now in New York city,following his trace ; I have to travel there: Immediately Mohammad burst into tears and said:Do you mean that I should stay at home and die looking forward to see my son once again,I never can tolerate this state then he added : I will come with you.Archi was so shocked, loosing Mohammad and Ali at the same time was unbearable for her. She decided to travel with them. "But I can only take one person with me “Detective Vahed said. "But how can I stay here all alone " Archi replied. They were so depressed when they reached the house, as soon as Archi saw Maryam she burst into tears and told her that she can't go to US with Mohammad. Maryam told her that she can get the visa for her as she's an American. “But it'll take some time" Maryam added. Archi told her that it didn't matter how much time it took. She just want to be with her husband. Mohammad and Vahed left a week after that. Archi and @mir was waiting for their visa to join them soon. After 3 weeks, they got an email from us embassy that their visas are ready. Archi was in a mega happy mood. She had contact with Mohmmad during the past 3 weeks and he was so depressed without her.But good news was that they could find amintnt's trace in NYNext morning, the telephone rang. @mir picked up the phone. It was detective love-to-learn. After common greetings, love-to-learn told @mir that they had found a corpse of a little boy in the deserts around Qom whose specifications completely matched with Ali. Love-to-learn said "I'm so sorry to inform you that we could find signs of hitting and striking, stabbing with a knife, burning with cigarettes and sexual abuse on his body. You should come tomorrow to identify the dead body."@mir was really shocked. How could he tell Archi about this heart-breaking, onerous and tremendous disaster?@mir decided to tell the truth to Maryam so that she could tell Archi and he himself talked with Mohammad. It was such a bad moment for all of them. As soon as Archi heard the news she fainted. Maryam and @mir took her to hospital. Maryam told @mir that detective Vahed would tell the truth to Mohammad and they would be back in Iran so soon. The next day they went to identify the body, Archi was still in hospital. So @mir and Maryam went there. After a while they saw a dead body of a child without head. “But how I can identify him, there's no head “Ali told the officer.” Do you know any sign in his body" Officer asked. @mir answered that he should ask his mother.

A big chance...!
Mohammad & detective Vahed still haven't got back from US. When @mir went to Archi and asked her to aware him if there are any other signs of Ali's identity except his head Archi couldn't answer him.
In fact Archi in that kind of spiritual condition couldn't think true about anything, so what could @mir do? When @mir consulted with his wife she advised him to call Mohammad, as he is Ali's father and surly he could help them in the horrible case.
At that day evening @mir called Mohammad. Fortunately Mohammad & Vahed haven't leaved US because of visa problems. At first @mir completely explained to Mohammad what had happened at legal medicine and that Archi couldn't help them. Mohammad shocked when he heard that that body had lost its head.
"…So Mohammad is there any signs in his body that is special for Ali please tell me now, we should make sure if that body isn't Ali's""On the phone Mohammad suddenly stopped groaning:"Sign?!" Mohammad said, after a while he continued "Oh, I think I can remember one." "What, what's that?" @mir asked. "When he was a child and we were going to cut out his navel suddenly the doctor made a deep pain in his skin. If you look for it very carefully you won't miss it"

Tomorrow morning @mir got to legal medicine as early as he could, he went to the corpse but he couldn't find any sign of every thing that Mohammad had talk about it. @mir got back to Archi and told her what happened. Archi became more comfort. "Oh really @mir… Gee @mir you made my mind free. But for being sure I'd like to chek it by my self" Archi said.
@mir & Maryam agreed too. Archi got the same result by checking out the corpse of miserable boy. While they were getting out the legal medicine Archi saw detective Narges (love-to-learn) who was running unto her. She had a bad run "Uh he...llo Ar…chi … thank God …" detective Narges said while she was panting deeply. "Calm down" Archi said to Narges. "What's wrong?" "Good news … that's not Ali" detective Narges replied. "DNA tests proves it" "Uh my dear friend thank you but we already know this" Archi said
"And do you know where is Ali?" detective Narges continued. "Ali is in US but he isn't in Amintnt. He just rubbed it from Iran by the order of someone else"
"Really??? Who???" Maryam asked. "We don't know exactly who, but my husband minizoro gausses that it would be by the order of your boss."
"Your husband?? My boss?? What are you talking about??" Maryam Asked
"See my husband minizoro had worked by the most famous detective Sherlock Holmes. He is very professional in vague cases. Do you remember Sara? Your friend in US. You had worked for his husband a while and you have come to Iran.

