سلام
بنده تقریبا تازه شروع به آموختن زبان کردم و به دنبال جایی هستم که مطالبی که می نویسم توسط دوستانی که تخصص دارند بررسی و اصلاح بشه. یه پست گذاشتم که دوستان راهنمایی کنند ولی جوابی داده نشد. لذا اگه مایلید در این پست مطالبی که دوستان می نویسند رو بررسی و اصلاح کنیم.
تشکر
As first:
In follow me
As I said before, I take several people for camping tow times in year. I Commission for This from Mountaineering Committee. It’s time to tell you about one of them that I take my student to Qorva. There was a big preserve called “SHOO”. At the first day, we arrived at 4 p.m. when the intense heat governed over our surrounding. After an hour, when we became more relaxed, I decided to have a short trip around our camp, Usually before carry my friend to education, I do it.
It was 14 Tir 1389 and many of nomads migrated to this place and I know it, but I never noticed our commander maybe don’t know about present of them. When it was 5:30 p.m. I walked away climbing a short hill at their left.
To be continue…
It would be a grate favour if you read and correct this writing.
Thank you
With respect, Alavi
