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نسخه کامل مشاهده نسخه کامل : My Lovely English Teacher



meisam317
21-07-2006, 22:08
(hello(i am sorry about my writing beginner
now i study english in level 6 but i am weak . when i study level 3 in jahade daneshgahi
i fall in love with my beauty teacher .he was very thin and cmfortable with me but
i havent ORZEH to talk with her
and now i am very very sad.



plz tell your idea about me

RobertDeniro
21-07-2006, 23:33
(hello(i am sorry about my writing beginner
now i study english in level 6 but i am weak . when i study level 3 in jahade daneshgahi
i fall in love with my beauty teacher .he was very thin and cmfortable with me but
i havent ORZEH to talk with her
and now i am very very sad.



plz tell your idea about me

I Haven't ORZEH To Talk With Her = False

I Don't Have ORZEH To Talk To Her .

faraz118
21-07-2006, 23:41
this is a long story and its never finish
leylee & majnoon never been togheter and it is beautifull
:))
bye

sise
22-07-2006, 00:07
Are you sure you loved her really? Most foreign languages teacher are relax and lovely [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

galaxy_110
22-07-2006, 00:23
Dear Friend,

I do strongly advise you to talk to her.

I don't knwo about the situation in Iran but here if you fall in love with someone and if you really love her you should talk to her. Please be catiuos, make sure that it's a true love and not just a crush.

Come on think about it, how is she supposed to know about your feelings. She is a human like you. Just put yourself together and talk to her like a man.

Believe me, if you don't do so you'll blame yourself for the rest of your life.

Besides, as far as your English, as a native speaker of English I assure you if you practise you can make it.

Famous proverb: Practise makes perfect.

Best wishes,

Cheers

Van Gogh
22-07-2006, 14:13
(hello(i am sorry about my writing beginner
now i study english in level 6 but i am weak . when i study level 3 in jahade daneshgahi
i fall in love with my beauty teacher .he was very thin and cmfortable with me but
i havent ORZEH to talk with her
and now i am very very sad.



plz tell your idea about me

Is she still your teacher ? I mean can you see her these days?

meisam317
22-07-2006, 14:58
Again Hello and sorry about my writing
she dont come to jahadedaneshgah but i know that she goes other institue
unfortunetely, i dont know which institute.

meisam317
22-07-2006, 16:34
as you know i am sudent in univercity.One day after finish level 3 i see her accidently
in my univercity and i know that we study in the same univercity.And i talk to her
but again i shame to tell her my love e'
in level 4 she teach in other class and i everyday go to her class and watch she yavashaki
after some day this class students see me and laught me.(khak be sare man n

RobertDeniro
22-07-2006, 17:53
I Think So it's not (Falling In Love
Each Iranian Person has this habits to do .
Falling In Love Just Can Take you nowhere
Don't Overrate on it .
it just Wastes your Time .
Do Not Waste The Time
It was my Advice
Hope You Got it GoodBoy

Behroooz
23-07-2006, 18:45
be brave
go and talk to her
she will not kill you
write a litter to her and put it in her way

dont waste the time......

mohammad.clergyman
23-07-2006, 20:35
come on guys

most of you have made a lot of mistakes

please look out

and talk and write english regularly

this was my advice to you

RobertDeniro
25-07-2006, 11:44
be brave
go and talk to her
she will not kill you
write a litter to her and put it in her way

dont waste the time......
You mean
He Writes A Letter
Litter = فعل آشغال ریختن هست
Do Not Litter : آشغال نریزید .

mohammad.clergyman
25-07-2006, 12:38
I want to improve your mistakes

because i want to make it culture here

i hope that you will do as well

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(hello(i am sorry about my writing beginner
now i study english in level 6 but i am weak . when i study level 3 in jahade daneshgahi
i fall in love with my beauty teacher .he was very thin and cmfortable with me but
i havent ORZEH to talk with her
and now i am very very sad.



plz tell your idea about me

plase tell instead of first sentence

I have just began to write

you have written :i now study

But it is really the present time so you have to add ing at the end of the verb

you have written :when i study...i fall

it must be in past tense

I studied & felt

You have written : beauty teacher

but you had to write beautiful teacher because beauty is noun

you have written :comfortable

but it is only used for substances and things or furnitures such as soda

You had better used handome instead of comfortable

You have written

i havent ORZEH to talk with her

I think if you don't think persian you won't have to use persian words

you could say

I didn't qualify or fit to talk to him

don't say with him

thanks alot

RobertDeniro
25-07-2006, 23:23
come on guys

most of you have made a lot of mistakes

please look out

and talk and write english regularly

this was my advice to you
You Have Mistake at this post
This Was My Advice
OR
It Was My Advice
:rolleye:

mohammad.clergyman
26-07-2006, 12:00
You Have Mistake at this post
This Was My Advice
OR
It Was My Advice
:rolleye:

first i must say that mistake is not verb you had to say

You have made mistake at this post

thank you very much because of your post

You are right I'd better say it was my Advice

Thanks again

mohammad.clergyman
26-07-2006, 12:58
this is a long story and its never finish
leylee & majnoon never been togheter and it is beautifull
:))
byeIt's never finished


Are you sure you loved her really? Most foreign languages teacher are relax and lovely [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]

most language teachers



Dear Friend,

Believe me, if you don't do so you'll blame yourself for the rest of your life.

Besides, as far as your English, as a native speaker of English I assure you if you practise you can make it.

Cheers

I do appreciate you due to your nice expressions

but i have some questions

what does this sentence mean >> rest of your life

as far as english as well

I have sent a personal message to you please read it



Again Hello and sorry about my writing
she dont come to jahadedaneshgah but i know that she goes other institue
unfortunetely, i dont know which institute.


she didn't........she went ..to

or

she doesn't ....she goes

unfortunately



I Think So it's not (Falling In Love
Each Iranian Person has this habits to do .

Hope You Got it GoodBoy

these habits

Thank you veru much

alioj
30-07-2006, 16:27
(hello(i am sorry about my writing beginner
now i study english in level 6 but i am weak . when i study level 3 in jahade daneshgahi
i fall in love with my beauty teacher .he was very thin and cmfortable with me but
i havent ORZEH to talk with her
and now i am very very sad.



plz tell your idea about med

now i study english in level 6 but i am weak = it is false
now i am studing english in level 6 But i am very weak

meisam317
30-07-2006, 19:18
thank you mahammad

shiva_2076
04-08-2006, 14:55
hi
h r u?
r u fine?
wats up there?

mohammad.clergyman
04-08-2006, 20:20
Hi Dear Shive


Wellcome to P30world forum

Try to not send unimportant posts pay as many attentions as possible to the topic's subject

Thanks in advance

amintnt
05-08-2006, 02:51
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