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Nowadays having not a busy life is pretty weird and most of the successful persons have had a busy life. It might be hard at first but the only thing that encourages us, is having goal in life. having interest in that goals, makes us to overcome against any hardship. I have a really busy life and I like it. I have some dreams and for achieving them, I should try as hard as I can. My biggest problem is wasting time and the passed time that doesn’t come back again. If I don’t waste my time, I believe that I can change my dreams to reality. Not just me, every one can achieve her/his goals and enjoy her/his life but just if they have a main schedule for their life and if they use their time as well as they can.
But some people who are pretty lazy may like an easy life and they don’t like to be busy with life. They don’t have certain goals or dreams or maybe they have, but they are not brave enough to deal with the hardships in life.

Many years ago i thought when i have 20 years years i will have good life . i will adult and i can do everything !
after the university i go to work . all of my wish have gone now !
because i have no time for myself !
i go to work at 7 oclock and i bach to home at 19 oclock !
when i can have a life ?
i think people must do what they like to do . not work they have to do !
life is too short !

Topic: do you prefer to change your lifestyle

Writer: Armita

Date: 2010/2/18

In the name of God

Nowadays, with the advent of technology and the increase of the resources, most of people live with better facilities and better conditions of training and education against the past. Of course, these blessings are the right of this intelligent creature

Sometimes, pondering the following factors and causes, I have a tendency to be optimistic to the process of life. However, living in the capital and modernizing of urban system, I have faced with many unplanned problems and challenges which they aren’t clearly predicted such as finding a good job related to my major, purchasing dwellings. Perhaps its most significant feature is to be discontented and dissatisfied from my life

First of all, the most important reason for changing my own lifestyle is that I will be happy and feel satisfied from living and being among these civilians. Second, the monotonous procedures of life are influenced on my behavior and attitudes. So, it is completely evidenced that change and alteration of boring lifestyle are fundamental bases and spots in order that I am not fond of feeling hopeless to the future

Some psychologists considered that one of the reasons of committing suicide among adults is that they don’t believe this magical word to be able to create new wishes and desires if they want

hi every one

most of us have many wishes and like to reach them.but when we start and going to do it,don't have enough trust and try to make them possible.
I have decide to do lots of work because I don't this condition I am in.I want and started strongly to changed it.
I'm going survive my life and change it to that I'd like
first of all I'm going to studying my university lessons.
second I'm going to have regular working in any field....like exercise and things like that
I want change my relations.I want to have dynamic and happy life:31:

Writer: Rayhaneh

Date: 2010/2/18

Topic : People work because they need money to live. What are some other reasons that people work
Discuss one or more of these reasons. Use specific examples and details to support your answer

Work is the symbol of life, activity and bringing changes.
The common point here is that we all do some sort of work but the question arises, why do we work?n

In my point of view 90% of the people are working due to financial reasons but still there are 10% who work for some other reasons.

This group of people includes mostly females who are in second position responsible in supporting a family. Anyhow there is no exact rule for that.

As I have seen around me some people, mostly social ones, work because they want to pass their time more efficiently and joyfully with different people at work; they want to learn from them or they hate being alone at home!n

Another group of them works due their interests and they work because they love the specific job they have, like
photographers or some teachers, artists and etc.

Some other people work both due to their love of working and also for fulfilling their financial needs.
But as whole no matter why and what work we do, we better to have some job!n
Because being free all the time causes many miseries both for the person and society as well.end
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Magic

Can you fly like a bird by saying certain words? Or change ordinary metals into gold with a potion? Or cause a rainstorm by dancing in a special way? Of course not—that would be magic!

Long ago, before science developed, most people believed in magic. They thought supernatural forces connected different parts of the world. They believed some people, called sorcerers and witches, had magical powers. They could use special chants, spells, or charms to call on supernatural forces and make wonderful—or terrible—things happen.

In those days, magic and religion blended together. For many people, spells and rituals (special ceremonies) were a part of their religious beliefs. They believed that if certain spells or rituals were performed the right way, the gods or spirits would grant their wishes.

The first priests were religious magicians called shamans. Ancient hunting and gathering people looked to shamans to help them survive. They believed shamans had the power to heal the sick. Shamans were thought to communicate with the spiritual world. They led rituals to make hunting expeditions successful, keep crops growing, and prevent disasters. As civilization advanced, such ideas were left behind.

