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Hi folks
Thanks to Brain because of starting the new subject
I love sports and all the athletes and that’s why I do that regularly. Let me talk about my sport. I love fighting sports so I do my favorite fighting sport. I do Wushu That most of the people in the world know that by this name: Shoalin Kung fu.
I've fallen in love with this sport since I was a child and seen Jacky Chan and lee's films and I've done this sport since 3 years ago and I'm preparing myself for the competitions for next year. Wushu has many styles and my style is Shaolin Khong Quan . the master of this style is Mr. Hosseini and he is also my master. This sport divided into 2 parts: Sanshou(fighting) & Taolu(art work) That I mostly do the art work.
Let me to talk about this subject wider. I suggest all of you to do your favorite sport . because I experienced that sport is not good just for our physical health.
Try to do your favorite sport even you don't have enough ability to do that. Just try to release your extra energy. I know it's really hard at first because your muscles will become painful at first. But if you keep on trying and do that regularly you will get used to doing that, like me. I'm addicted to my sport.
Let me to tell you the truth, the most important experience that I have when I was in 3rd grade in high school. (I started this sport when I was in 2nd grade in high school). One day I got a really bad mark in one of the most important lessons and I was so sad that I wanted to go somewhere and just cry. In that day, after the school I was on my way to the gym. I went gym and that day we exercised really hard. But after the exercise I didn't feel as sad as before doing sport and the way of my thinking about my mark completely changed.
So I thought that the mental effect of sport is really great. And I suggest you that if you feel unpleasant try to do sport instead of thinking over about your problem.
Let's talk about sport and child. Child that do sport don't know much things about sport and they just want to spend their time and maybe they will become uninterested in sport, so the most thing that they need is encouragement.
When I was a child, If somebody encouraged me, I didn't abandon my sport at all and I became a master of this sport. But nobody encouraged me and I abandoned this sport until 3 years a go. So try to encourage the chide who do sports.
Wow … I'm really sorry! I talked a lot.
thank you, sorry for this delay; I was sorta busy n was not in the mood of correcting the mistakes.
As before, it was pretty nice n with the least possible mistakes, just have a look at some of them n in case there was any question ask :10:
I've done this sport since 3 years ago
First off, after since we mostly have a complete sentence; e.g: sine I was three years old...or we mention an exact time: since 1998
then, when we talk about sth which we are still doing that it's better to use Present Perfect continous: I've been doing this sport since I was (age)
Let me to talk : 'let' doesn't acept any prep; e.g: let me know
so it should be: let me talk
I experienced that sport is not good just for our physical health:
I couldn't get you precisely here but if u meant: من با توجه به تجربیات متوجه شدم که ورش تنها برای سلامت جسمی نیست; you could write in this way:
According to my experince/ Since I've experinced doing some sports I've noticed that it is not only good for our physical health
Second grade in highschool: 2nd grade of high school
time and maybe they will become: u've used 'maybe' here so it eliminates the need of using 'will'---> maybe they become
Child: 1 child; 2 children
master of this sport: in this sport
happy studying, keep goin, that is an absolutely a great job
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Hi guys!
I wrote 1 paragraph about chess .please correct my mistakes.:46:
One of my favorite sports is chess, because it like a real war and it needs concentrating.
Whenever I play chess I feel that I’m in the battle and I’m guiding my soldiers .
You can choose infinitive game or defensive game . I prefer to ply defensive policy at the first, then I decorate my members as the best way, I start play infinitive policy. I think the the best beat is horse ,
because it could have unforeseen movement in predicament:31:t .
Hi buddy, thanks for joining the guys here
it like: when u r talking about the similarity of sth you have to use: it is like
like as a verb means: دوست داشتن
so it is like a real war
start play: after 'start' verbs come in infinitive or gerund form: I started to play/ I started playing
