مشاهده نسخه کامل
: Let's Complete The Story
mohammad.clergyman
15-07-2007, 15:09
As it seems ; looking at the subject ; there will be a story here which will about to be completed gradually
Lots of aims can be imagined for this topic and the benefits are quiet clear ; despite it’s better to mention them in order to clarify the purposes as well as advantages
Some of those are as the following
Correcting our English structures specially the usage of past tenses in our Writing
Developing our vocabulary ; reading others posts
Making a friendly atmosphere in which we can get progressed
Utilizing the best structures ; words ; prepositions and so on
Extending our creativity in English
Some rules and guidance about this topic
All of the story must be in the blue color
The story must not get finished at any cost
Each post must have at least two sentences about the story
Prevent correcting others posts directly i.e. it must be attached to your post about story
Try to make an exciting situation in the story when the next post is supposed to follow
Looking forward to have an active topic here
Thanks a lot
mohammad.clergyman
15-07-2007, 15:11
In The name of who created the story of life
Once upon a time ; there lived a beautiful young woman and a handsome young man ; they were very poor but as they were deeply in love they wanted to get married
....But
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mohammad.clergyman
15-07-2007, 17:15
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Hi dear
The forms and the aims of your topic are quiet different than mine since there the characters of the story have been mentioned and the purpose admittedly is various
Thanks due to your attention :11:
In The name of who created the story of life
Once upon a time ; there lived a beautiful young woman and a handsome young man ; they were very poor but as they were deeply in love they wanted to get married
But in a gloomy night, the poor boy was hit by a horse drawn carriage and missed both his legs! c
mohammad.clergyman
15-07-2007, 21:58
In The name of who created the story of life
Once upon a time ; there lived a beautiful young woman and a handsome young man ; they were very poor but as they were deeply in love they wanted to get married
But in a gloomy night, the poor boy was hit by a horse drawn carriage and missed both his legs!
although the girl became really sad about it ; and cried for two days long it didn't decrease her strong love ; she still had lots of hopes for their lives then was the time she realized that she must work harder to make a better life for her love and make him hopeful as well
c
In The name of who created the story of life
Once upon a time ; there lived a beautiful young woman and a handsome young man ; they were very poor but as they were deeply in love they wanted to get married
But in a gloomy night, the poor boy was hit by a horse drawn carriage and missed both his legs!
although the girl became really sad about it ; and cried for two days long it didn't decrease her strong love ; she still had lots of hopes for their lives then was the time she realized that she must work harder to make a better life for her love and make him hopeful as well.
Poor young woman was working very hard to cover the expenses of their humble life. A week later, she suddenly realized that she was pregnant and could not work any more!c
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A r c h i
16-07-2007, 00:25
Once upon a time ; there lived a beautiful young woman and a handsome young man ; they were very poor but as they were deeply in love they wanted to get married
But in a gloomy night, the poor boy was hit by a horse drawn carriage and missed both his legs!
although the girl became really sad about it ; and cried for two days long it didn't decrease her strong love ; she still had lots of hopes for their lives then was the time she realized that she must work harder to make a better life for her love and make him hopeful as well.
Poor young woman was working very hard to cover the expenses of their humble life. A week later, she suddenly realized that she was pregnant and could not work any more!c
It was a hard situation for both of them, It was destiny or whatever it had happened, So they should think of a solution, the best way to carry on and earn money was working at home. The woman decided to bake cake and pastry at home for man to sell in town.
But all of a sudden
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p.s. why we always try to make miserable stories? why it shouldn't be a detective one ?:27:l
mohammad.clergyman
16-07-2007, 09:05
Once upon a time ; there lived a beautiful young woman and a handsome young man ; they were very poor but as they were deeply in love they wanted to get married
But in a gloomy night, the poor boy was hit by a horse drawn carriage and missed both his legs!
although the girl became really sad about it ; and cried for two days long it didn't decrease her strong love ; she still had lots of hopes for their lives then was the time she realized that she must work harder to make a better life for her love and make him hopeful as well.
Poor young woman was working very hard to cover the expenses of their humble life. A week later, she suddenly realized that she was pregnant and could not work any more!c
It was a hard situation for both of them, It was destiny or whatever it had happened, So they should think of a solution, the best way to carry on and earn money was working at home. The woman decided to bake cake and pastry at home for man to sell in town.
But all of a sudden there was a letter written by Dr R.M recently sent from his hospital
it's quiet unbelievable ; the woman said ; it was as a gift given to her because of her all attempts for handling their lives
There was written incredibly that he's gonna be ok due to a new medicine which was just discovered
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p.s No problem I made it better as you wanted ; i will try to make it more exciting you please do
love-to-learn
16-07-2007, 11:01
Once upon a time ; there lived a beautiful young woman and a handsome young man ; they were very poor but as they were deeply in love they wanted to get married
But in a gloomy night, the poor boy was hit by a horse drawn carriage and missed both his legs!
although the girl became really sad about it ; and cried for two days long it didn't decrease her strong love ; she still had lots of hopes for their lives then was the time she realized that she must work harder to make a better life for her love and make him hopeful as well.
Poor young woman was working very hard to cover the expenses of their humble life. A week later, she suddenly realized that she was pregnant and could not work any more!c
It was a hard situation for both of them, It was destiny or whatever it had happened, So they should think of a solution, the best way to carry on and earn money was working at home. The woman decided to bake cake and pastry at home for man to sell in town.
But all of a sudden there was a letter written by Dr R.M recently sent from his hospital
it's quiet unbelievable ; the woman said ; it was as a gift given to her because of her all attempts for handling their lives
There was written incredibly that he's gonna be ok due to a new medicine which was just discovered
They arranged a meeting with the doctor for the week after that and were both impatiently waiting for the promised day. The doctor had assured them of good results.
They went to bed early the night before. But when she got up the next morning, she was shocked not to see her beloved husband in his bed! She searched everywhere thoroughly but no trace. He was really missing....
Once upon a time ; there lived a beautiful young woman and a handsome young man ; they were very poor but as they were deeply in love they wanted to get married
But in a gloomy night, the poor boy was hit by a horse drawn carriage and missed both his legs!
although the girl became really sad about it ; and cried for two days long it didn't decrease her strong love ; she still had lots of hopes for their lives then was the time she realized that she must work harder to make a better life for her love and make him hopeful as well.
Poor young woman was working very hard to cover the expenses of their humble life. A week later, she suddenly realized that she was pregnant and could not work any more!c
It was a hard situation for both of them, It was destiny or whatever it had happened, So they should think of a solution, the best way to carry on and earn money was working at home. The woman decided to bake cake and pastry at home for man to sell in town.
But all of a sudden there was a letter written by Dr R.M recently sent from his hospital
it's quiet unbelievable ; the woman said ; it was as a gift given to her because of her all attempts for handling their lives
There was written incredibly that he's gonna be ok due to a new medicine which was just discovered
They arranged a meeting with the doctor for the week after that and were both impatiently waiting for the promised day. The doctor had assured them of good results.
They went to bed early the night before. But when she got up the next morning, she was shocked not to see her beloved husband in his bed! She searched everywhere thoroughly but no trace. He was really missing
....
She investigated everywhere. Finally she went to the basement of the house. Suddenly she screamed very loud in fear and began to cry. With a tear-stained face, she came near to the hanged body of her beloved husband and found a piece of paper in his cold hand. The paper read:c
Dear Samantha,
I know that we cannot afford the cost of
my treatment and I don't want to put you
in more trouble. You can have a fantastic
life without me and I hate to be so much
trouble.
So, Good Bye for ever!!
See you in the heaven.
Love,
Nicholas
Once upon a time ; there lived a beautiful young woman and a handsome young man ; they were very poor but as they were deeply in love they wanted to get married
But in a gloomy night, the poor boy was hit by a horse drawn carriage and missed both his legs!
although the girl became really sad about it ; and cried for two days long it didn't decrease her strong love ; she still had lots of hopes for their lives then was the time she realized that she must work harder to make a better life for her love and make him hopeful as well.
Poor young woman was working very hard to cover the expenses of their humble life. A week later, she suddenly realized that she was pregnant and could not work any more!c
It was a hard situation for both of them, It was destiny or whatever it had happened, So they should think of a solution, the best way to carry on and earn money was working at home. The woman decided to bake cake and pastry at home for man to sell in town.
But all of a sudden there was a letter written by Dr R.M recently sent from his hospital
it's quiet unbelievable ; the woman said ; it was as a gift given to her because of her all attempts for handling their lives
There was written incredibly that he's gonna be ok due to a new medicine which was just discovered
They arranged a meeting with the doctor for the week after that and were both impatiently waiting for the promised day. The doctor had assured them of good results.
They went to bed early the night before. But when she got up the next morning, she was shocked not to see her beloved husband in his bed! She searched everywhere thoroughly but no trace. He was really missing
....
She investigated everywhere. Finally she went to the basement of the house. Suddenly she screamed very loud in fear and began to cry. With a tear-stained face, she came near to the hanged body of her beloved husband and found a piece of paper in his cold hand. The paper read:c
Dear Samantha,
I know that we cannot afford the cost of
my treatment and I don't want to put you
in more trouble. You can have a fantastic
life without me and I hate to be so much
trouble.
So, Good Bye for ever!!
See you in the heaven.
Love,
Nicholas
Come on Amir! You finished the story :laughing:l
She investigated everywhere. Finally she went to the basement of the house. Suddenly she screamed very loud in fear and began to cry. With a tear-stained face, she came near to the hanged body of her beloved husband and found a piece of paper in his cold hand. The paper read:c
Dear Samantha,
I know that we cannot afford the cost of
my treatment and I don't want to put you
in more trouble. You can have a fantastic
life without me and I hate to be so much
trouble.
So, Good Bye for ever!!
See you in the heaven.
Love,
Nicholas
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Samantha sat and looked at her husband in a deep silence..... She just couldn't believe what she was seeing..... She couldn't even cry for his dead body...... After an hour she stood up and went to the kitchen..... She directly went to drawer then pulled it.... Picked up a knife....... Closed her eyes ..... but wasn't sure whether to do it or not...... Suddenly she remembered her baby.... Screamed and dropped the knife.....Then she fainted.....And burst into tears..... It was all she could do....... l
•*´• pegah •´*•
17-07-2007, 01:59
Come on Amir! You finished the story :laughing:l
She investigated everywhere. Finally she went to the basement of the house. Suddenly she screamed very loud in fear and began to cry. With a tear-stained face, she came near to the hanged body of her beloved husband and found a piece of paper in his cold hand. The paper read:c
Dear Samantha,
I know that we cannot afford the cost of
my treatment and I don't want to put you
in more trouble. You can have a fantastic
life without me and I hate to be so much
trouble.
So, Good Bye for ever!!
See you in the heaven.
Love,
Nicholas
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Samantha sat and looked at her husband in a deep silence..... She just couldn't believe what she was seeing..... She couldn't even cry for his dead body...... After an hour she stood up and went to the kitchen..... She directly went to drawer then pulled it.... Picked up a knife....... Closed her eyes ..... but wasn't sure whether to do it or not...... Suddenly she remembered her baby.... Screamed and dropped the knife.....Then she fainted.....And burst into tears..... It was all she could do....... l
she had made up her mind she had to fight because of the baby it was all her hope.she baked cakes again she tried to save each penny she earns .she was always thinking about her baby and her/his life.she wished to have a healthy baby but in the bottom of her heart she wanted a boy .finally that day arrived....
mohammad.clergyman
17-07-2007, 11:25
Once upon a time ; there lived a beautiful young woman and a handsome young man ; they were very poor but as they were deeply in love they wanted to get married
But in a gloomy night, the poor boy was hit by a horse drawn carriage and missed both his legs!
although the girl became really sad about it ; and cried for two days long it didn't decrease her strong love ; she still had lots of hopes for their lives then was the time she realized that she must work harder to make a better life for her love and make him hopeful as well.
Poor young woman was working very hard to cover the expenses of their humble life. A week later, she suddenly realized that she was pregnant and could not work any more!c
It was a hard situation for both of them, It was destiny or whatever it had happened, So they should think of a solution, the best way to carry on and earn money was working at home. The woman decided to bake cake and pastry at home for man to sell in town.
But all of a sudden there was a letter written by Dr R.M recently sent from his hospital
it's quiet unbelievable ; the woman said ; it was as a gift given to her because of her all attempts for handling their lives
There was written incredibly that he's gonna be ok due to a new medicine which was just discovered
They arranged a meeting with the doctor for the week after that and were both impatiently waiting for the promised day. The doctor had assured them of good results.
They went to bed early the night before. But when she got up the next morning, she was shocked not to see her beloved husband in his bed! She searched everywhere thoroughly but no trace. He was really missing
....
She investigated everywhere. Finally she went to the basement of the house. Suddenly she screamed very loud in fear and began to cry. With a tear-stained face, she came near to the hanged body of her beloved husband and found a piece of paper in his cold hand. The paper read:c
Dear Samantha,
I know that we cannot afford the cost of
my treatment and I don't want to put you
in more trouble. You can have a fantastic
life without me and I hate to be so much
trouble.
So, Good Bye for ever!!
See you in the heaven.
Love,
Nicholas
samanthasat looked at her husband in a deep silence..... She just couldn't believe what she was seeing..... She couldn't even cry for his dead body...... After an hour she stood up and went to the kitchen..... She directly went to drawer then pulled it.... Picked up a knife....... Closed her eyes ..... but wasn't sure whether to do it or not...... Suddenly she remembered her baby.... Screamed and dropped the knife.....Then she fainted.....And burst into tears..... It was all she could do....... l
she had made up her mind she had to fight because of the baby it was all her hope.she baked cakes again she tried to save each penny she earns .she was always thinking about her baby and her/his life.she wished to have a healthy baby but in the bottom of her heart she wanted a boy .finally that day arrived....
and now she was again pregnant of a baby but this time was quiet various hence she had many difficult circumstances ; her life now was the same as it was when her husband was disabled ; after all the baby was born ; fortunately the baby was a very handsome boy who was going to be as perfect as his blessed father ; so she went to a shopping center to buy some layette for her little bit but smart boy ; “can I help you” the clerk said ; and she looked at him ; for a non-defined time they were staring at each other’s faces ; and now another love story began …….
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Once upon a time ; there lived a beautiful young woman and a handsome young man ; they were very poor but as they were deeply in love they wanted to get married
But in a gloomy night, the poor boy was hit by a horse drawn carriage and missed both his legs!
although the girl became really sad about it ; and cried for two days long it didn't decrease her strong love ; she still had lots of hopes for their lives then was the time she realized that she must work harder to make a better life for her love and make him hopeful as well.
Poor young woman was working very hard to cover the expenses of their humble life. A week later, she suddenly realized that she was pregnant and could not work any more!c
It was a hard situation for both of them, It was destiny or whatever it had happened, So they should think of a solution, the best way to carry on and earn money was working at home. The woman decided to bake cake and pastry at home for man to sell in town.
But all of a sudden there was a letter written by Dr R.M recently sent from his hospital
it's quiet unbelievable ; the woman said ; it was as a gift given to her because of her all attempts for handling their lives
There was written incredibly that he's gonna be ok due to a new medicine which was just discovered
They arranged a meeting with the doctor for the week after that and were both impatiently waiting for the promised day. The doctor had assured them of good results.
They went to bed early the night before. But when she got up the next morning, she was shocked not to see her beloved husband in his bed! She searched everywhere thoroughly but no trace. He was really missing
....
She investigated everywhere. Finally she went to the basement of the house. Suddenly she screamed very loud in fear and began to cry. With a tear-stained face, she came near to the hanged body of her beloved husband and found a piece of paper in his cold hand. The paper read:c
Dear Samantha,
I know that we cannot afford the cost of
my treatment and I don't want to put you
in more trouble. You can have a fantastic
life without me and I hate to be so much
trouble.
So, Good Bye for ever!!
See you in the heaven.
Love,
Nicholas
Samantha sat and looked at her husband in a deep silence..... She just couldn't believe what she was seeing..... She couldn't even cry for his dead body...... After an hour she stood up and went to the kitchen..... She directly went to drawer then pulled it.... Picked up a knife....... Closed her eyes ..... but wasn't sure whether to do it or not...... Suddenly she remembered her baby.... Screamed and dropped the knife.....Then she fainted.....And burst into tears..... It was all she could do....... l
She had made up her mind she had to fight because of the baby it was all her hope.she baked cakes again she tried to save each penny she earns .she was always thinking about her baby and her/his life.she wished to have a healthy baby but in the bottom of her heart she wanted a boy .finally that day arrived.c
When her childbirth pain began, she was alone at home. No one was there to help her. Samantha did not know what to do. She fell on the ground because of pain. She crawled and reached the door, opened the door and shouted for help. Her neighbor heard her voice and called for doctor... c
The doctor came out of the room with a paled face. He said that the, The umbilical cord was wrapped around the fetus's neck and it was delivered dead
but mother is alive and healthy.c
A r c h i
17-07-2007, 12:19
what had happened here? which story should I follow?l
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mohammad.clergyman
17-07-2007, 12:31
Once upon a time ; there lived a beautiful young woman and a handsome young man ; they were very poor but as they were deeply in love they wanted to get married
But in a gloomy night, the poor boy was hit by a horse drawn carriage and missed both his legs!
although the girl became really sad about it ; and cried for two days long it didn't decrease her strong love ; she still had lots of hopes for their lives then was the time she realized that she must work harder to make a better life for her love and make him hopeful as well.
Poor young woman was working very hard to cover the expenses of their humble life. A week later, she suddenly realized that she was pregnant and could not work any more!c
It was a hard situation for both of them, It was destiny or whatever it had happened, So they should think of a solution, the best way to carry on and earn money was working at home. The woman decided to bake cake and pastry at home for man to sell in town.
But all of a sudden there was a letter written by Dr R.M recently sent from his hospital
it's quiet unbelievable ; the woman said ; it was as a gift given to her because of her all attempts for handling their lives
There was written incredibly that he's gonna be ok due to a new medicine which was just discovered
They arranged a meeting with the doctor for the week after that and were both impatiently waiting for the promised day. The doctor had assured them of good results.
They went to bed early the night before. But when she got up the next morning, she was shocked not to see her beloved husband in his bed! She searched everywhere thoroughly but no trace. He was really missing
....
She investigated everywhere. Finally she went to the basement of the house. Suddenly she screamed very loud in fear and began to cry. With a tear-stained face, she came near to the hanged body of her beloved husband and found a piece of paper in his cold hand. The paper read:c
Dear Samantha,
I know that we cannot afford the cost of
my treatment and I don't want to put you
in more trouble. You can have a fantastic
life without me and I hate to be so much
trouble.
So, Good Bye for ever!!
See you in the heaven.
Love,
Nicholas
Samantha sat and looked at her husband in a deep silence..... She just couldn't believe what she was seeing..... She couldn't even cry for his dead body...... After an hour she stood up and went to the kitchen..... She directly went to drawer then pulled it.... Picked up a knife....... Closed her eyes ..... but wasn't sure whether to do it or not...... Suddenly she remembered her baby.... Screamed and dropped the knife.....Then she fainted.....And burst into tears..... It was all she could do....... l
She had made up her mind she had to fight because of the baby it was all her hope.she baked cakes again she tried to save each penny she earns .she was always thinking about her baby and her/his life.she wished to have a healthy baby but in the bottom of her heart she wanted a boy .finally that day arrived.c
When her childbirth pain began, she was alone at home. No one was there to help her. Samantha did not know what to do. She fell on the ground because of pain. She crawled and reached the door, opened the door and shouted for help. Her neighbor heard her voice and called for doctor... c
The doctor came out of the room with a paled face. He said that the, The umbilical cord was wrapped around the fetus's neck and it was delivered dead
but mother is alive and healthy.c
it was very difficult for her tolerating this horrible life but as she was so faithful she decided to be patient till the life gets better ; indeed she knew that it’s gonna be ok !
and that dream came true when she fell in love while curing in hospital ; her love was in fact her nurse who was a very handsome man with silky eyes and good-looking body
what had happened here? which story should I follow?l
Hi honey now follow mine :40: :10:
A r c h i
17-07-2007, 12:47
Once upon a time ; there lived a beautiful young woman and a handsome young man ; they were very poor but as they were deeply in love they wanted to get married
But in a gloomy night, the poor boy was hit by a horse drawn carriage and missed both his legs!
although the girl became really sad about it ; and cried for two days long it didn't decrease her strong love ; she still had lots of hopes for their lives then was the time she realized that she must work harder to make a better life for her love and make him hopeful as well.
Poor young woman was working very hard to cover the expenses of their humble life. A week later, she suddenly realized that she was pregnant and could not work any more!c
It was a hard situation for both of them, It was destiny or whatever it had happened, So they should think of a solution, the best way to carry on and earn money was working at home. The woman decided to bake cake and pastry at home for man to sell in town.
But all of a sudden there was a letter written by Dr R.M recently sent from his hospital
it's quiet unbelievable ; the woman said ; it was as a gift given to her because of her all attempts for handling their lives
There was written incredibly that he's gonna be ok due to a new medicine which was just discovered
They arranged a meeting with the doctor for the week after that and were both impatiently waiting for the promised day. The doctor had assured them of good results.
They went to bed early the night before. But when she got up the next morning, she was shocked not to see her beloved husband in his bed! She searched everywhere thoroughly but no trace. He was really missing
....
She investigated everywhere. Finally she went to the basement of the house. Suddenly she screamed very loud in fear and began to cry. With a tear-stained face, she came near to the hanged body of her beloved husband and found a piece of paper in his cold hand. The paper read:c
Dear Samantha,
I know that we cannot afford the cost of
my treatment and I don't want to put you
in more trouble. You can have a fantastic
life without me and I hate to be so much
trouble.
So, Good Bye for ever!!
See you in the heaven.
Love,
Nicholas
Samantha sat and looked at her husband in a deep silence..... She just couldn't believe what she was seeing..... She couldn't even cry for his dead body...... After an hour she stood up and went to the kitchen..... She directly went to drawer then pulled it.... Picked up a knife....... Closed her eyes ..... but wasn't sure whether to do it or not...... Suddenly she remembered her baby.... Screamed and dropped the knife.....Then she fainted.....And burst into tears..... It was all she could do....... l
She had made up her mind she had to fight because of the baby it was all her hope.she baked cakes again she tried to save each penny she earns .she was always thinking about her baby and her/his life.she wished to have a healthy baby but in the bottom of her heart she wanted a boy .finally that day arrived.c
When her childbirth pain began, she was alone at home. No one was there to help her. Samantha did not know what to do. She fell on the ground because of pain. She crawled and reached the door, opened the door and shouted for help. Her neighbor heard her voice and called for doctor... c
The doctor came out of the room with a paled face. He said that the, The umbilical cord was wrapped around the fetus's neck and it was delivered dead
but mother is alive and healthy.c
it was very difficult for her tolerating this horrible life but as she was so faithful she decided to be patient till the life gets better ; indeed she knew that it’s gonna be ok !
and that dream came true when she fell in love while curing in hospital ; her love was in fact her nurse who was a very handsome man with silky eyes and good-looking body
"Wow, what a wonderful man " Samantha told herself when she first saw the nurse. But something was in her heart which reminds her of her beloved dead husband. The nurse came to her and they talked for hours. Samantha told him about her husband, child and everything had happened in her life.
Days goes on and Samantha deeply fell in love with the man. But as she expressed her feeling to him. He replied that he's a catholic Priest:18:. Samantha was thinking that He should have warned her before she fell in love with him. But How he should know her feelings ????l
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p.s .life of misery continues:27:l
Once upon a time ; there lived a beautiful young woman and a handsome young man ; they were very poor but as they were deeply in love they wanted to get married
But in a gloomy night, the poor boy was hit by a horse drawn carriage and missed both his legs!
although the girl became really sad about it ; and cried for two days long it didn't decrease her strong love ; she still had lots of hopes for their lives then was the time she realized that she must work harder to make a better life for her love and make him hopeful as well.
Poor young woman was working very hard to cover the expenses of their humble life. A week later, she suddenly realized that she was pregnant and could not work any more!c
It was a hard situation for both of them, It was destiny or whatever it had happened, So they should think of a solution, the best way to carry on and earn money was working at home. The woman decided to bake cake and pastry at home for man to sell in town.
But all of a sudden there was a letter written by Dr R.M recently sent from his hospital
it's quiet unbelievable ; the woman said ; it was as a gift given to her because of her all attempts for handling their lives
There was written incredibly that he's gonna be ok due to a new medicine which was just discovered
They arranged a meeting with the doctor for the week after that and were both impatiently waiting for the promised day. The doctor had assured them of good results.
They went to bed early the night before. But when she got up the next morning, she was shocked not to see her beloved husband in his bed! She searched everywhere thoroughly but no trace. He was really missing
....