Archi was so confused. What was all this about? The only thin she could think about was her lovely son and nothing else. "So what should I do to get my son" Archi asked. "Mmmm .. well we're holding a meeting this afternoon to talk about this case, I think the best choice is going to US with detective minizoro and join Vahed and Mohammad there " Love-to learn answered. @mir added that they should pack so soon to reach to the first flight that was going to US.

And Now! (Vahed continue the story):
After passing all usual works for going to NY, they phoned Vahed and told the entire story to him and Mohammad. “Wow! How can I believe it? Are you right? Oh my god… thanks, thanks god! My son is alive..” Mohammad said happily. So Archi, Maryam, Amir, Narges and Minizoro went to US and visited Vahed and Mohammad, “It’s a bit strange for me, what’s your Boss’s motive?” Vahed said to Archi . Archi said “In fact I don’t know!!! I’m completely confused” all of them were thinking about that subject, after an enigmatic reticence Narges suddenly said “we can find AminTNT, and by finding him we can attain to Sara and her husband and also finally to dear Ali!” “But, how can we find AminTNT?” asked Minizoro. “Oo, yeah! Why I hadn’t thought about that hitherto?! Let’s go! I know how…” Vahed answered.
Everyone there, were wondered, so Vahed explained that there is a special Club in Manhattan that all wrongdoers join there which named “TNT Midnight Club”
“Of course we can find AminTNT or a clue of him in that club” Vahed said stalwartly.
Maryam and Amir decided to be near Archi in a hotel and Vahed, Narges and Minizoro went to Manhattan…l

Rest of story:

Finally they reached to the club.
"Now, how should we found him?" asked Narges.
"Let's do a trick. I think it would be better to introduce our selves as his friends" suggested Vahed.
"Great opinion, but not all of us one of us, what's your idea if I go on?" minizoro said.
"I think its better. Your right" said Vahed.
"But honey be careful it would be dangerous." said Narges.
"Ok, ok don't worry about it have you forgot that I've got black belt, now you'd better go to the hotel I'll join you as soon as I can." minizoro replied.
Minizoro tried a lot and finally he got AminTNT.
"Are you Amin TNT?"minizoro asked. "Yeah I'm and you?" Amin said. "Do you remember Mike(Sara's husband)? He told me that you can do lot's of things." minizoro said.
a:"What kind?" m:"For example killing somebody." a:"well it depends; because Mike has sent you to me ok but how much would you pay?" m:"100$ is it ok?" a:"ok,Who is it?" m:"She is a woman named Narges. You should kill her by string in a hotel, and this is the address of hotel kill her tomorrow." a:"And money?" m:"Here is 50$ and the rest will be given tomorrow when you killed her" a:"it seems that everything is ok so the job will be ok too" m:"ok see you tomorrow evening bye."
Minizoro got back to the hotel. "Vahed have you told our plan to others" minizoro asked Vahed. "Yeah my friend, and does every thing went on ok?" asked Vahed "Yes great tomorrow every thing will be solved" minizoro replied.
And the next day they waited for amin TNT. Every one hid at room except Narges. Finally amin TNT reached. He attacked Narges to kill her. He was choking her that minizoro shot him on the ground. "Do you think I'll let you to kill my wife?" minizoro shouted amin tnt. Amin TNT turned around to ran away but he suddenly shoked by Maryam & Archi s' guns. "Hands up" said Archi. Vahed & @mir rushed to Amin TNT and arrested him.

I continue

Vahed asked AminTNT about Ali. At first, he didn't answer, however, after Vahed's persistence and two tough slaps in his face, he told the whole story. He explained that he worked for Mike and Mike was the head of an international Mafia band that kidnapped children from their own families and sold them to rich families that suffered from lack of child. He added that they had sold Ali to a family that lived in Berlin, Germany and whose name was Zimmermann. Mr. Zimmermann was a senior manager of BMW company.l


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P.S. Dear Minizoro, your creativeness in telling mystery stories is appreciated but as dear archi-girl once said, please add only one or two short paragraphs to the story because writing too much makes the story boring. Moreover, take into consideration that @mir and Maryam have not gotten married yet!!l

Believe me dear @mir I can't stand my self:13::13::13::41::41:
::5::31::46:31:i did't now that i can write like this
do you think it's good??

