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Nice writing but I don't understand something
what do you mean by "purpose"?
Did you use it as a verb?
It's not a verb.
and one more thing, "the almighty" would suffice to mention Allah, no need to use Allah again or you can just use Allah. It would imply the meaning.
All in all, I enjoyed reading it, thanks.
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It was nice...all your ideas put into two paragraphs
I didn't get the violet sentence.
"suicide" always collocates with the verb "commit"
Be careful about using passive tense
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very well organized.thanks.
about the violet sentence:
It is a double negative sentence and it's not common anymore
better to say:
Nobody knows
:46:
Tonic water please
This story is about Tesuya Saruhashi and his problems when he lived in Canada for a year. Before going, he took some English calsses but he couldn’t pronounce sounds “V” and “I” well. For example, when he looked for some volunteer work, he pronounced “volunteer” like “brounteer” and when he wanted to drink tonic water, he pronounced “tonic water” like “twenty quarters” and bartender wanted to give him twenty quarters. After that, whenever he wants to drink tonic water, he remembers this incident
Tonic water please
This text is about a japanese university student that he has studied in Toronto, Canada for a year. He took several English classes to learn English very well before he went to Canada. In Canada, he didn't have any problem with understood people but people couldn't understand him because of his pronunciation specially with the' V ' sound and the ' L ' sound as sometimes he had to write his sentence or he had to repeat that several times.l
نقل قول:
Nice summary but not perfect.
A summary should contain the main points and it should be independent. Imagine that someone who doesn't know anything about the original text is going to read your summary and get the main points of the original text.
For example, the last sentence of your paragraph is not that much important to be mentioned in your summary. By the way, the first sentence is not mentioned by the author of the text. In a good summary, you should write the main points in another way. I mean you should write the information presented in the text, in other words(in your own words for example) and you must not add new information to it.
Good luck:20:.
نقل قول:َA good summary!
It includes the main points but that 'this is about' bothers me:31:
Don't write such things at the beginning of your summary. As I said before, imagine that the reader doesn't know anything about what you're writing about.
*Parlance is quite a formal word and your summary is not that much formal.
*I didn't get what you mean by " his second person"
Ain't it better to say " his partner?"
Good luck:46:
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A new member:31:welcome:31:
I enjoyed reading your summary. Just some spelling mistakes(better to say: typing mistakes)
But I don't understand why your summaries are too short?:31:
It is a summary of course:31: but It must include the main ideas as well:31:
well done
Good luck:46:
نقل قول:The first letter of all nationalities should be capitalized.
A good summary, you've mentioned his experiences in an indirect way. Well done.
Good luck:20:
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