She investigated everywhere. Finally she went to the basement of the house. Suddenly she screamed very loud in fear and began to cry. With a tear-stained face, she came near to the hanged body of her beloved husband and found a piece of paper in his cold hand. The paper read:c
Dear Samantha,
I know that we cannot afford the cost of
my treatment and I don't want to put you
in more trouble. You can have a fantastic
life without me and I hate to be so much
trouble.
So, Good Bye for ever!!
See you in the heaven.
Love,
Nicholas
Samantha sat and looked at her husband in a deep silence..... She just couldn't believe what she was seeing..... She couldn't even cry for his dead body...... After an hour she stood up and went to the kitchen..... She directly went to drawer then pulled it.... Picked up a knife....... Closed her eyes ..... but wasn't sure whether to do it or not...... Suddenly she remembered her baby.... Screamed and dropped the knife.....Then she fainted.....And burst into tears..... It was all she could do....... l
She had made up her mind she had to fight because of the baby it was all her hope.she baked cakes again she tried to save each penny she earns .she was always thinking about her baby and her/his life.she wished to have a healthy baby but in the bottom of her heart she wanted a boy .finally that day arrived.c
When her childbirth pain began, she was alone at home. No one was there to help her. Samantha did not know what to do. She fell on the ground because of pain. She crawled and reached the door, opened the door and shouted for help. Her neighbor heard her voice and called for doctor... c
The doctor came out of the room with a paled face. He said that the, The umbilical cord was wrapped around the fetus's neck and it was delivered dead
but mother is alive and healthy.c
it was very difficult for her tolerating this horrible life but as she was so faithful she decided to be patient till the life gets better ; indeed she knew that it’s gonna be ok !
and that dream came true when she fell in love while curing in hospital ; her love was in fact her nurse who was a very handsome man with silky eyes and good-looking body
"Wow, what a wonderful man " Samantha told herself when she first saw the nurse. But something was in her heart which reminds her of her beloved dead husband. The nurse came to her and they talked for hours. Samantha told him about her husband, child and everything had happened in her life.
Days goes on and Samantha deeply fell in love with the man. But as she expressed her feeling to him. He replied that he's a catholic Priest:18:. Samantha was thinking that He should have warned her before she fell in love with him. But How he should know her feelings ????l
Samantha came out of the hospital one week later. She completely forgot about that nurse. She started to look for a suitable career. One day, when she was walking in the neighborhood mall, she suddenly ran into one of her best and oldest friends who had gotton married with a very rich gentleman
mohammad.clergyman
18-07-2007, 10:17
Once upon a time ; there lived a beautiful young woman and a handsome young man ; they were very poor but as they were deeply in love they wanted to get married
But in a gloomy night, the poor boy was hit by a horse drawn carriage and missed both his legs!
although the girl became really sad about it ; and cried for two days long it didn't decrease her strong love ; she still had lots of hopes for their lives then was the time she realized that she must work harder to make a better life for her love and make him hopeful as well.
Poor young woman was working very hard to cover the expenses of their humble life. A week later, she suddenly realized that she was pregnant and could not work any more!c
It was a hard situation for both of them, It was destiny or whatever it had happened, So they should think of a solution, the best way to carry on and earn money was working at home. The woman decided to bake cake and pastry at home for man to sell in town.
But all of a sudden there was a letter written by Dr R.M recently sent from his hospital
it's quiet unbelievable ; the woman said ; it was as a gift given to her because of her all attempts for handling their lives
There was written incredibly that he's gonna be ok due to a new medicine which was just discovered
They arranged a meeting with the doctor for the week after that and were both impatiently waiting for the promised day. The doctor had assured them of good results.
They went to bed early the night before. But when she got up the next morning, she was shocked not to see her beloved husband in his bed! She searched everywhere thoroughly but no trace. He was really missing
....
She investigated everywhere. Finally she went to the basement of the house. Suddenly she screamed very loud in fear and began to cry. With a tear-stained face, she came near to the hanged body of her beloved husband and found a piece of paper in his cold hand. The paper read:c
Dear Samantha,
I know that we cannot afford the cost of
my treatment and I don't want to put you
in more trouble. You can have a fantastic
life without me and I hate to be so much
trouble.
So, Good Bye for ever!!
See you in the heaven.
Love,
Nicholas
Samantha sat and looked at her husband in a deep silence..... She just couldn't believe what she was seeing..... She couldn't even cry for his dead body...... After an hour she stood up and went to the kitchen..... She directly went to drawer then pulled it.... Picked up a knife....... Closed her eyes ..... but wasn't sure whether to do it or not...... Suddenly she remembered her baby.... Screamed and dropped the knife.....Then she fainted.....And burst into tears..... It was all she could do....... l
She had made up her mind she had to fight because of the baby it was all her hope.she baked cakes again she tried to save each penny she earns .she was always thinking about her baby and her/his life.she wished to have a healthy baby but in the bottom of her heart she wanted a boy .finally that day arrived.c
When her childbirth pain began, she was alone at home. No one was there to help her. Samantha did not know what to do. She fell on the ground because of pain. She crawled and reached the door, opened the door and shouted for help. Her neighbor heard her voice and called for doctor... c
The doctor came out of the room with a paled face. He said that the, The umbilical cord was wrapped around the fetus's neck and it was delivered dead
but mother is alive and healthy.c
it was very difficult for her tolerating this horrible life but as she was so faithful she decided to be patient till the life gets better ; indeed she knew that it’s gonna be ok !
and that dream came true when she fell in love while curing in hospital ; her love was in fact her nurse who was a very handsome man with silky eyes and good-looking body
"Wow, what a wonderful man " Samantha told herself when she first saw the nurse. But something was in her heart which reminds her of her beloved dead husband. The nurse came to her and they talked for hours. Samantha told him about her husband, child and everything had happened in her life.
Days goes on and Samantha deeply fell in love with the man. But as she expressed her feeling to him. He replied that he's a catholic Priest:18:. Samantha was thinking that He should have warned her before she fell in love with him. But How he should know her feelings ????l
Samantha came out of the hospital one week later. She completely forgot about that nurse. She started to look for a suitable career. One day, when she was walking in the neighborhood mall, she suddenly ran into one of her best and oldest friends who had gotton married with a very rich gentleman
they talked for an hour speaking about all of samantha's adventures and the events ; and also about good old days ; her friend who's name was sara decided to help her in getting a desirable and money-making career
A r c h i
18-07-2007, 11:30
Once upon a time ; there lived a beautiful young woman and a handsome young man ; they were very poor but as they were deeply in love they wanted to get married
But in a gloomy night, the poor boy was hit by a horse drawn carriage and missed both his legs!
although the girl became really sad about it ; and cried for two days long it didn't decrease her strong love ; she still had lots of hopes for their lives then was the time she realized that she must work harder to make a better life for her love and make him hopeful as well.
Poor young woman was working very hard to cover the expenses of their humble life. A week later, she suddenly realized that she was pregnant and could not work any more!c
It was a hard situation for both of them, It was destiny or whatever it had happened, So they should think of a solution, the best way to carry on and earn money was working at home. The woman decided to bake cake and pastry at home for man to sell in town.
But all of a sudden there was a letter written by Dr R.M recently sent from his hospital
it's quiet unbelievable ; the woman said ; it was as a gift given to her because of her all attempts for handling their lives
There was written incredibly that he's gonna be ok due to a new medicine which was just discovered
They arranged a meeting with the doctor for the week after that and were both impatiently waiting for the promised day. The doctor had assured them of good results.
They went to bed early the night before. But when she got up the next morning, she was shocked not to see her beloved husband in his bed! She searched everywhere thoroughly but no trace. He was really missing
....
She investigated everywhere. Finally she went to the basement of the house. Suddenly she screamed very loud in fear and began to cry. With a tear-stained face, she came near to the hanged body of her beloved husband and found a piece of paper in his cold hand. The paper read:c
Dear Samantha,
I know that we cannot afford the cost of
my treatment and I don't want to put you
in more trouble. You can have a fantastic
life without me and I hate to be so much
trouble.
So, Good Bye for ever!!
See you in the heaven.
Love,
Nicholas
Samantha sat and looked at her husband in a deep silence..... She just couldn't believe what she was seeing..... She couldn't even cry for his dead body...... After an hour she stood up and went to the kitchen..... She directly went to drawer then pulled it.... Picked up a knife....... Closed her eyes ..... but wasn't sure whether to do it or not...... Suddenly she remembered her baby.... Screamed and dropped the knife.....Then she fainted.....And burst into tears..... It was all she could do....... l
She had made up her mind she had to fight because of the baby it was all her hope.she baked cakes again she tried to save each penny she earns .she was always thinking about her baby and her/his life.she wished to have a healthy baby but in the bottom of her heart she wanted a boy .finally that day arrived.c
When her childbirth pain began, she was alone at home. No one was there to help her. Samantha did not know what to do. She fell on the ground because of pain. She crawled and reached the door, opened the door and shouted for help. Her neighbor heard her voice and called for doctor... c
The doctor came out of the room with a paled face. He said that the, The umbilical cord was wrapped around the fetus's neck and it was delivered dead
but mother is alive and healthy.c
it was very difficult for her tolerating this horrible life but as she was so faithful she decided to be patient till the life gets better ; indeed she knew that it’s gonna be ok !
and that dream came true when she fell in love while curing in hospital ; her love was in fact her nurse who was a very handsome man with silky eyes and good-looking body
"Wow, what a wonderful man " Samantha told herself when she first saw the nurse. But something was in her heart which reminds her of her beloved dead husband. The nurse came to her and they talked for hours. Samantha told him about her husband, child and everything had happened in her life.
Days goes on and Samantha deeply fell in love with the man. But as she expressed her feeling to him. He replied that he's a catholic Priest[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] Samantha was thinking that He should have warned her before she fell in love with him. But How he should know her feelings ????l
Samantha came out of the hospital one week later. She completely forgot about that nurse. She started to look for a suitable career. One day, when she was walking in the neighborhood mall, she suddenly ran into one of her best and oldest friends who had gotton married with a very rich gentleman
they talked for an hour speaking about all of samantha's adventures and the events ; and also about good old days ; her friend who's name was sara decided to help her in getting a desirable and money-making career
One day as Samantha was at home and doing her laundry, Some one rang the bell. Guess who was at the door? her friend Sarah was standing at the door smiling.She said Congratulation Samantha, My husband found a suitable and money making job for you. Samantha was so happy about her offer. They decided to go to the office the day after
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p.s. hey mohammad, what this means ..amir= my love:5:l
Once upon a time ; there lived a beautiful young woman and a handsome young man ; they were very poor but as they were deeply in love they wanted to get married
But in a gloomy night, the poor boy was hit by a horse drawn carriage and missed both his legs!
although the girl became really sad about it ; and cried for two days long it didn't decrease her strong love ; she still had lots of hopes for their lives then was the time she realized that she must work harder to make a better life for her love and make him hopeful as well.
Poor young woman was working very hard to cover the expenses of their humble life. A week later, she suddenly realized that she was pregnant and could not work any more!c
It was a hard situation for both of them, It was destiny or whatever it had happened, So they should think of a solution, the best way to carry on and earn money was working at home. The woman decided to bake cake and pastry at home for man to sell in town.
But all of a sudden there was a letter written by Dr R.M recently sent from his hospital
it's quiet unbelievable ; the woman said ; it was as a gift given to her because of her all attempts for handling their lives
There was written incredibly that he's gonna be ok due to a new medicine which was just discovered
They arranged a meeting with the doctor for the week after that and were both impatiently waiting for the promised day. The doctor had assured them of good results.
They went to bed early the night before. But when she got up the next morning, she was shocked not to see her beloved husband in his bed! She searched everywhere thoroughly but no trace. He was really missing
....
She investigated everywhere. Finally she went to the basement of the house. Suddenly she screamed very loud in fear and began to cry. With a tear-stained face, she came near to the hanged body of her beloved husband and found a piece of paper in his cold hand. The paper read:c
Dear Samantha,
I know that we cannot afford the cost of
my treatment and I don't want to put you
in more trouble. You can have a fantastic
life without me and I hate to be so much
trouble.
So, Good Bye for ever!!
See you in the heaven.
Love,
Nicholas
Samantha sat and looked at her husband in a deep silence..... She just couldn't believe what she was seeing..... She couldn't even cry for his dead body...... After an hour she stood up and went to the kitchen..... She directly went to drawer then pulled it.... Picked up a knife....... Closed her eyes ..... but wasn't sure whether to do it or not...... Suddenly she remembered her baby.... Screamed and dropped the knife.....Then she fainted.....And burst into tears..... It was all she could do....... l
She had made up her mind she had to fight because of the baby it was all her hope.she baked cakes again she tried to save each penny she earns .she was always thinking about her baby and her/his life.she wished to have a healthy baby but in the bottom of her heart she wanted a boy .finally that day arrived.c
When her childbirth pain began, she was alone at home. No one was there to help her. Samantha did not know what to do. She fell on the ground because of pain. She crawled and reached the door, opened the door and shouted for help. Her neighbor heard her voice and called for doctor... c
The doctor came out of the room with a paled face. He said that the, The umbilical cord was wrapped around the fetus's neck and it was delivered dead
but mother is alive and healthy.c
it was very difficult for her tolerating this horrible life but as she was so faithful she decided to be patient till the life gets better ; indeed she knew that it’s gonna be ok !
and that dream came true when she fell in love while curing in hospital ; her love was in fact her nurse who was a very handsome man with silky eyes and good-looking body
"Wow, what a wonderful man " Samantha told herself when she first saw the nurse. But something was in her heart which reminds her of her beloved dead husband. The nurse came to her and they talked for hours. Samantha told him about her husband, child and everything had happened in her life.
Days goes on and Samantha deeply fell in love with the man. But as she expressed her feeling to him. He replied that he's a catholic Priest[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] Samantha was thinking that He should have warned her before she fell in love with him. But How he should know her feelings ????l
Samantha came out of the hospital one week later. She completely forgot about that nurse. She started to look for a suitable career. One day, when she was walking in the neighborhood mall, she suddenly ran into one of her best and oldest friends who had gotton married with a very rich gentleman
they talked for an hour speaking about all of samantha's adventures and the events ; and also about good old days ; her friend who's name was sara decided to help her in getting a desirable and money-making career
One day as Samantha was at home and doing her laundry, Some one rang the bell. Guess who was at the door? her friend Sarah was standing at the door smiling.She said Congratulation Samantha, My husband found a suitable and money making job for you. Samantha was so happy about her offer. They decided to go to the office the day after
Mr. Clark, Sarah's husband, suggested that Samantha become his secretary with a wage of 400$ per week. "It's not very much," Samantha thought, "But it's better than nothing." She accepted that suggestion.
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Samantha
It was one week that Samantha had worked for Mr. Clark. She was not comfortable there at all. She always could feel his devilish glances on herself. One day, Mr. Clark summoned Samantha in his room. When she went in, she could see a wicked smile on his mouth. He went to the door and locked it from inside ...v
A r c h i
18-07-2007, 22:40
...............
Samantha sat and looked at her husband in a deep silence..... She just couldn't believe what she was seeing..... She couldn't even cry for his dead body...... After an hour she stood up and went to the kitchen..... She directly went to drawer then pulled it.... Picked up a knife....... Closed her eyes ..... but wasn't sure whether to do it or not...... Suddenly she remembered her baby.... Screamed and dropped the knife.....Then she fainted.....And burst into tears..... It was all she could do....... l
She had made up her mind she had to fight because of the baby it was all her hope.she baked cakes again she tried to save each penny she earns .she was always thinking about her baby and her/his life.she wished to have a healthy baby but in the bottom of her heart she wanted a boy .finally that day arrived.c
When her childbirth pain began, she was alone at home. No one was there to help her. Samantha did not know what to do. She fell on the ground because of pain. She crawled and reached the door, opened the door and shouted for help. Her neighbor heard her voice and called for doctor... c
The doctor came out of the room with a paled face. He said that the, The umbilical cord was wrapped around the fetus's neck and it was delivered dead
but mother is alive and healthy.c
it was very difficult for her tolerating this horrible life but as she was so faithful she decided to be patient till the life gets better ; indeed she knew that it’s gonna be ok !
and that dream came true when she fell in love while curing in hospital ; her love was in fact her nurse who was a very handsome man with silky eyes and good-looking body
"Wow, what a wonderful man " Samantha told herself when she first saw the nurse. But something was in her heart which reminds her of her beloved dead husband. The nurse came to her and they talked for hours. Samantha told him about her husband, child and everything had happened in her life.
Days goes on and Samantha deeply fell in love with the man. But as she expressed her feeling to him. He replied that he's a catholic Priest[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] Samantha was thinking that He should have warned her before she fell in love with him. But How he should know her feelings ????l
Samantha came out of the hospital one week later. She completely forgot about that nurse. She started to look for a suitable career. One day, when she was walking in the neighborhood mall, she suddenly ran into one of her best and oldest friends who had gotton married with a very rich gentleman
they talked for an hour speaking about all of samantha's adventures and the events ; and also about good old days ; her friend who's name was sara decided to help her in getting a desirable and money-making career
One day as Samantha was at home and doing her laundry, Some one rang the bell. Guess who was at the door? her friend Sarah was standing at the door smiling.She said Congratulation Samantha, My husband found a suitable and money making job for you. Samantha was so happy about her offer. They decided to go to the office the day after
Mr. Clark, Sarah's husband, suggested that Samantha become his secretary with a wage of 400$ per week. "It's not very much," Samantha thought, "But it's better than nothing." She accepted that suggestion.
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Samantha
It was one week that Samantha had worked for Mr. Clark. She was not comfortable there at all. She always could feel his devilish glances on herself. One day, Mr. Clark summoned Samantha in his room. When she went in, she could see a wicked smile on his mouth. He went to the door and locked it from inside ...v
She tried to be optimistic . She told herself" He has nothing to do with me" " it's just about my work" , But Mr Clark came beside her, hold her hands and wanted to grab a kiss from her lips. She went a step backward, "what are you doing?" . "Nothing", mr Clark replied " I just wanted to have fun with a very young and beautiful lady..come on don't you wanna join me" he continued. As Samantha was leaving the room replied that she's not here for this.She just wanted to work.
Samantha left the office crying.Thinking of what she can do next. She suddenly decided to leave the city to exprience a new life. May be she could find what she wants in another part of the world
...............
Samantha sat and looked at her husband in a deep silence..... She just couldn't believe what she was seeing..... She couldn't even cry for his dead body...... After an hour she stood up and went to the kitchen..... She directly went to drawer then pulled it.... Picked up a knife....... Closed her eyes ..... but wasn't sure whether to do it or not...... Suddenly she remembered her baby.... Screamed and dropped the knife.....Then she fainted.....And burst into tears..... It was all she could do....... l
She had made up her mind she had to fight because of the baby it was all her hope.she baked cakes again she tried to save each penny she earns .she was always thinking about her baby and her/his life.she wished to have a healthy baby but in the bottom of her heart she wanted a boy .finally that day arrived.c
When her childbirth pain began, she was alone at home. No one was there to help her. Samantha did not know what to do. She fell on the ground because of pain. She crawled and reached the door, opened the door and shouted for help. Her neighbor heard her voice and called for doctor... c
The doctor came out of the room with a paled face. He said that the, The umbilical cord was wrapped around the fetus's neck and it was delivered dead
but mother is alive and healthy.c
it was very difficult for her tolerating this horrible life but as she was so faithful she decided to be patient till the life gets better ; indeed she knew that it’s gonna be ok !
and that dream came true when she fell in love while curing in hospital ; her love was in fact her nurse who was a very handsome man with silky eyes and good-looking body
"Wow, what a wonderful man " Samantha told herself when she first saw the nurse. But something was in her heart which reminds her of her beloved dead husband. The nurse came to her and they talked for hours. Samantha told him about her husband, child and everything had happened in her life.
Days goes on and Samantha deeply fell in love with the man. But as she expressed her feeling to him. He replied that he's a catholic Priest[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] Samantha was thinking that He should have warned her before she fell in love with him. But How he should know her feelings ????l
Samantha came out of the hospital one week later. She completely forgot about that nurse. She started to look for a suitable career. One day, when she was walking in the neighborhood mall, she suddenly ran into one of her best and oldest friends who had gotton married with a very rich gentleman
they talked for an hour speaking about all of samantha's adventures and the events ; and also about good old days ; her friend who's name was sara decided to help her in getting a desirable and money-making career
One day as Samantha was at home and doing her laundry, Some one rang the bell. Guess who was at the door? her friend Sarah was standing at the door smiling.She said Congratulation Samantha, My husband found a suitable and money making job for you. Samantha was so happy about her offer. They decided to go to the office the day after
Mr. Clark, Sarah's husband, suggested that Samantha become his secretary with a wage of 400$ per week. "It's not very much," Samantha thought, "But it's better than nothing." She accepted that suggestion.
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Samantha
It was one week that Samantha had worked for Mr. Clark. She was not comfortable there at all. She always could feel his devilish glances on herself. One day, Mr. Clark summoned Samantha in his room. When she went in, she could see a wicked smile on his mouth. He went to the door and locked it from inside ...v
She tried to be optimistic . She told herself" He has nothing to do with me" " it's just about my work" , But Mr Clark came beside her, hold her hands and wanted to grab a kiss from her lips. She went a step backward, "what are you doing?" . "Nothing", mr Clark replied " I just wanted to have fun with a very young and beautiful lady..come on don't you wanna join me" he continued. As Samantha was leaving the room replied that she's not here for this.She just wanted to work.
Samantha left the office crying.Thinking of what she can do next. She suddenly decided to leave the city to exprience a new life. May be she could find what she wants in another part of the world
Samantha went home and took the world map to decide to go to another country! While she was looking for a good country for imigration, all of a sudden, a country's name drew her atention.
IRAN!!!!!
Yes, she had made up her mind. She was determined to pass the rest of her life in Iran!c
mohammad.clergyman
18-07-2007, 23:56
...............
Samantha sat and looked at her husband in a deep silence..... She just couldn't believe what she was seeing..... She couldn't even cry for his dead body...... After an hour she stood up and went to the kitchen..... She directly went to drawer then pulled it.... Picked up a knife....... Closed her eyes ..... but wasn't sure whether to do it or not...... Suddenly she remembered her baby.... Screamed and dropped the knife.....Then she fainted.....And burst into tears..... It was all she could do....... l
She had made up her mind she had to fight because of the baby it was all her hope.she baked cakes again she tried to save each penny she earns .she was always thinking about her baby and her/his life.she wished to have a healthy baby but in the bottom of her heart she wanted a boy .finally that day arrived.c
When her childbirth pain began, she was alone at home. No one was there to help her. Samantha did not know what to do. She fell on the ground because of pain. She crawled and reached the door, opened the door and shouted for help. Her neighbor heard her voice and called for doctor... c
The doctor came out of the room with a paled face. He said that the, The umbilical cord was wrapped around the fetus's neck and it was delivered dead
but mother is alive and healthy.c
it was very difficult for her tolerating this horrible life but as she was so faithful she decided to be patient till the life gets better ; indeed she knew that it’s gonna be ok !
and that dream came true when she fell in love while curing in hospital ; her love was in fact her nurse who was a very handsome man with silky eyes and good-looking body
"Wow, what a wonderful man " Samantha told herself when she first saw the nurse. But something was in her heart which reminds her of her beloved dead husband. The nurse came to her and they talked for hours. Samantha told him about her husband, child and everything had happened in her life.
Days goes on and Samantha deeply fell in love with the man. But as she expressed her feeling to him. He replied that he's a catholic Priest[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] Samantha was thinking that He should have warned her before she fell in love with him. But How he should know her feelings ????l
Samantha came out of the hospital one week later. She completely forgot about that nurse. She started to look for a suitable career. One day, when she was walking in the neighborhood mall, she suddenly ran into one of her best and oldest friends who had gotton married with a very rich gentleman
they talked for an hour speaking about all of samantha's adventures and the events ; and also about good old days ; her friend who's name was sara decided to help her in getting a desirable and money-making career
One day as Samantha was at home and doing her laundry, Some one rang the bell. Guess who was at the door? her friend Sarah was standing at the door smiling.She said Congratulation Samantha, My husband found a suitable and money making job for you. Samantha was so happy about her offer. They decided to go to the office the day after
Mr. Clark, Sarah's husband, suggested that Samantha become his secretary with a wage of 400$ per week. "It's not very much," Samantha thought, "But it's better than nothing." She accepted that suggestion.
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Samantha
It was one week that Samantha had worked for Mr. Clark. She was not comfortable there at all. She always could feel his devilish glances on herself. One day, Mr. Clark summoned Samantha in his room. When she went in, she could see a wicked smile on his mouth. He went to the door and locked it from inside ...v
She tried to be optimistic . She told herself" He has nothing to do with me" " it's just about my work" , But Mr Clark came beside her, hold her hands and wanted to grab a kiss from her lips. She went a step backward, "what are you doing?" . "Nothing", mr Clark replied " I just wanted to have fun with a very young and beautiful lady..come on don't you wanna join me" he continued. As Samantha was leaving the room replied that she's not here for this.She just wanted to work.