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@mir and Maryam have not gotten married yet

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!!!!!!!but i think they're maried but not official :40::11::10:

After passing all usual works for going to NY, they phoned Vahed and told the entire story to him and Mohammad. “Wow! How can I believe it? Are you right? Oh my god… thanks, thanks god! My son is alive..” Mohammad said happily. So Archi, Maryam, Amir, Narges and Minizoro went to US and visited Vahed and Mohammad, “It’s a bit strange for me, what’s your Boss’s motive?” Vahed said to Archi . Archi said “In fact I don’t know!!! I’m completely confused” all of them were thinking about that subject, after an enigmatic reticence Narges suddenly said “we can find AminTNT, and by finding him we can attain to Sara and her husband and also finally to dear Ali!” “But, how can we find AminTNT?” asked Minizoro. “Oo, yeah! Why I hadn’t thought about that hitherto?! Let’s go! I know how…” Vahed answered.
Everyone there, were wondered, so Vahed explained that there is a special Club in Manhattan that all wrongdoers join there which named “TNT Midnight Club”
“Of course we can find AminTNT or a clue of him in that club” Vahed said stalwartly.
Maryam and Amir decided to be near Archi in a hotel and Vahed, Narges and Minizoro went to Manhattan…l

Finally they reached to the club.
"Now, how should we found him?" asked Narges.
"Let's do a trick. I think it would be better to introduce our selves as his friends" suggested Vahed.
"Great opinion, but not all of us one of us, what's your idea if I go on?" minizoro said.
"I think its better. Your right" said Vahed.
"But honey be careful it would be dangerous." said Narges.
"Ok, ok don't worry about it have you forgot that I've got black belt, now you'd better go to the hotel I'll join you as soon as I can." minizoro replied.
Minizoro tried a lot and finally he got AminTNT.
"Are you Amin TNT?"minizoro asked. "Yeah I'm and you?" Amin said. "Do you remember Mike(Sara's husband)? He told me that you can do lot's of things." minizoro said.
a:"What kind?" m:"For example killing somebody." a:"well it depends; because Mike has sent you to me ok but how much would you pay?" m:"100$ is it ok?" a:"ok,Who is it?" m:"She is a woman named Narges. You should kill her by string in a hotel, and this is the address of hotel kill her tomorrow." a:"And money?" m:"Here is 50$ and the rest will be given tomorrow when you killed her" a:"it seems that everything is ok so the job will be ok too" m:"ok see you tomorrow evening bye."
Minizoro got back to the hotel. "Vahed have you told our plan to others" minizoro asked Vahed. "Yeah my friend, and does every thing went on ok?" asked Vahed "Yes great tomorrow every thing will be solved" minizoro replied.
And the next day they waited for amin TNT. Every one hid at room except Narges. Finally amin TNT reached. He attacked Narges to kill her. He was choking her that minizoro shot him on the ground. "Do you think I'll let you to kill my wife?" minizoro shouted amin tnt. Amin TNT turned around to ran away but he suddenly shoked by Maryam & Archi s' guns. "Hands up" said Archi. Vahed & @mir rushed to Amin TNT and arrested him

Vahed asked AminTNT about Ali. At first, he didn't answer, however, after Vahed's persistence and two tough slaps in his face, he told the whole story. He explained that he worked for Mike and Mike was the head of an international Mafia band that kidnapped children from their own families and sold them to rich families that suffered from lack of child. He added that they had sold Ali to a family that lived in Berlin, Germany and whose name was Zimmermann. Mr. Zimmermann was a senior manager of BMW company.l

Archi continues:
"Oh my goddd..you've sold my kid " Mohammad said and jumped toward Amintnt. @mir took Mohammad back and told him to control himself. Archi was moaning and crying in the arms of Maryam . "What have I done that I should face this consequences ???" Detective Minizoro got the complete information about Mr. Zimmermann and he arrested Amintnt. Minizoro sent back Amintnt and vahed to Iran for further investigations. They took the first flight to Berlin. Archi, Mohammad,@mir, Maryam, Love-to-learn and minzoro was on their way to Berlin.
It wasn't that hard to find BMW office in Berlin. "we don't have any proof about our claim to Mr. Zimmerman" Archi said. "The DNA test will find the truth " @mir replied. "But don't forget that it's not so easy to deal with the manager of BMW :41:" Minizoro answered.

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p.s1. Dear @mir, @mir and maryam has got married, I did that:31:. take a closer look at previous posts.

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@mir went to Maryam's bed and he whispered" will you marry me now?" ..."oh my God, what in earth you're doing here ??What are you talking about? In this situation..It's not fair, Archi and Mohammad are in their very bad days and you're talking about marriage?".. Amir answered that they would go to the place just to become legally wedded husband and wife. And after everything finished they could hold their party .." I feel much better this way" Amir added

Maryam agreed with what amir had told her, she felt much better this way, to be with him and around him all the time. So they became legally wedded husband and wife.

