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HI FRIENDS:11:
This topic is for your own poems and sentences but in english ,
you write your poems and sentences here and we will talk about them,
I'm waiting for your beautiful poems,sentences and also your comments.
i will put the first one soon
or no
i want you to be the first
GOOD LUCK
my friends.:10:
ok the first one:
I have nothing
no money
no house
but
HOPE!
What about haiku؟
In correct 4-5-4 order:
Life Sucks Truly Brilliant
Psychopath President Stabs His People
Revolution Time Hath Come
A Cool Topic, this is mine:
The Night of Forest
Dancing darkness in the forest night is so divine
until the wimpy creatures are on sleep and the sun in decline
The howling wolves are the guardians of night
Their gazing eyes haunt the forest and keep the darkness bright
A frost ups from the earth and the trees come to talk
The whispering trees summon fallen angels and the party is about to start
But, the sun strikes the night far away across the sea and divides the night
Angels are now running away to the skies to find some darkness and unchain their definite right!l
wow
amazing Scythe
did u write that yourslef
I got pleasure to read that
thx
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keep on...this is cool topic
نقل قول:
keep the darkness bright
Hi
Thanks so much scythe for this GREAT poem!!!
the part that I quoted is great,perfect.I guess we call that paradox. don't we??
I'm waiting for your nice poems dear.
thanks!!!نقل قول:
keep on...this is cool topic
sure we'll go on.
my second sentence:
I think that nothing is unreachable, nothing is hard, but you make it to be.
you are the leader.
Nothing is right,
I am responsible,
The sun is hot,
I am responsible,
People smile,die,cry,
Yes,you're right
I am responsible
What's my fault?
S.O said:
You're responsible!!!
My journey into Darkness
The dreams of searching another existence
I felt lightness inside
Said farewelled to my body
"I will miss all moments by your side
though you no more can hold me inside, memories of you are creeping me inside"
weightless, floated like angel's wings
entered the land of dead
the land was shaking
Diabolic corpses everywhere were coming out
frightened
The souls were tracking my shadow
no! I gotta go
The sun was bleeding
evenfall
The fog of night was spreading
night again
Hungry for the night, followed its call
I ascended, far up in the skies of my dreams
Earth looked too far
Freezing moon opened her arms to me
cold but not as cold as me
No Go! have to go
Eternal darkness lighted up
I lost my shadows
But I found my lost souls somewhere in that darkness
Greetings, I came back for you
Suddenly time died and I remained in the eternity painless
dark light lasted without blue
نقل قول:Thanks to all, yeah this one is great
well thoughts and nicely have put together
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memories of you are creeping me inside
that part is fantastic!!!!!
when i read a good poem i feel s.th in my heart and that feeling happened again.
thank so much
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