Samantha left the office crying.Thinking of what she can do next. She suddenly decided to leave the city to exprience a new life. May be she could find what she wants in another part of the world
Samantha went home and took the world map to decide to go to another country! While she was looking for a good country for imigration, all of a sudden, a country's name drew her atention.
IRAN!!!!!
Yes, she had made up her mind. She was determined to pass the rest of her life in Iran!c
at first she tried to get as much information as possible about the Iranian people and their lifestyles and traditions ; the Iranian history, high civilisation and ancient monuments made her more eager to give it a try
that can be a peaceful and ideal Place to live in she thought while preparing to going to airport ; the departure set out on the next day then after less than ten hours she arrived at the Imam Khomeini International airport
A r c h i
19-07-2007, 00:04
...............
Samantha sat and looked at her husband in a deep silence..... She just couldn't believe what she was seeing..... She couldn't even cry for his dead body...... After an hour she stood up and went to the kitchen..... She directly went to drawer then pulled it.... Picked up a knife....... Closed her eyes ..... but wasn't sure whether to do it or not...... Suddenly she remembered her baby.... Screamed and dropped the knife.....Then she fainted.....And burst into tears..... It was all she could do....... l
She had made up her mind she had to fight because of the baby it was all her hope.she baked cakes again she tried to save each penny she earns .she was always thinking about her baby and her/his life.she wished to have a healthy baby but in the bottom of her heart she wanted a boy .finally that day arrived.c
When her childbirth pain began, she was alone at home. No one was there to help her. Samantha did not know what to do. She fell on the ground because of pain. She crawled and reached the door, opened the door and shouted for help. Her neighbor heard her voice and called for doctor... c
The doctor came out of the room with a paled face. He said that the, The umbilical cord was wrapped around the fetus's neck and it was delivered dead
but mother is alive and healthy.c
it was very difficult for her tolerating this horrible life but as she was so faithful she decided to be patient till the life gets better ; indeed she knew that it’s gonna be ok !
and that dream came true when she fell in love while curing in hospital ; her love was in fact her nurse who was a very handsome man with silky eyes and good-looking body
"Wow, what a wonderful man " Samantha told herself when she first saw the nurse. But something was in her heart which reminds her of her beloved dead husband. The nurse came to her and they talked for hours. Samantha told him about her husband, child and everything had happened in her life.
Days goes on and Samantha deeply fell in love with the man. But as she expressed her feeling to him. He replied that he's a catholic Priest[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] Samantha was thinking that He should have warned her before she fell in love with him. But How he should know her feelings ????l
Samantha came out of the hospital one week later. She completely forgot about that nurse. She started to look for a suitable career. One day, when she was walking in the neighborhood mall, she suddenly ran into one of her best and oldest friends who had gotton married with a very rich gentleman
they talked for an hour speaking about all of samantha's adventures and the events ; and also about good old days ; her friend who's name was sara decided to help her in getting a desirable and money-making career
One day as Samantha was at home and doing her laundry, Some one rang the bell. Guess who was at the door? her friend Sarah was standing at the door smiling.She said Congratulation Samantha, My husband found a suitable and money making job for you. Samantha was so happy about her offer. They decided to go to the office the day after
Mr. Clark, Sarah's husband, suggested that Samantha become his secretary with a wage of 400$ per week. "It's not very much," Samantha thought, "But it's better than nothing." She accepted that suggestion.
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Samantha
It was one week that Samantha had worked for Mr. Clark. She was not comfortable there at all. She always could feel his devilish glances on herself. One day, Mr. Clark summoned Samantha in his room. When she went in, she could see a wicked smile on his mouth. He went to the door and locked it from inside ...v
She tried to be optimistic . She told herself" He has nothing to do with me" " it's just about my work" , But Mr Clark came beside her, hold her hands and wanted to grab a kiss from her lips. She went a step backward, "what are you doing?" . "Nothing", mr Clark replied " I just wanted to have fun with a very young and beautiful lady..come on don't you wanna join me" he continued. As Samantha was leaving the room replied that she's not here for this.She just wanted to work.
Samantha left the office crying.Thinking of what she can do next. She suddenly decided to leave the city to exprience a new life. May be she could find what she wants in another part of the world
Samantha went home and took the world map to decide to go to another country! While she was looking for a good country for imigration, all of a sudden, a country's name drew her atention.
IRAN!!!!!
Yes, she had made up her mind. She was determined to pass the rest of her life in Iran!c
at first she tried to get as much information as possible about the Iranian people and their lifestyles and traditions ; the Iranian history and high civilisation and ancient monuments made her more eager to give it a try
that can be a peaceful and ideal Place to live in she thought while preparing to going to airport ; the departure set out on the next day then after less than ten hours he arrived at the Imam Khomeini International airport
She was in airport, and was looking for someone who can speak English. "Excuse me Sir, can you speak English" She asked from a young man. "Of course, what's up? " . Samantha was looking for one of her bags. The man helped her to find it. "Anyway my name is @mir, what's yr name?" the man asked samantha.:27:l
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Samantha
sat and looked at her husband in a deep silence..... She just couldn't believe what she was seeing..... She couldn't even cry for his dead body...... After an hour she stood up and went to the kitchen..... She directly went to drawer then pulled it.... Picked up a knife....... Closed her eyes ..... but wasn't sure whether to do it or not...... Suddenly she remembered her baby.... Screamed and dropped the knife.....Then she fainted.....And burst into tears..... It was all she could do....... l
She had made up her mind she had to fight because of the baby it was all her hope.she baked cakes again she tried to save each penny she earns .she was always thinking about her baby and her/his life.she wished to have a healthy baby but in the bottom of her heart she wanted a boy .finally that day arrived.c
When her childbirth pain began, she was alone at home. No one was there to help her. Samantha did not know what to do. She fell on the ground because of pain. She crawled and reached the door, opened the door and shouted for help. Her neighbor heard her voice and called for doctor... c
The doctor came out of the room with a paled face. He said that the, The umbilical cord was wrapped around the fetus's neck and it was delivered dead
but mother is alive and healthy.c
it was very difficult for her tolerating this horrible life but as she was so faithful she decided to be patient till the life gets better ; indeed she knew that it’s gonna be ok !
and that dream came true when she fell in love while curing in hospital ; her love was in fact her nurse who was a very handsome man with silky eyes and good-looking body
"Wow, what a wonderful man " Samantha told herself when she first saw the nurse. But something was in her heart which reminds her of her beloved dead husband. The nurse came to her and they talked for hours. Samantha told him about her husband, child and everything had happened in her life.
Days goes on and Samantha deeply fell in love with the man. But as she expressed her feeling to him. He replied that he's a catholic Priest[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] Samantha was thinking that He should have warned her before she fell in love with him. But How he should know her feelings ????l
Samantha came out of the hospital one week later. She completely forgot about that nurse. She started to look for a suitable career. One day, when she was walking in the neighborhood mall, she suddenly ran into one of her best and oldest friends who had gotton married with a very rich gentleman
they talked for an hour speaking about all of samantha's adventures and the events ; and also about good old days ; her friend who's name was sara decided to help her in getting a desirable and money-making career
One day as Samantha was at home and doing her laundry, Some one rang the bell. Guess who was at the door? her friend Sarah was standing at the door smiling.She said Congratulation Samantha, My husband found a suitable and money making job for you. Samantha was so happy about her offer. They decided to go to the office the day after
Mr. Clark, Sarah's husband, suggested that Samantha become his secretary with a wage of 400$ per week. "It's not very much," Samantha thought, "But it's better than nothing." She accepted that suggestion.
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Samantha
It was one week that Samantha had worked for Mr. Clark. She was not comfortable there at all. She always could feel his devilish glances on herself. One day, Mr. Clark summoned Samantha in his room. When she went in, she could see a wicked smile on his mouth. He went to the door and locked it from inside ...v
She tried to be optimistic . She told herself" He has nothing to do with me" " it's just about my work" , But Mr Clark came beside her, hold her hands and wanted to grab a kiss from her lips. She went a step backward, "what are you doing?" . "Nothing", mr Clark replied " I just wanted to have fun with a very young and beautiful lady..come on don't you wanna join me" he continued. As Samantha was leaving the room replied that she's not here for this.She just wanted to work.
Samantha left the office crying.Thinking of what she can do next. She suddenly decided to leave the city to exprience a new life. May be she could find what she wants in another part of the world
Samantha went home and took the world map to decide to go to another country! While she was looking for a good country for imigration, all of a sudden, a country's name drew her atention.
IRAN!!!!!
Yes, she had made up her mind. She was determined to pass the rest of her life in Iran!c
at first she tried to get as much information as possible about the Iranian people and their lifestyles and traditions ; the Iranian history and high civilisation and ancient monuments made her more eager to give it a try
that can be a peaceful and ideal Place to live in she thought while preparing to going to airport ; the departure set out on the next day then after less than ten hours he arrived at the Imam Khomeini International airport
She was in airport, and was looking for someone who can speak English. "Excuse me Sir, can you speak English" She asked from a young man. "Of course, what's up? " . Samantha was looking for one of her bags. The man helped her to find it. "Anyway my name is @mir, what's yr name?" the man asked samantha.:27:l
@mir was very curious to know that why an American girl had come to Iran. Thus, asked her about her journey. Samantha told her strory with lots of sighs and tears. @mir was overwhelmed with the story of this young, beautiful and also miserable girl. He felt something in the deepest parts of his heart. Yes ... he had fallen in love with Samantha. @mir proposed Samantha to get married with each other with no hesitation. Since he was a handsome, kind and lovely boy, Samantha accepted his proposal right at once.
But there was a problem. @mir was Muslim and Samantha was Christian. @mir was not sure if they can get married or not. So he decided to visit one of his friends who lived in Qom and ask him. So they set out on their way to Qom to meet Mohammad.Clergyman
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But there was a problem. @mir was Muslim and Samantha was Christian. @mir was not sure if they can get married or not. So he decided to visit one of his friends who lived in Qom and ask him. So they set out on their way to Qom to meet Mohammad.Clergyman......
Amintnt Continues
Samantha and Amir were in Qom........ Amir was thinking how to find Mohammad..... He brought his cell phone out and called Mohammad's number......After a while " Hi Amir......... How are you buddy?I didn't really expect you to call !"........ As Mohammad was talking Amir interrupted him : "Mohammad, I don't have much time....... Where can I see you?" ......Mohammad gave his address...... Samantha and Amir took a taxi and went there....... Mohammad wondered who the girl could be! Amir introduced Samantha and Mohammad to each other......Samantha was going to shook hand with Mohammad...... But Mohammad refused and just said hello! It was clear in Samantha's face that she was annoyed....... Amir told all the story........ And waited for Mohammad to reply.......
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Such an exciting story :laughing:l
mohammad.clergyman
19-07-2007, 13:28
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But there was a problem. @mir was Muslim and Samantha was Christian. @mir was not sure if they can get married or not. So he decided to visit one of his friends who lived in Qom and ask him. So they set out on their way to Qom to meet Mohammad.Clergyman......
Samantha and Amir were in Qom........ Amir was thinking how to find Mohammad..... He brought his cell phone out and called Mohammad's number......After a while " Hi Amir......... How are you buddy?I didn't really expect you to call !"........ As Mohammad was talking Amir interrupted him : "Mohammad, I don't have much time....... Where can I see you?" ......Mohammad gave his address...... Samantha and Amir took a taxi and went there....... Mohammad wondered who the girl could be! Amir introduced Samantha and Mohammad to each other......Samantha was going to shook hand with Mohammad...... But Mohammad refused and just said hello! It was clear in Samantha's face that she was annoyed....... Amir told all the story........ And waited for Mohammad to reply.......
Mohammad was an intelligent boy with a deep interest in Islamic religion who was married with an American girl called “archi” and they had lovely twin sons . his English was perfect ; since he had been to the US for many years .
They had lunch with his family . archi and Samantha got familiar soon and she told her about all Islamic traditions and regulations then was the time that she got obsessed with Islamic religion
A r c h i
19-07-2007, 16:35
But there was a problem. @mir was Muslim and Samantha was Christian. @mir was not sure if they can get married or not. So he decided to visit one of his friends who lived in Qom and ask him. So they set out on their way to Qom to meet Mohammad.Clergyman......
Samantha and Amir were in Qom........ Amir was thinking how to find Mohammad..... He brought his cell phone out and called Mohammad's number......After a while " Hi Amir......... How are you buddy?I didn't really expect you to call !"........ As Mohammad was talking Amir interrupted him : "Mohammad, I don't have much time....... Where can I see you?" ......Mohammad gave his address...... Samantha and Amir took a taxi and went there....... Mohammad wondered who the girl could be! Amir introduced Samantha and Mohammad to each other......Samantha was going to shook hand with Mohammad...... But Mohammad refused and just said hello! It was clear in Samantha's face that she was annoyed....... Amir told all the story........ And waited for Mohammad to reply.......
Mohammad was an intelligent boy with a deep interest in Islamic religion who was married with an American girl called “archi” and they had lovely twin sons . his English was perfect ; since he had been to the US for many years .
They had lunch with his family . Archi and Samantha got familiar soon and she told her about all Islamic traditions and regulations then was the time that she got obsessed with Islamic religion
As archi was a very wise woman she tried to show Samantha what Islam really was and how it is right now. She read some parts of the holy book Quran for her and translated to English. Samantha liked Islam but it was so hard to change her life like this.The rules were unfamiliar and so different from Christianity . Archi introduced her some books for further information and told her to feel free to ask any question any time. Every one decided to let Samantha think and decide her self.
Meanwhile, Mohammad and Archi let Samantha to live in their house to get more familiar with Iran, it's culture and the people.
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p.s. I can't stop laughing :39::39::39::39::39::39::39:l
p.s.2. amin what a mistake u've made:
Samantha was going to shook hand with Mohammad
---> to shake hands
p.s.2. amin what a mistake u've made:
Samantha was going to shook hand with Mohammad
---> to shake handsSorry! I changed every verb into past tense :blush: I think I didn't read the whole sentence! Anyway, thanks for your notice! :happy: I try to be more careful :happy:l
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As archi was a very wise woman she tried to show Samantha what Islam really was and how it is right now. She read some parts of the holy book Quran for her and translated to English. Samantha liked Islam but it was so hard to change her life like this.The rules were unfamiliar and so different from Christianity . Archi introduced her some books for further information and told her to feel free to ask any question any time. Every one decided to let Samantha think and decide her self.
Meanwhile, Mohammad and Archi let Samantha to live in their house to get more familiar with Iran, it's culture and the people
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Amintnt
She read about Islam....... Asked Archi the vague questions she encountered..... it was about one week that she's been wondering to gravitate Islam..... Then she decided...... She just couldn't accept to be a muslim person since she couldn't get used to it.... Then she told her friends what she had decided to do....... Mohammad couldn't believe what Samantha was saying..... But he didn't say anything as he knew "Dar din HICH Ejbari nist":31: [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
@mir was the one confused.... So how could they get married? Back to the first square!...... All that night @mir was awake and was thinking how to solve the problem...... Tomorrow morning, they were having breakfast in silence..... "I'm going to gravitate Christion religion!" Amir said....... Eveybody stopped eating and looked at him..... Mohammad cried and left the kitchen......
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P.s...... Is it just an imaginary story? :laughing::laughing:l
Amintnt destroyed everything!!c
Amintnt destroyed everything!!c
I'm sorry :blush:I just changed the story! :sad: let's Continue Archi-Girl's :happy:.... I won't let you marry Samantha :tongue:l!
mohammad.clergyman
19-07-2007, 20:16
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As archi was a very wise woman she tried to show Samantha what Islam really was and how it is right now. She read some parts of the holy book Quran for her and translated to English. Samantha liked Islam but it was so hard to change her life like this.The rules were unfamiliar and so different from Christianity . Archi introduced her some books for further information and told her to feel free to ask any question any time.Every one decided to let Samantha think and decide her self.
Meanwhile, Mohammad and Archi let Samantha to live in their house to get more familiar with Iran, it's culture and the peopleShe
she read about Islam....... Asked Archi the vague questions she encountered..... it was about one week that she's been wondering to gravitate Islam..... Then she decided...... She just couldn't accept to be a muslim person since she couldn't get used to it.... Then she told her friends what she had decided to do....... Mohammad couldn't believe what Samantha was saying..... But he didn't say anything as he knew "Dar din Ejbari nist":31:
@mir was the one confused.... So how could they get married? Back to the first square!...... All that night @mir was awake and was thinking how to solve the problem...... Tomorrow morning, they were having breakfast in silence..... "I'm going to gravitate Christion religion!" Amir said....... Eveybody stopped eating and looked at him..... Mohammad cried and left the kitchen......
samantha was just staring at this terrible event she hadn’t expect such this as a matter of fact …. amir then went directly toward Mohammad and said : I’m sorry I know that I just made a foolish decision .... see ; how love impressed you dear ; it’s not logical at all to change your religion and become apostate ; after all if you do so you’ll be killed “ Mohammad said while his face was red of fear and nervous .
now it was noon ; all the family and guests gathered in the kitchen to have lunch and probably to reach at decision ; then Mohammad destroyed the deep silence with his attractive smile and said : “here we are “; suddenly samantha exploded into tears
and said “ I’m sorry … I’m really sorry … I don’t know how I can explain that .” ;
then archi calmly said : “ dear we are patient enough to listen to any kind of unexpected matter”
:Then samantha said
“oh well … I want you to excuse me ; I just wanted to test him if he really loves me ";
But .. I hadn’t expect that situation … indeed after my investigation I’ve got understand that islam is the best religion so I want to accept it as my religion “
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oh .. i took me one hour
mohammad.clergyman
19-07-2007, 21:30
wrong post !
c
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As archi was a very wise woman she tried to show Samantha what Islam really was and how it is right now. She read some parts of the holy book Quran for her and translated to English. Samantha liked Islam but it was so hard to change her life like this.The rules were unfamiliar and so different from Christianity . Archi introduced her some books for further information and told her to feel free to ask any question any time.Every one decided to let Samantha think and decide her self.
Meanwhile, Mohammad and Archi let Samantha to live in their house to get more familiar with Iran, it's culture and the peopleShe
she read about Islam....... Asked Archi the vague questions she encountered..... it was about one week that she's been wondering to gravitate Islam..... Then she decided...... She just couldn't accept to be a muslim person since she couldn't get used to it.... Then she told her friends what she had decided to do....... Mohammad couldn't believe what Samantha was saying..... But he didn't say anything as he knew "Dar din Ejbari nist":31:
@mir was the one confused.... So how could they get married? Back to the first square!...... All that night @mir was awake and was thinking how to solve the problem...... Tomorrow morning, they were having breakfast in silence..... "I'm going to gravitate Christion religion!" Amir said....... Eveybody stopped eating and looked at him..... Mohammad cried and left the kitchen......
samantha was just staring at this terrible event she hadn’t expect such this as a matter of fact …. amir then went directly toward Mohammad and said : I’m sorry I know that I just made a foolish decision .... see ; how love impressed you dear ; it’s not logical at all to change your religion and become apostate ; after all if you do so you’ll be killed “ Mohammad said while his face was red of fear and nervous .
now it was noon ; all the family and guests gathered in the kitchen to have lunch and probably to reach at decision ; then Mohammad destroyed the deep silence with his attractive smile and said : “here we are “; suddenly samantha exploded into tears
and said “ I’m sorry … I’m really sorry … I don’t know how I can explain that .” ;
then archi calmly said : “ dear we are patient enough to listen to any kind of unexpected matter”
:Then samantha said
“oh well … I want you to excuse me ; I just wanted to test him if he really loves me ";
But .. I hadn’t expect that situation … indeed after my investigation I’ve got understand that islam is the best religion so I want to accept it as my religion “
At last, Samantha converted to Islam consensually and eagerly. @mir suggested her to change her name to an Islamic one. They agreed on "Maryam". There was not any other obstacle before @mir and Maryam to get married. Thus, they wanted to celebrate their wedding as soon as possible. @mir and Maryam wanted their wedding ceremony to be a unisex party, but Mahommad was against this idea. He said that a unisex party is full of sin and this irritates God
A r c h i
20-07-2007, 00:14
As archi was a very wise woman she tried to show Samantha what Islam really was and how it is right now. She read some parts of the holy book Quran for her and translated to English. Samantha liked Islam but it was so hard to change her life like this.The rules were unfamiliar and so different from Christianity . Archi introduced her some books for further information and told her to feel free to ask any question any time.Every one decided to let Samantha think and decide her self.
Meanwhile, Mohammad and Archi let Samantha to live in their house to get more familiar with Iran, it's culture and the peopleShe
she read about Islam....... Asked Archi the vague questions she encountered..... it was about one week that she's been wondering to gravitate Islam..... Then she decided...... She just couldn't accept to be a muslim person since she couldn't get used to it.... Then she told her friends what she had decided to do....... Mohammad couldn't believe what Samantha was saying..... But he didn't say anything as he knew "Dar din Ejbari nist"[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
@mir was the one confused.... So how could they get married? Back to the first square!...... All that night @mir was awake and was thinking how to solve the problem...... Tomorrow morning, they were having breakfast in silence..... "I'm going to gravitate Christion religion!" Amir said....... Eveybody stopped eating and looked at him..... Mohammad cried and left the kitchen......
samantha was just staring at this terrible event she hadn’t expect such this as a matter of fact …. amir then went directly toward Mohammad and said : I’m sorry I know that I just made a foolish decision .... see ; how love impressed you dear ; it’s not logical at all to change your religion and become apostate ; after all if you do so you’ll be killed “ Mohammad said while his face was red of fear and nervous .
now it was noon ; all the family and guests gathered in the kitchen to have lunch and probably to reach at decision ; then Mohammad destroyed the deep silence with his attractive smile and said : “here we are “; suddenly samantha exploded into tears
and said “ I’m sorry … I’m really sorry … I don’t know how I can explain that .” ;
then archi calmly said : “ dear we are patient enough to listen to any kind of unexpected matter”
:Then samantha said
“oh well … I want you to excuse me ; I just wanted to test him if he really loves me ";
But .. I hadn’t expect that situation … indeed after my investigation I’ve got understand that islam is the best religion so I want to accept it as my religion “
At last, Samantha converted to Islam consensually and eagerly. @mir suggested her to change her name to an Islamic one. They agreed on "Maryam". There was not any other obstacle before @mir and Maryam to get married. Thus, they wanted to celebrate their wedding as soon as possible. @mir and Maryam wanted their wedding ceremony to be a unisex party, but Mahommad was against this idea. He said that a unisex party is full of sin and this irritates God.
@mir and Maryam wasn't happy about the situation. Maryam decided to talk to Archi , may be she could help. It was the best choice. As Mohammad loved Archi very much, he couldn't resist her request. Archi told Mohammad that everybody is free and they can have their wedding party as they wish. "Just remember that Samantha has recently become a muslim,They really like to see us in theirparty, Don't disappoint her " Archi said. ". Mohammad accepted the reason. Archi was so happy and immediately phoned Maryam to let them know.
Everything was going well and they were preparing for the party when Maryam received a call from US. After the phone call, she fainted
mohammad.clergyman
20-07-2007, 10:01
As archi was a very wise woman she tried to show Samantha what Islam really was and how it is right now. She read some parts of the holy book Quran for her and translated to English. Samantha liked Islam but it was so hard to change her life like this.The rules were unfamiliar and so different from Christianity . Archi introduced her some books for further information and told her to feel free to ask any question any time.Every one decided to let Samantha think and decide her self.