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p.s.2. Minizoro, Please please just add one or two paragraph, when it continues by every single person it would much better and the story will be more interesting

Poor Amintnt! :sad:l

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نوشته شده توسط minizoro

سلام كجايين بابا ؟؟؟؟؟؟:41:
داستان رو نيمه كاره رها كردين و رفتين :41: بياين .....شمام نباشين اصلا مزه نميده ها منتظر پست جديدتون هستم:10::27::40::11:
ممنون

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Hi dear thanks alot due to your attention

I hope you can keep posting here and forgive my absence

that's because of the martyrdom of my uncle

he was a self-sacrificing man

may God bless him with his salvation

Best regards

The Rest of Story

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p.s: hey dear Archi by this Vahed goes away from story and it's not what friends do with each other. I hate being selfish, and that causes us selfishness. Dear Vahed I'm so sorryfor going you out of story, I think it will be your last act in the story, except that you your self make it. It's not my fault, its Archi's.
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1. They were really confused that what they could do. They have had lots of counseling's but they couldn't reach particular result. Finally @mir decided minizoro that if he could counsel to Vahed too. So minizoro called Vahed in Iran and asked him if he knows any ways for rescuing poor Ali. "Well I have been thinking of this since I finished works which are related to AminTNT. First of all you should prove that already Zimmermann had bought Ali from AminTNT" said Vahed. "yeah I know but how?!" minizoro said."You can film Zimmermann when he or his wife is with Ali, can't you" Vahed said. "Oh yeah your right" minizoro replied.
2. So minizoro said to other's what he's heard from Vahed. "So now here it's your turn to show that what you have learned in "p30world forums" is not vain, you are very professional in photographing and filming, here you are show what ever you are…" Mohammad said proudly to @mir. And now @mir . . .
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p.s: just 2 paraghraphs!
p.s2: espeacial thanks for dear amin tnt who mentioned my wrong in writing: "Rest of story" which was wrong and i should had wire The rest of story

After passing all usual works for going to NY, they phoned Vahed and told the entire story to him and Mohammad. “Wow! How can I believe it? Are you right? Oh my god… thanks, thanks god! My son is alive..” Mohammad said happily. So Archi, Maryam, Amir, Narges and Minizoro went to US and visited Vahed and Mohammad, “It’s a bit strange for me, what’s your Boss’s motive?” Vahed said to Archi . Archi said “In fact I don’t know!!! I’m completely confused” all of them were thinking about that subject, after an enigmatic reticence Narges suddenly said “we can find AminTNT, and by finding him we can attain to Sara and her husband and also finally to dear Ali!” “But, how can we find AminTNT?” asked Minizoro. “Oo, yeah! Why I hadn’t thought about that hitherto?! Let’s go! I know how…” Vahed answered.
Everyone there, were wondered, so Vahed explained that there is a special Club in Manhattan that all wrongdoers join there which named “TNT Midnight Club”
“Of course we can find AminTNT or a clue of him in that club” Vahed said stalwartly.
Maryam and Amir decided to be near Archi in a hotel and Vahed, Narges and Minizoro went to Manhattan…l

Finally they reached to the club.
"Now, how should we found him?" asked Narges.
"Let's do a trick. I think it would be better to introduce our selves as his friends" suggested Vahed.
"Great opinion, but not all of us one of us, what's your idea if I go on?" minizoro said.
"I think its better. Your right" said Vahed.
"But honey be careful it would be dangerous." said Narges.
"Ok, ok don't worry about it have you forgot that I've got black belt, now you'd better go to the hotel I'll join you as soon as I can." minizoro replied.
Minizoro tried a lot and finally he got AminTNT.
"Are you Amin TNT?"minizoro asked. "Yeah I'm and you?" Amin said. "Do you remember Mike(Sara's husband)? He told me that you can do lot's of things." minizoro said.
a:"What kind?" m:"For example killing somebody." a:"well it depends; because Mike has sent you to me ok but how much would you pay?" m:"100$ is it ok?" a:"ok,Who is it?" m:"She is a woman named Narges. You should kill her by string in a hotel, and this is the address of hotel kill her tomorrow." a:"And money?" m:"Here is 50$ and the rest will be given tomorrow when you killed her" a:"it seems that everything is ok so the job will be ok too" m:"ok see you tomorrow evening bye."
Minizoro got back to the hotel. "Vahed have you told our plan to others" minizoro asked Vahed. "Yeah my friend, and does every thing went on ok?" asked Vahed "Yes great tomorrow every thing will be solved" minizoro replied.
And the next day they waited for amin TNT. Every one hid at room except Narges. Finally amin TNT reached. He attacked Narges to kill her. He was choking her that minizoro shot him on the ground. "Do you think I'll let you to kill my wife?" minizoro shouted amin tnt. Amin TNT turned around to ran away but he suddenly shoked by Maryam & Archi s' guns. "Hands up" said Archi. Vahed & @mir rushed to Amin TNT and arrested him