Few people believe in magic anymore. Yet many still enjoy magic shows. Stage magicians are popular entertainers. Magicians appear to do the impossible, such as make objects disappear or float in the air. Audiences know the magic isn’t real, but even so, they enjoy being baffled. How do magicians do it?

Most magic tricks depend on a practice called misdirection. Misdirection happens when a magician fools the audience into looking the wrong way at key moments. Magicians also use sleight of hand. This means they move their hands too quickly for people to see. Finally, magicians use special equipment. That is why people sometimes say magic is done with “smoke and mirrors.”

Even as entertainment, magic has a long history. A magician named Dedi lived and worked in Egypt around 2700 bc. His most famous trick involved cutting the heads off two chickens and an ox. He then appeared to restore the animals’ heads and bring them back to life.

In 1921, a British magician named P. T. Selbit created one of the best-known acts in magic. He shut a woman into a box and sawed the box in half. Afterward, the woman got out of the box, still alive and whole. About the same time in America, Howard Thurston made the Indian Rope Trick famous. First, he seemed to make a rope rise into the air. Then he climbed the rope—and disappeared!

The American magician and escape artist Harry Houdini amazed audiences with his sensational escapes from seemingly impossible situations. In one act, he escaped from a locked metal box underwater while wearing handcuffs!

Magic is fun, but is it profitable? Some famous and successful magicians include Harry Blackstone, Doug Henning, and David Copperfield. Tens of thousands of magicians perform magic acts in the United States today. However, only about 500 of them actually make a living as professionals.

  محتوای مخفی: نکاتی در مورد خلاصه کردن متون 

نکاتی در مورد خلاصه کردن متون

"خلاصه" نسخه کوتاهتری از متن مرجع هست."خلاصه" تمام قسمت های مهم متن مرجع را در برمیگیرد با این تفاوت که آنها را در فضای کمتر( یعنی با استفاده از لغات کمتر ) جای می دهد.

قبل از خلاصه کردن هر متنی باید اطمینان حاصل کنین که اون متن رو به طور کامل فهمیدید.

نکاتی که باید رعایت کنید:

1.به اصل مطلب توجه کنید که راجع به چی هست.از نوشتن هر گونه مثال اضافی که در متن مرجع آورده شده، در خلاصه تون خودداری کنید.

2.مطالبی که در فهم موضوع تاثیر چندانی ندارند رو حذف کنید.تصور کنید قراره برای هر لغتی که توی خلاصه تون درج می کنید از جیب خودتون پول بدید!:31: در اون صورت چه کلماتی از متن مرجع (یا هم معنیشون) رو سعی می کنید تو خلاصه تون جای بدید؟:20:

3.اصلاعات اصلی و کلیدی متن رو مجدداً در خلاصه تون بیان کنید.با کلمات و جملات متفاوت(این خیلی مهمه...خیلی از زبان آموزا، همون کلمات خود متن رو دوباره می نویسن...عیناً! این میشه کپی برداری از اصل متن...نه خلاصه کردن)

4.با کلمات خودتون بنویسید، کلمات متن اصلی رو ندزدید!:31: (البته این مترادف گذاشتن همیشه ممکن نیست ولی تا جایی که ممکنه از لغات خودتون استفاده کنید.)

5.بی طرف باشید(خنثی:31: ). یعنی نظر و عقیده شخصی خودتون رو درباره متن، اضافه نکنید به خلاصه ای که می نویسید.:31: هیچ اطلاعات جدیدی (هر چند که درست هم باشه) به خلاصه تون اضافه نکنید.(اول خلاصه هاتون ننویسید This passage is about...|) فکر کنم این دفعه سوم بود که اینو گفتم...:31: خواهشاً ایندفعه رعایت کنید.:20:


مراحل خلاصه نویسی:


1.متن رو هر چند بار که لازمه بخونید تا به طور کامل بفهمیدش.لغات جدید رو در بیارید.

2.زیر نکات اصلی متن خط بکشید و اونا رو رو یه برگه جدا بنویسید.(نت برداری در حاشیه متن هم میتونه بهتون کمک کنه.)