Meanwhile, Mohammad and Archi let Samantha to live in their house to get more familiar with Iran, it's culture and the peopleShe
she read about Islam....... Asked Archi the vague questions she encountered..... it was about one week that she's been wondering to gravitate Islam..... Then she decided...... She just couldn't accept to be a muslim person since she couldn't get used to it.... Then she told her friends what she had decided to do....... Mohammad couldn't believe what Samantha was saying..... But he didn't say anything as he knew "Dar din Ejbari nist"[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
@mir was the one confused.... So how could they get married? Back to the first square!...... All that night @mir was awake and was thinking how to solve the problem...... Tomorrow morning, they were having breakfast in silence..... "I'm going to gravitate Christion religion!" Amir said....... Eveybody stopped eating and looked at him..... Mohammad cried and left the kitchen......
samantha was just staring at this terrible event she hadn’t expect such this as a matter of fact …. amir then went directly toward Mohammad and said : I’m sorry I know that I just made a foolish decision .... see ; how love impressed you dear ; it’s not logical at all to change your religion and become apostate ; after all if you do so you’ll be killed “ Mohammad said while his face was red of fear and nervous .
now it was noon ; all the family and guests gathered in the kitchen to have lunch and probably to reach at decision ; then Mohammad destroyed the deep silence with his attractive smile and said : “here we are “; suddenly samantha exploded into tears
and said “ I’m sorry … I’m really sorry … I don’t know how I can explain that .” ;
then archi calmly said : “ dear we are patient enough to listen to any kind of unexpected matter”
:Then samantha said
“oh well … I want you to excuse me ; I just wanted to test him if he really loves me ";
But .. I hadn’t expect that situation … indeed after my investigation I’ve got understand that islam is the best religion so I want to accept it as my religion “
At last, Samantha converted to Islam consensually and eagerly. @mir suggested her to change her name to an Islamic one. They agreed on "Maryam". There was not any other obstacle before @mir and Maryam to get married. Thus, they wanted to celebrate their wedding as soon as possible. @mir and Maryam wanted their wedding ceremony to be a unisex party, but Mahommad was against this idea. He said that a unisex party is full of sin and this irritates God.
@mir and Maryam wasn't happy about the situation. Maryam decided to talk to Archi , may be she could help. It was the best choice. As Mohammad loved Archi very much, he couldn't resist her request. Archi told Mohammad that everybody is free and they can have their wedding party as they wish. "Just remember that Samantha has recently become a muslim,They really like to see us in theirparty, Don't disappoint her " Archi said. ". Mohammad accepted the reason. Archi was so happy and immediately phoned Maryam to let them know.
Everything was going well and they were preparing for the party when Maryam received a call from US. After the phone call, she fainted
? amir who was next to Maryam shocked and said : what's the matter dear
uncle sam .... my love ....died
she was crying while amir calmly touched her soft face and cleaned her teares
that made her sedate then she said
we must set out to london when my uncle is going to be buried
then amir expressed his disapproval and said : but we're gonna
then Maryam interrupted him and said : we have to delay our wedding ceremony
that made amir so worried as if that was the worth event which could be happened preventing their marriage
As archi was a very wise woman she tried to show Samantha what Islam really was and how it is right now. She read some parts of the holy book Quran for her and translated to English. Samantha liked Islam but it was so hard to change her life like this.The rules were unfamiliar and so different from Christianity . Archi introduced her some books for further information and told her to feel free to ask any question any time.Every one decided to let Samantha think and decide her self.
Meanwhile, Mohammad and Archi let Samantha to live in their house to get more familiar with Iran, it's culture and the peopleShe
she read about Islam....... Asked Archi the vague questions she encountered..... it was about one week that she's been wondering to gravitate Islam..... Then she decided...... She just couldn't accept to be a muslim person since she couldn't get used to it.... Then she told her friends what she had decided to do....... Mohammad couldn't believe what Samantha was saying..... But he didn't say anything as he knew "Dar din Ejbari nist"[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
@mir was the one confused.... So how could they get married? Back to the first square!...... All that night @mir was awake and was thinking how to solve the problem...... Tomorrow morning, they were having breakfast in silence..... "I'm going to gravitate Christion religion!" Amir said....... Eveybody stopped eating and looked at him..... Mohammad cried and left the kitchen......
samantha was just staring at this terrible event she hadn’t expect such this as a matter of fact …. amir then went directly toward Mohammad and said : I’m sorry I know that I just made a foolish decision .... see ; how love impressed you dear ; it’s not logical at all to change your religion and become apostate ; after all if you do so you’ll be killed “ Mohammad said while his face was red of fear and nervous .
now it was noon ; all the family and guests gathered in the kitchen to have lunch and probably to reach at decision ; then Mohammad destroyed the deep silence with his attractive smile and said : “here we are “; suddenly samantha exploded into tears
and said “ I’m sorry … I’m really sorry … I don’t know how I can explain that .” ;
then archi calmly said : “ dear we are patient enough to listen to any kind of unexpected matter”
:Then samantha said
“oh well … I want you to excuse me ; I just wanted to test him if he really loves me ";
But .. I hadn’t expect that situation … indeed after my investigation I’ve got understand that islam is the best religion so I want to accept it as my religion “
At last, Samantha converted to Islam consensually and eagerly. @mir suggested her to change her name to an Islamic one. They agreed on "Maryam". There was not any other obstacle before @mir and Maryam to get married. Thus, they wanted to celebrate their wedding as soon as possible. @mir and Maryam wanted their wedding ceremony to be a unisex party, but Mahommad was against this idea. He said that a unisex party is full of sin and this irritates God.
@mir and Maryam wasn't happy about the situation. Maryam decided to talk to Archi , may be she could help. It was the best choice. As Mohammad loved Archi very much, he couldn't resist her request. Archi told Mohammad that everybody is free and they can have their wedding party as they wish. "Just remember that Samantha has recently become a muslim,They really like to see us in theirparty, Don't disappoint her " Archi said. ". Mohammad accepted the reason. Archi was so happy and immediately phoned Maryam to let them know.
Everything was going well and they were preparing for the party when Maryam received a call from US. After the phone call, she fainted
? amir who was next to Maryam shocked and said : what's the matter dear
uncle sam .... my love ....died
she was crying while amir calmly touched her soft face and cleaned her teares
that made her sedate then she said
we must set out to london when my uncle is going to be buried
then amir expressed his disapproval and said : but we're gonna
then Maryam interrupted him and said : we have to delay our wedding ceremony
that made amir so worried as if that was the worth event which could be happened preventing their marriage
While they were arguing about going to the funeral of Maryam's uncle, suddenly @mir felt a severe pain in his head and lost his balance and fell on the ground, however, he stood up quickly and rubbed his eyes. Maryam was worried. She asked whart had happened. @mir told her that it was not important and this happened occasionally. But finally Maryam could convince him to visit a brain specialist
A r c h i
20-07-2007, 20:39
As archi was a very wise woman she tried to show Samantha what Islam really was and how it is right now. She read some parts of the holy book Quran for her and translated to English. Samantha liked Islam but it was so hard to change her life like this.The rules were unfamiliar and so different from Christianity . Archi introduced her some books for further information and told her to feel free to ask any question any time.Every one decided to let Samantha think and decide her self.
Meanwhile, Mohammad and Archi let Samantha to live in their house to get more familiar with Iran, it's culture and the peopleShe
she read about Islam....... Asked Archi the vague questions she encountered..... it was about one week that she's been wondering to gravitate Islam..... Then she decided...... She just couldn't accept to be a muslim person since she couldn't get used to it.... Then she told her friends what she had decided to do....... Mohammad couldn't believe what Samantha was saying..... But he didn't say anything as he knew "Dar din Ejbari nist"[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
@mir was the one confused.... So how could they get married? Back to the first square!...... All that night @mir was awake and was thinking how to solve the problem...... Tomorrow morning, they were having breakfast in silence..... "I'm going to gravitate Christion religion!" Amir said....... Eveybody stopped eating and looked at him..... Mohammad cried and left the kitchen......
samantha was just staring at this terrible event she hadn’t expect such this as a matter of fact …. amir then went directly toward Mohammad and said : I’m sorry I know that I just made a foolish decision .... see ; how love impressed you dear ; it’s not logical at all to change your religion and become apostate ; after all if you do so you’ll be killed “ Mohammad said while his face was red of fear and nervous .
now it was noon ; all the family and guests gathered in the kitchen to have lunch and probably to reach at decision ; then Mohammad destroyed the deep silence with his attractive smile and said : “here we are “; suddenly samantha exploded into tears
and said “ I’m sorry … I’m really sorry … I don’t know how I can explain that .” ;
then archi calmly said : “ dear we are patient enough to listen to any kind of unexpected matter”
:Then samantha said
“oh well … I want you to excuse me ; I just wanted to test him if he really loves me ";
But .. I hadn’t expect that situation … indeed after my investigation I’ve got understand that islam is the best religion so I want to accept it as my religion “
At last, Samantha converted to Islam consensually and eagerly. @mir suggested her to change her name to an Islamic one. They agreed on "Maryam". There was not any other obstacle before @mir and Maryam to get married. Thus, they wanted to celebrate their wedding as soon as possible. @mir and Maryam wanted their wedding ceremony to be a unisex party, but Mahommad was against this idea. He said that a unisex party is full of sin and this irritates God.
@mir and Maryam wasn't happy about the situation. Maryam decided to talk to Archi , may be she could help. It was the best choice. As Mohammad loved Archi very much, he couldn't resist her request. Archi told Mohammad that everybody is free and they can have their wedding party as they wish. "Just remember that Samantha has recently become a muslim,They really like to see us in theirparty, Don't disappoint her " Archi said. ". Mohammad accepted the reason. Archi was so happy and immediately phoned Maryam to let them know.
Everything was going well and they were preparing for the party when Maryam received a call from US. After the phone call, she fainted
? amir who was next to Maryam shocked and said : what's the matter dear
uncle sam .... my love ....died
she was crying while amir calmly touched her soft face and cleaned her teares. that made her sedate then she said .we must set out to london when my uncle is going to be buried.then amir expressed his disapproval and said : but we're gonna.... .then Maryam interrupted him and said : we have to delay our wedding ceremony. that made amir so worried as if that was the worth event which could be happened preventing their marriage
While they were arguing about going to the funeral of Maryam's uncle, suddenly @mir felt a severe pain in his head and lost his balance and fell on the ground, however, he stood up quickly and rubbed his eyes. Maryam was worried. She asked whart had happened. @mir told her that it was not important and this happened occasionally. But finally Maryam could convince him to visit a brain specialist.
Everything was mixed up, uncle's death, @mir's frequent headaches, their wedding ceremony and .... Mohmmad suggest @mir to be go with Maryam to London, may be she needed some help there. But there was a problem about getting the visa. As maryam was originally American she could have the visa as soon as she wanted, but it wasn't the same for @mir. They decided that Maryam should go with the first flight to London and @mir would join her later, Maryam and @mir were so sad about the situation but there was no other choice, they should be separated for some weeks.
The day arrived, Maryam, @mir, Archi and Mohammad were at the air port. "Don't forget to visit a doctor for your frequent headache, I'll be waiting for you honey" Maryam said. " I'll miss you so much" @mir replied. "I love you :40: and will wait for you for as long as it takes" Maryam added. They said good bye as they were both in tears and Maryam flied to London
A r c h i
22-07-2007, 10:40
Hey why no one continue the story?:41:, I want to know what will happen to Maryam and @mir :31:l
[quote=archi-girl;1331557]
As archi was a very wise woman she tried to show Samantha what Islam really was and how it is right now. She read some parts of the holy book Quran for her and translated to English. Samantha liked Islam but it was so hard to change her life like this.The rules were unfamiliar and so different from Christianity . Archi introduced her some books for further information and told her to feel free to ask any question any time.Every one decided to let Samantha think and decide her self.
Meanwhile, Mohammad and Archi let Samantha to live in their house to get more familiar with Iran, it's culture and the peopleShe
she read about Islam....... Asked Archi the vague questions she encountered..... it was about one week that she's been wondering to gravitate Islam..... Then she decided...... She just couldn't accept to be a muslim person since she couldn't get used to it.... Then she told her friends what she had decided to do....... Mohammad couldn't believe what Samantha was saying..... But he didn't say anything as he knew "Dar din Ejbari nist"[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
@mir was the one confused.... So how could they get married? Back to the first square!...... All that night @mir was awake and was thinking how to solve the problem...... Tomorrow morning, they were having breakfast in silence..... "I'm going to gravitate Christion religion!" Amir said....... Eveybody stopped eating and looked at him..... Mohammad cried and left the kitchen......
samantha was just staring at this terrible event she hadn’t expect such this as a matter of fact …. amir then went directly toward Mohammad and said : I’m sorry I know that I just made a foolish decision .... see ; how love impressed you dear ; it’s not logical at all to change your religion and become apostate ; after all if you do so you’ll be killed “ Mohammad said while his face was red of fear and nervous .
now it was noon ; all the family and guests gathered in the kitchen to have lunch and probably to reach at decision ; then Mohammad destroyed the deep silence with his attractive smile and said : “here we are “; suddenly samantha exploded into tears
and said “ I’m sorry … I’m really sorry … I don’t know how I can explain that .” ;
then archi calmly said : “ dear we are patient enough to listen to any kind of unexpected matter”
:Then samantha said
“oh well … I want you to excuse me ; I just wanted to test him if he really loves me ";
But .. I hadn’t expect that situation … indeed after my investigation I’ve got understand that islam is the best religion so I want to accept it as my religion “
At last, Samantha converted to Islam consensually and eagerly. @mir suggested her to change her name to an Islamic one. They agreed on "Maryam". There was not any other obstacle before @mir and Maryam to get married. Thus, they wanted to celebrate their wedding as soon as possible. @mir and Maryam wanted their wedding ceremony to be a unisex party, but Mahommad was against this idea. He said that a unisex party is full of sin and this irritates God.
@mir and Maryam wasn't happy about the situation. Maryam decided to talk to Archi , may be she could help. It was the best choice. As Mohammad loved Archi very much, he couldn't resist her request. Archi told Mohammad that everybody is free and they can have their wedding party as they wish. "Just remember that Samantha has recently become a muslim,They really like to see us in theirparty, Don't disappoint her " Archi said. ". Mohammad accepted the reason. Archi was so happy and immediately phoned Maryam to let them know.
Everything was going well and they were preparing for the party when Maryam received a call from US. After the phone call, she fainted
? amir who was next to Maryam shocked and said : what's the matter dear
uncle sam .... my love ....died
she was crying while amir calmly touched her soft face and cleaned her teares. that made her sedate then she said .we must set out to london when my uncle is going to be buried.then amir expressed his disapproval and said : but we're gonna.... .then Maryam interrupted him and said : we have to delay our wedding ceremony. that made amir so worried as if that was the worth event which could be happened preventing their marriage
While they were arguing about going to the funeral of Maryam's uncle, suddenly @mir felt a severe pain in his head and lost his balance and fell on the ground, however, he stood up quickly and rubbed his eyes. Maryam was worried. She asked whart had happened. @mir told her that it was not important and this happened occasionally. But finally Maryam could convince him to visit a brain specialist.
Everything was mixed up, uncle's death, @mir's frequent headaches, their wedding ceremony and .... Mohmmad suggest @mir to be go with Maryam to London, may be she needed some help there. But there was a problem about getting the visa. As maryam was originally American she could have the visa as soon as she wanted, but it wasn't the same for @mir. They decided that Maryam should go with the first flight to London and @mir would join her later, Maryam and @mir were so sad about the situation but there was no other choice, they should be separated for some weeks.
The day arrived, Maryam, @mir, Archi and Mohammad were at the air port. "Don't forget to visit a doctor for your frequent headache, I'll be waiting for you honey" Maryam said. " I'll miss you so much" @mir replied. "I love you :40: and will wait for you for as long as it takes" Maryam added. They said good bye as they were both in tears and Maryam flied to London
While Maryam was in London for the fueral of her uncle, headaches of @mir got more severe and more frequent. Finally, Mohammad could persuade @mir to visit a specialist. c
@mir and Mohammad were sitting in the doctor's room and he was looking at the results of CT Scan. After a while, the doctor told @mir to go out. He told Mohammad that there is a malignant tumor in @mir's brain and he is in the last six months of his life:41:c
mohammad.clergyman
23-07-2007, 09:45
As archi was a very wise woman she tried to show Samantha what Islam really was and how it is right now. She read some parts of the holy book Quran for her and translated to English. Samantha liked Islam but it was so hard to change her life like this.The rules were unfamiliar and so different from Christianity . Archi introduced her some books for further information and told her to feel free to ask any question any time.Every one decided to let Samantha think and decide her self.
Meanwhile, Mohammad and Archi let Samantha to live in their house to get more familiar with Iran, it's culture and the peopleShe
she read about Islam....... Asked Archi the vague questions she encountered..... it was about one week that she's been wondering to gravitate Islam..... Then she decided...... She just couldn't accept to be a muslim person since she couldn't get used to it.... Then she told her friends what she had decided to do....... Mohammad couldn't believe what Samantha was saying..... But he didn't say anything as he knew "Dar din Ejbari nist"[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
@mir was the one confused.... So how could they get married? Back to the first square!...... All that night @mir was awake and was thinking how to solve the problem...... Tomorrow morning, they were having breakfast in silence..... "I'm going to gravitate Christion religion!" Amir said....... Eveybody stopped eating and looked at him..... Mohammad cried and left the kitchen......
samantha was just staring at this terrible event she hadn’t expect such this as a matter of fact …. amir then went directly toward Mohammad and said : I’m sorry I know that I just made a foolish decision .... see ; how love impressed you dear ; it’s not logical at all to change your religion and become apostate ; after all if you do so you’ll be killed “ Mohammad said while his face was red of fear and nervous .
now it was noon ; all the family and guests gathered in the kitchen to have lunch and probably to reach at decision ; then Mohammad destroyed the deep silence with his attractive smile and said : “here we are “; suddenly samantha exploded into tears
and said “ I’m sorry … I’m really sorry … I don’t know how I can explain that .” ;
then archi calmly said : “ dear we are patient enough to listen to any kind of unexpected matter”
:Then samantha said
“oh well … I want you to excuse me ; I just wanted to test him if he really loves me ";
But .. I hadn’t expect that situation … indeed after my investigation I’ve got understand that islam is the best religion so I want to accept it as my religion “
At last, Samantha converted to Islam consensually and eagerly. @mir suggested her to change her name to an Islamic one. They agreed on "Maryam". There was not any other obstacle before @mir and Maryam to get married. Thus, they wanted to celebrate their wedding as soon as possible. @mir and Maryam wanted their wedding ceremony to be a unisex party, but Mahommad was against this idea. He said that a unisex party is full of sin and this irritates God.
@mir and Maryam wasn't happy about the situation. Maryam decided to talk to Archi , may be she could help. It was the best choice. As Mohammad loved Archi very much, he couldn't resist her request. Archi told Mohammad that everybody is free and they can have their wedding party as they wish. "Just remember that Samantha has recently become a muslim,They really like to see us in theirparty, Don't disappoint her " Archi said. ". Mohammad accepted the reason. Archi was so happy and immediately phoned Maryam to let them know.
Everything was going well and they were preparing for the party when Maryam received a call from US. After the phone call, she fainted
? amir who was next to Maryam shocked and said : what's the matter dear
uncle sam .... my love ....died
she was crying while amir calmly touched her soft face and cleaned her teares. that made her sedate then she said .we must set out to london when my uncle is going to be buried.then amir expressed his disapproval and said : but we're gonna.... .then Maryam interrupted him and said : we have to delay our wedding ceremony. that made amir so worried as if that was the worth event which could be happened preventing their marriage
While they were arguing about going to the funeral of Maryam's uncle, suddenly @mir felt a severe pain in his head and lost his balance and fell on the ground, however, he stood up quickly and rubbed his eyes. Maryam was worried. She asked whart had happened. @mir told her that it was not important and this happened occasionally. But finally Maryam could convince him to visit a brain specialist.
Everything was mixed up, uncle's death, @mir's frequent headaches, their wedding ceremony and .... Mohmmad suggest @mir to be go with Maryam to London, may be she needed some help there. But there was a problem about getting the visa. As maryam was originally American she could have the visa as soon as she wanted, but it wasn't the same for @mir. They decided that Maryam should go with the first flight to London and @mir would join her later, Maryam and @mir were so sad about the situation but there was no other choice, they should be separated for some weeks.
The day arrived, Maryam, @mir, Archi and Mohammad were at the air port. "Don't forget to visit a doctor for your frequent headache, I'll be waiting for you honey" Maryam said. " I'll miss you so much" @mir replied. "I love you :40: and will wait for you for as long as it takes" Maryam added. They said good bye as they were both in tears and Maryam flied to London
While Maryam was in London for the fueral of her uncle, headaches of @mir got more severe and more frequent. Finally, Mohammad could persuade @mir to visit a specialist. c
@mir and Mohammad were sitting in the doctor's room and he was looking at the results of CT Scan. After a while, the doctor told @mir to go out. He told Mohammad that there is a malignant tumor in @mir's brain and he is in the last six months of his life c
After awaring of this news ; he got quiet anxious and hopeless
How can I tell amir ; he thought
then he went toward the hall ; opened the door ; but there was someone behind it ;reclining on the floor
Yes he was that poor amir who listened to the chance remarks of passerby
and now was unconscious and fainted
A r c h i
24-07-2007, 00:17
At last, Samantha converted to Islam consensually and eagerly. @mir suggested her to change her name to an Islamic one. They agreed on "Maryam". There was not any other obstacle before @mir and Maryam to get married. Thus, they wanted to celebrate their wedding as soon as possible. @mir and Maryam wanted their wedding ceremony to be a unisex party, but Mahommad was against this idea. He said that a unisex party is full of sin and this irritates God.
@mir and Maryam wasn't happy about the situation. Maryam decided to talk to Archi , may be she could help. It was the best choice. As Mohammad loved Archi very much, he couldn't resist her request. Archi told Mohammad that everybody is free and they can have their wedding party as they wish. "Just remember that Samantha has recently become a muslim,They really like to see us in theirparty, Don't disappoint her " Archi said. ". Mohammad accepted the reason. Archi was so happy and immediately phoned Maryam to let them know.
Everything was going well and they were preparing for the party when Maryam received a call from US. After the phone call, she fainted
? amir who was next to Maryam shocked and said : what's the matter dear
uncle sam .... my love ....died
she was crying while amir calmly touched her soft face and cleaned her teares. that made her sedate then she said .we must set out to london when my uncle is going to be buried.then amir expressed his disapproval and said : but we're gonna.... .then Maryam interrupted him and said : we have to delay our wedding ceremony. that made amir so worried as if that was the worth event which could be happened preventing their marriage
While they were arguing about going to the funeral of Maryam's uncle, suddenly @mir felt a severe pain in his head and lost his balance and fell on the ground, however, he stood up quickly and rubbed his eyes. Maryam was worried. She asked whart had happened. @mir told her that it was not important and this happened occasionally. But finally Maryam could convince him to visit a brain specialist.
Everything was mixed up, uncle's death, @mir's frequent headaches, their wedding ceremony and .... Mohmmad suggest @mir to be go with Maryam to London, may be she needed some help there. But there was a problem about getting the visa. As maryam was originally American she could have the visa as soon as she wanted, but it wasn't the same for @mir. They decided that Maryam should go with the first flight to London and @mir would join her later, Maryam and @mir were so sad about the situation but there was no other choice, they should be separated for some weeks.
The day arrived, Maryam, @mir, Archi and Mohammad were at the air port. "Don't forget to visit a doctor for your frequent headache, I'll be waiting for you honey" Maryam said. " I'll miss you so much" @mir replied. "I love you [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] and will wait for you for as long as it takes" Maryam added. They said good bye as they were both in tears and Maryam flied to London
While Maryam was in London for the fueral of her uncle, headaches of @mir got more severe and more frequent. Finally, Mohammad could persuade @mir to visit a specialist. c
@mir and Mohammad were sitting in the doctor's room and he was looking at the results of CT Scan. After a while, the doctor told @mir to go out. He told Mohammad that there is a malignant tumor in @mir's brain and he is in the last six months of his life c
After awaring of this news ; he got quiet anxious and hopeless.How can I tell amir ; he thought . Then he went toward the hall ; opened the door ; but there was someone behind it ;reclining on the floor. Yes he was that poor amir who listened to the chance remarks of passerby and now was unconscious and fainted.
After @mir gained his conscience He couldn't talk even a world. he was so depressed and didn't know what he could do in 6 months. "oh my God , How about Maryam, what should I do about her " he thought. He decided not to call or see Maryam. She should forget him.
Maryam was worried there was no phone call from @mir for the past two weeks. Not @mir nor Mohmmad, no one answered his calls.At last one day when she was trying to call Mohammad's home,Ali (Mohmmad and Archi's son :27:) answered the phone. She couldn't understand a lot because Ali's English wasn't so good. She just could get a sentence from him " Uncle @mir is sick"
What could have happened for @mir? Is this the reason that he didn't answer my calls. She decided to come back to Iran with the first flight. Now @mir was the most and only important thing in his life..So how could she leave him alone in that situation ???l
At last, Samantha converted to Islam consensually and eagerly. @mir suggested her to change her name to an Islamic one. They agreed on "Maryam". There was not any other obstacle before @mir and Maryam to get married. Thus, they wanted to celebrate their wedding as soon as possible. @mir and Maryam wanted their wedding ceremony to be a unisex party, but Mahommad was against this idea. He said that a unisex party is full of sin and this irritates God.
@mir and Maryam wasn't happy about the situation. Maryam decided to talk to Archi , may be she could help. It was the best choice. As Mohammad loved Archi very much, he couldn't resist her request. Archi told Mohammad that everybody is free and they can have their wedding party as they wish. "Just remember that Samantha has recently become a muslim,They really like to see us in theirparty, Don't disappoint her " Archi said. ". Mohammad accepted the reason. Archi was so happy and immediately phoned Maryam to let them know.