Vahed asked AminTNT about Ali. At first, he didn't answer, however, after Vahed's persistence and two tough slaps in his face, he told the whole story. He explained that he worked for Mike and Mike was the head of an international Mafia band that kidnapped children from their own families and sold them to rich families that suffered from lack of child. He added that they had sold Ali to a family that lived in Berlin, Germany and whose name was Zimmermann. Mr. Zimmermann was a senior manager of BMW company.l

Archi continues:
"Oh my goddd..you've sold my kid " Mohammad said and jumped toward Amintnt. @mir took Mohammad back and told him to control himself. Archi was moaning and crying in the arms of Maryam . "What have I done that I should face this consequences ???" Detective Minizoro got the complete information about Mr. Zimmermann and he arrested Amintnt. Minizoro sent back Amintnt and vahed to Iran for further investigations. They took the first flight to Berlin. Archi, Mohammad,@mir, Maryam, Love-to-learn and minzoro was on their way to Berlin.
It wasn't that hard to find BMW office in Berlin. "we don't have any proof about our claim to Mr. Zimmerman" Archi said. "The DNA test will find the truth " @mir replied. "But don't forget that it's not so easy to deal with the manager of BMW :41:" Minizoro answered

They were really confused that what they could do. They have had lots of counseling's but they couldn't reach particular result. Finally @mir decided minizoro that if he could counsel to Vahed too. So minizoro called Vahed in Iran and asked him if he knows any ways for rescuing poor Ali. "Well I have been thinking of this since I finished works which are related to AminTNT. First of all you should prove that already Zimmermann had bought Ali from AminTNT" said Vahed. "yeah I know but how?!" minizoro said."You can film Zimmermann when he or his wife is with Ali, can't you" Vahed said. "Oh yeah your right" minizoro replied.
So minizoro said to other's what he's heard from Vahed. "So now here it's your turn to show that what you have learned in "p30world forums" is not vain, you are very professional in photographing and filming, here you are show what ever you are…" Mohammad said proudly to @mir. And now @mir

@mir continues

@mir got the address of Zimmermann's house from minizoro and took his camera. He went to Maryam's room to say goodbye. Maryam was absolutely worried. "@mir ... for God's sake ... don't go ... You are the only person I have in this world" She told. "Don't worry. I'll be back soon. God protects me" He moved to the door ... but Maryam couldn't suppress her tears ... @mir came back and hugged her strongly and kissed her lips with such a clamorous smack that Mohammad and Archi in the next room heard that and looked at each other and smiled :40:c

It was an hour after midnight. @mir was on the roof of a building in front of Zimmermann's house. "This is not just a house ... This is a palace..." He muttered. All of a sudden, he noticed Mr. Zimmermann and his wife entered a room. He turned on the camera and zoomed on that window. Mrs. Zimmermann took off her robe and ... after 2 minutes ... "ooooooh..." ... @mir was gaping at the LCD of the camera :18:... suddenly he closed his eyes and turned off the camera .... "What am I doing? I should be ashamed of myself...I shouldn't film others' prvate relationships" But something occurred to him at once "But wait ...Yes ... I can film their relationship in order to extort from Mr, Zimmermann!! Maybe this persuades him to return Ali!" and laughed viciously and turned on the camera again ...:21:D

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P.S.1 Dear archi-girl...Thank you very much! I could kiss my wife at last.
P.S. 2 I think the story was getting too boring. It needed such contents. This is the salt of the story :D

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P.S 1: Shrewd @mir your made it so salt I can't eat it. Uh. Uh Archi I think if you wouldn't make @mir marry with Marryam @mir would make marry with some one else, for sure. Oh @mir, I wish for you not to be sad ever. You made me laugh a long time. You changed story. Story assumed like a great one. First we started it by a romantic one then a detective one and now a multi-romantic & s e x u a l one. Thanks; really thanks.(You think I'll let you go? No, I won't do that if I don't kick your goose.
it means: (پدرت را در مي‌آورم)
Because you made Ali like this.
Now read the rest of the story.