3.اولین نسخه "خلاصه" تون رو بنویسید.


در نهایت اطمینان حاصل کنید که "خلاصه" تون دارای ویژگی های زیر باشه:


جامع: همه نکات اصلی مورد نظر نویسنده متن رو در خودش داشته باشه.

دقیق: با کلمات مترادفی که استفاده کردید نقطه نظر نویسنده متن مرجع رو عوض نکرده باشید(همون اطلاعات به شکل دیگه ای)

بیطرف: عقاید و نظرات شخصی خودتون در "خلاصه" نباشه.

مستقل: "خلاصه" به صورتی باشه که اگه دادینش دست یکی که متن اصلی رو تا به حال نخونده، سر در بیاره از نکات اصلی متن.

نقل قول:

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نوشته شده توسط singleguy [ برای مشاهده لینک ، با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Nowadays not to have a busy life is pretty weird and most of the successful persons have had a busy life. It might be hard at first but the only thing that encourages us, is to have a goal in life. To be interested in (enthusiast about) that goals, makes us to overcome against any hardship. I have a really busy life and I like it. I have some dreams and for achieving them, I should try as hard as I can. My biggest problem is wasting time and the passed time that won’t come back again. If I don’t waste my time, I believe that I can transform my dreams to reality. Not just me, every one can achieve their goals and enjoy their life but only on the condition that they have a main schedule for their life and if they spend their time as well as they can.
But some people who are pretty lazy may like an easy life and they don’t like to be busy with life. They don’t have certain goals or dreams or maybe they have, but they are not brave enough to deal with the hardships in life.

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Red = must be omitted
Green = the correct form of phrase

add. points: good at introducing the idea and explaining the supportive points of view about that idea.
the correct tense of verbs should be more practiced!

4/5

نقل قول:

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نوشته شده توسط vahid_civil [ برای مشاهده لینک ، با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Many years ago i used to think when i reach to the age of 20 i will have a good life . i will be an adult and i can do everything !
after the university i go to work . all of my dreams are gone now !
because i have no time for myself !
i go to work at 7 oclock and i return home at 19 oclock !
when i can have a life ?
i think people must do what they like to do . not work they have to do !
life is too short !

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The whole text is more like a piece of opinion not a full essay. The conclusion and describing reasons are good.

3.5/5

نقل قول:

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نوشته شده توسط armita2007 [ برای مشاهده لینک ، با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

Topic: do you prefer to change your lifestyle

Writer: Armita

Date: 2010/2/18

In the name of God

Nowadays, with the advent of technology and the increase of the resources, most of people live with better facilities and better conditions of training and education on the contrary to the past. Of course, these blessings are the right of this intelligent creature

Sometimes, pondering the following factors and causes, I have a tendency to be optimistic to the process of life. However, living in the capital and modernizing of urban system, I have faced with many unplanned problems and challenges which they aren’t clearly predicted such as finding a good job related to my major, purchasing dwellings. Perhaps its most significant feature is to be discontented and dissatisfied from my life

First of all, the most important reason for changing my own lifestyle is that I will be happy and feel satisfied by living and being among these civilians. Second, the monotonous procedures of life are making influences on my behavior and attitudes. So, it is completely evident that changing and alteration of the boring lifestyle are fundamental bases and spots. For I am not really fond of feeling hopeless in the future

Some psychologists considered that one of the reasons of committing suicide among adults is that they don’t believe this magical word to be able to create new wishes and desires if they want

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Great usage of vocabulary. introducing the problem and then supporting the points of view with more examples are 2 strength points.
The part of speech for each vocab should be more deliberated on

4.5/5

نقل قول:

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نوشته شده توسط majid.khaledi [ برای مشاهده لینک ، با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

hi every one

most of us have many wishes and like to achieve them.but when we start and going to do it,don't have enough trust and try to make them possible.
I have decided to do lots of work because I don't like this condition I am in.I wanted and started strongly to changed it.
I'm going to rescue my life and change it into the thing I really like.
first of all I'm going to studying my university lessons.
second I'm going to have regular working in any field....like exercise and things like that
I want to change my relations.I want to have a dynamic and happy life:31:

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The writing started with a good prescript but was cut into your own decisions about life.
you have to be more careful about verb tenses.

3.5/5