Everything was going well and they were preparing for the party when Maryam received a call from US. After the phone call, she fainted
? amir who was next to Maryam shocked and said : what's the matter dear
uncle sam .... my love ....died
she was crying while amir calmly touched her soft face and cleaned her teares. that made her sedate then she said .we must set out to london when my uncle is going to be buried.then amir expressed his disapproval and said : but we're gonna.... .then Maryam interrupted him and said : we have to delay our wedding ceremony. that made amir so worried as if that was the worth event which could be happened preventing their marriage
While they were arguing about going to the funeral of Maryam's uncle, suddenly @mir felt a severe pain in his head and lost his balance and fell on the ground, however, he stood up quickly and rubbed his eyes. Maryam was worried. She asked whart had happened. @mir told her that it was not important and this happened occasionally. But finally Maryam could convince him to visit a brain specialist.
Everything was mixed up, uncle's death, @mir's frequent headaches, their wedding ceremony and .... Mohmmad suggest @mir to be go with Maryam to London, may be she needed some help there. But there was a problem about getting the visa. As maryam was originally American she could have the visa as soon as she wanted, but it wasn't the same for @mir. They decided that Maryam should go with the first flight to London and @mir would join her later, Maryam and @mir were so sad about the situation but there was no other choice, they should be separated for some weeks.
The day arrived, Maryam, @mir, Archi and Mohammad were at the air port. "Don't forget to visit a doctor for your frequent headache, I'll be waiting for you honey" Maryam said. " I'll miss you so much" @mir replied. "I love you [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] and will wait for you for as long as it takes" Maryam added. They said good bye as they were both in tears and Maryam flied to London
While Maryam was in London for the fueral of her uncle, headaches of @mir got more severe and more frequent. Finally, Mohammad could persuade @mir to visit a specialist. c
@mir and Mohammad were sitting in the doctor's room and he was looking at the results of CT Scan. After a while, the doctor told @mir to go out. He told Mohammad that there is a malignant tumor in @mir's brain and he is in the last six months of his life c
After awaring of this news ; he got quiet anxious and hopeless.How can I tell amir ; he thought . Then he went toward the hall ; opened the door ; but there was someone behind it ;reclining on the floor. Yes he was that poor amir who listened to the chance remarks of passerby and now was unconscious and fainted.
After @mir gained his conscience He couldn't talk even a world. he was so depressed and didn't know what he could do in 6 months. "oh my God , How about Maryam, what should I do about her " he thought. He decided not to call or see Maryam. She should forget him.
Maryam was worried there was no phone call from @mir for the past two weeks. Not @mir nor Mohmmad, no one answered his calls.At last one day when she was trying to call Mohammad's home,Ali (Mohmmad and Archi's son :27:) answered the phone. She couldn't understand a lot because Ali's English wasn't so good. She just could get a sentence from him " Uncle @mir is sick"
What could have happened for @mir? Is this the reason that he didn't answer my calls. She decided to come back to Iran with the first flight. Now @mir was the most and only important thing in his life..So how could she leave him alone in that situation ???l
Maryam came to Iran with the first flight. She directly went to Qom and Mohammad's and Archi's home. When she heard the story, first she couldn't believe what she had heard, after a while she burst into tears suddenly. "NO...NO...Not again, I cannot tolerate this much misery" She wanted to go and hug and kiss @mir, but she couldn't do that since they had not gotton married yet and @mir was a stranger. "What can I do" she thought. Suddenly she heard the sound of Azan (call for prayers) from Hazrate Masoomeh's holy shrine. Now she was a muslim. Something stroke her mind. Yes,... she rushed to the shrine, knelt in front of it and beseeched Hazrate Masoome to ask God to save @mir's life:42:c
mohammad.clergyman
24-07-2007, 10:17
[[left]At last, Samantha converted to Islam consensually and eagerly. @mir suggested her to change her name to an Islamic one. They agreed on "Maryam". There was not any other obstacle before @mir and Maryam to get married. Thus, they wanted to celebrate their wedding as soon as possible. @mir and Maryam wanted their wedding ceremony to be a unisex party, but Mahommad was against this idea. He said that a unisex party is full of sin and this irritates God.
@mir and Maryam wasn't happy about the situation. Maryam decided to talk to Archi , may be she could help. It was the best choice. As Mohammad loved Archi very much, he couldn't resist her request. Archi told Mohammad that everybody is free and they can have their wedding party as they wish. "Just remember that Samantha has recently become a muslim,They really like to see us in theirparty, Don't disappoint her " Archi said. ". Mohammad accepted the reason. Archi was so happy and immediately phoned Maryam to let them know.
Everything was going well and they were preparing for the party when Maryam received a call from US. After the phone call, she fainted
? amir who was next to Maryam shocked and said : what's the matter dear
uncle sam .... my love ....died
she was crying while amir calmly touched her soft face and cleaned her teares. that made her sedate then she said .we must set out to london when my uncle is going to be buried.then amir expressed his disapproval and said : but we're gonna.... .then Maryam interrupted him and said : we have to delay our wedding ceremony. that made amir so worried as if that was the worth event which could be happened preventing their marriage
While they were arguing about going to the funeral of Maryam's uncle, suddenly @mir felt a severe pain in his head and lost his balance and fell on the ground, however, he stood up quickly and rubbed his eyes. Maryam was worried. She asked whart had happened. @mir told her that it was not important and this happened occasionally. But finally Maryam could convince him to visit a brain specialist.
Everything was mixed up, uncle's death, @mir's frequent headaches, their wedding ceremony and .... Mohmmad suggest @mir to be go with Maryam to London, may be she needed some help there. But there was a problem about getting the visa. As maryam was originally American she could have the visa as soon as she wanted, but it wasn't the same for @mir. They decided that Maryam should go with the first flight to London and @mir would join her later, Maryam and @mir were so sad about the situation but there was no other choice, they should be separated for some weeks.
The day arrived, Maryam, @mir, Archi and Mohammad were at the air port. "Don't forget to visit a doctor for your frequent headache, I'll be waiting for you honey" Maryam said. " I'll miss you so much" @mir replied. "I love you [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] and will wait for you for as long as it takes" Maryam added. They said good bye as they were both in tears and Maryam flied to London
While Maryam was in London for the fueral of her uncle, headaches of @mir got more severe and more frequent. Finally, Mohammad could persuade @mir to visit a specialist. c
@mir and Mohammad were sitting in the doctor's room and he was looking at the results of CT Scan. After a while, the doctor told @mir to go out. He told Mohammad that there is a malignant tumor in @mir's brain and he is in the last six months of his life c
After awaring of this news ; he got quiet anxious and hopeless.How can I tell amir ; he thought . Then he went toward the hall ; opened the door ; but there was someone behind it ;reclining on the floor. Yes he was that poor amir who listened to the chance remarks of passerby and now was unconscious and fainted.
After @mir gained his conscience He couldn't talk even a world. he was so depressed and didn't know what he could do in 6 months. "oh my God , How about Maryam, what should I do about her " he thought. He decided not to call or see Maryam. She should forget him.
Maryam was worried there was no phone call from @mir for the past two weeks. Not @mir nor Mohmmad, no one answered his calls.At last one day when she was trying to call Mohammad's home,Ali (Mohmmad and Archi's son :27:) answered the phone. She couldn't understand a lot because Ali's English wasn't so good. She just could get a sentence from him " Uncle @mir is sick"
What could have happened for @mir? Is this the reason that he didn't answer my calls. She decided to come back to Iran with the first flight. Now @mir was the most and only important thing in his life..So how could she leave him alone in that situation ???l
Maryam came to Iran with the first flight. She directly went to Qom and Mohammad's and Archi's home. When she heard the story, first she couldn't believe what she had heard, after a while she burst into tears suddenly. "NO...NO...Not again, I cannot tolerate this much misery" She wanted to go and hug and kiss @mir, but she couldn't do that since they had not gotton married yet and @mir was a stranger. "What can I do" she thought. Suddenly she heard the sound of Azan (call for prayers) from Hazrate Masoomeh's holy shrine. Now she was a muslim. Something stroke her mind. Yes,... she rushed to the shrine, knelt in front of it and beseeched Hazrate Masoome to ask God to save @mir's life:42:c
she felt a strong hope in her heart ; she knew that the God loved her ; since she was a new muslim and she was quiet clean of any kinds of sins
she had listened a little bit about a holy Masjed called jamkaran
after prayer it dawned on her to go there which was located nearby
it was tuesday night and all of Imam Zaman's lovers were there
Wow ! what a crowdness is here ; she thought
she felt speciall feeling there ; she was not longer thinking of her love but a new love
she felt in Love of an existence who could made her life changed
something was brightening in her heart and that made her quiet sedate and hopeful
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p.s Masjed is a new word recently entered in English is written in the new edition of Longman Dic
A r c h i
24-07-2007, 11:11
At last, Samantha converted to Islam consensually and eagerly. @mir suggested her to change her name to an Islamic one. They agreed on "Maryam". There was not any other obstacle before @mir and Maryam to get married. Thus, they wanted to celebrate their wedding as soon as possible. @mir and Maryam wanted their wedding ceremony to be a unisex party, but Mahommad was against this idea. He said that a unisex party is full of sin and this irritates God.
@mir and Maryam wasn't happy about the situation. Maryam decided to talk to Archi , may be she could help. It was the best choice. As Mohammad loved Archi very much, he couldn't resist her request. Archi told Mohammad that everybody is free and they can have their wedding party as they wish. "Just remember that Samantha has recently become a muslim,They really like to see us in theirparty, Don't disappoint her " Archi said. ". Mohammad accepted the reason. Archi was so happy and immediately phoned Maryam to let them know.
Everything was going well and they were preparing for the party when Maryam received a call from US. After the phone call, she fainted
? amir who was next to Maryam shocked and said : what's the matter dear
uncle sam .... my love ....died
she was crying while amir calmly touched her soft face and cleaned her teares. that made her sedate then she said .we must set out to london when my uncle is going to be buried.then amir expressed his disapproval and said : but we're gonna.... .then Maryam interrupted him and said : we have to delay our wedding ceremony. that made amir so worried as if that was the worth event which could be happened preventing their marriage
While they were arguing about going to the funeral of Maryam's uncle, suddenly @mir felt a severe pain in his head and lost his balance and fell on the ground, however, he stood up quickly and rubbed his eyes. Maryam was worried. She asked whart had happened. @mir told her that it was not important and this happened occasionally. But finally Maryam could convince him to visit a brain specialist.
Everything was mixed up, uncle's death, @mir's frequent headaches, their wedding ceremony and .... Mohmmad suggest @mir to be go with Maryam to London, may be she needed some help there. But there was a problem about getting the visa. As maryam was originally American she could have the visa as soon as she wanted, but it wasn't the same for @mir. They decided that Maryam should go with the first flight to London and @mir would join her later, Maryam and @mir were so sad about the situation but there was no other choice, they should be separated for some weeks.
The day arrived, Maryam, @mir, Archi and Mohammad were at the air port. "Don't forget to visit a doctor for your frequent headache, I'll be waiting for you honey" Maryam said. " I'll miss you so much" @mir replied. "I love you [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] and will wait for you for as long as it takes" Maryam added. They said good bye as they were both in tears and Maryam flied to London
While Maryam was in London for the fueral of her uncle, headaches of @mir got more severe and more frequent. Finally, Mohammad could persuade @mir to visit a specialist. c
@mir and Mohammad were sitting in the doctor's room and he was looking at the results of CT Scan. After a while, the doctor told @mir to go out. He told Mohammad that there is a malignant tumor in @mir's brain and he is in the last six months of his life c
After awaring of this news ; he got quiet anxious and hopeless.How can I tell amir ; he thought . Then he went toward the hall ; opened the door ; but there was someone behind it ;reclining on the floor. Yes he was that poor amir who listened to the chance remarks of passerby and now was unconscious and fainted.
After @mir gained his conscience He couldn't talk even a world. he was so depressed and didn't know what he could do in 6 months. "oh my God , How about Maryam, what should I do about her " he thought. He decided not to call or see Maryam. She should forget him.
Maryam was worried there was no phone call from @mir for the past two weeks. Not @mir nor Mohmmad, no one answered his calls.At last one day when she was trying to call Mohammad's home,Ali (Mohmmad and Archi's son [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]) answered the phone. She couldn't understand a lot because Ali's English wasn't so good. She just could get a sentence from him " Uncle @mir is sick"
What could have happened for @mir? Is this the reason that he didn't answer my calls. She decided to come back to Iran with the first flight. Now @mir was the most and only important thing in his life..So how could she leave him alone in that situation ???l
Maryam came to Iran with the first flight. She directly went to Qom and Mohammad's and Archi's home. When she heard the story, first she couldn't believe what she had heard, after a while she burst into tears suddenly. "NO...NO...Not again, I cannot tolerate this much misery" She wanted to go and hug and kiss @mir, but she couldn't do that since they had not gotton married yet and @mir was a stranger. "What can I do" she thought. Suddenly she heard the sound of Azan (call for prayers) from Hazrate Masoomeh's holy shrine. Now she was a muslim. Something stroke her mind. Yes,... she rushed to the shrine, knelt in front of it and beseeched Hazrate Masoome to ask God to save @mir's life[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
she felt a strong hope in her heart ; she knew that the God loved her ; since she was a new muslim and she was quiet clean of any kinds of sins
she had listened a little bit about a holy Masjed called jamkaran
after prayer it dawned on her to go there which was located nearby
it was tuesday night and all of Imam Zaman's lovers were there
Wow ! what a crowdness is here ; she thought
she felt speciall feeling there ; she was not longer thinking of her love but a new love
she felt in Love of an existence who could made her life changed
something was brightening in her heart and that made her quiet sedate and hopeful
As soon as she reached Home, She looked for Archi to talk about her new feelings, "I'm sure he'll get well" Maryam said. Archi hugged her and they both prayed for @mir. All of a sudden Mohammad called from hospital. " @mir feels so good today " He mentioned. "you can come and visit him" He added. When Maryam and Archi got there , doctor told them that something like miracle has happened to @mir, there's no sign of sickness anymore. He added that they would do further examination the day after to make sure that the sickness has gone
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-Thanks Mohammad for the info about Masjed,
-Anyway I think that "crowdness" is not a word...Crowd is just fine itself
Abstract of the story up to now
Once upon a time, Samantha and Nicholas, two poor young mates lived. In an accident Nicholas became paralyzed while his wife was pregnant. Nicholad hanged himself after a hard depression and Samantha missed her fetus because she reached at the hospital late. Then her friend's husband wanted her to become his secratary. She went there but soon realized that he had devilish intentions in his mind.
Then she decided to quit USA and migrate to Iran. In the airport, she saw @mir and they fell in love with each other. They went to Qom to visit @mir's friend and his family, Archi and Ali, their little son, in order to ask how could they marry. Finally Samantha converted to Islam and chsnged her name to Maryam in order to get married with @mir. While they were getting prepared for wedding, they knew that @mir had a malignant tumor in his brain and he was in the last six months of his life. Maryam went to Jamkaran and beseeched God to save his life and God granted @mir's health again.
Now @mir continues.....
@mir returned home from hospital and they thanked God sincerely for his very valuable reward. They had sit in the room and were discussing about the details of the wedding ceremony that once Mohammad noticed that he could not hear Ali's voice. He asked Archi where he was. But Archi also didn't know. They all investigated everywhere but Ali was not anywhere. He had been disappeared. Mohammad rushed to the street agitatedly and asked everyone if he had seen Ali. Finally one of the neighbors told him that he had seen AminTNT that had kidnapped Ali.
AminTNT was the head of teenage rabble gang of the neighborhood and he was really a vicious boy. He was called TNT because everywhere he went, a very bad thing happebned there. The habitants of the neighborood were really annoyed and also fearful of him. Mohammad was really anxious. He could abuse his little son. What could he do?c
Finally one of the neighbors told him that he had seen AminTNT that had kidnapped Ali.
AminTNT was the head of teenage rabble gang of the neighborhood and he was really a vicious boy. He was called TNT because everywhere he went, a very bad thing happebned there. The habitants of the neighborood were really annoyed and also fearful of him. Mohammad was really anxious. He could abuse his little son. What could he do?c
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Amintnt could do what?????:18: Abuse him???? Let's change this verb:18:...... I think "Harm" is better:19:........ l
@mir returned home from hospital and they thanked God sincerely for his very valuable reward. They had sit in the room and were discussing about the details of the wedding ceremony that once Mohammad noticed that he could not hear Ali's voice. He asked Archi where he was. But Archi also didn't know. They all investigated everywhere but Ali was not anywhere. He had been disappeared. Mohammad rushed to the street agitatedly and asked everyone if he had seen Ali. Finally one of the neighbors told him that he had seen AminTNT that had kidnapped Ali.
AminTNT was the head of teenage rabble gang of the neighborhood and he was really a vicious boy. He was called TNT because everywhere he went, a very bad thing happebned there. The habitants of the neighborood were really annoyed and also fearful of him. Mohammad was really anxious. He could abuse his little son. What could he do?c
Amintnt continues:
Mohammad was terribly afraid....... He directly came back to the home and rushed to the telephone........ Archi, Amir and Samantha wondered why Mohammad was so afraid........ They asked him but got no replies........ " Please help me..... My son.... My son has been kidnapped by Amintnt......." Mohammad said to the officer on the phone.........." Please calm down, we will do our best to find him" Officer tried to cool him down........ He told the officer all the story..... Other folks also were listening to him...... l
At the police station........ l
As they entered the police station, detective Narges known as love-to-learn appeared...... She was one of the strangest and cleverest detective in the city...... l
"Amintnt...... He's the fiercest criminal in the city....... But don't worry..... I do know my job and I know how to handle this case" Love-to-learn said..........l
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P.s: You all got married but me:19:........ Amiiiiiiiiiiiirrrrr, I'll kill you........ You know how? I'll put a TNT in your mouth:31:l
A r c h i
25-07-2007, 00:14
@mir returned home from hospital and they thanked God sincerely for his very valuable reward. They had sit in the room and were discussing about the details of the wedding ceremony that once Mohammad noticed that he could not hear Ali's voice. He asked Archi where he was. But Archi also didn't know. They all investigated everywhere but Ali was not anywhere. He had been disappeared. Mohammad rushed to the street agitatedly and asked everyone if he had seen Ali. Finally one of the neighbors told him that he had seen AminTNT that had kidnapped Ali.
AminTNT was the head of teenage rabble gang of the neighborhood and he was really a vicious boy. He was called TNT because everywhere he went, a very bad thing happebned there. The habitants of the neighborood were really annoyed and also fearful of him. Mohammad was really anxious. He could abuse his little son. What could he do?c
Amintnt continues:
Mohammad was terribly afraid....... He directly came back to the home and rushed to the telephone........ Archi, Amir and Samantha wondered why Mohammad was so afraid........ They asked him but got no replies........ " Please help me..... My son.... My son has been kidnapped by Amintnt......." Mohammad said to the officer on the phone.........." Please calm down, we will do our best to find him" Officer tried to cool him down........ He told the officer all the story..... Other folks also were listening to him...... l
At the police station........ l
As they entered the police station, detective Narges known as love-to-learn appeared...... She was one of the strangest and cleverest detective in the city...... l
"Amintnt...... He's the fiercest criminal in the city....... But don't worry..... I do know my job and I know how to handle this case" Love-to-learn said..........l
Archi and Mohammad was so worried about their son..they couldn't even eat or sleep. Archi was crying all the time..She couldn't imagine that her lovely son was in the hands of a very scary criminal "Amin tnt" . " What do you think he's doing now" She asked Maryam. "Did they give enough food to Ali" She continued." Maryam and @mir was trying to calm them down but they couldn't. It wasn't so easy. They had completely forgotten their marriage. A few days later in the early morning, @mir went to Maryam's bed and he whispered" will you marry me now?" ..."oh my God, what in earth you're doing here ??What are you talking about? In this situation..It's not fair, Archi and Mohammad are in their very bad days and you're talking about marriage?".. Amir answered that they would go to the place just to become legally wedded husband and wife. And after everything finished they could hold their party .." I feel much better this way" Amir added.l
minizoro
28-07-2007, 01:34
I wish I don't interrupt you my friends this topic is really useful
i think this can help you if you want to write detective stories
برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید
i love detective stories too
specially Sherlock Holmes's stories
A r c h i
28-07-2007, 17:59
As noone continued,I'll continue myself :31:
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amir returned home from hospital and they thanked God sincerely for his very valuable reward. They had sit in the room and were discussing about the details of the wedding ceremony that once Mohammad noticed that he could not hear Ali's voice. He asked Archi where he was. But Archi also didn't know. They all investigated everywhere but Ali was not anywhere. He had been disappeared. Mohammad rushed to the street agitatedly and asked everyone if he had seen Ali. Finally one of the neighbors told him that he had seen AminTNT that had kidnapped Ali.
AminTNT was the head of teenage rabble gang of the neighborhood and he was really a vicious boy. He was called TNT because everywhere he went, a very bad thing happebned there. The habitants of the neighborood were really annoyed and also fearful of him. Mohammad was really anxious. He could abuse his little son. What could he do?c
Amintnt continues:
Mohammad was terribly afraid....... He directly came back to the home and rushed to the telephone........ Archi, Amir and Samantha wondered why Mohammad was so afraid........ They asked him but got no replies........ " Please help me..... My son.... My son has been kidnapped by Amintnt......." Mohammad said to the officer on the phone.........." Please calm down, we will do our best to find him" Officer tried to cool him down........ He told the officer all the story..... Other folks also were listening to him...... l
At the police station........ l
As they entered the police station, detective Narges known as love-to-learn appeared...... She was one of the strangest and cleverest detective in the city...... l
"Amintnt...... He's the fiercest criminal in the city....... But don't worry..... I do know my job and I know how to handle this case" Love-to-learn said..........l
Archi and Mohammad was so worried about their son..they couldn't even eat or sleep. Archi was crying all the time..She couldn't imagine that her lovely son was in the hands of a very scary criminal "Amin tnt" . " What do you think he's doing now" She asked Maryam. "Did they give enough food to Ali" She continued." Maryam and @mir was trying to calm them down but they couldn't. It wasn't so easy. They had completely forgotten their marriage. A few days later in the early morning, @mir went to Maryam's bed and he whispered" will you marry me now?" ..."oh my God, what in earth you're doing here ??What are you talking about? In this situation..It's not fair, Archi and Mohammad are in their very bad days and you're talking about marriage?".. Amir answered that they would go to the place just to become legally wedded husband and wife. And after everything finished they could hold their party .." I feel much better this way" Amir added
Maryam agreed with what amir had told her, she felt much better this way, to be with him and around him all the time. So they became legally wedded husband and wife. On their way home they went to Police station to ask about Ali and amintnt. They talked to detective love-to-learn. She told them that they're doing their best to find a trace form amintnt, but he's nowhere and nobody has seen them since he kidnapped Ali. "I have one of our best detectives and he'll help us to take amin in captivity he's so professional in his job ..his name is "Vahed" . Detective said.l
minizoro
28-07-2007, 20:52
I'll continue myself
I'll join to you but let me first finish reading all story up to here. i't seems it's very long dramatic story. i'd have good minds to continue story...
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i think it would be better if you and each people who writes here not to copy all pervious posts just write the following. by this topic won't be such crowded/
THANKS
mohammad.clergyman
29-07-2007, 11:45
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As noone continued,I'll continue myself :31:
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amir returned home from hospital and they thanked God sincerely for his very valuable reward. They had sit in the room and were discussing about the details of the wedding ceremony that once Mohammad noticed that he could not hear Ali's voice. He asked Archi where he was. But Archi also didn't know. They all investigated everywhere but Ali was not anywhere. He had been disappeared. Mohammad rushed to the street agitatedly and asked everyone if he had seen Ali. Finally one of the neighbors told him that he had seen AminTNT that had kidnapped Ali.