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@mir captured their any action, tricky, wickedly & enviously. Chk. Chk. Chk.
"Wow, let her go. Let her go." @mir whispered him self. "Now it’s the time, you should show that you are a prejudiced man.:27:"
@mir left his camera and all his attachments on the roof; he just took a knife. Then nothing could be seen, just breaking luminosity-window's glasses.
Zimmermann & the girl shocked. When Zimmermann separated him self from the girl to attack @mir, girl went onto Zimmermann with a vase. She broke it into his head. The girl ran unto @mir & said: "Oh, thank God he is my save angle, thank you Mr. . . . " "@mir" @mir replied. "Now we should ran away." When they wanted to ran out of the room they shocked with Zimmermann's guards.

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P.S 2:
Luminosity-window'= (پنجره روشنايي)
is that true?
P.S3: post edited by me. thanks @mirfor your notification. I thought it wouldn't make any problems. however i deleted useless parts, and please youedit your post,there fore no body else wouldn't know this, mis understanding. Thank you again

Persian version of this topic:

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Vahed asked AminTNT about Ali. At first, he didn't answer, however, after Vahed's persistence and two tough slaps in his face, he told the whole story. He explained that he worked for Mike and Mike was the head of an international Mafia band that kidnapped children from their own families and sold them to rich families that suffered from lack of child. He added that they had sold Ali to a family that lived in Berlin, Germany and whose name was Zimmermann. Mr. Zimmermann was a senior manager of BMW company.l

Archi continues:
"Oh my goddd..you've sold my kid " Mohammad said and jumped toward Amintnt. @mir took Mohammad back and told him to control himself. Archi was moaning and crying in the arms of Maryam . "What have I done that I should face this consequences ???" Detective Minizoro got the complete information about Mr. Zimmermann and he arrested Amintnt. Minizoro sent back Amintnt and vahed to Iran for further investigations. They took the first flight to Berlin. Archi, Mohammad,@mir, Maryam, Love-to-learn and minzoro was on their way to Berlin.
It wasn't that hard to find BMW office in Berlin. "we don't have any proof about our claim to Mr. Zimmerman" Archi said. "The DNA test will find the truth " @mir replied. "But don't forget that it's not so easy to deal with the manager of BMW [ برای مشاهده لینک ، با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] " Minizoro answered

They were really confused that what they could do. They have had lots of counseling's but they couldn't reach particular result. Finally @mir decided minizoro that if he could counsel to Vahed too. So minizoro called Vahed in Iran and asked him if he knows any ways for rescuing poor Ali. "Well I have been thinking of this since I finished works which are related to AminTNT. First of all you should prove that already Zimmermann had bought Ali from AminTNT" said Vahed. "yeah I know but how?!" minizoro said."You can film Zimmermann when he or his wife is with Ali, can't you" Vahed said. "Oh yeah your right" minizoro replied.
So minizoro said to other's what he's heard from Vahed. "So now here it's your turn to show that what you have learned in "p30world forums" is not vain, you are very professional in photographing and filming, here you are show what ever you are…" Mohammad said proudly to @mir. And now @mir

@mir continues

@mir got the address of Zimmermann's house from minizoro and took his camera. He went to Maryam's room to say goodbye. Maryam was absolutely worried. "@mir ... for God's sake ... don't go ... You are the only person I have in this world" She told. "Don't worry. I'll be back soon. God protects me" He moved to the door ... but Maryam couldn't suppress her tears ... @mir came back and hugged her strongly and kissed her lips with such a clamorous smack that Mohammad and Archi in the next room heard that and looked at each other and smiled [ برای مشاهده لینک ، با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] c

It was an hour after midnight. @mir was on the roof of a building in front of Zimmermann's house. "This is not just a house ... This is a palace..." He muttered. All of a sudden, he noticed Mr. Zimmermann and his wife entered a room. He turned on the camera and zoomed on that window. Mrs. Zimmermann took off her robe and ... after 2 minutes ... "ooooooh..." ... @mir was gaping at the LCD of the camera [ برای مشاهده لینک ، با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] ... suddenly he closed his eyes and turned off the camera .... "What am I doing? I should be ashamed of myself...I shouldn't film others' prvate relationships" But something occurred to him at once "But wait ...Yes ... I can film their relationship in order to extort from Mr, Zimmermann!! Maybe this persuades him to return Ali!" and laughed viciously and turned on the camera again ... [ برای مشاهده لینک ، با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] D
@mir captured their any action, tricky, wickedly & enviously. Chk. Chk. Chk.
"Wow, let her go. Let her go." @mir whispered him self. "Now it’s the time, you should show that you are a prejudiced man. [ برای مشاهده لینک ، با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] "
@mir left his camera and all his attachments on the roof; he just took a knife. Then nothing could be seen, just breaking luminosity-window's glasses.
Zimmermann & the girl shocked. When Zimmermann separated him self from the girl to attack @mir, girl went onto Zimmermann with a vase. She broke it into his head. The girl ran unto @mir & said: "Oh, thank God he is my save angle, thank you Mr. . . . " "@mir" @mir replied. "Now we should ran away." When they wanted to ran out of the room they shocked with Zimmermann's guards.