AminTNT was the head of teenage rabble gang of the neighborhood and he was really a vicious boy. He was called TNT because everywhere he went, a very bad thing happebned there. The habitants of the neighborood were really annoyed and also fearful of him. Mohammad was really anxious. He could abuse his little son. What could he do?c
Amintnt continues:
Mohammad was terribly afraid....... He directly came back to the home and rushed to the telephone........ Archi, Amir and Samantha wondered why Mohammad was so afraid........ They asked him but got no replies........ " Please help me..... My son.... My son has been kidnapped by Amintnt......." Mohammad said to the officer on the phone.........." Please calm down, we will do our best to find him" Officer tried to cool him down........ He told the officer all the story..... Other folks also were listening to him...... l
At the police station........ l
As they entered the police station, detective Narges known as love-to-learn appeared...... She was one of the strangest and cleverest detective in the city...... l
"Amintnt...... He's the fiercest criminal in the city....... But don't worry..... I do know my job and I know how to handle this case" Love-to-learn said..........l
Archi and Mohammad was so worried about their son..they couldn't even eat or sleep. Archi was crying all the time..She couldn't imagine that her lovely son was in the hands of a very scary criminal "Amin tnt" . " What do you think he's doing now" She asked Maryam. "Did they give enough food to Ali" She continued." Maryam and @mir was trying to calm them down but they couldn't. It wasn't so easy. They had completely forgotten their marriage. A few days later in the early morning, @mir went to Maryam's bed and he whispered" will you marry me now?" ..."oh my God, what in earth you're doing here ??What are you talking about? In this situation..It's not fair, Archi and Mohammad are in their very bad days and you're talking about marriage?".. Amir answered that they would go to the place just to become legally wedded husband and wife. And after everything finished they could hold their party .." I feel much better this way" Amir added
Maryam agreed with what amir had told her, she felt much better this way, to be with him and around him all the time. So they became legally wedded husband and wife. On their way home they went to Police station to ask about Ali and amintnt. They talked to detective love-to-learn. She told them that they're doing their best to find a trace form amintnt, but he's nowhere and nobody has seen them since he kidnapped Ali. "I have one of our best detectives and he'll help us to take amin in captivity he's so professional in his job ..his name is "Vahed" . Detective said.
Vahed was an expert , well- exprienced and kind-hearted detective
Mohammad and archi - his lovely but now disapointed wife - finally decided to look for their son seriously due to the heavy burden of loneliness
therefor they talked to detective vahed to get more information and follow the best solution
: he said as his final report about amintnt
unfortunately I have got to tell you that he has escaped to the United States and he is now in New York city
following his trace ; I have to travel there
: Immidiately Mohammad burst into tears and said
Do you mean that I should stay at home and die looking forward to see my son once again
! I never can tolerate this state then he added : I will come with you
l
A r c h i
29-07-2007, 13:31
amir returned home from hospital and they thanked God sincerely for his very valuable reward. They had sit in the room and were discussing about the details of the wedding ceremony that once Mohammad noticed that he could not hear Ali's voice. He asked Archi where he was. But Archi also didn't know. They all investigated everywhere but Ali was not anywhere. He had been disappeared. Mohammad rushed to the street agitatedly and asked everyone if he had seen Ali. Finally one of the neighbors told him that he had seen AminTNT that had kidnapped Ali.
AminTNT was the head of teenage rabble gang of the neighborhood and he was really a vicious boy. He was called TNT because everywhere he went, a very bad thing happebned there. The habitants of the neighborood were really annoyed and also fearful of him. Mohammad was really anxious. He could abuse his little son. What could he do?c
Amintnt continues:
Mohammad was terribly afraid....... He directly came back to the home and rushed to the telephone........ Archi, Amir and Samantha wondered why Mohammad was so afraid........ They asked him but got no replies........ " Please help me..... My son.... My son has been kidnapped by Amintnt......." Mohammad said to the officer on the phone.........." Please calm down, we will do our best to find him" Officer tried to cool him down........ He told the officer all the story..... Other folks also were listening to him...... l
At the police station........ l
As they entered the police station, detective Narges known as love-to-learn appeared...... She was one of the strangest and cleverest detective in the city...... l
"Amintnt...... He's the fiercest criminal in the city....... But don't worry..... I do know my job and I know how to handle this case" Love-to-learn said..........l
Archi and Mohammad was so worried about their son..they couldn't even eat or sleep. Archi was crying all the time..She couldn't imagine that her lovely son was in the hands of a very scary criminal "Amin tnt" . " What do you think he's doing now" She asked Maryam. "Did they give enough food to Ali" She continued." Maryam and @mir was trying to calm them down but they couldn't. It wasn't so easy. They had completely forgotten their marriage. A few days later in the early morning, @mir went to Maryam's bed and he whispered" will you marry me now?" ..."oh my God, what in earth you're doing here ??What are you talking about? In this situation..It's not fair, Archi and Mohammad are in their very bad days and you're talking about marriage?".. Amir answered that they would go to the place just to become legally wedded husband and wife. And after everything finished they could hold their party .." I feel much better this way" Amir added
Maryam agreed with what amir had told her, she felt much better this way, to be with him and around him all the time. So they became legally wedded husband and wife. On their way home they went to Police station to ask about Ali and amintnt. They talked to detective love-to-learn. She told them that they're doing their best to find a trace form amintnt, but he's nowhere and nobody has seen them since he kidnapped Ali. "I have one of our best detectives and he'll help us to take amin in captivity he's so professional in his job ..his name is "Vahed" . Detective said.
Vahed was an expert , well- exprienced and kind-hearted detective.
Mohammad and archi - his lovely but now disapointed wife - finally decided to look for their son seriously due to the heavy burden of loneliness,therefor they talked to detective vahed to get more information and follow the best solution: he said as his final report about amintnt.unfortunately I have got to tell you that he has escaped to the United States and he is now in New York city,following his trace ; I have to travel there: Immidiately Mohammad burst into tears and said:Do you mean that I should stay at home and die looking forward to see my son once again,I never can tolerate this state then he added : I will come with you.
Archi was so shocked, loosing Mohammad and Ali at the same time was unbearable for her. She decided to travle with them. "But I can only take one person with me " Detective Vahed said. "But how can I stay here all alone " Archi replied. They were so depressed when they reached the house , as soon as Archi saw Maryam she burst into tears and told her that she can't go to US with Mohammad. Maryam told her that she can get the visa for her as she's an american. " But it'll take some time" Maryam added. Archi told her that it didn't matter how much time it took. She just want to be with her husband.
Mohammad and Vahed left a week after that. Archi and @mir was waiting for their visa to join them soon. After 3 weeks, They got an email from Us embassy that their visas are ready. Archi was in a Megga happy mood. She had contact with Mohmmad during the past 3 weeks and he was so depressed without her.But good news was that they could find amintnt's trace in NY
Abstract of the story up to now
Once upon a time, Samantha and Nicholas, two poor young mates lived. In an accident Nicholas became paralyzed while his wife was pregnant. Nicholad hanged himself after a hard depression and Samantha missed her fetus because she reached at the hospital late. Then her friend's husband wanted her to become his secratary. She went there but soon realized that he had devilish intentions in his mind.
Then she decided to quit USA and migrate to Iran. In the airport, she saw @mir and they fell in love with each other. They went to Qom to visit @mir's friend and his family, Archi and Ali, their little son, in order to ask how could they marry. Finally Samantha converted to Islam and chsnged her name to Maryam in order to get married with @mir. While they were getting prepared for wedding, they knew that @mir had a malignant tumor in his brain and he was in the last six months of his life. Maryam went to Jamkaran and beseeched God to save his life and God granted @mir's health again.
amir returned home from hospital and they thanked God sincerely for his very valuable reward. They had sit in the room and were discussing about the details of the wedding ceremony that once Mohammad noticed that he could not hear Ali's voice. He asked Archi where he was. But Archi also didn't know. They all investigated everywhere but Ali was not anywhere. He had been disappeared. Mohammad rushed to the street agitatedly and asked everyone if he had seen Ali. Finally one of the neighbors told him that he had seen AminTNT that had kidnapped Ali.
AminTNT was the head of teenage rabble gang of the neighborhood and he was really a vicious boy. He was called TNT because everywhere he went, a very bad thing happebned there. The habitants of the neighborood were really annoyed and also fearful of him. Mohammad was really anxious. He could abuse his little son. What could he do?c
Mohammad was terribly afraid....... He directly came back to the home and rushed to the telephone........ Archi, Amir and Samantha wondered why Mohammad was so afraid........ They asked him but got no replies........ " Please help me..... My son.... My son has been kidnapped by Amintnt......." Mohammad said to the officer on the phone.........." Please calm down, we will do our best to find him" Officer tried to cool him down........ He told the officer all the story..... Other folks also were listening to him...... l
At the police station........ l
As they entered the police station, detective Narges known as love-to-learn appeared...... She was one of the strangest and cleverest detective in the city...... l
"Amintnt...... He's the fiercest criminal in the city....... But don't worry..... I do know my job and I know how to handle this case" Love-to-learn said..........l
Archi and Mohammad was so worried about their son..they couldn't even eat or sleep. Archi was crying all the time..She couldn't imagine that her lovely son was in the hands of a very scary criminal "Amin tnt" . " What do you think he's doing now" She asked Maryam. "Did they give enough food to Ali" She continued." Maryam and @mir was trying to calm them down but they couldn't. It wasn't so easy. They had completely forgotten their marriage. A few days later in the early morning, @mir went to Maryam's bed and he whispered" will you marry me now?" ..."oh my God, what in earth you're doing here ??What are you talking about? In this situation..It's not fair, Archi and Mohammad are in their very bad days and you're talking about marriage?".. Amir answered that they would go to the place just to become legally wedded husband and wife. And after everything finished they could hold their party .." I feel much better this way" Amir added
Maryam agreed with what amir had told her, she felt much better this way, to be with him and around him all the time. So they became legally wedded husband and wife. On their way home they went to Police station to ask about Ali and amintnt. They talked to detective love-to-learn. She told them that they're doing their best to find a trace form amintnt, but he's nowhere and nobody has seen them since he kidnapped Ali. "I have one of our best detectives and he'll help us to take amin in captivity he's so professional in his job ..his name is "Vahed" . Detective said.
Vahed was an expert , well- exprienced and kind-hearted detective.
Mohammad and archi - his lovely but now disapointed wife - finally decided to look for their son seriously due to the heavy burden of loneliness,therefor they talked to detective vahed to get more information and follow the best solution: he said as his final report about amintnt.unfortunately I have got to tell you that he has escaped to the United States and he is now in New York city,following his trace ; I have to travel there: Immidiately Mohammad burst into tears and said:Do you mean that I should stay at home and die looking forward to see my son once again,I never can tolerate this state then he added : I will come with you.
Archi was so shocked, loosing Mohammad and Ali at the same time was unbearable for her. She decided to travle with them. "But I can only take one person with me " Detective Vahed said. "But how can I stay here all alone " Archi replied. They were so depressed when they reached the house , as soon as Archi saw Maryam she burst into tears and told her that she can't go to US with Mohammad. Maryam told her that she can get the visa for her as she's an american. " But it'll take some time" Maryam added. Archi told her that it didn't matter how much time it took. She just want to be with her husband.
Mohammad and Vahed left a week after that. Archi and @mir was waiting for their visa to join them soon. After 3 weeks, They got an email from Us embassy that their visas are ready. Archi was in a Megga happy mood. She had contact with Mohmmad during the past 3 weeks and he was so depressed without her.But good news was that they could find amintnt's trace in NY
Next morning, the telephone rang. @mir picked up the phone. It was detective love-to-learn. After common greetings, love-to-learn told @mir that they had found a corpse of a little boy in the deserts around Qom whose specifications completely matched with Ali. Love-to-learn said "I'm so sorry to inform you that we could find signs of hitting and striking, stabbing with a knife, burning with cigarettes and sexual abuse on his body. You should come tomorrow to identify the dead body."
@mir was really shocked. How could he tell Archi about this heart-breaking, onerous and tremendous disaster?c
A r c h i
30-07-2007, 12:45
Abstract of the story up to now
Once upon a time, Samantha and Nicholas, two poor young mates lived. In an accident Nicholas became paralyzed while his wife was pregnant. Nicholad hanged himself after a hard depression and Samantha missed her fetus because she reached at the hospital late. Then her friend's husband wanted her to become his secratary. She went there but soon realized that he had devilish intentions in his mind.
Then she decided to quit USA and migrate to Iran. In the airport, she saw @mir and they fell in love with each other. They went to Qom to visit @mir's friend and his family, Archi and Ali, their little son, in order to ask how could they marry. Finally Samantha converted to Islam and chsnged her name to Maryam in order to get married with @mir. While they were getting prepared for wedding, they knew that @mir had a malignant tumor in his brain and he was in the last six months of his life. Maryam went to Jamkaran and beseeched God to save his life and God granted @mir's health again.
amir returned home from hospital and they thanked God sincerely for his very valuable reward. They had sit in the room and were discussing about the details of the wedding ceremony that once Mohammad noticed that he could not hear Ali's voice. He asked Archi where he was. But Archi also didn't know. They all investigated everywhere but Ali was not anywhere. He had been disappeared. Mohammad rushed to the street agitatedly and asked everyone if he had seen Ali. Finally one of the neighbors told him that he had seen AminTNT that had kidnapped Ali.
AminTNT was the head of teenage rabble gang of the neighborhood and he was really a vicious boy. He was called TNT because everywhere he went, a very bad thing happebned there. The habitants of the neighborood were really annoyed and also fearful of him. Mohammad was really anxious. He could abuse his little son. What could he do?c
Mohammad was terribly afraid....... He directly came back to the home and rushed to the telephone........ Archi, Amir and Samantha wondered why Mohammad was so afraid........ They asked him but got no replies........ " Please help me..... My son.... My son has been kidnapped by Amintnt......." Mohammad said to the officer on the phone.........." Please calm down, we will do our best to find him" Officer tried to cool him down........ He told the officer all the story..... Other folks also were listening to him...... l
At the police station........ l
As they entered the police station, detective Narges known as love-to-learn appeared...... She was one of the strangest and cleverest detective in the city...... l
"Amintnt...... He's the fiercest criminal in the city....... But don't worry..... I do know my job and I know how to handle this case" Love-to-learn said..........l
Archi and Mohammad was so worried about their son..they couldn't even eat or sleep. Archi was crying all the time..She couldn't imagine that her lovely son was in the hands of a very scary criminal "Amin tnt" . " What do you think he's doing now" She asked Maryam. "Did they give enough food to Ali" She continued." Maryam and @mir was trying to calm them down but they couldn't. It wasn't so easy. They had completely forgotten their marriage. A few days later in the early morning, @mir went to Maryam's bed and he whispered" will you marry me now?" ..."oh my God, what in earth you're doing here ??What are you talking about? In this situation..It's not fair, Archi and Mohammad are in their very bad days and you're talking about marriage?".. Amir answered that they would go to the place just to become legally wedded husband and wife. And after everything finished they could hold their party .." I feel much better this way" Amir added
Maryam agreed with what amir had told her, she felt much better this way, to be with him and around him all the time. So they became legally wedded husband and wife. On their way home they went to Police station to ask about Ali and amintnt. They talked to detective love-to-learn. She told them that they're doing their best to find a trace form amintnt, but he's nowhere and nobody has seen them since he kidnapped Ali. "I have one of our best detectives and he'll help us to take amin in captivity he's so professional in his job ..his name is "Vahed" . Detective said.
Vahed was an expert , well- exprienced and kind-hearted detective.
Mohammad and archi - his lovely but now disapointed wife - finally decided to look for their son seriously due to the heavy burden of loneliness,therefor they talked to detective vahed to get more information and follow the best solution: he said as his final report about amintnt.unfortunately I have got to tell you that he has escaped to the United States and he is now in New York city,following his trace ; I have to travel there: Immidiately Mohammad burst into tears and said:Do you mean that I should stay at home and die looking forward to see my son once again,I never can tolerate this state then he added : I will come with you.
Archi was so shocked, loosing Mohammad and Ali at the same time was unbearable for her. She decided to travle with them. "But I can only take one person with me " Detective Vahed said. "But how can I stay here all alone " Archi replied. They were so depressed when they reached the house , as soon as Archi saw Maryam she burst into tears and told her that she can't go to US with Mohammad. Maryam told her that she can get the visa for her as she's an american. " But it'll take some time" Maryam added. Archi told her that it didn't matter how much time it took. She just want to be with her husband.
Mohammad and Vahed left a week after that. Archi and @mir was waiting for their visa to join them soon. After 3 weeks, They got an email from Us embassy that their visas are ready. Archi was in a Megga happy mood. She had contact with Mohmmad during the past 3 weeks and he was so depressed without her.But good news was that they could find amintnt's trace in NY
Next morning, the telephone rang. @mir picked up the phone. It was detective love-to-learn. After common greetings, love-to-learn told @mir that they had found a corpse of a little boy in the deserts around Qom whose specifications completely matched with Ali. Love-to-learn said "I'm so sorry to inform you that we could find signs of hitting and striking, stabbing with a knife, burning with cigarettes and sexual abuse on his body. You should come tomorrow to identify the dead body."
@mir was really shocked. How could he tell Archi about this heart-breaking, onerous and tremendous disaster?
@mir decided to tell the truth to Maryam so that she could tell Archi and he himself talked with Mohammad. It was such a bad moment for all of them. As soon as Archi heard the news she fainted. Maryam and @mir took her to hospital. Maryam told @mir that detective Vahed would tell the truth to Mohammad and they would be back in Iran so soon. The next day they went to identify the body, Archi was still in hospital. So @mir and Maryam went there. After a while they saw a dead body of a child without head :18:. " But how I can identify him, there's no head " Ali told the officer. " Do you know any sign in his body" Officer asked. @mir answered that he should ask his mother .l
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p.s.
signs of hitting and striking, stabbing with a knife, burning with cigarettes and sexual abuse on his bodyHey this is my son you're talking about, @mir I'll kill you with my own hands:27:l
minizoro
31-07-2007, 01:53
minizoro begins
Rest of Story
Mohammad & detective Vahed still haven't got back from US. When @mir went to Archi and asked her to aware him if there are any other signs of Ali's identity except his head Archi couldn't answer him.
In fact Archi in that kind of spiritual condition couldn't think true about anything, so what could @mir do? When @mir consulted with his wife she advised him to call
Mohammad, as he is Ali's father and surly he could help them in the horrible case.
At that day evening @mir called Mohammad. Fortunately Mohammad & Vahed haven't leaved US because of visa problems.
At first @mir completely explained to Mohammad what had happened at legal medicine and that Archi couldn't help them. Mohammad shocked when he heard that that body had lost its head.
"…So Mohammad is there any signs in his body that is special for Ali please tell me now, we should make sure if that body isn't Ali's"
"On the phone Mohammad suddenly stopped groaning:
"Sign?!" Mohammad said, after a while he continued "Oh, I think I can remember one."
"What, what's that?" @mir asked.
"When he was a child and we were going to cut out his navel suddenly the doctor made a deep pain in his skin. If you look for it very carefully you won't miss it"
Tomorrow morning @mir got to legal medicine as early as he could, he went to the corpse but he couldn't find any sign of every thing that Mohammad had talk about it.
@mir got back to Archi and told her what happened. Archi became more comfort.
"Oh really @mir… Gee @mir you made my mind free. but for being sure I'd like to chek it by my self" Archi said.
@mir & Maryam agreed too.
Archi got the same result by checking out the corpse of miserable boy. While they were getting out the legal medicine Archi saw detective Narges (love-to-learn) who was running unto her. She had a bad run
"Uh he...llo Ar…chi … thank God …" detective Narges said while she was panting deeply.
"Calm down" Archi said to Narges. "What's wrong?"
"Good news … that's not Ali" detective Narges replied. "DNA tests proves it"
"Uh my dear firend thank you but we already know this" Archi said
"And do you know where is Ali?" detective Narges continued. "Ali is in US but he isn't in Amintnt. He just rubbed it from Iran by the order of someone else"
"Really??? Who???" Maryam asked
"We don't know exactly who, but my husband minizoro gusses that it would be by the order of your boss."
"Your husband?? My boss?? What are you talking about??" Maryam Asked
"See my husband minizoro had worked by the most famous detective Sherlock Holmes. He is very profitional in vague cases. Do you remember Sara? Your friend in US. You had worked for his husband a while and you have came to Iran.
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p.s: now i think it's enough detective
thanks mohammad
what does p.s stands for??
A r c h i
31-07-2007, 21:05
Abstract of the story up to now
Once upon a time, Samantha and Nicholas, two poor young mates lived. In an accident Nicholas became paralyzed while his wife was pregnant. Nicholad hanged himself after a hard depression and Samantha missed her fetus because she reached at the hospital late. Then her friend's husband wanted her to become his secratary. She went there but soon realized that he had devilish intentions in his mind.
Then she decided to quit USA and migrate to Iran. In the airport, she saw @mir and they fell in love with each other. They went to Qom to visit @mir's friend and his family, Archi and Ali, their little son, in order to ask how could they marry. Finally Samantha converted to Islam and chsnged her name to Maryam in order to get married with @mir. While they were getting prepared for wedding, they knew that @mir had a malignant tumor in his brain and he was in the last six months of his life. Maryam went to Jamkaran and beseeched God to save his life and God granted @mir's health again.
amir returned home from hospital and they thanked God sincerely for his very valuable reward. They had sit in the room and were discussing about the details of the wedding ceremony that once Mohammad noticed that he could not hear Ali's voice. He asked Archi where he was. But Archi also didn't know. They all investigated everywhere but Ali was not anywhere. He had been disappeared. Mohammad rushed to the street agitatedly and asked everyone if he had seen Ali. Finally one of the neighbors told him that he had seen AminTNT that had kidnapped Ali.
AminTNT was the head of teenage rabble gang of the neighborhood and he was really a vicious boy. He was called TNT because everywhere he went, a very bad thing happebned there. The habitants of the neighborood were really annoyed and also fearful of him. Mohammad was really anxious. He could abuse his little son. What could he do?c
Mohammad was terribly afraid....... He directly came back to the home and rushed to the telephone........ Archi, Amir and Samantha wondered why Mohammad was so afraid........ They asked him but got no replies........ " Please help me..... My son.... My son has been kidnapped by Amintnt......." Mohammad said to the officer on the phone.........." Please calm down, we will do our best to find him" Officer tried to cool him down........ He told the officer all the story..... Other folks also were listening to him...... l
At the police station........ l
As they entered the police station, detective Narges known as love-to-learn appeared...... She was one of the strangest and cleverest detective in the city...... l
"Amintnt...... He's the fiercest criminal in the city....... But don't worry..... I do know my job and I know how to handle this case" Love-to-learn said..........l
Archi and Mohammad was so worried about their son..they couldn't even eat or sleep. Archi was crying all the time..She couldn't imagine that her lovely son was in the hands of a very scary criminal "Amin tnt" . " What do you think he's doing now" She asked Maryam. "Did they give enough food to Ali" She continued." Maryam and @mir was trying to calm them down but they couldn't. It wasn't so easy. They had completely forgotten their marriage. A few days later in the early morning, @mir went to Maryam's bed and he whispered" will you marry me now?" ..."oh my God, what in earth you're doing here ??What are you talking about? In this situation..It's not fair, Archi and Mohammad are in their very bad days and you're talking about marriage?".. Amir answered that they would go to the place just to become legally wedded husband and wife. And after everything finished they could hold their party .." I feel much better this way" Amir added
Maryam agreed with what amir had told her, she felt much better this way, to be with him and around him all the time. So they became legally wedded husband and wife. On their way home they went to Police station to ask about Ali and amintnt. They talked to detective love-to-learn. She told them that they're doing their best to find a trace form amintnt, but he's nowhere and nobody has seen them since he kidnapped Ali. "I have one of our best detectives and he'll help us to take amin in captivity he's so professional in his job ..his name is "Vahed" . Detective said.
Vahed was an expert , well- exprienced and kind-hearted detective.
Mohammad and archi - his lovely but now disapointed wife - finally decided to look for their son seriously due to the heavy burden of loneliness,therefor they talked to detective vahed to get more information and follow the best solution: he said as his final report about amintnt.unfortunately I have got to tell you that he has escaped to the United States and he is now in New York city,following his trace ; I have to travel there: Immidiately Mohammad burst into tears and said:Do you mean that I should stay at home and die looking forward to see my son once again,I never can tolerate this state then he added : I will come with you.
Archi was so shocked, loosing Mohammad and Ali at the same time was unbearable for her. She decided to travle with them. "But I can only take one person with me " Detective Vahed said. "But how can I stay here all alone " Archi replied. They were so depressed when they reached the house , as soon as Archi saw Maryam she burst into tears and told her that she can't go to US with Mohammad. Maryam told her that she can get the visa for her as she's an american. " But it'll take some time" Maryam added. Archi told her that it didn't matter how much time it took. She just want to be with her husband.
Mohammad and Vahed left a week after that. Archi and @mir was waiting for their visa to join them soon. After 3 weeks, They got an email from Us embassy that their visas are ready. Archi was in a Megga happy mood. She had contact with Mohmmad during the past 3 weeks and he was so depressed without her.But good news was that they could find amintnt's trace in NY
Next morning, the telephone rang. @mir picked up the phone. It was detective love-to-learn. After common greetings, love-to-learn told @mir that they had found a corpse of a little boy in the deserts around Qom whose specifications completely matched with Ali. Love-to-learn said "I'm so sorry to inform you that we could find signs of hitting and striking, stabbing with a knife, burning with cigarettes and sexual abuse on his body. You should come tomorrow to identify the dead body."
@mir was really shocked. How could he tell Archi about this heart-breaking, onerous and tremendous disaster?
@mir decided to tell the truth to Maryam so that she could tell Archi and he himself talked with Mohammad. It was such a bad moment for all of them. As soon as Archi heard the news she fainted. Maryam and @mir took her to hospital. Maryam told @mir that detective Vahed would tell the truth to Mohammad and they would be back in Iran so soon. The next day they went to identify the body, Archi was still in hospital. So @mir and Maryam went there. After a while they saw a dead body of a child without head [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] " But how I can identify him, there's no head " Ali told the officer. " Do you know any sign in his body" Officer asked. @mir answered that he should ask his mother .
Mohammad & detective Vahed still haven't got back from US. When @mir went to Archi and asked her to aware him if there are any other signs of Ali's identity except his head Archi couldn't answer him.
In fact Archi in that kind of spiritual condition couldn't think true about anything, so what could @mir do? When @mir consulted with his wife she advised him to call Mohammad, as he is Ali's father and surly he could help them in the horrible case.
At that day evening @mir called Mohammad. Fortunately Mohammad & Vahed haven't leaved US because of visa problems.At first @mir completely explained to Mohammad what had happened at legal medicine and that Archi couldn't help them. Mohammad shocked when he heard that that body had lost its head.
"…So Mohammad is there any signs in his body that is special for Ali please tell me now, we should make sure if that body isn't Ali's""On the phone Mohammad suddenly stopped groaning:"Sign?!" Mohammad said, after a while he continued "Oh, I think I can remember one." "What, what's that?" @mir asked. "When he was a child and we were going to cut out his navel suddenly the doctor made a deep pain in his skin. If you look for it very carefully you won't miss it"
Tomorrow morning @mir got to legal medicine as early as he could, he went to the corpse but he couldn't find any sign of every thing that Mohammad had talk about it. @mir got back to Archi and told her what happened. Archi became more comfort. "Oh really @mir… Gee @mir you made my mind free. but for being sure I'd like to chek it by my self" Archi said.
@mir & Maryam agreed too. Archi got the same result by checking out the corpse of miserable boy. While they were getting out the legal medicine Archi saw detective Narges (love-to-learn) who was running unto her. She had a bad run "Uh he...llo Ar…chi … thank God …" detective Narges said while she was panting deeply. "Calm down" Archi said to Narges. "What's wrong?" "Good news … that's not Ali" detective Narges replied. "DNA tests proves it" "Uh my dear firend thank you but we already know this" Archi said
"And do you know where is Ali?" detective Narges continued. "Ali is in US but he isn't in Amintnt. He just rubbed it from Iran by the order of someone else"
"Really??? Who???" Maryam asked. "We don't know exactly who, but my husband minizoro gusses that it would be by the order of your boss."
"Your husband?? My boss?? What are you talking about??" Maryam Asked
"See my husband minizoro had worked by the most famous detective Sherlock Holmes. He is very professional in vague cases. Do you remember Sara? Your friend in US. You had worked for his husband a while and you have came to Iran.
Archi was so confused . What was all this about ? The only thin she could think about was her lovely son and nothing else. "So what should I do to get my son" Archi asked. "Mmmm .. well we're holding a meeting this afternoon to talk about this case, I think the best choice is going to US with detective minizoro and join Vahed and Mohammad there " Love-to learn answered. @mir added that they should pack so soon to reach to the first flight that was going to US.
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p.s. Hey minizoro, just please add one or two paragraphs to the story , not that much long. But the story you've made was great and it shows that you 've read all the story carefully.
anyway, you professionally added yourself to the story :31:l
p.s.2. " P.S." Stands for
PostScript: you write at the end of your letter to add something
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Please Wait ....
Now Vahed Is Going To Continue The Story!
I will put it here soon, thanks chums
minizoro
01-08-2007, 11:39
p.s. Hey minizoro, just please add one or two paragraphs to the story , not that much long. But the story you've made was great and it shows that you 've read all the story carefully.
anyway, you professionally added yourself to the story l
p.s.2. " P.S." Stands for
PostScript: you write at the end of your letter to add something
thanks Archi well i think inorder to add my self to the story it was necesery
it will be very intresting
i'll continue again i'm thinking of it
you know I think adding just 1 or 2 paragraphs is not enough. if we want to write good and be profitional writer we should write more comprehensive
i think i have lot's of gramatcal problems in my text please inform me
I've put the first part of the old story "THE MAN WHO ESCAPED" please read it. It's an old story. That I don’t think you can find it.
برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید
Abstract of the story up to now
Once upon a time, Samantha and Nicholas, two poor young mates lived. In an accident Nicholas became paralyzed while his wife was pregnant. Nicholas hanged himself after a hard depression and Samantha missed her fetus because she reached at the hospital late. Then her friend's husband wanted her to become his secretary. She went there but soon realized that he had devilish intentions in his mind. Then she decided to quit USA and migrate to Iran. In the airport, she saw @mir and they fell in love with each other. They went to Qom to visit @mir's friend and his family, Archi and Ali, their little son, in order to ask how they could marry. Finally Samantha converted to Islam and changed her name to Maryam in order to get married with @mir. While they were getting prepared for wedding, they knew that @mir had a malignant tumor in his brain and he was in the last six months of his life. Maryam went to Jamkaran and beseeches God to save his life and God granted @mir's health again.
Story resumption:amir returned home from hospital and they thanked God sincerely for his very valuable reward. They had sit in the room and were discussing about the details of the wedding ceremony that once Mohammad noticed that he could not hear Ali's voice. He asked Archi where he was. But Archi also didn't know. They all investigated everywhere but Ali was not anywhere. He had been disappeared. Mohammad rushed to the street agitatedly and asked everyone if he had seen Ali. Finally one of the neighbors told him that he had seen AminTNT that had kidnapped Ali.AminTNT was the head of teenage rabble gang of the neighborhood and he was really a vicious boy. He was called TNT because everywhere he went, a very bad thing happened there. The habitants of the neighborhood were really annoyed and also fearful of him. Mohammad was really anxious. He could abuse his little son. What could he do?cMohammad was terribly afraid....... He directly came back to the home and rushed to the telephone........ Archi, Amir and Samantha wondered why Mohammad was so afraid........ They asked him but got no replies........ “Please help me..... My son.... My son has been kidnapped by Amintnt......." Mohammad said to the officer on the phone.........." Please calm down, we will do our best to find him" Officer tried to cool him down........ He told the officer the entire story..... Other folks also were listening to him...... l
At the police station........!
As they entered the police station, detective Narges known as love-to-learn appeared...... She was one of the strangest and cleverest detectives in the city...... l"Amintnt...... He's the fiercest criminal in the city....... But don't worry..... I do know my job and I know how to handle this case" Love-to-learn said..........lArchi and Mohammad was so worried about their son…They couldn't even eat or sleep. Archi was crying all the time..She couldn't imagine that her lovely son was in the hands of a very scary criminal "Amin tnt" . “What do you think he's doing now" She asked Maryam. "Did they give enough food to Ali" She continued." Maryam and @mir was trying to calm them down but they couldn't. It wasn't so easy. They had completely forgotten their marriage. A few days later in the early morning, @mir went to Maryam's bed and he whispered" will you marry me now?" ..."oh my God, what in earth you're doing here?? What are you talking about? In this situation..It's not fair, Archi and Mohammad are in their very bad days and you're talking about marriage?".. Amir answered that they would go to the place just to become legally wedded husband and wife. And after everything finished they could hold their party .." I feel much better this way" Amir addedMaryam agreed with what amir had told her, she felt much better this way, to be with him and around him all the time. So they became legally wedded husband and wife. On their way home they went to Police station to ask about Ali and amintnt. They talked to detective love-to-learn. She told them that they're doing their best to find a trace form amintnt, but he's nowhere and nobody has seen them since he kidnapped Ali. "I have one of our best detectives and he'll help us to take amin in captivity he's so professional in his job ..his name is "Vahed" . Detective said.
Analyzing the adventure!
Vahed was an expert, well- experienced and kind-hearted detective.Mohammad and archi - his lovely but now disappointed wife - finally decided to look for their son seriously due to the heavy burden of loneliness,therefor they talked to detective vahed to get more information and follow the best solution: he said as his final report about amintnt.unfortunately I have got to tell you that he has escaped to the United States and he is now in New York city,following his trace ; I have to travel there: Immediately Mohammad burst into tears and said:Do you mean that I should stay at home and die looking forward to see my son once again,I never can tolerate this state then he added : I will come with you.Archi was so shocked, loosing Mohammad and Ali at the same time was unbearable for her. She decided to travel with them. "But I can only take one person with me “Detective Vahed said. "But how can I stay here all alone " Archi replied. They were so depressed when they reached the house, as soon as Archi saw Maryam she burst into tears and told her that she can't go to US with Mohammad. Maryam told her that she can get the visa for her as she's an American. “But it'll take some time" Maryam added. Archi told her that it didn't matter how much time it took. She just want to be with her husband. Mohammad and Vahed left a week after that. Archi and @mir was waiting for their visa to join them soon. After 3 weeks, they got an email from us embassy that their visas are ready. Archi was in a mega happy mood. She had contact with Mohmmad during the past 3 weeks and he was so depressed without her.But good news was that they could find amintnt's trace in NYNext morning, the telephone rang. @mir picked up the phone. It was detective love-to-learn. After common greetings, love-to-learn told @mir that they had found a corpse of a little boy in the deserts around Qom whose specifications completely matched with Ali. Love-to-learn said "I'm so sorry to inform you that we could find signs of hitting and striking, stabbing with a knife, burning with cigarettes and sexual abuse on his body. You should come tomorrow to identify the dead body."@mir was really shocked. How could he tell Archi about this heart-breaking, onerous and tremendous disaster?@mir decided to tell the truth to Maryam so that she could tell Archi and he himself talked with Mohammad. It was such a bad moment for all of them. As soon as Archi heard the news she fainted. Maryam and @mir took her to hospital. Maryam told @mir that detective Vahed would tell the truth to Mohammad and they would be back in Iran so soon. The next day they went to identify the body, Archi was still in hospital. So @mir and Maryam went there. After a while they saw a dead body of a child without head. “But how I can identify him, there's no head “Ali told the officer.” Do you know any sign in his body" Officer asked. @mir answered that he should ask his mother.
A big chance...!
Mohammad & detective Vahed still haven't got back from US. When @mir went to Archi and asked her to aware him if there are any other signs of Ali's identity except his head Archi couldn't answer him.
In fact Archi in that kind of spiritual condition couldn't think true about anything, so what could @mir do? When @mir consulted with his wife she advised him to call Mohammad, as he is Ali's father and surly he could help them in the horrible case.
At that day evening @mir called Mohammad. Fortunately Mohammad & Vahed haven't leaved US because of visa problems. At first @mir completely explained to Mohammad what had happened at legal medicine and that Archi couldn't help them. Mohammad shocked when he heard that that body had lost its head.
"…So Mohammad is there any signs in his body that is special for Ali please tell me now, we should make sure if that body isn't Ali's""On the phone Mohammad suddenly stopped groaning:"Sign?!" Mohammad said, after a while he continued "Oh, I think I can remember one." "What, what's that?" @mir asked. "When he was a child and we were going to cut out his navel suddenly the doctor made a deep pain in his skin. If you look for it very carefully you won't miss it"
Tomorrow morning @mir got to legal medicine as early as he could, he went to the corpse but he couldn't find any sign of every thing that Mohammad had talk about it. @mir got back to Archi and told her what happened. Archi became more comfort. "Oh really @mir… Gee @mir you made my mind free. But for being sure I'd like to chek it by my self" Archi said.
@mir & Maryam agreed too. Archi got the same result by checking out the corpse of miserable boy. While they were getting out the legal medicine Archi saw detective Narges (love-to-learn) who was running unto her. She had a bad run "Uh he...llo Ar…chi … thank God …" detective Narges said while she was panting deeply. "Calm down" Archi said to Narges. "What's wrong?" "Good news … that's not Ali" detective Narges replied. "DNA tests proves it" "Uh my dear friend thank you but we already know this" Archi said
"And do you know where is Ali?" detective Narges continued. "Ali is in US but he isn't in Amintnt. He just rubbed it from Iran by the order of someone else"
"Really??? Who???" Maryam asked. "We don't know exactly who, but my husband minizoro gausses that it would be by the order of your boss."
"Your husband?? My boss?? What are you talking about??" Maryam Asked
"See my husband minizoro had worked by the most famous detective Sherlock Holmes. He is very professional in vague cases. Do you remember Sara? Your friend in US. You had worked for his husband a while and you have come to Iran.
Archi was so confused. What was all this about? The only thin she could think about was her lovely son and nothing else. "So what should I do to get my son" Archi asked. "Mmmm .. well we're holding a meeting this afternoon to talk about this case, I think the best choice is going to US with detective minizoro and join Vahed and Mohammad there " Love-to learn answered. @mir added that they should pack so soon to reach to the first flight that was going to US.
And Now! (Vahed continue the story):
After passing all usual works for going to NY, they phoned Vahed and told the entire story to him and Mohammad. “Wow! How can I believe it? Are you right? Oh my god… thanks, thanks god! My son is alive..” Mohammad said happily. So Archi, Maryam, Amir, Narges and Minizoro went to US and visited Vahed and Mohammad, “It’s a bit strange for me, what’s your Boss’s motive?” Vahed said to Archi . Archi said “In fact I don’t know!!! I’m completely confused” all of them were thinking about that subject, after an enigmatic reticence Narges suddenly said “we can find AminTNT, and by finding him we can attain to Sara and her husband and also finally to dear Ali!” “But, how can we find AminTNT?” asked Minizoro. “Oo, yeah! Why I hadn’t thought about that hitherto?! Let’s go! I know how…” Vahed answered.
Everyone there, were wondered, so Vahed explained that there is a special Club in Manhattan that all wrongdoers join there which named “TNT Midnight Club”
“Of course we can find AminTNT or a clue of him in that club” Vahed said stalwartly.
Maryam and Amir decided to be near Archi in a hotel and Vahed, Narges and Minizoro went to Manhattan…l
minizoro
04-08-2007, 02:03
Rest of story:
Finally they reached to the club.
"Now, how should we found him?" asked Narges.
"Let's do a trick. I think it would be better to introduce our selves as his friends" suggested Vahed.
"Great opinion, but not all of us one of us, what's your idea if I go on?" minizoro said.
"I think its better. Your right" said Vahed.
"But honey be careful it would be dangerous." said Narges.
"Ok, ok don't worry about it have you forgot that I've got black belt, now you'd better go to the hotel I'll join you as soon as I can." minizoro replied.
Minizoro tried a lot and finally he got AminTNT.
"Are you Amin TNT?"minizoro asked. "Yeah I'm and you?" Amin said. "Do you remember Mike(Sara's husband)? He told me that you can do lot's of things." minizoro said.
a:"What kind?" m:"For example killing somebody." a:"well it depends; because Mike has sent you to me ok but how much would you pay?" m:"100$ is it ok?" a:"ok,Who is it?" m:"She is a woman named Narges. You should kill her by string in a hotel, and this is the address of hotel kill her tomorrow." a:"And money?" m:"Here is 50$ and the rest will be given tomorrow when you killed her" a:"it seems that everything is ok so the job will be ok too" m:"ok see you tomorrow evening bye."
Minizoro got back to the hotel. "Vahed have you told our plan to others" minizoro asked Vahed. "Yeah my friend, and does every thing went on ok?" asked Vahed "Yes great tomorrow every thing will be solved" minizoro replied.
And the next day they waited for amin TNT. Every one hid at room except Narges. Finally amin TNT reached. He attacked Narges to kill her. He was choking her that minizoro shot him on the ground. "Do you think I'll let you to kill my wife?" minizoro shouted amin tnt. Amin TNT turned around to ran away but he suddenly shoked by Maryam & Archi s' guns. "Hands up" said Archi. Vahed & @mir rushed to Amin TNT and arrested him.
I continue
Vahed asked AminTNT about Ali. At first, he didn't answer, however, after Vahed's persistence and two tough slaps in his face, he told the whole story. He explained that he worked for Mike and Mike was the head of an international Mafia band that kidnapped children from their own families and sold them to rich families that suffered from lack of child. He added that they had sold Ali to a family that lived in Berlin, Germany and whose name was Zimmermann. Mr. Zimmermann was a senior manager of BMW company.l
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P.S. Dear Minizoro, your creativeness in telling mystery stories is appreciated but as dear archi-girl once said, please add only one or two short paragraphs to the story because writing too much makes the story boring. Moreover, take into consideration that @mir and Maryam have not gotten married yet!!l
minizoro
04-08-2007, 20:18
Believe me dear @mir I can't stand my self:13::13::13::41::41:
::5::31::46:31:i did't now that i can write like this
do you think it's good??
@mir and Maryam have not gotten married yet
!!!!!!!but i think they're maried but not official :40::11::10:
A r c h i
04-08-2007, 21:23
After passing all usual works for going to NY, they phoned Vahed and told the entire story to him and Mohammad. “Wow! How can I believe it? Are you right? Oh my god… thanks, thanks god! My son is alive..” Mohammad said happily. So Archi, Maryam, Amir, Narges and Minizoro went to US and visited Vahed and Mohammad, “It’s a bit strange for me, what’s your Boss’s motive?” Vahed said to Archi . Archi said “In fact I don’t know!!! I’m completely confused” all of them were thinking about that subject, after an enigmatic reticence Narges suddenly said “we can find AminTNT, and by finding him we can attain to Sara and her husband and also finally to dear Ali!” “But, how can we find AminTNT?” asked Minizoro. “Oo, yeah! Why I hadn’t thought about that hitherto?! Let’s go! I know how…” Vahed answered.
Everyone there, were wondered, so Vahed explained that there is a special Club in Manhattan that all wrongdoers join there which named “TNT Midnight Club”
“Of course we can find AminTNT or a clue of him in that club” Vahed said stalwartly.
Maryam and Amir decided to be near Archi in a hotel and Vahed, Narges and Minizoro went to Manhattan…l
Finally they reached to the club.
"Now, how should we found him?" asked Narges.
"Let's do a trick. I think it would be better to introduce our selves as his friends" suggested Vahed.
"Great opinion, but not all of us one of us, what's your idea if I go on?" minizoro said.
"I think its better. Your right" said Vahed.
"But honey be careful it would be dangerous." said Narges.
"Ok, ok don't worry about it have you forgot that I've got black belt, now you'd better go to the hotel I'll join you as soon as I can." minizoro replied.
Minizoro tried a lot and finally he got AminTNT.
"Are you Amin TNT?"minizoro asked. "Yeah I'm and you?" Amin said. "Do you remember Mike(Sara's husband)? He told me that you can do lot's of things." minizoro said.
a:"What kind?" m:"For example killing somebody." a:"well it depends; because Mike has sent you to me ok but how much would you pay?" m:"100$ is it ok?" a:"ok,Who is it?" m:"She is a woman named Narges. You should kill her by string in a hotel, and this is the address of hotel kill her tomorrow." a:"And money?" m:"Here is 50$ and the rest will be given tomorrow when you killed her" a:"it seems that everything is ok so the job will be ok too" m:"ok see you tomorrow evening bye."
Minizoro got back to the hotel. "Vahed have you told our plan to others" minizoro asked Vahed. "Yeah my friend, and does every thing went on ok?" asked Vahed "Yes great tomorrow every thing will be solved" minizoro replied.
And the next day they waited for amin TNT. Every one hid at room except Narges. Finally amin TNT reached. He attacked Narges to kill her. He was choking her that minizoro shot him on the ground. "Do you think I'll let you to kill my wife?" minizoro shouted amin tnt. Amin TNT turned around to ran away but he suddenly shoked by Maryam & Archi s' guns. "Hands up" said Archi. Vahed & @mir rushed to Amin TNT and arrested him
Vahed asked AminTNT about Ali. At first, he didn't answer, however, after Vahed's persistence and two tough slaps in his face, he told the whole story. He explained that he worked for Mike and Mike was the head of an international Mafia band that kidnapped children from their own families and sold them to rich families that suffered from lack of child. He added that they had sold Ali to a family that lived in Berlin, Germany and whose name was Zimmermann. Mr. Zimmermann was a senior manager of BMW company.l
Archi continues:
"Oh my goddd..you've sold my kid " Mohammad said and jumped toward Amintnt. @mir took Mohammad back and told him to control himself. Archi was moaning and crying in the arms of Maryam . "What have I done that I should face this consequences ???" Detective Minizoro got the complete information about Mr. Zimmermann and he arrested Amintnt. Minizoro sent back Amintnt and vahed to Iran for further investigations. They took the first flight to Berlin. Archi, Mohammad,@mir, Maryam, Love-to-learn and minzoro was on their way to Berlin.
It wasn't that hard to find BMW office in Berlin. "we don't have any proof about our claim to Mr. Zimmerman" Archi said. "The DNA test will find the truth " @mir replied. "But don't forget that it's not so easy to deal with the manager of BMW :41:" Minizoro answered.
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p.s1. Dear @mir, @mir and maryam has got married, I did that:31:. take a closer look at previous posts.
@mir went to Maryam's bed and he whispered" will you marry me now?" ..."oh my God, what in earth you're doing here ??What are you talking about? In this situation..It's not fair, Archi and Mohammad are in their very bad days and you're talking about marriage?".. Amir answered that they would go to the place just to become legally wedded husband and wife. And after everything finished they could hold their party .." I feel much better this way" Amir added
Maryam agreed with what amir had told her, she felt much better this way, to be with him and around him all the time. So they became legally wedded husband and wife.p.s.2. Minizoro, Please please just add one or two paragraph, when it continues by every single person it would much better and the story will be more interesting
mohammad.clergyman
05-08-2007, 11:11
سلام كجايين بابا ؟؟؟؟؟؟:41:
داستان رو نيمه كاره رها كردين و رفتين :41: بياين .....شمام نباشين اصلا مزه نميده ها منتظر پست جديدتون هستم:10::27::40::11:
ممنون
برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید
Hi dear thanks alot due to your attention
I hope you can keep posting here and forgive my absence
that's because of the martyrdom of my uncle
he was a self-sacrificing man
may God bless him with his salvation
Best regards
minizoro
07-08-2007, 20:24
The Rest of Story
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p.s: hey dear Archi by this Vahed goes away from story and it's not what friends do with each other. I hate being selfish, and that causes us selfishness. Dear Vahed I'm so sorryfor going you out of story, I think it will be your last act in the story, except that you your self make it. It's not my fault, its Archi's.
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1. They were really confused that what they could do. They have had lots of counseling's but they couldn't reach particular result. Finally @mir decided minizoro that if he could counsel to Vahed too. So minizoro called Vahed in Iran and asked him if he knows any ways for rescuing poor Ali. "Well I have been thinking of this since I finished works which are related to AminTNT. First of all you should prove that already Zimmermann had bought Ali from AminTNT" said Vahed. "yeah I know but how?!" minizoro said."You can film Zimmermann when he or his wife is with Ali, can't you" Vahed said. "Oh yeah your right" minizoro replied.
2. So minizoro said to other's what he's heard from Vahed. "So now here it's your turn to show that what you have learned in "p30world forums" is not vain, you are very professional in photographing and filming, here you are show what ever you are…" Mohammad said proudly to @mir. And now @mir . . .
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p.s: just 2 paraghraphs!
p.s2: espeacial thanks for dear amin tnt who mentioned my wrong in writing: "Rest of story" which was wrong and i should had wire The rest of story
After passing all usual works for going to NY, they phoned Vahed and told the entire story to him and Mohammad. “Wow! How can I believe it? Are you right? Oh my god… thanks, thanks god! My son is alive..” Mohammad said happily. So Archi, Maryam, Amir, Narges and Minizoro went to US and visited Vahed and Mohammad, “It’s a bit strange for me, what’s your Boss’s motive?” Vahed said to Archi . Archi said “In fact I don’t know!!! I’m completely confused” all of them were thinking about that subject, after an enigmatic reticence Narges suddenly said “we can find AminTNT, and by finding him we can attain to Sara and her husband and also finally to dear Ali!” “But, how can we find AminTNT?” asked Minizoro. “Oo, yeah! Why I hadn’t thought about that hitherto?! Let’s go! I know how…” Vahed answered.
Everyone there, were wondered, so Vahed explained that there is a special Club in Manhattan that all wrongdoers join there which named “TNT Midnight Club”
“Of course we can find AminTNT or a clue of him in that club” Vahed said stalwartly.
Maryam and Amir decided to be near Archi in a hotel and Vahed, Narges and Minizoro went to Manhattan…l
Finally they reached to the club.
"Now, how should we found him?" asked Narges.