One of the guards asked @mir who was he and what he was doing down there, they didn't see him go in. "It was a game" the girl said. "We decided to surprise Mr Zimmerman" The guard asked where was the Zimmerman and they told him that he wanted to see the guards..all the guards. So all guards went in. @mir and the girl took this chance and escaped, they ran as far as they can. When they reached home Mohammad surprisingly said " Hey @mir ..who is this girl..you were supposed to take Ali, what has happened that she is here instead??? "
@mir explained all the story. Minizoro said "oh my god, they saw your face..so police can identify you two easily...What a situation we are in!!!!! " Maryam huged @mir and she burst into tears. " I can not tolerate all these accidents ... I warned you not to go " . " Be patient Honey.... Be patient " @mir desperately replied.
Mohammad asked what should they do with the girl. "what's your name " love-to-learn asked. "My name is Amanda " The girl replied and burst into tears " I have a miserable life.. I don't know when my miseries will end ". Love-to-learn asked her to tell them her story.
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@mir came back and hugged her strongly and kissed her lips with such a clamorous smack that Mohammad and Archi in the next room heard that and looked at each other and smiled [ برای مشاهده لینک ، با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

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P.S.@mir I love this part :31:l

Vahed asked AminTNT about Ali. At first, he didn't answer, however, after Vahed's persistence and two tough slaps in his face, he told the whole story. He explained that he worked for Mike and Mike was the head of an international Mafia band that kidnapped children from their own families and sold them to rich families that suffered from lack of child. He added that they had sold Ali to a family that lived in Berlin, Germany and whose name was Zimmermann. Mr. Zimmermann was a senior manager of BMW company.l

Archi continues:
"Oh my goddd..you've sold my kid " Mohammad said and jumped toward Amintnt. @mir took Mohammad back and told him to control himself. Archi was moaning and crying in the arms of Maryam . "What have I done that I should face this consequences ???" Detective Minizoro got the complete information about Mr. Zimmermann and he arrested Amintnt. Minizoro sent back Amintnt and vahed to Iran for further investigations. They took the first flight to Berlin. Archi, Mohammad,@mir, Maryam, Love-to-learn and minzoro was on their way to Berlin.
It wasn't that hard to find BMW office in Berlin. "we don't have any proof about our claim to Mr. Zimmerman" Archi said. "The DNA test will find the truth " @mir replied. "But don't forget that it's not so easy to deal with the manager of BMW [ برای مشاهده لینک ، با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] " Minizoro answered

They were really confused that what they could do. They have had lots of counseling's but they couldn't reach particular result. Finally @mir decided minizoro that if he could counsel to Vahed too. So minizoro called Vahed in Iran and asked him if he knows any ways for rescuing poor Ali. "Well I have been thinking of this since I finished works which are related to AminTNT. First of all you should prove that already Zimmermann had bought Ali from AminTNT" said Vahed. "yeah I know but how?!" minizoro said."You can film Zimmermann when he or his wife is with Ali, can't you" Vahed said. "Oh yeah your right" minizoro replied.
So minizoro said to other's what he's heard from Vahed. "So now here it's your turn to show that what you have learned in "p30world forums" is not vain, you are very professional in photographing and filming, here you are show what ever you are…" Mohammad said proudly to @mir. And now @mir

@mir continues

@mir got the address of Zimmermann's house from minizoro and took his camera. He went to Maryam's room to say goodbye. Maryam was absolutely worried. "@mir ... for God's sake ... don't go ... You are the only person I have in this world" She told. "Don't worry. I'll be back soon. God protects me" He moved to the door ... but Maryam couldn't suppress her tears ... @mir came back and hugged her strongly and kissed her lips with such a clamorous smack that Mohammad and Archi in the next room heard that and looked at each other and smiled [ برای مشاهده لینک ، با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] c