"Let's do a trick. I think it would be better to introduce our selves as his friends" suggested Vahed.
"Great opinion, but not all of us one of us, what's your idea if I go on?" minizoro said.
"I think its better. Your right" said Vahed.
"But honey be careful it would be dangerous." said Narges.
"Ok, ok don't worry about it have you forgot that I've got black belt, now you'd better go to the hotel I'll join you as soon as I can." minizoro replied.
Minizoro tried a lot and finally he got AminTNT.
"Are you Amin TNT?"minizoro asked. "Yeah I'm and you?" Amin said. "Do you remember Mike(Sara's husband)? He told me that you can do lot's of things." minizoro said.
a:"What kind?" m:"For example killing somebody." a:"well it depends; because Mike has sent you to me ok but how much would you pay?" m:"100$ is it ok?" a:"ok,Who is it?" m:"She is a woman named Narges. You should kill her by string in a hotel, and this is the address of hotel kill her tomorrow." a:"And money?" m:"Here is 50$ and the rest will be given tomorrow when you killed her" a:"it seems that everything is ok so the job will be ok too" m:"ok see you tomorrow evening bye."
Minizoro got back to the hotel. "Vahed have you told our plan to others" minizoro asked Vahed. "Yeah my friend, and does every thing went on ok?" asked Vahed "Yes great tomorrow every thing will be solved" minizoro replied.
And the next day they waited for amin TNT. Every one hid at room except Narges. Finally amin TNT reached. He attacked Narges to kill her. He was choking her that minizoro shot him on the ground. "Do you think I'll let you to kill my wife?" minizoro shouted amin tnt. Amin TNT turned around to ran away but he suddenly shoked by Maryam & Archi s' guns. "Hands up" said Archi. Vahed & @mir rushed to Amin TNT and arrested him
Vahed asked AminTNT about Ali. At first, he didn't answer, however, after Vahed's persistence and two tough slaps in his face, he told the whole story. He explained that he worked for Mike and Mike was the head of an international Mafia band that kidnapped children from their own families and sold them to rich families that suffered from lack of child. He added that they had sold Ali to a family that lived in Berlin, Germany and whose name was Zimmermann. Mr. Zimmermann was a senior manager of BMW company.l
Archi continues:
"Oh my goddd..you've sold my kid " Mohammad said and jumped toward Amintnt. @mir took Mohammad back and told him to control himself. Archi was moaning and crying in the arms of Maryam . "What have I done that I should face this consequences ???" Detective Minizoro got the complete information about Mr. Zimmermann and he arrested Amintnt. Minizoro sent back Amintnt and vahed to Iran for further investigations. They took the first flight to Berlin. Archi, Mohammad,@mir, Maryam, Love-to-learn and minzoro was on their way to Berlin.
It wasn't that hard to find BMW office in Berlin. "we don't have any proof about our claim to Mr. Zimmerman" Archi said. "The DNA test will find the truth " @mir replied. "But don't forget that it's not so easy to deal with the manager of BMW :41:" Minizoro answered
They were really confused that what they could do. They have had lots of counseling's but they couldn't reach particular result. Finally @mir decided minizoro that if he could counsel to Vahed too. So minizoro called Vahed in Iran and asked him if he knows any ways for rescuing poor Ali. "Well I have been thinking of this since I finished works which are related to AminTNT. First of all you should prove that already Zimmermann had bought Ali from AminTNT" said Vahed. "yeah I know but how?!" minizoro said."You can film Zimmermann when he or his wife is with Ali, can't you" Vahed said. "Oh yeah your right" minizoro replied.
So minizoro said to other's what he's heard from Vahed. "So now here it's your turn to show that what you have learned in "p30world forums" is not vain, you are very professional in photographing and filming, here you are show what ever you are…" Mohammad said proudly to @mir. And now @mir
@mir continues
@mir got the address of Zimmermann's house from minizoro and took his camera. He went to Maryam's room to say goodbye. Maryam was absolutely worried. "@mir ... for God's sake ... don't go ... You are the only person I have in this world" She told. "Don't worry. I'll be back soon. God protects me" He moved to the door ... but Maryam couldn't suppress her tears ... @mir came back and hugged her strongly and kissed her lips with such a clamorous smack that Mohammad and Archi in the next room heard that and looked at each other and smiled :40:c
It was an hour after midnight. @mir was on the roof of a building in front of Zimmermann's house. "This is not just a house ... This is a palace..." He muttered. All of a sudden, he noticed Mr. Zimmermann and his wife entered a room. He turned on the camera and zoomed on that window. Mrs. Zimmermann took off her robe and ... after 2 minutes ... "ooooooh..." ... @mir was gaping at the LCD of the camera :18:... suddenly he closed his eyes and turned off the camera .... "What am I doing? I should be ashamed of myself...I shouldn't film others' prvate relationships" But something occurred to him at once "But wait ...Yes ... I can film their relationship in order to extort from Mr, Zimmermann!! Maybe this persuades him to return Ali!" and laughed viciously and turned on the camera again ...:21:D
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P.S.1 Dear archi-girl...Thank you very much! I could kiss my wife at last.
P.S. 2 I think the story was getting too boring. It needed such contents. This is the salt of the story :D
minizoro
11-08-2007, 10:29
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P.S 1: Shrewd @mir your made it so salt I can't eat it. Uh. Uh Archi I think if you wouldn't make @mir marry with Marryam @mir would make marry with some one else, for sure. Oh @mir, I wish for you not to be sad ever. You made me laugh a long time. You changed story. Story assumed like a great one. First we started it by a romantic one then a detective one and now a multi-romantic & s e x u a l one. Thanks; really thanks.(You think I'll let you go? No, I won't do that if I don't kick your goose.
it means: (پدرت را در ميآورم)
Because you made Ali like this.
Now read the rest of the story.
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@mir captured their any action, tricky, wickedly & enviously. Chk. Chk. Chk.
"Wow, let her go. Let her go." @mir whispered him self. "Now it’s the time, you should show that you are a prejudiced man.:27:"
@mir left his camera and all his attachments on the roof; he just took a knife. Then nothing could be seen, just breaking luminosity-window's glasses.
Zimmermann & the girl shocked. When Zimmermann separated him self from the girl to attack @mir, girl went onto Zimmermann with a vase. She broke it into his head. The girl ran unto @mir & said: "Oh, thank God he is my save angle, thank you Mr. . . . " "@mir" @mir replied. "Now we should ran away." When they wanted to ran out of the room they shocked with Zimmermann's guards.
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P.S 2:
Luminosity-window'= (پنجره روشنايي)
is that true?
P.S3: post edited by me. thanks @mirfor your notification. I thought it wouldn't make any problems. however i deleted useless parts, and please youedit your post,there fore no body else wouldn't know this, mis understanding. Thank you again
Persian version of this topic:
برای مشاهده محتوا ، لطفا وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید
A r c h i
12-08-2007, 23:05
Vahed asked AminTNT about Ali. At first, he didn't answer, however, after Vahed's persistence and two tough slaps in his face, he told the whole story. He explained that he worked for Mike and Mike was the head of an international Mafia band that kidnapped children from their own families and sold them to rich families that suffered from lack of child. He added that they had sold Ali to a family that lived in Berlin, Germany and whose name was Zimmermann. Mr. Zimmermann was a senior manager of BMW company.l
Archi continues:
"Oh my goddd..you've sold my kid " Mohammad said and jumped toward Amintnt. @mir took Mohammad back and told him to control himself. Archi was moaning and crying in the arms of Maryam . "What have I done that I should face this consequences ???" Detective Minizoro got the complete information about Mr. Zimmermann and he arrested Amintnt. Minizoro sent back Amintnt and vahed to Iran for further investigations. They took the first flight to Berlin. Archi, Mohammad,@mir, Maryam, Love-to-learn and minzoro was on their way to Berlin.
It wasn't that hard to find BMW office in Berlin. "we don't have any proof about our claim to Mr. Zimmerman" Archi said. "The DNA test will find the truth " @mir replied. "But don't forget that it's not so easy to deal with the manager of BMW [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]" Minizoro answered
They were really confused that what they could do. They have had lots of counseling's but they couldn't reach particular result. Finally @mir decided minizoro that if he could counsel to Vahed too. So minizoro called Vahed in Iran and asked him if he knows any ways for rescuing poor Ali. "Well I have been thinking of this since I finished works which are related to AminTNT. First of all you should prove that already Zimmermann had bought Ali from AminTNT" said Vahed. "yeah I know but how?!" minizoro said."You can film Zimmermann when he or his wife is with Ali, can't you" Vahed said. "Oh yeah your right" minizoro replied.
So minizoro said to other's what he's heard from Vahed. "So now here it's your turn to show that what you have learned in "p30world forums" is not vain, you are very professional in photographing and filming, here you are show what ever you are…" Mohammad said proudly to @mir. And now @mir
@mir continues
@mir got the address of Zimmermann's house from minizoro and took his camera. He went to Maryam's room to say goodbye. Maryam was absolutely worried. "@mir ... for God's sake ... don't go ... You are the only person I have in this world" She told. "Don't worry. I'll be back soon. God protects me" He moved to the door ... but Maryam couldn't suppress her tears ... @mir came back and hugged her strongly and kissed her lips with such a clamorous smack that Mohammad and Archi in the next room heard that and looked at each other and smiled [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
It was an hour after midnight. @mir was on the roof of a building in front of Zimmermann's house. "This is not just a house ... This is a palace..." He muttered. All of a sudden, he noticed Mr. Zimmermann and his wife entered a room. He turned on the camera and zoomed on that window. Mrs. Zimmermann took off her robe and ... after 2 minutes ... "ooooooh..." ... @mir was gaping at the LCD of the camera [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] suddenly he closed his eyes and turned off the camera .... "What am I doing? I should be ashamed of myself...I shouldn't film others' prvate relationships" But something occurred to him at once "But wait ...Yes ... I can film their relationship in order to extort from Mr, Zimmermann!! Maybe this persuades him to return Ali!" and laughed viciously and turned on the camera again ...[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
@mir captured their any action, tricky, wickedly & enviously. Chk. Chk. Chk.
"Wow, let her go. Let her go." @mir whispered him self. "Now it’s the time, you should show that you are a prejudiced man.[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]"
@mir left his camera and all his attachments on the roof; he just took a knife. Then nothing could be seen, just breaking luminosity-window's glasses.
Zimmermann & the girl shocked. When Zimmermann separated him self from the girl to attack @mir, girl went onto Zimmermann with a vase. She broke it into his head. The girl ran unto @mir & said: "Oh, thank God he is my save angle, thank you Mr. . . . " "@mir" @mir replied. "Now we should ran away." When they wanted to ran out of the room they shocked with Zimmermann's guards.
One of the guards asked @mir who was he and what he was doing down there, they didn't see him go in. "It was a game" the girl said. "We decided to surprise Mr Zimmerman" The guard asked where was the Zimmerman and they told him that he wanted to see the guards..all the guards. So all guards went in. @mir and the girl took this chance and escaped, they ran as far as they can. When they reached home Mohammad surprisingly said " Hey @mir ..who is this girl..you were supposed to take Ali, what has happened that she is here instead??? "
@mir explained all the story. Minizoro said "oh my god, they saw your face..so police can identify you two easily...What a situation we are in!!!!! " Maryam huged @mir and she burst into tears. " I can not tolerate all these accidents ... I warned you not to go " . " Be patient Honey.... Be patient " @mir desperately replied.
Mohammad asked what should they do with the girl. "what's your name " love-to-learn asked. "My name is Amanda " The girl replied and burst into tears " I have a miserable life.. I don't know when my miseries will end ". Love-to-learn asked her to tell them her story.
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@mir came back and hugged her strongly and kissed her lips with such a clamorous smack that Mohammad and Archi in the next room heard that and looked at each other and smiled [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
P.S.@mir I love this part :31:l
Vahed asked AminTNT about Ali. At first, he didn't answer, however, after Vahed's persistence and two tough slaps in his face, he told the whole story. He explained that he worked for Mike and Mike was the head of an international Mafia band that kidnapped children from their own families and sold them to rich families that suffered from lack of child. He added that they had sold Ali to a family that lived in Berlin, Germany and whose name was Zimmermann. Mr. Zimmermann was a senior manager of BMW company.l
Archi continues:
"Oh my goddd..you've sold my kid " Mohammad said and jumped toward Amintnt. @mir took Mohammad back and told him to control himself. Archi was moaning and crying in the arms of Maryam . "What have I done that I should face this consequences ???" Detective Minizoro got the complete information about Mr. Zimmermann and he arrested Amintnt. Minizoro sent back Amintnt and vahed to Iran for further investigations. They took the first flight to Berlin. Archi, Mohammad,@mir, Maryam, Love-to-learn and minzoro was on their way to Berlin.
It wasn't that hard to find BMW office in Berlin. "we don't have any proof about our claim to Mr. Zimmerman" Archi said. "The DNA test will find the truth " @mir replied. "But don't forget that it's not so easy to deal with the manager of BMW [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]" Minizoro answered
They were really confused that what they could do. They have had lots of counseling's but they couldn't reach particular result. Finally @mir decided minizoro that if he could counsel to Vahed too. So minizoro called Vahed in Iran and asked him if he knows any ways for rescuing poor Ali. "Well I have been thinking of this since I finished works which are related to AminTNT. First of all you should prove that already Zimmermann had bought Ali from AminTNT" said Vahed. "yeah I know but how?!" minizoro said."You can film Zimmermann when he or his wife is with Ali, can't you" Vahed said. "Oh yeah your right" minizoro replied.
So minizoro said to other's what he's heard from Vahed. "So now here it's your turn to show that what you have learned in "p30world forums" is not vain, you are very professional in photographing and filming, here you are show what ever you are…" Mohammad said proudly to @mir. And now @mir
@mir continues
@mir got the address of Zimmermann's house from minizoro and took his camera. He went to Maryam's room to say goodbye. Maryam was absolutely worried. "@mir ... for God's sake ... don't go ... You are the only person I have in this world" She told. "Don't worry. I'll be back soon. God protects me" He moved to the door ... but Maryam couldn't suppress her tears ... @mir came back and hugged her strongly and kissed her lips with such a clamorous smack that Mohammad and Archi in the next room heard that and looked at each other and smiled [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
It was an hour after midnight. @mir was on the roof of a building in front of Zimmermann's house. "This is not just a house ... This is a palace..." He muttered. All of a sudden, he noticed Mr. Zimmermann and his wife entered a room. He turned on the camera and zoomed on that window. Mrs. Zimmermann took off her robe and ... after 2 minutes ... "ooooooh..." ... @mir was gaping at the LCD of the camera [ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ] suddenly he closed his eyes and turned off the camera .... "What am I doing? I should be ashamed of myself...I shouldn't film others' prvate relationships" But something occurred to him at once "But wait ...Yes ... I can film their relationship in order to extort from Mr, Zimmermann!! Maybe this persuades him to return Ali!" and laughed viciously and turned on the camera again ...[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
@mir captured their any action, tricky, wickedly & enviously. Chk. Chk. Chk.
"Wow, let her go. Let her go." @mir whispered him self. "Now it’s the time, you should show that you are a prejudiced man.[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]"
@mir left his camera and all his attachments on the roof; he just took a knife. Then nothing could be seen, just breaking luminosity-window's glasses.
Zimmermann & the girl shocked. When Zimmermann separated him self from the girl to attack @mir, girl went onto Zimmermann with a vase. She broke it into his head. The girl ran unto @mir & said: "Oh, thank God he is my save angle, thank you Mr. . . . " "@mir" @mir replied. "Now we should ran away." When they wanted to ran out of the room they shocked with Zimmermann's guards.
One of the guards asked @mir who was he and what he was doing down there, they didn't see him go in. "It was a game" the girl said. "We decided to surprise Mr Zimmerman" The guard asked where was the Zimmerman and they told him that he wanted to see the guards..all the guards. So all guards went in. @mir and the girl took this chance and escaped, they ran as far as they can. When they reached home Mohammad surprisingly said " Hey @mir ..who is this girl..you were supposed to take Ali, what has happened that she is here instead??? "
@mir explained all the story. Minizoro said "oh my god, they saw your face..so police can identify you two easily...What a situation we are in!!!!! " Maryam huged @mir and she burst into tears. " I can not tolerate all these accidents ... I warned you not to go " . " Be patient Honey.... Be patient " @mir desperately replied.
Mohammad asked what should they do with the girl. "what's your name " love-to-learn asked. "My name is Amanda " The girl replied and burst into tears " I have a miserable life.. I don't know when my miseries will end ". Love-to-learn asked her to tell them her story
When Amanda wanted to begin telling her story, @mir stopped her indignantly and told her "We ourselves are the most miserable and helpless human beings in the universe, so plz keep your story for yourself and go home. RIGHT NOW!!" Amanda was absolutely offended, hence she quit their place quickly and after a while they could hear her voice sobbing . Maryam told @mir "You shouldn't have done that to her. She needed our help." Suddenly @mir flared out at Maryam and shouted "Shut up!!! .... we have our own problems ... I can not cope with this much trouble... Ali is missing?!! what the heck... who cares?!... It has nothing to do with me... why are we here now? Ali is Mohammad and Archi's son and this is their problem ... It's none of my business .... I and you will return to Iran as soon as possible" He slammed the door and went out ... Maryam was absolutely ashamed of what @mir had told ...she wanted to say something but Mohammad asked her not to say anything ...l
The kid was found safe and sound. @mir married the girl he loved, amintnt was wrongly caught, in fact he was a good guy! And everyone ended up in a happy ending.
The story is over now!
It could be the bestseller story ever, if it was published!
Thanks to dear writers!
A r c h i
20-06-2008, 21:11
oh my god...look what topic is up again
Thanks Amin, it reminds me of good old days, you don't know how much I laughed while writing or reading the story, It was awesome
Thanks everyone, And thank you for the ending :31:l
mohammad.clergyman
20-06-2008, 22:05
The kid was found safe and sound. @mir married the girl he loved, amintnt was wrongly caught, in fact he was a good guy! And everyone ended up in a happy ending.
The story is over now!
It could be the bestseller story ever, if it was published!
Thanks to dear writers!
! Hey Dear Amin
thanks alot !
you re-born the topic
but let me tell a suggestion
who is leg ( Payeh) to start another story :31:
minizoro
23-06-2008, 11:58
hi muhammad
how do you do?
well count on me to start
another one
but what the story will be about?
mohammad.clergyman
23-06-2008, 12:15
hi muhammad
how do you do?
well count on me to start
another one
but what the story will be about?
hey dear zoro
long time no kiss :31:
you totally have permission to start a new story
I'll probabaly be off for a week , but soon i'll join you
minizoro
23-06-2008, 14:52
NEW STORY
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Introduction about the story:
Story's Name:
NANIT
News: scientists have said that we'll be able to send tiny nano machines into human's body to cure various diseases. Nano machines can decompose cancer tumors; or other uses to improve human wealth.
News: scientists have said that artificial intelligence will reach to human's intelligence and then I'll pass through human's intelligence in future.
Now the story, which I inspired it by these news, will discuss about the advantages and disadvantages of these new technologies. I my self believe that artificial intelligence never can't reach human's intelligence; and if it does so maybe the nano machines do something against human in our body!
I know that some of you my dear friends are and some aren't agree with my view points about this matter. Maybe some body say rules can stop such this thing.
So just continue the story as you like I just want to say you what the story will about.
Indeed Nanit is the name of a very high-tech nano machine.
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STORY:
NANIT:
Year 2073 (65 years later) 6th of September:
Archi: Oh Mini, aren't you anxious that you are going to be the first person who is going to decompose his cancer tumor?
@mir: what kind of hesitation would he have that's so exiting [ooff, @mir jumps]
Minizoro: well you know Archi; how ever I am worry about the surgery's result but it's the best choice.
mohammad.clergyman: oh yeah and the most expensive one [everybody laugh]
Reporter comes over this old friendly group and interrupts their desirable enjoy, maybe if they know it'll be one of their last happiness they wouldn't let to the reporter to come in.
Reporter: May I enter?
@mir: [stops his laughing] Oh, of course. Hey mini here you are.
Reporter: Put the camera over there. Where is my shit microphone?
Mr. Minizoro; as the manager of the biggest communication company in whole world, the only person who been able to pay this surgery's charge, don't you think that if this surgery wouldn't be successful what will the company's destination be?
Mini: In the name of God. First of all we have organized this corporation and not just me, by the way I've trusted to all doctors and all machines which have helped to our corporation too, so why I shouldn't get back to life? And 1% if it happens my their friend will manage the company as we have done till now, just I'll be deleted, that's not important.
Reporter: But Mr. Zoro, we all know that you are the most important manager of the company, aren't you?
Mini: I said we are managers not me. Please ask another question.
NOTE:
1. continue as you like just not so much. I won't say so much any more.
2.Copy pervious parts in your posts
Hey, it's a cool topic
Let's start to create a story?l
Are there any companions? If so, raise your hands
nafare_aval
27-05-2009, 10:42
i want to raise my hand but it says to me :im tired of typing!!!so what should i do
C. Breezy
27-05-2009, 13:03
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
? But what should we do
I think someone should start a story and the other guys continue that
and they end it how they like
" if I'm not mistaken "
Once, in a land so far away from here there was an abandoned village and in the village there was a garden with tall surrounding fences, no-one dared to enter the garden because each night frightening screams stroke the heavy eyelid of the village inhabitants
But it happened that a stranger passed that place
[ برای مشاهده لینک ، لطفا با نام کاربری خود وارد شوید یا ثبت نام کنید ]
Once, in a land so far away from here there was an abandoned village and in the village there was a garden with tall surrounding fences, no-one dared to enter the garden because each night frightening screams stroke the heavy eyelid of the village inhabitants
But it happened that a stranger passed that place
The stranger was a tall and vigorous young man who never scared from anything.He wanted to pass that village to get to his grandmother home in the next village because it was long time no news from her
when he entered the village , villagers showed him a long way to go to his grandmam's village , but he found out that this garden could be shortcut to go there
he reposed all over the day in the headman's house as a guest the headman was an old hospitable man and feed the young man very well
"at the moment of departure and when sun was going to set he told the young man " you should pass our village only from the way which we have showed you today morning and nothung else...and young man nodded to obey
!when he got far from that village he thought with himself " what a fool man! I chose this goddamned long way , while I could choose a better shortcutand he returned...when he got to the garden it was midnight and wolves were crying out
he thought that he will be safe from wolves in that huge garden surrounded by fences even though he was really brave
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...and at last he entered the garden
...he took about 15 steps and at that time he realized that he lost the way
at first he was very cool and was searching the gate he entered from...but no result
he was getting a little worried but wanted to preserve his coolness
he lighted a match...but wind didn't let it stay kindled
he lighted a new one but a bat collided to his hands and the second fire of match went out and also the match box fell down and got wet and out of order
"he brought out his knife of the pocket and shouted " ha ha ha...who the hell wants to beat me...come on!!
at that moment someone tapped on his shoulder he scared and returned while he wasn't able to see anything he began to running
he was runing constantly untill his left foot collided to a stone and he fell down....it thundered and make the place clear...in the light of thunder he saw thousands of people arround himself
"he was stabing with his knife but it seems nobody is here....suddenly someone told his name and also told " I'm here , I'll get you off the hook
.but he was scared as hell and attacked to the owner of voice and stabed her twenty time with her knife
he was shouting and stabing the woman that a branch fell on his head because s serve wind was blownig...he fainted
!!when he opened up his eyes he saw the poor granmam under his body and also he saw the trees which were very similar to human's body
dear SCYTHE , I think nobody here wants to continue this topic
anyway thank you to put this story...and also nobody told me that my effort was bad or terrible
:13:or anythingelse
C. Breezy
06-06-2009, 15:28
at first I thought it's like games in some English forums .... They start a story , next one continue it in for example 20 words , and this goes and goes and every one just write the continue of the story in 20 words , or some thing like this
Hi guys
I always like this idea " Let's Complete The Story "
I agree with C.breezie's idea .... everyone should continue only with 20 words or something like this ...
dear Mohammad you wrote a lot ...anyway thank you
maybe I'll continue that as soon as possible.
c u soon :46:
Hi guys
I always like this idea " Let's Complete The Story "
I agree with C.breezie's idea .... everyone should continue only with 20 words or something like this ...
dear Mohammad you wrote a lot ...anyway thank you
maybe I'll continue that as soon as possible.
c u soon :46:
ok...it's a good idea... but I think 20 words is a little short
...but 50 or something like that is good
Hi there
what a long time i have NOT visited the Forum.
I am Nima and I am getting TOEFL< anyway. i'll be so happy to be active in the English Forum. but with u:10:
so.....
What's the story to Contenue???
i think 20 words is enough, cause maybe some one would be tired of reading much( also like myself:31:). ok?
TanX to All.
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