It was an hour after midnight. @mir was on the roof of a building in front of Zimmermann's house. "This is not just a house ... This is a palace..." He muttered. All of a sudden, he noticed Mr. Zimmermann and his wife entered a room. He turned on the camera and zoomed on that window. Mrs. Zimmermann took off her robe and ... after 2 minutes ... "ooooooh..." ... @mir was gaping at the LCD of the camera [ برای مشاهده لینک ، با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] ... suddenly he closed his eyes and turned off the camera .... "What am I doing? I should be ashamed of myself...I shouldn't film others' prvate relationships" But something occurred to him at once "But wait ...Yes ... I can film their relationship in order to extort from Mr, Zimmermann!! Maybe this persuades him to return Ali!" and laughed viciously and turned on the camera again ... [ برای مشاهده لینک ، با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] D
@mir captured their any action, tricky, wickedly & enviously. Chk. Chk. Chk.
"Wow, let her go. Let her go." @mir whispered him self. "Now it’s the time, you should show that you are a prejudiced man. [ برای مشاهده لینک ، با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] "
@mir left his camera and all his attachments on the roof; he just took a knife. Then nothing could be seen, just breaking luminosity-window's glasses.
Zimmermann & the girl shocked. When Zimmermann separated him self from the girl to attack @mir, girl went onto Zimmermann with a vase. She broke it into his head. The girl ran unto @mir & said: "Oh, thank God he is my save angle, thank you Mr. . . . " "@mir" @mir replied. "Now we should ran away." When they wanted to ran out of the room they shocked with Zimmermann's guards.

One of the guards asked @mir who was he and what he was doing down there, they didn't see him go in. "It was a game" the girl said. "We decided to surprise Mr Zimmerman" The guard asked where was the Zimmerman and they told him that he wanted to see the guards..all the guards. So all guards went in. @mir and the girl took this chance and escaped, they ran as far as they can. When they reached home Mohammad surprisingly said " Hey @mir ..who is this girl..you were supposed to take Ali, what has happened that she is here instead??? "
@mir explained all the story. Minizoro said "oh my god, they saw your face..so police can identify you two easily...What a situation we are in!!!!! " Maryam huged @mir and she burst into tears. " I can not tolerate all these accidents ... I warned you not to go " . " Be patient Honey.... Be patient " @mir desperately replied.
Mohammad asked what should they do with the girl. "what's your name " love-to-learn asked. "My name is Amanda " The girl replied and burst into tears " I have a miserable life.. I don't know when my miseries will end ". Love-to-learn asked her to tell them her story

When Amanda wanted to begin telling her story, @mir stopped her indignantly and told her "We ourselves are the most miserable and helpless human beings in the universe, so plz keep your story for yourself and go home. RIGHT NOW!!" Amanda was absolutely offended, hence she quit their place quickly and after a while they could hear her voice sobbing . Maryam told @mir "You shouldn't have done that to her. She needed our help." Suddenly @mir flared out at Maryam and shouted "Shut up!!! .... we have our own problems ... I can not cope with this much trouble... Ali is missing?!! what the heck... who cares?!... It has nothing to do with me... why are we here now? Ali is Mohammad and Archi's son and this is their problem ... It's none of my business .... I and you will return to Iran as soon as possible" He slammed the door and went out ... Maryam was absolutely ashamed of what @mir had told ...she wanted to say something but Mohammad asked her not to say anything ...l

The kid was found safe and sound. @mir married the girl he loved, amintnt was wrongly caught, in fact he was a good guy! And everyone ended up in a happy ending.

The story is over now!

It could be the bestseller story ever, if it was published!

Thanks to dear writers!

oh my god...look what topic is up again

Thanks Amin, it reminds me of good old days, you don't know how much I laughed while writing or reading the story, It was awesome

Thanks everyone, And thank you for the ending :31:l

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نوشته شده توسط amintnt [ برای مشاهده لینک ، با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

The kid was found safe and sound. @mir married the girl he loved, amintnt was wrongly caught, in fact he was a good guy! And everyone ended up in a happy ending.

The story is over now!

It could be the bestseller story ever, if it was published!

Thanks to dear writers!

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! Hey Dear Amin

thanks alot !

you re-born the topic

but let me tell a suggestion

who is leg ( Payeh) to start another story :31:

hi muhammad
how do you do?
well count on me to start
another one
but what the story will be about?

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نوشته شده توسط minizoro [ برای مشاهده لینک ، با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

hi muhammad
how do you do?
well count on me to start
another one
but what the story will be about?

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hey dear zoro

long time no kiss :31:

you totally have permission to start a new story

I'll probabaly be off for a week , but soon i'll join you